This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on February-28-14 at 9:01:20 PM

Artist: Nico Nico Chorus
Title: SPiCa
Tags: Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Sun Rainbow Douga Regou collab collaboration Toku-P Headphone-Tokyo NicoNico Wataame Mei Kuripurin Himawari Lino Noir Nico Nico Douga
BPM: 162
Filesize: 15296kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.38 stars, 148 notes)
2. Hard (4.46 stars, 389 notes)
3. Insane Collab (4.99 stars, 533 notes)
4. Normal (2.75 stars, 227 notes)

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa
Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hallowww ~

First map owo

Insane by Sun Rainbow & Regou

Storyboard by Sun Rainbow

Thank you to all the people who have helped me ~ >w<)

hello ~ i've got nothing better to do so might as well use my time to help someone with their map

general stuff;
- Very important! Your timing is way way off, I got
BPM: 162
Offset: 3570
The timing change implies:
* Snaping all notes so they fall on a tick and are not on the space ~
* Most probably remapping the whole song or adjusting some notes/sliders here and they follow the song

- Secondly, you need a bg, try this one ?
http://puu.sh/amlR

- You need to take the audio off from the video

- Add a preview point to all diffs! needs to be the same for all ~

- About the song's information:
* Source: Toku-P
* Tags: Take out Nico Nico Chorus since it is the artist already, add vocaloid2, vocaloid and hatsune miku

- Disable countdown and epilepsy warning

- It is kinda silly that you ask people to download the whole skin ... just include skin elements necessary for gameplay in the song's folder and full sub if you want to add skin elements to your map, people won't really like to download a skin just to play one map (because i don't think everybody will like to keep the skin after they play)
- Oh, and i downloaded the skin, is nice; some parts could be better but overall is nice!

I believe that is all for general stuff, can't really mod every diff since the timing is off and almost every note is off. When you finish fixing all this you can ask for a recheck.
Good luck!

D: I suck at doing this type of stuff ._.
And thanks for the help ;D
I did include the skin in the map but like I just put it there if other actually wanted to always use it.
And oh gawd D; That's a lot of work ._.

I can try to "repair" it a little bit for you if you want. :3
EDIT: You have a big amound of these large sliders:
You could repleace some of them with shorter sliders. For exemple, making few shorter sliders instead a long one. It will be really hard to mode it if you dont do that.
I will mod your map myself after.
Sorry for my bad english. D:

I guess that would help the map to be a bit more hard then easy .
Thankks~ ;D

Sorry for making you wait so much >.<
I was pretty tired the last 3 days, so I wasnt on osu! and I almost got ill.
I just started to mod your map. I have already finished 2 of the 4 diffs.
I had to change many things to get a good timing, I hope you that you still like it.
-Added:
--new sliders and hitcircles
--more hitsounds
--kiai time
--changed the speed at some parts
The Normal diff was pretty good, the Easy one wasnt bad, too, there were many places where the timing was almost perfect.
Also, I added the kiai time and slowed down some parts of the song, it looks better that way. Like in the part of the song where Miku sings, for example, I slowed down the speed from 1.00 ,normal speed, to 0.50, at the part after the speed goes up to 0.75, and to 1.00 like in the beggining.
I will finish the other 2 diff the next 2 days. I had this day off so I had plenty of time to mod your map.

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Neo's Relaxation].osu

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Moon's Lullaby].osu

Its fine ^^
Thannkyhuuu for the star

NP! Here is another one

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Crystal's Light].osu

The last one! (need to add hitsounds and reneame it to something better, do you have an idea what name could I use for it?)

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Topped Toph].osu

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [SinDemonDragon's Insane].osu

Thannnkyhuu for all your hard work~ ;D

Hi~
There all are suggestion,so you don't have to follow it.

[General]


[Crystal's Light]


[Moon's Lullaby]


[Neo's Relaxation ]


[Topped Toph]


[SinDemon's Flame]


That's all
Love this song~
Good luck~
Star x3

You confused some of the difficulites like light with lullaby xD
But its okayy ;D and whoaa you didint need to do that much modding but thankkyhuu~ ;D
EDIT: updatedd~

Hello! ^^
I love nico nico chorus very much

[General]
I think you map contains too much identical linear long sliders, it's borring, please give them an interesting shape.
USE DISTANS SNAP!

[Moon's Lullaby]

00:15:236 (2) - please, add. Without this circle sounds bad.
00:21:347 (1,1,2) - place these circles are not at the same point.
00:22:829 (1) - delete new combo.
00:24:310 - 00:27:273 - insert break time.
00:27:273 (1) - 1 gird ap, here
00:30:977 (1) - vove to another place, because it overlaps the slider.
00:36:162 (1) - place it here 00:42:644 (4) - make a slider such as in the screenshot. Symmetric and uniform.
00:46:347 (7) - add new combo.
00:47:088 (1) - delete new combo.
00:47:644 (2) - add new combo.
00:47:644 (2,3,4,5) - all this 1 gird up.
00:51:718 (1,1,2) - please, more systematic. Looks like random sliders.
00:56:903 (2) - maybe will be better delete this and add a long spinner.
01:01:162 (3) - too close to the previous objects.
01:02:829 (1) - ^
01:07:273 (4,5,6) - move yo another place.
01:08:014 (5) - new combo.
01:16:903 (4) - make here !not linear! slider, PLEASE!
01:20:607 (6) - ^
01:20:607 (6) - new combo.
01:26:532 (9) - new combo.

[Neo's Relaxation]

00:22:829 (3,4) - too far from previous objects.
00:23:940 (1) - too close to the previous object.
00:31:718 (6) - do like this and PLEASE do all sliders no curves
00:33:940 (2,3,4) - to close.
00:36:162 (5) - ^
00:46:995 (4) - sound bad, Maybe circles will be better, but I don't think so.
00:50:514 (5) - move to 00:50:421.
00:50:699 (6) - move to 00:50:607.
00:50:792 (7) - add.
01:01:903 (5) - move to 01:01:532.
01:02:088 (6) - move to 01:01:903.
01:02:088 (7) - add.
01:02:273 (8) - add.
01:07:829 (1,2) - too far.
01:14:681 (1) - ^
01:14:681 (1) - this curve!
01:17:644 (1) - ^
01:26:532 (1) - ^
01:31:718 (4) - ^
01:50:236 (3) - too close.
02:13:755 (5) - ^
02:17:644 (1) - move to another plase.
02:31:718 (1) - move to centre!
02:57:273 (3,4,1) - wrong spacing. Again.
02:58:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

[Topped Toph]

00:18:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's not very pretty.
00:25:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:32:458 (6) - new combo.
00:33:199 (1) - delete new combo.
00:33:940 (4) - new combo.
00:44:866 (6,7,8) - move to another plase. You make this 'pattern' in all map. Please, move it.
01:13:940 (9) - add.
01:15:051 (3,4,5) - omg.
01:25:977 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - change rhythm!
01:33:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - not ok. Strean in another plase.
02:07:273 (1,2) - can't be ranked.
02:46:162 (1) - ^

[SinDemon's Flame]

00:04:088 (2) - sound bad, not in rhythm.
00:04:977 (4) - ^
00:07:273 (2) - ^
00:09:495 (8) - ^
00:16:088 (1) - ^
00:16:829 (3) - ^
00:18:903 (1) - ^
00:45:421 (7) - too close.
I'm tired, and I am too lazy

Thannkyhuu^^
So my Light diff is okayy? o.o (Considering nothing was said about it)
I will try to fix as much of the sliders as I can.
Btw, you didint need to mod that much of the diffs but thannk you for doing so
I will update as soon as im done~

Edit: updated and fixed as much as I could. (I got lazy afterwards ._. )

