MrWeebl - Narwhals · forum

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-10T11:48:19+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on den 28 september 2017 at 20:53:11

Artist: MrWeebl
Title: Narwhals
Tags: ohwow hydrocannon13 hc youtube weebls weebl stuff
BPM: 151
Filesize: 8278kb
Play Time: 00:32
Difficulties Available:

Advanced (2,53 stars, 82 notes)
Easy (1,57 stars, 42 notes)
HC's Hard (3,21 stars, 103 notes)
Monodon monoceros (4,11 stars, 127 notes)
Ohwow's Normal (1,8 stars, 60 notes)

Download: MrWeebl - Narwhals
Download: MrWeebl - Narwhals (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Status: Ranked!

Easy by me

Normal by Ohwow

Advanced by me (rip collab)

Hard by HydroCannon13

Monodon monoceros by me

the legendary quote

KorwiN wrote:
This level I do not like... He is'nt bad, but Also not good.

Last edited by bite you death 2022-02-04T15:00:00+00:00, edited 105 times in total.

awesomemacD

169 posts

Joined January 2015

awesomemacD 2017-08-18T19:12:24+00:00

f a s t
Moge-ko's Hard:

00:13:997 (4,5) - If this was a 1/2 slider instead of 2 circles it would emphasize the downbeat on 00:14:394 (1) - better.
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4) - This would be better off as 2 1/4 repeat sliders like this:

SPOILER

The rhythm is just too complex for a hard diff, especially the 1/8 slider.
00:25:520 - Maybe end the slider on the red tick and put a circle on the downbeat for emphasis?

hope this helps

Lusumi

227 posts

Joined December 2015

Lusumi 2017-08-18T19:34:24+00:00

awesomemacD wrote:
f a s t
Moge-ko's Hard:
00:13:997 (4,5) - If this was a 1/2 slider instead of 2 circles it would emphasize the downbeat on 00:14:394 (1) - better. changed that lel
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4) - This would be better off as 2 1/4 repeat sliders like this: dont like that change cuz 1/4 Slider Repeating Slider
are cancer to read cuz u literly cant really read them and cuz its only part where it would be used i would prefer not using them at all
SPOILER
The rhythm is just too complex for a hard diff, especially the 1/8 slider. well i dont really agree cuz it LITERLY plays like a 1/4 slider and is placed like i placed the 1/4 slider but i changed it cuz people will complain lol
00:25:520 - Maybe end the slider on the red tick and put a circle on the downbeat for emphasis?
well all other sliderends end on white ticks too would be inconsistent
hope this helps

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ts8zs

2,123 posts

Joined May 2011

ts8zs 2017-08-19T13:03:37+00:00

[Insane]
00:00:487 (2) - 64,288 to keep distance like 00:00:885 (4,5) - or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882898 is also better
00:06:249 (7) - Ctrl+G fits music better
00:33:268 (4) - ^
00:13:600 (5,6) - should have bigger distance,how about move 00:13:600 (5) - to 224,224
Good map
[Moge-ko]
00:11:216 (3) - I think you need NC here to divide from 00:10:421 (1,2) -
00:13:997 (1) - and you don't need this NC or swap with 00:13:600 (3) -
00:15:189 (4) - If you choose swap prev one you should NC this one
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can try reverse slider
00:29:692 (3) - remove NC
[Ohwow]
00:19:162 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this one
00:25:520 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:31:679 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:29:295 (5,6) - change to a 1/1 reverse maybe better
[Easy]
00:12:805 (1) - I moved 5th and 6th points to make this looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882977
good one too

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-19T13:36:08+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Insane]
00:00:487 (2) - 64,288 to keep distance like 00:00:885 (4,5) - or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882898 is also better changed to 53,273 to fit structure of map
00:06:249 (7) - Ctrl+G fits music better ill think about it
00:33:268 (4) - ^ ^
00:13:600 (5,6) - should have bigger distance,how about move 00:13:600 (5) - to 224,224 I think this is fine, (but mostly i dont wanna change this :v)
Good map ty

[Easy]
00:12:805 (1) - I moved 5th and 6th points to make this looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882977 made something similar to this
good one too ty again xd

thanks for mod!!

QazseWsxdr

328 posts

Joined May 2017

QazseWsxdr 2017-08-19T14:50:12+00:00

Hi, thought I'd try my hand at modding

Easy
00:24:725 Make it a little bit more interesting with something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883532
00:32:672 Reverse slider at the end too maybe.

Ohwow's Normal
I don't know much about hitsounds but they don't seem to be working as intended. Have a check.
00:02:275 (4,5) and 00:03:864 (2,3) If you space these out like this it will look better, be easier to read and not be significantly more difficult, but I understand it would be hard to make this consistent throughout the map: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883631 || https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883635
00:08:633 (4,5) Same as above, I won't bother listing all of them
00:11:017 You can do this for more variation, up to you : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883671
00:19:162 Someone already mentioned this one.
00:20:752 It'd be nice if the klai times match with the other diffs. If not, maybe just remove it completely.

Moge-ko's Hard
00:03:268 (1) Curve this slider to match the previous combo?
00:14:791 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883776 This feels like a better rhythm

Insane
00:01:977 (1,2) Angle like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883830
I would probably put 2 sliders to emphasise on the "Nar-whals" sound after 00:20:752 but you'd have to rework a lot of the map so don't worry about it

I've never modded before but I hope you find it useful. Tell me how I can improve

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-19T14:59:52+00:00

QazseWsxdr wrote:
Hi, thought I'd try my hand at modding

Easy
00:24:725 Make it a little bit more interesting with something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883532 this is supposed to be an easy diff, so very simple patterns and rhythms belong here, this pattern would belong in normal or hard
00:32:672 Reverse slider at the end too maybe. as i said before, i'd like to keep the rhythm simple.

Insane
00:01:977 (1,2) Angle like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883830 doesn't fit the rest of the map
I would probably put 2 sliders to emphasise on the "Nar-whals" sound after 00:20:752 but you'd have to rework a lot of the map so don't worry about it ?

I've never modded before but I hope you find it useful. Tell me how I can improve mod more i guess, also try to learn the ranking criterias for the difficulties you want to mod

ty for mod

QazseWsxdr

328 posts

Joined May 2017

QazseWsxdr 2017-08-19T15:43:35+00:00

I would probably put 2 sliders to emphasise on the "Nar-whals" sound after 00:20:752 but you'd have to rework a lot of the map so don't worry about it ?

00:23:136 This is what I meant : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8884354

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-19T17:24:34+00:00

QazseWsxdr wrote:
I would probably put 2 sliders to emphasise on the "Nar-whals" sound after 00:20:752 but you'd have to rework a lot of the map so don't worry about it ?
00:23:136 This is what I meant : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8884354

still makes no sense to me

Lusumi

227 posts

Joined December 2015

Lusumi 2017-08-19T18:00:53+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Insane]
00:00:487 (2) - 64,288 to keep distance like 00:00:885 (4,5) - or https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882898 is also better
00:06:249 (7) - Ctrl+G fits music better
00:33:268 (4) - ^
00:13:600 (5,6) - should have bigger distance,how about move 00:13:600 (5) - to 224,224
Good map
[Moge-ko]
00:11:216 (3) - I think you need NC here to divide from 00:10:421 (1,2) - changed lul
00:13:997 (1) - and you don't need this NC or swap with 00:13:600 (3) - changed too
00:15:189 (4) - If you choose swap prev one you should NC this one k
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4) - I think you can try reverse slider dont like that change cuz 1/4 Slider Repeating Slider
are cancer to read cuz u literly cant really read them and cuz its only part where it would be used i would prefer not using them at all
00:29:692 (3) - remove NC k
[Ohwow]
00:19:162 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this one
00:25:520 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:31:679 (4,5,6,7) - ^
00:29:295 (5,6) - change to a 1/1 reverse maybe better
[Easy]
00:12:805 (1) - I moved 5th and 6th points to make this looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8882977
good one too

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Lusumi

227 posts

Joined December 2015

Lusumi 2017-08-19T18:07:45+00:00

QazseWsxdr wrote:
Hi, thought I'd try my hand at modding

Easy
00:24:725 Make it a little bit more interesting with something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883532
00:32:672 Reverse slider at the end too maybe.

