Jennifer Karr - My Life As A Teenage Robot [CatchTheBeat] · forum

Nelly

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Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-08-03T16:27:07+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 февраля 2018 г. at 8:53:29

Artist: Jennifer Karr
Title: My Life As A Teenage Robot
Source: My Life As A Teenage Robot
Tags: nickelodeon xj-9 jenny wakeman rob renzetti teen nicktoons tv size hareimu
BPM: 171
Filesize: 1775kb
Play Time: 00:32
Difficulties Available:

Cup (1,37 stars, 75 notes)
Platter (2,72 stars, 89 notes)
Reimu's Salad (2,05 stars, 88 notes)

Download: Jennifer Karr - My Life As A Teenage Robot
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranked #1

● Platter by Kimitakari
● Salad by Hareimu
● Cup by Kimitakari

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Last edited by Nelly 2023-10-14T16:36:02+00:00, edited 52 times in total.

Sanyi

236 posts

Joined November 2015

Sanyi 2017-11-01T15:59:43+00:00

Requested via discord.

Kudosu only when helpful!

General

Add the preview point to Reimu's Salad please.
Platter diff is missing "hareimu" in its tags.
You've got 2 images in your beatmap folder. I am not sure which one you wanna use as your bg picture (the .png has the better resolution), but the other image should be deleted.
The audio file bitrate is too high atm, it must be between 128 kbps and 192 kbps but the bitrate of your mp3 is currently at 255 kbps. I don't know where to get another mp3, so sorry that I can only point it out.
Is slider tick rate 2 really necessary? It makes the diffs much more dense, which is no gain for the mapset imo. Especially Cup is too dense imo. I would prefer a tick rate of 1 instead of 2 for the mapset.
HP spread is currently 4/3/5, doesn't make 3/4/5 much more sense?
AR spread is currently 5/7/8. I've played Cup with AR 6 and think that it plays well so making the AR spread 6/7/8 for a more linear AR spread is better imo.

Cup

00:00:806 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Plays really repetitively, how about making 00:02:035 (1,2) - both curved to change it up a bit? It fits the music well imo.
00:03:614 (1) - It would fit the music way better to curve the slider instead of making it straight (I really like how you did the pattern at 00:08:701 (2,1) - ).
00:11:859 - It would fit your Cup to add here a note, makes it more consistent with previous parts.
00:13:964 (3,4) - Way too big distance for a Cup, please nerf the distance (it also makes no sense emphasizing-wise to make this distance so big while having almost no distance between 00:14:491 (4) - and 00:14:842 (1) - ).
00:19:929 (4,5,1) - I think it fits the music and the rhythm of the map better to make 00:19:929 (4,5) - vertical and curve 00:20:456 (1) - .

Reimu's Salad

00:05:894 (5,6,7,1) - Emphasizing is a bit questionable here. You always did a jump towards the downbeats but not here, instead you made a big gap between 00:05:894 (5) - and 00:06:245 (6) - while ignoring the sound at 00:06:157 - . I think it is much better to map a very simplistic stream pattern from 00:05:894 - to 00:06:245 - and make a dash to 00:06:421 (1) - or mapping the stream until 00:06:333 - instead while making no dash at all.
00:20:456 (1) - What is this slider supposed to do? It doesn't produce movement but may look confusing to a low level player. Maybe you can make the slidershape more obvious regarding its function?
00:24:315 - The jumps that come after this note are pretty spicy (the one before the break and the ones after the break). Making them just a bit easier fits better imo but that's only a personal preference.

Platter

00:04:315 (2) - Should be more horizontal to introduce more movement (right now it is awful to play imo and is inconsistent with similar upcoming spots). Just move the whole map up to the point more to the left so that you've got the space that you need to tilt the slider more.
00:06:333 (8,1) - How about making this a dash? Fits the intensity of the song imo.
00:31:596 (9,1,2) - Same as 00:06:333 (8,1) - + I would extend 00:31:683 (1) - to a 1/2 slider and make a hyper to 00:32:035 (2) - to fit the song better or at least move 00:32:035 (2) - more the left.

Salad and Platter are really nice, Cup could definitively benefit from more mods imo. Good Luck!