Okay, sorry, but I diidn't see this difficult Oo
it's strange, but I'm too lazy.. Sorry ==
And anyway Good Luck with this map)

hello ~ let's do a recheck now

song's info;
- tags >> remove the "," between words

general;
- try to keep bgs dimensions 1024x768 or 800x600, here i fixed the ones that needed it
http://puu.sh/bSlV
you'll have to do a full submit
- preview point is not the same in all diffs, keep them the same

* i can help you to improve your map taking little steps at a time if you want, i mean i can do more rechecks if you want or you can always ask me stuff you are unsure about (:

moon's lullaby;
- 00:05:051 >> add a note here, the break or unfilled space is unnecessary and also if you add a note here it helps to follow the music more
- 00:08:014 >> ^
- 00:10:977 >> ^
- 00:13:940 >> ^
- 00:15:051 (1,2) >> i think is better to do a slider from here to 00:15:421, much easier to hit
- 00:16:903 >> add a note here for reasons mentioned above
- 00:19:866 >> ^
- 00:25:792 >> a slider from here to 00:26:532 would be good
- 00:27:273 >> finish at the start, reverse arrow and end; also you could try to make a simple curvy slider like this

- 00:31:718 >> finish
- 00:33:199 >> ^
- 00:36:162 >> finish at start
- 00:39:125 >> add a note
- 00:39:495 >> start the slider here instead but end it at the same spot
- 00:49:125 >> many repeats, it may be hard for players so try making a slider from here to 00:50:051 and add a repeat
- 00:53:569 (1) >> end the slider here
- 00:53:940 >> add a note here
- 00:54:310 (3) >> move the slider here
- 00:58:384 >> add a note here and at 00:58:755 too
- 01:00:977 (3) >> many repeats and they don't fit music that well; try adding a note here and then add a slider from 01:01:347 to 01:02:458
- 01:02:829 >> remove whistle, add finish
- 01:08:014 >> new combo
- 01:08:755 >> remove whistle, add finish
- 01:14:681 >> ^ also you have 2 green sections here, remove one and snap the other so it is snapped to the tick
- 01:16:532 >> add a note
- 01:18:384 >> end the slider here, then add another slider from 01:18:755 to 01:19:495
- 01:28:384 >> add a note here
- 01:29:125 >> delete this note
- 01:29:866 >> add a note here
- 01:39:607 >> move the slider here and end it at 01:31:347; after you do this add a note at 01:30:236
- 01:31:718 (5,6) >> delete both, then add a slider from here to 01:34:125 and add a repeat to it
- 01:35:051 >> add a note here with finish
- 01:35:421 >> this spinner is way way too long, end it at 01:38:014

neo's relaxation;
- 00:03:570 ~ 00:14:681 >> is not good to add whistles on all the notes, you should leave one note without a hitsound between notes with hitsounds so it doesn't sound too full ):
- 00:16:162 >> remove a repeat
- 00:19:125 >> add a note
- 00:25:792 (2,3) >> move (2) here and (3) to 00:25:977
- 00:26:903 >> delete
- 00:27:273 >> move (7) here and add a finish
- 00:28:384 >> add a note
- 00:28:755 >> finish at the start and end
- 00:31:718 >> remove the claps and add finish at the start
- ok, i think this is going to take lots of time, so let's do it in parts ~ from now i'll just mod the placement of notes in the timeline, nothing else; if you want me to do another modpost with just hitsounds or new combos you just tell me (:
- 00:32:644 >> remove new combo
- 00:36:162 >> this doesn't sound good, try making a slider from here to 00:36:903
- 00:37:644 >> this spinner seems a little short for a diff like this so maybe delete it and try to map something else ?
- 00:39:485 >> add a note
- 00:44:495 (5) >> move it here
- 00:44:866 >> add a note here
- 00:47:088 >> move (4) here
- 00:50:421 >> delete this
- 00:50:977 >> add a note with finish
- 01:07:829 >> delete
- 01:17:458 >> add a note ?
- 01:22:458 >> ^
- 01:23:014 >> ^
- 01:24:681 >> end the spinner here
- 01:29:495 >> leave just one repeat and map something else on the space left
- 01:35:421 >> start the spinner here and end it at 01:38:014 with a finish
- 01:46:347 >> delete this and add a note at 01:47:273; i think is a better way to start after a break
- 01:59:125 >> just leave 2 repeats then map something in the space left
- 02:01:718 >> move (1) here
- 02:02:008 >> remove a repeat and map something else on the space left
- 02:05:051 ~ 02:11:718 >> maybe you shouldn't map this part or fill the breaks
- 02:13:755 >> remove all repeats, then add a note at 02:14:310
- 02:22:458 >> start the spinner here and end it at 02:23:940
- 02:34:310 >> end the slider here
- 02:47:829 >> maybe add a note
- 02:48:384 >> add a note
- 02:53:199 >> ^
- 02:55:051 >> end the spinner here
- 02:56:532 >> add a note here
- 03:05:421 >> ^
- 03:05:792 >> move the spinner here

crystal's light;
- go to timing > resnap all notes
- go to timing > recalculate all slider lengths
- 00:35:792 >> i don't think such a short spinner is a good idea
- 00:37:644 >> i think you can change this to something that fits the music more
- 00:43:199 >> move (3) here
- 00:50:236 >> doesn't fit, remove a repeat and extend the slider by a tick
- 00:50:607 >> move (5) here
- 00:50:977 >> add a note with finish
- 00:51:532 >> delete
- 01:02:088 >> move (5) here
- 01:03:384 >> end the slider here
- 01:03:569 >> move (3) here
- 01:04:125 >> move (4) here
- 01:04:310 >> move (5) here and end it at 01:05:051
- 01:05:421 >> move (6) here
- 01:14:681 >> i don't think that starting the kiai time with a spinner is good, try something else
- 01:22:088 >> move (4) here
- 01:50:051 >> doesn't fit, try something else
- 01:56:903 >> add a note
- 01:57:458 >> ^
- 02:06:069 >> map this break
- 02:08:107 >> ^
- 02:10:997 (4,5,6) >> move these one tick forward
- 02:13:569 >> end the slider here
- 02:13:755 (5,6) >> move this one tick to the left
- 02:14:310 >> move (7) here
- 02:15:977 (1,3) >> delete both
- 02:16:903 >> replace with just a note here
- 02:24:588 ~ 02:29:681 >> remap this part
- 02:44:310 >> end the spinner here
- 02:45:514 >> doens't fit, try something else
- 02:55:421 >> ^
- 03:01:718 >> end the slider here and map something in the space left
- 03:05:236 >> start the spinner here and end it at 03:06:903
- i think you should just end this diff at the same spot as neo's

topped toph;
- 00:27:273 >> end the slider here
- 00:37:458 (4,5) >> move one tick forward

sindemon's flame;
- you used 1/6 snap divisor but this song uses 1/4 so use 1/4 and resnap all notes, also recalculate slider lengths, you would also need to do some re-mapping after that

* i'm at my limit D: so sorry ): but if you want i can absolutely mod this again but try to get some mods before

Thannkyhuu for all the help ;D
And ohmaiigawdd..... ._. I SUCK at mapping x_x

And its fine ^^
The both of you didint need to do that much work but thank you for doing it. ;3

Ill updates soon~

Modding~~

[Moon's Lullaby]:
-) Slider Tick 1, because this fits more.
-) 00:54:310 (3) - Move it to 00:54:681. (You might decline it, but try it)
-) 01:03:569 (2) - This Slider is off. My english sucks, so this Picture should be more useful. http://puu.sh/c4Pp
-) 01:16:162 (3,4,5) - This looks better. http://puu.sh/c4RD
-) 01:28:384 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/c4Sx
-) 01:31:718 (2) - http://puu.sh/c4ST


[Neo's Relaxation]:
-) Why I think that the Distance Snaping is wrong?
-) 00:03:570 - 00:27:273 - Lower the Volume to 50%.
-) 00:25:792 (2,3) - They are off. I know that they are set on purpose, but it doesn't fit. You can remove (3).
-) 00:37:273 (1) - Extend to 00:38:755.
-) 00:42:644 (4) - Add Cirlce and the Slider move to 00:42:829.
-) 00:48:014 - Add Circle with Finish.
-) 01:26:532 (1) - http://puu.sh/ves I took this from the Slider Thread. You should make this slider like this on the image.
-) 01:57:829 (8,9) - They touch the HP-Bar and this is unrankable.
-) 02:07:273 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The spacing is wrong. You can do this like that? http://puu.sh/cuDf But please ask someone with experience if this is recommened for a normal Diff.
-) 02:12:458 (2,3,4) - Add Finish.
-) 02:24:310 - 02:36:162 - Decrease the Volume to 50%
-) 02:45:051 - 03:05:792 - The claps sounds strange. Just in my Opinion.



