1. Easy (1,16 stars, 65 notes)
2. Hard (4,69 stars, 101 notes)
3. Normal (2,78 stars, 95 notes)

kirinoimouto22 wrote:

Boa map Suzu aquí uma star pra tí

GiNa wrote:

Hi

My Mod

[General]
-BG must be 1024x768 (or 800x600, any 4:3 ratio), I resize for you this time, link: http://puu.sh/bIJR
-Spacing, you need to use distance snap (except jumps), DS is really helpful, even for those pro mappers.
-Enable countdown (song setup -> storyboarding)
-Turn off “Letterbox during breaks” (song setup -> storyboarding)
-Combo color 2 and 3 are nearly the same, really Orz.
-Try not to follow the vocal completely.
-No kiai? At least make some fountains. I can give you suggestion on fountains if you need it (just forum-PM me).

[Easy]
-Spacing (I guess you did use DS after the vocal started)
00:00:518 (1,2) – this kind of notes is quite hard for beginners, try a slider instead, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207510 (add some curves of course)
00:04:047 (2,3) – ^
Please check all those notes after by yourself
00:05:591 (1) – never use this kind of slider in Easy
There are many notes on the red tick, try to keep them on white tick.
For example: 00:07:576 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207507
00:18:826 (4) – http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207515
00:35:812 ~ 00:42:209 – useless green lines
00:53:017 (3) – try not to have more than 1 repeat
00:55:003 (1) – you don’t really need so many green lines that are close to each other on a spinner.
01:17:723 (1,2) – try not to have more than 1 repeat
01:27:870 ~ 01:31:841 – delete all those useless green lines
Overall this is an nice Easy.

[Normal]
00:00:518 (1,2,3,4) – put them on the center, which is x:256 y:192
00:04:047 (1,2,3,4) – x:256 y:120
00:05:591 (5) – New combo (NC)
00:07:356 (1) – too many repeats
00:08:679 (2,3,4,5,6) – they don’t fit at all, change them
00:40:885 (1) – try to reduce some of these sliders
00:53:017 (5) – NC
00:53:900 (1) – remove NC
01:05:812 (4) – NC
01:23:459 – why did you slow down? The slow down here doesn’t make sense to me, normal speed will do.
If you really want to slow down, 01:23:459 – make this line back to normal speed
01:24:341 – add a line that makes the speed to 0.5x
01:24:341 (5) – NC here (then use DS 1.5x to clear out the speed for players, in the pic above, I use 2.0x)
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207518
01:25:665 (1) – suddenly back the DS to 1.0x again.

[Hard]
00:07:576 (1,2,3,4) – the anti-jump here is too sudden, change pattern ?
00:08:679 (5,6,7,8,9,10) – they don’t fit
00:26:767 (4) – too close to the previous note
00:58:091 (1) – ^
01:31:841 (1) – remove NC
01:32:282 (2) – NC here
01:32:723 (1) – remove NC
01:33:606 (1) – ^
01:34:047 (2) – NC
01:34:929 (1) – remove NC
The NCs should look like this overall, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/207522.
This hard is not that bad.

GL.

suzutsukikanade wrote:

All fixed! About the Normalm i'll remap again...I did the update but when I went to see, everything I had worked was lost.

GiNa wrote:

suzutsukikanade wrote:

All fixed! About the Normalm i'll remap again...I did the update but when I went to see, everything I had worked was lost.

You don't really have to remap Normal again.
Your normal is actually fine imo.
Just keep working hard .

would you mind give my previous post a kd?

1. Song folder - remove two .osb file .
2. Timing - Slider Tick Rate - Only Normal diff is different. change 1 or all diff 2
3. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Enable countdown - remove the check in all diff. I think that unnecessary.

kosiga wrote:

hi ~ suzutsukikanade

from my queue ~

here my mod ~ ( I like this song )

[General]

1. Song folder - remove two .osb file .
2. Timing - Slider Tick Rate - Only Normal diff is different. change 1 or all diff 2
3. Song Setup - Storyboarding - Enable countdown - remove the check in all diff. I think that unnecessary.

[Easy]

SPOILER

1. 00:12:870 (1) - add finish ?
2. 00:15:738 - remove green line.
3. 00:16:841 - ^
4. 00:18:165 (3) - add finish ?
5. 00:18:826 - remove green line.
6. 00:19:267 - ^
7. 00:19:929 (5) - spacing too far. (1.92x) plz use DS 1.3x
8. 00:20:370 - remove green line.
9. 00:21:694 (1) - ^ I think that normalhitsound does not match. and add finish to start of the slider
10. 00:22:135 - remove green line
11. 00:25:223 (3) - same 00:21:694
12. 00:25:665 - remove green line
13. 00:26:547 - same 00:21:694
14. 00:26:767 - remove green line
15. 00:28:753 - remove green line
16. 00:49:929 (5) - add NC and 00:50:370 (1) - remove NC
17. 00:52:135 (2,3,4) - spacing too close. plz use DS 1.3x
18. 00:53:017 (3) - remove repeat. and add slider 00:53:900~00:54:341 is better
19. 00:59:635 - tick move. 01:00:407
20. 01:00:517 (3) - add finish
21. 01:03:165 - remove green line
22. 01:17:282 (4) - one grid right
23. 01:17:723 (1) - add finish to first repeat slider
24. 01:21:694 (4) - add NC
25. 01:22:135 - remove green line
26. 01:23:459 - ^
27. 01:24:782 (5) - spacing too close
28. 01:24:782 - remove green line
29. 01:25:334 (1) - spinner start 01:25:444 and the last sound is loud, gradually reduce the volume is better.
30. 01:25:665 - remove green line
31. 01:26:106 - ^
32. 01:26:547 - ^
33. 01:26:988 - ^
34. 01:27:429 - ^
35. 01:32:282 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
36. 01:33:165 - remove green line
37. 01:34:488 - ^
38. 01:34:929 - ^