Ohwow's Normal
I don't know much about hitsounds but they don't seem to be working as intended. Have a check.
00:02:275 (4,5) and 00:03:864 (2,3) If you space these out like this it will look better, be easier to read and not be significantly more difficult, but I understand it would be hard to make this consistent throughout the map: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883631 || https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883635
00:08:633 (4,5) Same as above, I won't bother listing all of them
00:11:017 You can do this for more variation, up to you : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883671
00:19:162 Someone already mentioned this one.
00:20:752 It'd be nice if the klai times match with the other diffs. If not, maybe just remove it completely.

Moge-ko's Hard
00:03:268 (1) Curve this slider to match the previous combo? nope lol dun wanna use 1 fuckin slider all the time cuz looks boring af and i used curved then straight then curved an straight again lol
00:14:791 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883776 This feels like a better rhythm k lul changed it

Insane
00:01:977 (1,2) Angle like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883830
I would probably put 2 sliders to emphasise on the "Nar-whals" sound after 00:20:752 but you'd have to rework a lot of the map so don't worry about it

I've never modded before but I hope you find it useful. Tell me how I can improve

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N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2017-08-19T18:09:03+00:00

00:12:507 (8,10) - overmapped, replace with 1/4 sliders should be fine

kds for now xd i'll do irc later

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-19T18:12:15+00:00

N0thingSpecial wrote:
00:12:507 (8,10) - overmapped, replace with 1/4 sliders should be fine but i like

kds for now xd i'll do irc later

eat a rock or 2

Ohwow

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-08-19T18:43:56+00:00

ts8zs wrote:
[Ohwow]
00:19:162 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this one why?
00:25:520 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
00:31:679 (4,5,6,7) - ^ ^
00:29:295 (5,6) - change to a 1/1 reverse maybe better Want more intense pattern
D

QazseWsxdr wrote:
Ohwow's Normal
I don't know much about hitsounds but they don't seem to be working as intended. Have a check. From the looks of it, it seems that you're using your own skin to mod, instead of the default skin. it's your own skin's hitsound that doesn't follow what i hitsound.
00:02:275 (4,5) and 00:03:864 (2,3) If you space these out like this it will look better, be easier to read and not be significantly more difficult, but I understand it would be hard to make this consistent throughout the map: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883631 || https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883635 Distance snapping has to be consistent on Normal (and Easy) difficulties. (part of the ranking criteria)
00:08:633 (4,5) Same as above, I won't bother listing all of them ^
00:11:017 You can do this for more variation, up to you : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8883671 ^
00:19:162 Someone already mentioned this one. yeah but never gave a reason.
00:20:752 It'd be nice if the klai times match with the other diffs. If not, maybe just remove it completely. kiai times between GDs do not have to match.

I've never modded before but I hope you find it useful. Tell me how I can improve I see your intentions, but gotta remember the rules and guidelines. Thank you for trying though C:

Made my own changes

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KorwiN

150 posts

Joined December 2015

KorwiN 2017-08-20T03:38:33+00:00

Helou

Easy

00:12:805 (1) - Behind the map
The rest is okey

Ohwow's Normal

Change right away Ar? 5,5 ? 6 ?
00:00:090 (1) - Behind the map
00:01:679 (3) - over mapped, 00:04:858 (4) - Over mapped ...
00:15:984 (1) - same ... up^
00:18:368 (2,1) - Between them circle and here 00:19:163 (1,3) -
This level I do not like... He is'nt bad, but Also not good.

Moge-ko's Hard

00:00:885 (2) - over mapped, and here 00:08:832 (4) -
00:11:414 (2) - Now circle behind the map
00:13:997 (4) - Minimally circle behind the map
00:18:368 (1) - The end of the slider behind the map
00:22:540 (1) - You... know
00:22:938 (2,3) - Between them circle

00:22:540 (1) - up^
00:29:295 (2,3) - UP^
00:29:692 (3) - over mapped
00:31:878 (1) - up^

And last diff

Insane

00:16:977 (5,7) - over mapped and here 00:18:368 (4) -
00:19:560 (2) - up^
00:23:931 (1) - The start of the slider behind the map
00:29:891 (5,1) - circles behind the map, and here 00:32:673 (1) -
00:33:070 (3,4) - make circles ... ~If the sound is not in blue , do not do it!~Korwin// Make only two circles.. on red and white ...

I waiting for kudosu

Lusumi

227 posts

Joined December 2015

Lusumi 2017-08-20T09:22:14+00:00

KorwiN wrote:
Helou
Easy
00:12:805 (1) - Behind the map
The rest is okey

Ohwow's Normal
Change right away Ar? 5,5 ? 6 ?
00:00:090 (1) - Behind the map
00:01:679 (3) - over mapped, 00:04:858 (4) - Over mapped ...
00:15:984 (1) - same ... up^
00:18:368 (2,1) - Between them circle and here 00:19:163 (1,3) -
This level I do not like... He is'nt bad, but Also not good.

Moge-ko's Hard
00:00:885 (2) - over mapped, and here 00:08:832 (4) - wtf??? ITS NOT OVERMAPPED I MAPPED THE VOCALS HERE LOL Overmapping = mapping sounds that don't exist... Maybe u meant something different but if i have to guess what the fuck u suggesting for changes and why then u SERIOUSLY did something wrong
00:11:414 (2) - Now circle behind the map It's not behind the map lmao... and its not that far out of map that its noticable... u can still clearly see it with score meter size maxxed out.
00:13:997 (4) - Minimally circle behind the map can u stop complaining about shit thats only noticable in the editor it kinda seems you just "modded" it cuz u want sum sweet kds lol...
00:18:368 (1) - The end of the slider behind the map .....
00:22:540 (1) - You... know your disgusting me rn...
00:22:938 (2,3) - Between them circle u marking a slider and a circle and saying "between the circles" what should it say me? that it looks good? that theres too much spacing or idk... or maybe u delete the half mod i dont fucking know... can u PLEASE explain WHAT IS WRONG then WHY THE CHANGE WOULD MAKE THE MAP BETTER IN YOUR OPINION OR AAAAT LEEEAAST TRY TO EXPLAIN IT WITH MORE THEN 3 WORDS THAT I MAYBE HAVE A CHANCE OF UNDERRSTANDING WHAT U MEAN?
00:22:540 (1) - up^ ... do u mean that from above or u mean up there is a slider or should i put it slightly up??? EXPLAAAAAAIN USE WORDS...
IS IT THAT HARD?
00:29:295 (2,3) - UP^ ...
00:29:692 (3) - over mapped IT IS NOT OVERMAPPED...
00:31:878 (1) - up^
YOUR MOD DIGUSTS ME RN...

And last diff
Insane
00:16:977 (5,7) - over mapped and here 00:18:368 (4) -
00:19:560 (2) - up^
00:23:931 (1) - The start of the slider behind the map
00:29:891 (5,1) - circles behind the map, and here 00:32:673 (1) -
00:33:070 (3,4) - make circles ... ~If the sound is not in blue , do not do it!~Korwin// Make only two circles.. on red and white ...

I waiting for kudosu

I hope u dont get any kds... u didnt really deserved that i probably spend more time raging and replying to your mod then you doing the "mod"
(im not sure if u can even call this a mod lol) this is disgusting if u mod u should at least act like u care about the map and not just farm kds...

THANKS for your very DETAILED and well EXPLAINED mod that no one fucking needed/wanted it really HELPED me IMPROVE THE MAP (and i totaly didnt had any problems understanding the bs u wrote there)

Last edited by Lusumi 2017-08-20T10:05:27+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-20T10:02:06+00:00

KorwiN wrote:
Helou
Easy
00:12:805 (1) - Behind the map no
The rest is okey

And last diff
Insane
00:16:977 (5,7) - over mapped and here 00:18:368 (4) - no
00:19:560 (2) - up^ no
00:23:931 (1) - The start of the slider behind the map no
00:29:891 (5,1) - circles behind the map, and here 00:32:673 (1) - no
00:33:070 (3,4) - make circles ... ~If the sound is not in blue , do not do it!~Korwin// Make only two circles.. on red and white ... ill think about it

I waiting for kudosu zzz

Ohwow

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-08-20T20:43:26+00:00

KorwiN wrote:
Helou
Ohwow's Normal
Change right away Ar? 5,5 ? 6 ? that' too high for a normal
00:00:090 (1) - Behind the map ?
00:01:679 (3) - over mapped, 00:04:858 (4) - Over mapped ... ?
00:15:984 (1) - same ... up^ ?
00:18:368 (2,1) - Between them circle and here 00:19:163 (1,3) - ?
This level I do not like... He is'nt bad, but Also not good. ?