They are so many things not at the same line. And yes, I'm a person what take care for Symmetric. You can if you want, pm me at In-Game that we could fix the unsymmetric Circles.

Thannkyou for modding ^^
Ill try to line everything up before you recheck everything~
Ill update and get to modding on your map very soon

Oh, you dont want to use the BG that I recomended you to use for my diff? XD
Anyway, here, I modded it, again.

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [SinDemon's Flame].osu

O_O I did use it...
Ill update everything nao~

Edit: Updated~ ;D

Hey~
ummm ok. Well, since you're just a beginner mapper, I will just give you some tips about mapping that I believe will help you a lot in the future and hopefully drastically improve the quality of this map.

Unrankable Things you should know:
The maximum BG size allowed is 1024x768, and you have a different BG for every single difficulty but they are all in random resolutions. You must fix this and do a full submit afterwards.

Difficulty Names:
Right now, I cannot tell from the first look which difficulty is supposed to be the hardest and which is the easiest. It would be best if you can just make difficulty names like [Moon's Easy], or [Neo's Normal]...etc. This way, there could be no confusion and it looks more consistent. Lullaby, relaxation, and flames?! <-- that is very random. It has no consistency nor relation between them.

Distance Snap:
ATM, everything looks really messy, scattered and not really following any rhythm or parts in the song.
For example, [Crystal's Light] has a constant, uniform 1/2 rhythm at the start but it has a very wide range of spacing which is quite messy and looks as if the map isn't polished. Of course, mapping jumps are an exception but right now, it's hard to tell if some parts are jumps or antijumps.
In [SinDemon's Flames], it's very difficult for anyone to read the beats/grasp the rhythm of the map because spacing changes every second. Therefore, it's very important to at least show some kind of constant spacing throughout the difficulty so it's not messy this way. You can enable distance snap all the time by just clicking the DS button.
Believe me it will increase the quality of all the difficulties right now by 20 folds.

Difficulty Settings:
For Insane, I would recommend:
OD7, HP7, AR8
Circle size could be up to you, right now it's fine. With OD9 right now, it's actually quite impossible to hit 300s and definitely not suitable for a nice song like this.

For Hard, I would recommend:
OD5, HP5, AR7

You seem to have very high overall difficulty for all the difficulties. Turn them down 3 notches for each difficulty individually and things would be much better. For Normal, OD3 or OD4 is fine. Easy, OD2. Increasing OD = makes circles harder to hit300s, therefore players must be extremely precise almost like Autoplay.

You wanted feedback for [SinDemon's Flames]:
Here's something:
Please try to at least follow something in the song. Right now I have a hard time telling which parts of the song you are trying to follow. Whether it's the vocals, the background music or...something else? After applying distance snap, renap some of the sliders because they are not following anything. I'll give you some examples:
00:04:125 (2) - this isn't following the vocals nor the music
00:04:958 (4) - this should start here: 00:04:866 (4) correct? because this way it follows something in the song: the vocals.
00:06:440 (6) - this one should start here: 00:06:347 instead because there's actually no sound at where you snapped it to atm.
So I believe you understand what I mean, there are some resnapping you need to do and difficulty settings you need to fix.

I think you will need to put some more effort into this :>
at the same time, you should definitely try to get more feedback on this map.
Good Luck~ I hope you would improve this map and aim for ranking

The backgrounds for each diff are all the same size, try re-downloading?

Thank you so much for all the help ^^
I'll fix them soon!

XD I re-mapped it, but its waaaaaaaaaaay better now.

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [SinDemon's Song].osu

Updatedd~
Redownload the map for the new backgrounds size~

[SinDemon's Flame]

-There are many messy slider,Please make it nicer.
-So many unsnapped slider o.o Like this part
-There are some timing point that doesn't snapped. Like this part

-00:22:088 (3) - Shorten to 00:22:829,I think its more fit
-00:27:273 (6) - Shorten to 00:28:014,^
-00:38:569 - Useless break time
-00:46:440 - Again..Useless break time
-00:57:921 - ^
-01:12:829 (1) - Remove finish
-02:02:088 (3) - Remove clap
-03:27:181 (8) - Doesn't follow anything,I highly recommended to delete this note

That's all~
Hope this helpfull
No kds,since you already give me one.

Nothing about my diffs then? ;o
Thanks for mod ^^

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Nothing about my diffs then? ;o
Thanks for mod ^^

I'm not doing a recheck,'cause I'm noob... ;A;
Sorry..><

Its fine ;D you did more then enough modding, thannks!~

Okay, the Re-Mod what I promised (Btw don't KD this Post):

[General]:
- BG Size are fine.
- MP3 and Video too.

[Moon's Lullaby]:
00:15:051 (3) - Add Whistle at Start Point.
00:56:903 (4) - New Combo.
01:18:755 (6) - New Combo.
01:20:607 - Remove New Combo.
01:26:532 (1) - Add Finish at Start Point.
01:34:310 (3) - Move it to y:340, and short it to 01:34:495.
01:35:421 (1) - Remove the Hitsounds and remove NC.

[Neo's Relaxation]:
00:30:977 (5) - New Combo.
00:44:866 (7,1) - The Position is irritating. Move it so that (5) doesn't hide it.
00:44:866 (7) - New Combo.
00:45:051 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:49:310 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:50:051 (3) - New Combo.
00:59:866 (3) - Add Finish.
01:01:532 (5) - Add Finish.
01:02:829 (1) - Add Finish.
01:04:310 - Finish would sounds good too.
01:08:014 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:09:495 (6) - New Combo.
01:14:681 (7) - New Combo and add Finish at Start Point.
01:23:384 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:26:532 (1) - Add Finish at Start Point.
01:35:236 (5) - Remove Clap.
01:35:421 (1) - Remove New Combo.
01:57:273 (6) - I might break this big Combo, so New Combo.
02:12:458 (2) - Add Finish. And set a short Kiai Time.
02:27:273 (5) - New Combo.
02:28:755 (1) - Remove New Combo.
02:31:718 (1) - Remove Whistle. And then add at the Start and End Point Whistle.
02:47:644 (6) - New Combo.

[Crystal's Light]:
00:09:495 (9) - New Combo.
00:10:236 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:21:347 (9) - New Combo.
00:26:347 (1) - Remove New Combo.
00:30:236 (6) - New Combo.
00:35:236 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:35:792 (1) - Remove Combo.
00:50:236 (4) - The Slider doesn't fit IMO.
01:02:829 (2) - Add Finish and short Kiai Time.
01:08:755 (2) - Add Finish.
01:14:681 (1) - Add Finish.
01:15:699 (1) - Remove New Combo and short it to 01:16:532.
01:31:532 (1,1) - Quite stupid to cut as two Spinner. Remove one Spinner and extend it as a long Spinner.
01:35:699 - Add short Kiai Time.
02:03:940 - 02:12:273 - That's horrible too hard. And I don't think, this should be the Insane Diff.
02:05:051 (1) - Why is it moved from (2), (3) and (4)?
02:24:310 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - The Distance of the Circles to the Spinner is way too short. And it looks like Spinner Spamming.
02:31:532 (6) - Remove Whistle. And then add at the Start and End Point Whistle.
02:45:421 (2) - Too close on the Spinner.
02:53:847 (1) - Short it to 02:55:051.