[Normal]

SPOILER

1. HD,OD -1 ( I think that too high )
2. 00:12:870 (1) - add finish ?
3. 00:15:738 - remove green line
4. 00:16:841 (1) - remove green line. and add NC
5. 00:17:723 (1) - add finish to end of the slider ?
6. 00:18:826 - remove green line
7. 00:19:267 - ^
8. 00:20:370 - ^
9. 00:21:253 (1) - add finish instead of whistle to end of the slider
10. 00:21:694 - remove green line. normal whistle of here dose not match
11. 00:22:135 - remove green line
12. 00:24:341 (3) - add whistle
13. 00:24:782 (1) - add finish to end of the slider ?
14. 00:25:223 - remove green line.
15. 00:25:665 - ^
16. 00:26:547 - ^
17. 00:26:767 - ^
18. 00:28:753 - ^
19. 00:46:400 (6) - add NC and 00:47:723 (1) - remove NC
20. 00:49:929 (4) - add NC
21. 00:55:444 (5) - ^
22. 00:56:988 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
23. 00:58:312 (1) - spacing too close (0.86x)
24. 00:58:312 (1) - remove NC and 00:59:635 (3) - add NC and 01:00:959 (1) - remove NC
25. 01:11:106 (5) - add NC and 01:11:767 (1) - remove NC
26. 01:14:635 (6) - add NC and add finish to start of the slider
27. 01:23:900 (4) - remove note ?
28. 01:25:223 (1) - same as Easy diff. spinner start 01:25:444. and 01:25:223 - add note. and spinner is gradually reduce the volume is better.
29. 01:25:665 - remove green line
30. 01:26:106 - ^
31. 01:26:547 - ^
32. 01:26:988 - ^

[Hard]

SPOILER

1. 00:12:870 (1) - add finish ?
2. 00:15:738 - remove green line.
3. 00:16:841 - ^
4. 00:18:165 (3) - add finish ?
5. 00:18:826 (1) - remove NC
6. 00:18:826 - remove green line.
7. 00:19:267 - ^
8. 00:20:370 - ^
9. 00:21:694 - remove green line. I think normal whistle of here dose not match. and add finish ?
10. 00:22:135 - remove green line.
11. 00:22:356 (1) - remove NC
12. 00:23:459 (1) - ^ and 00:23:900 (2) - add NC
13. 00:25:223 - remove green line.I think normal whistle of here dose not match. and add finish ?
14. 00:25:665 - remove green line.
15. 00:26:547 - ^
16. 00:26:767 - ^
17. 00:28:753 - ^
18. 00:36:253 - green line: change hitsound S ?
19. 00:37:576 (3) - add whistle ?
20. 00:38:459 (6) - ^
21. 00:38:900 - remove green line.
22. 00:39:341 - remove green line.
23. 00:45:959 (5) - grid move. x344,y192 ( plz follow after )
24. 00:55:003 (1) - remove NC and 00:56:106 (3) - add NC
25. 00:56:988 - KIAI TIME start here
26. 00:57:098 - KIAI TIME end here
27. 00:58:091 (1) - remove NC
28. 00:59:635 (5) - add NC
29. 01:03:165 (5) - ^
30. 01:09:341 (5) - ^ and use more beautiful slider. use ↓ ? ( if use plz follow after )
    

    376,208,69341,2,0,B|376:128|376:128|428:68|428:68|480:128|480:128|480:208,1,320,0|2

31. 01:13:753 (5) - add NC
32. 01:18:165 (4) - add NC and 01:18:385 (1) - remove NC and 01:19:267 (1) - remove NC.
33. 01:20:150 (5,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm & NC http://puu.sh/cEQX
34. 01:21:694 (5) - add NC and 01:22:135 (1) - remove NC
35. 01:24:341 (1) - remove NC
36. 01:28:753 (5) - add NC and 01:29:194 (1) - remove NC
37. 01:31:841 (4) - one grid up
38. 01:32:282 (5) - add NC and 01:32:723 (1) - remove NC
39. 01:35:370 - green line. volume 10%? ( same as other diff )

sorry.. very very long mod

mapset is good :3

Good luck ~

L_P wrote:

hi, from mod que

general : DONT end like this....this doesnt sound like it is ending....
there are no unrankable stuffs in this map, that is a good sign...however it is not that good to get a bubble easily...

only some suggestion...try to make some pattern, not only for good visual effect but also rhythmic pattern, try to keep the jump and spacing consistent,(like where it IS going to jump , where should the slider start etc) and repeat some rhythm. Repeating rhythm doesnt mean that it is boring, i do think it is better than random changing spacing/random placed sliders and notes etc...