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-11-01T16:36:43+00:00

Sanyi wrote:

Requested via discord.

Kudosu only when helpful!

General
Add the preview point to Reimu's Salad please.
Platter diff is missing "hareimu" in its tags.
You've got 2 images in your beatmap folder. I am not sure which one you wanna use as your bg picture (the .png has the better resolution), but the other image should be deleted.
The audio file bitrate is too high atm, it must be between 128 kbps and 192 kbps but the bitrate of your mp3 is currently at 255 kbps. I don't know where to get another mp3, so sorry that I can only point it out.
Is slider tick rate 2 really necessary? It makes the diffs much more dense, which is no gain for the mapset imo. Especially Cup is too dense imo. I would prefer a tick rate of 1 instead of 2 for the mapset.
HP spread is currently 4/3/5, doesn't make 3/4/5 much more sense?
AR spread is currently 5/7/8. I've played Cup with AR 6 and think that it plays well so making the AR spread 6/7/8 for a more linear AR spread is better imo.
Cup
00:00:806 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Plays really repetitively, how about making 00:02:035 (1,2) - both curved to change it up a bit? It fits the music well imo.
00:03:614 (1) - It would fit the music way better to curve the slider instead of making it straight (I really like how you did the pattern at 00:08:701 (2,1) - ). I want to make here as a movement.
00:11:859 - It would fit your Cup to add here a note, makes it more consistent with previous parts.
00:13:964 (3,4) - Way too big distance for a Cup, please nerf the distance (it also makes no sense emphasizing-wise to make this distance so big while having almost no distance between 00:14:491 (4) - and 00:14:842 (1) - ). Blame my stupidity.
00:19:929 (4,5,1) - I think it fits the music and the rhythm of the map better to make 00:19:929 (4,5) - vertical and curve 00:20:456 (1) - . I honestly really like how it looks.

Platter
00:04:315 (2) - Should be more horizontal to introduce more movement (right now it is awful to play imo and is inconsistent with similar upcoming spots). Just move the whole map up to the point more to the left so that you've got the space that you need to tilt the slider more.
00:06:333 (8,1) - How about making this a dash? Fits the intensity of the song imo.
00:31:596 (9,1,2) - Same as 00:06:333 (8,1) - + I would extend 00:31:683 (1) - to a 1/2 slider and make a hyper to 00:32:035 (2) - to fit the song better or at least move 00:32:035 (2) - more the left.
Salad and Platter are really nice, Cup could definitively benefit from more mods imo. Good Luck!

No replies means accepted. General issues has been fixed. Waiting for Hareimu to fix things. Thanks for mod!

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Hareimu 2017-11-02T00:22:08+00:00

Sanyi wrote:

Requested via discord.

Kudosu only when helpful!

Reimu's Salad
00:05:894 (5,6,7,1) - Emphasizing is a bit questionable here. You always did a jump towards the downbeats but not here, instead you made a big gap between 00:05:894 (5) - and 00:06:245 (6) - while ignoring the sound at 00:06:157 - . I think it is much better to map a very simplistic stream pattern from 00:05:894 - to 00:06:245 - and make a dash to 00:06:421 (1) - or mapping the stream until 00:06:333 - instead while making no dash at all. I'd rather keep the current pattern, the idea was to emphasize the vocals from 00:06:070 - to 00:06:421 - with triplets, and it doesn't really affect the map that much having a bit of an inconsistency regarding dashes.
00:20:456 (1) - What is this slider supposed to do? It doesn't produce movement but may look confusing to a low level player. Maybe you can make the slidershape more obvious regarding its function? Changed the shape of the slider.
00:24:315 - The jumps that come after this note are pretty spicy (the one before the break and the ones after the break). Making them just a bit easier fits better imo but that's only a personal preference. All dashes are the same distance (2,9x), so they shouldn't really be as spicy as you're pointing out.