Thannnkyhuu~

Next Post, derp~~

[Insane]:
00:04:310 (2,3,4) - Remove Whistle.
00:07:273 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:09:866 (2) - Remove Whistle and add Whistle at the Start and End Point.
00:12:088 (1,2) - Remove Whistle.
00:13:199 (2) - Remove Whistle and add Whistle at the Start and End Point.
00:20:236 (8,1) - Spacing is wrong.
00:25:607 - Add Circle.
00:25:607 (1) - (If you add Circle) New Combo.
01:00:421 - Add Circle.
01:07:458 - Remove Circle, because it doesn't fit.
01:08:014 (1,2,3) - Maybe this?: http://puu.sh/fn1b
01:10:977 (1,2) - Spacing is wrong.
01:33:199 (2) - This Slider doens't fit. Remove it
02:13:755 (1,2) - Lol. Even for Insane too hard.
02:45:034 - This Inherited Point is unused. Remove it.
02:46:162 (1) - Remove it and extend the Spinner before to the Time.
03:03:292 - (1,2) - Move it on one. [03:03:384 (2,3)]

I give you a Diff where I changed the Combos. Because it would take 5x more of that what I wrote now.
And it's easier to send you the Diff with the changed Combo than to write every single Combo change..
You don't have to take anything. It is the same like the Mod. But I'm really really lazy to explain you every Combo Change..
Btw I JUST changed the Combos, nothing else.

The Map needs alot of Work to be finished. Especially Insane need Work.
But I know you'll do it. Good Luck.

Do you not want me to give you kd for that post too? x3

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[General]
I think ... sliders in this maps can be get pretty better .

[Easy]
00:56:903 (1) - get it like this ?! http://puu.sh/hkzB
01:29:495 (3,4,5) - this?! http://puu.sh/hkBX
01:30:607 (1) - get it like this ?! http://puu.sh/hkDy

476,176,56903,6,0,B|480:256|400:248|400:248|320:240|324:316,1,239.999971389771
176,220,89495,1,2
228,260,89866,1,0
248,320,90236,1,0
188,340,90607,6,2,B|216:264|76:264|104:340|104:340,1,159.999980926514

[Normal]
I think ... not have spacing is the best .

00:28:014 (2,3,4) - distance is different
00:42:644 (4) - add NC ?!
01:05:792 (3) - add finish in the slider of head ?!
01:31:718 (6,1,3) - (6) (3) add NC and (1) remove NC?!

[Hard]
Spacing is too much ?! OAO

01:22:088 (4,5,6,7) - I think the disance is different...and remove (7) and get (8) start in 01:23:384 ?beacause I feel strange . like this http://puu.sh/hkKb
01:53:755 (5) - add NC ?
02:13:755 (5) - add NC ?!
02:59:495 (6) - add NC ?
03:02:088 (1) - add NC ?!
02:25:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - why the middle is empty ?!
02:25:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I think there ... can be much fun .

[Insane]
00:33:199 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - get it be much fun ?!
01:05:792 (8,1) - (8) add NC and (1) removed NC ?!
01:21:903 (6) - add NC?
02:49:681 (3,4,5,6) - (3) cover (4) (5) (6)
03:03:384 (7,8,9,10) - add somthing in the middle ?!

[Sindemon's Insane]
01:03:755 (2) - remove it ?!


good song

And sorry to my poor English

Can I make easy or normal diff ;w;? If not,I'll just mod your map ;3

l1106188: Thank you for modding all the diffs ^^
M a n a: sorry D: Too much diffs already and I already got a guest diff ._. a unexpected guest diff too ; x

Normal
Please fixed DS
i think Circle size 4

00:44:495 (3) - deleat note?

00:50:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/245488

01:12:088 (2) - delet note?

01:13:199 (4,5) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/245489

01:22:644 (2,3,) - move 01:22:458

01:23:384 (1) - move 01:23:199 and add whisle

etc ....

Hard
00:44:310 (7) - move 00:44:495

00:48:755 (5) - lengthens 00:49:125

00:51:718 (2) - move 00:51:532

00:53:014 - add note?

00:55:977 - add note?

00:56:718 (4) - one reverse

00:58:199 - add note?

01:11:162 (2) - delete note?

01:20:977 (1) - no stack?

01:23:384 (7) - delete note?

01:23:570 (7) - move 01:23:384

02:10:607 (4) - remove finish?

02:14:125 (3) - delete note?

02:22:273 (3,4) - like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/245503

02:36:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - remove whisle

02:42:088 (1,2) - remove whisle

Insane
01:13:384 (11) - delete note?

01:16:532 (10) - delete note and add slider?

01:17:273 - add note?

01:17:458 - add note?

01:23:384 (1) - finishpoint 01:23:940

01:53:199 (5) - move 01:53:014

good song~

Thannkyhuu for modding ;D

Hello ~

[general]

Slider Tick Rate : 2 => 1

[Normal]
00:24:310 (2) => Stack
01:26:532 (1) => 01:26:532 ~ 01:28:755





[Hard]
AR:7

-----------------------

01:15:699 (spinner) =>01:15:607~01:16:532
02:26:162 (x) => Add Note
02:45:421 (1) => Remove new combo
03:07:181 (1) => 03:07:273

It's your lucky day A mod post from me after not modding anything for 2 weeks

For m4m and I liked the preview for this song. Modding this at 3am so I may make silly mistake and I haven't mod in a long time so sorry if I disrespect your mapping style/try to force my mapping style into your map. Remember that everything is just suggestion unless stated otherwise and if I give a long mod, I'm only trying to improve your map

[General]

- Hmm no higher quality video? Well I guess it's fine.
- Maybe name SinDemon's Insane to something else? Like SinDemon's Extra? Seem nicer then to see two Insanes. Or something related to the map, I notice this diff has small circles so maybe something related to it.
- What is Vocaloid2 :S. I checked this and some ranked map has this tag too. What is it?
* I've heard some Nico Nico Chorus song before and there is usually a list of who sang this? Like http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhQ6GQW2lA8 8 people in the description is who sing this. I think this is important since Usa & Hanatan have a couple ranked map on osu (not sure about other singers) and would be a shame if they sang in this chorus and their names not include in the chorus so I recommend checking this.
- Toku-P is composer?

Source: This field should generally only be included for Anime or Video Game songs, and occasionally for Novelty (Movies, TV, or Internet) songs. If the song is from an anime or video game, or is most famous for its use as a TV or movie theme, the title of that source goes here. Rock and Pop songs should generally leave the field blank: This is not to be used for things like album titles, and video games like Rock Band or Guitar Hero, which use already-popular songs, should not be named here.

Nvm, he's a composer who made song and upload to Nico Nico Douga http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/Toku-P. Put his name in tags and put Nico Nico Douga in source. I am aware of this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/16226, but should definitely be change to this. Also this http://osu.ppy.sh/p/beatmaplist?s=7&o=1 ... 0&g=0&la=0
- Use a silent slider slide for the beginning (not sure how many beatmaps you have, but I'm sure atleast one map you have contains silent slider track; search soft-sliderslide.wav and put it in your folder. Then in the timing setup panel, change the first timing point (the red one) to soft custom 1 http://puu.sh/i7Dg. Then put a timing point at 00:27:273 and change it back to default (to unsilent the slider track). Do this for all diff, slider track sound too loud here.

Should be all hopefully.

[Easy]

- Considering there are 5 diff, I'm wondering why this diff doesn't use the lowest circle size. Please use circle size 3, 4 is more fitting for Normal or harder.
- For a diff with this star rating, the difficulty setting are too high imo. I recommend Hp Drain 1-2, Approach Rate 2 and Overall difficulty 1.
- Hmm I recommend tick rate 1 since due to how slow the slider velocity is, make it all crunch up together and tick rate 2 doesn't work too well for the calm part.