as you kept your rhythm and pattern, try to make some awesome spacing change when it is needed, i actually like the front part, the antijump and sudden spacing change etc, but it didnt get so good when it came to the middle part

3rd is about mapping's step，as for beginner, i suggest you listen to the music, and imagine the path, when to jump, when to make a hold effect (slider) when to make a stream..etc and tap your finger , they help you to turn inspiration into a good map...

dont kudos this if you dont want or you think this doesnt help you at all.

edit : mapping is a big ass hole. if you find you stuck inside, Gambateh

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue
Add Character's name into tag Fixed
[easy]
00:00:518 (1) - whistle at the begining Fixed
00:45:959 (3) - NC ^
01:00:517 (3) - NC ^

[normal]
00:22:797 (1) - the voice of slider body sounds noisy Ok fixed
01:27:429 (1) - too close to spinner Hmmmmmm...fixed.

[hard]
01:18:385 (2) - don't like this Ok, i remap this part, but the way I think best.

mp3 file shounds strange. Really? I think the mp3 is good.

SakiK wrote:

hi~ from modque

[General]

You should set Audio Lead-in 2000 or 2500 ,If ignore, fix 1000(now 982 Fixed
deleat .osb files ^

all diff, 00:56:988 (x) - add a clap 2nd and 4th beat?(now solitary sound）No
[Easy]

01:32:282 (1,2,3) - really need here? Fixed

[Normal]

00:00:518 (1,2,3,4 )- a little boring,you shouldn't stack Fixed
00:04:047 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:57:650 (2) - 1 grid left ^
01:35:812 - add circle? ^

[Hard]

00:07:356 (4) - NC Fixed
00:07:576 (1) - Rm NC Fixed
00:38:900 (7) - NC? Fixed
00:45:959 (5) - NC Fixed
00:46:400 (1) - RmNC Fixed
01:24:341 (9) - NC Fixed
01:28:753 (1) - RmNC Fixed


cute song~>< fight!

1. um... OD 8 for Hard is too hard imo, consider OD -1 or -2?
2. 00:19:047 (4) - 1/2 beat later?
3. 00:49:047 (5,6) - jumping to the same spot players may feel bored, how about this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot147-5.jpg
4. 01:09:341 (5) - move middle point to (432,68)
5. 01:15:076 (1) - middle point 2 grids down
6. 01:32:723 (2) - move endpoint to (280,184)

1. 00:01:179 (2) - 1 grid left ? = =
2. 00:59:635 (1) - spacing larger
3. 01:15:959 (4) - this is kind of unrankable, reverse arrow is covered by hitburst
4. 01:29:194 (3) - spacing larger

1. 00:53:900 (5) - move up 2 grids, some space with (4)
2. 01:00:959 (2) - move third point to (264,160)
3. 01:17:723 (1) - move to (240,168)
4. 01:19:488 (2) - move to (344,88)

Combo1 : 172,111,171
Combo2 : 166,145,202
Combo3 : 121,49,51

Wiinter wrote:

Vou moddar em pt mesmo pq tu é br ._. \o/

General
essas combo colours não ficaram muito boas bom esse bg D: eu sugiro essas aqui:

Combo1 : 172,111,171
Combo2 : 166,145,202
Combo3 : 121,49,51

(caso você não saiba como usar, é só abrir a .osu file e substituir as cores na parte [Colours] por essas aí Ok, fixado.
ee considerando que a música é relativamente curta, o primeiro break tá comprido demais Dx sugiro que vc mapeie ele. Ahh não não, acho q assim ta bom. Sei lá né...mas por enquanto vou deixar assim.

[Easy]
00:08:900 (2) - use distance snap D: Ok
00:18:165 (3) - new combo? Tá bem.
00:18:826 (4) - esse overlap não ficou muito bom imo >< coloca ela um pouco mais pra cima, tipo assim http://puu.sh/e2UH Hum...tá bom, ok fixado.
00:21:694 (1) - use distance snap
00:25:223 (3) - ^
00:26:547 (4) - ^
uh.. cara, tem muito erro de spacing aqui >< é necessário manter o mesmo spacing durante todo o mapa, principalmente nas diffs mais fáceis do mapa. É, num soube explorar muito o spacing
00:53:900 (5) - *nazi* ficaria melhor tipo.. 2 grids mais pra cima Ok, tava muito perto mesmo.
00:54:782 (6) - seleciona grid 4 (View > Grid level > 4) e stackeia ela com o começo do 00:53:017 (4) Feito!
00:57:429 - essa timeline é desnecessária.. tu pode usar a timing section em 00:57:098 tanto pra terminar o kiai quanto pra mudar os hitsounds Nussa q burra q eu fui >< Fixado.
01:04:488 - ^ Fixado.
01:11:547 - ^ ^
01:13:753 (2) - new combo Não concordando muuuito com isso mas...fixado.

[Normal]
00:59:635 (1) - use distance snap Fixado.
01:33:165 (2) - deixa os hitsounds aqui normais.. fica estranho assim x-x Hai Hai fixado.

