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Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa

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Topic Starter
Kanari
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on February-28-14 at 9:01:20 PM

Artist: Nico Nico Chorus
Title: SPiCa
Tags: Vocaloid2 Vocaloid Hatsune Miku Sun_Rainbow Sun Rainbow Douga Regou collab collaboration Toku-P Headphone-Tokyo NicoNico Wataame Mei Kuripurin Himawari Lino Noir Nico Nico Douga
BPM: 162
Filesize: 15296kb
Play Time: 03:10
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.38 stars, 148 notes)
  2. Hard (4.46 stars, 389 notes)
  3. Insane Collab (4.99 stars, 533 notes)
  4. Normal (2.75 stars, 227 notes)
Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa
Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hallowww ~

First map owo

Insane by Sun Rainbow & Regou

Storyboard by Sun Rainbow

Thank you to all the people who have helped me ~ >w<)
lovhin456
hello ~ i've got nothing better to do so might as well use my time to help someone with their map :D

general stuff;
- Very important! Your timing is way way off, I got
BPM: 162
Offset: 3570
The timing change implies:
* Snaping all notes so they fall on a tick and are not on the space ~
* Most probably remapping the whole song or adjusting some notes/sliders here and they follow the song

- Secondly, you need a bg, try this one ?
http://puu.sh/amlR

- You need to take the audio off from the video

- Add a preview point to all diffs! needs to be the same for all ~

- About the song's information:
* Source: Toku-P
* Tags: Take out Nico Nico Chorus since it is the artist already, add vocaloid2, vocaloid and hatsune miku

- Disable countdown and epilepsy warning

- It is kinda silly that you ask people to download the whole skin ... just include skin elements necessary for gameplay in the song's folder and full sub if you want to add skin elements to your map, people won't really like to download a skin just to play one map (because i don't think everybody will like to keep the skin after they play)
- Oh, and i downloaded the skin, is nice; some parts could be better but overall is nice!

I believe that is all for general stuff, can't really mod every diff since the timing is off and almost every note is off. When you finish fixing all this you can ask for a recheck.
Good luck! :oops:
Topic Starter
Kanari
D: I suck at doing this type of stuff ._.
And thanks for the help ;D
I did include the skin in the map but like I just put it there if other actually wanted to always use it.
And oh gawd D; That's a lot of work ._.
SinDemonDragon13
I can try to "repair" it a little bit for you if you want. :3
EDIT: You have a big amound of these large sliders:
You could repleace some of them with shorter sliders. For exemple, making few shorter sliders instead a long one. It will be really hard to mode it if you dont do that.
I will mod your map myself after. :)
Sorry for my bad english. D:
Topic Starter
Kanari
I guess that would help the map to be a bit more hard then easy .
Thankks~ ;D
SinDemonDragon13
Thank you for very much for the kudosu! :)

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

I guess that would help the map to be a bit more hard then easy.
Even if thats truth (and it is) I can fix that fast so dont worry about it.^^

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Thankks~ ;D
No problem. Welcome~ :D You can contact me anytime if you need help!
SinDemonDragon13
Sorry for making you wait so much >.<
I was pretty tired the last 3 days, so I wasnt on osu! and I almost got ill. :cry:
I just started to mod your map. I have already finished 2 of the 4 diffs.
I had to change many things to get a good timing, I hope you that you still like it. :D
-Added:
--new sliders and hitcircles
--more hitsounds
--kiai time
--changed the speed at some parts
The Normal diff was pretty good, the Easy one wasnt bad, too, there were many places where the timing was almost perfect.:)
Also, I added the kiai time and slowed down some parts of the song, it looks better that way. Like in the part of the song where Miku sings, for example, I slowed down the speed from 1.00 ,normal speed, to 0.50, at the part after the speed goes up to 0.75, and to 1.00 like in the beggining.
I will finish the other 2 diff the next 2 days. I had this day off so I had plenty of time to mod your map. :)


Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Neo's Relaxation].osu

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Moon's Lullaby].osu
Topic Starter
Kanari
Its fine ^^
Thannkyhuuu for the star :D
SinDemonDragon13
SinDemonDragon13
The last one! :D (need to add hitsounds and reneame it to something better, do you have an idea what name could I use for it?)

