Hi Dudehacker.
[For all HD diff]
00:12:119 - not sure why this instrument got ignored, i find it kinda noticeable enough to be mapped, the 1/4 around here that you mapped even has weaker sound imo.
[7K HD]
00:01:405 - Don't think you should ignore this sound when you even map the grace sound at 00:02:345 (2345|3) -
00:03:736 (3736|4,3811|5,3886|6,3961|2,4036|3,4112|4) - This is kinda uncomfortable for me to hit, I will move 00:03:736 (3736|4,3811|5,3886|6) - to col 4,5,6 instead.
00:05:690 (5690|5,5916|4) - With their pitch is quite distinctively different, i expect these LNs not to be too close here, I will suggest move 00:05:465 (5465|6,5690|5,6367|6) - to col 6,7,6.
00:09:525 - Actually i kinda think your current pattern doesn't really emphasized the instrument as it should be, My suggestion for you is somewhere like
http://puu.sh/AdMRP/516d177fc0.png (Separate the LN to emphasized the brief moment of instrument changes, and the double note i suggest at 00:09:863 - is because single note is really underwhelming.
00:12:457 (12457|6,12683|5) - Prefer these notes to be col 6 and col 7 for more symmetrical pattern structure.
00:16:292 - I will advice the pattern here leading to the right direction like
http://puu.sh/AdN3c/19bb5e06fa.png , so it will rebalance the pattern at 00:16:969 - which goes for left direction too long.
00:20:690 - Kinda ghost note i think, really can't hear anything.
00:22:382 (22382|3,22495|2,22608|1,22608|4) - The exposure here makes it kinda a bit flat/bland after the pattern at 00:21:029 - , If i try making this part, i will do it like
http://puu.sh/AdNgn/eda71ca53b.png instead. I think it will be neater and over more new overall dimension with the pattern transition towards the next section.
00:27:119 (27119|3,27345|4) - although i know your intention around this area, I still don't really like the note sticking together with the LN, it makes the pattern kinda awkward to hit, i will try make 00:27:119 (27119|5,27345|4) - at col 2 and col 6 instead
00:27:909 (27909|3,28021|1) - I will make these notes at col 2 and col 4 instead, I think it will make the overall pattern nicer to hit here.
00:32:984 (32984|0) - Prefer this at col 2, the notes sticking with the other chord makes it more convenient with the overall pattern structure.
00:33:435 - Should be three chord if following the one at 00:34:337 - and 00:35:239 -
00:36:818 - I really recommend you to make similar thing like 00:07:721 - (not copy paste ofc, but something similar will do), since the current one is horribly underemphasized given the atmosphere vibe of the song here is quite high.
00:39:525 (39525|6,39638|0,39638|5,39751|4,39751|1) - This pattern kinda bending in an odd way if i'm being honest here.. I will recommend to make it 4 [26] [17] instead.
00:39:976 - Having this as only 1 LN while tofu diff has 3 chord really kinda confusing tbh, i'm sure you can still add 2 more notes at col 1 and col 7 there, this way it will still makes the structure neat and consistent.
00:41:330 - Actually You can make this something like
http://puu.sh/AdNzw/206e712f5f.png , there's 2 reason 1 propose this: 1. so you don't need to sacrifice chord consistency at 00:41:555 - 2. so the chord at 00:42:006 - can be jacked with 00:42:457 - , which makes it more consistent with how you jack the pattern at 00:42:683 (42683|5,42683|1,43134|1,43134|5) - and 00:43:360 (43360|4,43360|6,43811|4,43811|6) -
00:45:841 (45841|5) - Actually instead of stick this note with LN (kinda result in awkward gameplay for me) , I will suggest move this to col 3 here, This way you will connecting the pattern between 00:45:390 (45390|4,45390|1,45615|3,45615|0) - and 00:46:066 (46066|1,46066|3,46066|0,46292|4,46292|5) - which results in a more intuitive pattern structure and gameplay.
00:51:818 (51818|1,51931|0,52157|1,52382|2,52382|0,52608|1) - Sorry if i kinda meedling with your structure too much, but i really need to say i don't really like this.. I will suggest to move 00:52:157 (52157|1,52382|2) - to col 3 and col 4.
00:52:833 (52833|0) - I don't recommend this to be LN, mainly because it will makes player misunderstand that this is part of 00:53:284 - structure when it's not. I will say its better to separate between each section so player can see the transition more clearly.
00:54:976 (54976|1,55089|5) - This is kinda in an odd place to hit tbh, I will try
http://puu.sh/AdNMF/59aeea7bbf.png instead.
[Tofu's 4K HD]
00:08:172 - I'm not sure if there's actually 1/4 sound here, even if you argue it does, this is surprisingly really dense for such a linear and lighty atmosphere here. maybe you can kinda nerf the pattern a bit to match it with song's intensity a bit.
