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Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.)

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Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月11日 at 21:03:46

Artist: Hatsune Miku
Title: Senbonzakura (Short Ver.)
Source: Kurousa-P
Tags: vocaloid vocaloid2 eveless goodbye
BPM: 154
Filesize: 22386kb
Play Time: 02:31
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.61 stars, 144 notes)
  2. eveless (4.93 stars, 369 notes)
  3. Normal (4.23 stars, 264 notes)
  4. Rin (5 stars, 569 notes)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.)
Download: Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm15630734
我大千本一周年……
Raging Bull
Stress? orz

My message is too short.
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
changed to Rin...

thanks for stars anyway.
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
floor

SPOILER
12312312323123123231231232312312323123123231231232312312323123123231231232312312323123123231231232312312323123123231231232312312323123123
Megurine Luka
逛周刊看到这首我就知道铃大人要出手了O O
PV里Luka那么嫩我略不服
[Ghost]
fight
Zelos
7 stars and no mods. Lovely im the first then! lol

Folder:
Clean here

Please note any mod I post is only a suggestion and can be freely ignored.

Normal:
00:46:868 (1) - perhaps remove the new combo here? the 2 slider combo before seems a bit short in my opinion.
Well I suppose I see why this has not recieved that many mods, its pretty flawless so far.

Eveless:
00:19:596 (4,5) - im not liking the fact that the end of slider 4 is covering more than 50% of slider 5. please move slider 5 out to the right some please.
01:13:362 (1,2) - same situation as the above except you would want to move it in a different direction.
01:18:037 (1,2,3) - the ends of these sliders are just slightly unstacked. fix this? it would look a little neater.
02:12:583 (1,2) - again slider end 1 is covering mroe than 50% of slider 2. please change this.

Rin:
:D I love Rin diffs
02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the only thing I dont like here is the 1/4th looking pattern is 1/2 and the 1/2 looking pattern is 1/4th :p
02:26:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^^^
02:28:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^^

I usually dont star incomplete sets but so far what you have is amazing
so Star!
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Zelos wrote:

7 stars and no mods. Lovely im the first then! lol

Folder:
Clean here

Please note any mod I post is only a suggestion and can be freely ignored. emm... also have it here: 01:59:677 (1). i use a new combo because it's not at a very regular place. with a new combo players may pay more attention...? dunno.

Normal:
00:46:868 (1) - perhaps remove the new combo here? the 2 slider combo before seems a bit short in my opinion.
Well I suppose I see why this has not recieved that many mods, its pretty flawless so far.

Eveless:
00:19:596 (4,5) - im not liking the fact that the end of slider 4 is covering more than 50% of slider 5. please move slider 5 out to the right some please.
01:13:362 (1,2) - same situation as the above except you would want to move it in a different direction.
01:18:037 (1,2,3) - the ends of these sliders are just slightly unstacked. fix this? it would look a little neater.
02:12:583 (1,2) - again slider end 1 is covering mroe than 50% of slider 2. please change this.

Rin:
:D I love Rin diffs
02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - the only thing I dont like here is the 1/4th looking pattern is 1/2 and the 1/2 looking pattern is 1/4th :p well it's the part...= = try go along with the pitch.
02:26:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^^^
02:28:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^^

I usually dont star incomplete sets but so far what you have is amazing
so Star!
eveless

Zelos wrote:

7 stars and no mods. Lovely im the first then! lol



Eveless:
00:19:596 (4,5) - im not liking the fact that the end of slider 4 is covering more than 50% of slider 5. please move slider 5 out to the right some please.I think this is not a problem since the rhythm
01:13:362 (1,2) - same situation as the above except you would want to move it in a different direction.hmm...
01:18:037 (1,2,3) - the ends of these sliders are just slightly unstacked. fix this? it would look a little neater.same with before
02:12:583 (1,2) - again slider end 1 is covering mroe than 50% of slider 2. please change this.^
Download: Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.) (NatsumeRin) [eveless].osu
YaMaO04
GO GO Ranked :) :) :)
Faust
Nothing on Easy & Normal ( ´∀`)

eveless: Noticed a few of the nudging overlaps were on purpose and made consistent, it's not much of an issue even if I'm going over "neatness". They're well-suited enough I think, and given your tendency to use them often.

