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Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.)

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NatsumeRin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月11日 at 21:03:46

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Senbonzakura (Short Ver.)
Source: Kurousa-P
Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 eveless goodbye
BPM: 154
Filesize: 22386kb
Play Time: 02:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.61 stars, 144 notes)
  2. eveless (4.93 stars, 369 notes)
  3. Normal (4.23 stars, 264 notes)
  4. Rin (5 stars, 569 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm15630734
我大千本一周年……
Raging Bull
Stress? orz

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Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
changed to Rin...

thanks for stars anyway.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
floor

SPOILER
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Megurine Luka
逛周刊看到这首我就知道铃大人要出手了O O
PV里Luka那么嫩我略不服
[Ghost]
fight
Zelos
7 stars and no mods. Lovely im the first then! lol

Folder:
Clean here

Please note any mod I post is only a suggestion and can be freely ignored.

Normal:
00:46:868 (1) - perhaps remove the new combo here? the 2 slider combo before seems a bit short in my opinion.
Well I suppose I see why this has not recieved that many mods, its pretty flawless so far.

Eveless:
00:19:596 (4,5) - im not liking the fact that the end of slider 4 is covering more than 50% of slider 5. please move slider 5 out to the right some please.
01:13:362 (1,2) - same situation as the above except you would want to move it in a different direction.
01:18:037 (1,2,3) - the ends of these sliders are just slightly unstacked. fix this? it would look a little neater.
02:12:583 (1,2) - again slider end 1 is covering mroe than 50% of slider 2. please change this.

Rin:
:D I love Rin diffs
02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the only thing I dont like here is the 1/4th looking pattern is 1/2 and the 1/2 looking pattern is 1/4th :p
02:26:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^^^
02:28:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^^

I usually dont star incomplete sets but so far what you have is amazing
so Star!
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Zelos wrote:

7 stars and no mods. Lovely im the first then! lol

Folder:
Clean here

Please note any mod I post is only a suggestion and can be freely ignored. emm... also have it here: 01:59:677 (1). i use a new combo because it's not at a very regular place. with a new combo players may pay more attention...? dunno.

Normal:
00:46:868 (1) - perhaps remove the new combo here? the 2 slider combo before seems a bit short in my opinion.
Well I suppose I see why this has not recieved that many mods, its pretty flawless so far.

Eveless:
00:19:596 (4,5) - im not liking the fact that the end of slider 4 is covering more than 50% of slider 5. please move slider 5 out to the right some please.
01:13:362 (1,2) - same situation as the above except you would want to move it in a different direction.
01:18:037 (1,2,3) - the ends of these sliders are just slightly unstacked. fix this? it would look a little neater.
02:12:583 (1,2) - again slider end 1 is covering mroe than 50% of slider 2. please change this.

Rin:
:D I love Rin diffs
02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the only thing I dont like here is the 1/4th looking pattern is 1/2 and the 1/2 looking pattern is 1/4th :p well it's the part...= = try go along with the pitch.
02:26:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^^^
02:28:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^^

I usually dont star incomplete sets but so far what you have is amazing
so Star!
eveless

Zelos wrote:

7 stars and no mods. Lovely im the first then! lol



Eveless:
00:19:596 (4,5) - im not liking the fact that the end of slider 4 is covering more than 50% of slider 5. please move slider 5 out to the right some please.I think this is not a problem since the rhythm
01:13:362 (1,2) - same situation as the above except you would want to move it in a different direction.hmm...
01:18:037 (1,2,3) - the ends of these sliders are just slightly unstacked. fix this? it would look a little neater.same with before
02:12:583 (1,2) - again slider end 1 is covering mroe than 50% of slider 2. please change this.^
Download: Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.) (NatsumeRin) [eveless].osu
YaMaO04
GO GO Ranked :) :) :)
Faust
Nothing on Easy & Normal ( ´∀`)

eveless: Noticed a few of the nudging overlaps were on purpose and made consistent, it's not much of an issue even if I'm going over "neatness". They're well-suited enough I think, and given your tendency to use them often.

- 00:16:674 (2) - Hmm, it's better not to place this so close in proximity against the previous notes. Maybe something like this formation so their attention is brought more to the right side like this?


- 00:32:453 (3) - Probably on purpose, though I suggest you align this properly?


- 00:42:583 (2) - Would suggest a repeat instead, you would need to remove the note on - 00:43:362 - if you follow this.

- 01:10:050 (5) - Hmm, maybe the only major overlap. Suggest you shift - 01:10:245 (1,2) - more to the right to avoid this.

- 01:36:349 (5) - Seems like an odd angle to put this slider at.

- 02:12:972 (2) - Little touch on this part.
- 02:16:089 (2,3) - Heads up here, might want to take notice of this since you may want to reconsider and change it.