No changes.

Blan_C

306 posts

Joined March 2016

Blan_C 2017-08-21T17:17:10+00:00

Hello, mod from #emm...

Moge-ko's Hard

I liked your map until 00:20:752 - Sliders like 00:21:547 (3) - or are to big and kinda bad-looking. I know you match these to vocals, but this vocal on the sliderend - its better when sound on upbeat is clickable as its heavy + represents diferent word and is in other tonation too (in this song). Maybe try to map it to some instruments - try to shorten these sliders to red tick and put circle where sliderends were - imo better. If you follow that, fix every other slider like that in this part (end on red tick) to make it consistant.
00:14:593 (2) - I wouldn't start it on red tick - It's only one place when you make it like that. Making slider on white one will be consistant + you wont end it on heavy hitsound (shall be clickable). Ctrl+G 00:14:593 (2,3) - Shall fix that.
And this minor thing: 00:05:255 (2) - Move it from x362 y:147 to x363 y:147 to improve stack, and then the same with 00:06:447 (1) -

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-21T17:22:28+00:00

Blan_C wrote:
Hello, mod from #emm...

Moge-ko's Hard
I liked your map until 00:20:752 - Sliders like 00:21:547 (3) - or are to big and kinda bad-looking. I know you match these to vocals, but this vocal on the sliderend - its better when sound on upbeat is clickable as its heavy + represents diferent word and is in other tonation too (in this song). Maybe try to map it to some instruments - try to shorten these sliders to red tick and put circle where sliderends were - imo better. If you follow that, fix every other slider like that in this part (end on red tick) to make it consistant.
00:14:593 (2) - I wouldn't start it on red tick - It's only one place when you make it like that. Making slider on white one will be consistant + you wont end it on heavy hitsound (shall be clickable). Ctrl+G 00:14:593 (2,3) - Shall fix that.
And this minor thing: 00:05:255 (2) - Move it from x362 y:147 to x363 y:147 to improve stack, and then the same with 00:06:447 (1) -

not even my diff unmutualed

Blan_C

306 posts

Joined March 2016

Blan_C 2017-08-21T17:26:40+00:00

bite you death wrote:
not even my diff unmutualed

Senpai hate me? If it's like this..*stab*

Lusumi

227 posts

Joined December 2015

Lusumi 2017-08-21T18:22:02+00:00

Blan_C wrote:
Hello, mod from #emm...

Moge-ko's Hard
I liked your map until 00:20:752 - Sliders like 00:21:547 (3) - or are to big and kinda bad-looking. dont really agree that they are too big lol...
and how are they bad looking LOL okay maybe that one rednode thing there is a bit off lol i fix it I know you match these to vocals, but this vocal on the sliderend - its better when sound on upbeat is clickable as its heavy + represents diferent word and is in other tonation too (in this song). Well i would agree but dont want extended slider in a hard diff or too much "nothingness" if that makes sense Maybe try to map it to some instruments - try to shorten these sliders to red tick and put circle where sliderends were - imo better. If you follow that, fix every other slider like that in this part (end on red tick) to make it consistant. i like to map on lower diffs to the easiest to followable/understandable "instrument" and that are the vocals and if i would map that to the intruments it would be kinda inconsistent and that instruments are so boring it would be literly 1/2 slider spam then
00:14:593 (2) - I wouldn't start it on red tick - It's only one place when you make it like that. Making slider on white one will be consistant + you wont end it on heavy hitsound (shall be clickable). Ctrl+G 00:14:593 (2,3) - Shall fix that. changed that lul (if i remember correctly it was like that before but changed it cuz a mod suggested that)
And this minor thing: 00:05:255 (2) - Move it from x362 y:147 to x363 y:147 to improve stack, and then the same with 00:06:447 (1) -

NU I WONT DESTROY THAT PERFECT TRIANGLE but i stack that slider properly that its stacked on lol

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Tags:ohwow moge ko youtube weebl's stuff
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Pata-Mon

1,489 posts

Joined March 2015

Pata-Mon 2017-08-24T15:51:46+00:00

[Easy]

00:19:162 (1,1) - at least use 4 beats gap after spinners in ez diff
00:21:149 (1,2,3) - you can use this rhythm: https://puu.sh/xithq/4b4cc8e653.png Because 1/1 gap is much easier to read then 3/2 in ez diff
00:27:507 (1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]

00:12:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change hitsound by yourself, this part is not fit to be copy
00:17:573 (1) - remove nc
00:23:335 - 00:29:692 - add hitsound (whistle maybe)

[Light Hard]

You can change this diff name to Advanced if you want
ar is too high to this diff, this diff is really easy and bpm is low. ar6-7 is better.
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4) - this is really not recommended to be used in hard, especially light hard/adv. Just use one or two tick slider is fine.
nc is abused and not consistent in this diff. You need to remove some nc like 00:10:421 (1) - or 00:12:010 (1) - and check the whole diff to make the nc consistent (every 2 bar lines or 1 bar lines? 00:23:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is 2)

[Hard]

00:20:553 (8) - don't use this in hard diff lol, it's too hard

[Insane]

00:25:123 - there's no vocal, i don't think it need to be clickable. just use a 1/1 slider at 00:24:725 - is better

