1. Ataraxia's Easy (1,4 stars, 33 notes)
2. Bread Paradise (4,62 stars, 121 notes)
3. Hard (2,81 stars, 87 notes)
4. Light Insane (3,95 stars, 108 notes)
5. Marianna's Insane (4,6 stars, 142 notes)
6. Shaxter's Advanced (2,39 stars, 72 notes)
7. Shunao's Normal (2,19 stars, 76 notes)

Mapset

Bread Paradise - me
Marianna's Insane - Marianna
Light Insane - me
Hard - me
Shaxter's Advanced - ShadowX and_MasterTSP
Shunao's Normal - Shunao
Ataraxia's Easy - Ataraxia

victorfernando wrote:

oi vou moddar em BR mesmo

Hard

1. 00:04:080 (1) (2) stack ?
2. 00:06:756 talvez assim
3. 00:21:513 bota o slider reverse até no tick azul tem um som aqui
4. (minha opnião) 00:22:405 você pode tentar botar um blanket aqui
5. 00:23:216 ^

e so mais uma coisa no light insane podia ser blanket aqui 00:14:459

All Fixed Thanks For Modding

victorfernando wrote:

oi vou moddar em BR mesmo

Que's Easy

1. Distance snap it's to big for easy , use 1.0 instead 1.2 i wanted a slow slider velocity and 1.2x keeps the notes close and also prevents notes from overlapping each other.
2. Re-align the map with the setting I mentioned ^
3. 00:02:459 ctrl+g ?
4. 00:07:648 do this slider better
5. 00:08:945 ^
6. 00:26:945 spinner ends here

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General:

Easy:

_MasterTSP wrote:

Easy:

In a nutshell, the map has a lot of blank spaces, yes, this is an easy difficulty, but a little bit of slider management here and there would make the map a lot more enjoyable to play.
Another thing to say is that, on top of the Blank spaces, there is inconsistency. This is unacceptable for Newbie-Oriented diffs, this confuses the crap out of them.

Example of inconsistency:

00:01:162 (1,2,3) - There are parts with no blank spaces
00:02:459 (3,1) - Blank Space
00:06:351 (1,2,1) - Parts that fill the 1/1 BSD Completely
00:08:945 (1,2) - Blank Space
00:10:242 (2,3,1) - Full 1/1

And basicly the rest of the map is filled with blank spaces.



What I Recommend you to do:

- Set the BSD to 1/1
- With the BSD set to 1/1, start using more beats to make the map sound/play better. (Still, there are some not so important beats that you should ignore, this is still an Easy diff after all)
- Easy difficulties need to be completely consistent (and boring), that means, the map must stay almost aways following the same note Rhythm. Don't be afraid to do this, actually, just do this.

- And finally remap. Or maybe not, the map aesthetic and distancing is good, just the note rhythm and consistency that is bad, you could just re-arrange some sliderd for the new notes, or if you want to remap, the music is only 30 seconds, so it wouldn't be such big hassle lol.



Note: Easy difficulties are NOT actually Boring for new players, they actually find this difficult, and when then finally pass it, they fill with hapiness, then start to move on to Normals, Hards, etc.
Easy difficulties are an essential thing to newcomers, and should not be despised, even if it's boring.

P.S: I'm not saying that anyone does this, I'm just stating that Low star difficulties are an essential thing both for the map and community!

x Arow wrote:

Easy

00:07:648 (2) - move slider back to red tick and maybe put circle after it

00:10:242 (2) - slider to white tick, circle 1 beat earlier reworked this rhythm with the mod above

00:12:837 (2) - back to red tick
00:15:432 (2) - back to red tick, put circle at 00:16:405 (3) - . I'd make this slider normal instead of reverse. merged some changes with the mod above
00:17:702 - circle here or
or
00:19:324 (1) - 1 tick longer and change shape
00:20:459 (2) - back to red tick
00:21:107 (3) - there should be a slider
00:23:053 (1) - back to red tick
00:24:513 (1) - move start to 00:25:810 - and map empty space was reworked with mod above

Good luck!

_MasterTSP wrote:

Well, because people complain about ANYTHING, I made a new extended MP3 file. With a longer drain time (27 > 33) (Yes, there were complaints about 3 seconds being under the 30s M.)

Because there is now an inaudible joint, I'll time the multiple non-inherit sections that need to be done to make the timing "perfect".

So I need for you to hold on until I finish setting up everything.

Thanks Maxter Senpai <3

Ali- wrote:

from my mod q, ill do my best

[Bread Paradise]

00:10:371 (1) - this spacing here is very counter-intuitive, most emphasized sound in the jump but least spacing Ok
00:08:750 (4) - if this circle were more to the right the jump would look a lot better imo Fixed
00:16:858 (1,2) - maybe a blanket on the slider end would be better, but it looks rankable as is, no biggie i'll leave it as it is
00:26:912 (1,4) - consider overlapping these two? Ok
00:31:128 (1) - flow is suddenly changed with this slider. having it pointed horizontally would be a lot more smooth Fixed

gl with the rank <3 Thanks For Modding

1. offset I find is -14
2. 00:06:480 - delete new Timing Point
3. did the kiai end is right?

