1. Witch (7 stars, 2463 notes)

xtrem3x wrote:

1st - in process -w-

1. 00:41:048 (184) - Delete this note, there's no sound. Also when you used only 1/2 patterns, sudden 7plet isn't good idea. 5plet would work as well. If you applied, 00:49:047 (235) - delete this too.
2. 01:10:298 (414) - I suggest you to change this into don. Piano pitch is low here and don would better the flow with upcoming kat finisher.
3. 01:22:214 (471) - There's no sound, it's not good idea to have a 5plet in this part. Consider deleting this please.
4. 01:30:798 - Instrument sound goes with 3/4 snapping, you could use kat on 01:31:048 -.
5. 01:34:964 (582,583,584,585,586) - Change this pattern into dkddk or dkkdk due to 3/4 instrument sound as I said above.
6. 02:15:881 (924) - I strongly suggest you to change this to kat so 02:15:965 (925,926,927,928) - would be easier to hit.
7. 02:26:881 (1030) - Change to kat due to the reason I explained above.
8. 02:27:131 - Add a timing point with 180BPM, metronome resets here. And add a timing point on 02:26:798 - with enabling "Omit first bar line".
9. 02:28:714 (1054,1055) - Maybe CTRL+G in order to follow the instrument. Apply on other parts like that.
10. 03:25:464 - Add a timing point here as well.
11. 04:15:463 - Move 1/6 4plet here to follow the sound getting denser.
12. 04:43:880 - Add a timing point, metronome resets again.
13. Why did you ignore the sounds at 05:24:046 - 05:24:546 - 05:25:046 - 05:26:046 - and 05:26:546 - ?

zigizigiefe wrote:

1. 00:41:048 (184) - Delete this note, there's no sound. Also when you used only 1/2 patterns, sudden 7plet isn't good idea. 5plet would work as well. If you applied, 00:49:047 (235) - delete this too. hmmm no ,I think if delete. the pattern It's weird
2. 01:10:298 (414) - I suggest you to change this into don. Piano pitch is low here and don would better the flow with upcoming kat finisher. nice
3. 01:22:214 (471) - There's no sound, it's not good idea to have a 5plet in this part. Consider deleting this please. no,I think if delete if this look strange
4. 01:30:798 - Instrument sound goes with 3/4 snapping, you could use kat on 01:31:048 -. use kat
5. 01:34:964 (582,583,584,585,586) - Change this pattern into dkddk or dkkdk due to 3/4 instrument sound as I said above. change to dkddk
6. 02:15:881 (924) - I strongly suggest you to change this to kat so 02:15:965 (925,926,927,928) - would be easier to hit. I think d this good for now
7. 02:26:881 (1030) - Change to kat due to the reason I explained above. change
8. 02:27:131 - Add a timing point with 180BPM, metronome resets here. And add a timing point on 02:26:798 - with enabling "Omit first bar line". add
9. 02:28:714 (1054,1055) - Maybe CTRL+G in order to follow the instrument. Apply on other parts like that. ok
10. 03:25:464 - Add a timing point here as well. add
11. 04:15:463 - Move 1/6 4plet here to follow the sound getting denser. move
12. 04:43:880 - Add a timing point, metronome resets again. add
13. Why did you ignore the sounds at 05:24:046 - 05:24:546 - 05:25:046 - 05:26:046 - and 05:26:546 - ? before I add note but I can't hear sound.so I delete but now I added

Consified wrote:

[Tarjyujhinn]

some irc

20:02 *Consified is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1420629 gmtn. vs. kozato (fw. LUZE) & gmtn. (witch's slave) - squartatrice vs. disperagioia [Tatsujin]]
20:02 Cocoaaa: -/
20:03 Consified: 00:17:798 (51) - k?
20:03 Consified: similar sound with 00:15:131 -  :thinking:
20:04 Cocoaaa: nice
20:04 Consified: 00:17:798 (51) - yup same reason
20:05 Cocoaaa: can you post in forum?
20:06 Consified: umm cuz i dont want you to wait for a long time
20:06 Consified: ;w;
20:06 Consified: but post in forum ok
20:06 Cocoaaa: :)

and continue to mod \o/

[General]
Source:BMS
Reference:https://osu.ppy.sh/s/449190
yup nardo also set the source to BMS


https://puu.sh/xRnMz.png
if you cant see the picture click the link
Please swap the note,remember change the SliderMultiplier to 1.4 in .osu file after check the aimod,this is bug from aimod
02:49:798 - kiai change offset to 169797
02:59:131 - kiai offset 179130
02:28:464 - 03:20:798 suggest make kiai here,SHORT KIAI IS NOT RANK-ABLE,please connect the kiais together
05:07:797 - kiai offset 307796 ok all
[Modding]
00:20:048 - k,sound effect higher I want to emphasize the piano.
00:20:631 - change to k,this d doesnt fit the piano sound ok
00:21:464 - k,higher sound ok
01:41:798 (633,634,635,636,637,638) - all D,to fit the drum. I just want to be like 01:40:798
02:00:131 (765,766,767,768,769,770,771,772,773,774,775,776,777,778,779) - remap,it is not reasonable to put a stream there,as you use the pattern o ooo o o.It has the similar sound pattern with the stream. just want to change pattern
03:09:464 (1415) - delete,match the oo oooo pattern yeah ,nice
03:46:713 - add a note It will stick with big note
04:15:297 (366,367,368,369,370,371) - no 1/6 sound here,and similar sound effect with 04:17:630 - and 04:17:963 - 04:15:297 this have 1/6 sound"bood",<-and 04:17:630 - and 04:17:963 no


/o\ good luck I understand you just lazyXDDD

Edit:change the puush source cuz it doesnt show wtf
Edit2:fk osu,i directly put the link

1. 01:10:631 - add note here.
   You should follow the sound of Drum.
   Although it is certainly accompanied by a strong sound, it is picked up mainly by Drum, so let's pick it up.
   