Generally this set is fine, I think you can try to rank it.
GL

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-24T17:08:11+00:00

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2017-08-24 17:36 N0thingSpecial: 00:06:050 (6,1) - not parallel which bugs me dont change if you dont care
2017-08-24 17:36 bite you death: oh shit ur actually doing it
2017-08-24 17:37 N0thingSpecial: 00:10:222 (4) - it would play better if you put this on the right of 00:09:825 (2) -
2017-08-24 17:37 N0thingSpecial: matching the cross pattern you have here 00:10:421 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-08-24 17:38 bite you death: then i'd have to move 1 too
2017-08-24 17:38 N0thingSpecial: 00:12:507 (8,10) - I still dont like the overmapping
2017-08-24 17:38 bite you death: ill try it
2017-08-24 17:39 N0thingSpecial: like it's a simple replace with 1/4 sliders I'm not sure if it's justified overmapping
2017-08-24 17:39 bite you death: ill change it
2017-08-24 17:40 N0thingSpecial: shit
2017-08-24 17:40 N0thingSpecial: can you /np it to me
2017-08-24 17:40 N0thingSpecial: I accidentally deleted the set
2017-08-24 17:40 bite you death: lol
2017-08-24 17:40 bite you death: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1382849 MrWeebl - Narwhals [Insane]]
2017-08-24 17:41 N0thingSpecial: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1394179 MrWeebl - Narwhals [HC's Hard]]
2017-08-24 17:41 N0thingSpecial: 00:20:553 (8) - really?
2017-08-24 17:42 bite you death: tbh it kinda fits the song
2017-08-24 17:42 bite you death: but not for a hard diff idk
2017-08-24 17:42 N0thingSpecial: exactly
2017-08-24 17:42 N0thingSpecial: like the other occasion he used reverse sliders was for 1/2
2017-08-24 17:43 N0thingSpecial: and im pretty sure there's no introduction of 1/8 rhythm previously in easier diffs
2017-08-24 17:43 bite you death: i dont think so
2017-08-24 17:44 N0thingSpecial: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1388436 MrWeebl - Narwhals [Collab Light Hard]]
2017-08-24 17:45 bite you death: 00:22:937 (1) - oops
2017-08-24 17:45 bite you death: 00:25:520 (5) -
2017-08-24 17:45 bite you death: oops
2017-08-24 17:45 bite you death: 00:28:699 (5) - oops
2017-08-24 17:46 N0thingSpecial: tbh not really a fan of the constant DS, could use a bit more variable spacing in 2 to 3 parts of the map
2017-08-24 17:46 bite you death: its more of an advanced diff
2017-08-24 17:46 bite you death: but ye
2017-08-24 17:47 N0thingSpecial: if it's advance I guess maybe
2017-08-24 17:48 N0thingSpecial: 00:18:368 (1,2,3) - this is kinda meh in terms of movement
2017-08-24 17:48 N0thingSpecial: new players are defintely not moving through the entire slider
2017-08-24 17:48 bite you death: what notes do u mean
2017-08-24 17:49 N0thingSpecial: from 1 to 2
2017-08-24 17:49 N0thingSpecial: mainly
2017-08-24 17:49 bite you death: which ones
2017-08-24 17:49 bite you death: before the kicksliders or the kicksliders?0
2017-08-24 17:49 N0thingSpecial: before
2017-08-24 17:49 bite you death: ok
2017-08-24 17:49 bite you death: uh
2017-08-24 17:49 bite you death: i dont see the issue
2017-08-24 17:49 N0thingSpecial: 00:18:169 (3,1,2,3) - this entire thing is a straight line, and i thin k00:18:368 (1) - is an uncomfortable stop
2017-08-24 17:50 N0thingSpecial: I think
2017-08-24 17:50 bite you death: i dont notice anything
2017-08-24 17:50 bite you death: so idk
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: yea thats because you're 7k rank
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: lol
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: idk you could disagree
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: yea thats because you're 7k rank
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: lol
2017-08-24 17:51 bite you death: ok bancho
2017-08-24 17:51 bite you death: thank
2017-08-24 17:51 bite you death: it just sent me yea thats because you're 7k rank and lol twice
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: I was thinking you could argue 00:17:971 (2,3,1,2,3) - accompany the support vocals I guess
2017-08-24 17:52 N0thingSpecial: the linear flow ish
2017-08-24 17:52 bite you death: idk i didnt map this part
2017-08-24 17:52 N0thingSpecial: thing
2017-08-24 17:52 N0thingSpecial: thats going on
2017-08-24 17:52 N0thingSpecial: either tell him see how he reacts
2017-08-24 17:52 bite you death: ok
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: 00:22:341 (5,6) - gay
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: 00:28:699 (4,5) - gay
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1388437 MrWeebl - Narwhals [Ohwow's Normal]]
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: I agree!
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: fix
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: I mean you already know
2017-08-24 17:53 bite you death: wat
2017-08-24 17:53 bite you death: start in corner?
2017-08-24 17:54 N0thingSpecial: no the sudden introduction of 3/4s
2017-08-24 17:54 N0thingSpecial: like there's need to be something here 00:22:739 -
2017-08-24 17:54 bite you death: wym 3/4
2017-08-24 17:54 bite you death: isnt 3/4 the 4 tick ones
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: yea but in the sense that there's no 1/4 timing here
2017-08-24 17:55 bite you death: o u mean gaps
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: just simplify it as 3/4
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: yea
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: like there's nothing that support sudden emphasis on red ticks
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: besides the music itself
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: which isn't enough
2017-08-24 17:56 bite you death: 00:23:334 (7) -
2017-08-24 17:56 bite you death: follows voice+
2017-08-24 17:57 N0thingSpecial: yea but thats after the 00:22:937 (6) - which the player is probably already confused by then
2017-08-24 17:57 bite you death: would a repeat 1/1 slider fit there better do u think?
2017-08-24 17:58 N0thingSpecial: i mean easiest solution is just to add a note that stack on 00:22:938 (6) -
2017-08-24 17:58 N0thingSpecial: since you already have 00:22:143 (4,5) - going on in the intro
2017-08-24 17:58 bite you death: i guess
2017-08-24 17:59 N0thingSpecial: 00:25:520 (4,5,6) - aesthetics plz
2017-08-24 17:59 bite you death: square lol
2017-08-24 17:59 N0thingSpecial: at least he did it consistently
2017-08-24 17:59 N0thingSpecial: but
2017-08-24 17:59 N0thingSpecial: squares
2017-08-24 17:59 N0thingSpecial: why
2017-08-24 18:00 N0thingSpecial: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1388435 MrWeebl - Narwhals [Easy]]
2017-08-24 18:00 N0thingSpecial: cancer remap plz
2017-08-24 18:00 N0thingSpecial: ty kds
2017-08-24 18:00 N0thingSpecial: oh wait you already gave me
2017-08-24 18:00 bite you death: wow im getting every meme mod ever flashbacks
2017-08-24 18:01 bite you death: thx for input on easy i wil make sure to make greatingest map of it
2017-08-24 18:01 N0thingSpecial: you save log and post for the others im too laze for that
2017-08-24 18:01 bite you death: ok

Lusumi

227 posts

Joined December 2015

Lusumi 2017-08-24T17:23:56+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
[Easy]
00:19:162 (1,1) - at least use 4 beats gap after spinners in ez diff
00:21:149 (1,2,3) - you can use this rhythm: https://puu.sh/xithq/4b4cc8e653.png Because 1/1 gap is much easier to read then 3/2 in ez diff
00:27:507 (1,2,3) - ^
[Normal]
00:12:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change hitsound by yourself, this part is not fit to be copy
00:17:573 (1) - remove nc
00:23:335 - 00:29:692 - add hitsound (whistle maybe)
[Light Hard]
You can change this diff name to Advanced if you want k lul
ar is too high to this diff, this diff is really easy and bpm is low. ar6-7 is better. gonna change it to 7
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4) - this is really not recommended to be used in hard, especially light hard/adv. Just use one or two tick slider is fine. 1.
tickslider? wat... and triples are okay in hard WHY NOT THEN A FOKIN 1/4 SLIDER that literly plays like singletaps and are even easier to get 300 on cuz Score v1 succ dicc
nc is abused and not consistent in this diff. You need to remove some nc like 00:10:421 (1) - or 00:12:010 (1) - and check the whole diff to make the nc consistent (every 2 bar lines or 1 bar lines? 00:23:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is 2)
wat theres no nc there... maybe bite you death already changed that idk lol

[Hard]
00:20:553 (8) - don't use this in hard diff lol, it's too hard
[Insane]
00:25:123 - there's no vocal, i don't think it need to be clickable. just use a 1/1 slider at 00:24:725 - is better
Generally this set is fine, I think you can try to rank it.
GL

Lusumi

227 posts

Joined December 2015

Lusumi 2017-08-24T17:33:37+00:00

bite you death wrote:
n0thingspecial's irc mod:

here
2017-08-24 17:36 N0thingSpecial: 00:06:050 (6,1) - not parallel which bugs me dont change if you dont care
2017-08-24 17:36 bite you death: oh shit ur actually doing it
2017-08-24 17:37 N0thingSpecial: 00:10:222 (4) - it would play better if you put this on the right of 00:09:825 (2) -
2017-08-24 17:37 N0thingSpecial: matching the cross pattern you have here 00:10:421 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-08-24 17:38 bite you death: then i'd have to move 1 too
2017-08-24 17:38 N0thingSpecial: 00:12:507 (8,10) - I still dont like the overmapping
2017-08-24 17:38 bite you death: ill try it
2017-08-24 17:39 N0thingSpecial: like it's a simple replace with 1/4 sliders I'm not sure if it's justified overmapping
2017-08-24 17:39 bite you death: ill change it
2017-08-24 17:40 N0thingSpecial: shit
2017-08-24 17:40 N0thingSpecial: can you /np it to me
2017-08-24 17:40 N0thingSpecial: I accidentally deleted the set
2017-08-24 17:40 bite you death: lol
2017-08-24 17:40 bite you death: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1382849 MrWeebl - Narwhals [Insane]]
2017-08-24 17:41 N0thingSpecial: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1394179 MrWeebl - Narwhals [HC's Hard]]
2017-08-24 17:41 N0thingSpecial: 00:20:553 (8) - really?
2017-08-24 17:42 bite you death: tbh it kinda fits the song
2017-08-24 17:42 bite you death: but not for a hard diff idk
2017-08-24 17:42 N0thingSpecial: exactly
2017-08-24 17:42 N0thingSpecial: like the other occasion he used reverse sliders was for 1/2
2017-08-24 17:43 N0thingSpecial: and im pretty sure there's no introduction of 1/8 rhythm previously in easier diffs
2017-08-24 17:43 bite you death: i dont think so
2017-08-24 17:44 N0thingSpecial: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1388436 MrWeebl - Narwhals [Collab Light Hard]]
2017-08-24 17:45 bite you death: 00:22:937 (1) - oops
2017-08-24 17:45 bite you death: 00:25:520 (5) -
2017-08-24 17:45 bite you death: oops
2017-08-24 17:45 bite you death: 00:28:699 (5) - oops
2017-08-24 17:46 N0thingSpecial: tbh not really a fan of the constant DS, could use a bit more variable spacing in 2 to 3 parts of the map
2017-08-24 17:46 bite you death: its more of an advanced diff
2017-08-24 17:46 bite you death: but ye
2017-08-24 17:47 N0thingSpecial: if it's advance I guess maybe
2017-08-24 17:48 N0thingSpecial: 00:18:368 (1,2,3) - this is kinda meh in terms of movement improved the flow after 00:18:368 (4) - that slider idk if u meant that but to lazy to read that whole unformated shit lol
2017-08-24 17:48 N0thingSpecial: new players are defintely not moving through the entire slider
2017-08-24 17:48 bite you death: what notes do u mean
2017-08-24 17:49 N0thingSpecial: from 1 to 2
2017-08-24 17:49 N0thingSpecial: mainly
2017-08-24 17:49 bite you death: which ones
2017-08-24 17:49 bite you death: before the kicksliders or the kicksliders?0
2017-08-24 17:49 N0thingSpecial: before
2017-08-24 17:49 bite you death: ok
2017-08-24 17:49 bite you death: uh
2017-08-24 17:49 bite you death: i dont see the issue
2017-08-24 17:49 N0thingSpecial: 00:18:169 (3,1,2,3) - this entire thing is a straight line, and i thin k00:18:368 (1) - is an uncomfortable stop
2017-08-24 17:50 N0thingSpecial: I think
2017-08-24 17:50 bite you death: i dont notice anything
2017-08-24 17:50 bite you death: so idk
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: yea thats because you're 7k rank
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: lol
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: idk you could disagree
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: yea thats because you're 7k rank
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: lol
2017-08-24 17:51 bite you death: ok bancho
2017-08-24 17:51 bite you death: thank
2017-08-24 17:51 bite you death: it just sent me yea thats because you're 7k rank and lol twice
2017-08-24 17:51 N0thingSpecial: I was thinking you could argue 00:17:971 (2,3,1,2,3) - accompany the support vocals I guess
2017-08-24 17:52 N0thingSpecial: the linear flow ish
2017-08-24 17:52 bite you death: idk i didnt map this part
2017-08-24 17:52 N0thingSpecial: thing
2017-08-24 17:52 N0thingSpecial: thats going on
2017-08-24 17:52 N0thingSpecial: either tell him see how he reacts
2017-08-24 17:52 bite you death: ok
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: 00:22:341 (5,6) - gay
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: 00:28:699 (4,5) - gay
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1388437 MrWeebl - Narwhals [Ohwow's Normal]]
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: I agree!
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: fix
2017-08-24 17:53 N0thingSpecial: I mean you already know
2017-08-24 17:53 bite you death: wat
2017-08-24 17:53 bite you death: start in corner?
2017-08-24 17:54 N0thingSpecial: no the sudden introduction of 3/4s
2017-08-24 17:54 N0thingSpecial: like there's need to be something here 00:22:739 -
2017-08-24 17:54 bite you death: wym 3/4
2017-08-24 17:54 bite you death: isnt 3/4 the 4 tick ones
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: yea but in the sense that there's no 1/4 timing here
2017-08-24 17:55 bite you death: o u mean gaps
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: just simplify it as 3/4
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: yea
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: like there's nothing that support sudden emphasis on red ticks
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: besides the music itself
2017-08-24 17:55 N0thingSpecial: which isn't enough
2017-08-24 17:56 bite you death: 00:23:334 (7) -
2017-08-24 17:56 bite you death: follows voice+
2017-08-24 17:57 N0thingSpecial: yea but thats after the 00:22:937 (6) - which the player is probably already confused by then
2017-08-24 17:57 bite you death: would a repeat 1/1 slider fit there better do u think?
2017-08-24 17:58 N0thingSpecial: i mean easiest solution is just to add a note that stack on 00:22:938 (6) -
2017-08-24 17:58 N0thingSpecial: since you already have 00:22:143 (4,5) - going on in the intro
2017-08-24 17:58 bite you death: i guess
2017-08-24 17:59 N0thingSpecial: 00:25:520 (4,5,6) - aesthetics plz
2017-08-24 17:59 bite you death: square lol
2017-08-24 17:59 N0thingSpecial: at least he did it consistently
2017-08-24 17:59 N0thingSpecial: but
2017-08-24 17:59 N0thingSpecial: squares
2017-08-24 17:59 N0thingSpecial: why
2017-08-24 18:00 N0thingSpecial: ACTION is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1388435 MrWeebl - Narwhals [Easy]]
2017-08-24 18:00 N0thingSpecial: cancer remap plz
2017-08-24 18:00 N0thingSpecial: ty kds
2017-08-24 18:00 N0thingSpecial: oh wait you already gave me
2017-08-24 18:00 bite you death: wow im getting every meme mod ever flashbacks
2017-08-24 18:01 bite you death: thx for input on easy i wil make sure to make greatingest map of it
2017-08-24 18:01 N0thingSpecial: you save log and post for the others im too laze for that
2017-08-24 18:01 bite you death: ok

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Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2017-08-24T17:57:37+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
[Hard]
00:20:553 (8) - don't use this in hard diff lol, it's too hard
Generally this set is fine, I think you can try to rank it.
GL

changed that stream part to be more fit for a hard diff, ty

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ShinodaYuu

633 posts

Joined May 2016

ShinodaYuu 2017-08-24T18:16:35+00:00

Hi, from my queue

[Easy]
There's no kiai in this diff
00:19:162 (1) - Spinner recovery time is too low
00:22:937 (3) - Start on 00:22:739 -
00:29:295 (3) - ^

[Normal]
00:21:149 - Start kiai here
00:21:149 (2) - Nc here not on 00:20:752 (1) -
00:22:938 (6) - Start on 00:22:938 (6) -
00:24:328 (2) - Nc here not on 00:23:931 (1) -
00:25:519 (4,5,6) - Curved would be better
00:29:295 (5) - Start on 00:29:096 -
00:31:878 (5,6,7) - Curved would be better
00:33:070 (1) - Remove nc

[Light Hard]
00:10:222 - Give a click and nc , remove from 00:10:421 (1) -
00:12:705 - Fill
00:14:792 (3) - Nc here, remove from 00:14:394 (1) -, 00:15:189 (1) - and 00:15:984 (1) -
00:17:971 (2) - Nc here, remove from 00:17:573 (1) -
00:20:603 - Fill

[Hard]
00:13:202 (2) - Stack with 00:12:408 (6) -
00:19:957 (2) - Put it in line with circles
00:20:354 (3) - Here add one more reversion (on hard people usually start streams like this with weaker finger)

[Insane]
00:04:063 (5) - Make it 3/4 like 00:02:474 (3) -
00:20:354 - and 00:20:354 - add a circle
00:20:553 - add 1/8 slider with 2 reversions

Good luck with your mapset

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-24T18:21:25+00:00

Pata-Mon wrote:
[Easy]
00:19:162 (1,1) - at least use 4 beats gap after spinners in ez diff well this messed up the whole map :v ill keep unless its unrankable
00:21:149 (1,2,3) - you can use this rhythm: https://puu.sh/xithq/4b4cc8e653.png Because 1/1 gap is much easier to read then 3/2 in ez diff fixed
00:27:507 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
[Light Hard]
You can change this diff name to Advanced if you want did
ar is too high to this diff, this diff is really easy and bpm is low. ar6-7 is better. changed to 7
nc is abused and not consistent in this diff. You need to remove some nc like 00:10:421 (1) - or 00:12:010 (1) - and check the whole diff to make the nc consistent (every 2 bar lines or 1 bar lines? 00:23:931 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this part is 2) made it consistent
[Insane]
00:25:123 - there's no vocal, i don't think it need to be clickable. just use a 1/1 slider at 00:24:725 - is better fixed
Generally this set is fine, I think you can try to rank it.
GL ty!!