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [Topped Toph].osu

Download: Nico Nico Chorus - SPiCa (xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx) [SinDemonDragon's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannnkyhuu for all your hard work~ ;D
athiota33
Hi~
There all are suggestion,so you don't have to follow it.

[General]

SPOILER
Delete osb file
BG size must be 800x600 or 1024x768

[Crystal's Light]

SPOILER
Decrease the volume please. Its too loud.
I suggest you to use distance snap for spacing.
There are many part that has no hitsound,I suggest you to add some.
00:03:570~00:21:162 - Too many break time and i suggest to add some notes, 'cause i think its too plain.
00:03:570 (1) - Whistle instead of clap?
00:06:532 (1) - ^
00:09:495 (1) - ^
00:12:458 (1) - ^
00:15:051 (1) - ^
00:18:384 (1) - Add whistle?
00:22:829 (1,2) - ^
00:24:495~00:27:088 - Add some notes?
00:56:718 (x) - Add note and move (2) to 00:56:903
00:57:829 - Useless break time,delete it.
01:03:570 (1) - Stack it properly
01:03:570 (1) - Delete whistle in the slider rail?
01:14:681 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point.
01:26:532 (9) - New Combo? (if you accept this 01:28:755 (1) - Remove New Combo)

[Moon's Lullaby]

SPOILER
Use distance snap please.
Decrease the volume. Its too loud.
00:37:644 (1) - End it at 00:38:755
00:39:866 (2) - The slider is too long. I suggest you to short it and add some notes
00:47:088 (4) - Move to 00:47:088
00:50:514 (5) - Move to 00:50:421
00:50:699 (6) - Move to 00:50:607
00:50:792 (x) - Add note?
00:58:292 (7) - Move to 00:58:384 and add NC
00:59:403 (2) - Move to 00:59:495
01:02:829 (7) - Add NC
01:11:347 (1) - RNC?
01:13:569 (6) - Add repeat one more.
01:14:681 (7) - Add NC?
01:22:088 (5) - ^
01:22:644 (1) - RNC?
01:26:532 (3) - NC? and remove whistle in the slider
01:32:921 (8) - Move to 01:33:014
01:33:106 (9) - Move to 01:33:199
01:46:255 (1) - Move to 01:46:347
01:58:570 (1) - RNC?
01:59:032 (2) - Move to 01:59:125
02:10:792 - Useless breaktime
02:14:495 (6) - Move to 02:14:681
02:17:644 (5) - NC?
02:28:755 (7) - ^
02:39:125 (3) - ^
02:43:940 (7) - Shorten to 02:44:125
02:45:051 (8) - NC?
02:46:162 (1) - RNC?
02:56:903 (5) - ^

[Neo's Relaxation ]

SPOILER
Decrease the volume. Its too loud.
00:15:421 (8) - NC?
00:16:903 (1) - RNC?
00:37:644 (1) - ^
00:39:125 (3) - NC?
00:40:607 (5) - Slider too long for hard diff
01:14:681 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point.
01:20:977 (1) - Stack it properly
01:50:051 (2) - Make this slider only 3 repeat?
01:58:107 (6) - Move to 01:58:199
01:58:477 (7) - Move to 01:58:569
01:58:940 (8) - Delete note?
02:20:699 (7) - Move to 02:20:607
02:42:088 (1) - Shorten to 02:42:644
02:42:921 (2) - Move to 02:42:829
02:43:292 (1) - Move to 02:43:199
02:44:958 (1) - Move to 02:45:051
02:45:329 (1) - Move to 02:45:421
02:46:810 (1) - Move to 02:46:903
02:49:125 (7) - Shorten to 02:49:866
02:50:236 (8) - Lengthen to 02:50:607
02:53:199 (7) - Move to 02:53:384 and shorten to 02:53:755
02:53:940 - Useless breaktime
02:56:810 (2) - Move to 02:56:903
02:57:551 (3) - Move to 02:57:644
02:57:921 (4) - Move to 02:58:014
02:58:292 (5) - Move to 02:58:384
02:59:403 (6) - Move to 02:59:495
03:06:810 (1) - Move to 03:06:903
03:06:995 (1) - Move to 03:07:273
03:16:532 (1) - Lengthen to 03:18:847
03:19:125 (1) - Move to 03:19:218
03:28:014 (1) - Move to 03:27:829