[Hard]
a AR tá alta demais pra música x-x 6 ou 7 fica melhor Hm...7 então...
então.. na minha opinião, em algumas partes tu colocou jumps e tals, mas em outras a dificuldade tá mais pra um normal do que pra um hard D: tipo nesse combo aqui, por exemplo 00:43:312 (1,2,3,4,5). eu sei que a música é calma e ficar overmappeando também não rola, mas usar sliders compridos + notas 1/2 em várias partes da musica fica foda numa diff hard ne >< então dá uma olhadinha nessas partes pra ver se não tem outra coisa que tu possa fazer pra deixar a diff com uma cara mais.. hard xD ee mais uma coisa.. isso aqui é mais uma sugestãozinha.. não faça o spacing muito linear (tipo o que tem em 00:56:106 (1,2,3,4,5)).. fica chatinho, sabe? procure ser mais criativa com o spacing.. tu tem uma tela inteira pra trabalhar dá uma olhadinha em mapas rankeados que vc gosta pra ter uma noção, se ajudar. ^^ Tá ok, vou ver o que posso fazer aquí, apesar de achar que desse jeito está bom.

enfim.. é basicamente isso :v se precisar de ajuda com alguma outra coisa, só me chamar Tá ok então

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from my queue


[Hard]

1. um... OD 8 for Hard is too hard imo, consider OD -1 or -2? Fixed this in Wiinter mod.
2. 00:19:047 (4) - 1/2 beat later? ?
3. 00:49:047 (5,6) - jumping to the same spot players may feel bored, how about this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot147-5.jpg Ok.
4. 01:09:341 (5) - move middle point to (432,68) Fixed.
5. 01:15:076 (1) - middle point 2 grids down Fixed.
6. 01:32:723 (2) - move endpoint to (280,184)

280,144 is better.

[Normal]

1. 00:01:179 (2) - 1 grid left ? = = Fixed
2. 00:59:635 (1) - spacing larger ^
3. 01:15:959 (4) - this is kind of unrankable, reverse arrow is covered by hitburst Then I remove one reverse arrow?
4. 01:29:194 (3) - spacing larger

Made better i think.

[Easy]

1. 00:53:900 (5) - move up 2 grids, some space with (4) Fixed.
2. 01:00:959 (2) - move third point to (264,160) Fixed
3. 01:17:723 (1) - move to (240,168) Fixed
4. 01:19:488 (2) - move to (344,88)

Fixed

btw looks like you forgot to give SaKiK kds ^^ Ah! I forgot >< Give kds to her now

Good luck~

Jacob wrote:

From my queue

[General]
Delete .osb file, unused And I think that it deleted this O.o
01:04:047 - Remove this kiai for all difficulties. For now I'll keep it.

[Easy]
00:45:959 - Remove new combo Fixed.

[Normal]
00:46:400 - Whistle, but not on end of slider No, i think sounds bad.

[Hard]
00:26:767 - Whistle Fixed

Really good map. Thx!

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this map because of ur request

General:
i lol'd at the mp3 name Yeah i know...this map before was motteke sailor fuku. I can't change mp3 name ><
everything looks good though

Easy:
00:15:297(1) - can u put this near the middle?
00:16:400(2) - Ctrl+J for an easier path? Ok.
00:44:194(2) - Like This Okay, just do not know if I could do the same as the picture.
00:55:003(1) - beginners wont hav enough time to recover. so i suggest that u end the spinner at 00:56:106 and add a circle at 00:56:988 Good ideia.

Normal:
00:01:620 - remove the break? Ok
other than that everything looks good

Hard:
00:24:562(4) - align it to (3) so that itd look like a parallelogram Hm ... hm .... it is, is okay, I think I did everything right.

this is the best i can do. Star and GL

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haiitharr~
You requested in my queue~

[Easy]
-Well mapped~

[Normal]
-00:16:841 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed
-00:42:209 (x) - Add note? Fixed
-00:42:429 (x) - Add slider and end it at 00:42:650? Fixed
-00:42:870 (1) - Remove new combo (if you do that^) Fixed
-01:15:959 (4) - Reverse once more. Fixed

[Hard]
-Circle size +1? Nope.
-00:21:032 (x) - Add note. Ok, fits the music.

Nice song~
Star~ Thanks!

Zapy wrote:

Hi from mod queue

General

About that kiai time... I'd make it so that it lasts up to 01:25:223. The fountains are placed well though Do not quite understand what you said (I'm little bad in english ><), but i'll don't remove fountains.

Hard

Well the diff is pretty fine in general, only the patterns caught my eye this time so I'll provide you some suggestions

00:25:665 (1,2,3,4) - Like this? http://puu.sh/ezdR Hm...Ok, fine for me.
00:40:223 (2) - Could use a whistle Ok.
00:40:885 (1) - The beginning of the slider, add whistle Ok, but added in the end too.
00:41:767 (2) - And this as well Hai Hai added whistle here too.
00:40:223 (2,3,4,1,2) - Consider changing the pattern to this? http://puu.sh/ez8C It looks a bit better with those 45 degree angles Looks better now?
00:44:856 (4) - This could use a new combo since it follows a different sound in background. It also helps reading. Eh? Can't understand...
00:45:297 (3) - Perhaps move the note like this to maintain distance snap? http://puu.sh/ez9L I have changed this pattern
00:52:356 (4) - Move 1 grid left and 1 down? Looks better like that http://puu.sh/ezaY Ok.
01:34:929 (3) - New combo and add a whistle? Ok.