- 00:16:674 (2) - Hmm, it's better not to place this so close in proximity against the previous notes. Maybe something like this formation so their attention is brought more to the right side like this?


- 00:32:453 (3) - Probably on purpose, though I suggest you align this properly?


- 00:42:583 (2) - Would suggest a repeat instead, you would need to remove the note on - 00:43:362 - if you follow this.

- 01:10:050 (5) - Hmm, maybe the only major overlap. Suggest you shift - 01:10:245 (1,2) - more to the right to avoid this.

- 01:36:349 (5) - Seems like an odd angle to put this slider at.

- 02:12:972 (2) - Little touch on this part.
- 02:16:089 (2,3) - Heads up here, might want to take notice of this since you may want to reconsider and change it.

IRC mod for Rin:

SPOILER
17:27 <Faust> : playing is so crap today :(
17:28 <NatsumeRin> : hope i didn't make you nervous = =
17:28 <Faust> : hahah
17:30 <Faust> : oh god
17:30 <NatsumeRin> : lol
17:30 <Faust> : didn't see that coming at all
17:30 <Faust> : 02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you could make them into more compressed stacks
17:31 <Faust> : so people can tell the difference between these and
17:31 <Faust> : 02:26:219 (1,2,3) - these
17:31 <Faust> : lol
17:31 <NatsumeRin> : i hope not compress them too much (not make it like a manual stack)
17:34 <Faust> : gah, video..
17:35 <NatsumeRin> : = =
17:35 <NatsumeRin> : should be better now
17:40 <Faust> : 01:58:557 (1,2,3,4) - always gets me :l
17:40 <Faust> : I think that's about all the things I feel are odd.
17:40 <Faust> : rest is smooth :3
17:41 <Faust> : the animation for the video this time is pretty cool
17:41 <Faust> : few static images
17:42 <NatsumeRin> : osu.ppy.sh/ss/158706
17:42 <NatsumeRin> : what about this?
17:44 <Faust> : Yeah, that's good
17:44 <NatsumeRin> : ok, i'll change
17:45 <Faust> : kinda feel for this song, it's not a good idea to have such pattern stacking
17:45 <Faust> : given the video as well, lol
17:45 <Faust> : it makes you really look for it.
17:46 <Faust> : Out of curiosity, why did you start 02:00:115 (1) here?
17:46 <Faust> : Nothing wrong with it, just curious :3
17:46 <NatsumeRin> : well... if starts at the white line it feels late a bit
17:46 <NatsumeRin> : just that, nothing special
17:47 <Faust> : I think regardless of why, it's perfect, despite being overlapped
17:47 <Faust> : the vocal rises and sinks, it kinda "connects"
17:48 <NatsumeRin> : yep, part of the meaning
17:48 <NatsumeRin> : another part... is i just love overlap
17:48 <Faust> : haha
17:49 <Faust> : 02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this section is fine for me now at 2nd attempt so you could let it stay and wait for
17:49 <Faust> : other opinions :)
17:49 <NatsumeRin> : hehe, i think most players will feel "wtf" at the first try
17:50 <NatsumeRin> : but when they calm down and they could feel the part= =
17:50 <NatsumeRin> : this is probably a part i won't change for any reasons
17:50 <Faust> : looks like 1/4, so they will miss. Then the actual 1/4 maybe some will still 1/2
17:50 <Faust> : lol
17:50 <Faust> : Yeah
17:50 <Faust> : you need to be calm and read the music at that part

Excellent.
eveless

Faust wrote:

Nothing on Easy & Normal ( ´∀`)

eveless: Noticed a few of the nudging overlaps were on purpose and made consistent, it's not much of an issue even if I'm going over "neatness". They're well-suited enough I think, and given your tendency to use them often.