00:00:00 - 00:25:792 - I see why you used ar3, lot of hit circles here. This is not nice to play for beginner due to how slow the approach rate is (you feel like hitting it too early) and you can easily do something else considering the music. I recommend slider (this is why I suggest tick rate 1 as the slider tick will sound overpowering at this part with tick rate 2 and silent slider slide). Basically this,
00:03:570 (1,2) - Slider start at (1) and ends at (2)
00:06:532 (1,2) - ^
00:09:495 (1,2) - ^ and put a new combo here (don't add any to previous notes or the next note)
00:12:458 (1.2) - ^
00:16:903 (4,1,2) - Repeating slider instead and add new combo here.
00:21:347 (1,2,3) - Same thing, no new combo.
Refer to this guide for interesting way to place these long sliders viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194. To be honest, just curving them and making them symmetrical works, example http://puu.sh/i7Ge, but try to experiment a bit with other shape to make it more interesting.
00:27:273 (1) - Would be better if you try some slider shape rather than leaving it straight. Doesn't look nice for me to see long slider left as straight.
00:30:977 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This really has to do with my mapping preference, but I don't like these hit circles. Same reason as before This is not nice to play for beginner due to how slow the approach rate is (you feel like hitting it too early) and you can easily do something else considering the music.
Consider this...
00:31:718 (2,3) - Slider (emphasize the finish) --- A slider begin is more emphasize then it end.
00:33:199 (1,2) - Slider instead for this as well.
00:39:125 (2,1) - A bit nazi, but move them more to the right, it looks like they touch the previous slider track so seem cleaner to move it.
00:39:495 (1) - This slider isn't perfectly symmetrical, be sure to refer to the slider guide I gave you to make it better.
00:41:532 (2,3) - Just my preference, but when note overlap each other like this in the easier diffs, I recommend a slider. Seem cleaner to me. http://puu.sh/i7IU
00:45:051 (5) - Make this symmetrical with (3) http://puu.sh/i7Ki
00:46:347 (1,2) - Same as 00:41:532
00:47:644 (1) - I recommend curving this slider, no real reason except that it looks nicer.
00:48:384 (2) - I recommend removing this note and adding a repeat to (1). Same reason as before regarding the overlap and this eliminate some of it.
00:58:384 (2,3,4) - Just do repeating slider like 00:59:866 (2), not nice to play stack at this approach rate.
01:02:829 (1) - Snap this to 0.8x distant snapping.
01:03:569 (2) - This slider is begging to be curve http://puu.sh/i7Ma.
01:05:792 (3,4,5) - Repeating slider, you should know why I suggest doing this (5 hit circles in a row is not nice to play at this approach rate).
01:09:495 (3) - Nicer if you try some slider shape for this.
01:14:681 (1,2) - I highly recommend a repeating slider (begin on 1, repeat on the white tick between the two hit circles and ends at 2). Main reason is after a space, it's hard to get the feel of the rhythm again and you need to time your hit precisely for a hit circle while not so much for a slider. Also since two hit circles like this suggests there is nothing between the two notes while I can clearly hear stuff going on there so nicer to have some hitsound on it.
01:15:792 (x) - I'm not sure how hard your normal is, but I would do a repeating slider here too (repeat on 1, ends on 2).
01:16:903 (5) - Experiment with red point (double click a white point two times) to accent some of the vocal/instrument since a plain straight slider doesn't represent the feel very well at all for me.
01:20:607 (3) - ^
01:28:755 (2) - Recommend a slider and end it on 01:29:125 to follow the vocal here more.
01:29:495 (3,4,5) - Recommend a repeating slider to avoid some of the ugly overlaps.
01:31:718 (2) - Try red points etc.

You didn't map the rest? This is a must. Think of it this way, I'm a beginner at this game, I saw this song and try the easiest diff. I find it too easy. I try the next diff and was surprised by how the map goes on for an extra 2 mins and eventually got too tired and fail this diff, not too nice for difficulty spread imo.

[Normal]

-A bit tired to mention some of the same stuff, but I recommend try to use red points/curve/do slider shape for your sliders and mix some slider for some of the part you use lots of hit circle.I will take a quick look through, but remember, like at the beginning, I didn't mention about the hit circles, but I recommend using more slider for this part.

00:26:347 (4,5,6) - Repeating slider to avoid overlap.
00:32:458 (4,5,6) - ^
00:50:051 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - You should focus on vocal and not instrument here, use some sliders. This pattern look like something that should be in hard/insane (stream).
00:51:718 (1) - This long slider is weird considering what you did for the previous part, should be map out.
00:54:495 (4) - ^
01:01:162 (3,4,5) - Repeating slider 01:01:903 (6,7,8) - Repeating slider. Similar feel but looks a lot cleaner and nicer to play.
01:10:051 (3) - You don't need this note, play just fine without it.
01:14:681 (1) - I find this interesting actually, but I find it weird you didn't do this in Easy actually. Hmm...it's not a problem I guess.
01:20:607 (5) - Try to avoid kick sliders (repeating slider with more than on repeat), you cannot know how many repeats a repeating slider is going to have and especially for the easier diff, beginners shouldn't have to think "Oh no! A repeating slider, I wonder how many repeats this is going to have" and instead enjoy the patterns. I suggest removing a repeat and add a hit circle instead. Then do slider for 01:22:088 (1,2).
01:34:866 (5,6,7) - Repeating slider, avoid overlap.
01:47:644 (2) - Again, I find these long sliders more suitable for an Easy.
01:56:718 (4,5,1,2) - To be honest, it plays fine and doesn't look that bad but I prefer if you do short sliders instead.
01:59:125 (5) - This is where I would expect a long slider actually. Another problem is this is a kick slider.
02:02:088 (2) - ^
02:04:125 (1,2,3,4) - Just do a slider starting on (1) and ending on (4).
02:07:273 (1,2,3) - Definitely consider repeating slider and for all similar pattern.
02:19:125 (2) - Please curve it, the song feel isn't really straight to me.
02:21:347 (5) - ^
Slider speed change is not recommend for Easy & Normal. This is because beginner normally read spacing and when slider velocity change, so does the spacing. I recommend removing it, but if you want to keep it, please use 0.75x. This is too much and make slider really too slow.
02:31:718 (1) - I feel like saying use tick rate 1 due to how many slider ticks this have. Note: For previous parts with lot of hitcircle, please use some long sliders instead, the amount of hit circle make this part feel really intense while the song is a lot calmer here.
02:39:125 (1,3) - Curve
02:46:162 - 03:05:421 - You use too many hit circles. If you are curious why I find this a bad thing, take a look at most recently ranked map. There are never this many hit circles in a row and this song doesn't feel like this as well.

Should be map to the same spot as Insane for difficulty spread. Hmm... my best suggestion is to look at recently ranked map and see what they do. Some people don't want to do this, but this is honestly the best way other than to "map more."

I'm really too tired to mod anymore now, almost 5am. Took a quick look at Hard, Insane and guest diff.

Hard & Insane & guest diff
I find the long sliders quite weird when I can hear something playing during the middle of them. And same issue with lot of hit circles for parts which aren't really so.

SinDemon's Insane
I find the breaks really weird and breaks the flow, and definitely look at those long slider, I'm curious at why you didn't map them out.

The key to making your beatmap better is to mix slider and hit circle better and control when you use some of those long sliders. Be sure to keep working on it, self mod is key. Modding can only do so much, what you try to fix yourself is worth more than 100s of mod post imo.

Definitely take a look at the ranked map with Hatsune Miku singing this song. I see some nice idea in it (not all of the ideas are good through imo) and you should apply some to your map. Don't consider this as copying, but a nice way to learn what works and what doesn't. Well that's all from me. Sorry if lot of suggestion has to do with my preference (I prefer using sliders for most of my maps).