Thanks for the mod!

salad

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Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-11-02T15:19:49+00:00

Updated

Ponchiwi

229 posts

Joined September 2011

Ponchiwi 2017-11-14T04:06:26+00:00

[Cup

]

00:06:421 (1) - x296
00:07:999 (1) - Here i feel it a little weird cruz need a more note for complete the vocal so add it here 00:08:526 (2) -
00:09:228 (1) - x164
00:31:684 (1) - x352
00:12:035 (1) - x180
00:17:649 (1) - x188
00:22:561 (2) - x328
00:28:877 (1) - x152

[Reimu's Salad

]

00:04:315 (2) - x224 Porque no alejarlo un poco? lo veo muy junto
00:08:350 (3) - Siento que deberías cambiar ese slider largo y hacerlo asi ya que queda bien con la vocal
00:13:964 (3,4) - Como que se repite mucho este tipo de patron a antiflujo, intenta con esto
00:30:105 (1) - Creo que quedaria bien descansar en esta vocal antes de llegar al final, asi descansa el jugador y se prepara para los dos últimos dash

[Platter

]

spectacular platter!

i still remind when i was a child and i used to see this cartoon... i hope see it ranked soon!

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-11-14T13:46:56+00:00

Ponchiwi wrote:
[Cup ]
00:06:421 (1) - x296 Moved to x:312
00:07:999 (1) - Here i feel it a little weird cruz need a more note for complete the vocal so add it here 00:08:526 (2) - I don't feel that it requires a note here because the vocal stopped for a second and not sounded. Denied.
00:09:228 (1) - x164 If you mean to increase the distance then yes I did. Moved to x:180 and changed the slider a bit.
00:31:684 (1) - x352 Moved to x:348
00:12:035 (1) - x180 Moved to x:188
00:17:649 (1) - x188
00:22:561 (2) - x328
00:28:877 (1) - x152
[Platter ]
spectacular platter! Ye boi
i still remind when i was a child and i used to see this cartoon... i hope see it ranked soon!

No replies means accepted. Waiting for Hareimu to fix things. Thanks for a random mod Ponchi! and yes this classic should be ranked asap!

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Hareimu 2017-11-17T23:53:24+00:00

Ponchiwi wrote:
[Reimu's Salad ]
00:04:315 (2) - x224 Porque no alejarlo un poco? lo veo muy junto kk
00:08:350 (3) - Siento que deberías cambiar ese slider largo y hacerlo asi ya que queda bien con la vocal no escucho nada en 00:08:526 - como para poner un repeat.
00:13:964 (3,4) - Como que se repite mucho este tipo de patron a antiflujo, intenta con esto hice algo similar.
00:30:105 (1) - Creo que quedaria bien descansar en esta vocal antes de llegar al final, asi descansa el jugador y se prepara para los dos últimos dash removí el dash hacia el repeat slider que viene luego de este slider.

gracias por el mod!

salad

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Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-11-18T07:59:58+00:00

Updated.

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2017-12-11T17:20:08+00:00

Updated the bg because this one is old and it has noises.

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2018-01-15T23:41:10+00:00

Sorry for being a bit late with this!

[

General]

Combo Colours: You haven't got any, could add some based on bg colours
Other: There's no Kiai time used, consider adding one starting at 00:26:070 - and ending at 00:32:035 -

[

Cup]

00:27:649 (4) - Would NC here as the combo gets a bit big and you've been sticking to NC every downbeat until now
00:28:877 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is very different from 00:26:070 (1,2,3) - which I would say is a better fit. I'd suggest using the same rhythm here as 00:26:070 (1,2,3) - and shorten 00:28:350 (8) - to the white tick at 00:28:526 - to reduce density a bit so there is a 1/1 gap to the downbeat allowing you to emphasise it a bit
00:30:280 - NC here or as close as possible to the downbeat
00:31:684 (1) - This ends on a strong sound, end of the song too but it's not really emphasised in any way. Consider splitting this slider in to two circles with the note on 00:32:035 - at around x:184. Also the hitsound at 00:32:035 - should be a Finish instead of Clap like in the other diffs

[

Reimu's Salad]

00:02:035 (4,1) - This walk feels just a bit too strong, 1.40x ds would be nice
00:03:614 (1,2) - Same story as above, would nerf this walk slightly
00:08:350 (3,4) - There's quite a few quick direction changes before dashes in this difficulty like this that I think are a bit tricky. Would help to reduce the frequency of this pattern a little and it's an easy fix to Ctrl+G 00:08:877 (4) - and move it to x:32
00:16:947 (3,4,5) - Not a fan of varying distances like this on a wiggle in a Salad. I'd suggest to keep distances consistent on this wiggle so that the movement is as simple as possible, especially as it leads in to a dash
00:22:736 (5,6) - This part is quite dense with dashes. Could consider removing the dash here as dashing in and out of a 1/2 slider is a little tricky on a Salad