00:17:420 (17420|1,17420|2) - It would be nice if you can switch column between the note and the LN. as far as i concern, it won't meddling with your other pattern, and essentially you mirror the LN at 00:13:134 (13134|3,13811|1) - which resulting in a more firm pattern structure.
00:22:157 (22157|0,22157|3) - I will also switch column between LN and note here, there's a distinguishable emphasis between 00:21:254 (21254|3) - and 00:22:157 - , which kinda not making sense if you still make the LN at the same column.
00:35:916 - Personally don't really see the reason why this isn't double note.
[5K HD]
00:05:690 (5690|2) - prefer this in the column 5. I prefer it got jacked with previous note compared if jacked in the space note.
00:09:525 - You can try follow suggestion at 7K or keep it as it is, up to you. But either way i still insist 00:09:863 - to be double note.
00:19:224 (19224|3,19337|2,19450|1) - Would be more suitable if you make these col 2 3 4 here leading to right direction. because you already have too much 1/4 that goes to left direction like 00:17:645 (17645|3,17758|2,17871|1,21029|4,21142|3,21254|2,22382|2,22495|1,22608|0) -
00:23:961 - Kinda too bland with only this pattern tbh, I think you can take the jack concept you did at 7K and put it in this difficulty, for example like
http://puu.sh/AdObl/64a23b6684.png 00:32:081 - This one also being kinda too bland with the pattern kinda being too same. I will suggest to Ctrl+H 00:32:081 (32081|3,32081|4,32081|0,32420|1,32420|2,32533|4,32533|3) - , After you did that, move 00:32:081 (32081|1) - to col 4.
00:36:142 - You can actually implement this jack in 7K too, a bit shame you didn't do that.
00:39:976 - same as 7K HD.
00:44:262 (44262|3,44487|3,45164|3) - This is kinda awkward while i testplay it. I suppose try move 00:44:262 (44262|3) - to col 5.
00:52:833 (52833|4) - same as 7K HD too. and also for other diff that uses this.
[7K NM]
00:03:660 (3660|2) - Try change this note into 1/1 LN, i think it will emphasis the synth quite nicely.
00:16:518 (16518|0,16743|0) - Although the jack seems to emphasis vocal, its still kinda strange to see this considering around this area you don't put any jack.
00:18:548 (18548|2,18999|3) - Try move to col 4 and col 5, i think it will make the patterns better.
00:24:412 (24412|2) - Since this one is quite high pitch, move to col 6 might be makes more sense here.
00:34:788 - One of the note should be 1/2 LN if looking at how you did at 00:32:984 - 00:36:593 -
00:40:427 (40427|6) - Try move at col 2, if combined with 00:40:540 (40540|5,40878|3) - it will makes 2-6-4 pattern which is neater.
[Tofu 4K NM]
00:14:713 (14713|1,14939|2) - Having this at col 3 and col 2 flow better from my testplay.
00:21:480 (21480|0,21706|3) - Try make these at col 4 and col 1 for pattern balance.
00:54:638 - I'm not really fond of the exact same LN pattern as 4K HD, try
http://puu.sh/AdOAP/8259b8ff79.png instead.
[5K NM]
00:18:999 - Try something like
http://puu.sh/AdOCv/744f5231f0.png instead, from my perspective it will make the overall pattern more structured.
00:35:465 (35465|1,35465|4) - Try switch column between these LN and note here and move 00:35:690 (35690|3) - to col 3, so the pattern will mirror 00:32:758 (32758|0,32984|1,33660|0) - that makes the pattern seem more planned throughougtly.
00:39:299 (39299|1) - try move to col 4 is ok here, so the space note every 1/1 emphasized the hard instrument.
00:40:427 (40427|4,40540|3) - try col 1 and col 4 here, kinda similar reason with 5K HD but a bit different pattern.
[7K EZ]
Hmm, i can't say much bout this difficulty, it's generally solid, but there's a moment where you emptying certain column too much, for example like 00:11:330 - 00:25:766 - where col 7 very ocassionally appeared, i was hoping you can kinda spread some of the note there. I know you seem to wanna make the col 1 and col 7 for finish sound, but this is 7k though, not 6K+1.
[Tofu 4K EZ]
00:02:307 (2307|1) - move to col 3 here? having left column LN after 00:01:630 (1630|1,1856|0) - felt kinda odd here.
00:53:284 (53284|3) - If you plan to make linear stair pattern, this note should be at col 3.
[5K EZ]
00:25:315 (25315|0,25427|1,25540|2) - From what i heard, this chain 1/4 is official forbidden from easy difficulty, so i need you to prepare an alternative pattern for this one.
00:32:420 (32420|4,32533|3) - Same, and also 2+ note 1/4 is forbidden from easy difficulty from what i heard within QAT verdict before.
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Generally a nice map here, I also like the song here, so really great job.
The biggest problem i think is in the 7K EZ, but i think it can be fixed rather easily.
If you're done, call me again.
Will be fixing hitsounds to clarify my points further.