- 00:16:674 (2) - Hmm, it's better not to place this so close in proximity against the previous notes. Maybe something like this formation so their attention is brought more to the right side like this?


- 00:32:453 (3) - Probably on purpose, though I suggest you align this properly?


- 00:42:583 (2) - Would suggest a repeat instead, you would need to remove the note on - 00:43:362 - if you follow this.

- 01:10:050 (5) - Hmm, maybe the only major overlap. Suggest you shift - 01:10:245 (1,2) - more to the right to avoid this.

- 01:36:349 (5) - Seems like an odd angle to put this slider at.

- 02:12:972 (2) - Little touch on this part.
- 02:16:089 (2,3) - Heads up here, might want to take notice of this since you may want to reconsider and change it.

IRC mod for Rin:

SPOILER
17:27 <Faust> : playing is so crap today :(
17:28 <NatsumeRin> : hope i didn't make you nervous = =
17:28 <Faust> : hahah
17:30 <Faust> : oh god
17:30 <NatsumeRin> : lol
17:30 <Faust> : didn't see that coming at all
17:30 <Faust> : 02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe you could make them into more compressed stacks
17:31 <Faust> : so people can tell the difference between these and
17:31 <Faust> : 02:26:219 (1,2,3) - these
17:31 <Faust> : lol
17:31 <NatsumeRin> : i hope not compress them too much (not make it like a manual stack)
17:34 <Faust> : gah, video..
17:35 <NatsumeRin> : = =
17:35 <NatsumeRin> : should be better now
17:40 <Faust> : 01:58:557 (1,2,3,4) - always gets me :l
17:40 <Faust> : I think that's about all the things I feel are odd.
17:40 <Faust> : rest is smooth :3
17:41 <Faust> : the animation for the video this time is pretty cool
17:41 <Faust> : few static images
17:42 <NatsumeRin> : osu.ppy.sh/ss/158706
17:42 <NatsumeRin> : what about this?
17:44 <Faust> : Yeah, that's good
17:44 <NatsumeRin> : ok, i'll change
17:45 <Faust> : kinda feel for this song, it's not a good idea to have such pattern stacking
17:45 <Faust> : given the video as well, lol
17:45 <Faust> : it makes you really look for it.
17:46 <Faust> : Out of curiosity, why did you start 02:00:115 (1) here?
17:46 <Faust> : Nothing wrong with it, just curious :3
17:46 <NatsumeRin> : well... if starts at the white line it feels late a bit
17:46 <NatsumeRin> : just that, nothing special
17:47 <Faust> : I think regardless of why, it's perfect, despite being overlapped
17:47 <Faust> : the vocal rises and sinks, it kinda "connects"
17:48 <NatsumeRin> : yep, part of the meaning
17:48 <NatsumeRin> : another part... is i just love overlap
17:48 <Faust> : haha
17:49 <Faust> : 02:25:245 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - this section is fine for me now at 2nd attempt so you could let it stay and wait for
17:49 <Faust> : other opinions :)
17:49 <NatsumeRin> : hehe, i think most players will feel "wtf" at the first try
17:50 <NatsumeRin> : but when they calm down and they could feel the part= =
17:50 <NatsumeRin> : this is probably a part i won't change for any reasons
17:50 <Faust> : looks like 1/4, so they will miss. Then the actual 1/4 maybe some will still 1/2
17:50 <Faust> : lol
17:50 <Faust> : Yeah
17:50 <Faust> : you need to be calm and read the music at that part

Excellent.
fixed some O.O

Download: Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.) (NatsumeRin) [eveless].osu
Anshi_old
我爱这歌。。。
Magicphoenix
Mod !