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-24T18:48:17+00:00

Milar001 wrote:
Hi, from my queue

[Easy]
There's no kiai in this diff
00:19:162 (1) - Spinner recovery time is too low already mentioned and answered
00:22:937 (3) - Start on 00:22:739 - no
00:29:295 (3) - ^ no

[Light Hard]
00:10:222 - Give a click and nc , remove from 00:10:421 (1) - no
00:12:705 - Fill no
00:14:792 (3) - Nc here, remove from 00:14:394 (1) -, 00:15:189 (1) - and 00:15:984 (1) - no
00:17:971 (2) - Nc here, remove from 00:17:573 (1) - no
00:20:603 - Fill no

[Insane]
00:04:063 (5) - Make it 3/4 like 00:02:474 (3) - maybe
00:20:354 - and 00:20:354 - add a circle no
00:20:553 - add 1/8 slider with 2 reversions no, i'd rather keep this simple

Good luck with your mapset ty

N0thingSpecial

2,355 posts

Joined November 2015

N0thingSpecial 2017-08-25T05:44:24+00:00

Tfw set owner too lazy to format my irc

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-08-25T06:12:21+00:00

yes

Ohwow

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-08-25T17:11:29+00:00

Milar001 wrote:
[Normal]
00:21:149 - Start kiai here Measure starts here though.
00:21:149 (2) - Nc here not on 00:20:752 (1) - ^
00:22:938 (6) - Start on 00:22:938 (6) - Following vocal
00:24:328 (2) - Nc here not on 00:23:931 (1) - same
00:25:519 (4,5,6) - Curved would be better stylistic preference
00:29:295 (5) - Start on 00:29:096 - Following vocal
00:31:878 (5,6,7) - Curved would be better stylistic preference
00:33:070 (1) - Remove nc k

Pata-Mon wrote:
[Normal]
00:12:805 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - change hitsound by yourself, this part is not fit to be copy I don't see anything wrong with it.
00:17:573 (1) - remove nc k
00:23:335 - 00:29:692 - add hitsound (whistle maybe)k

thx guiz

Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2017-08-25T17:11:50+00:00

Milar001 wrote:
Hi, from my queue

[Hard]
00:13:202 (2) - Stack with 00:12:408 (6) -
00:19:957 (2) - Put it in line with circles
00:20:354 (3) - Here add one more reversion (on hard people usually start streams like this with weaker finger) id rather have the circles start on a white tick so its less confusing

Good luck with your mapset

no reply = fixed

thanks for suggestions :3

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Venix

Global Moderator

1,937 posts

Joined February 2015

Venix 2017-09-01T20:34:29+00:00

From queue.

Red means this point is about unrankable thing.

[General]

Kiais are inconsistent, what are you think about adding kiai from Ohwow's diff to entire of spread?

[Metadata]

Artist: MrWeebl
Title: Narwhals

Resources:

Official youtube video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ykwqXuMPsoc
Official site: http://weebls-stuff.com/toons/narwhals- ... o-mrweebl/

[Easy]

00:03:268 - This section feels less different in comparsion to others. 6 x 1/1 slider in a row plays boring. Honestly, I prefer changing 00:04:858 (3,4) - these two 1/1 sliders into one (2/1) with circle on last white tick. It would make this part less boring. And of course you'll keep consistency with 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4) - this composition.
00:16:381 (4) - I think this repeat isn't work good here because you've strong downbeat on it and it should be clickable I think. It seems like you was focused on this rythm on entire of this part (for example 00:14:394 (1) - 00:15:189 (2) - 00:17:573 (1) - ) so you should follow this rythm here too. I prefer put circle instead of slider head and place 1/1 slider 00:16:778 - here. I think it's good option because you're keeping rythm consistency. Also, what are you think about placing like on image below?
AR1 for better visualisation
00:19:162 (1) - Reverse arrow on this slider is invisible, which is unrankable. You should unstack 00:17:573 (1,1) - tails of these slider to get rankable composition. I think you'll keep fine aesthetics if you place it like this.
Also, 00:19:162 (1,3) - this overlap looks a bit weird in comparsion to fact that every other compositions on this diff are stakes and it breaks aesthetics a bit but if you'll apply fix from previous point this issue will disappear.

[Normal]

00:08:037 (3,4,5) - 00:09:626 (1,2,3) - 00:11:216 (4,5,6) - 00:12:805 (1,2,3) - 00:14:394 (4,5,6) - What are you think about making them a bit different in rythm? These compositions are all the same in rythm aspect and it's getting boring on this section. I think it will be better if you delete 00:13:401 (2) - this circle to emphasise rythm on 00:12:805 (1,2,3) - this one, which is rhythmically a bit other in comparsion to rest of composition I highlighted because on this circle sound is not that strong like on others.
Also, what are you think about changing 00:11:216 (4,5,6) - this one into 1/1 repeat + circle like you did 00:04:858 (4) - here on very similar rythm just to keep consistency?

[Collab Advanced]

00:00:090 (1,2) - 00:06:447 (1,2) - Since these rythm are the same why have you used different spacing? You should make these spacings consistent by increasing spacing on first one from 1.0 to 1.2 or vice versa. Honestly, I prefer option when you're spicing up spacing on first one because it works better for rythm fitting.
00:12:606 - This clap seems to be unnecessary here just because you haven't clap sound in song here.
00:12:805 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/2 sliders spam plays and seems boring. What are you think about making it like 00:14:394 (1,2,3,4,5) - here. Rythm in music is the same but these two circles making gameplay more different and less boring. If you do this you'll get a nice consistency with composition highlighted by me above.
00:18:368 (4,5) - Why have you used 1.3 distance snap here? It seems to be too much in comparsion to entire of map when you have used 1.2 and it's unreasonable because you haven't here strong downbeat or something similar.
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4,1) - Don't you think this kick slider stream is a bit too much for advanced diff. Stream on hard is easier so I prefer nerf it to get it comfortable for players. Mby try 2x 1/4 slider with repeat instead of these 4 1/4 ones?
00:28:699 (1,2) - I think you should place here 1/2 repeat slider instead like you did 00:22:341 (1) - here on the same rythm just to keep good consistency. You can use circle + 1/2 slider instead of repeat 00:22:341 (1) - here but honestly I think first option is much better for rythm.

[HC's Hard]

Overall some of spacing changes look random because some of rythms you was focused on are ignored. For example 00:02:275 (2,3) - vs 00:03:666 (2,3) - // 00:03:666 (2,3) - vs 00:05:255 (2,3) - . Rythm is almost the same but you haven't increased spacing on first ones when you've did it on second ones which doesn't make sense at all I think. You should emphasise every rythm like this. If you are focusing on 00:00:884 - 00:01:679 - 00:04:063 - 00:07:242 - etc. this rythm and you're using for it spacing changes you should add spacing changes 00:02:474 - 00:05:652 - on these ones too because spacing consistency need it.
00:26:315 (5,1) - I think this overlap brakes aesthetics a bit and just looks bad. I prefer just move 00:26:315 (5) - this slider a bit to right to make blanked with 00:27:110 (1) - this one, like it looks you wanted to.

Good luck~

Last edited by Venix 2017-09-30T18:03:39+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-09-01T20:59:29+00:00

Venix wrote:
From queue.

Red means this point is about unrankable thing.