[

Platter]

00:12:736 (3,4,1) - I don't like this double dash movement too much. The first dash movement is quite a bit weaker than the second which makes this feel a bit awkward to play. Consider making the movement between 00:12:736 (3,4) - a walk
00:28:350 (4,5) - This is a fairly easy platter so I'd suggest avoiding dashes in to hyperdashes as they can be rather tricky. Consider moving 00:28:701 (5) - to x:416 and then shifting the rest of the map 00:28:877 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2) - to the right a bit to bring the hyper distance back down and help move 00:28:877 (1) - away from the wall
00:30:631 (2,3,4) - And would suggest getting rid of this double dash too

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Hareimu 2018-01-17T21:55:10+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
Sorry for being a bit late with this!

[ General]
Combo Colours: You haven't got any, could add some based on bg colours added my own on my diff
Other: There's no Kiai time used, consider adding one starting at 00:26:070 - and ending at 00:32:035 - as above
[ Reimu's Salad]
00:02:035 (4,1) - This walk feels just a bit too strong, 1.40x ds would be nice ok
00:03:614 (1,2) - Same story as above, would nerf this walk slightly done
00:08:350 (3,4) - There's quite a few quick direction changes before dashes in this difficulty like this that I think are a bit tricky. Would help to reduce the frequency of this pattern a little and it's an easy fix to Ctrl+G 00:08:877 (4) - and move it to x:32 nerfed
00:16:947 (3,4,5) - Not a fan of varying distances like this on a wiggle in a Salad. I'd suggest to keep distances consistent on this wiggle so that the movement is as simple as possible, especially as it leads in to a dash alright
00:22:736 (5,6) - This part is quite dense with dashes. Could consider removing the dash here as dashing in and out of a 1/2 slider is a little tricky on a Salad removed some

thanks for the mod!

salad

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 17
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 3.499999

[Metadata]
Title:My Life As A Teenage Robot (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:My Life As A Teenage Robot (TV Size)
Artist:Peter Lurye
ArtistUnicode:Peter Lurye
Creator:Nelly
Version:Reimu's Salad
Source:My Life As A Teenage Robot
Tags:nickelodeon xj-9 jenny wakeman rob renzetti teen nicktoons hareimu
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BeatmapSetID:648863

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OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:7
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Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2018-02-02T15:19:46+00:00

Huge apologies for my late reply. I was in hospitalization for about 2 weeks and also I can't remember what I accepted but I applied your suggestions in most of your post.

Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2018-02-05T01:50:26+00:00

No worries about the late response, real life stuff happens.

I've only got a quick couple of points though MBomb has said he wants to mention a few things before this gets qualified so expect a mod from him hopefully very soon

[Cup]

00:31:684 (1) - Still missing emphasis at 00:32:035 - which is a far stronger sound than the one at 00:31:684 - . Would strongly recommend to split this slider in to two circles with about 1.40x DS distance between them

[Platter]

00:13:087 (5,1) - Dash feels missing here. Would up this distance to 1.80x ds by adjusting the shape of the curve at 00:12:561 (2,3,4,5) -

Nelly

Beatmap Nominator

1,533 posts

Joined August 2014

Topic Starter

Nelly 2018-02-05T04:52:18+00:00

Applied them all.

MBomb

MBomb 2018-02-10T22:39:26+00:00

what the FUCK is modding.

[General]

00:00:280 - Maybe adjust the preview point to here on all diffs? Sounds a little nicer to me.