General

Lighten up the dark blue color a bit? There are places where you hardly can see the approach circles on the vid

[Rin]

*(NAZI)01:07:128 (1) - Move 3 Lv4 grid down

Aaah the whole diff is an orgasmus...

[eveless]

*00:08:686 (3) - Move it here ? : Plays better for me

[Normal]

Fine

[Easy]

Fine


Well, I guess my mod was useless ? ;P
Great map, stars
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Magicphoenix wrote:

Mod !

General

Lighten up the dark blue color a bit? There are places where you hardly can see the approach circles on the vid

[Rin]

*(NAZI)01:07:128 (1) - Move 3 Lv4 grid down k. in fact i don't pay much attention to make it very accurate.

Aaah the whole diff is an orgasmus...

[eveless]

*00:08:686 (3) - Move it here ? : Plays better for me

[Normal]

Fine

[Easy]

Fine


Well, I guess my mod was useless ? ;P
Great map, stars
lovhin456
There is a problem when I open the file with osu! I only get Easy and eveless diffs but not the others, a full submit might be the solution.
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin
did a full-submission.
lovhin456
Solved the problem, got all diffs now. By the way, leaving a star for this good mapset (: May do a mod later ~
YTYuyu
Yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Easy:
00:06:349(3) - Aline it with (2)
00:43:751(1) - 1 grid up for the 3rd and 4th point
01:22:712(3) - x360 y:192
01:46:089(1) - same as 00:43:751

Normal:
00:23:102(5,6,1) - 1 grid up for all three
01:05:959(5) - 1 grid up. if u follow this follow the next suggestion
01:07:128(1) - x:288 y:336 for the 2nd point and x:328 y:256 for the 3rd point if u follow both of these suggestions it should make a blanket pattern like this http://puu.sh/6H0e
01:11:414(3) - aline it with (5) at 01:09:855

eveless:
I played this diff yesterday there's no problems.

Rin:
No problems here

This is the best i can do. 2 stars from me because not only that i like the song, but this map is gotta be 1 of my favorite maps to play. GL getting this song ranked i'm looking forward to it :D
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Easy:
00:06:349(3) - Aline it with (2) nope,
00:43:751(1) - 1 grid up for the 3rd and 4th point changed a bit.
01:22:712(3) - x360 y:192 i'd prefer at such a place= =
01:46:089(1) - same as 00:43:751

Normal:
00:23:102(5,6,1) - 1 grid up for all three k.
01:05:959(5) - 1 grid up. if u follow this follow the next suggestion i don't really want to do so...
01:07:128(1) - x:288 y:336 for the 2nd point and x:328 y:256 for the 3rd point if u follow both of these suggestions it should make a blanket pattern like this http://puu.sh/6H0e ^
01:11:414(3) - aline it with (5) at 01:09:855 don't need to... it already faded.

eveless:
I played this diff yesterday there's no problems.

Rin:
No problems here

This is the best i can do. 2 stars from me because not only that i like the song, but this map is gotta be 1 of my favorite maps to play. GL getting this song ranked i'm looking forward to it :D
L_P
这是第一首我从normal mod 起的 XD
只给建议 我是渣渣 请务必多多指教![我在mod4mod]

normal
00:13:167 (4) - delete it and then move to 00:13:946 ? 因为之前的rhythm 是这样的
00:17:258 (1,2,3,4) - 都放finish&clap 然后每一个从小声到大声?
00:55:440 (4) - 变短然后repeat?
01:17:258 (2) - ctrl + R?
02:17:258 (4,5,6) - 怪怪的。。不如就像先前那样四个repeat的slider?

