1. Advanced (4.75 stars, 367 notes)
2. Beginner (3.21 stars, 192 notes)
3. Challenge (4.99 stars, 473 notes)
4. Pangko (4.94 stars, 763 notes)

LKs wrote:

star for Chinese music

Nymph wrote:

Nymph(70660701) 1:38:34
General:
Nymph(70660701) 1:38:38
BG is H

Nymph wrote:

微风我来接节操 req from 华语节操群

General:
啥都没发现


Beginner:
Beatmap design/suggestion
02:28:407 (X) - 考虑加个note在这？ 加了感觉难了点, 我把slider拉到这儿了

Hitsound
00:15:625 (7) - 哎去这个太震了…………音量太高 吓到我了 降到45%了
00:46:157 (1) - 这个音量也似乎略高了 听起来过于突出。 其实我觉得00:47:407 (3) - 这个才是应该加大音量突出的重点……我个人感觉加到75都不高. 1倒是觉得35就可以了. 1降低了, 3提高了
02:20:157 (1) - 这里感觉音量小了 我听的感觉是建议45起步递增 这个我觉得还好


Advanced:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:31:157 (1,2,3) - nazi：这种spacing 真的弄成间距一样好看点 23都往右1grid好看不少 k
00:36:157 (1) - ……这种shape的话 对称感觉更好 k
01:04:907 (4,5,6,7,8) - …………这绝对不是整齐的五边形 打的时候就能感觉到 :/ 好吧
01:17:157 (5) - 这slidershape……咋快趴下了………… 因为slider开头不跟前面01:15:157 (1)重合的话感觉很难看
02:20:657 (4) - 太往里了有点 拉出来一格？跟那些减小间距的连打一样就行
02:21:657 (7) - ^
02:22:657 (2) - 这个spacing就可以
02:23:657 (5) - 又缩回去了 这些都改了
02:40:407 (2) - 再拉大点间距？ 也行啊

Hitsound
00:15:625 (4) - 同beginner.. 不再提了 难道是我耳机太爆了么
00:46:157 (3,4) - 这俩还是高 囧 又跟beginner一样了 这次真不再提了 后面2分20秒还是同beginner
01:16:157 (3) - 我始终觉得MP3这里的鼓声早了 造成跟自己加的hitsound没融合起来 很别扭 手工弹奏始终是会抽的, 这里加红线又不太现实


Challenge:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:48:157 (1) - 一串到这间距突然变小了？1.04转0.78 是故意的么 因为前面那段是0.75xBPM
别的都还好 有几个地方有点坑 快睡着了 就先写这么多吧

atk1992 wrote:

Nymph wrote:

Nymph(70660701) 1:38:34
General:
Nymph(70660701) 1:38:38
BG is H

lol

hitsound总体感觉鼓声偏小 我是觉得还好, 先暂时这样吧, 如果还有人这么觉得的话我就提高点音量

[美女脱衣]
00:09:657 (2,3) - 和背景的强鼓冲突不和谐
00:11:657 (5,6) - ^ 那该这么改呢
01:32:657 (3) - 不如跟1和2重叠 1,2是两个重音所以感觉重叠比较好
01:35:407 (3) - 红线节奏微妙 微妙的既视感
02:02:407 add note 这个可以有
02:28:407 add note k
02:40:157 (9) - 拆成两个NOTE？ k

[美女入浴]
00:05:157 (4) - 强音效here 还是长白线的比较强, 这里提高音量前面的反而不明显了
00:25:157 (2) - ugly(nazi)，来回ctrl+R测试对不对称 好吧, 你们这群对称控
00:36:157 (1) - ^
00:46:782 (5,6,7) - 距离大胶布？ 萌大奶
00:49:782 (6,7,8,1,2) - 这边按我感觉是678间距拉大，然后1和2stack，当然现在这样也fine。下面几个同样的地方也一样 嗯, 我比较喜欢这样, 间距较大的连打对我来说很难HD lol
01:06:157 (9) - lol感觉这孩子说不上来的很可怜 意义不明
01:12:657 (4) - 1/6 here ，到01:13:407，音效渐强到渐弱 确实是1/6, 改了
01:17:157 (5) - CTRL +R k
01:17:907 (6) - 跟改过以后的5的尾巴水平对称 k
01:18:157 (7) - CTRL +R k
01:28:657 (8) - 长了 改了
02:19:907 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - nice节奏here your中english混合也nice
02:39:157 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 目前distance：0.97/1.22/1.18/1.4/1.42/1.36。建议1.0/1.0/1.2/1.2/1.4/1.4，然后排列改成比较明显的加速间距比如http://puu.sh/aIrD 建议很好, 不过我觉得我这样也不错