   
2. 01:12:631 (424) - d
   I judged that it does not match the sound behind at the time of this note.01:12:298 (421) -
   The sound of K is emphasized by setting it to ddd - K, and you can also make a good flow in play.
   
   
3. 01:14:631 - add d
   Drum sound here.
   Perhaps it was intentionally pulled out, but it looks strange.
   
   
4. 01:31:048 (543) - change d
   It brings out an effect that can emphasize k along the melody here.
   
   
5. 02:01:048 (776,777) - ctrl+g
   02:01:131 - Drum sound (kick).
   I do not understand why I took it with k.
   
   
6. 02:25:464 (1015,1016,1017,1018,1019,1020,1021,1022,1023,1024) -
   Which sound did you pick?
   I could not hear 5-5 sounds.
   example:
   (line 02:25:798 - )
   https://puu.sh/xRrxs.jpg
   
   
7. 02:29:714 (1063,1064) - ctrl+g
   It is strange that it ends with d because the sound of the synthesizer is rising.
   
   
8. 02:34:548 (1113,1114) - ctrl+g
   Synthesizer's pitch, 1114 higher
   
   
9. 02:40:381 (1170,1171) - ctrl+g
   
10. 02:45:214 (1220,1221) - ctrl+g
    
    
11. 03:20:297 - add note,
    miss? There is a sound, it is not a place to cut.
    
12. 03:48:048 (111,112) - ctrl+g
13. 03:53:381 (167,168) - ctrl+g
    
14. 04:26:131 (437,438,439,440) - why 1/8 snap?
    1/6 is sufficient sound.
    I do not understand the meaning of 1/8 and let flow also bad.
    
15. 04:31:131 (471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493,494,495) -
    Notes is in some places deviated.
    
    
16. 04:43:213 (542) - K
    It has a strong Clap sound different from other places.
    
    
17. 05:15:130 (865) - delete.
    Let's delete it, especially because there is no sound.
    
    
18. 05:15:463 (868,869,870,871,872) - ctrl+g
    The pattern is misaligned.
    When listening to the sound, the 1/6 pattern is appropriate from 05:15:546 - .
    
    
19. 05:23:129 - add k
20. 05:23:213 (950,951) - move to 05:23:296 -
21. 05:23:463 (952,953,954,955,956) - ctrl+g
    https://puu.sh/xRsdf.jpg
    First of all, since the Drum sound and Notes are disconnected, the position of 1/6 is wrong, please fix it.
    
    
22. 05:25:463 (973,974,975,976,977) - ctrl+g

yuzu__rinrin wrote:

hi~
from my queue~

[Tatsujin]

1. 01:10:631 - add note here.
   You should follow the sound of Drum.
   Although it is certainly accompanied by a strong sound, it is picked up mainly by Drum, so let's pick it up. yep
   
   
2. 01:12:631 (424) - d
   I judged that it does not match the sound behind at the time of this note.01:12:298 (421) -
   The sound of K is emphasized by setting it to ddd - K, and you can also make a good flow in play. now this ok.don't change
   
   
3. 01:14:631 - add d
   Drum sound here.
   Perhaps it was intentionally pulled out, but it looks strange. add
   
   
4. 01:31:048 (543) - change d
   It brings out an effect that can emphasize k along the melody here. hmm for me k it's better don't change
   
   
5. 02:01:048 (776,777) - ctrl+g
   02:01:131 - Drum sound (kick).
   I do not understand why I took it with k. because I hear high sound
   
   
6. 02:25:464 (1015,1016,1017,1018,1019,1020,1021,1022,1023,1024) -
   Which sound did you pick?
   I could not hear 5-5 sounds.
   example:
   (line 02:25:798 - )
   https://puu.sh/xRrxs.jpg but I hear now kkkkk kkkkk look good
   
   
7. 02:29:714 (1063,1064) - ctrl+g
   It is strange that it ends with d because the sound of the synthesizer is rising. ok
   
   
8. 02:34:548 (1113,1114) - ctrl+g
   Synthesizer's pitch, 1114 higher sound good
   
   
9. 02:40:381 (1170,1171) - ctrl+g ^
   
10. 02:45:214 (1220,1221) - ctrl+g ^
    
    
11. 03:20:297 - add note,
    miss? There is a sound, it is not a place to cut. nice
    
12. 03:48:048 (111,112) - ctrl+g ^
13. 03:53:381 (167,168) - ctrl+g ^
    
14. 04:26:131 (437,438,439,440) - why 1/8 snap?
    1/6 is sufficient sound.
    I do not understand the meaning of 1/8 and let flow also bad. before that bug;w;w;
    
15. 04:31:131 (471,472,473,474,475,476,477,478,479,480,481,482,483,484,485,486,487,488,489,490,491,492,493,494,495) -
    Notes is in some places deviated. l l
    
    
16. 04:43:213 (542) - K
    It has a strong Clap sound different from other places. yeah
    
    
17. 05:15:130 (865) - delete.
    Let's delete it, especially because there is no sound. ok
    
    
18. 05:15:463 (868,869,870,871,872) - ctrl+g
    The pattern is misaligned.
    When listening to the sound, the 1/6 pattern is appropriate from 05:15:546 - . no ,now look good
    
    
19. 05:23:129 - add k ok
20. 05:23:213 (950,951) - move to 05:23:296 - ^
21. 05:23:463 (952,953,954,955,956) - ctrl+g
    https://puu.sh/xRsdf.jpg
    First of all, since the Drum sound and Notes are disconnected, the position of 1/6 is wrong, please fix it. change some
    
    
22. 05:25:463 (973,974,975,976,977) - ctrl+g no

I think that it is good to listen to many modder other than me.
It seems that we can still improve as the state of map.

good luck ~

Blackener wrote:

Hi -w- , I'll use Thai due to my laziness :3 ดีแล้ว

Modding

00:30:632 (121) กับ 00:38:632 (169) - ลอง k มั้ย จะได้เน้นตัว Finisher อีกอย่างเสียงนี้เป็นเสียงเดียวกับ 00:30:298 (119) กับ 00:38:298 (167) ตามลำดับ ดูดีนะ:V

00:46:631 (220) - ส่วนโน้ตนี้จะ k หรือไม่ก็ได้ ถ้าจะทำเพื่อความหลากหลาย (Variation) อะนะ -w- อะนะ ไม่

00:56:214 (292) - ตรงนี้เสียงเหลืออยู่ ถ้าเปลี่ยนตรงนี้เป็น k ก็จะสะท้อนแพทเทิร์นที่แล้ว (kkddk) จะได้สอดคล้องกับแพทเทิร์นสะท้อนตรงนี้ 00:56:464 (294,295,296,297,298,299) อันนี้จะเปลี่ยนหรือไม่ก็ได้ ไม่จำเป็นมาก แต่มันจะทำให้แมพดูมีชั้นเชิงขึ้น :3 ส่วนบนโอนะ แต่ล่างแบบเดิมดีแล้ว

01:01:048 (335) - k จะได้ตามเสียงเปียโน (แล้วแต่นะอันนี้) ไม่

01:12:464 (423,424,425) - kkd เพื่อเน้น k ตัวต่อไป อีกอย่างจะได้แยกชัดเจนระหว่างส่วนเสียงปกติ (... kkd) กับส่วนกลองกระแทก (k k d d) พูดขนาดนี้:V

01:50:798 (701) - ไม่มีอะไรที่ต้องใส่ Finisher เลยนะ = = มันมีเสียง"ตึง"ที่เน้นต่ำอะแล้วเพื่อความสมดุลด้วยอยากใส่ไว้น่ะ เข้าดี

02:28:214 (1052) - k ตรงนี้เพื่อตามเสียงเปียโนที่เหลืออยู่ แล้วก็เป็นการเน้นเสียงเปียโนต่อที่ 02:28:297 (1053) อันนี้แนะนำเลย เด็ด ตอนแรกว่าไม่ใส่แต่ใส่ดีผ่า

03:14:881 (1470) - k, ตรงนี้ยังเป็นเสียงสูงอยู่ จะได้แบ่งเป็นสองเสียงก็คือช่วงเสียงสูง 03:14:798 (1469,1470) กับช่วงหย่อนเสียง 03:14:964 (1471,1472) มันใช่

03:41:297 (66) - อันนี้ส่วนใช้ k k d k มากกว่า แต่ลืมๆไปเถอะ -w- เป็น k d k k

03:57:214 (202,203,204,205) - ตรงนี้ทำยังไงก็ได้ ให้ตัวสุดท้ายเป็น d เพราะเสียงมันเงียบ ไม่น่าจะใช้ k ได้ และอีกอย่างเป็นการเน้นเสียงเปียโนด้วย ถ้าเปลี่ยน Finisher เป็น K ได้จะดีมาก เพราะเป็นเสียงฉาบกระจาย เช่นแบบนี้ จะเป็นการเน้นทั้งเปียโน และก็โน้ต 03:57:963 (207) จาก Finisher ต่างสี
-ตัวอย่างที่นายทำก็แบบนี้: 04:10:131 (321,322,323,324) อันนี้คือดีแล้ว ข้างหน้าเป็น D ไม่อยากใส่อะ

04:49:630 (612) - ลอง k มั้ยอันนี้ไม่มั่นใจนะ แต่ว่ามันยังมีเสียงเปียโนเหลืออยู่ ไม่อะ เพราะ แบบนี้ดูดีกว่าและเน้นเสียงเปียโนช่วงท้าย

04:58:380 (696,700) - Ctrl+g มั้ยจะได้ตามเสียงสูง (สูงสุดในเพลงเลยมั้ง) และ d ตรงตัวสุดท้ายจะเป็นตัวเน้น Finisher ด้วย เราเปลี่ยนpattern

04:59:546 (708,709) - ส่วนตัวจะใช้ Ctrl+g ตรงนี้นะ จะได้ตามเสียงพื้นหลัง แบบเดิมพอทำแบบนี้แล้วนึกสภาพโน๊ตตอนเล่นมันดูเข้ามากเลยนะไม่แก้อะ

05:05:713 ~ 05:07:712 WoW ว้าวเลยสิ

ขอให้โชคดีในการแรงค์ เพลงทำดีเกินคาดมาก รับดาวไป :3 แมพนายก็ดีนะ ขอบคุณมาก!!!

Kith190 wrote:

Hi! Here for M4M

[General]
Song setup > Design Disable "Enable countdown"
Inside Notepadd set 0,0,"bg.jpg",0,0 as 0,0,"bg.jpg",0,10 to make more visible he girl on the bg
[Tatsujin]
01:10:464 - here I heared something like kkkkd this sound like K than
01:14:631 - here there is an unmapped sound, probably a d ok
01:38:298 - same here added
01:41:631 - here there is a sound similar to this one 01:41:298 - but you didn't map it add 01:41:298 only
04:30:963 - 04:32:297 - 04:34:963 - 04:36:297 - 04:37:630 - here there are some evident sounds that you didn't place, they should be d Just want to space

Cool map!
Hope It was helpful! Good luck! ;D not bad

1. 00:22:798: Why did you use 3/4 meter, listen again, does it fit to the music. Absolutely no, please change it after finish the mod down here.