Normal

00:19:929 (5) - Use whistle on the start and end? No.
00:42:870 (3) - Whistle Ok
00:46:400 (1) - Whistle ^
00:49:929 (1) - Whistle No.
00:53:017 (1) - Whistle on the end Ok

Easy

00:04:047 (1) - Add whistle to the end? Added in end and in beginning.
00:05:591 (2) - Add whistle?

Okay well this might seem a bit like a nazi mod but I couldn't find much else.

Good luck getting it ranked though

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[Hard]
0.15.297(1) - delete 3rd waypoint No.
1.20.150(8) - spacing (why little jumping?) This fine now? retired little jumping.

[Normal]
0.44.415(4) - spacing OK.
1.19.709(5) - ^ ^
1.29.194(3) - ^ ^

[Easy]
0.18.165(3) - spacing No.
0.18.826(4) - ^ ^
0.19.929(5) - ^ ^
0.26.547(4) - ^ Used DSnap.

nice~

1. No problem I can find, nice.

1. 00:07:576 (1) - add whistle on middle? sounds better for me
2. 00:08:900 (2) - Also add a whistle on white line , sounds better.
3. 00:11:106 (1) - You should add some hitsound here? i suggest to add whistle here too.
4. Ok. Not bad.

1. 00:05:591 (3) - Ah , I think you can remove new combo here since I think it's useless to add a nc here.
2. And also , you can add whistle on this diff like Easy.(As i said before)
3. No problem.

1. 00:24:562 (4) - it looks ugly for me since the jump isn't really good , maybe you can do this?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. And sure, if you agree with me, you should change the spacing of 00:24:782 (1) - too.
3. 01:20:150 (8) - It's not really a good idea .. try to follow the spacing with 01:19:929 (7) - or even add a new combo here?
   however, I don't suggest you do this here.
4. 01:24:341 (1) - Remove the NC here?
5. Ok , that's all.

KanaRin wrote:

As per your request.
Oh Aoi Yuuki <3 sweet song
btw some modding info

Color Help:
Red -> You must change it.
Blue -> Change it as well.
Black -> Suggestion only.

Let's go.

[General]

1. No problem I can find, nice.

[Easy]

1. 00:07:576 (1) - add whistle on middle? sounds better for me No, i think sounds bad.
2. 00:08:900 (2) - Also add a whistle on white line , sounds better. Fixed.
3. 00:11:106 (1) - You should add some hitsound here? i suggest to add whistle here too. Fixed too.
4. Ok. Not bad.

[Normal]

1. 00:05:591 (3) - Ah , I think you can remove new combo here since I think it's useless to add a nc here. It already has a NC.
2. And also , you can add whistle on this diff like Easy.(As i said before) Ok added.
3. No problem.

[Hard]

1. 00:24:562 (4) - it looks ugly for me since the jump isn't really good , maybe you can do this?
   
   SPOILER

   
2. And sure, if you agree with me, you should change the spacing of 00:24:782 (1) - too. Fixed.
3. 01:20:150 (8) - It's not really a good idea .. try to follow the spacing with 01:19:929 (7) - or even add a new combo here?
   however, I don't suggest you do this here. Now is fine, i think?
4. 01:24:341 (1) - Remove the NC here? Ok fine.
5. Ok , that's all.

That's it.
Good luck >w</

Thy mod is here. Hope it helps.

GENERAL

1. peppy wrote:

   Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely.

EASY

1. Approach Rate +1
   
   
2. 00:26:767 - This spinner should start at 00:26:988.
   
   
3. 00:45:959 - This slider doesn't go with the song well. Try this kind of pattern:
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:55:003 - This spinner is ends too late for an Easy Diff. Try to replace this spinner by 1/1 slider instead.
   
   
5. 01:00:959 - Ugly slider. Move the 2nd point of the slider at x:380 y:136. If you do, it will look like this:
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:25:444 - This slider should end at 01:28:753. Also, change volume to 5% 01:28:753.

NORMAL

1. 00:12:870 - This spinner should end at 00:14:856.
   
   
2. 00:26:767 - This spinner should start at 00:26:988.
   
   
3. 01:12:870 - Move the second point of this slider one grid down.
   
   
4. 01:19:929 - This slider is already at the corner. Try to avoid this.
   
   
5. 01:26:988 - I think increasing the hit sound volume at the spinner's end is not bad. Maybe add 10-20%.
   
   
6. I'm not quite sure about the ending. I prefer you use a spinner instead.

HARD

1. 00:24:782 - (1,2,3) Maintain the consistency of the spacing of the previous slider. This improves better gameplay.
   
   
2. 00:46:400 - Move the 3rd point of the slider at x:24 y:208.
   
   
3. Overall Difficulty -2 / -1
   
   
4. I'm not quite sure about the ending. I prefer you use a spinner instead.

Nice mapset. Hope this gets ranked soon! 8D

Philippines wrote:

Thy mod is here. Hope it helps.

GENERAL

1. peppy wrote:

   Do not use kiai time just for fountains unless you are doing this extremely rarely.

I think this is fine.

EASY

1. Approach Rate +1 No.
   
   
2. 00:26:767 - This spinner should start at 00:26:988. No No.
   
   
3. 00:45:959 - This slider doesn't go with the song well. Try this kind of pattern:
   SPOILER

   
   Ok, plays fine.
   