[Topped Toph]

SPOILER
Decrease the volume. Its too loud.
00:37:366 (4) - Move to 00:37:366
00:37:551 (5) - Move to 00:37:644
01:13:569 - Useless breaktime
01:49:958 (6) - Move to 01:50:051
02:00:237 (9) - Stack it properly
02:00:421 (x) - Add slider and end it at 02:01:162
02:14:125 (2) - Move to 02:13:940
02:14:495 (3) - Move to 02:14:310
02:14:866 (4) - Move to 02:14:681
02:15:236 (5) - Move to 02:15:051
02:15:607 (1) - Move to 02:15:421
02:15:977 (2) - Move to 02:15:792
02:16:347 (3) - Move to 02:16:162
02:16:718 (4) - Move to 02:16:532
02:17:089 (5) - Move to 02:16:903
02:17:458 (1) - Move to 02:17:644
02:18:569 (2) - Move to 02:18:755
02:44:866 (1) - Move to 02:45:051
02:45:051 (T) - Unsnapped inherited timing point.
02:50:792 (7) - Move to 02:50:977
02:50:792 (x) - Add note
03:00:236 (5) - Shorten to 03:00:607
03:00:977 (x) - Add note?
03:01:162 (x) - ^
03:01:903 (4) - Delete note?
03:02:736 (1) - Move to 03:02:829
03:03:569 (x) - Add note?
03:03:755 - Useless breaktime
03:05:051 (1) - Move to 03:05:236
03:05:514 (1) - Move to 03:05:607
03:14:310 (1) - Lengthen to 03:17:644
03:16:162 (1,1) - Delete
03:26:440 (1) - Move to 03:26:532
03:26:624 - Useless breaktime
03:31:903 (1) - Delele note

[SinDemon's Flame]

SPOILER
I'm at my limit(?) :o
So I just check a little.. Sorry..><"
This diff has no BG and a bit overmapped.Ah! and decrease the volume too.

That's all :)
Love this song~
Good luck~
Star x3
Topic Starter
Kanari
You confused some of the difficulites like light with lullaby xD
But its okayy ;D and whoaa you didint need to do that much modding but thankkyhuu~ ;D
EDIT: updatedd~
Hitomi May
Hello! ^^
I love nico nico chorus very much

[General]
I think you map contains too much identical linear long sliders, it's borring, please give them an interesting shape.
USE DISTANS SNAP!

[Moon's Lullaby]

00:15:236 (2) - please, add. Without this circle sounds bad.
00:21:347 (1,1,2) - place these circles are not at the same point.
00:22:829 (1) - delete new combo.
00:24:310 - 00:27:273 - insert break time.
00:27:273 (1) - 1 gird ap, here
00:30:977 (1) - vove to another place, because it overlaps the slider.
00:36:162 (1) - place it here 00:42:644 (4) - make a slider such as in the screenshot. Symmetric and uniform.
00:46:347 (7) - add new combo.
00:47:088 (1) - delete new combo.
00:47:644 (2) - add new combo.
00:47:644 (2,3,4,5) - all this 1 gird up.
00:51:718 (1,1,2) - please, more systematic. Looks like random sliders.
00:56:903 (2) - maybe will be better delete this and add a long spinner.
01:01:162 (3) - too close to the previous objects.
01:02:829 (1) - ^
01:07:273 (4,5,6) - move yo another place.
01:08:014 (5) - new combo.
01:16:903 (4) - make here !not linear! slider, PLEASE!
01:20:607 (6) - ^
01:20:607 (6) - new combo.
01:26:532 (9) - new combo.