1. 00:17:464: Change to d because melody pitch is low
2. 00:21:464: From here you did not make the SV smooth, I would recommend you to add up by x0.01 only, wouldn't it smooth. Or maybe you want to increase the slowness of the beginning of the music to make this SV smoother, the current one isn't smooth enough. Consider change it by 2 ways, choose 1 way you would like to choose
   
3. 00:41:047: Remove this, no sound, even though is feel weird, but 7plet isn't a best idea you could do. It's too sudden
4. 00:49:047: ^
5. 01:14:296: Remove finisher, I don't get what is the Finisher note for?
6. 02:15:881: Change to d for an easier keyboard-ish (easier to hit)
7. 03:24:463: SV isn't smooth
8. 03:35:464: ^
9. 03:38:964: Change to k to fit the pitch
10. 03:46:130: SV from here is too sudden, reduce the SV speed
11. 05:15:463: Try to use 50% playback rate to listen the melody pitch carefully. It should be dkdk not kddk
12. 05:25:463: Why not k?

1. 00:54:713 - Could connect the 1/6 here by adding a d and making the finisher a K, so it reads as --> ddkddkkdkd(dkkd)dK
2. 00:57:130 - k?
3. 00:59:463 - change to kdkkd or kdkdd to emphasise pitch decline (even though kdkdk works too I guess but not as well)
4. 01:00:130 - implying you use the above suggestion ^ as a kdkkd, then a kdkdd would fit this as it is the same sounds as the pattern above, but lower pitch (which is why I recommend kdkdd since it uses more dons for lower pitch)
5. 01:02:796 - could be k
6. 01:04:130 - I suggest kdd since it's pretty lower and the extra don emphasises that
7. 01:09:130 - perhaps try making this section a stream; it fits the music and there is a calmer section almost immediately after so it shouldn't feel awkward to play
8. These streams are awesome
9. 02:25:463 - perhaps add a small bit of variety to these ten notes; I found kkkdk kdkkk to be quite interesting
10. 02:27:797 - as much as I like 1/6, I don't think this needs to be here; nothing in the music asks for this to be a 1/6
11. 03:50:297 - this note for some reason has a different hitsound? just replace it with another kat to fix (it's not really an issue but it bothers me lmao)
12. 04:43:213 - k?

Jaye wrote:

Just had a look at this map in the editor and I have to say I love it.
I've shot two stars for you just now and I'll be back with a mod later.

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello Cocoaaa, request via in-game:

[General]
Since you changed your diff name, you need to write 'redl before the date you changed the diff name' :3

[Timing alert!]

1. 00:22:798: Why did you use 3/4 meter, listen again, does it fit to the music. Absolutely no, please change it after finish the mod down here. it's JUDYDANNY's mod

[Fight]
^^^ Diff name ^^^ not a big deal

1. 00:17:464: Change to d because melody pitch is low I follow all music
2. 00:21:464: From here you did not make the SV smooth, I would recommend you to add up by x0.01 only, wouldn't it smooth. Or maybe you want to increase the slowness of the beginning of the music to make this SV smoother, the current one isn't smooth enough. Consider change it by 2 ways, choose 1 way you would like to choose
   
3. 00:41:047: Remove this, no sound, even though is feel weird, but 7plet isn't a best idea you could do. It's too sudden my pattern look better
4. 00:49:047: ^ ^
5. 01:14:296: Remove finisher, I don't get what is the Finisher note for? remove
6. 02:15:881: Change to d for an easier keyboard-ish (easier to hit) no
7. 03:24:463: SV isn't smooth it's feel that but don't change
8. 03:35:464: ^ ^
9. 03:38:964: Change to k to fit the pitch ha?
10. 03:46:130: SV from here is too sudden, reduce the SV speed it's look normal for high diffi
11. 05:15:463: Try to use 50% playback rate to listen the melody pitch carefully. It should be dkdk not kddk dkkd and move
12. 05:25:463: Why not k? why:)?

I think this map need a skilled modder than me.
In the current state it will be far from ranked
We can still improve
Good luck

xtrem3x wrote:

M4M from my Queue


General:

Don = d
Kat = k
Big Don = D
Big Kat = K

Fight

• 
  > kiai time unsnapped, move 1ms back 02:49:798- and 02:55:131- oh thanks
  
  
  00:10:631- It's a bit deformed here because I don't focus that you try to follow. my suggestion would be change to d this point and make a swap in 00:11:798 (24,25)- to focus more decuately the piano sound. ::
  
  00:13:631 - -->
  Is the same situation as above point. wow it's look better ok
  
  00:22:631 - it might be best to prioritize the big note at this point, so change this to k. already
  
  01:06:464 (361,362,363,364,365) - I would prefer you to change this by kkkdk to increase the emphasis of the piano sounds.
  
  01:12:798 (402,403,404,405) - this section have much cymbal, is possible DDKK? no
  
  02:27:020 (997,998) - Delete these notes and ... why?
  02:27:797 - -->
  **these points above are to reduce the density a bit and eliminate the unnecessary use of 1/6 format notes on sound that does not have that rhythm, in addition to properly following the piano sound just before starting kiai**.
  
  03:20:464 - Leave this note in k to emphatize next note as finish in these chaos patterns (?) this low sound
  
  03:57:380 - this note is more coupled to the set of low sounds than high, then this would be d. oh yeah change pattern

Jaye wrote:

Just had a look at this map in the editor and I have to say I love it.
I've shot two stars for you just now and I'll be back with a mod later.