Nice map good luck~!

Franklin_DeJavu wrote:

Hi~! ^^

From Team Frontline Modding Queue


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

1. did the kiai end is right? okay, it was changed.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


[Shaxter's Advanced]
00:20:425 (3,1) - too far
00:26:750 (3) - this slider change the end at 00:27:074 - Fixed
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[Hard]
00:06:313 (4,1) - too far Fixed
00:11:182 (4,5,1) - same^ this is too far. some player will get combo break maybe xD ^
00:13:777 (3) - head reverse slider not good put at red line. ^
00:17:993 (1,2,4) - ^ ^
00:26:912 (4,1) - too far ^
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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why the bg so cute xD lol
Nice map good luck~!

Thanks For Modding

Reynolduh wrote:

hihi M4M reply coming through!!

[*Hard]00:18:804 (3) - Delete this maybe cause there's no sound on it? Ok

BTW, idk about the kiai endung time tbh. i felt like it should have lasted till 00:32:263 - Fixed


Thanks For Modding

WhozChaos wrote:

Shaxter's Advanced

make curve slider be the same across the map so it looks nice
00:02:907 (2) - ctrl+g Nop,will break the flow
00:03:231 (3) - ^ ^
00:03:556 (4) - ^ ^
00:26:750 (3) - ^ Ok
00:30:317 (2) - ctrl+h ^
00:31:128 (1) - make it nicer ^

Thanks for modding

WhozChaos wrote:

Shaxter's Advanced

00:19:452 (2) - rotate this it doesn't look nice when its parallel to 00:18:966 (1) - maybe by like 45 - IMO that would look kinda bad, but I reworked it
00:21:236 (1) - terra bad curve slider - Added Blanket

WhozChaos wrote:

maki's Normal

00:01:934 (2) - 1/4 slider kick? I think not, better not worth it
00:02:421 (3) - circle Here comes a long sound, better slider
00:07:128 (2,3,4,5) - ^^ ^
00:23:344 (4) - end this slider here 00:23:669 (5) - Remap this part
00:23:831 (5) - move slider here
00:24:317 (6) - circle hmm, not need
00:27:236 (1) - blanket this on slider end of 00:25:777 (4) - I did not initially make it, and I do not see the point
00:29:831 (1) - map this spinner
00:32:425 (1) - spinner here oki

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PeterEU wrote:

advanced

00:03:880 (1) - too close to previous would make this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9102094 Ok
00:31:128 (1) - same as before Ok

hard

00:28:209 (3) - looks off to previous Ok
00:31:615 (2) - ^ Ok

Light insane

00:12:155 (2) - looks off to previous slider Hm, No
00:20:750 (1) - looks off to this 00:20:101 (3) - ^

Thanks For Modding

PeterEU wrote:

advanced

00:17:669 (5) - place this somewhere else - Rearranged a bunch of notes to fix this.

1. Use custom colors

1. I suggest reducing the spacing in the entire section before the pre-kiai jumps 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7)
2. Lower SV is nice to reflect the relative calmness in this section but the spacing is pretty much the same as the kiai. Would be nice if we could create a distinction between the two.
3. It would make 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) stand out a lot more too if we go from small spacing to gradually bigger kiai spacing.

Botan wrote:

1. Use custom colors

Pan ParadiseChange the difficulty name to Pan Paradise.

1. I suggest reducing the spacing in the entire section before the pre-kiai jumps 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) Ok
2. Lower SV is nice to reflect the relative calmness in this section but the spacing is pretty much the same as the kiai. Would be nice if we could create a distinction between the two.
3. It would make 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) stand out a lot more too if we go from small spacing to gradually bigger kiai spacing.

00:02:421 (1) - This is one ugly looking slider (not symmetrical) Fix it. Fixed
00:07:615 (1) - Same as ^ ^
00:14:588 (2,3) - CTRL + G these, that way we'll click on both vocal hits. ^
00:23:344 (1) - Same as ^ ^
00:28:534 (1) - Same as ^ ^
For the most part I am okay with the objects used in the kiai but I would maybe reduce the spacing during the calmer parts in the kiai for the same reasons above. Audibly there are moments where the song's intensity dies down a bit only to then spike up again but the equal large spacing for the entire kiai doesn't emphasize that as well as it could. Map is a bit messy though.