[Neo's Relaxation]

00:22:829 (3,4) - too far from previous objects.
00:23:940 (1) - too close to the previous object.
00:31:718 (6) - do like this and PLEASE do all sliders no curves
00:33:940 (2,3,4) - to close.
00:36:162 (5) - ^
00:46:995 (4) - sound bad, Maybe circles will be better, but I don't think so.
00:50:514 (5) - move to 00:50:421.
00:50:699 (6) - move to 00:50:607.
00:50:792 (7) - add.
01:01:903 (5) - move to 01:01:532.
01:02:088 (6) - move to 01:01:903.
01:02:088 (7) - add.
01:02:273 (8) - add.
01:07:829 (1,2) - too far.
01:14:681 (1) - ^
01:14:681 (1) - this curve!
01:17:644 (1) - ^
01:26:532 (1) - ^
01:31:718 (4) - ^
01:50:236 (3) - too close.
02:13:755 (5) - ^
02:17:644 (1) - move to another plase.
02:31:718 (1) - move to centre!
02:57:273 (3,4,1) - wrong spacing. Again.
02:58:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^

[Topped Toph]

00:18:940 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it's not very pretty.
00:25:792 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:32:458 (6) - new combo.
00:33:199 (1) - delete new combo.
00:33:940 (4) - new combo.
00:44:866 (6,7,8) - move to another plase. You make this 'pattern' in all map. Please, move it.
01:13:940 (9) - add.
01:15:051 (3,4,5) - omg.
01:25:977 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - change rhythm!
01:33:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - not ok. Strean in another plase.
02:07:273 (1,2) - can't be ranked.
02:46:162 (1) - ^

[SinDemon's Flame]

00:04:088 (2) - sound bad, not in rhythm.
00:04:977 (4) - ^
00:07:273 (2) - ^
00:09:495 (8) - ^
00:16:088 (1) - ^
00:16:829 (3) - ^
00:18:903 (1) - ^
00:45:421 (7) - too close.

I'm tired, and I am too lazy
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu^^
So my Light diff is okayy? o.o (Considering nothing was said about it)
I will try to fix as much of the sliders as I can.
Btw, you didint need to mod that much of the diffs but thannk you for doing so :D
I will update as soon as im done~

Edit: updated and fixed as much as I could. (I got lazy afterwards ._. )
Hitomi May
Okay, sorry, but I diidn't see this difficult Oo
it's strange, but I'm too lazy.. Sorry ==
And anyway Good Luck with this map)
lovhin456
hello ~ let's do a recheck now

song's info;
- tags >> remove the "," between words

general;
- try to keep bgs dimensions 1024x768 or 800x600, here i fixed the ones that needed it
http://puu.sh/bSlV
you'll have to do a full submit
- preview point is not the same in all diffs, keep them the same

* i can help you to improve your map taking little steps at a time if you want, i mean i can do more rechecks if you want or you can always ask me stuff you are unsure about (:

moon's lullaby;
- 00:05:051 >> add a note here, the break or unfilled space is unnecessary and also if you add a note here it helps to follow the music more
- 00:08:014 >> ^
- 00:10:977 >> ^
- 00:13:940 >> ^
- 00:15:051 (1,2) >> i think is better to do a slider from here to 00:15:421, much easier to hit
- 00:16:903 >> add a note here for reasons mentioned above
- 00:19:866 >> ^
- 00:25:792 >> a slider from here to 00:26:532 would be good
- 00:27:273 >> finish at the start, reverse arrow and end; also you could try to make a simple curvy slider like this