4. 00:55:003 - This spinner is ends too late for an Easy Diff. Try to replace this spinner by 1/1 slider instead. No.
   
   
5. 01:00:959 - Ugly slider. Move the 2nd point of the slider at x:380 y:136. If you do, it will look like this:
   SPOILER

   
   Ok.
   
6. 01:25:444 - This slider should end at 01:28:753. Also, change volume to 5% 01:28:753.

NORMAL

1. 00:12:870 - This spinner should end at 00:14:856. No.
   
   
2. 00:26:767 - This spinner should start at 00:26:988. No.
   
   
3. 01:12:870 - Move the second point of this slider one grid down. Ok.
   
   
4. 01:19:929 - This slider is already at the corner. Try to avoid this. Really? This is fine for me.
   
   
5. 01:26:988 - I think increasing the hit sound volume at the spinner's end is not bad. Maybe add 10-20%. No.
   
   
6. I'm not quite sure about the ending. I prefer you use a spinner instead.

Why? Is fine this.

HARD

1. 00:24:782 - (1,2,3) Maintain the consistency of the spacing of the previous slider. This improves better gameplay. No.
   
   
2. 00:46:400 - Move the 3rd point of the slider at x:24 y:208. No.
   
   
3. Overall Difficulty -2 / -1 Fixed -1.
   
   
4. I'm not quite sure about the ending. I prefer you use a spinner instead.

[/list]No, this is fine.

Nice mapset. Hope this gets ranked soon! 8D

winber1 wrote:

asdfasdfgahjgfasdk

sorry. nine days late D: aushash no problem ^^


Hard

00:05:591 (1,2,3) - i'd rather just stack this, so that it's more clear that these are 1/4 tick notes. The notes at 00:07:356 (1,2,3) are in a different phrase and i feel it makes a lot more sense to change the spacing here rather then the previous measure Hm...now I see, good idea! I hope I've done right.
00:08:900 (7) - new combo? No.
00:09:120 (8) - don't overlap with combo 1? looks a little weird imo. Ok.
00:12:429 (3,4) - this looks better imo since it's symmetric about hte y-axis http://puu.sh/fgAD I have done it otherwise.
00:16:841 (4,5) - something like this works bettter imo. http://puu.sh/fgB9 This is because you set a rhythm in the previous measure (00:15:297 (1,2,3) - ) and so I am expecting the same rhythm to happen here, except it doesn't, and it feels awkward. No.
00:48:165 (6) - you can consider adding a new combo here No.
00:55:003 (4,5) - a little awkward. I would follow the vocals here http://puu.sh/fgCD
01:01:620 - add note to follow previous pattern at 00:57:429 (1,2,3) - ? Ok.
01:05:150 - ^? ^
01:12:209 - ^? ^
01:15:738 - ^? ^
01:23:459 (8) - new combo Ok
01:23:459 (1,2) - it's a little off from the vocals. THis would be better imo http://puu.sh/fgE8 Ok.

Normal

00:44:415 (4,5) - spacing Used Dsnap.
00:45:959 (6,7,1) - these stacks can be a little confusing to beginners. Deleted 7.
00:49:709 (4) - i'd unstack this http://puu.sh/fgFj Unstacked.
01:24:341 (1) - follows vocals better if it started 1/2 tick earlier Yeah, feels better. Fixed.

--you have quite a few stacks of varying rhythm (1/2 or 1/1 tick spaced), and well it could potentially be a little confusing. It's not a big deal, but I would still just take a look at them, because if the stacks are not necessary, then it may be better to just unstack them. No no i want to stay this.


Easy

00:11:106 (1) - i like it better if this slider ended at 00:12:650, but that's just me No no feels weird.
00:18:165 (3,4) - you may consider turning this into one repeat slider so that it's easier to read. Beginners can't read spacing very well so even if it's spaced correctly it's still gonna be hard to read if you keep changingn the rhythm :/ Fixed
00:19:929 (5,1,2,3) - keep the same spacing This no longer exists.
00:53:017 (4,5) - this is a small spacing error but still it just looks neater if it was spaced correctly ? I see no problem with spacing here.
00:55:003 (1) - this spinner is too short for an Easy and the next note comes too soon. Either you get rid of the spinner or you delete a few notes after the spinner so that the player has time to recover. Obviously i would just delete the spinner cuz it sounds better that way (and then add a note in replacement of the spinner) Deleted spinner and add a note in replacement of the spinner.
01:10:223 (4) - new combo? Ok
01:11:547 (1) - remove combo? Ok.

Good luck ~~

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from queue.

[General]
- Work on your symmetery.
- Make use of the Edit menu on the osu editor.
- Work on your spacing.
-Use break time where appropriate.

[Easy] Decent (See General)

[Normal] Decent (See General)

[Hard]
00:00:518 (1,2,3,4) - Move 1 grid up. Insert a break time after this.
00:04:047 (1,2,3,4) - Move 3 grids left.
00:05:591 (1,2,3) - Move 1 grid right.

This map is definely new mapper quality.

Neptunus wrote:

Hey~
General:
Is the Mp3 of this song technical modified or it was originally made fading out in the end? if there be a verson that last to the end it could be better, well, merely suggestion. Technical modified. but i think the mp3 is fine.