hard
00:13:362 (3,4) - 怪怪的。。blanket 好来?http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/5315/aaanw.jpg
00:17:258 (1,2,3) - 跳大一点?
00:57:972 (2) - grid 1 up and adjust the curve
01:18:037 (1,2,3) - 我超爱这个的
01:21:933 (5) - 不如后面做成 http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/9048/aaapi.jpg
01:38:686 (2) - 改成向上?
01:47:648 (1,2) - 傻逼的建议 >< http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/6672/aaarct.jpg
02:07:323 - 突然间停了下来。。。
02:17:063 - ^

insane
00:01:674 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 因为是insane所以我觉得三角形渐渐变大可以明显一点,就是开头小一点,后面更大
01:08:881 (2) - 挡住了><
01:38:297 (1) - 突然不习惯 XD 不如 end在138589 然后加一个note? 我觉得下一个pattern 再这样比较顺
01:42:583 (4) - ctrl + R?
02:20:960 (4) - 可以再远一点?
02:30:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/9561/aaaxj.jpg

对不起。。以我目前的程度就只会这些。。。

神啊如果你甘愿学那些不要脸的去拍拍马屁现在你就是BAT#1了(韩信也有胯下之辱,留得青山在不愁没柴烧{T.T}???)
不要整天骂MAT了啦。。。他们虽然怪怪也是很可怜的,整天被骂哈哈

做多一点好歌啊!!!需要你啊!!!
eveless

L_P wrote:

hard
00:13:362 (3,4) - 怪怪的。。blanket 好来?http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/5315/aaanw.jpg
00:17:258 (1,2,3) - 跳大一点?
00:57:972 (2) - grid 1 up and adjust the curve
01:18:037 (1,2,3) - 我超爱这个的
01:21:933 (5) - 不如后面做成 http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/9048/aaapi.jpg
01:38:686 (2) - 改成向上?
01:47:648 (1,2) - 傻逼的建议 >< http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/6672/aaarct.jpg
02:07:323 - 突然间停了下来。。。
02:17:063 - ^
changed some

Download: Hatsune Miku - Senbonzakura (Short Ver.) (NatsumeRin) [eveless].osu
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

L_P wrote:

这是第一首我从normal mod 起的 XD
只给建议 我是渣渣 请务必多多指教![我在mod4mod]

normal
00:13:167 (4) - delete it and then move to 00:13:946 ? 因为之前的rhythm 是这样的 前面是顺下来的,这个我想强调一下高音,所以改了。
00:17:258 (1,2,3,4) - 都放finish&clap 然后每一个从小声到大声?finish还可理解。。。clap不会太吵吗。。。
00:55:440 (4) - 变短然后repeat? 要跟这个 00:56:219 (1)对应一下,所以维持的1/1节奏
01:17:258 (2) - ctrl + R? = =不要
02:17:258 (4,5,6) - 怪怪的。。不如就像先前那样四个repeat的slider? 好。

hard
00:13:362 (3,4) - 怪怪的。。blanket 好来?http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/5315/aaanw.jpg
00:17:258 (1,2,3) - 跳大一点?
00:57:972 (2) - grid 1 up and adjust the curve
01:18:037 (1,2,3) - 我超爱这个的
01:21:933 (5) - 不如后面做成 http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/9048/aaapi.jpg
01:38:686 (2) - 改成向上?
01:47:648 (1,2) - 傻逼的建议 >< http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/6672/aaarct.jpg
02:07:323 - 突然间停了下来。。。
02:17:063 - ^

insane
00:01:674 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 因为是insane所以我觉得三角形渐渐变大可以明显一点,就是开头小一点,后面更大 行。
01:08:881 (2) - 挡住了>< 没问题本意就是挡住
01:38:297 (1) - 突然不习惯 XD 不如 end在138589 然后加一个note? 我觉得下一个pattern 再这样比较顺 因为vocal实在没这个音,所以设计时候就没打算让它存在。。。
01:42:583 (4) - ctrl + R? 不。这样有一个旋转向右下的效果,反了就没有
02:20:960 (4) - 可以再远一点?挪了一点但我觉得整体没变什么。。。
02:30:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/9561/aaaxj.jpg不,因为1/6音必然会结尾在白线上,蓝线起1/4 slider,会全按在弱音上,还不如直接串下来打着方便

对不起。。以我目前的程度就只会这些。。。

神啊如果你甘愿学那些不要脸的去拍拍马屁现在你就是BAT#1了(韩信也有胯下之辱,留得青山在不愁没柴烧{T.T}???)
不要整天骂MAT了啦。。。他们虽然怪怪也是很可怜的,整天被骂哈哈

做多一点好歌啊!!!需要你啊!!!
SapphireGhost
Hello!