[General]
Kiais are inconsistent, what are you think about adding kiai from Ohwow's diff to entire of spread?
ill think about it

[Metadata]
Artist: MrWeebl
Title: Narwhals
Resources:
Official youtube video:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ykwqXuMPsoc
Official site: http://weebls-stuff.com/toons/narwhals- ... o-mrweebl/
yes that is correct

[Easy]
00:03:268 - This section feels less different in comparsion to others. 6 x 1/1 slider in a row plays boring. Honestly, I prefer changing 00:04:858 (3,4) - these two 1/1 sliders into one (2/1) with circle on last white tick. It would make this part less boring. And of course you'll keep consistency with 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4) - this composition. 00:06:447 (1,2,3,4) -, as it is already mapped with the same rhythm as 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4) - is the same part of the song, changed it to something else though.
00:16:381 (4) - I think this repeat isn't work good here because you've strong downbeat on it and it should be clickable I think. It seems like you was focused on this rythm on entire of this part (for example 00:14:394 (1) - 00:15:189 (2) - 00:17:573 (1) - ) so you should follow this rythm here too. I prefer put circle instead of slider head and place 1/1 slider 00:16:778 - here. I think it's good option because you're keeping rythm consistency. Also, what are you think about placing like on image below? changed to similar pattern
AR1 for better visualisation
00:19:162 (1) - Reverse arrow on this slider is invisible, which is unrankable. You should unstack 00:17:573 (1,1) - tails of these slider to get rankable composition. I think you'll keep fine aesthetics if you place it like this. changed
Also, 00:19:162 (1,3) - this overlap looks a bit weird in comparsion to fact that every other compositions on this diff are stakes and it breaks aesthetics a bit but if you'll apply fix from previous point this issue will disappear. changed
[Collab Advanced]
00:28:699 (1,2) - I think you should place here 1/2 repeat slider instead like you did 00:22:341 (1) - here on the same rythm just to keep good consistency. You can use circle + 1/2 slider instead of repeat 00:22:341 (1) - here but honestly I think first option is much better for rythm. changed
I don't have time to mod insane rn, poke me in game if you want it
Propably will end this mod tomorrow.

thanks for mod!!

Lusumi

227 posts

Joined December 2015

Lusumi 2017-09-01T21:17:05+00:00

Venix wrote:
From queue.

Red means this point is about unrankable thing.

[General]
Kiais are inconsistent, what are you think about adding kiai from Ohwow's diff to entire of spread?
[Metadata]
Artist: MrWeebl
Title: Narwhals
Resources:
Official youtube video:https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ykwqXuMPsoc
Official site: http://weebls-stuff.com/toons/narwhals- ... o-mrweebl/
[Easy]
00:03:268 - This section feels less different in comparsion to others. 6 x 1/1 slider in a row plays boring. Honestly, I prefer changing 00:04:858 (3,4) - these two 1/1 sliders into one (2/1) with circle on last white tick. It would make this part less boring. And of course you'll keep consistency with 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4) - this composition.
00:16:381 (4) - I think this repeat isn't work good here because you've strong downbeat on it and it should be clickable I think. It seems like you was focused on this rythm on entire of this part (for example 00:14:394 (1) - 00:15:189 (2) - 00:17:573 (1) - ) so you should follow this rythm here too. I prefer put circle instead of slider head and place 1/1 slider 00:16:778 - here. I think it's good option because you're keeping rythm consistency. Also, what are you think about placing like on image below?
AR1 for better visualisation
00:19:162 (1) - Reverse arrow on this slider is invisible, which is unrankable. You should unstack 00:17:573 (1,1) - tails of these slider to get rankable composition. I think you'll keep fine aesthetics if you place it like this.
Also, 00:19:162 (1,3) - this overlap looks a bit weird in comparsion to fact that every other compositions on this diff are stakes and it breaks aesthetics a bit but if you'll apply fix from previous point this issue will disappear.
[Normal]
00:08:037 (3,4,5) - 00:09:626 (1,2,3) - 00:11:216 (4,5,6) - 00:12:805 (1,2,3) - 00:14:394 (4,5,6) - What are you think about making them a bit different in rythm? These compositions are all the same in rythm aspect and it's getting boring on this section. I think it will be better if you delete 00:13:401 (2) - this circle to emphasise rythm on 00:12:805 (1,2,3) - this one, which is rhythmically a bit other in comparsion to rest of composition I highlighted because on this circle sound is not that strong like on others.
Also, what are you think about changing 00:11:216 (4,5,6) - this one into 1/1 repeat + circle like you did 00:04:858 (4) - here on very similar rythm just to keep consistency?
[Collab Advanced]
00:00:090 (1,2) - 00:06:447 (1,2) - Since these rythm are the same why have you used different spacing? You should make these spacings consistent by increasing spacing on first one from 1.0 to 1.2 or vice versa. Honestly, I prefer option when you're spicing up spacing on first one because it works better for rythm fitting. Difference is so small it doesn't really matter and if i would change it it would look ugly and messy
00:12:606 - This clap seems to be unnecessary here just because you haven't clap sound in song here. changed
00:12:805 (1,2,3,4) - This 1/2 sliders spam plays and seems boring. What are you think about making it like 00:14:394 (1,2,3,4,5) - here. Rythm in music is the same but these two circles making gameplay more different and less boring. If you do this you'll get a nice consistency with composition highlighted by me above. but music on that part is a bit different theres that uh idk sound in the background and its more calm so i wanted to simplify the part there
00:18:368 (4,5) - Why have you used 1.3 distance snap here? It seems to be too much in comparsion to entire of map when you have used 1.2 and it's unreasonable because you haven't here strong downbeat or something similar. not noticable at all but changed it
00:19:957 (1,2,3,4,1) - Don't you think this kick slider stream is a bit too much for advanced diff. Stream on hard is easier so I prefer nerf it to get it comfortable for players. Mby try 2x 1/4 slider with repeat instead of these 4 1/4 ones? they play like singletaps with only difference that slider ignore acc and repeat slider can be hard to read and are cancer on things like that
00:28:699 (1,2) - I think you should place here 1/2 repeat slider instead like you did 00:22:341 (1) - here on the same rythm just to keep good consistency. You can use circle + 1/2 slider instead of repeat 00:22:341 (1) - here but honestly I think first option is much better for rythm.
[HC's Hard]
Overall some of spacing changes look random because some of rythms you was focused on are ignored. For example 00:02:275 (2,3) - vs 00:03:666 (2,3) - // 00:03:666 (2,3) - vs 00:05:255 (2,3) - . Rythm is almost the same but you haven't increased spacing on first ones when you've did it on second ones which doesn't make sense at all I think. You should emphasise every rythm like this. If you are focusing on 00:00:884 - 00:01:679 - 00:04:063 - 00:07:242 - etc. this rythm and you're using for it spacing changes you should add spacing changes 00:02:474 - 00:05:652 - on these ones too because spacing consistency need it.
00:26:315 (5,1) - I think this overlap brakes aesthetics a bit and just looks bad. I prefer just move 00:26:315 (5) - this slider a bit to right to make blanked with 00:27:110 (1) - this one, like it looks you wanted to.
I don't have time to mod insane rn, poke me in game if you want it
Propably will end this mod tomorrow.

osu file format v14

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Ohwow

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-09-02T01:23:04+00:00

Venix wrote:
[Normal]
00:08:037 (3,4,5) - 00:09:626 (1,2,3) - 00:11:216 (4,5,6) - 00:12:805 (1,2,3) - 00:14:394 (4,5,6) - What are you think about making them a bit different in rythm? These compositions are all the same in rythm aspect and it's getting boring on this section. Song doesn't change much, so I don't think I have to change up stuff. I think it will be better if you delete 00:13:401 (2) - this circle to emphasise rythm on 00:12:805 (1,2,3) - this one, which is rhythmically a bit other in comparsion to rest of composition I highlighted because on this circle sound is not that strong like on others. k
Also, what are you think about changing 00:11:216 (4,5,6) - this one into 1/1 repeat + circle like you did 00:04:858 (4) - here on very similar rythm just to keep consistency? did something different instead, don't want to make it the same just the song kinda differs a bit.

Thanks!

Also, I want to point out that kiais of GDs don't have to be consistent. Different people have different perspective of the song.

Fixed

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Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2017-09-02T02:13:20+00:00

Venix wrote:
From queue.

Red means this point is about unrankable thing.

[HC's Hard]
Overall some of spacing changes look random because some of rythms you was focused on are ignored. For example 00:02:275 (2,3) - vs 00:03:666 (2,3) - // 00:03:666 (2,3) - vs 00:05:255 (2,3) - . Rythm is almost the same but you haven't increased spacing on first ones when you've did it on second ones which doesn't make sense at all I think. You should emphasise every rythm like this. If you are focusing on 00:00:884 - 00:01:679 - 00:04:063 - 00:07:242 - etc. this rythm and you're using for it spacing changes you should add spacing changes 00:02:474 - 00:05:652 - on these ones too because spacing consistency need it.
00:26:315 (5,1) - I think this overlap brakes aesthetics a bit and just looks bad. I prefer just move 00:26:315 (5) - this slider a bit to right to make blanked with 00:27:110 (1) - this one, like it looks you wanted to.

fixed all, thanks a lot!

