1. Akitoshi's Harder (3,84 stars, 117 notes)
2. Curi's Insane (4,44 stars, 120 notes)
3. Easy (1,49 stars, 45 notes)
4. Hard (2,89 stars, 89 notes)
5. Light Insane (4,09 stars, 114 notes)
6. Normal (1,92 stars, 60 notes)
7. schoolboy's Extra (5,57 stars, 156 notes)
8. vanucik's Expert (5,05 stars, 148 notes)

Kotori-Chan wrote:

Toshi insane

00:02:765 (1) - if you decide to map vocals this slider should start here 00:02:590 - if you're following the guitar, gud !! even tho i feel like the vocals are stronger than the guitar cymbal crashes on 00:02:765 - so ye. also im keeping consistency for being clickable on every cymbals so xd

other than that, i dont really feel like the emphatize thingies aka. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:17:416 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - and so on~ are necessary. but oh well ~ it's insane my dude

Kotori-Chan wrote:

mod v1 \:3/


Easy

00:06:253 (4,1) - you could blanket these two ! https://puu.sh/yKjJx/77fc4a4de1.pngi prefer dont use blankets on this diff

00:13:230 (2,3) - idk but the transition of these two is kinda weird, how about making it adding a 1/1 slider on 00:13:230 - i feel like that would play somewhat better instead having that mini break hmm, on high bpm 1/1 and 3/4 slider kinda weird imo
00:16:021 - ^^^^^^

Normal

00:20:904 (1) - why is this slider straight, how about making it the same shape as 00:21:602 (2) - looks cuter~ ok

Hard

00:02:765 (1) - shouldnt this slider start here 00:02:590 - ??? cus thats where that strong vocal sound actually is yes

00:05:556 - same as above ^^^^^^ should be here 00:05:381 - fixed

00:27:532 (4) - same like i said in easy, why is this slider not the same as 00:27:183 (3) - would look cuter !! yes

00:30:323 (3) - NC so people know that slider got a diff. sv ok

Toshi insane

00:02:765 (1) - if you decide to map vocals this slider should start here 00:02:590 - if you're following the guitar, gud !! even tho i feel like the vocals are stronger than the guitar

other than that, i dont really feel like the emphatize thingies aka. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - 00:17:416 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - and so on~ are necessary. but oh well ~

Last

How about making this od 7.5 NOT 8 !!!! since toshi insane is already 7. OORR you do toshi insane 6.5 and keep last 7, idk ~ ye

all fine i guess ;o;


nice little map and good luck with it :3 !

Ametrin wrote:

m4m from my q. my mappu: https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/696085#osu/1474641

Harumachi clov...no :eyes:

[Easy]
00:25:090 (3,4) - maybe two slider to fit guitar cool i did it
00:30:759 (1) - add a note here? what
00:30:759 (1) - 1/4 gap in easy diff is not proper. at least 1/1 ye

[Normal]
00:13:579 (6,1) - and 00:16:021 (2,3,1) - you gotta choose one for cosistency i prefer first consistency
00:25:788 (2) - can you just use copy and paste from 1 to build this slider i guess i did
00:30:759 (1) - same as Easy. But i do remember someone used 1/2 gap in Normal diff tho (but 1/4 is not acceptable)

[Hard]
00:12:445 (2) - try delete this. don't have to be that intense since in hard diff didn't have a stacked double 1/4 so i did tripple, plays cool imo
00:30:556 - add clap plz. really weird to play no reason here to put clap, but i fixed rhythm (unsnapped object) just replaced slider end on blue tick

[Last]
00:02:416 (5) - try to put two circle here, maybe stack at the head of this slider. stack looks weird imo and i prefer follow instrumental
00:04:858 (5) - move this a bit upward since it get too closer to 00:05:381 (7) - , seems crowded yes
00:07:649 (3) - minor stack problem. hope you remembered closing grid snap when checking snap issue oki
00:12:532 (1,2) - why 1/4? like 00:15:323 (1,2) - you just ignored aesthetics
00:22:300 (3,4,1) - u dont have to keep ds here man... these overlap are really meaningless its ok
00:30:585 - clap no reason put clap here

guess that's all for me :3 GL!

Nevo wrote:

I didn't find anything with the lower diffs xd

Insane
Sorry to say but it seems you got the glitch where updating map deletes it. From my knowledge only known fix is to change the diff name should be fixed now
ok onto mod
00:12:183 (2) - maybe make this a reverse 1/4 slider like 00:11:137 (3) - so the drums are mapped following vocal its fine imo
00:16:370 (5) - stack with 00:15:672 (3) - ok
00:23:695 (1) - blanket could be better ye
00:27:707 (7) - make this stack 00:27:009 (3) - like how 00:27:532 (6) - stacks with 00:27:183 (4) - like the visual spacing of the overlap should be the same imo sure


extra
00:12:183 (8) - maybe nc this since the stream direction changes.
00:17:765 (7,8,9,10,1) - super subjective but I feel this half of the stream's angle is kinda ugly I like how you had a definite change in the first stream, so basically I feel you could make this more like 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
00:20:207 (5) - I get your trying to emphasis but maybe you could make this parallel with 00:19:858 (3,4) - plays more comfortably imo.
00:22:649 (1,2,3) - maybe move this triple so the 1 stacks with 00:21:951 (5) -
00:24:567 (4,5,6) - maybe reduce spacing on 6 so it's a perfect triangle
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - seX

fun map

1. Does countdown necessary? you should turn off it at all diffs.
2. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9815779 Insane diff is crooked, could you re upload it?

