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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on October 9, 2017 at 6:18:31 PM

Artist: Akeboshi
Title: Wind
Source: NARUTO -ナルト-
Tags: naruto ending 1 one stoned town waindo
BPM: 174.97
Filesize: 4359kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.4 stars, 118 notes)
  2. Hard (2.63 stars, 244 notes)
  3. Hidden Leaf (3.31 stars, 286 notes)
  4. Normal (2.12 stars, 182 notes)


Download: Akeboshi - Wind
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Easy - Me
Normal - Me
Hard - Me
Insane - Me
Hitsounds - Me
Background - Found by Me
mp3 - Edited by Me
Song - Composed by Me
Anime - Created by Me
Naruto - Me_irl
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mapped and hitsounded by Monstrata Me
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ME!ME!ME! 😩💦👌
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raon lee's cover is better (??

01:21:601 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - nice pattern tho~
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Akeboshi = Akitoshi?
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the nostalgia~
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Omg Yes ! Please make it go for Ranked (=*o*=)
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ENGRISH

[unwind]
theres some slider end stacks that are off here and there, like 00:50:053 (1,2) -
00:06:843 (2) - i dont rly see the point in ncing this, since it makes more sense for 00:06:158 (1,1) - to be connected. you follow this at 01:10:285 (2,3) - and i feel its more appropriate
00:27:420 (5) - i found it really cool how you'd sometimes use a circle for this cymbal, then place the next object rather far away. maybe try that here? esp since (1) is strong from being the downbeat of a new phrase
01:04:798 (4) - you should make this a 1/1 slider to hit the note at 01:05:141 - , right now it feels empty
01:40:369 (4,1) - ew, the overlap on 1's tail doesnt look so nice
01:41:575 (1) - nc doesnt seem to fit here? you dont rly do it elsewhere

[hard]
01:16:457 (1,2,3,4) - was kinda hoping you'd do a more geometric pattern like you did at 01:13:058 (1,2,3,4) - :d
nothing else to say, solid diff

[normal]
00:07:188 (1,2,3) - i think the patterns you use in 00:27:763 (1,2,3) - fit much better in capturing the song
00:45:423 (2,3) - the 3/2 gap here was awkward as you didnt use such a gap since 00:14:046 (1,2,3) - , so it feels like that space needs to be filled up
01:04:798 (2) - like the insane, i dont see much of a reason to have only a 1/2 slider here in a section that follows the piano heavily

[easy]
01:43:436 (2) - space this further away from the previous slider? its a little too similar rn

good set, gl!
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osu! game by monstrata
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toybot wrote:

ENGRISH

[unwind]
theres some slider end stacks that are off here and there, like 00:50:053 (1,2) -
00:06:843 (2) - i dont rly see the point in ncing this, since it makes more sense for 00:06:158 (1,1) - to be connected. you follow this at 01:10:285 (2,3) - and i feel its more appropriate
00:27:420 (5) - i found it really cool how you'd sometimes use a circle for this cymbal, then place the next object rather far away. maybe try that here? esp since (1) is strong from being the downbeat of a new phrase
01:04:798 (4) - you should make this a 1/1 slider to hit the note at 01:05:141 - , right now it feels empty I used a 1/2 slider cuz thats where the drum ends. It's more like a pause here. I've hitsounded it accordingly too.
01:40:369 (4,1) - ew, the overlap on 1's tail doesnt look so nice
01:41:575 (1) - nc doesnt seem to fit here? you dont rly do it elsewhere

[hard]
01:16:457 (1,2,3,4) - was kinda hoping you'd do a more geometric pattern like you did at 01:13:058 (1,2,3,4) - :d I wanted a different movement here, also kinda hard to fit it in,. but yea i think triangles are fine xD.
nothing else to say, solid diff

[normal]
00:07:188 (1,2,3) - i think the patterns you use in 00:27:763 (1,2,3) - fit much better in capturing the song I think those patterns actually don't look that nice in Normal so i only use them when compromising with other patterns feels like theyre really neglecting certain sounds, or overmapping certain sounds that i feel should be empty or "staccato" with a holding component
00:45:423 (2,3) - the 3/2 gap here was awkward as you didnt use such a gap since 00:14:046 (1,2,3) - , so it feels like that space needs to be filled up
01:04:798 (2) - like the insane, i dont see much of a reason to have only a 1/2 slider here in a section that follows the piano heavily same as top diff.