[Cup]

00:04:315 (2) - Think it'd be nice to make that note stand out a little more in the middle, considering the vocal and guitar note on it. Either a repeat slider (Although this would require some rearranging), or just making it 3 circles would be nice in my opinion.
00:11:333 (3) - I think a little more distancing to this would be nice for the "ya", although it's not like a core part, the extra emphasis does sound nice to me. x:256 would be cool.
00:14:842 (1) - A tiny bit more emphasis on this would be nice for vocal strength, considering right now it's the same distance as to 4, despite being a much stronger note. Try x:400 on it with a curve ending slightly more to the left for flow.
00:20:456 (1) - This one's a similar situation to the above. Try increasing it to x:384 and then adjusting the curve to end at the same place as it does currently.
00:29:228 (1) - I think considering this is the kiai, a slightly higher distance to it would feel cool to me. Ctrl+G and then x:344 would be nice for matching the more intense section here.
00:32:035 (2) - Could have a tiny bit of a more intense finale here, to fit that ending vocal and the finish hitsound you used here. Try x:320, maybe.

[Salad]

00:04:842 (3) - Movement being a speedup into this slider, as it is now, feels kinda weird, plus a bit higher distance for the vocal intensity would be nice anyway. Try x:336 on it.
00:06:245 (6,7,1) - Whilst I understand the intention here is to emphasise 1 but in a way that doesn't involve a 1/4 dash, it really just ends up feeling weird as it is now, as 6 really isn't a strong note at all and that's very noticable. Lowering dash density would be kinda nice anyway, so maybe just make it a normal movement?
00:13:964 (3) - I feel this vocal is definitely strong enough for a slightly higher distance, it feels kinda awkward to me to have such a low distance, like as it is now. Try increasing to x:256 to change that feeling.
00:16:070 (1) - Lowering dash density would be quite nice here I feel, as there's a lot of dashes for a salad as it is currently, and this note could definitely do without a dash as the vocal strength isn't too strong and a normal movement would emphasise it fine.
00:22:210 (2) - This note isn't really strong enough to fit a dash either in my opinion, the vocal is sudden but not exactly strong and the drum doesn't really even land on this note, but even if it did I don't feel that alone would be strong enough to suggest a dash either.
00:23:789 (2) - A bit more emphasis on these vocals for their strength would be nice, try x:320?
00:24:666 (5) - Increase this slightly please, as it is right now it's smaller than all other dash distances in the map, and is also before normal flow, so could be a little confusing. x:128 would be great.
00:28:877 (1) - Considering the previous suggestion, this might sound a little strange, but I think a reduction on this dash distance would actually be better, considering the strength of the movement before the direction change. Try x:216 on it?
00:30:105 (1,2) - Similar suggestion to previous for the same reasons. x:344 please.
00:31:508 (4,5,6,7) - Two things on this section. Firstly, dash to 4 doesn't really work very well to me, as the drum is essentially the same throughout this section, so having extra emphasis sounds really odd to me on that. I'd try moving 4,5,6 to x:256. I'd also highly suggest increasing the distance to 7, as right now the distance is quite small, and the note is actually quite strong so having a stronger dash to it would fit really well. Try x:488 on it, if you applied my previous change. (ds 2.16x if you didn't).

Really good salad, loved it, though dash density did feel a little high.

[Platter]

00:05:894 (3,4,5,6,7) - I feel the movement into this curve currently feels like it can be overdashed quite easily. I've made a different curve, however you might want to do it differently. Try 3 at x:168, 4 at x:120, 5 at x:80, 6 at x:56 and 7 at x:88.
00:13:263 (1) - Dash to this would be pretty nice for the vocal strength, try x:424?
00:16:070 (1) - Same with this one, maybe try x:384 and then adjust the curve slightly so the next movement has normal flow.
00:18:877 (1) - Dash to this one would also be pretty nice for the vocal, x:192 feels swell.
00:22:912 (6) - Woah, really strong HDash to the next note here that could really do with some reducing for playability reasons. Ctrl+g on this slider and putting it on x:424 feels nice.
00:28:877 (1) - HDash to this is really strong, unnecessarily as the note here isn't strong, and it's actually nearly breaking the guideline. Keeping the HDash but reducing it slightly to help playability reasons and be a bit more consistent with the rest of the map. Try x:136 with a curve like this?

Think that's all from me for now. Thanks for waiting!