1. 00:11:137 (3,4) - for seeing this, mouse(or tablet)'s moving is going little bit sharp way, this has about 90 degree angle flow, looks little bit weird, in my suggestion, if you should follow the flow about the sliders' like this, map's flow can be more smooth and soft.
2. 00:27:881 (3) - you made this just straight slider, but if you use same slider with 00:26:486 (1) - , then this pattern can have symmetrical pattern, and map's pattern looks more stable. like this.
3. 00:30:672 (1) - Spinnerend is weird way? you should end this spinner at 00:36:253 - as you did at other diffs lol, It looks just your minor mistake lol

1. 00:04:335 - I felt weird because this part doesn't have beat here, this part has good vocal sound to emphasis and you can make it, even if you add a beat here, doesn't matter with drum sounds, my suggestion is this or this.
2. 00:05:381 - this part flows same rhythm with 00:02:590 (3) - , but the previous part has beat and this part doesn't have beat? I think you should add a beat at here for consistency of rhythm.
3. 00:06:951 (1,2,3) - 00:08:346 (1,2,3) - As you know, this part has good vocal sounds to emphasize, but you didn't add only for following downbeats, I think you should emphasize vocals, Not only for downbeats.
4. 00:12:532 (4) - You missed NC here, you added NC as 1 downbeats, then this part should be NCed like others.
5. 00:16:021 (2,3) - this part doesn't have hitsounds? you missed Hitsounds at here.
6. 00:13:579 (6,1) - 00:16:370 (3,1) - this two parts are the only parts that you followed vocal, do you have any reason for following vocals ONLY this part? I think you should follow drum sounds, as you did at others, this part is weird little bit. Or you can add some vocal beats overall.
7. 00:18:811 (2,3) - for following vocals, you can swap this part's rhythm. this part looks just following downbeats, too.
8. 00:20:207 (2,3) - ^, but if you will not apply above mod, you should add a beat at 00:20:730 - , for consistency with 00:19:335 (3) - . music flows same with 00:18:811 (2,3) - . then you can set consistency for better quality about this maps.
9. 00:27:881 (1) - this part is weird, too. because you followed vocal without any reasons, too. Suddenly following other sounds can be weird, if you add a beat at 00:28:230 - , rhythm can be better imo.

1. 00:02:067 - you missed hitsounds at here.
2. 00:02:590 (5) - you missed Nc here, you followed Nc with 1 beats, should be added NC
3. 00:03:114 - here is, too. you missed hitsounds.
4. 00:02:590 (5) - 00:04:160 (1) - 00:05:381 (1) - for seeing this parts, you can emphasis in here, but why you didn't make jump? this looks little bit weird, 00:13:230 (4,1) - 00:14:974 (4,1) - 00:16:370 (5,1) - this parts, flows same song, you added jump. Then you should add jump here, too.
5. 00:06:428 - this part has weird hitsound? This hitsound doesn't necessary imo.
6. 00:18:811 (3,4) - 00:20:207 (3,4) - you followed vocals at previous part, for seeing consistency with previous part, you should follow vocals at here, too.
7. 00:24:567 - add clap? you added claps at 00:25:963 - 00:27:358 - , which has same part of music.
8. 00:29:276 (3) - 1/3. listen carefully one more.

1. This part doesn't have custom combocolor? other diffs are set color, then you should add custom color, just basic color looks too bland
2. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - overmapping imo. this part doesn't have any special sounds. but why you added this weird patterns? I think you should follow just drums, you didn't overmapped like this at other parts.
3. 00:09:218 (4) - has weird hitsound, you should set same hitsounds with 00:07:823 (4) - for consistency. music flows same.
4. 00:11:050 (6) - if you add whistle sound, then this par's drum expression will be better. this part have same sound with other whistle sounds.
5. 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7) - could you add hitsounds for colorful sound? this sound looks empty comparing with this part's intense.
6. 00:16:544 (1) - do you have any reason using this slider? for seeing this map, you didn't try this special-shaped slider. only using at here without any reason looks not so good. 00:25:090 (1,3) - are, too
7. 00:23:085 (8) - I know you did't add hitsound for follwing vocal, then since you follow vocal, you can delete this beat, hitsound follows vocal, notes follow drums,.... this are really weird for listening, set one thing which will you follow. if you want follow drum, 00:23:085 (8) - add clap here.

1. 00:04:509 (3,4) - you followed vocal sound seeing 00:01:370 (1,2) - are sliders, then this part should be slider for consistency of follwing sounds.
2. 00:11:137 (3,1) - This linear overlap looks messy little bit. I suggest you two things, s1 / s2. other patterns are, too.
3. 00:12:532 (1,2) - overmapping. you didn't add this kicksliders at 00:15:323 (1,2) - . then you should delete this if you don't have any reasons.
4. 00:14:974 (4,1,2) - weird flow? I think you can make better flow, current pattern's moving looks hard.
5. 00:24:393 (3,4) - for listening this song, 00:24:567 - has trumpet sounds, then I think swapping rhythms could be better for consistency.
6. 00:29:276 (1,2,3,4) - same problem with hard diffs, 1/3 is right rhythm. Akitoshi added 1/3,

1. For seeing this map, I think this map is just flowing without any special things, just pattern has jump. It looks really weird.
2. 00:07:649 (5,6) - different intense with 00:09:044 (5,6) - , set consistency for better map's expression.
3. 00:11:835 (4) - Add NC for dividing patterns as you did at 00:10:963 (1,2,3) - , i think you divided pattern with 00:10:963 (1,2,3) - 00:11:311 (1,2,3) - , then it should have same NC terms.
4. 00:20:120 - you should add NC here for seeing 00:18:724 (3) - , this part should be consistent because music flows consistent.
5. 00:22:997 (4) - same as above, this part divided pattern with 00:22:649 (1,2,3) - 00:22:300 (1,2,3) - , then you should add NC 00:22:997 (4) - for better expressions of patterns.
6. 00:26:137 (5,6) - 00:27:532 (5,6) - these two pattern's music flows same, but your intense is different, 00:26:137 (5,6) - has not so big DS, but 00:27:532 (5,6) - has Big jumps? I think you should fix this for set consistent DS in here.