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- titan

238 posts

Joined July 2016

- titan 2017-09-03T02:43:33+00:00

hi, nm from my queue

how do i mod at 0% volume

Easy
00:05:255 (4) - seems kinda weird to put this slider on this beat, when the sound feels less important than the sound a beat before or after it.
00:08:037 (3,4,1) - perfect triangle?
00:12:805 (1) - move the first white anchor down a few pixels, blanket looks kinda bad
00:15:984 (3,4) - this doesn't blaankettttt
00:16:977 (4) - ^ this is placed in the same spot so ya
00:19:162 (1) - move the red anchor to the right like 2 pixels the imperfect blanket make me angerry
00:26:315 (4) - i don't like this slider and idk how to explain why. a normal wave slider or something would look better imo

ohwow's NARmal xddddd
why are you actually everywhere wtf
00:11:215 (4,6) - idk if it can be called blanketing for sliders with just a red anchor but like center the circle between both segments of it like this bc it looks nice

00:23:335 (7,2) - naZi blanket hAh

Advanced
00:10:023 (2,4) - imperfect blanket
00:21:348 (2,3) - ^
00:22:142 (1,2) - ^
00:28:500 (4,1) - this blanket is pretty off :/
ugh why was this diff a blanket mod

good luck!

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-09-03T09:27:19+00:00

- titan wrote:
hi, nm from my queue

how do i mod at 0% volume
Easy
00:05:255 (4) - seems kinda weird to put this slider on this beat, when the sound feels less important than the sound a beat before or after it. changed
00:08:037 (3,4,1) - perfect triangle? ye sure
00:12:805 (1) - move the first white anchor down a few pixels, blanket looks kinda bad ye sure
00:15:984 (3,4) - this doesn't blaankettttt sigh
00:16:977 (4) - ^ this is placed in the same spot so ya i think you mean 5 but its fixed
00:19:162 (1) - move the red anchor to the right like 2 pixels the imperfect blanket make me angerry nop
00:26:315 (4) - i don't like this slider and idk how to explain why. a normal wave slider or something would look better imo THIS IS MY SIGNATURE MOVE!

Advanced
00:10:023 (2,4) - imperfect blanket its good
00:21:348 (2,3) - ^ ye ye
00:22:142 (1,2) - ^ ye ye
00:28:500 (4,1) - this blanket is pretty off :/ zzz
ugh why was this diff a blanket mod
good luck!

ty for 200iq blanket mod

Trust

1,245 posts

Joined March 2012

Trust 2017-09-04T03:22:55+00:00

[General]

The soft-hitfinishes used on 00:14:394 and 00:20:752 do not cover any unique sound in the track. Consider removing these additive hitsounds

[Easy]

00:12:805 (1) - Move to 401|9 to perfectly blanket with the tail of (5)
SPOILER
00:21:149 (2) - NC for new phrase and music change?

[Insane]

AR8.5 feels better in case you were wondering
00:32:673 (1,2) - You're skipping over all the 1/4 in the outro. (HC's Hard has more 1/4 clicks here). Consider using this rhythm to make the outro more interesting since exaggerated 1/2 jumps are rather generic
SPOILER

Not much to say, other diffs look fine. Well I mean the song is only 30 seconds long lol.
Gl

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-09-04T12:48:57+00:00

Trust wrote:
[General]

The soft-hitfinishes used on 00:14:394 and 00:20:752 do not cover any unique sound in the track. Consider removing these additive hitsounds removed them in all diffs
[Easy]

00:12:805 (1) - Move to 401|9 to perfectly blanket with the tail of (5) did
SPOILER
00:21:149 (2) - NC for new phrase and music change? changed
[Insane]

AR8.5 feels better in case you were wondering i wanna try to keep it ar 9 so i can play it (lul)
00:32:673 (1,2) - You're skipping over all the 1/4 in the outro. (HC's Hard has more 1/4 clicks here). Consider using this rhythm to make the outro more interesting since exaggerated 1/2 jumps are rather generic changed the rhythm to something similar
SPOILER

Not much to say, other diffs look fine. Well I mean the song is only 30 seconds long lol.
Gl

thanks for mod!!

Ohwow

1,202 posts

Joined July 2013

Ohwow 2017-09-04T21:09:31+00:00

@ -titan, fixed

aaaa

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: thing.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 90
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 0.9
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Narwhals
TitleUnicode:Narwhals
Artist:MrWeebl
ArtistUnicode:MrWeebl
Creator:bite you death
Version:Ohwow's Normal
Source:
Tags:ohwow hydrocannon13 hc youtube weebl's stuff
BeatmapID:1388437
BeatmapSetID:652142

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.6
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"memes.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
90,397.350993377483,4,2,1,60,1,0
20752,-100,4,2,1,60,0,1
33070,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 159,159,255
Combo2 : 134,249,215
Combo3 : 1,61,126
Combo4 : 14,114,73
SliderBorder : 200,230,200

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FinL

33 posts

Joined July 2015

FinL 2017-09-11T22:44:29+00:00

I'm new to modding so please forgive me if I don't make any sense.

Monodon monoceros

The only map that I had problems with was the last difficulty cause the NCs at some portion didn't line up with the correct beats of the map, like how they do in areas like 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:11:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). If theres a reason why there are new combos in the areas I listed below, I don't know. xd

00:10:421 (1) - Remove nc
00:18:368 (4) - ^
00:25:918 (3) - ^
00:26:315 (1) - ^
00:32:275 (3) - ^
00:32:673 (1) - ^

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-09-12T13:31:44+00:00

FinL wrote:
I'm new to modding so please forgive me if I don't make any sense. dont make nc/blanket mods and ur good : ok_hand :

Monodon monoceros
The only map that I had problems with was the last difficulty cause the NCs at some portion didn't line up with the correct beats of the map, like how they do in areas like 00:00:090 (1,2,3,4,5) and 00:11:216 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). If theres a reason why there are new combos in the areas I listed below, I don't know. xd

00:10:421 (1) - Remove nc sure
00:18:368 (4) - ^ sure
00:25:918 (3) - ^ for pattern readability
00:26:315 (1) - ^ ^
00:32:275 (3) - ^ 1,2,1,2,1,2
00:32:673 (1) - ^ 1,2,1,2,1,2

ty

Kotori-Chan

496 posts

Joined February 2014

Kotori-Chan 2017-09-12T22:05:54+00:00

Just dont let em touch your balls~ I actually hate this song lul´

*gets amazing horse flashbacks*
Nice hitsounds ~
BUT !!!!!
No video ? i'm disappointed

bite you death

Nomination Assessment Team

656 posts

Joined May 2015

Topic Starter

bite you death 2017-09-13T08:55:47+00:00

Kotori-Chan wrote:
Just dont let em touch your balls~ I actually hate this song lul´ samE duDE

No video ? i'm disappointed ill try to get a good video for u

awesomemacD

169 posts

Joined January 2015

awesomemacD 2017-09-16T11:21:49+00:00

HC's Hard:
00:11:613 (2,3,4) - why triple? i don't think it should be there
00:14:792 (2) - replace this with a ctrl+h+j of 00:14:394 (1) - , it looks better
00:15:388 (4,5,6) - this also shouldn't be a triple
00:33:070 (2,3,4) - ^
that's all

Vespirit

350 posts

Joined December 2014

Vespirit 2017-09-16T18:26:44+00:00

awesomemacD wrote:
HC's Hard:
00:11:613 (2,3,4) - why triple? i don't think it should be there why, its to the vocals
00:14:792 (2) - replace this with a ctrl+h+j of 00:14:394 (1) - , it looks better looks fine imo, its a ctrl+j
00:15:388 (4,5,6) - this also shouldn't be a triple disagree, i think it fits because of the way he says "kickass facial" sounds very cluttered
00:33:070 (2,3,4) - ^ edited this ending, including changing this to a reverse
that's all

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