[美女推倒]
00:05:407 (7) - 这边听着奇怪，要么sliderslide静音要么取消折返用三连note 我觉得还好啊
00:14:125 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - combo建议1234123412341，排列遇1折返比如http://puu.sh/aIuu 改了
00:19:657 (6) - 拆成slider + note建议 k
00:23:657 (4) - ^ 这里我就不改了
00:40:657 (3) - 虽然背景有东西，但不建议跟 先暂时不改, 看看其他人这么说
01:44:407 add note here可以拉仇恨 我不是MT扛不住
02:12:407 (2) - 哇哦3.13 改小了点
02:13:907 (11,1) - 不跳一下吗 不跳都够坑了


无星可射

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2,56357,59157

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
BG微H 我沒意見可是有被噴的風險？ 又没露点又没胖次的:S
tag chinese instrumental 之類的？ 行
Break periods可以弄成一樣
Hard

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Insane

2,56357,59157

应该是一样的吧

[Timing]
前面還是off了點？第2段拿00:15:625出現早了~5-10 ms
試試(162, BPM120), (13637, BPM122)
如果行的話也套用去後面 这个timing目前我觉得算比较合适了, 只有几个单独地方off, 那个应该是人工弹奏的问题lol

[Challenge]
00:07:532 (8) - 音樂中(8)比(7)大聲 可以考慮這個note大聲一點 k
00:48:907 (3) - 右一格 k
00:54:157 (1,2) - 加finish？前面2次不加 然後後面2次加finish這樣 我觉得这里不加好点
01:35:157 (5) - 左一格 k
02:16:407 (1,2) - 把(2) stack在上一個(3)上面 然後ctrl+H找對稱地方放(1)？ 嗯...那样我觉得很难排列

[Advanced]
00:07:532 (5) - 同[Insane], 大聲一點 k
00:11:907 (1) - 左一格吧 就這個spacing不同 k
00:54:127 (1,2) - finish？ 这个我是觉得音乐里没有那么强的finish音的感觉
02:28:157 (1) - 上一格 k

[Beginner]
ok

就這樣 加油

Star Stream wrote:

hi~
from my queue

Beginner
02:26:157 ~ 02:28:157 - spinner? why here spinner?
02:38:157 (5) - NC? k

Advanced
00:46:157 (3) - NC? nah
00:46:782 (5,6,7) - > 00:46:657 ? It follows music here
01:28:157 (7) - NC? nah
02:27:157 (8) - add a return arrow and delete the circle(02:27:907 ) ? Keep that note for symmetry

Challenge
00:18:157 (3) - NC? nah

that's all.. ovo

Leorda wrote:

Hi Cheeze

Beginner
* Uhh, NSFW BG? This is art, serious

00:41:657 (5) - New combo? k
01:37:157 (3) - Add 1 repeating slider for following instruments? Hmm, then idk how to put later notes lol
02:26:407 (6) - You using too many repeating slider with short slider. This issue can makes beginners confusing about when the slider is end 大丈夫だ、問題ない！

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Advanced
00:46:157 (3) - New combo for new stanza? Like others? k
01:28:657 (8) - If you following the strings (I don't the instrument, lol) for this slider, the end slider should 01:29:157 Ends 01:29:407 makes 9 more easy to read, anywat I lowered volume here
02:19:407 (7,8,9) - Move 1 grid up for make parallel (Nazi) nah

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Challenge
* AR -1? 8 is fine

00:54:657 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I think the stream without slider is might be good, instead of stream with slider There are some 1/8 sliders, 1/8 notes are bad imo

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Really, Breeze's avatar must have a mustache

LunarSakuya wrote:

Hey, practicing my mod (saw this in modreq)

Beginner

00:00: 657 small spacing problem between [1] and [2] fixed
00:46:907 more space? to avoid confusion in rythmn it's usual spacing here
02:01:657 extend this slider to 02:01:907 Hmm, I feel that would make it hard
02:28:157 try to Add finish yes it has finish
02:28:407 Add finish k

Advanced
00:45:907 Add note k
01:15:157 Delete NC
01:16:157 Add NC:arrow: I feel it works well now
01:19:157 Delete NC
01:20:157 Add NC ^
02:39:157 [3,4,5,6] Continue with slider pattern? nice idea, changed

Challenge
02:26:407 zig-zag it? the linear pattern doesn't suit this song Hmm, I feel straight line better

Pretty pictures
I like the song and the map is really good xD Good luck Breeze!