1. 00:09:742 (1,2,3,4) - Consider a rhythm like this insead? http://puu.sh/yKGnm/1e4c3540e1.jpg So it could follow the vocals being held then faster again
2. 00:13:230 (2,3) - I see what you're following, but the 3/2 pause still felt a bit awkard for the difficulty level. How about a reverse slider instead? http://puu.sh/yKGpk/a7fba9a0dd.jpg So you'd still map the same things, just in a slightly easier way to follow.
   >00:16:021 (2,3) - same
3. 00:18:114 (1,3) - It would be REALLY nice if these were curved the same amount to be nice and matching. Like so: http://puu.sh/yKGt6/770e793bb9.jpg

1. 00:12:532 - Uhhh.. add NC. It's the start of the new musical section. It really deserves one.
2. 00:15:323 (1,2,3,1) - Why did your spacing suddenly go from 1.0 to 1.1? Seems like a mistake, I recommend adjusting it to be 1.0 like the rest of the map.
3. 00:16:021 (2) - missing clap
4. 00:23:521 (4) - missing hitsound

1. 00:02:590 (1) - uhhh.. missed nc, looking at your patterns in the map.
2. 00:11:137 (1,2) - Suddenly adding these 1/4 reverses felt really weirdly out of place when the drums they're following aren't super obvious.
3. 00:15:672 (3) - I think mapping this as a 1/1 slider takes the emphasis away from 00:16:544 (1) - that's clearly following a held strong vocal, when 00:15:672 (3) - is more a simplification of the song. I reccomend adding 2 1/2 sliders, at 00:15:672 - and 00:16:021 -
4. 00:27:881 (1,3) - I think it'd be cute if these could be curved the same amount instead of totally different
5. 00:29:276 (3) - hitsounds on this slider are really noisy, possibly lower the volume on the repeats some? also, shouldn't this be 1/3...
6. 00:29:974 (2) - why is this slider on 1/3? there aren't 1/3 drums here to support it, and you're skipping over the sound at 00:30:149 -

1. 00:19:509 - missing finish
2. 00:20:904 - missing finish
3. 00:23:259 - looking at what the prior triples are mapping, the note feels missing here, since there is another drum at this time.

1. 00:12:532 (1,2) - deciding to do these at 1/4 sliders felt very out of place, especially when 00:15:323 (1,2) - is just circles??

1. 00:04:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern felt really random and off. 00:04:509 (3) - a stronger sound, is given the same spacing from 2 as 2 is from 1, but then 00:04:683 (4) - has far larger spacing, despite being weaker in the song, and the spacing just gets bigger even though the song isn't particularly growing in intensity. On top of that, it doesnt seem to be forming into any pattern in particular, so as a whole it just comes together as a really random jumpspam. It also takes away from 00:05:381 (8,9,1) - by making it part of the general increase, even though 00:05:381 (8,9,1) - is actually notably strong.
2. 00:07:125 (2,3,4) - for real, i dont see what these jumps are supposed to be emphasizing @_@
3. 00:10:439 (3,3) - why
4. 00:13:753 (1,3) - why
5. 00:22:997 (4) - NC? since you decided to 00:22:649 - nc this even.
6. 00:27:881 - suddenly halving the sv here when the song hasn't noticable fading out yet was really sudden and awkward :/
7. 00:29:625 (1) - why not add nc so it's clearer these are triplets?
8. 00:29:974 (1,2,1,2) - try to align this to share the same axis as 00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , so it'd be nice and symmetrical as a whole :>? currently it's like, http://puu.sh/yLtSz/58be0156b2.jpg that, so 00:29:974 (1,2,1,2) - ends up looking offly to the right.

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[General]

1. Does countdown necessary? you should turn off it at all diffs. ye
2. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9815779 Insane diff is crooked, could you re upload it?

donne

[Easy]

1. 00:11:137 (3,4) - for seeing this, mouse(or tablet)'s moving is going little bit sharp way, this has about 90 degree angle flow, looks little bit weird, in my suggestion, if you should follow the flow about the sliders' like this, map's flow can be more smooth and soft. fixed
2. 00:27:881 (3) - you made this just straight slider, but if you use same slider with 00:26:486 (1) - , then this pattern can have symmetrical pattern, and map's pattern looks more stable. like this. agree
3. 00:30:672 (1) - Spinnerend is weird way? you should end this spinner at 00:36:253 - as you did at other diffs lol, It looks just your minor mistake lol

wat a mistake :facepalm: should be fixed now

[Normal]

1. 00:04:335 - I felt weird because this part doesn't have beat here, this part has good vocal sound to emphasis and you can make it, even if you add a beat here, doesn't matter with drum sounds, my suggestion is this or this.
2. 00:05:381 - this part flows same rhythm with 00:02:590 (3) - , but the previous part has beat and this part doesn't have beat? I think you should add a beat at here for consistency of rhythm.
3. 00:06:951 (1,2,3) - 00:08:346 (1,2,3) - As you know, this part has good vocal sounds to emphasize, but you didn't add only for following downbeats, I think you should emphasize vocals, Not only for downbeats.
4. 00:12:532 (4) - You missed NC here, you added NC as 1 downbeats, then this part should be NCed like others.
5. 00:16:021 (2,3) - this part doesn't have hitsounds? you missed Hitsounds at here.
6. 00:13:579 (6,1) - 00:16:370 (3,1) - this two parts are the only parts that you followed vocal, do you have any reason for following vocals ONLY this part? I think you should follow drum sounds, as you did at others, this part is weird little bit. Or you can add some vocal beats overall.
7. 00:18:811 (2,3) - for following vocals, you can swap this part's rhythm. this part looks just following downbeats, too.
8. 00:20:207 (2,3) - ^, but if you will not apply above mod, you should add a beat at 00:20:730 - , for consistency with 00:19:335 (3) - . music flows same with 00:18:811 (2,3) - . then you can set consistency for better quality about this maps.
9. 00:27:881 (1) - this part is weird, too. because you followed vocal without any reasons, too. Suddenly following other sounds can be weird, if you add a beat at 00:28:230 - , rhythm can be better imo.

all fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:02:067 - you missed hitsounds at here.
2. 00:02:590 (5) - you missed Nc here, you followed Nc with 1 beats, should be added NC
3. 00:03:114 - here is, too. you missed hitsounds.
4. 00:02:590 (5) - 00:04:160 (1) - 00:05:381 (1) - for seeing this parts, you can emphasis in here, but why you didn't make jump? this looks little bit weird, 00:13:230 (4,1) - 00:14:974 (4,1) - 00:16:370 (5,1) - this parts, flows same song, you added jump. Then you should add jump here, too. add some pattern with same rhythms its fine imo
5. 00:06:428 - this part has weird hitsound? This hitsound doesn't necessary imo. idk but issue on mp3 i guess
6. 00:18:811 (3,4) - 00:20:207 (3,4) - you followed vocals at previous part, for seeing consistency with previous part, you should follow vocals at here, too. idk what you mean
7. 00:24:567 - add clap? you added claps at 00:25:963 - 00:27:358 - , which has same part of music.
8. 00:29:276 (3) - 1/3. listen carefully one more.

[Akitoshi]

1. This part doesn't have custom combocolor? other diffs are set color, then you should add custom color, just basic color looks too bland
2. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - overmapping imo. this part doesn't have any special sounds. but why you added this weird patterns? I think you should follow just drums, you didn't overmapped like this at other parts.
3. 00:09:218 (4) - has weird hitsound, you should set same hitsounds with 00:07:823 (4) - for consistency. music flows same.
4. 00:11:050 (6) - if you add whistle sound, then this par's drum expression will be better. this part have same sound with other whistle sounds.
5. 00:11:835 (4,5,6,7) - could you add hitsounds for colorful sound? this sound looks empty comparing with this part's intense.
6. 00:16:544 (1) - do you have any reason using this slider? for seeing this map, you didn't try this special-shaped slider. only using at here without any reason looks not so good. 00:25:090 (1,3) - are, too
7. 00:23:085 (8) - I know you did't add hitsound for follwing vocal, then since you follow vocal, you can delete this beat, hitsound follows vocal, notes follow drums,.... this are really weird for listening, set one thing which will you follow. if you want follow drum, 00:23:085 (8) - add clap here.

[Insane]

1. 00:04:509 (3,4) - you followed vocal sound seeing 00:01:370 (1,2) - are sliders, then this part should be slider for consistency of follwing sounds.
2. 00:11:137 (3,1) - This linear overlap looks messy little bit. I suggest you two things, s1 / s2. other patterns are, too.
3. 00:12:532 (1,2) - overmapping. you didn't add this kicksliders at 00:15:323 (1,2) - . then you should delete this if you don't have any reasons.
4. 00:14:974 (4,1,2) - weird flow? I think you can make better flow, current pattern's moving looks hard.
5. 00:24:393 (3,4) - for listening this song, 00:24:567 - has trumpet sounds, then I think swapping rhythms could be better for consistency.
6. 00:29:276 (1,2,3,4) - same problem with hard diffs, 1/3 is right rhythm. Akitoshi added 1/3,

[vanucik's Extra]

1. For seeing this map, I think this map is just flowing without any special things, just pattern has jump. It looks really weird.
2. 00:07:649 (5,6) - different intense with 00:09:044 (5,6) - , set consistency for better map's expression.
3. 00:11:835 (4) - Add NC for dividing patterns as you did at 00:10:963 (1,2,3) - , i think you divided pattern with 00:10:963 (1,2,3) - 00:11:311 (1,2,3) - , then it should have same NC terms.
4. 00:20:120 - you should add NC here for seeing 00:18:724 (3) - , this part should be consistent because music flows consistent.
5. 00:22:997 (4) - same as above, this part divided pattern with 00:22:649 (1,2,3) - 00:22:300 (1,2,3) - , then you should add NC 00:22:997 (4) - for better expressions of patterns.
6. 00:26:137 (5,6) - 00:27:532 (5,6) - these two pattern's music flows same, but your intense is different, 00:26:137 (5,6) - has not so big DS, but 00:27:532 (5,6) - has Big jumps? I think you should fix this for set consistent DS in here.

GL

Noffy wrote:

Hi from my Queue

[General]
This mp3 makes my ears hurt what is this

[Easy]

1. 00:09:742 (1,2,3,4) - Consider a rhythm like this insead? http://puu.sh/yKGnm/1e4c3540e1.jpg So it could follow the vocals being held then faster again
2. 00:13:230 (2,3) - I see what you're following, but the 3/2 pause still felt a bit awkard for the difficulty level. How about a reverse slider instead? http://puu.sh/yKGpk/a7fba9a0dd.jpg So you'd still map the same things, just in a slightly easier way to follow.
   >00:16:021 (2,3) - same
3. 00:18:114 (1,3) - It would be REALLY nice if these were curved the same amount to be nice and matching. Like so: http://puu.sh/yKGt6/770e793bb9.jpg

[Normal]

1. 00:12:532 - Uhhh.. add NC. It's the start of the new musical section. It really deserves one.
2. 00:15:323 (1,2,3,1) - Why did your spacing suddenly go from 1.0 to 1.1? Seems like a mistake, I recommend adjusting it to be 1.0 like the rest of the map.
3. 00:16:021 (2) - missing clap
4. 00:23:521 (4) - missing hitsound

fixed all

[Hard]

