Huge apologies for my late reply. I was in hospitalization for about 2 weeks and also I can't remember what I accepted but I applied your suggestions in most of your post.
MBomb wrote:
what the FUCK is modding. dunno
[General]
00:00:280 - Maybe adjust the preview point to here on all diffs? Sounds a little nicer to me. done in my diff, hopefully nelly agrees to it too
[Salad]
00:04:842 (3) - Movement being a speedup into this slider, as it is now, feels kinda weird, plus a bit higher distance for the vocal intensity would be nice anyway. Try x:336 on it. kk
00:06:245 (6,7,1) - Whilst I understand the intention here is to emphasise 1 but in a way that doesn't involve a 1/4 dash, it really just ends up feeling weird as it is now, as 6 really isn't a strong note at all and that's very noticable. Lowering dash density would be kinda nice anyway, so maybe just make it a normal movement? done
00:13:964 (3) - I feel this vocal is definitely strong enough for a slightly higher distance, it feels kinda awkward to me to have such a low distance, like as it is now. Try increasing to x:256 to change that feeling. done
00:16:070 (1) - Lowering dash density would be quite nice here I feel, as there's a lot of dashes for a salad as it is currently, and this note could definitely do without a dash as the vocal strength isn't too strong and a normal movement would emphasise it fine. done
00:22:210 (2) - This note isn't really strong enough to fit a dash either in my opinion, the vocal is sudden but not exactly strong and the drum doesn't really even land on this note, but even if it did I don't feel that alone would be strong enough to suggest a dash either.
00:23:789 (2) - A bit more emphasis on these vocals for their strength would be nice, try x:320? increased
00:24:666 (5) - Increase this slightly please, as it is right now it's smaller than all other dash distances in the map, and is also before normal flow, so could be a little confusing. x:128 would be great. done
00:28:877 (1) - Considering the previous suggestion, this might sound a little strange, but I think a reduction on this dash distance would actually be better, considering the strength of the movement before the direction change. Try x:216 on it? done
00:30:105 (1,2) - Similar suggestion to previous for the same reasons. x:344 please. done
00:31:508 (4,5,6,7) - Two things on this section. Firstly, dash to 4 doesn't really work very well to me, as the drum is essentially the same throughout this section, so having extra emphasis sounds really odd to me on that. I'd try moving 4,5,6 to x:256. I'd also highly suggest increasing the distance to 7, as right now the distance is quite small, and the note is actually quite strong so having a stronger dash to it would fit really well. Try x:488 on it, if you applied my previous change. (ds 2.16x if you didn't). all done
Really good salad, loved it, though dash density did feel a little high. thanks
Think that's all from me for now. Thanks for waiting! thanks for the mod!
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No replies means accepted. I hope that would suit great for ranking. Thanks for a check!MBomb wrote:
what the FUCK is modding. Same question
[General]
00:00:280 - Maybe adjust the preview point to here on all diffs? Sounds a little nicer to me.
[Cup]
00:04:315 (2) - Think it'd be nice to make that note stand out a little more in the middle, considering the vocal and guitar note on it. Either a repeat slider (Although this would require some rearranging), or just making it 3 circles would be nice in my opinion.
00:11:333 (3) - I think a little more distancing to this would be nice for the "ya", although it's not like a core part, the extra emphasis does sound nice to me. x:256 would be cool.
00:14:842 (1) - A tiny bit more emphasis on this would be nice for vocal strength, considering right now it's the same distance as to 4, despite being a much stronger note. Try x:400 on it with a curve ending slightly more to the left for flow. I edited the slider a bit because it's basically stands it. Accepted the distance though.
00:20:456 (1) - This one's a similar situation to the above. Try increasing it to x:384 and then adjusting the curve to end at the same place as it does currently. Same with the previous suggestion.
00:29:228 (1) - I think considering this is the kiai, a slightly higher distance to it would feel cool to me. Ctrl+G and then x:344 would be nice for matching the more intense section here.
00:32:035 (2) - Could have a tiny bit of a more intense finale here, to fit that ending vocal and the finish hitsound you used here. Try x:320, maybe.
[Platter]
00:05:894 (3,4,5,6,7) - I feel the movement into this curve currently feels like it can be overdashed quite easily. I've made a different curve, however you might want to do it differently. Try 3 at x:168, 4 at x:120, 5 at x:80, 6 at x:56 and 7 at x:88. Made this in my mapping style but I did something simular to your suggestion.
00:13:263 (1) - Dash to this would be pretty nice for the vocal strength, try x:424? Moved a tiny bit to x:416.
00:16:070 (1) - Same with this one, maybe try x:384 and then adjust the curve slightly so the next movement has normal flow.
00:18:877 (1) - Dash to this one would also be pretty nice for the vocal, x:192 feels swell.
00:22:912 (6) - Woah, really strong HDash to the next note here that could really do with some reducing for playability reasons. Ctrl+g on this slider and putting it on x:424 feels nice.
00:28:877 (1) - HDash to this is really strong, unnecessarily as the note here isn't strong, and it's actually nearly breaking the guideline. Keeping the HDash but reducing it slightly to help playability reasons and be a bit more consistent with the rest of the map. Try x:136 with a curve like this?
Think that's all from me for now. Thanks for waiting!
Exactly LUL. Accepted everything in Timing and your suggestions on Cup. Gotta wait for Hareimu for an apply.Ascendance wrote:
electoz there's a metadata post like 3 posts above yours LOL
Electoz wrote:
[Reimu's Salad]Call me back
- 00:15:894 (3,1) - Supposed to be a dash here? Yes? yeah added
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