Thanks For Modding

Kisses wrote:

top diff

1. 00:18:317 (2,3) - delete clap
2. 00:18:479 (3) - add whistle
3. 00:25:452 (4,1) - the spacing between these objects is quite low. This is such an emphatic part of the song and the low spacing doesn't do it justice
4. 00:32:263 (7) - An NC would give a bit more hp before the spinner; which would be nice

All Fixed, Thanks for Modding

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Kisses wrote:

Easy

1. 00:27:236 (1,2,3,4) - I think you'd follow a lot more of the vocals by having these as 2 3/2 reverse sliders https://i.imgur.com/b94PzYI.png
2. 00:29:831 (1) - it would fit the song more to end this at 00:33:561 or 00:33:398 . Or you could you use the same ending as top diff

w

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1. 00:02:421 (1,2) - I think you should use less spacing here just because it's almost as big as 00:01:934 (2,1) - this one. Sound is the same with 00:01:286 (1,2) - this so i prefer use here similar spacing.
2. 00:03:231 (3) - This one should be less spaced from previous slider because of reason above
3. 00:10:209 (7,1) - This spacing should be bigger, if u have used high spacing 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - here, you should use higher spacing 00:10:209 (7,1) - here because sound is more important in music
4. 00:18:317 (2,3,4) - back'n'forth pattern doesn't work well here cuz sound 00:18:642 (4) - here is stronger than previous ones

Venix wrote:

last diff.

1. 00:02:421 (1,2) - I think you should use less spacing here just because it's almost as big as 00:01:934 (2,1) - this one. Sound is the same with 00:01:286 (1,2) - this so i prefer use here similar spacing.
2. 00:03:231 (3) - This one should be less spaced from previous slider because of reason above
3. 00:10:209 (7,1) - This spacing should be bigger, if u have used high spacing 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - here, you should use higher spacing 00:10:209 (7,1) - here because sound is more important in music
4. 00:18:317 (2,3,4) - back'n'forth pattern doesn't work well here cuz sound 00:18:642 (4) - here is stronger than previous ones

Also I think kiai should be a bit shorter cuz actually it's 3/4 of song

All Fixed Thanks For Modding

kwk wrote:

q
~
top diff seems ok
[light insane]
00:19:777 (2,3) - swap rhythm around fits vocals better since atm 3 doesnt really represent anything
00:25:452 (4,1) - feels like it should be spaced more since 00:25:128 (3,4) - has more spacing for some reason
00:26:912 (4) - i know theres a beat on the last tick but i think its better for playability if you only had 1 repeat, since the jump to the next note is quite far
00:27:561 (2,3) - maybe stack this onto the slider head? dont think you should be forcing the blanket since the flow isnt very good
~

All Fixed, Thanks For Modding

SuperCSGO wrote:

Hello!

From my queue.

(wew, that's a lot of diffs)

Hard

00:01:286 (1,2) - Angling the slider slightly more towards the reverse slider's head would make for better flow.
00:06:480 (1,2) - ^

All Fixed

Looks good other than that!

GL, HF!

Thanks For Modding

kwk wrote:

q
~
top diff seems ok
[Maxter's Insane]
00:06:480 (1) - extend this out the red tick? the current beat here 00:06:966 (2) - isnt that important imo and doing this way will give you more contrast for 00:07:128 (3,4) - since that contains the melody
Applied, Sounds better.

00:10:696 (1,2) - why is the spacing here suddenly so low lol, im guessing it was like this before? better to have it like this http://puu.sh/xI7zC/77b547af6b.png.
Actually it was distanced like this, but because my diff was surpassing the last diff, Shadow tweaked some distances.


00:11:669 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - hmm im having a bit of trouble figuring out what your following, are you prioritising the vocals? To me it just looks like your filling in beats but they dont actually represent anything. If you want to follow the vocals more closely whiile respecting the background something like this would be good imo http://puu.sh/xI7ND/e08e310e03.png
Hm, yeah, I can see your point and I actually agree with it, some tweaks are necessary. I was following the background while respecting vocals like ya said, but it ended up looking like a complete clusterfuck w/o meaning, I made some tweaks.


00:15:074 (4,1,2) - main problem here is 00:15:398 - is rather stressed, but its not clickable but this 00:15:723 - has no backing but its clickable?
I made it like this to respect the vocal line too, it gets it's "clickability" from the vocal line, wich gives strength to the weak beat, but the reverse right there I'll make some changes, it really needs improvement.

try this out http://puu.sh/xI7QQ/6019e0c3ec.png similar thing happens here 00:16:696 (1,2) - where 2 is clickable but 00:16:858 - isnt. i'll stop mentioning the rhythm things cause it happens throughout your map but i suggest you go over your rhythming,maybe have a look at the top diff for ideas
00:17:831 - on the otherhand why isnt this clickable when theres a drum hit lol
HAHAHA I actually remember this, I was extremely angry with the offset not matching up correctly, the circle only matches the beat when like this https://puu.sh/xIUZu/06505ef7c4.png, so I just let it like this, I agree, this empty space gives me the shivers too xD

~

YelloJello wrote:

From my queue I'll Nm your map since I dont have a full set yet.