1. 00:02:590 (1) - uhhh.. missed nc, looking at your patterns in the map.
2. 00:11:137 (1,2) - Suddenly adding these 1/4 reverses felt really weirdly out of place when the drums they're following aren't super obvious. its fine
3. 00:15:672 (3) - I think mapping this as a 1/1 slider takes the emphasis away from 00:16:544 (1) - that's clearly following a held strong vocal, when 00:15:672 (3) - is more a simplification of the song. I reccomend adding 2 1/2 sliders, at 00:15:672 - and 00:16:021 - hmm when i put 2 1/2 sliders looks for me weirdly
4. 00:27:881 (1,3) - I think it'd be cute if these could be curved the same amount instead of totally different hmm idk i'll do it maybe
5. 00:29:276 (3) - hitsounds on this slider are really noisy, possibly lower the volume on the repeats some? also, shouldn't this be 1/3...
6. 00:29:974 (2) - why is this slider on 1/3? there aren't 1/3 drums here to support it, and you're skipping over the sound at 00:30:149 -

[Akitoshi's Insane]
Where are your combocolours.

1. 00:19:509 - missing finish
2. 00:20:904 - missing finish
3. 00:23:259 - looking at what the prior triples are mapping, the note feels missing here, since there is another drum at this time.

[Insane]
this difficulty got cursed with the update bug, rip. (maybe rename it to something like "Heavy Insane" like the opposite of a light insane since it's rated harder than akitoshi's insane!!)

1. 00:12:532 (1,2) - deciding to do these at 1/4 sliders felt very out of place, especially when 00:15:323 (1,2) - is just circles??

[vanucik's Extra]

1. 00:04:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern felt really random and off. 00:04:509 (3) - a stronger sound, is given the same spacing from 2 as 2 is from 1, but then 00:04:683 (4) - has far larger spacing, despite being weaker in the song, and the spacing just gets bigger even though the song isn't particularly growing in intensity. On top of that, it doesnt seem to be forming into any pattern in particular, so as a whole it just comes together as a really random jumpspam. It also takes away from 00:05:381 (8,9,1) - by making it part of the general increase, even though 00:05:381 (8,9,1) - is actually notably strong.
2. 00:07:125 (2,3,4) - for real, i dont see what these jumps are supposed to be emphasizing @_@
3. 00:10:439 (3,3) - why
4. 00:13:753 (1,3) - why
5. 00:22:997 (4) - NC? since you decided to 00:22:649 - nc this even.
6. 00:27:881 - suddenly halving the sv here when the song hasn't noticable fading out yet was really sudden and awkward :/
7. 00:29:625 (1) - why not add nc so it's clearer these are triplets?
8. 00:29:974 (1,2,1,2) - try to align this to share the same axis as 00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , so it'd be nice and symmetrical as a whole :>? currently it's like, http://puu.sh/yLtSz/58be0156b2.jpg that, so 00:29:974 (1,2,1,2) - ends up looking offly to the right.

Battle wrote:

[Easy]
00:30:672 (1) - why doesn't it end on the downbeat?

[Normal]
raise OD to like 5 lol

[Hard]
lower ar to like 7 would even out spread a lot more also raid OD to like 6-7 lol
00:29:276 (3) - this is 1/3
00:30:323 (1) - 1/2 slider would make more sense with the music

[A. Insane]
combo colors d

[Other Insane]
00:12:881 (3,4) - 3/4 sliders here sound really awk, just use 1/2 sliders
00:26:835 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the jump pattern here doesn't really make sense in that there's really nothing special going on in the music but you're patterning it like there is lol, idg why it's not just a mix of circles and sliders cuz just circles doesn't really go along w/ the intensity
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4) - 1/3

[v. Extra]
00:29:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - lol this just feels really out of place considering the rest of the map is fairly generic jumps, transitioning from that to either alternating or like 250 something single tapping seems pretty harsh, maybe consider using repeat sliders instead? if not i dont mind, this is a pp farm set anyways and it'd be pretty funny to have people break but then again it's also unfair gameplay lol

[Other Extra]
00:17:242 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - whats with this really long stream? for a majority of it there's no sounds on the blue ticks :L
00:18:986 (2,3,4) - there's nothing on the blue :L
00:19:422 (6) - d
00:23:171 (3,4) - lol
00:26:486 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - full screen jumps are pretty inappropriate especially since the intensity has not changed at all cuz this is an anime song lol
00:29:276 (1,2,3,1,2) - 1/3

top diff feels way too overdone cuz there's quite a bit of overmapping

• 
  [Tarrasky's True Love]

1. 00:26:486 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - I suggest to increase spacing for better reflect music!
   
2. 00:01:370 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - cntrl+shifr+s and drag the slider to the right!
   
3. 00:03:463 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest to make that pattern for strong vocals!!!
   
4. 00:04:160 (1,2,3,4) - and to make here also for consistence!
   