Edits: Fix some errors in post, so tired that I was repeating some stuff and spelling words wrong

Ohmaiigawdd.. ._.
I feel like a terrible mapper ; x
Thanks for modding!
I'll update after I come back from school.

Sorry for late ><

[Easy]

Decrease the volume please ><
00:15:051 (3) - Switch the hitsound
00:24:310 (5) - New combo
00:27:273 (1) - Add finish in the beginning
00:28:755 & 00:30:236 (1) - Add whistle
00:34:681 (3) - ^
00:39:495 (1) - Start this note at 00:39:866 more fit IMO
00:42:644 (3) - ^ at 00:42:829
00:44:495 (4) - ^ at 00:44:681

[Normal]

00:48:014 (x) - Add note here
00:54:495 (4) - Start this note at 00:54:681
00:56:718 (6) - ^ at 00:56:903 and don't forget to shorten the slider
01:25:051 (1,2) - Clap hitsound is really weird for this song IMO xAx
01:59:125 (5) - New combo
02:24:310 (1) - Too far from spinner
02:31:718~02:44:218 - Remove whistle from slider slide
02:45:051~03:05:421 - Same as 01:25:051

[Hard]

Overall : You use many spinner in the beginning >A<

[Insane]

Overall : AR + 1?A bit overmapped ><

[SinDemon's Insane]

Overall : CS + 1?,Same as Insane

That's all
Good luck~

Its okayy~
Thannks~

Hi Crystal ♥
Your Mod Request from my Modding Queue. ♥

[Normal]
00:05:792 : http://puu.sh/imDk Why not like this? :3 (If you do that, put a whistle on 00:06:532)
00:26:347 : Delete these three Circle and put a Slider like that : http://puu.sh/imEk
00:32:644 : Delete Circle
00:39:125 : Finish
00:42:088 : ^
00:48:014 : ^
00:48:755 : Delete Finish
00:50:977 : Finish
00:56:903 : ^
01:10:236 : ^
01:10:607 : Delete Finish
01:17:273 : ^
01:17:644 : Finish '-'...
01:25:051 : http://puu.sh/imIT
01:25:236 : Delete Clap
01:29:125 : Delete Finish
01:29:495 : Finish
01:31:718 : Delete Finish
01:32:458 : Finish
02:26:903 : Circle
02:34:681 : http://puu.sh/imKF , Please? '-'

[Hard]
00:06:162 : Circle
00:09:125 : http://puu.sh/imMf
00:14:681 : Delete Circle.
00:18:014 : Circle
00:24:125 : ^
00:27:273 : NC
00:33:199 : ^
01:05:792 : ^
01:09:866 : Circle
01:10:236 : Finish
01:15:607 : Delete Spiner and put some beat on it. '-'
01:26:162 : Maybe a NC?
01:29:310 : Circle or maybe a Slider with 01:29:125 (5)
01:57:829 : NC
01:59:125 : ^
01:59:866 : ^ (To be with 10)
02:01:718 : ^
02:03:569 : Delete Circle
02:18:569 : Delete Slider
02:24:310 to 02:36:162 : Break ; Because it's sound really bad.
02:38:940 : Circle
02:41:532 : ^
02:41:903 : ^
02:45:607 : Delete Spiner. é.é
03:02:273 : Circle
03:02:644 : circle
03:07:458 : Delete Spiner, that's too long.

[Insane]
00:06:162 : Circle. .3.
03:05:607 : Spiner Ends at 03:06:903
03:07:273 : Finish / Delete EVERYTHING after that.

[SD's Insane]
WHAT WITH THOSES JUMPS?! LOOOOL.

03:07:273 : Delete everything and put a Circle + Finish


As you can see, I got lazy to mod Insane & SB's Insane. .3.
Good luck on your map Crystal ♥

Thannkkyhuu~
Ill update soon

Edit: Updated~

General:
- Consider making the simple sliders with 1 or 2 curve points a little more neat and symmetrical.

Easy:
- 00:58:384 (2,3,4): Consider spacing these circles apart. Putting the 1 next to stacked circles like that is confusing on an Easy difficulty.

Normal:
- 00:56:903 (6): Ending this slider half a beat early (at 00:57:644) fits the lyrics better.

Hard:
- 01:19:866 (8): Space this farther apart from 7.
- 02:00:607 (4): Consider making this a slider to go along with the drawn-out lyric.

Insane:
- 01:58:014 (4): Consider moving this forward to have it start at 01:58:199 to go better with the lyric.

SinDemon's Insane:
The difficulty is bordering on ridiculous, but I guess that's the point. Fine otherwise.

hello



[Hard]
00:35:792 (1) → (suggetion) delete

02:21:532 (1,2,3) → delete http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/259036

02:23:662 ~ 02:36:069 → (suggetion) breaktime ?


[Insane]
00:09:495 (7) → new combo

00:11:718 (x) → add note

00:19:681 (5) → delete

00:20:236 (7) → end the slider till 00:20:607

00:24:310 (6) → move into 00:24:125

00:24:495 (7) → ^ 00:24:310

01:01:718 (4) → delete

01:13:940 (11) → delete whistle

01:11:903 (6) → delete

01:32:273 (10) → add circle note and move slider into 01:32:458 (Length 01:32:458 ~ 01:33:014)

01:33:199 (2) → change to circle note

01:33:569 (x) → add note

03:31:718 → add inherited points : soft volume 5





[SinDemon's Insane]

I recommend circle size 5





http://puu.sh/jCHs







@,.@

Thannkyouu!

[Easy]

01:38:014 - You've only mapped up to this point, unless you still want to map the remaining part, delete the unnecessary timing points.

[Normal]

Same as Easy.

[Hard]

01:23:384 (7) - Not Exactly readable. Rather Hidden.
02:10:607 (4) - ^

Hi~你好啊~我从小草莓那知道了你的图所以看了之后决定做个EXAMPLE给你看看，如果要上传的话请把XD这两个字去掉。。。

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [RainbowXD].osu

@Ain053 I think i'll just keep it like that.
@SunRainbow o.o ... i cannot understand i have poor Chinese ._. sorry D:

OK……I know your bestmap from baby strawberry,and i think i can make a example diff for you (Can you Update it?XDDD)

yow!

Easy:
start ->00:25:051 - add notes on every 2nd white tick, even if its an easy, this is every 2nd white tick and should be fine, maybe make some 2white tick long sliders instead of single notes aswell to mix things up
00:15:051 (3) - new combo
00:27:273 (1) - make this 2sliders->1st 3ticks long -> pic
00:35:421 - add note
00:36:162 - this slider is just wrong imo, try this -> pic
00:39:866 (1) - vocals start on red tick->please move slider on it
00:42:829 (4) - ^
00:42:829 (4,5) - remove 5, make 4 1/2 longer -> fits vocals better
00:46:347 (1,2,3) - feels strange, maybe just make it a single slider?
00:49:125 (4) - move 1/2 later to fit vocals better
01:02:829 - why kiai here?
01:05:792 (3,4,5,1,2) - maybe add a slider instead of just single notes?
01:20:607 (3) - remap this please, those long sliders are superboring even on easydiff
01:24:310 (4) - remove please
01:31:718 (2) - remap this please, those long sliders are superboring even on easydiff
01:34:310 (3,4) - urgh

-not gonna map it till the end?

normal:
00:14:681 (4) - remove
00:16:162 (1) - should start at 00:15:977 since vocals start there
00:18:940 - try this pattern here -> pic ((2) is on 18:940)
00:28:384 (3) - add finish
00:30:236 - add finish
00:31:718 - ^
00:37:273 (1) - remove and simply put single notes on:00:37:644 - 00:38:014 - 00:38:384
00:44:495 (3) - make it a slider ->remove 00:44:866 (1) - and end the slider here
00:46:347 - please change to this, plays 10x better -> pic
00:50:421 (2,3) - remove 3, make 2 end where 3 ended
00:54:681 (4) - should start at 00:54:495

wont write anymore on normaldiff since the rest is the same as i wrote before, just PLEASE take care of all those superlong repeated sliders, they are superboring and just look like you didnt want to map them
theres so many possible pattern you can use to make the map more fun to play...