Easy:
to make a better diff spread, make this diff Hp Drain, approaching rate and overall diffculty +1 Ok fixed.
00:20:812 (1) - cancel the newcombo here(like what you did here 00:24:341 (2) - ) because pattern in Easy should be clear Fixed

Normal:
fine

Hard:
00:55:665 (5,6,1) - antijump, plz spacing closer then the jump looks more professional Ok
01:04:488 (1,2,3) - keep consitent spacing Ok


NICE SONG! no really errors, good luck on ranking~

1. Audio Lead-in: 2s ... i suppose that's enough~
2. add a slient sliderslide.wav?

1. actually with slidertickrate 2, some short sliders looked weird...
2. 00:12:870 (1) - i suppose the volumn 30% for finish is better
3. 00:54:782 (6,7) - stack?
4. 00:57:098 - volumn increase to 65% from here?

1. 00:14:635 - same suggestion to Easy
2. 01:08:017 (2) - reduce 1 repeat and add a note at 01:09:341 - ?
3. 01:15:297 - add a note here? and no stack of 01:15:517 (2,3) - ?
   
   

1. HP-1...it drains too fast in first section, or add more combos..
2. 00:14:635 - same as other diffs
3. 00:20:812 (3) - remove it?
4. 00:23:238 - add a note here?
5. 00:39:341 (3) - move to 176:180

wmfchris wrote:

Audio lead-in like 1500/2000 would be enough. Fixed to 1500.

[Hard]
Timing and settings
Duplicated timeline: 35812, 56106 Ok.
Hitsound and arrangement
00:05:812 (3) - a whistle may fit the music here Fixed.
00:08:900 (7,8) - how about placing (7,8) symmetrical to (5,6)?, i.e., (7) (200,56), (8) (128,80) Fixed.
00:18:826 (5) - NC here instead of the coming (1), though this slider sounds a bit odd concerning the misfit with vocals (at the middle of slider) NC added in (5) and removed NC in (1).
00:26:106 (2,3,4) - avoid overlapping with neighbouring notes, try

SPOILER

Ok.
00:39:341 (3) - right 1 grid to fit the spacing Ok
00:48:606 (7,9) - just a small thought to add whistle there, echo with previous (4) No.
00:55:665 (5,6,1) - uneven spacing Oh, now i see. Fixed.
01:02:723 (6) - down 1 grid so (4,5,6) forms a straight line Fixed
01:16:841 (1,2,3) - I prefer putting them in triangle rather than (1,2) on the same position <_< Formed a triangle here
01:19:929 (7,8) - 1beat slider then a single note may fit the vocal Made something better
01:22:135 (5,1) - stack properly Ok

[Normal]
00:01:179 (2) - why whistles are gone...Added whistle here.
00:07:356 (1) - whistle at the end Ok desu~
00:10:444 (6,1) - left a bit so that it fits 1.0 spacing Well, fixed.
00:10:885 (1) - whistle at the end Fixed.
00:11:988 (2) - whistle Fixed.
00:25:665 (2,4) - place over (96,112) No.
01:34:488 - make it graduually softer since here

sounds like some hitsound is missing, but sounds fine in later part

[Easy]
AR+1 maybe Fixed
Two issues:
1) Try to avoid notes that are 1/2 beat apart, this is a 1star diff so I think better make in easy in every aspect.
2) Try to make NC every sentence as the current combo sounds too long
No fix in these two for now. Like this 1/2 beats.
No major problem there

Quite good mapset for a slow song and get some potential there, maybe we can hv a try on this map... find more mods and ask me to recheck this a bit later.

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

Easy
* This overall spacing are inconsistent. Some pattern using distance spacing 1,0x but others are over 1,0x. Use 1,0x distance spacing and fix all spacing Fixed some spacings...

00:45:959 (3) - New combo for preventing of long combo Ok desu~
00:53:017 (4) - ^ ^
00:54:782 (6,7) - This 1/2 clicks makes beginners confusing. Replace this two into a slider Fixed.


Normal
00:21:032 (x) - Add note here for following vocal? No. But I made something similar to this.
01:19:929 (6) - The tail is almost offscreen Fixed this.
01:27:429 (1) - I think this note are too far from spinner for normal diff Deleted this slider.


Hard
00:11:988 (2) - Move 2 grid right for make a triangle pattern Ok.
00:23:459 (3) - Move to 00:23:238 for following vocal? No no, looks weird for me.
01:18:385 (2,3) - End at 01:18:606 for (2), remove (3) and make a slider at 01:18:826. This for following vocal Ok desu~
01:21:032 (1) - This anti-jump looks awkward Made another thing for this...


Nice job, sent me a forum PM for recheck Ok will send.

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue
sorry for late >.<

General:

1. Audio Lead-in: 2s ... i suppose that's enough~
2. add a slient sliderslide.wav? Will provide one.

Easy:

1. actually with slidertickrate 2, some short sliders looked weird... No is fine.
2. 00:12:870 (1) - i suppose the volumn 30% for finish is better No.
3. 00:54:782 (6,7) - stack? Changed to a slider.
4. 00:57:098 - volumn increase to 65% from here?No.