5. 00:04:858 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - awesome pattern!!! but u can improve flow smh like this:
   
6. 00:06:428 (4,5,6,7,8) - nice stream! I suppose its a c-c-challenge map???? you can make stream more conveniently here so! and [b]NC for[/b] A E S T H E T I C S
   
7. 00:30:759 (1) - WHY spinner??>>>> music hasn't ended yet u can put more jumps or streams MORE pp, example:
   

Tarrasky wrote:

I'll reply the mods soon

plz nuke Loreley kds, he's just a kid

Stix wrote:

00:02:939 (2,3) - crooked stack. or its okay... or should fix it... it's ok imo
00:05:207 (3,1) -why not to put circle on sliderend? like to do triangle. and 00:05:032 (2,4) - fix up but is....
00:13:230 (6,1) - maybe here 00:13:753 (1) - replace and blanket with 00:13:230 (6) - sliderend? sure, fix
00:15:933 (4,5,6,1) - fix blanket
00:19:858 (3) - maybe replace that circle somewhere like 00:18:637 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this?
00:23:172 (4,1) - too far?
00:19:858 (3) - 00:20:730 (2) - unstack i geuss

Battle wrote:

[Other Extra]
00:17:242 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - whats with this really long stream? for a majority of it there's no sounds on the blue ticks :L I can clearly hear the streams im this point
00:18:986 (2,3,4) - there's nothing on the blue :L whops, fixed
00:19:422 (6) - d I change the hitsounds in this moment and in others, now flows better the music, thanks
00:23:171 (3,4) - lol fixed
00:26:486 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - full screen jumps are pretty inappropriate especially since the intensity has not changed at all cuz this is an anime song lol for me flows well because the guitar in this moment is the more intense moment of the song, if you hear starting here 00:23:695 (1) - and in all the difficulty you will notice that the mapping flows the intensity of the guitar somehow, the genre and lenguage doesn't means nothing in mapping please dont be a xenophobic just because the source of the music, this doesn't change nothing in the mapping
00:29:276 (1,2,3,1,2) - 1/3 fixed

top diff feels way too overdone cuz there's quite a bit of overmapping

osu file format v14

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Title:Kibou Refrain
TitleUnicode:希望リフレイン
Artist:Aoshima Moka(CV: Mimori Suzuko)
ArtistUnicode:青島萌香(CV: 三森すずこ)
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Battle wrote:

i dont consider it xenophobic i just dont agree that a song like this deserves full screen jumps especially when it's not high bpm nor extremely intense but that's just subjective lol

Stix wrote:

Привет.

Light Insane

1. 00:04:335 (2,6) - стакни с 00:05:904 (2) - не вижу причин
2. 00:04:160 (1) - мб его на конец 00:04:509 (3) - ? играться будет сложнее тбх
3. 00:04:509 (3) - не ахти наложение. Мб подвинешь его повыше или стакни с 00:06:951 (1) - No pls no
4. 00:09:218 (4) - стакни с концом 00:08:346 (1) - не
5. 00:11:486 (1) - мб поровнее его поставишь ? По отношению к 00:11:137 (3) - та и так ровный вроде
6. 00:16:021 (4,1) - бланкет ок
7. 00:20:207 (3,1) - ^ и так ровный
8. 00:23:346 (3,1) - ^
9. 00:18:114 (1,4) - стак поправь я сам так делаю все ок
10. 00:23:695 (1,1,2,3) - ^
11. 00:22:649 (4) - Подвинь куда нить на x: 142 y: 157 не
    
12. 00:27:881 (1,2,3) - Не красиво. 00:28:579 (3) - выгни нормально

Hard

1. 00:04:160 (1,1) - стакни будет плохо с дс

Normal

1. 00:04:160 (1,2) - а зачем так резко менять направление? Тут вот аж оверлап образовался 00:03:463 (2) - менять направление с новым звуком норм имо и оверлап так себе
2. 00:16:370 (3,1) - мб стак? нет, эстетика такая у нормала

Easy
Чекни AiMod DS.

Собстна все. Удачи

ProEzreal wrote:

Hello~ M4M from in-game req

Easy

1. 00:01:370 (1) - 00:04:160 (1) - the song starts off really strong, i think you can use 1/1 instead of 2/1 which would follow the percussion better i don't think 1/1 slider better also spamming with 1/1 sliders really weird imo
2. 00:30:672 (1) - could place a circle for the finish, would represent the song much better. idk i prefer dont use 1/2 rhythm in easy

Normal

1. 00:02:590 (1) - 00:05:381 (1) - i personally think it would be better to NC every 2 full measures, the NC there isn't really necessary and doesn't seem to fit in well tbh agree
2. 00:23:172 (4) - 1/2 slider would follow the vocals better and give a better emphasis to 00:23:695 (1) - because of the slight pause. ye
3. 00:30:672 (1) - same thing about the circle thing ummm

Hard

1. 00:18:114 (1,1) - different curves xd fixed xd
2. 00:27:881 (1,3) - i would make them look identical ye
3. 00:29:102 (1) - disable nc here or 00:29:276 (1) - oops
4. 00:29:974 (3) - nc here and disable nc on 00:30:323 (1) - since these are 1/2 sliders and the last few drum notes of the stanza ye

tarrasky - 00:23:171 (3,4) - lol?

PandaHero wrote:

m4m from my queue

[General]
Всего два комбо-колора в карте как-то грустно выглядят, я бы побольше под бгху наставила мб поставлю мб нет

[Easy]
00:26:486 (1,2,3,1,2) - парт интенсивный по музыке, а ты его 2/1 слайдерами, хотя до этого 1/1 лепил, не надо так.. лол фикснул
00:25:091 (3) - вот тут на голову можно финиш поставить да

[Normal]
00:18:812 (2) - я думаю клэп бы тут лучше подошёл да
00:23:172 (4) - начинать слайдер со слабого вокала как-то не очень, да и столько 1/2 объектов подряд выглядят сложновато, может вместо 00:22:997 (3,4) - ревёрс слайдер поставить? не хочу менять траекторию если как то поставить то становиться странным ну тоесть флоу
00:24:393 (2,3) - ctrl+g их? Лучше по ритму выходит да
00:29:277 (1) - тут та же проблема что и в изике, андермаппаешь интенсивный по музыке парт, предлагаю разбить его на 1/1 слайдер + ноту сделал
00:30:323 (2,3) - хс потерял с ноток угу
00:30:847 (1) - спиннер же на белом тике должен заканчиваться оО XD