NM from my queue: [Fight]

1. 00:54:713 - Could connect the 1/6 here by adding a d and making the finisher a K, so it reads as --> ddkddkkdkd(dkkd)dK I don't need ddK or kkD it's look hard but change to K
2. 00:57:130 - k? kkd
3. 00:59:463 - change to kdkkd or kdkdd to emphasise pitch decline (even though kdkdk works too I guess but not as well) no now kdkdk look good than
4. 01:00:130 - implying you use the above suggestion ^ as a kdkkd, then a kdkdd would fit this as it is the same sounds as the pattern above, but lower pitch (which is why I recommend kdkdd since it uses more dons for lower pitch) no
5. 01:02:796 - could be k I want to use beautiful pattern
6. 01:04:130 - I suggest kdd since it's pretty lower and the extra don emphasises that ^
7. 01:09:130 - perhaps try making this section a stream; it fits the music and there is a calmer section almost immediately after so it shouldn't feel awkward to play ha no K look better
8. These streams are awesome
9. 02:25:463 - perhaps add a small bit of variety to these ten notes; I found kkkdk kdkkk to be quite interesting I want it's easy pattern
10. 02:27:797 - as much as I like 1/6, I don't think this needs to be here; nothing in the music asks for this to be a 1/6 but I need 3
11. 03:50:297 - this note for some reason has a different hitsound? just replace it with another kat to fix (it's not really an issue but it bothers me lmao) WTF hit sound
12. 04:43:213 - k? K

That's about all I can think of; best of luck ('w^)b

• k = kat d = don K = big kat D = big don

1. It's just suggestions/corrections, don't take it badly. You are free to accept them or not.
2. If you accept my suggestions/corrections, apply also in similar parts for consistency
3. If you don't accept my suggestions/corrections, clarify why you do not accept them.

[ Fight]

1. 00:01:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I think would be fine if you set those as kdkk, kddk and dddk for emphasizes the melody decrease
2. 00:11:631 (23) - Change to don, the pitch is low compared to 00:10:798 (18) -
3. 00:13:631 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - I think this fits better with the piano pitch
4. 00:17:131 (47,48) - Ctrl + G. The pitch in 00:17:131 (47) - is more low than 00:17:298 (47) -
5. 00:21:631 - The SVs here are too fast and can be too confuse, you need improve it. SV's with x0,05 increase could be fine in the white tick, but you need remove 00:22:215 (69,71) - since feels a bit overmapped. I listen only the piano and the transition filter is doesn't too good to mapping
6. 00:22:798 - If you use 3/4 meter you need emphasizes some with ticks. Like example removing 00:23:964 (80) - or 00:24:964 (85) - (example)
7. 00:40:965 (167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - It feels too unexpected, since you are following the piano and that pattern break with that. You can remove this 00:41:215 (170,172) - as to make an advance for 00:58:297 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288) -
8. 00:53:798 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248) - I'm sure it follow better with the piano pitch
9. 00:54:464 (249,250,251,252) - I don't know why you used 1/6 patter, I'm confidence that it's 1/4.
10. 01:34:631 (560) - Remove. I don't listen a sound to follow
11. 02:26:796 - I would think the 1/6 use here. I think this 02:26:964 (965,966,967,968,969,970,971) - is unnecessary since this 02:26:881 (964,965,966,967) - don't have a instrumental to follow
12. 02:51:964 (1206,1208) - You are emphasizing the strong pitch in 02:50:798 (1201,1203,1205) - and this 02:51:963 (1206,1208) - breaks with that, remove
13. 02:56:130 - It's some inconsistent with 02:55:130 (1221,1222,1223,1224,1225,1226,1227,1228) - .Try with this pattern
14. 02:58:297 (1250) - Remove finisher, I don't listen a crash cymbal
15. 03:36:130 (37) - Remove finisher, same as above

gaston_2199 wrote:

Hi!
M4M from my queue ~
Some clarifications:

• k = kat d = don K = big kat D = big don

1. It's just suggestions/corrections, don't take it badly. You are free to accept them or not.
2. If you accept my suggestions/corrections, apply also in similar parts for consistency
3. If you don't accept my suggestions/corrections, clarify why you do not accept them.

[ Fight]

1. 00:01:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I think would be fine if you set those as kdkk, kddk and dddk for emphasizes the melody decrease no,I think this fine now
2. 00:11:631 (23) - Change to don, the pitch is low compared to 00:10:798 (18) - yeah
3. 00:13:631 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - I think this fits better with the piano pitch maybe lol
4. 00:17:131 (47,48) - Ctrl + G. The pitch in 00:17:131 (47) - is more low than 00:17:298 (47) - no
5. 00:21:631 - The SVs here are too fast and can be too confuse, you need improve it. SV's with x0,05 increase could be fine in the white tick, but you need remove 00:22:215 (69,71) - since feels a bit overmapped. I listen only the piano and the transition filter is doesn't too good to mapping remove and fix SV
6. 00:22:798 - If you use 3/4 meter you need emphasizes some with ticks. Like example removing 00:23:964 (80) - or 00:24:964 (85) - change some pattern(example)
7. 00:40:965 (167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - It feels too unexpected, since you are following the piano and that pattern break with that. You can remove this 00:41:215 (170,172) - as to make an advance for 00:58:297 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288) - nahhh
8. 00:53:798 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248) - I'm sure it follow better with the piano pitch feel better..
9. 00:54:464 (249,250,251,252) - I don't know why you used 1/6 patter, I'm confidence that it's 1/4. change some and it's 1/6
10. 01:34:631 (560) - Remove. I don't listen a sound to follow remove
11. 02:26:796 - I would think the 1/6 use here. I think this 02:26:964 (965,966,967,968,969,970,971) - is unnecessary since this 02:26:881 (964,965,966,967) - don't have a instrumental to follow I think this not1/6
12. 02:51:964 (1206,1208) - You are emphasizing the strong pitch in 02:50:798 (1201,1203,1205) - and this 02:51:963 (1206,1208) - breaks with that, remove no
13. 02:56:130 - It's some inconsistent with 02:55:130 (1221,1222,1223,1224,1225,1226,1227,1228) - .Try with this pattern tried but it now this fine
14. 02:58:297 (1250) - Remove finisher, I don't listen a crash cymbal ok
15. 03:36:130 (37) - Remove finisher, same as above no

That's all from me, nice map~
Good luck!

Faputa wrote:

Here's a little mod.