Shaxter's Advanced
Spacing feels too weird on:
• 00:05:988 (3,4) - and maybe the slider before them OK
• 00:10:371 (1,2,3,1) - ?
• 00:19:452 (2) - ^?
• 00:07:128 (2) - And some others that im iffy about. Ok
• 00:30:804 (3,1) - Can be blanketed better. ^
• 00:11:020 (3) - I can't hear a sound on the sliderend worth emphasizing, pull it back two ticks. l'll think about it

Hard
• 00:06:313 (4) - Increase spacing. Fixed
• 00:07:128 (2) - Same here. ^
• 00:11:182 (4,5) - 1/4 jump is a bad idea in what a borderline 2 star map, and lone 1/4 sliders are even harder, remap this bit. ^
• 00:26:912 (4) - The extra tick is unexpected and will throw players off course, pulling it back a tick won't hurt.^
• 00:28:209 (3,1,2) - Blanket better.^

Light Insane

• 00:05:988 (3,4) - Stack these to make them easier to read (actually do this for every time i mentioned this same exact spot prior) Ok


Thanks For Modding

1. 00:01:286 - 00:09:074 - The whistle here sounds very strange
   It is a good feeling to try using the default soft whistle according to the sound of the bell of the song

1. 00:02:421 - Add finish
2. 00:03:069 - remove whistle
   It does not match the song. Sounds very strange
3. 00:03:394 (3) - Additions Drum finish?
4. 00:06:480 (1) - 00:08:101 (2) - 2/1 slider is better
   00:01:286 (1,2) - I think it's the same rhythm
5. 00:18:642 - You should pick up the loud noise here
6. 00:29:831 (1) - This spinner is very long
   00:32:263 - So far you should pick up the sound properly

1. 00:08:263 (5,6) - I think this rhythm is difficult for beginners
   00:08:263 - 00:08:588 - 1/1 slider 00:08:750 - Add circle is better
2. 00:09:561 (2) - The rhythm is very strange
   00:09:561 - Put a circle here, 1/2 slider is good
3. 00:11:669 - 00:32:263 - Your rhythm is very strange
   1. Have you picked up the song rhythm?
   2. Have you picked up the sound according to the vocal?
   However, your rhythm is not consistent because 1 and 2 are mixed
   The consistency of the rhythm is very important as the beginner plays Normal
4. 00:32:425 (1) - I think the end of the spinner is here 00:33:561 -

1. Advanced is a diff to fill the difference when there is a big difference in Hard's Normal
   I do not think there is a big difference in this mapset. I think this diff is the most dangerous in each difficulty level
   This diff is not uniform in distance. I think that it is better to check the distances of other Advanced objects.

1. 00:11:182 (4,1) - This distance is not very good in Hard
2. 00:18:317 (2,3,4) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
3. 00:26:344 - There is no sound here
4. 00:27:723 (2,2,3) - Why is the rhythm different?

1. 00:08:588 (3,4,1) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
   00:08:588 (3,4) - It might be better to bring it closer
2. 00:11:182 (1) - Remove NC
   Just like Hard
3. 00:12:804 (1) - Why is the difference between hard and rhythm?
   I think hard rhythm is good
4. 00:25:452 (4) - Ctrl+G is better?
5. 00:26:344 - Hard some
6. 00:30:966 (2,1) - It would be better to increase the distance to express a big sound
7. 00:31:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - It is almost the same place as Hard and it has the same rhythm so please change it slightly. lol

Yasaija 714 wrote:

M4M

Shogun's Normal

1. 00:08:263 (5,6) - I think this rhythm is difficult for beginners
   00:08:263 - 00:08:588 - 1/1 slider 00:08:750 - Add circle is better
2. 00:09:561 (2) - The rhythm is very strange
   00:09:561 - Put a circle here, 1/2 slider is good
3. 00:11:669 - 00:32:263 - Your rhythm is very strange i follow drums in the background
   1. Have you picked up the song rhythm?
   2. Have you picked up the sound according to the vocal?
   However, your rhythm is not consistent because 1 and 2 are mixed
   The consistency of the rhythm is very important as the beginner plays Normal
4. 00:32:425 (1) - I think the end of the spinner is here 00:33:561 -

In English it can not be explained in great detail so there may be places I do not understand
Good luck!

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Yasaija 714 wrote:

M4M
General

• 
  
  Hard
  

1. 00:11:182 (4,1) - This distance is not very good in Hard
2. 00:18:317 (2,3,4) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
3. 00:26:344 - There is no sound here
4. 00:27:723 (2,2,3) - Why is the rhythm different?