[Hard]
Ар 8 быстровато, 6.5-7 в самый раз для такой сложности. И ротацию паттернов бы поразнообразнее, а то у тебя тупо всё по часовой стрелке идёт, головушка кружится х_х

00:04:160 (1) - а тут разве не должен быть джамп? Ты почти всегда на подобные удары увеличивал спейсинг
00:28:579 (1) - ^, а ещё я бы повертела его на 90 градусов против часовой, чтобы не так уныленько было вроде ок
00:15:323 (1,2,3) - а мне кажется вот так будет красивее osu.ppy.sh/ss/10016852
00:30:788 (1) - снапать начало спиннера на 1/3 это как-то странно

[Akitoshi's Harder]
Where is my Akitoshi's Normal :c

Ar 8 maybe? :eyes:

00:06:428 (4,5,6,7) - can you move it up, please, so overlap between 7 and 1 will be looks better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10016900
00:27:881 (1) - missing clap on slider's end
00:30:672 (1) - aaaaaaa nc, can you remove it, so it will not ruin your beautiful square

[Light Insane]
А од чего пожалел, ставь семёрку, не стесняйся

00:04:160 (1,3) - рииии, оверлап с хвостом слайдера, убери убрал XD
00:12:532 (1,2,3) - хоть убей не слышу тут трипла
00:27:183 (4) - хс потерял?
00:27:881 (1) - клэп с хвоста потерял
00:29:276 (1,2,3) - начинать с 1/3 сёрклами в 4* инсике это малость жестоко, может с ревёрс слайдера начнёшь? (и наверное им же и закончишь, лул)
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[Curi's Insane]
00:11:312 (2,3) - what about this placement? It will be more pleasant to play I guess https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10017085
00:17:677 (6,1) - ughh, can you make a tarnsition between these streams softer?
00:21:602 (3) - both of sounds are strong enough, what about making two circles instead of this slider?
00:29:626 (2,3) - another one reverse slider will be better here imo

wajinshu wrote:

Easy
00:09:742 (1,2,3,4) - сравниваю с 00:20:904 (1,2,3,4) - одинаковы, правда? Но используется совершенно другой ритм, 00:09:742 (1,2,3,4) - лучше будет сделать как было 00:20:904 (1,2,3,4) - угу
00:26:486 (1,2,3) - Можно попробовать два слайдера 1/1, дальше круг и 1/1 с реверсом, ну или придумай что-то свое идея про 1/1 с реверсом какая то шит ставил два слайдера 1/1 и всьо.

Normal
00:18:812 (2) - Ты клап забыл?
00:30:323 (2,3) - А куда ты хс дел?
00:09:219 (3) - Убери клап пожалуста, он сюда не подходит вообще на конце слайдера у тебя такой же звук, но ты обделил его лишь вистлом...
00:18:986 (3) - Тут с конца убери клап, там нет такого сильного звука) а в начале вистл без клапа.
Не буду приставать с хсам, но лучше бы тебе проверить как нужно и поставить их правильно...
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Хард
00:04:160 (1,1) - Может стаканешь это?
00:11:835 (3,1,2) - Слайдером ты пропускаешь сильные звуки. Давай вместо всего сделаем http://puu.sh/z3vpV/72f3301f93.jpg Так будет лучше! не хочу такой реверс(
00:15:323 (1,2,3) - Сейчас в моде прямое флоу
00:12:533 (2) - 1/2 слайдер с реверсом будет намного лучше чем просто слайдер с 1/1 который не подходит по вокалу и ты так до этого не делал) я знаю но я хочу оставить 1/1
00:18:812 (3,4) - Вокал сильный, а ты не делаешь акцент на него, Ctrl+G и будет отлично
00:20:207 (3,4) - ^
00:27:881 (1,2,1) - Круто сделал! Респект
00:30:788 (1) - Ты в своих диффах не начинал спиннер на 1/3)

Light Insane
00:04:160 (1,3) - Оверлап некрасивый
00:06:253 (3) - Давай немного подальше его, звук сильный может на x:224 y:152, 00:06:253 (3,4,5) - треугольник давай!
00:16:980 (2) - Убери плс, там лишь от ее вокала звук, без него лучше будет
00:22:300 (3,4) - Если уж делаешь расстояние то давай чтобы без такой близости, возьми дистанцию 1,7
00:29:276 (1,2,3) - Пожалуйста слайдерами
фикснул всё
мб потом домодю

PandaHero wrote:

[Akitoshi's Harder]
Where is my Akitoshi's Normal :c z

Ar 8 maybe? :eyes: 8.5 for tilt dt players

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zhu wrote:

vanucik's Expert

00:10:963 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 00:13:404 (5,6,7) - this is highly personal, but instead of constant DS'd lines I would have went for stacks instead. On this part doing straight ahead jumps is a lot harsher than doing back and forth movements.
00:22:300 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - kinda the same ^ but idk if it would work as well... The fact you put a more stressing pattern on this part is what makes it stand out to me tho this patterns playing very easily with cs 3.5 despite a flow, no sence imo

PandaHero wrote:

m4m from my queue

[Curi's Insane]
00:21:602 (3) - both of sounds are strong enough, what about making two circles instead of this slider?
00:29:626 (2,3) - another one reverse slider will be better here imo

i want to keep this two patterns =w=

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1. 00:12:532 (1,3) - stack miss?

1. 00:06:776 (5) - Since your map is following vocals, I think that you can delete the circle here
2. 00:08:346 (1,1) - It is better to remove these NCs
   The number of combos is very short
3. 00:15:323 (1) - Why is this not 1/2?
   00:12:532 (1) - I think the same rhythm is good here

1. 00:20:207 (3,4) - stack miss?
2. 00:24:393 (3,4) - These are distances 1.50 but feel that the distance is close
   00:27:183 (3,4) - I think that it is better to position directly below like this

1. 00:06:776 (7,1) - これだけ距離が2.17です
   他の似たようなところでは2.0固定っぽいので

1. 00:08:346 (1,2) - This distance confuses players
   00:06:951 (1,2) - I think that it is best to arrange like this

1. 00:14:800 (4) - After using the 3/4 slider, how about using it as a slider because stack is hard to play if it is Hidden?