Hard:
gonna continue tomorrow/later.... so much stuff here aswell
mostly gonna be about all those spinners.... way to many, 80% of them out of position->should be removed
and some parts are mapped strange...

insane:
is kinda more like a hard diff imo, mod on it will come later today/tomorrow aswell


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maybe remove hard diff+rename insane->hard?

Thanks for modding!












I feel like a horrible mapper now ._.

2nd round!

general:
open ALL diffs .osu fíles in texteditor->flatten out the slider velocities

currently it looks like this: SliderMultiplier:0.99999990463257
should look like this: SliderMultiplier:1.0

easy? EASY!
ok

.osb file->delete since you dont use it
MikuSPiCa_Style_by_refeia.jpg ->is it used? if not->delete

okay, so far so good. lets move on to the diffs!

hard:
general:
-id use a bigger distance snap (1.0 should do better than .8, trust me )
-speed up sliders on some parts (i will give you timings below modnotes)

beginning - 00:20:607 - booooring, could you try to map a little more than just the piano her? just mix in some sliders on the vocals to make it a little more interesting
00:22:088 (2) - you shouldnt hide this one
00:22:458 (3) - remove, dont even try to keep it since it is just COMPLETLY out of place
00:25:792 (5) - make this a slider starting 00:25:607 - ending 00:25:977 -
00:26:532 (7) - make this a slider aswell (1/1 slider)
00:28:755 (1) - add finish on first hit
00:30:236 (3) - ^
00:33:199 (1) - ^
00:34:681 (3) - ^
00:39:125 - please map this part properly, as it is you could also just make it a break and you dont want that in a hard diff
00:32:458 (6) - new combo, remove NC from 00:33:199 (1) (and make that slider symetric please)
00:45:051 (8) - since you stop following the vocals->new combo, otherwise its very confusing
00:46:162 - add note?
00:46:347 (1) - try out this instead->http://puu.sh/m61M
->00:47:644 (3) - new combo plox
00:50:607 (5) - if you keep it like this->new combo (same reason as before)
00:51:347 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesnt fit at all imo, you just mixed up music+vocals, but even that isnt done properly->please remap and decide on either vocals OR music
00:54:681 (2) - shorten this one down to 1/2 slider and start another slider at big white tick (make that 1/1 or 3/2 slider)
00:55:792 (1) - remove
00:56:718 (4,5,6) - extend 4 by 1/4, keep reverse ->remove 5+6
00:57:644 (7,8,9,10) - doesnt feel right, you could just make 7 a terry-long slider and follow the vocals, would work very well here
01:00:607 (2) - move this on red tick right after the slider, add 1/1 slider at 01:00:607
01:01:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - reposition those, you could make some really sweet patterns with them instead of stacking them up in such an awkward way
01:08:014 (1) - make 1/1 slider
01:09:495 (3,4,5) - dont see a reason for your spacing, especially since the song calms down at that moment
01:13:199 (5) - you could make this a 2big white tick long slider
01:15:421 (1) - no please-.- , when i hear the music i already feel like there must be a 1/2slider after the 4hit-combo
just check this->http://puu.sh/m6bp
also note that i change your new combo on 01:16:903 (1/now 5) since this makes much more sense
01:17:644 (3) - remake this into-> 01:17:644 1/2 slider, 01:18:014 - hit, 01:18:199 - hit, 01:18:384 - 1/2 slider
01:18:755 (4) - new combo
01:18:940 - add note
01:19:866 (8) - you could make this 1/2+1/1 slider starting on big white ticks
01:20:977 (1) - i would remove it
01:21:162 (2) - extend by 1/2
01:24:681 - add note
01:25:977 (4) - remove
01:26:532 (3) - like 01:19:866 (8)
01:29:125 (1) - NOOOOOOOO
01:31:718 (1) - NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

ok... so i modded only on this part for over 2hours now.... i could keep on, but its basicly the same stuff over and over again
you should notice that most parts of the song can be mapped with very simple 1/2 1/2 1/2 1/1 patterns

fix the modded parts and carry those changes over to the other parts aswell, when you are done with it you can just PM me for a re-check

will mod insane later

/EDIT:

nearly forgot to give you the timings...
ok, so basicly you can use 1.0 sliders, but i would fasten them up as the song "gets quicker"
examples:
00:39:125 - 01:02:644 (try SV1.2)
01:14:681 - 01:35:421 (SV 1.4?)
02:12:273 - 02:24:310 (SV 1.2)
02:36:162 - 02:43:199 (SV 1.2)
02:45:051 - end (SV 1.4?)
by making the sliders faster you will increase the flow of these parts, especially on the kiai times the song gains so much drive and you should carry this over into the mapping, just try it out and you will probably see yourself how much better the flow of the map is compared to the song
(if you dont know how to make the sliders faster: add inherit timingsection at the posted points->go to timing+control panel->Timing tab->Slider velocity multiplier)
you will have to make major work if you do so, but if you do all those changes i pointed out, it will only be like 5% more work, so you should really try it out

Almost everything fixed!
Thanks

insane :

85 Errors : http://puu.sh/mbRL

._.
I did some messed up stuff to Sun Rainbow's diff when I was editing it in text file, all fixed now.
Thanks~

Mod Request from My Queue ✿

-General-

-Easy-

-Normal-

-Hard-

-Rainbow's Insane-

i like this song :3 good luck, pm me for recheck ^^

I think i'll jsut leave the mp3 as it is.
Thankyhuu~

http://puu.sh/nNWc
SB and Hitsound
Please full update it thanks

DIFF

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Rainbow's Insane].osu

Updated!
Thankss~

Hi There, Sorry For my Late Mod ;_;

[General]

Nothing, But i think you can improve more your hitsounds

[Easy]

The mapset its not done but i mod what its done

00:21:347 (1) - Add a whistle
00:34:681 (3) - Change whistle for a finish ?
00:54:681 (3) - try this

41,206,54681,2,0,B|188:320|272:176|420:292,1,400

01:03:569 (2) - Add finish at the end
01:08:384 (x) - Add a Note for better spread
01:20:607 (3) - Add finish at the begin
01:25:051 (6) - Remove one reverse arrow and add note here 01:26:162 (7)

[Normal]

00:15:051 (4) - Add whistle at the end
00:16:162 (1) - Add whistle in the first reverse arrow and the end
00:19:866 (1) - Add whistle at the begin and in the second reverse arrow
00:22:829 (2) - Add whistle
00:24:310 (2) - Add whistle at the begin
00:34:681 (4) - Add finish at the begin
00:39:125 (1) - Remove Note, its too close of the end of the previous spinner
00:56:532 (2) - Awkward Anti-jump :$
01:34:866 (1,2,3) - Change this 3 notes for a slider http://puu.sh/nT7C

[Hard]

00:12:458 (1) - Add whistle at the begin
00:15:051 (1) - Add whistle at the end
01:25:977 (x) - Add a Note
02:12:458 (2) - Add finish
02:45:607 (1) - Change this spinner for a Slider ?

[Rainbow's Insane]

00:38:940 (6) - Remove Note, End Previous slider there
01:14:681 (1) - Add finish
01:26:532 (1) - ^
02:06:347 (x) - Remove Break
02:45:051 (1) - Add finish
02:56:903 (1) - Add finish at the begin

I Like how you used the clap's in Ths difficult

Well Hope It Was Helpful, Hope it gets Ranked

Good Luck !

Its fine~
Thankkyhuu^^

Requested in my queue, i check this map before the request.
Your map is fine in my opinion but i see a spacing error in Insane, in 00:35:977 (1,2,3): This stacking is weird, change to this:

Good map
i want to star but i can't.

