Hola
[General]
- 01:52:120 - 02:00:834 - nice mp3 edit, I really love what you did. But rather than adding the hitsound at background only, adding it at notes are better tho. From NM to MX, they are not keysounded at notes. The pattern seems follow the melody well, I recommend to add it.
- 00:50:405 - 00:54:977 - you didn't use the melody sound at this part unlike 00:41:262 - 00:49:977 - . yeah it's blue line sound so it can be hard for beginners, but I don't want to skip this main sound. Rather than using just drum sound, it's better to skip the drum or delete one notes for it and add melody note tho. Kiai pattern is good, you used three LNs for it :3
- 00:35:262 (35262|0,35405|0) - I don't know why it is placed at same col but 00:35:691 (35691|2,35834|0) - isn't. If you want to keep this jack, make 00:35:691 - 00:35:977 - symmetrical shape is better tho
- 00:38:977 - 00:41:262 - This catchy sound stimulates my both ear, if you rearrange this pattern allow for the sound too I will sleep in peace
- 00:48:120 (48120|1) - LN is better, for expressing 'this is melody'
- 00:50:262 (50262|0,50405|0) - there are placed at same col at only this part, I can't find why :v It's better to move the LN to col 4
- 01:52:120 - 02:01:262 - wow keysound These sounds are same length but the patterns are not. Only 02:00:120 - 02:00:405 - are shorter than others tho? (ss.wav) Other 1/4 LNs should be 1/2 length I think
- 02:46:548 (166548|1,166691|1) - need some rearrangement, too close rather than other 1/4 stream
- 00:38:620 (38620|0) - if you want to add hihat note for this, why not for SC?
- 01:07:977 (67977|0,68155|0) - too close, you should rearrange this stair
- 01:22:405 - 01:24:691 - questionable pattern. Compared with SC, there is just stream structure but it has too many jacks. It will be better if you use one jack when the sound is changed only like 01:22:405 - 01:22:477 - , 01:22:691 - 01:22:762 - , 01:22:977 - 01:23:048 - etc. It has less jacks than before, and nice gap with SC.
- 01:52:834 (112834|0) - 1000% volume lmao
- 01:47:977 - 01:49:262 - This sound is quite short, 01:47:977 (107977|0) - is too long for it. Make their end join with next noodle's start.