[easy]
01:43:436 (2) - space this further away from the previous slider? its a little too similar rn

good set, gl!
Everything else was fixed, thanks a lot toybot~!
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top

  1. 01:03:084 (3,4) - stack is off
  2. 01:03:427 (4,1,2) - the spacing is a bit inconsistent because of the stack leniency of 2 , anyways, maybe add a tiny jump in 01:03:427 (4,1) - ?
  3. 01:33:603 (1,2) - fix the stack xd
  4. 01:44:627 (2) - reduce volume at the slider tick pls


hard

  1. 00:15:418 (4,1) - monstrata's stacks suck
  2. 00:32:221 (4,1) - xd
  3. 00:40:451 (3,5) - xd
  4. 01:40:721 (5) - no nc?


normal

  1. 01:20:228 (4) - offscreen with hr
  2. 01:13:058 (3) - unsnapped tail?


easy


  1. 01:13:058 (3) - check the slider tail snap
  2. 01:45:759 (1) - this is too much for an easy like really lol
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Natsu wrote:

top

  1. 01:03:084 (3,4) - stack is off
  2. 01:03:427 (4,1,2) - the spacing is a bit inconsistent because of the stack leniency of 2 , anyways, maybe add a tiny jump in 01:03:427 (4,1) - ? I think the way i arranged it theres a slight flowbreak between the slider that acts as the tiny point of emphasis. it's a really calm section so i don't really want to use spacing changes that often.
  3. 01:33:603 (1,2) - fix the stack xd
  4. 01:44:627 (2) - reduce volume at the slider tick pls


hard

  1. 00:15:418 (4,1) - monstrata's stacks suck
  2. 00:32:221 (4,1) - xd
  3. 00:40:451 (3,5) - xd
  4. 01:40:721 (5) - no nc?


normal

  1. 01:20:228 (4) - offscreen with hr ehh, o well. not offscreen on nomod so let me keep xD.
  2. 01:13:058 (3) - unsnapped tail?


easy


  1. 01:13:058 (3) - check the slider tail snap
  2. 01:45:759 (1) - this is too much for an easy like really lol
Fixed everything else, thanks Natsusito!
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ok
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t i m i n g
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hi

[General]
  1. tags:cultivate your hunger before you idealize
    what are these tags lmfao


Easy is fine

[Normal]
  1. 01:17:485 (4) - dangerously close to being offscreen, any chance you can move this up?
  2. 01:45:759 (1) - honestly you could probably increase SV here because of the bpm shift to a slower bpm and 1/8 snap, so beginners/casual players could at least make out the slider end a bit more clearly


[Hard]
  1. 01:41:894 (3) - why is there a clap here it sounds really out of place with the piano and the ritardando. also appears in Hidden Leaf btw


[Hidden Leaf]
  1. 00:22:448 - 00:24:162 - mmm what about mapping the drum ticks here? since you did it later on just wondering why you opted to ignore the ones here
  2. 01:07:199 - no break here either?


naruto did nothing wrong, dattebayo
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Doormat wrote:

[General]
  1. tags:cultivate your hunger before you idealize
    what are these tags lmfao
Motivate your anger to make them all realize
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Doormat wrote:

hi

[General]
  1. tags:cultivate your hunger before you idealize
    what are these tags lmfao


Removed them.
Easy is fine

[Normal]
  1. 01:17:485 (4) - dangerously close to being offscreen, any chance you can move this up? sure
  2. 01:45:759 (1) - honestly you could probably increase SV here because of the bpm shift to a slower bpm and 1/8 snap, so beginners/casual players could at least make out the slider end a bit more clearly i made it just a circle instead. so E/N is circle H/I is 1/8 slider which gives some balance


[Hard]
  1. 01:41:894 (3) - why is there a clap here it sounds really out of place with the piano and the ritardando. also appears in Hidden Leaf btw


[Hidden Leaf]
  1. 00:22:448 - 00:24:162 - mmm what about mapping the drum ticks here? since you did it later on just wondering why you opted to ignore the ones here I really prefer having that 1/1 gap, it just feels really good with the pause
  2. 01:07:199 - no break here either? yea. here and on hard i want there to be those follow point ticks. makes the pause kinda dramatic.


naruto did nothing wrong, dattebayo
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happy birthday, boruto's dad!

edit: forgot to include the icon, my bad ;w;
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Wrong time signature from 3/4 to 6/4 is a veto reason, but wrong offsets here is okay...
Happy Birthday Naruto :3
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