Light Insane

1. 00:08:588 (3,4,1) - Because the distance seems to be the same, there is a possibility of causing misunderstanding
   00:08:588 (3,4) - It might be better to bring it closer
2. 00:11:182 (1) - Remove NC
   Just like Hard
3. 00:12:804 (1) - Why is the difference between hard and rhythm?
   I think hard rhythm is good
4. 00:25:452 (4) - Ctrl+G is better?
5. 00:26:344 - Hard some
6. 00:30:966 (2,1) - It would be better to increase the distance to express a big sound
7. 00:31:128 (1,2,3,4,5) - It is almost the same place as Hard and it has the same rhythm so please change it slightly. lol

In English it can not be explained in great detail so there may be places I do not understand XD
Good luck!Thanks and All Fixed

Thanks For Modding

OsuDans wrote:

Hi Hi Hi!!, Here from My Modding queue

Light Insane

00:01:934 (2) - Ctrl + G? Nop :/

I do not think there is a need for Kudosu
this is perfect for me GL!!!

Thanks For Modding

Yasaija 714 wrote:

M4M

Ataraxia's Easy

1. 00:02:421 - Add finish Sure
2. 00:03:069 - remove whistle Think not, because the hitsound match with the music
   It does not match the song. Sounds very strange maybe its a drum toon, but its not necessary to use other hitsound if the whistle do that perfectly
3. 00:03:394 (3) - Additions Drum finish? yes its cool
4. 00:06:480 (1) - 00:08:101 (2) - 2/1 slider is better but the tonality is different, if i use the same patten, its not gonna fit correctly just because the "bell(?)" sound has great than 00:01:286 (1,2) -
   00:01:286 (1,2) - I think it's the same rhythm eh... ^
5. 00:18:642 - You should pick up the loud noise here i don't understand so much, but i want to follow the drum anyway, if i need to follow vocal, i think the map just could be bad to play because its 1/2 pattens need, since easy need the maximum of 1/1 possible
6. 00:29:831 (1) - This spinner is very long the long the better to a novice play follow and don't miss xD
   00:32:263 - So far you should pick up the sound properly Not necessary, the spinner Finishing match with the final moment of the music

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Dustinati wrote:

Nice

easy

This is the only diff that doesn't have the Kiai section, please add Ok

HARD

00:26:588 (3,4) - add the blue ticks?? Nop

LIGHT insane

00:18:317 (2,3) - why not spread out more for more emphasize since LOUd noise Ok
00:26:588 (3,4) - add blue ticks??????????????????????????????????? Nop

Thanks For Modding

SST SnowTiger wrote:

Shogun's Normal
I would think of remapping this too. huh

SST SnowTiger wrote:

Bread Paradise
00:03:231 (3,4,5,6)- Stack (3) and (5) at the location of (3) because both represent the bells while (4) and (6) represent drums. It will increase the difficulty a little bit though. What you do with (6) is your stuff, but it could get the same DS as it is from (3) to (4). Something like THIS or maybe something like THIS. It would look and represent the music better.
00:10:209 (7,2)- Stack (7) on the end of the slider (2). It's an overlap.
00:19:452 (1)- This slider doesnt end on a note. I would use a 1/2 slider instead of a 3/4 slider. Especially because it is the only 3/4 slider you used in this map.
00:23:344 (1,3)- Stack (3) on the end of the slider (1) to prevent the overlap.
That's it for this difficulty. Good job! Well designed.♥

Light Insane
I wouldn't change anything.♥

Hard
00:31:128 (1,5)- Place (5) on the end of the slider (1) to prevent overlap again.
Gj.♥


All Fixed Thanks For Modding

Brajaan313 wrote:

M4M

[Bread Paradise]

00:03:231 (3,4,5,6) - this spacing change is not needed because the music doesn't have that much of a change there yes, the music picks up more "intensity" in that part so I made those jumps

00:05:988 (3) - maybe a bit closer to green slider? because after slider (2) is the same spacing as (3) to (4) OK?

00:09:885 (5,6,7) - wouldn't a inverted triangle fit more here? Fix

00:12:155 (3,4) - it goes into different directions which makes flow not work here a bit unless it is intentional then it's fine Intentional

00:26:912 (1,2,3,4,1) - maybe a slight curve would be more aesthetical?Ok


Thanks For Modding!

• General

1. In bread paradise I do not see a reason for such 7 hp tbh --> lower it down to 6 or 6.5 at least seems more reasonable imo (Although I don't pay much attention to 30s maps)
2. Ok Also in Maxter Insane is also 7 hp and whilst Marianna's Insane is 6.2 - For the sake of consistency if you are not going to change above - at least change Maxter Insane to hp 6
3. Maxter Insane od be better off as just 8
4. Turn off Widescreen support on all difficulties

• Bread Paradise

1. 00:21:236 (2) - pretty minor but I feel it it better if you curve the slider end a bit more toward the right

• Light Insane

1. 00:02:421 (1) - just being a bit picky but can this be less curve at the top - not too much but it just look a bit weird as is but no need to change if you don't wish to.