- 00:31:718 >> finish
- 00:33:199 >> ^
- 00:36:162 >> finish at start
- 00:39:125 >> add a note
- 00:39:495 >> start the slider here instead but end it at the same spot
- 00:49:125 >> many repeats, it may be hard for players so try making a slider from here to 00:50:051 and add a repeat
- 00:53:569 (1) >> end the slider here
- 00:53:940 >> add a note here
- 00:54:310 (3) >> move the slider here
- 00:58:384 >> add a note here and at 00:58:755 too
- 01:00:977 (3) >> many repeats and they don't fit music that well; try adding a note here and then add a slider from 01:01:347 to 01:02:458
- 01:02:829 >> remove whistle, add finish
- 01:08:014 >> new combo
- 01:08:755 >> remove whistle, add finish
- 01:14:681 >> ^ also you have 2 green sections here, remove one and snap the other so it is snapped to the tick
- 01:16:532 >> add a note
- 01:18:384 >> end the slider here, then add another slider from 01:18:755 to 01:19:495
- 01:28:384 >> add a note here
- 01:29:125 >> delete this note
- 01:29:866 >> add a note here
- 01:39:607 >> move the slider here and end it at 01:31:347; after you do this add a note at 01:30:236
- 01:31:718 (5,6) >> delete both, then add a slider from here to 01:34:125 and add a repeat to it
- 01:35:051 >> add a note here with finish
- 01:35:421 >> this spinner is way way too long, end it at 01:38:014

neo's relaxation;
- 00:03:570 ~ 00:14:681 >> is not good to add whistles on all the notes, you should leave one note without a hitsound between notes with hitsounds so it doesn't sound too full ):
- 00:16:162 >> remove a repeat
- 00:19:125 >> add a note
- 00:25:792 (2,3) >> move (2) here and (3) to 00:25:977
- 00:26:903 >> delete
- 00:27:273 >> move (7) here and add a finish
- 00:28:384 >> add a note
- 00:28:755 >> finish at the start and end
- 00:31:718 >> remove the claps and add finish at the start
- ok, i think this is going to take lots of time, so let's do it in parts ~ from now i'll just mod the placement of notes in the timeline, nothing else; if you want me to do another modpost with just hitsounds or new combos you just tell me (:
- 00:32:644 >> remove new combo
- 00:36:162 >> this doesn't sound good, try making a slider from here to 00:36:903
- 00:37:644 >> this spinner seems a little short for a diff like this so maybe delete it and try to map something else ?
- 00:39:485 >> add a note
- 00:44:495 (5) >> move it here
- 00:44:866 >> add a note here
- 00:47:088 >> move (4) here
- 00:50:421 >> delete this
- 00:50:977 >> add a note with finish
- 01:07:829 >> delete
- 01:17:458 >> add a note ?
- 01:22:458 >> ^
- 01:23:014 >> ^
- 01:24:681 >> end the spinner here
- 01:29:495 >> leave just one repeat and map something else on the space left
- 01:35:421 >> start the spinner here and end it at 01:38:014 with a finish
- 01:46:347 >> delete this and add a note at 01:47:273; i think is a better way to start after a break
- 01:59:125 >> just leave 2 repeats then map something in the space left
- 02:01:718 >> move (1) here
- 02:02:008 >> remove a repeat and map something else on the space left
- 02:05:051 ~ 02:11:718 >> maybe you shouldn't map this part or fill the breaks
- 02:13:755 >> remove all repeats, then add a note at 02:14:310
- 02:22:458 >> start the spinner here and end it at 02:23:940
- 02:34:310 >> end the slider here
- 02:47:829 >> maybe add a note
- 02:48:384 >> add a note
- 02:53:199 >> ^
- 02:55:051 >> end the spinner here
- 02:56:532 >> add a note here
- 03:05:421 >> ^
- 03:05:792 >> move the spinner here