[Fight]
⏩00:14:298 (34) - may change to k. kkdkkdkkdkk sounds better I think. o nice
⏩00:17:132 (47,48,49,50,51,52) - I just think that the current pattern is not nice enough, maybe kkddkk or kdkdkk for these six notes? kdkdkk
⏩00:30:132 (113,114,115) - kdk to indicate the high pitched piano. yeah
⏩00:38:298 (158,159) - 00:46:298 (207,208) - dk, just like what I’ve said in 00:30:132 (113,114,115) - . kd^
⏩01:16:798 (432,433,434,435,436,437,438) - I would say that you should stick to the finisher usage of the previous sections, not a different one. ohh
⏩01:45:464 (666) - Change to k for consistent pattern that you used for every ½ gap they are k k. no D is fine now
⏩Starting from 03:16:464 (1432) - I think you can instead make streams so that it would not be awkward that you miss ⅙ quadruples at 03:18:964 (1452,1453) - and 03:20:297 (1462,1463) - . no no
⏩04:28:797 (462,463,464) - I think this should be a stream instead of three big notes. ok I love stream <3
⏩04:53:963 (657) - I think should delete this note to break the stream, so that you can emphasize piano scales at 04:53:963 (657,658,659,660) - . ok deleted
⏩04:57:713 (697,698) - Should be a ⅙ quadruple again? :3 no,I can't make more star LoL
⏩05:03:380 (743,744,745,746,747,748,749) - I think ddkkkkd sounds better. I change this pattern


I can only find these worth pointing out. At the end, while testplaying the map it is very smooth and nice
Good luck with the map!!

Definition wrote:

squartatrice n. ripper, murderer who slashes or mutilates his victims with a knife

Tyistiana wrote:

#ทีมดองงาน
อาจกลับมา mod จริงจังหลังจากหายไปนาน
ขี้เกียจดูตรงเล็กๆน้อยๆ ขอเช็คเท่าที่เห็นได้ชัดก่อน :3

[ ความเห็นส่วนตัว]
http://www.dictionarist.com/squartatrice

Definition wrote:

squartatrice n. ripper, murderer who slashes or mutilates his victims with a knife

ชื่อเพลงมันแปลว่าฆาตกร อะไรทำนองนี้ครับ
ชื่อระดับความยาก Fight (ต่อสู้) ดูจะไม่ค่อยสอดคล้องกับชื่อเพลงซักเท่าไร
ผมเสนอชื่อ "Ripper" (ฆาตกร) ก็ดูดีไปอีกแบบนะครับ
อย่างที่บอก คหสต เฉยๆ ไม่ชอบก็ไม่ต้องเปลี่ยน :3

[ Fight]
00:24:298 - 00:26:964 - 00:32:297 - 00:34:964 - ลบ ก็อาจดีเหมือนกันนะครับ ช่วงแรกเพลงยังเบาๆอยู่ ใส่โน้ตตามจังหวะหลักอาจดีกว่านะครับ เปลี่ยนเยอะเลย
01:39:463 - ลบ , เท่าที่สังเกตุ ตรงนี้จะตาม melody หลัก ซึ่งตรงนี้ไม่มีครับ จะได้กะจังหวะง่ายไง
01:50:796 - เสียงนี้ไม่จำเป็นต้องเน้นด้วย finisher ครับ . เสียงไม่ได้เด่นอะไรเป็นพิเศษ อยากใส่
01:59:963 จนถึง 02:01:463 - ตรงนี้ใช้โน้ต 3 มากเกินไปครับ คิดว่าถ้าทำให้มันสอดคล้องกับช่วงแรก แบบเดิมดีแล้ว มันคือช่วงrelax
(ตัวเลขหมายถึงจำนวนโน้ต)
ตอนแรก - 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 3 3 3 3
แบบนี้โน้ต 3 มันติดกันไปพอตัวครับ ตอนเล่นอาจทำให้เกิดอาการหาวนอนได้
ที่แนะนำแบบตัวอย่างข้างล่าง - 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 3 1 1 1 5
ตัวอย่างการจัดเรียงที่แนะนำ
02:25:463 - เปลี่ยนเป็น D (และลบ 02:25:546) , เสียงเหมือนตรง 02:24:130 ครับ ไม่ครับ
02:26:296 - เปลี่ยนเป็น d , เสียงต่างจาก 02:25:963 (968,969,970,971) ดังนั้น เปลี่ยนสีเพื่อสร้างความแตกต่างบ้างก็ไม่เลวครับ ไม่ครับ

RazeSGP53 wrote:

My first try ลอง:3
Mod....

[Fight]
01:41:796 - ให้ลองเปลี่ยนเป็นโน๊ตแบบธรรมดาดู เพราะเวลาเล่นด้วย DT มันกด Bignote ลำบาก ไม่อะ ถ้าอย่างงั้นคนที่DTต้องกดแบบข้างเดียวเอา
01:39:463 - ลองเป็น d K k D k k ดู hitsound น่าจะฟังดูดีกว่า เราว่าแบบเดิมก็โอแล้วนะ
02:26:463 - ก่อนช่วงนี้ให้ลองลบช่วงแรกออกหน่อย หรือเปลี่ยนเป็นโน๊ตทีละตัว เพราะจะได้เว้นไว้สำหรับ เริ่มมอง stream 1/6 ได้ทัน มันไม่ค่อยโออะ
[แนะนำสำหรับแมพนี้ มีส่วนที่เป็น 1/6 หรือ 1/4 มากเกินไป ควรตัดช่วงที่ไม่ค่อยจำเป็นบางช่วงออก แล้วลองแก้ไข 1/6 บางที่ดู เพราะค่อนข้างกดลำบากมาก ใน BPM ระดับ 180+
และใช้รูปแบบที่กดสลับ 1/6 ที่คนทั่วไปสามารถอ่านได้ใน mod HR ] นี่มันผลประโยชน์ส่วนตัวชัดๆ
(และก็ ขอให้ลบ Bignote หรือเปลี่ยนเป็นโน๊ตธรรมดาดู เพราะดูรวมๆแล้ว Bignote ในเพลงนี้มีมากเกินไป) แต่มันเข้าไง ปกติเราก็ชอบใส่อยู่แล้ว แต้งกิ๊วมาก