• Maxter's Insane
  
  In general, I feel it should be polish some more all around and some patterns needs some more work before consider ready for rank since it feel sorta of random (this is just me rabbling - the map looks pretty ok for the most part tbh so please don't take above personal)

1. 00:01:286 (1) - this would look better imo if bring the head of the slider up some more
2. 00:02:096 (2,3,4) - ok this is a bit weird --> I feel to say that you giving emphasis on (3) and I don't hear any strong beat (like the bell or the drum) whilst (2) you gave little emphasis and so onto 4 - You are giving more emphasis to the weak beat in the background here which doesn't truly describe what are you following here - like here 00:03:069 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - although I don't like the pattern design much - I do see more clearly what you are following than what you are before this
3. 00:06:313 (8) - (Nazi) can you please move this up a little so wouldn't being touching the slider XD
4. 00:16:696 (1) - eh not sure what you are trying to emphasis here - the vocals and the finish is much stronger on the white tick here 00:16:858 - (which is also a good starting place for a nc) but you have not make this clickable which I really felt it should be more than what is now - others time you didn't ignore the fact that the vocals or finish needed to be emphasize like here for an example 00:14:263 (1) - so I don't see how this could be any different as it just inconsistent to me

-Aerith- wrote:

NM FROM MY QUEUE ~

Ataraxia's Easy

-00:13:615 you forgot to add whistle in here lol Ok
-00:18:804 add whistle OK

Yup Looks Good to me , GOOD LUCK ~~

Hailie wrote:

From my queue ~ Giving a short mod - Note - This is me being picky and somewhat of a nazi atm

• General

1. In bread paradise I do not see a reason for such 7 hp tbh --> lower it down to 6 or 6.5 at least seems more reasonable imo (Although I don't pay much attention to 30s maps) Ok
2. Ok Also in Maxter Insane is also 7 hp and whilst Marianna's Insane is 6.2 - For the sake of consistency if you are not going to change above - at least change Maxter Insane to hp 6
3. Maxter Insane od be better off as just 8
4. Turn off Widescreen support on all difficulties

• Bread Paradise

1. 00:21:236 (2) - pretty minor but I feel it it better if you curve the slider end a bit more toward the right Ok

• Light Insane

1. 00:02:421 (1) - just being a bit picky but can this be less curve at the top - not too much but it just look a bit weird as is but no need to change if you don't wish to. Ok

GL on ya map Thanks For Modding

Pozy wrote:

[Bread Paradise]

00:01:934 (2) - delete slider and replace it with a tiangle like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531417 i think it's best to reverse slider
00:07:128 (2) - same here like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531419^ same

Thanks For Modding

Brajaan313 wrote:

[Marianna's Insane]

00:02:421 (1) - this slider ends on red tick where the music has a strong sound on white tick. maybe change it? for me its fine

00:03:231 - add a circle why?

00:08:263 (2) - move this circle to 00:08:101 because there is a strong sound for single circle i'm not following this sound

00:27:479 (1) - no hitsound on end of slider? nope

Pozy wrote:

[Marianna's Insane]
00:02:421 (1,2,3,4) - reshape this slider a little better than i did Xd and do as following: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531432 no lol
00:08:101 (2) - add a circle here like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9531436 this looks bad
00:10:696 (3,1) - maybe add a circle here and stack it over the slider? ?

Nekoraw wrote:

m4m dos brodi
meu mapa: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/679698

Shaxter's Advanced
Para o Shadow:
- 00:31:777 (2) - eu removeria o whistle daqui porque esse não importa quantas vezes eu tente ouvir a música, não consigo entender qual ritmo ele tá seguindo, ou então deletar o slider e fazer um círculo em 00:31:939 Vou pensar sobre isto

Hard
- 00:11:020 (3,4) - o flow entre esses dois objects ta meio estranho, eu daria um ctrl+g no 00:11:182 (4) - e moveria um pouco para cima https://puu.sh/ylTAC/2e405da357.png Ok

Light Insane
- eu achei estranho começar os jumps e vir dois sliders 00:09:723 (4,5) - quebrando um pouco o flow do mapa, eu transformaria os sliders em círculos, não muito separados, mas pelo menos de uma maneira que seja agradável de mirar e acertar eles OK, irei colocar jumps
- 00:22:047 (1) - eu colocaria ele um pouco mais pra baixo, pra evitar missread Ok
- 00:26:588 (3) - acho que foi de propósito mas ficou meio estranho esse slider 00:26:588 (3) - não ter whistle e esse ter 00:26:912 (4) - , btw eu aumentaria o reverse do 00:26:588 (3) - em 1 tick Ok


