M4M from my queue~
[General]
There are over 100 unsnapped objects. You probably want to fix these first.
[Fight]
00:01:798 (3) - Change to d? It'd match the structure at 00:06:798 (9,10,11,12). [2 kats, 2 dons]
00:04:465 (7) - ^
00:12:465 (28) - ^
00:15:131 (39) - ^
00:16:798 - I think you should change this pattern [for consistency with 00:06:798 (9,10,11,12)]. I'd suggest:
00:16:965 (46) - Change to d.
00:17:298 (48) - Change to k.
00:17:464 (49) - Change to d.
00:22:298 (69,70) - Swap these to reflect the octave change.
00:25:464 (86) - Change to d. The piano doesn't sound the same as 00:25:297 (85).
00:32:964 (124,125,126,127) - Use kdkd for pattern variety.
00:35:131 (135) - Change to d for pattern variety.
00:40:631 (164) - Change to k? The piano is descending at the same rate as 00:39:965 (160).
00:43:131 (182) - Use k for consistency with 00:27:131 (94).\
00:48:631 (213) - Change to k. Same reason as 00:40:631.
00:54:520 (258,259,260) - Change to ddk? This is just personal preference, though.
01:00:130 (308,309,310,311,312) - dkddk? The current pattern doesn't flow too well imo.
01:06:796 (369) - Too many k-heavy pattern imo. Maybe change this note to d?
00:59:463 (302,303,304,305,306) - dkddk? Same reason as 01:00:130.
01:07:963 (380) - Change to d?
01:06:796 (369) - d? Same reason as 01:06:796.
Hope this helps. Good luck with ranking this!
[General]
There are over 100 unsnapped objects. You probably want to fix these first.
[Fight]
00:01:798 (3) - Change to d? It'd match the structure at 00:06:798 (9,10,11,12). [2 kats, 2 dons]
00:04:465 (7) - ^
00:12:465 (28) - ^
00:15:131 (39) - ^
00:16:798 - I think you should change this pattern [for consistency with 00:06:798 (9,10,11,12)]. I'd suggest:
00:16:965 (46) - Change to d.
00:17:298 (48) - Change to k.
00:17:464 (49) - Change to d.
00:22:298 (69,70) - Swap these to reflect the octave change.
00:25:464 (86) - Change to d. The piano doesn't sound the same as 00:25:297 (85).
00:32:964 (124,125,126,127) - Use kdkd for pattern variety.
00:35:131 (135) - Change to d for pattern variety.
00:40:631 (164) - Change to k? The piano is descending at the same rate as 00:39:965 (160).
00:43:131 (182) - Use k for consistency with 00:27:131 (94).\
00:48:631 (213) - Change to k. Same reason as 00:40:631.
00:54:520 (258,259,260) - Change to ddk? This is just personal preference, though.
01:00:130 (308,309,310,311,312) - dkddk? The current pattern doesn't flow too well imo.
01:06:796 (369) - Too many k-heavy pattern imo. Maybe change this note to d?
00:59:463 (302,303,304,305,306) - dkddk? Same reason as 01:00:130.
01:07:963 (380) - Change to d?
01:06:796 (369) - d? Same reason as 01:06:796.
Hope this helps. Good luck with ranking this!