crystal's light;
- go to timing > resnap all notes
- go to timing > recalculate all slider lengths
- 00:35:792 >> i don't think such a short spinner is a good idea
- 00:37:644 >> i think you can change this to something that fits the music more
- 00:43:199 >> move (3) here
- 00:50:236 >> doesn't fit, remove a repeat and extend the slider by a tick
- 00:50:607 >> move (5) here
- 00:50:977 >> add a note with finish
- 00:51:532 >> delete
- 01:02:088 >> move (5) here
- 01:03:384 >> end the slider here
- 01:03:569 >> move (3) here
- 01:04:125 >> move (4) here
- 01:04:310 >> move (5) here and end it at 01:05:051
- 01:05:421 >> move (6) here
- 01:14:681 >> i don't think that starting the kiai time with a spinner is good, try something else
- 01:22:088 >> move (4) here
- 01:50:051 >> doesn't fit, try something else
- 01:56:903 >> add a note
- 01:57:458 >> ^
- 02:06:069 >> map this break
- 02:08:107 >> ^
- 02:10:997 (4,5,6) >> move these one tick forward
- 02:13:569 >> end the slider here
- 02:13:755 (5,6) >> move this one tick to the left
- 02:14:310 >> move (7) here
- 02:15:977 (1,3) >> delete both
- 02:16:903 >> replace with just a note here
- 02:24:588 ~ 02:29:681 >> remap this part
- 02:44:310 >> end the spinner here
- 02:45:514 >> doens't fit, try something else
- 02:55:421 >> ^
- 03:01:718 >> end the slider here and map something in the space left
- 03:05:236 >> start the spinner here and end it at 03:06:903
- i think you should just end this diff at the same spot as neo's

topped toph;
- 00:27:273 >> end the slider here
- 00:37:458 (4,5) >> move one tick forward

sindemon's flame;
- you used 1/6 snap divisor but this song uses 1/4 so use 1/4 and resnap all notes, also recalculate slider lengths, you would also need to do some re-mapping after that

* i'm at my limit D: so sorry ): but if you want i can absolutely mod this again but try to get some mods before
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyhuu for all the help ;D
And ohmaiigawdd..... ._. I SUCK at mapping x_x

And its fine ^^
The both of you didint need to do that much work but thank you for doing it. ;3

Ill updates soon~
Stefan
Modding~~

[Moon's Lullaby]:
-) Slider Tick 1, because this fits more.
-) 00:54:310 (3) - Move it to 00:54:681. (You might decline it, but try it)
-) 01:03:569 (2) - This Slider is off. My english sucks, so this Picture should be more useful. http://puu.sh/c4Pp
-) 01:16:162 (3,4,5) - This looks better. http://puu.sh/c4RD
-) 01:28:384 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/c4Sx
-) 01:31:718 (2) - http://puu.sh/c4ST

Nazi Part
00:06:532 (1) - x:364 (But Idk why does the Circle move away?)
00:08:014 (2) - x:168
01:00:977 (3) - y:256
01:05:792 (3) - y:48
01:08:755 (2) - y:288
01:09:495 (3) - x:124
01:35:051 (3) - x:79

[Neo's Relaxation]:
-) Why I think that the Distance Snaping is wrong?
-) 00:03:570 - 00:27:273 - Lower the Volume to 50%.
-) 00:25:792 (2,3) - They are off. I know that they are set on purpose, but it doesn't fit. You can remove (3).
-) 00:37:273 (1) - Extend to 00:38:755.
-) 00:42:644 (4) - Add Cirlce and the Slider move to 00:42:829.
-) 00:48:014 - Add Circle with Finish.
-) 01:26:532 (1) - http://puu.sh/ves I took this from the Slider Thread. You should make this slider like this on the image.
-) 01:57:829 (8,9) - They touch the HP-Bar and this is unrankable.
-) 02:07:273 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The spacing is wrong. You can do this like that? http://puu.sh/cuDf But please ask someone with experience if this is recommened for a normal Diff.
-) 02:12:458 (2,3,4) - Add Finish.
-) 02:24:310 - 02:36:162 - Decrease the Volume to 50%
-) 02:45:051 - 03:05:792 - The claps sounds strange. Just in my Opinion.

Nazi Part
00:39:125 (1) - y:180
00:44:866 (7,1) - It should be not overlapped. Looks ugly.
02:36:162 (1,2) - Same as before.


They are so many things not at the same line. And yes, I'm a person what take care for Symmetric. You can if you want, pm me at In-Game that we could fix the unsymmetric Circles.
Topic Starter
Kanari
Thannkyou for modding ^^
Ill try to line everything up before you recheck everything~
Ill update and get to modding on your map very soon :D
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