Hi!
M4M from my queue ~
Some clarifications:
Good luck!
M4M from my queue ~
Some clarifications:
- k = kat d = don K = big kat D = big don
- It's just suggestions/corrections, don't take it badly. You are free to accept them or not.
- If you accept my suggestions/corrections, apply also in similar parts for consistency
- If you don't accept my suggestions/corrections, clarify why you do not accept them.
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That's all from me, nice map~- 00:01:465 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I think would be fine if you set those as kdkk, kddk and dddk for emphasizes the melody decrease
- 00:11:631 (23) - Change to don, the pitch is low compared to 00:10:798 (18) -
- 00:13:631 (30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40) - I think this fits better with the piano pitch
- 00:17:131 (47,48) - Ctrl + G. The pitch in 00:17:131 (47) - is more low than 00:17:298 (47) -
- 00:21:631 - The SVs here are too fast and can be too confuse, you need improve it. SV's with x0,05 increase could be fine in the white tick, but you need remove 00:22:215 (69,71) - since feels a bit overmapped. I listen only the piano and the transition filter is doesn't too good to mapping
- 00:22:798 - If you use 3/4 meter you need emphasizes some with ticks. Like example removing 00:23:964 (80) - or 00:24:964 (85) - (example)
- 00:40:965 (167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - It feels too unexpected, since you are following the piano and that pattern break with that. You can remove this 00:41:215 (170,172) - as to make an advance for 00:58:297 (282,283,284,285,286,287,288) -
- 00:53:798 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248) - I'm sure it follow better with the piano pitch
- 00:54:464 (249,250,251,252) - I don't know why you used 1/6 patter, I'm confidence that it's 1/4.
- 01:34:631 (560) - Remove. I don't listen a sound to follow
- 02:26:796 - I would think the 1/6 use here. I think this 02:26:964 (965,966,967,968,969,970,971) - is unnecessary since this 02:26:881 (964,965,966,967) - don't have a instrumental to follow
- 02:51:964 (1206,1208) - You are emphasizing the strong pitch in 02:50:798 (1201,1203,1205) - and this 02:51:963 (1206,1208) - breaks with that, remove
- 02:56:130 - It's some inconsistent with 02:55:130 (1221,1222,1223,1224,1225,1226,1227,1228) - .Try with this pattern
- 02:58:297 (1250) - Remove finisher, I don't listen a crash cymbal
- 03:36:130 (37) - Remove finisher, same as above
Good luck!