[General]
- [Easy], [Normal], and [Rin] should have consistent kiai times.
- Preview times are slightly inconsistent. [Easy] / [Normal] / [Rin] have preview time 57290 but [eveless] has the preview time 57293, so you'll just need to change [eveless] and then they'll all be nice and consistent.
- Even for a good quality video, the video file seems sort of large... if the filesize can be lowered in any way, great, but if not I suppose it can stay the way it is.
- Remove letterboxing during breaks due to video. (The video is already letterboxed.)

[Rin]
- Fun to play, also nice song choice.
01:59:677 (1) - The sudden drop in volume at the end of this slider is a bit strange, as I expected there to be a sound there. It can still be quieter, but perhaps make it a bit more audible. I guess this applies for the other difficulties, too.
02:14:531 (3) - This touches the HP bar a little, and it wouldn't be too hard to move it down a bit.
- There are also a couple small overlaps that might look a bit better spaced out a little more, but that's up to you.
01:00:115 (5,6) -
01:06:349 (7,8) -
01:18:816 (5,6) -


[Normal]
01:55:829 (2,3,4) - The hitburst might make this part slightly confusing for [Normal] players, maybe move it around a bit?

Other difficulties looked fine to me, forum PM after fixes and I'll recheck soon.
Bobo_old
Sup

Modded on request.

-Easy-

...Seems fine :)

-Normal-

01:22:712 (1) - Delete new combo?

-Eveless-

Hmm... unique mapping style. Can't really find any errors in this.

-Rin-

Really, I cant find anything to improve on.
This map is excellent, Star~!

Crappy mod, no kuds please.
Topic Starter
NatsumeRin

SapphireGhost wrote:

Hello!

[General]
- [Easy], [Normal], and [Rin] should have consistent kiai times. they already have?
- Preview times are slightly inconsistent. [Easy] / [Normal] / [Rin] have preview time 57290 but [eveless] has the preview time 57293, so you'll just need to change [eveless] and then they'll all be nice and consistent. fixed.
- Even for a good quality video, the video file seems sort of large... if the filesize can be lowered in any way, great, but if not I suppose it can stay the way it is. i tried my best for it...
- Remove letterboxing during breaks due to video. (The video is already letterboxed.) fixed.

[Rin]
- Fun to play, also nice song choice.
01:59:677 (1) - The sudden drop in volume at the end of this slider is a bit strange, as I expected there to be a sound there. It can still be quieter, but perhaps make it a bit more audible. I guess this applies for the other difficulties, too. I didn't change it in this diff, because that would break the effect of a long voice. Changed in [Normal] to prevent confusing things.
02:14:531 (3) - This touches the HP bar a little, and it wouldn't be too hard to move it down a bit. k.
- There are also a couple small overlaps that might look a bit better spaced out a little more, but that's up to you.
01:00:115 (5,6) - changed a bit.
01:06:349 (7,8) - it's just fine.
01:18:816 (5,6) - changed a bit.


[Normal]
01:55:829 (2,3,4) - The hitburst might make this part slightly confusing for [Normal] players, maybe move it around a bit? Personally i'd like to leave it there. It's not too confusing or too hard anyway.

Other difficulties looked fine to me, forum PM after fixes and I'll recheck soon.
SapphireGhost
Small kiai fix on [Rin] done over IRC, and everything looks good now. I'll be looking forward to seeing this ranked.
Bubbled!
Raging Bull
YEAHHHHHHH :D:D:D:D:D:D Go Rin
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