Protonori wrote:

M4M from my queue~

[General]
There are over 100 unsnapped objects. You probably want to fix these first. I knew

[Fight]
00:01:798 (3) - Change to d? It'd match the structure at 00:06:798 (9,10,11,12). [2 kats, 2 dons] not work for me
00:04:465 (7) - ^ ^
00:12:465 (28) - ^ ^
00:15:131 (39) - ^ ^

00:16:798 - I think you should change this pattern [for consistency with 00:06:798 (9,10,11,12)]. I'd suggest:
00:16:965 (46) - Change to d.
00:17:298 (48) - Change to k.
00:17:464 (49) - Change to d. nice idea but I change to kkdkddkk

00:22:298 (69,70) - Swap these to reflect the octave change. ahh ok
00:25:464 (86) - Change to d. The piano doesn't sound the same as 00:25:297 (85). no
00:32:964 (124,125,126,127) - Use kdkd for pattern variety. ^
00:35:131 (135) - Change to d for pattern variety. ok
00:40:631 (164) - Change to k? The piano is descending at the same rate as 00:39:965 (160). seem good
00:43:131 (182) - Use k for consistency with 00:27:131 (94).\ haha no
00:48:631 (213) - Change to k. Same reason as 00:40:631. good
00:54:520 (258,259,260) - Change to ddk? This is just personal preference, though. ok
01:00:130 (308,309,310,311,312) - dkddk? The current pattern doesn't flow too well imo. hmm no, I want to use kdkkd than
01:06:796 (369) - Too many k-heavy pattern imo. Maybe change this note to d? no
00:59:463 (302,303,304,305,306) - dkddk? Same reason as 01:00:130. no
01:07:963 (380) - Change to d? k seem good now
01:06:796 (369) - d? Same reason as 01:06:796. ^

Hope this helps. Good luck with ranking this! thanks!!!

Marm wrote:

a bit late heh, m4m from queue.

fight

1. 00:40:964 (166) - could change to kat to keep with the k d d k d d k from 00:39:964 - . It's also easier to differ the 1/4 piano part from the 1/2 piano part due to different colours if you change that. If you agree then do the same on similar parts. before I used but it's not work
2. On the streams here 01:26:963 - ~ 01:37:963 - try to follow the melody, using patterns that give emphasis on the synth sounds like 01:27:130 - , 01:27:630 - , 01:27:963 - , 01:28:130 - , 01:28:296 - and 01:28:463 - . Or simply the drums. It's better as the patterns right now don't follow neither the melody nor the drums, looks random tbh yeah it's look random,but K it's look work now
3. 03:24:005 - add new timing point with "omit first bar line" to remove the extra bar line. added
4. 03:36:130 - On this part, to be more consistent, I think you should choose to follow the drums or the piano on these notes: 03:37:130 (45) - and 03:39:797 (60) - . They have the same piano sound but on the second you follow the drums cymbal. Choose one or another here. ok,change to d
5. 04:42:797 - the sv on this 1/6 pattern is pretty strange tbh. try making it smoother or not using it at all. ok
6. 04:43:130 - omit first bar line on the red line here. ok

nice song, good luck cocoa boi

Unknown_player wrote:

Kudoshot
Go rank this Though i can't play this map

Taikocracy wrote:

super minor things

02:27:797 (991,992,993,994,995,996,997,998) - change to just regular 1/4, the 1/6 doesn't match up with anything ok,I know that but I'm just ignore .changed
04:29:463 - i recommend mapping more piano notes in this section, feels kind of underwhelming when playing it for there to be random gaps where there are piano notes fixed pattern
05:22:547 (953,954,955,956,957,958,959) - this is also just regular 1/4 I know that but if I use 1/4 in 05:22:547 - 05:22:629 .so I just make it better and use the same patter > 05:21:879 and 05:22:213 and make this sound dominant > 05:22:713 you will can hear this sound. so it's fine now

Surono wrote:

what a dream or cream...

gg :[]

Surono wrote:

Nishizumi is your mommy

<Surono> whats that
<Cocoaaa> chack please dem <3
<Surono> ooo ya ya
<Surono> wait
<Cocoaaa> we can do IRC for now
<Surono>
<Surono> i forget what is the diffname of your map
<Cocoaaa> Coconi
<Surono> in here still "Tatsujin"
<Surono> oh oke, i change it
<Cocoaaa> and update lul
<Surono> Coconi - _-
<Cocoaaa> yep
<Cocoaaa> I think it possiblexD
<Surono> yeah i hope
<Surono> what even, 6.9*
<Surono> what have you done there, pepe map?
<Cocoaaa> not all pp
<Cocoaaa> look it you will know
<Surono> so I guess
<Surono> its hard map with high sr
<Surono> - _-
<Cocoaaa> yep
<Cocoaaa> very hard to get pp
<Surono> lol nice
<Cocoaaa> not free for playerxD
<Surono> ok lets start, 00:13:631 (30,31,32,33,34,35) - yeh, i listen to this sound.. more like 1 1 2 2 1 1 flows
<Surono> so how about k k d d k k?
<Cocoaaa> change to kkddkd
<Surono> hell yeah
<Surono> where is the hell part?
<Cocoaaa> lul
<Cocoaaa> you will see it
<Surono> 1/6+1/4 ??
<Surono> 05:22:546 - the
<Cocoaaa> yeah.in later
<Cocoaaa> but it still really hard for play
<Surono> yeah
<Surono> more hard than nishizumi 1/6+1/4 maps
<Surono> - _- and some shinsekai pattern zzzzzzzzz i cri for eternity
<Cocoaaa> sure
<Cocoaaa> I don't know xD
<Surono> 02:26:963 - I cry
<Cocoaaa> why
<Surono> bcus my hand is baby XDDDddddd
<Surono> 02:39:130 - mmmmhhhhh hell yeah yummy
<Surono> 02:56:463 - im sure from here, the sound is not 1/4 but its 1/6
<Cocoaaa> now kkkkkkd 1/6 it's easy for me
<Surono> yeah ez for kddk player
<Cocoaaa> yeah I know but keep because it over and look strange in this pattern
<Surono> hmm i see
<Cocoaaa> so long kkkk it seem fine
<Surono> I know its hard to make 1/6+1/4 if the sound just flat like that lol
<Surono> where you get the timing?
<Cocoaaa> from std map
<Surono> ohh nice
<Cocoaaa> I think
<Cocoaaa> I need you look this point 03:37:464
<Cocoaaa> yeah dem right
<Surono> ,. seems good
<Surono> you follow the base sound of 1/2
<Surono> not the snap of piano
<Cocoaaa> really? xD
<Surono> ye
<Surono> -_ - oh come on I started nub doesnt mean I cant take a look to hard stuff zzzz
<Surono> but idk, yeh i forget how to play taiko or idk
<Surono> zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i miss when I can play as ddkk player hueeeeeeeeeeeeeeee /cri
<Cocoaaa> _ _'
<Cocoaaa> overall ok now?
<Surono> ya
<Surono> now I will check the setting of this map if there has error
<Cocoaaa> ok
<Surono> 03:20:463 - yeah please test this part zzzz
<Cocoaaa> oh
<Surono> 03:20:463 - add new redlines and enable omit first barlines
<Cocoaaa> last note and big?
<Surono> yeah, unrankable..
<Cocoaaa> wait
<Surono> 03:20:798 - add sv 1.35
<Cocoaaa> 03:20:796 - I think it's need speed up
<Surono> yeah there is
<Surono> 03:20:798 -
<Surono> 03:24:005 - enable omit first barlines
<Surono> ok done, tell me if you updated it
<Cocoaaa> 03:00:463 start kiai
<Cocoaaa> but end when?
<Cocoaaa> nono
<Cocoaaa> cause add timing point
<Cocoaaa> wait amin
<Cocoaaa> already now
<Cocoaaa> updated
<Surono> wow pro setting value of svs
<Cocoaaa> 01:45:463 ?
<Cocoaaa> - _ -
<Cocoaaa> for SVs I'm just guessing
<Cocoaaa> yeah,it's fine

"A difficulty’s name must be unrelated to a username. Guest difficulties, however, may indicate possession with its mappers’ username or nickname. (e.g. Guest Mapper’s Insane). Words that happen to be usernames are acceptable within difficulty names as long as they relate to the song."

Taikocracy wrote:

"A difficulty’s name must be unrelated to a username. Guest difficulties, however, may indicate possession with its mappers’ username or nickname. (e.g. Guest Mapper’s Insane). Words that happen to be usernames are acceptable within difficulty names as long as they relate to the song."

i done messed that up lmao, change diff name please, sincerest apologies for confusion

Surono wrote:

forget to check the AiMod? becareful next time, I found unsnapped kiais & many notes. other green lines i dont know but I leave to
@Taikocracy please take a look the svs if it works properly, zz i dont have time just forcing to check the error issuez zz irl kill me.

http://puu.sh/yGfmu/7d0703a34f.zip Fixed diff for you

Im using method snapping with Timing and Control Points -> Snap objects to new timing 1/4 - * timestamp at middle/half of map, its good to fix ghost unsnapped notes* > manually fixing 1/3~1/6, snapped the first note of each red lines and 04:43:129 - moving this redline to 04:43:213 -

would be fine right now

Surono wrote:

¯\(少)/¯

Taikocracy wrote:

so i guess i'll never know who the witch's slave is

-Kazu- wrote:

I think a BN or QAT or whatever can add these without need of disqualifying the map (some years ago a BAT did it on one of my maps)
Tags: "GOTHIC D HARDWALTZ" and "Hard Renaissance" as genres as designated by gmtn. for disperagioia. "BOFU 2017 -LEGENDA EST A MYTH-" for the source event disperagioia is from, "Lama Poluna" as the creator of this remix? mashup? whatever, he/she did the .mp3 by tying squartatrice and disperagioia, this isn't an actual original song made by witch's slave or kozato
Also, I think the red line at 04:43:879 - should have offset 283.885, right now it feels a bit off for me (I could be wrong too)

hikikochan wrote:

a few timing point issues
00:54:797 - the section here should still be in 3/4 - the dead giveaway is the base chord changing every 3 beats. you just have to delete the point here since the section before it is also in 3/4
01:42:796 - switches to 4/4 here and stays that way for a while. add redline and switch to 4/4
02:26:795 - this bar is 5/4, if you implement the above switch all you have to do is set the redline at 02:27:129 - to not show the first barline
03:20:463 - the section around here is a really weird slowdown but it's still in 4/4. you don't have to delete the barline at 03:20:463 - because the downbeat is actually there; the barline that needs to be deleted instead is 03:20:798 - because that's (more or less) the second beat of the bar
03:24:005 - similarly, this barline shouldn't be omitted because it's the first beat of the second 4/4 bar in this slowdown (03:24:463 - being the second, 03:24:796 - the third, and 03:25:129 - the fourth). uncheck that box here and omit the barline at 03:24:463 - instead
you might want to add a greenline at 03:24:005 - too if you don't want that barline to be faster than the notes after it
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seems like that's it
this will probably warrant a dq so i'm sorry for the delay in ranking your map, esp knowing you had to bubble pop and rebubble earlier for diffname \:
hopefully this helps!

yeah,if I got disqualify