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Hareimu 2018-02-11T01:48:37+00:00

MBomb wrote:
what the FUCK is modding. dunno

[General]

00:00:280 - Maybe adjust the preview point to here on all diffs? Sounds a little nicer to me. done in my diff, hopefully nelly agrees to it too

[Salad]

00:04:842 (3) - Movement being a speedup into this slider, as it is now, feels kinda weird, plus a bit higher distance for the vocal intensity would be nice anyway. Try x:336 on it. kk
00:06:245 (6,7,1) - Whilst I understand the intention here is to emphasise 1 but in a way that doesn't involve a 1/4 dash, it really just ends up feeling weird as it is now, as 6 really isn't a strong note at all and that's very noticable. Lowering dash density would be kinda nice anyway, so maybe just make it a normal movement? done
00:13:964 (3) - I feel this vocal is definitely strong enough for a slightly higher distance, it feels kinda awkward to me to have such a low distance, like as it is now. Try increasing to x:256 to change that feeling. done
00:16:070 (1) - Lowering dash density would be quite nice here I feel, as there's a lot of dashes for a salad as it is currently, and this note could definitely do without a dash as the vocal strength isn't too strong and a normal movement would emphasise it fine. done
00:22:210 (2) - This note isn't really strong enough to fit a dash either in my opinion, the vocal is sudden but not exactly strong and the drum doesn't really even land on this note, but even if it did I don't feel that alone would be strong enough to suggest a dash either.
00:23:789 (2) - A bit more emphasis on these vocals for their strength would be nice, try x:320? increased
00:24:666 (5) - Increase this slightly please, as it is right now it's smaller than all other dash distances in the map, and is also before normal flow, so could be a little confusing. x:128 would be great. done
00:28:877 (1) - Considering the previous suggestion, this might sound a little strange, but I think a reduction on this dash distance would actually be better, considering the strength of the movement before the direction change. Try x:216 on it? done
00:30:105 (1,2) - Similar suggestion to previous for the same reasons. x:344 please. done
00:31:508 (4,5,6,7) - Two things on this section. Firstly, dash to 4 doesn't really work very well to me, as the drum is essentially the same throughout this section, so having extra emphasis sounds really odd to me on that. I'd try moving 4,5,6 to x:256. I'd also highly suggest increasing the distance to 7, as right now the distance is quite small, and the note is actually quite strong so having a stronger dash to it would fit really well. Try x:488 on it, if you applied my previous change. (ds 2.16x if you didn't). all done

Really good salad, loved it, though dash density did feel a little high. thanks

Think that's all from me for now. Thanks for waiting! thanks for the mod!

salad

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Nelly

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Nelly 2018-02-11T04:42:06+00:00

MBomb wrote:
what the FUCK is modding. Same question

[General]

00:00:280 - Maybe adjust the preview point to here on all diffs? Sounds a little nicer to me.

[Cup]

00:04:315 (2) - Think it'd be nice to make that note stand out a little more in the middle, considering the vocal and guitar note on it. Either a repeat slider (Although this would require some rearranging), or just making it 3 circles would be nice in my opinion.
00:11:333 (3) - I think a little more distancing to this would be nice for the "ya", although it's not like a core part, the extra emphasis does sound nice to me. x:256 would be cool.
00:14:842 (1) - A tiny bit more emphasis on this would be nice for vocal strength, considering right now it's the same distance as to 4, despite being a much stronger note. Try x:400 on it with a curve ending slightly more to the left for flow. I edited the slider a bit because it's basically stands it. Accepted the distance though.
00:20:456 (1) - This one's a similar situation to the above. Try increasing it to x:384 and then adjusting the curve to end at the same place as it does currently. Same with the previous suggestion.
00:29:228 (1) - I think considering this is the kiai, a slightly higher distance to it would feel cool to me. Ctrl+G and then x:344 would be nice for matching the more intense section here.
00:32:035 (2) - Could have a tiny bit of a more intense finale here, to fit that ending vocal and the finish hitsound you used here. Try x:320, maybe.