GiNa wrote:

你好，那繪師的圖好像遊戲人物呢 ;o

[Beginner]
00:14:125 (4) – maybe NC here? Cuz the pattern changes k
00:54:157 (1,2,3) – this doesn’t fit imo, try this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/202639 Hmm, I feel it's fine now
01:28:157 (1) – 這個在調一下應該會更好看，用Grid Level4把第四個waypoint移到x:196 y:16 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/202640 k

[Advanced]
01:57:907 (1,2) – add finish 嗯, 我是感觉这里没有finish的感觉
這diff好難

[Challenge]
越難越mod不出神馬

以上

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello~ Here's my mod

[Advanced]
00:46:657 - Add a hitcircle here? Hmm, I feel that makes here kinda hard
00:47:157 - ^ ^
(It would look better like this imo, though I'm not so sure about this one:)
00:47:657 - ^
^
00:55:657 (6) - Remove this hitcircle. [Based on the music this sounds better for me] Hmm, seems odd if just here remove one beat

[Challenge]
00:29:157 - Add NC
00:30:157 - Remove NC k
00:54:657 - Add NC Add NC to 00:56:032 then
01:31:157 - Move this [pointed by the arrow in the pic] 2 grids upward. k

That's all~
Nice map~

1. 00:54:907 (2,3) - 突然来俩后半拍..? 在00:54:657开始 , 00:55:657结束 来个折返slider 如何
2. 01:19:157 (7,1) - 换下NC
3. 01:56:157 (1,2,3) - 排一直线有一点分不清slider尾和note..

1. 00:08:157 (7,1,2) - 像这种3个一起的 设置成一种颜色会不会清晰一点.. 后面几个也是这样

1. 02:18:907 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 由于之前的(4) 会形成一种o o o的节奏, 而且这里音乐也没有明显的3连音, 会显得比较奇怪。把(5)之后的换成1/2节奏 或者索性全部换成连打..?
2. diff名改成Challenging ? 搜到别的图用形容词形式的比较多.. 不过你之前的图也用的名词形式吧 ~

S h i o n wrote:

Beginner

1. 00:54:907 (2,3) - 突然来俩后半拍..? 在00:54:657开始 , 00:55:657结束 来个折返slider 如何 嗯, 其实这里是跟背景的鼓声...我先留着, 再有人说的话我就改吧
2. 01:19:157 (7,1) - 换下NC 貌似没太差别
3. 01:56:157 (1,2,3) - 排一直线有一点分不清slider尾和note.. 咦, 会吗, 其他人貌似还没这么说过的, 先留着看看

Advanced

1. 00:08:157 (7,1,2) - 像这种3个一起的 设置成一种颜色会不会清晰一点.. 后面几个也是这样 k

Challenge

1. 02:18:907 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 由于之前的(4) 会形成一种o o o的节奏, 而且这里音乐也没有明显的3连音, 会显得比较奇怪。把(5)之后的换成1/2节奏 或者索性全部换成连打..? 换了个1/2拍的
2. diff名改成Challenging ? 搜到别的图用形容词形式的比较多.. 不过你之前的图也用的名词形式吧 ~ 这个无所谓吧XD

谢谢

@Kiiwa ...pic mod hard to catch the exact time lol
Change color to brown then, thanks
And fixed NC issue and some other suggestions
thanks
good luck ~

Soul-less wrote:

从mod queue飘来的~

[General]
- [Beginner]和[Advance]有很多没用到的绿线，主要都是Challenge用的。没什么大碍，但能的话，清理一下？
- 那slider slide音效。。。hmm。
- 还是想说一下，[Beginner]的bg真的大丈夫？我本身是觉得没问题，但那感觉不像是100% SFW吧。 好吧, 既然很多人说了我就换个好了...

[Advance]
- 00:46:157 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这段。。hmm。 建议在 00:46:532 加一拍， 排列如以下建议？ 加了note了

拍子建议~(3)叠在(2)下面

- 01:28:657 (8) - 感觉是白线停比较好？与 01:12:657 (4) 类似。 k

[Challenge]
- 01:29:282 (10,11) - 参考[Advance] - 01:28:657 (8)的建议？ k


好久没听华乐了~

Deif wrote:

Hi o/

General:

hitcircle: I'm not a huge fan of coloured hitcircles. But in this case, with those combo colors, it works fine.

Beginner:

Star rate: 3.09: You know the easiest diff in the mapset has to be below 3 stars... Yup, I know, this diff is easy enough imo

02:26:407 (6) - Too many repetitions... End them in the 1st beat of the music (02:28:157), not the second one. If you've made that change, you should add a note at 02:28:407. Done some changes then

Advanced:

Looks good~

Challenge:

00:54:657 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - This pattern is kinda confusing the way it is. Try something like this:

SPOILER

But anyway, as Leorda said in a previous post, it'll be better if there aren't sliders in that stream... However, if you want to keep that 1/8 sliders, at least exchange (5,6) for a 1/4 slider (5). (8,9) too. okay, change to sliders

That's all!