IRC mod for Rin:

SPOILER
17:27 <Faust> : playing is so crap today :(
17:28 <NatsumeRin> : hope i didn't make you nervous = =
17:28 <Faust> : hahah
17:30 <Faust> : oh god
17:30 <NatsumeRin> : lol
17:30 <Faust> : didn't see that coming at all
17:30 <Faust> : 02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you could make them into more compressed stacks
17:31 <Faust> : so people can tell the difference between these and
17:31 <Faust> : 02:26:219 (1,2,3) - these
17:31 <Faust> : lol
17:31 <NatsumeRin> : i hope not compress them too much (not make it like a manual stack)
17:34 <Faust> : gah, video..
17:35 <NatsumeRin> : = =
17:35 <NatsumeRin> : should be better now
17:40 <Faust> : 01:58:557 (1,2,3,4) - always gets me :l
17:40 <Faust> : I think that's about all the things I feel are odd.
17:40 <Faust> : rest is smooth :3
17:41 <Faust> : the animation for the video this time is pretty cool
17:41 <Faust> : few static images
17:42 <NatsumeRin> : osu.ppy.sh/ss/158706
17:42 <NatsumeRin> : what about this?
17:44 <Faust> : Yeah, that's good
17:44 <NatsumeRin> : ok, i'll change
17:45 <Faust> : kinda feel for this song, it's not a good idea to have such pattern stacking
17:45 <Faust> : given the video as well, lol
17:45 <Faust> : it makes you really look for it.
17:46 <Faust> : Out of curiosity, why did you start 02:00:115 (1) here?
17:46 <Faust> : Nothing wrong with it, just curious :3
17:46 <NatsumeRin> : well... if starts at the white line it feels late a bit
17:46 <NatsumeRin> : just that, nothing special
17:47 <Faust> : I think regardless of why, it's perfect, despite being overlapped
17:47 <Faust> : the vocal rises and sinks, it kinda "connects"
17:48 <NatsumeRin> : yep, part of the meaning
17:48 <NatsumeRin> : another part... is i just love overlap
17:48 <Faust> : haha
17:49 <Faust> : 02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this section is fine for me now at 2nd attempt so you could let it stay and wait for
17:49 <Faust> : other opinions :)
17:49 <NatsumeRin> : hehe, i think most players will feel "wtf" at the first try
17:50 <NatsumeRin> : but when they calm down and they could feel the part= =
17:50 <NatsumeRin> : this is probably a part i won't change for any reasons
17:50 <Faust> : looks like 1/4, so they will miss. Then the actual 1/4 maybe some will still 1/2
17:50 <Faust> : lol
17:50 <Faust> : Yeah
17:50 <Faust> : you need to be calm and read the music at that part

Excellent.
eveless

Faust wrote:

Nothing on Easy & Normal ( ´∀`)

eveless: Noticed a few of the nudging overlaps were on purpose and made consistent, it's not much of an issue even if I'm going over "neatness". They're well-suited enough I think, and given your tendency to use them often.

- 00:16:674 (2) - Hmm, it's better not to place this so close in proximity against the previous notes. Maybe something like this formation so their attention is brought more to the right side like this?


- 00:32:453 (3) - Probably on purpose, though I suggest you align this properly?


- 00:42:583 (2) - Would suggest a repeat instead, you would need to remove the note on - 00:43:362 - if you follow this.

- 01:10:050 (5) - Hmm, maybe the only major overlap. Suggest you shift - 01:10:245 (1,2) - more to the right to avoid this.

- 01:36:349 (5) - Seems like an odd angle to put this slider at.

- 02:12:972 (2) - Little touch on this part.
- 02:16:089 (2,3) - Heads up here, might want to take notice of this since you may want to reconsider and change it.

IRC mod for Rin:

SPOILER
17:27 <Faust> : playing is so crap today :(
17:28 <NatsumeRin> : hope i didn't make you nervous = =
17:28 <Faust> : hahah
17:30 <Faust> : oh god
17:30 <NatsumeRin> : lol
17:30 <Faust> : didn't see that coming at all
17:30 <Faust> : 02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you could make them into more compressed stacks
17:31 <Faust> : so people can tell the difference between these and
17:31 <Faust> : 02:26:219 (1,2,3) - these
17:31 <Faust> : lol
17:31 <NatsumeRin> : i hope not compress them too much (not make it like a manual stack)
17:34 <Faust> : gah, video..
17:35 <NatsumeRin> : = =
17:35 <NatsumeRin> : should be better now
17:40 <Faust> : 01:58:557 (1,2,3,4) - always gets me :l
17:40 <Faust> : I think that's about all the things I feel are odd.
17:40 <Faust> : rest is smooth :3
17:41 <Faust> : the animation for the video this time is pretty cool
17:41 <Faust> : few static images
17:42 <NatsumeRin> : osu.ppy.sh/ss/158706
17:42 <NatsumeRin> : what about this?
17:44 <Faust> : Yeah, that's good
17:44 <NatsumeRin> : ok, i'll change
17:45 <Faust> : kinda feel for this song, it's not a good idea to have such pattern stacking
17:45 <Faust> : given the video as well, lol
17:45 <Faust> : it makes you really look for it.
17:46 <Faust> : Out of curiosity, why did you start 02:00:115 (1) here?
17:46 <Faust> : Nothing wrong with it, just curious :3
17:46 <NatsumeRin> : well... if starts at the white line it feels late a bit
17:46 <NatsumeRin> : just that, nothing special
17:47 <Faust> : I think regardless of why, it's perfect, despite being overlapped
17:47 <Faust> : the vocal rises and sinks, it kinda "connects"
17:48 <NatsumeRin> : yep, part of the meaning
17:48 <NatsumeRin> : another part... is i just love overlap
17:48 <Faust> : haha
17:49 <Faust> : 02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this section is fine for me now at 2nd attempt so you could let it stay and wait for
17:49 <Faust> : other opinions :)
17:49 <NatsumeRin> : hehe, i think most players will feel "wtf" at the first try
17:50 <NatsumeRin> : but when they calm down and they could feel the part= =
17:50 <NatsumeRin> : this is probably a part i won't change for any reasons
17:50 <Faust> : looks like 1/4, so they will miss. Then the actual 1/4 maybe some will still 1/2
17:50 <Faust> : lol
17:50 <Faust> : Yeah
17:50 <Faust> : you need to be calm and read the music at that part

Excellent.
fixed some O.O

Download: Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.) (NatsumeRin) [eveless].osu
Anshi_old
我爱这歌。。。
Magicphoenix
Mod !

General

Lighten up the dark blue color a bit? There are places where you hardly can see the approach circles on the vid

[Rin]

*(NAZI)01:07:128 (1) - Move 3 Lv4 grid down

Aaah the whole diff is an orgasmus...

[eveless]

*00:08:686 (3) - Move it here ? : Plays better for me

[Normal]

Fine

[Easy]

Fine


Well, I guess my mod was useless ? ;P
Great map, stars
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Magicphoenix wrote:

Mod !

General

Lighten up the dark blue color a bit? There are places where you hardly can see the approach circles on the vid

[Rin]

*(NAZI)01:07:128 (1) - Move 3 Lv4 grid down k. in fact i don't pay much attention to make it very accurate.

Aaah the whole diff is an orgasmus...

[eveless]

*00:08:686 (3) - Move it here ? : Plays better for me

[Normal]

Fine

[Easy]

Fine


Well, I guess my mod was useless ? ;P
Great map, stars
lovhin456
There is a problem when I open the file with osu! I only get Easy and eveless diffs but not the others, a full submit might be the solution.
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
did a full-submission.
lovhin456
Solved the problem, got all diffs now. By the way, leaving a star for this good mapset (: May do a mod later ~
YTYuyu
Yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Easy:
00:06:349(3) - Aline it with (2)
00:43:751(1) - 1 grid up for the 3rd and 4th point
01:22:712(3) - x360 y:192
01:46:089(1) - same as 00:43:751

Normal:
00:23:102(5,6,1) - 1 grid up for all three
01:05:959(5) - 1 grid up. if u follow this follow the next suggestion
01:07:128(1) - x:288 y:336 for the 2nd point and x:328 y:256 for the 3rd point if u follow both of these suggestions it should make a blanket pattern like this http://puu.sh/6H0e
01:11:414(3) - aline it with (5) at 01:09:855

eveless:
I played this diff yesterday there's no problems.

Rin:
No problems here

This is the best i can do. 2 stars from me because not only that i like the song, but this map is gotta be 1 of my favorite maps to play. GL getting this song ranked i'm looking forward to it :D
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Easy:
00:06:349(3) - Aline it with (2) nope,
00:43:751(1) - 1 grid up for the 3rd and 4th point changed a bit.
01:22:712(3) - x360 y:192 i'd prefer at such a place= =
01:46:089(1) - same as 00:43:751

Normal:
00:23:102(5,6,1) - 1 grid up for all three k.
01:05:959(5) - 1 grid up. if u follow this follow the next suggestion i don't really want to do so...
01:07:128(1) - x:288 y:336 for the 2nd point and x:328 y:256 for the 3rd point if u follow both of these suggestions it should make a blanket pattern like this http://puu.sh/6H0e ^
01:11:414(3) - aline it with (5) at 01:09:855 don't need to... it already faded.

eveless:
I played this diff yesterday there's no problems.

Rin:
No problems here

This is the best i can do. 2 stars from me because not only that i like the song, but this map is gotta be 1 of my favorite maps to play. GL getting this song ranked i'm looking forward to it :D
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