Thank you^^
I'll have Sun Rainbow fix it when he comes on~

Yo~

Mod request from your signature

General?
wtf! combo colors looks weird

Insane
00:10:977 (1) - spacing
00:12:088 (2) - nc (new combo) / remove NC
00:19:681 (4,1) - a bit messy. don't touch sliders
00:21:347 (5,9) - stack them> (put (9) on start of (5))
00:58:384 (1) - x316 y 172
01:28:755 (9) - this sliders are messy! try to use something likethis
01:55:792 (1,4) - stack start points
03:15:792 (5,1) - stack them
03:16:532 (6,2) - overlap

Hard
00:15:051 (1,1) - new combo spam
00:28:755 (1,3) - stack properly
00:33:199 (1) - this sliders are messy! try to use something likethis

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fine for me. but still needs a bit more modding
GL~

I think the slider is fine so ill keep it~
Thanks for mod and star! ;D

Thannkyhuu~

Sorry I decied to remap my diff...

Hello
Oh, 41000.... What the

[Easy]

00:27:273 (1) - ugly. Make it use a 4 point. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302321
02:12:458 ~ 03:05:792 - Some useless inherited point. Delete it if unused.

[Normal]

00:03:570 - Useless inherited point
00:39:495 - NC bug
02:58:014 (3) - Move ↑ 1 grid. Make it same horizontal with 02:56:903 (1,2)
03:05:792 (1) - End at 03:07:273 pls. Because the spinner length is too short and too little time between the spinner and the next note

[Hard]

02:10:051 (1) - Stack some mess and easy to miss this note.
02:22:273 (6) - Stack with 02:20:977 (3) at beginner. And end at 02:23:569 better.
02:31:532 (6) - reverse at 02:31:718 and reverse more 2 times.
02:45:051 - NC bug
02:56:903 - NC bug

[Rainbow's Insane]

竟然在外國人的圖驚見彩虹君!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!owo
00:22:829 (9) - 向下移動1格，與00:21:347的開頭重疊
00:27:088 (2) - 坑嗲啊ww，這個減速真心太突然=3= 還有節奏應該是這樣：http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302333
00:40:421 (2) - 折返點應該是00:41:162
02:39:310 (2) - 我想您原意是放在02:38:755 ?
02:40:792 (2,3) - 上面改了這兩個可以刪掉
02:41:718 () - 上面改了這裡可以add note
02:45:236 (1) - Remove NC
03:28:014 (1) - 在03:27:829開始吧? 音樂感覺在這邊

That all

Thankyhu! ^w^

[General]

You fix overlapped stuffs, because their unrankable.

[Easy]

Their are some overlapped stuffs.
Finish the whole diff...

00:36:162 (1) - Fix this slider.
01:18:755 (1) - It's overlapping (5).

[Normal]

00:45:051 (2) - Fix this slider in a better way.
00:46:347 (3,4,5) - It's overlapping (2).
00:56:903 (3) - Fix one like this. puu.sh/s34G
01:22:088 (1,2,3) - Overlapped.
02:42:088 (4) - Try x:340 y:152?

[Hard]

00:12:458 (1) - Move the 2nd point two grids left.
02:22:273 (6) - Overlapped.

Thankks~
I'll mod your map soon! ^^

Blehhh! ><
Fixed a few things and moved to WIP since Sun Rainbow has exams and is gunna take a while to remap his diff ;w;

Like that song x333 I wish you good luck with it ^-^

Thannkyhuu ~
>w<

Hello ~ Mod request from Chloe's Modding Queue

• [General]

1. All the difficulty, the SB option of the Setup page, plz cancel the Letterbox during breaks.
   

• [Normal]

1. HP-1
2. 02:43:940 (6) - Change to two 1/2-note
3. 02:59:866 (3) - Keep the spacing

• [Hard]

1. 01:30:977 (1,2,3) - It's dull , re-arrange it
2. 02:07:088 (1) - Add a note.
   I feel that this map need to be arranged some triple click. But everyone have their own mapping style, you can just ignore this/

• [Insane]

1. 03:05:699 (4) - Move it？But I can't determine that...
   Great.. I could not pick any dissatisfied. A nice Insane-Diff.
   Stared!

Hmm... sry for later. because I was very busy for last a few days and also now... Maybe I'll back for a recheck when got some free time.
Yeah That's all I found ^^ Bye~

Thank you ~ ;D
>w<

I love this song >.<

star ~

Meltt ~
Thank you >w<

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
♪~


[Easy]
00:48:384 (2,3) - alignment~x:388?~or~~~
00:51:718 (1,2) - 2 alignment 1(end)?~

[Normal]
00:59:866 - nc~
01:00:421 - remove nc~
02:03:384 - add note?~or move 02:03:570 (3) - to this time point?~
02:55:977 - .hmmmmmm~~~maybe u can move 02:56:162 (2) - ~to this point~~~~then~move 02:56:532 (3) - ~to 02:56:347 - ~this time point~~~~~~just suggestion~

[Hard]
00:31:718 (5,6,7,1,2) - just suggestion~00:31:718 (5,6) - alignment~then change 00:33:199 (1) - slider appearance~~~then......just look more beautiful~

01:48:569 - add note?
01:48:755 - delete this note?~
01:48:940 - add note?~
01:49:125 - delete this note?~
01:49:310 - add note?~.....................idk why this rhythm listen feel a little strange~~just suggestion~hmmmm~~maybe u can change like 01:56:718 - to 01:59:032 - ~this is good~
01:51:532 - to 01:53:199 - ^~
01:53:569 (1) - to 01:56:162 (6) - ^~

That all~~~if sun rambow done his map ~u can tell me~~~i will remod it~xD
Nice song~ and mapset~
Star~☆♪~
Good Luck~

Thank you A-tan ~
I will fix it after school. >w<

sucky mod lol..

em..

Red mods are retarded ones that don't really make sense even to myself so yeah....

General:

00:03:570 I think you should let this part be softer in volume, make it 40% perhaps, then add a new timing point at 00:15:421 to 50% and then finally at 00:27:273 turn it to 60%.

[Easy]
00:46:718 (2,3) - I think you should move these two upwards because it is visually gives more distance spacing.
00:51:718 (1) - This overlaps with 00:49:125 (4) in an awkward way
01:26:162 (7) - Maybe it shouldn't overlap with 6.

[Normal]
00:27:273 (1) - This should perhaps go somewhere so it doesn't overlap with the rest of the combo.
00:27:829 (2,3,4) - It's ok but maybe there's a better way to map this part, try transforming 2 and 3 into a slider?
00:42:829 (2) - This should perhaps not be that long, but perhaps make a slider from 00:42:829 to 00:43:199 and then the slider 3 from 00:43:384 to 00:43:755. From here on maybe you could let slider 3 repeat two times, or let it repeat only one time + the same circle on 00:44:495 (3) etc.
00:56:903 (3) - Perhaps flip this vertically so that it does not overlap with 00:54:681 (1). At the same time don't infringe the distance spacing...

on the whole there's a lot of minor overlapping. Occasional ones won't affect the map much, but too much of these make it look a bit awkward.
some are fine though...

[Hard]
01:29:125 (1) and 01:31:718 (1) - these two spinners don't appear to fit the music.
02:32:644 (7,8,9) - because of previous stacking the visual distance of these notes from 6 appear to be lesser. Try moving it down by one grid.
02:40:977 (3,4,5) - I prefer putting these three notes even further apart but that's up to you.
03:03:199 (4,5) - .....it's a trap. em..this is not good because 4 blocks 5 as 5 is short, making it visually as if 5 is a single circle on its own.
03:05:236 (1) - perhaps this spinner should be moved to 03:05:884 and at 03:05:236 you should add some notes to fit the vocal part.

Thank yhuu ~ >w<

Collab Insane requested by baka rainbow~
Coming soon