Bread Paradise
- 00:31:128 (1) - acho que mover o tail desse slider um pouco pra esquerda seria mais daora de jogar https://puu.sh/ylUmr/e86a608f56.png Eu acho que não, ficaria estranho na jogabilidade :<

esse mapset é bem completo na minha opnião, jaja vira mapa de farm kek XD

Obrigado pelo mod

Nekoraw wrote:

m4m dos brodi

Shogun's Normal
- i think there is a lot of overlaps in this diff and it will be hard to new players do read this, i would at least change the stack leniency to get easier to read :v

EMachine03 wrote:

From #modreqs
(Warning: I haven't modded a beatmap in about a year, so if this mod sucks please don't get mad at me)
Normal:
00:03:069 (4,5,6) - Comment: I understand that these notes are being matched up to the drums, but the drums are barely audible in the song. I actually had to retry this part a few times to get the rhythms down. You can keep these notes like this, but I would recommend matching them up to the chimes, especially considering that this is a normal difficulty. You don't have to follow this one, it's just something I felt while playtesting.
00:12:642 (3) - Add a clap here.
00:15:236 (3) - ^
00:26:263 (5,6) - Add claps to both sliders to fit previous hitsound style.
Overall, pretty solid difficulty. Good work.

Over all, this is a pretty solid mapset. I hope to see this ranked. Thanks.

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-Only Camellia- wrote:

Hello! from #Modreqs.
Bread Paradise
00:22:047 (1,2) - It's uncomfortable going from that slider to the next one , I would recommend using ctrl + h on that part. ok,I left this part with a more comfortable movement

The entire Mapset looks good , good luck Thanks For Modding

siwu320 wrote:

Hi~ From my queue

Hard

1. 00:06:313 (4) - Prefer overlap with 00:06:480 (1) at the slider start
2. 00:15:561 (1,2) - Check blanket here

All Fixed, Thanks for Modding

siwu320 wrote:

Hi~ From my queue

Unrankable issues will be marked in red fonts

Maxter

1. 00:15:398 (5) - nc? - Alraro!
2. 00:16:696 (1) - Here, may be better if replaced with a note and two 1/2 sliders after that, seems more natural - Alraro!

Also nc part from 00:16:696 (1) is a bit weird for me idk why - I kept this, but I found a NC before this one that was plain unnecessary, so thank you :>

Very nice mapset! GL~

siwu320 wrote:

Hi~ From my queue

Unrankable issues will be marked in red fonts

Normal

1. 00:14:912 (2,3) - This may be a bit confusing for new players I think i don't think so, it's work well :v

Very nice mapset! GL~

1. 00:07:615 (1) - Compare this to 00:02:421 (1) - spacing seems surprisingly large yet the song as kept the same intensity. ctrl+g 1 because I think it would make it more consistent.
2. 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think having all of these claps at the same volume doesn't fit the slowly rising intensity. I suggest placing green lines at 00:09:398 - 00:09:723 - 00:10:047 - 40, 55, 70 volume respectively.
3. 00:11:669 (1,2) - To me this looks like a bit difficult to play. The stream and 1 was following a clockwise direction, but it switches to counter-clockwise on 2 which is the weaker sound compared to 1. When you switch the direction of your circular flow on weak sounds it feels unnatural, so that's why I think it would play better if the pattern was arranged in a way that incorporates circular motion. https://puu.sh/yzC9q/6d5b1d79a6.jpg
4. 00:14:263 (1,2) - Similar to above, I feel like the direction of flow should switch on stronger sounds to better compliment the music.
5. 00:19:939 (3,4) - I think this rhythm doesn't fit here because there isn't 2 distinct sounds that could be represented by 2 clicks. I think a 3/4 slider fits better as the sound here you could map is the vocal. https://puu.sh/yzCxE/fd758288c9.png

1. 00:08:263 (2,3) - I think you should map the bell here as that is louder than the subtle beats mapped with 2-3. You mapped it at 00:08:750 (4) - so I think it would be more consistent and readable if it was mapped in the first point.
2. 00:10:858 (1) - Because you used the same NC pattern for this note as done with the 1/2 rhythm at 00:09:723 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - this 2/1 gap might be misread as 1/2 distance. I think if you want to contrast this better you can create an antijump by stacking the notes like https://puu.sh/yzCYK/e10eb1c0fd.jpg in the pic I applied a .5x sv to the slider because I thought it fit the rising vibe and flowwed into the stream better.
3. 00:22:047 - From here to 00:25:696 - You use a perfectly vertical / horizontal structure. There's actually a misalignment at 00:22:534 (3) - but the rest of the notes included in this time frame were perfectly horizontal or vertical, which I think is odd because the song hasn't changed much and we're used to looking at the diff from a certain angle. Rotating this section slightly I think would make these patterns look better and fit with the rest of the map.