[Platter]

00:05:894 (3,4,5,6,7) - I feel the movement into this curve currently feels like it can be overdashed quite easily. I've made a different curve, however you might want to do it differently. Try 3 at x:168, 4 at x:120, 5 at x:80, 6 at x:56 and 7 at x:88. Made this in my mapping style but I did something simular to your suggestion.
00:13:263 (1) - Dash to this would be pretty nice for the vocal strength, try x:424? Moved a tiny bit to x:416.
00:16:070 (1) - Same with this one, maybe try x:384 and then adjust the curve slightly so the next movement has normal flow.
00:18:877 (1) - Dash to this one would also be pretty nice for the vocal, x:192 feels swell.
00:22:912 (6) - Woah, really strong HDash to the next note here that could really do with some reducing for playability reasons. Ctrl+g on this slider and putting it on x:424 feels nice.
00:28:877 (1) - HDash to this is really strong, unnecessarily as the note here isn't strong, and it's actually nearly breaking the guideline. Keeping the HDash but reducing it slightly to help playability reasons and be a bit more consistent with the rest of the map. Try x:136 with a curve like this?

Think that's all from me for now. Thanks for waiting!

No replies means accepted. I hope that would suit great for ranking. Thanks for a check!

Sorceress

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Sorceress 2018-02-11T20:10:03+00:00

Good stuff, bubbled!

Lacrima

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Lacrima 2018-02-11T20:13:37+00:00

that doesnt mean you're better than me

Nelly

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Nelly 2018-02-11T20:17:52+00:00

Посмотрим.

Djulus

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Djulus 2018-02-11T23:06:35+00:00

=)

celerih

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celerih 2018-02-12T21:07:18+00:00

Hey there, your metadata seems to be incorrect, let's fix that before this gets qualified so it doesn't get DQ'ed okay?

The artist field seems to be okay, but your title needs to be changed, as the (TV Size) thing shouldn't be there at all. You can move the TV size thing to the tags

Artist: Peter Lurye
Title: My Life As A Teenage Robot

Sources for metadata

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=49WPb5XYvac

dw Sorcerer can rebubble no problem after you've fixed this

Nelly

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Nelly 2018-02-12T21:18:04+00:00

rip bubble fuck me. Applied.

Sorceress

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Sorceress 2018-02-12T21:46:39+00:00

Oops my bad, Rebubbled!

Ascendance

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Ascendance 2018-02-12T22:38:13+00:00

Bubble Popped (TV Size)

eyes

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eyes 2018-02-13T04:13:24+00:00

finally nice anime op

-Hex-

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-Hex- 2018-02-13T08:47:45+00:00

Hey hey.

Electoz

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Electoz 2018-02-16T16:37:43+00:00

[Cup]

00:05:543 (2,3,4,5,6) - Drumroll is happening on 00:05:893 (4,5,6) - so these 00:05:543 (2,3) - should be differentiate from thsoe 3 circles since they're not the same thing, either break the pattern between them or changing 00:05:543 (2,3) - to sliders would do
00:07:122 (2) - Shouldn't this be like a 1/2 repeat slider like other instances? Like 00:09:929 (2) - 00:12:736 (3) - 00:18:350 (2) - etc

[Reimu's Salad]

00:15:894 (3,1) - Supposed to be a dash here? Yes?

Call me back

Last edited by Electoz 2018-02-16T16:58:12+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Ascendance

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Ascendance 2018-02-16T16:41:08+00:00

electoz there's a metadata post like 3 posts above yours LOL

Nelly

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Nelly 2018-02-16T16:57:32+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
electoz there's a metadata post like 3 posts above yours LOL

Exactly LUL. Accepted everything in Timing and your suggestions on Cup. Gotta wait for Hareimu for an apply.

Electoz

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Electoz 2018-02-16T16:58:32+00:00

you saw nothing
I MEAN NOTHING

Nelly

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Nelly 2018-02-16T16:59:30+00:00

I saw it :^)
Will update my set after confirming Hareimu's Salad difficulty.

Nelly

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Nelly 2018-02-16T17:24:20+00:00

So after the discussion between Electoz and Kurai the metadata goes like this:

Artist: Jennifer Karr
Title: My Life As A Teenage Robot

Confirmed by Kurai. Here's some words by him.

Hareimu

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Hareimu 2018-02-16T23:57:00+00:00

Electoz wrote:
[Reimu's Salad]

00:15:894 (3,1) - Supposed to be a dash here? Yes? yeah added
Call me back

salad

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