1. Easy (1.4 stars, 118 notes)
2. Hard (2.63 stars, 244 notes)
3. Hidden Leaf (3.31 stars, 286 notes)
4. Normal (2.12 stars, 182 notes)

toybot wrote:

ENGRISH

[unwind]
theres some slider end stacks that are off here and there, like 00:50:053 (1,2) -
00:06:843 (2) - i dont rly see the point in ncing this, since it makes more sense for 00:06:158 (1,1) - to be connected. you follow this at 01:10:285 (2,3) - and i feel its more appropriate
00:27:420 (5) - i found it really cool how you'd sometimes use a circle for this cymbal, then place the next object rather far away. maybe try that here? esp since (1) is strong from being the downbeat of a new phrase
01:04:798 (4) - you should make this a 1/1 slider to hit the note at 01:05:141 - , right now it feels empty I used a 1/2 slider cuz thats where the drum ends. It's more like a pause here. I've hitsounded it accordingly too.
01:40:369 (4,1) - ew, the overlap on 1's tail doesnt look so nice
01:41:575 (1) - nc doesnt seem to fit here? you dont rly do it elsewhere

[hard]
01:16:457 (1,2,3,4) - was kinda hoping you'd do a more geometric pattern like you did at 01:13:058 (1,2,3,4) - :d I wanted a different movement here, also kinda hard to fit it in,. but yea i think triangles are fine xD.
nothing else to say, solid diff

[normal]
00:07:188 (1,2,3) - i think the patterns you use in 00:27:763 (1,2,3) - fit much better in capturing the song I think those patterns actually don't look that nice in Normal so i only use them when compromising with other patterns feels like theyre really neglecting certain sounds, or overmapping certain sounds that i feel should be empty or "staccato" with a holding component
00:45:423 (2,3) - the 3/2 gap here was awkward as you didnt use such a gap since 00:14:046 (1,2,3) - , so it feels like that space needs to be filled up
01:04:798 (2) - like the insane, i dont see much of a reason to have only a 1/2 slider here in a section that follows the piano heavily same as top diff.

[easy]
01:43:436 (2) - space this further away from the previous slider? its a little too similar rn

good set, gl!

1. 01:03:084 (3,4) - stack is off
2. 01:03:427 (4,1,2) - the spacing is a bit inconsistent because of the stack leniency of 2 , anyways, maybe add a tiny jump in 01:03:427 (4,1) - ?
3. 01:33:603 (1,2) - fix the stack xd
4. 01:44:627 (2) - reduce volume at the slider tick pls

1. 00:15:418 (4,1) - monstrata's stacks suck
2. 00:32:221 (4,1) - xd
3. 00:40:451 (3,5) - xd
4. 01:40:721 (5) - no nc?

1. 01:20:228 (4) - offscreen with hr
2. 01:13:058 (3) - unsnapped tail?

1. 01:13:058 (3) - check the slider tail snap
2. 01:45:759 (1) - this is too much for an easy like really lol
   

Natsu wrote:

top

1. 01:03:084 (3,4) - stack is off
2. 01:03:427 (4,1,2) - the spacing is a bit inconsistent because of the stack leniency of 2 , anyways, maybe add a tiny jump in 01:03:427 (4,1) - ? I think the way i arranged it theres a slight flowbreak between the slider that acts as the tiny point of emphasis. it's a really calm section so i don't really want to use spacing changes that often.
3. 01:33:603 (1,2) - fix the stack xd
4. 01:44:627 (2) - reduce volume at the slider tick pls

hard

1. 00:15:418 (4,1) - monstrata's stacks suck
2. 00:32:221 (4,1) - xd
3. 00:40:451 (3,5) - xd
4. 01:40:721 (5) - no nc?

normal

1. 01:20:228 (4) - offscreen with hr ehh, o well. not offscreen on nomod so let me keep xD.
2. 01:13:058 (3) - unsnapped tail?

easy

1. 01:13:058 (3) - check the slider tail snap
2. 01:45:759 (1) - this is too much for an easy like really lol
   

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   what are these tags lmfao

1. 01:17:485 (4) - dangerously close to being offscreen, any chance you can move this up?
2. 01:45:759 (1) - honestly you could probably increase SV here because of the bpm shift to a slower bpm and 1/8 snap, so beginners/casual players could at least make out the slider end a bit more clearly

1. 01:41:894 (3) - why is there a clap here it sounds really out of place with the piano and the ritardando. also appears in Hidden Leaf btw

1. 00:22:448 - 00:24:162 - mmm what about mapping the drum ticks here? since you did it later on just wondering why you opted to ignore the ones here
2. 01:07:199 - no break here either?

Doormat wrote:

[General]

1. tags:cultivate your hunger before you idealize

   what are these tags lmfao

Doormat wrote:

hi

[General]

1. tags:cultivate your hunger before you idealize

   what are these tags lmfao

Removed them.
Easy is fine

[Normal]

1. 01:17:485 (4) - dangerously close to being offscreen, any chance you can move this up? sure
2. 01:45:759 (1) - honestly you could probably increase SV here because of the bpm shift to a slower bpm and 1/8 snap, so beginners/casual players could at least make out the slider end a bit more clearly i made it just a circle instead. so E/N is circle H/I is 1/8 slider which gives some balance

[Hard]

1. 01:41:894 (3) - why is there a clap here it sounds really out of place with the piano and the ritardando. also appears in Hidden Leaf btw

[Hidden Leaf]

1. 00:22:448 - 00:24:162 - mmm what about mapping the drum ticks here? since you did it later on just wondering why you opted to ignore the ones here I really prefer having that 1/1 gap, it just feels really good with the pause
2. 01:07:199 - no break here either? yea. here and on hard i want there to be those follow point ticks. makes the pause kinda dramatic.

naruto did nothing wrong, dattebayo