1. 00:02:096 (2,3,4) - From 1-00:12:317 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 4 your direction is counter-clockwise. 4 is a comparably strong note so it makes sense why you would switch the direction of that flow here. I think the problem is you went from circular to linear flow on 3-4 so it makes the pattern look random. I think if you arranged the slider in a way where you incorporate both linear and circular flow at the same time the map can play much better and will look more organized. https://puu.sh/yzDyg/ba6571bcfc.jpg
2. 00:12:317 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Here there is no circular motion. The way you go back and forth with the patterns on the strong beats at 00:12:804 (1,3) - makes sense, but then at 00:13:777 (5) - it doesn't switch directions. While the last note is playable, it is unexpected because you mapped it differently at 1 and 3. For this pattern I suggest rotating 5 so it switches direction on the strong beats so you establish a pattern to compliment the rhythm.
3. 00:15:398 (5,6,7,8) - 5 goes up, but 6 is below. This contradicts the expected location of 6 because naturally players follow a circular and linear pattern. 7-8 the patterns play against what they imply. What I mean is 7 is counter-clockwise while 8 is clockwise. They cancel each other out, so it makes this pattern difficult to play. This is where you would want to incorporate circular and linear flow because if some parts play harder over others but they share the same intensity then the map plays inconsistently. That's why it's important to take into consideration how certain patterns play over others so you can guarantee consistency.
   
   Bottom line is you need to have consistency, or similarity in the way your patterns play so as to compliment the music. I highly suggest going through and checking to make sure your patterns follow a consistent pattern so as they don't break a player's expectation.

1. 00:26:588 (3,4) - Considering how the distance from 2-3 looks similar to the distance of 4-5 yet they're on different snappings makes me think this would be difficult to read. 00:26:588 (3,4) - I suggest to either extend 3 to 3 reverses or shorten 4 to 2 reverses for consistency.

1. 00:16:534 (3) - I think having the slider end on a sound stronger than the one it starts on would play unnaturally as it takes more effort to click than to release, so I think it would make sense to compliment the song with that in mind.

1. 00:18:155 (2) - I think this is a snapping error. It sounds more accurate at 00:18:317 (2) - if you want to contrast the 3/2 difference in the timeline you can stack the note under 1 and stack 00:19:452 (1) - under the previous note. If you decide to fix the snapping this way boost the stack leniency up to 8 so the notes don't perfectly overlap. Criteria doesn't like perfect overlaps hgwouls;sghn
2. unsnapped object at 00:06:475 (1) - in Ataraxia's Easy. Rest of diffs look good.

-Alcaida wrote:

Short maps
Like this
perfect
My Queue m4m

Bread Paradise

00:03:231 (3,4) - this sounds like 00:03:556 (5,6) - and why you place different them? i tidied :3
00:06:480 (1) - it can be a little confusing because of sudden sv changing Hmm, I don't think so
00:13:452 (3) - it is not level with 00:12:804 (1) - (a little bit) hm

Light Insane

00:06:480 (1) - it can be a little confusing because of sudden sv changing Hmm, I don't think so
00:27:236 (1) - too far from 00:26:912 (4) - I think I think not

Short mod :C
Good luck!

Thanks For Modding

Bubblun wrote:

m4m from my queue

Bread Paradise

1. 00:07:615 (1) - Compare this to 00:02:421 (1) - spacing seems surprisingly large yet the song as kept the same intensity. ctrl+g 1 because I think it would make it more consistent.
2. 00:09:398 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I think having all of these claps at the same volume doesn't fit the slowly rising intensity. I suggest placing green lines at 00:09:398 - 00:09:723 - 00:10:047 - 40, 55, 70 volume respectively.
3. 00:11:669 (1,2) - To me this looks like a bit difficult to play. The stream and 1 was following a clockwise direction, but it switches to counter-clockwise on 2 which is the weaker sound compared to 1. When you switch the direction of your circular flow on weak sounds it feels unnatural, so that's why I think it would play better if the pattern was arranged in a way that incorporates circular motion. https://puu.sh/yzC9q/6d5b1d79a6.jpg
4. 00:14:263 (1,2) - Similar to above, I feel like the direction of flow should switch on stronger sounds to better compliment the music.
5. 00:19:939 (3,4) - I think this rhythm doesn't fit here because there isn't 2 distinct sounds that could be represented by 2 clicks. I think a 3/4 slider fits better as the sound here you could map is the vocal. https://puu.sh/yzCxE/fd758288c9.png

Light Insane

1. 00:26:588 (3,4) - Considering how the distance from 2-3 looks similar to the distance of 4-5 yet they're on different snappings makes me think this would be difficult to read. 00:26:588 (3,4) - I suggest to either extend 3 to 3 reverses or shorten 4 to 2 reverses for consistency.

Rest of diffs look great. gl!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?time_cont ... 3fqaaeTSfU Metadata. You had it correct, just show this to bn when set is ready.

All Fixed, Thanks For Modding