Normal:

1. 00:14:635 - same suggestion to Easy No.
2. 01:08:017 (2) - reduce 1 repeat and add a note at 01:09:341 - ? No, like this.
3. 01:15:297 - add a note here? and no stack of 01:15:517 (2,3) - ? No, for me this is Hard.
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Hard:

1. HP-1...it drains too fast in first section, or add more combos.. Fixed.
2. 00:14:635 - same as other diffs No.
3. 00:20:812 (3) - remove it? No.
4. 00:23:238 - add a note here? No no.
5. 00:39:341 (3) - move to 176:180 Fixed.

that's all, and good luck~

1. (Easy) - Snap the repeating slider at red tick at 00:07:576 (1)
2. (Easy) - Add note at 00:49:488
3. (Easy) - Rearrange the slider at 00:56:988 (2)
4. (Easy) - Rearrange the pattern at 01:00:959
5. (Easy) - Change the pattern at 00:49:929
6. (Normal) - Add whistle at 00:10:003 (5,6)
7. (Normal) - New combo at 01:28:312 (1) to preventing of spinner bug

Leorda wrote:

IRC Modding

1. (Easy) - Snap the repeating slider at red tick at 00:07:576 (1)
2. (Easy) - Add note at 00:49:488
3. (Easy) - Rearrange the slider at 00:56:988 (2)
4. (Easy) - Rearrange the pattern at 01:00:959
5. (Easy) - Change the pattern at 00:49:929
6. (Normal) - Add whistle at 00:10:003 (5,6)
7. (Normal) - New combo at 01:28:312 (1) to preventing of spinner bug

Bubbled

1. You need to raise the volume during kiai. I can hardly hear the hitsounds.
2. Correct offset is 505 (that's -13 from your current timing). Remember to resnap all notes and kiai sections.

1. 01:17:282 (3,1) - That jump might throw off players... The notes are spaced like there's a 2/1 gap between them. Move (1) closer to (3) ?
2. 01:17:723 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: use distance snapping for (1,2)
3. 01:21:253 (3,1) - Same as 01:17:282 -

1. Lower OD and AR by 1 so that the difficulty settings have a better spread ?
2. 00:19:929 (5,1) - Very surprising jump. The spacing makes them look like they're 2/1 apart.
3. 00:45:959 (6,1) - Spacing error here again: these look like they're 1/2 apart. Despite the new combo, this will be confusing for new players.
4. 01:08:017 (2) - This slider's second repeat is hidden under 01:07:576 (1) - this circle's hitburst.
5. 01:15:959 (4) - This slider's second repeat is hidden under 01:15:517 (2,3) - these circles' hitbursts.
6. 01:22:135 (2,3,4,1) - I don't really like how there are two consecutive stacks that have different timings, that might prove confusing for new players. Unstack ?

• Mapping-wise, seems okay.

Odaril wrote:

wow old map
request taken from #modreqs

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game.

General

1. You need to raise the volume during kiai. I can hardly hear the hitsounds.
2. Correct offset is 505 (that's -13 from your current timing). Remember to resnap all notes and kiai sections.

Easy

1. 01:17:282 (3,1) - That jump might throw off players... The notes are spaced like there's a 2/1 gap between them. Move (1) closer to (3) ?
2. 01:17:723 (1,2,3) - Spacing issue: use distance snapping for (1,2)
3. 01:21:253 (3,1) - Same as 01:17:282 -

Normal

1. Lower OD and AR by 1 so that the difficulty settings have a better spread ?
2. 00:19:929 (5,1) - Very surprising jump. The spacing makes them look like they're 2/1 apart.
3. 00:45:959 (6,1) - Spacing error here again: these look like they're 1/2 apart. Despite the new combo, this will be confusing for new players.
4. 01:08:017 (2) - This slider's second repeat is hidden under 01:07:576 (1) - this circle's hitburst.
5. 01:15:959 (4) - This slider's second repeat is hidden under 01:15:517 (2,3) - these circles' hitbursts.
6. 01:22:135 (2,3,4,1) - I don't really like how there are two consecutive stacks that have different timings, that might prove confusing for new players. Unstack ?

Hard

• Mapping-wise, seems okay.

Have to pop for the timing issue and the weird spacing in Normal and Easy. Call me back when you've fixed.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ suzutsukikanade ~ (Sorry for the later mod) No problem

M4M here ~

[General]

1. Don't forgot Remove OSB file ><. Well, this is not necessary for me...
2. Your Mp3 is 453 kbps,this is unrankble,Recode for 128 or 192 pls. Is already 192kbps.
   
3. You need change Source,like this (A Channel). Ok

[Hard]

1. 00:18:813 (1) - Move to 00:19:034 will be better. Hai, fixed.
2. 01:00:725 - Add a note to here,have vocal to here. Fixed.
3. 01:23:446 (1,2) - Sudden slow for this slider,try change 0.75? No, is fine.

[Normal]

1. OD-1. Hm...fine, fixed.
2. 00:07:343 (1) - This slider a bit Hard for now,Try like this. No.
   
3. 00:08:666 (3,4,5,6,7) - I think this rhythm it's off,Try like this. I make something different
   
4. 00:16:828 (4) - This note should to here 00:17:049. No.
5. 01:07:563 (1,2,3) - Spacing error. No, spacing is good here.
6. 01:14:622 (1,2) - ^

[Easy]

1. 00:56:093 - Add a note to here,have vocal to here. No.
2. 01:19:475 (2,3,1) - Spacing error.

That's all ~ moe song ~

Good luck ~