1. Metadata is wrong, should be using "Aoshima Moka (CV: Mimori Suzuko) - kibo refrain"
   
   References

   Official site: http://oneroom-anime.com/products_cat/disc_oneroom/ (https://venix.s-ul.eu/9mfrQOf3)
   Official CD image: https://venix.s-ul.eu/k5rUZZpN
2. Add "schoolboy" to the tags because it's a new nickname of Komore

1. 00:11:835 (4,5) - Those two are missing claps.
2. 00:12:532 (1,2) - 1.2x should be used here like on the rest of the map.
3. Since entire of this diff is built on 1/1 without any 2/1 breaks leaving 00:28:928 - this beat unmapped feels a bit empty. I feel the circle would fit nicely here.

1. Overall, NCing seems a little bit weird here, 00:01:370 - 00:04:161 - here you are ncing every second big tick, but 00:06:951 - from here you are using NC on every measure (except for 00:25:091 - this). I feel like using NC on every second measure would work better here because map won't be spammed by NCs.
2. 00:04:161 (1) - 00:15:323 (1) - I think it would be nicer if you keep them in rhythm consistency because they are following the same sound, I feel using one with repeat would be better for rhythm because it emphasizes vocal in a nice way.
3. 00:20:905 (1) - Add finish on the head.

1. 00:02:067 (3,4) - 00:04:858 (3,4) - I feel you should replace them with 1/1 sliders to follow vocal lines like on the rest of the map, it would work nicely for consistency.
2. 00:03:811 (4,1) - I think this note should be spaced like other ones on big white ticks. // Same applies 00:28:404 (2,1) - here.
3. 00:12:445 (2) - This note is missing a clap.
4. 00:15:323 (1) - This one is missing a finish.
5. 00:20:207 (3,4) - Seems like you accidentally messed up the stack.
6. 00:29:975 (1) - I feel like this NC should be deleted and you should also add one on 00:30:672 (3) - this downbeat.

1. 00:11:486 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel those two should be using 3 groups of 2 instead of using 2 groups of 3 because current one makes 00:11:835 (3,3) - those objects underemphasized according to their strong undertone.
2. 00:12:532 (1,2) - 00:15:323 (1,2) - They should be emphasized by the same way I think. It would play nicer if you stack 00:15:323 (1,2) - those two like 00:12:532 (1,2) - those two.
3. 00:12:881 (3,4) - I feel using 3/4s here doesn't make a lot of sense according to other patterns where you followed red ticks by slider ends, would work nicer if you do the same thing here too.
4. 00:20:556 (4) - Ctrl+G would work nicer 00:20:207 (3,4) - here according to flow structure during the map.

Yasaija 714 wrote:

okay

easy

1. 00:12:532 (1,3) - stack miss?

yes

normal

1. 00:06:776 (5) - Since your map is following vocals, I think that you can delete the circle here hmm you're right
2. 00:08:346 (1,1) - It is better to remove these NCs
   The number of combos is very short removed
3. 00:15:323 (1) - Why is this not 1/2? idk, changed
   00:12:532 (1) - I think the same rhythm is good here

hard

1. 00:20:207 (3,4) - stack miss? lol fixed
2. 00:24:393 (3,4) - These are distances 1.50 but feel that the distance is close
   00:27:183 (3,4) - I think that it is better to position directly below like this okay

akitoshi's normal

1. 00:06:776 (7,1) - これだけ距離が2.17です
   他の似たようなところでは2.0固定っぽいので

light insane

1. 00:08:346 (1,2) - This distance confuses players
   00:06:951 (1,2) - I think that it is best to arrange like this uwu

curi's Insane

1. 00:14:800 (4) - After using the 3/4 slider, how about using it as a slider because stack is hard to play if it is Hidden?

Good luck~

PeterEU wrote:

General
Hitsounds are inconsistent in lot of diffs there are some missing one which are important use hitsound copy program

Hard:
00:20:207 (3,4) - fix stack fixed
00:28:404 (2,1) - should be higher spacing like here 00:27:532 (4,1) and 00:26:137 (4,1) since you were doing that when there was finish its not the big sound for me

Curi Insane
OD is the same as in expert also light insane OD is 6.5 and the gap is too huge between OD's make it lower for better gap between diffs

Rest looks good lol find BN

Venix wrote:

Hello~

General

1. Metadata is wrong, should be using "Aoshima Moka (CV: Mimori Suzuko) - kibo refrain"
   
   References

   Official site: http://oneroom-anime.com/products_cat/disc_oneroom/ (https://venix.s-ul.eu/9mfrQOf3)
   Official CD image: https://venix.s-ul.eu/k5rUZZpN
2. Add "schoolboy" to the tags because it's a new nickname of Komore

thanks for metadata,fixed

Easy

1. 00:11:835 (4,5) - Those two are missing claps. ye
2. 00:12:532 (1,2) - 1.2x should be used here like on the rest of the map. fixed
3. Since entire of this diff is built on 1/1 without any 2/1 breaks leaving 00:28:928 - this beat unmapped feels a bit empty. I feel the circle would fit nicely here. fixed

Normal

1. Overall, NCing seems a little bit weird here, 00:01:370 - 00:04:161 - here you are ncing every second big tick, but 00:06:951 - from here you are using NC on every measure (except for 00:25:091 - this). I feel like using NC on every second measure would work better here because map won't be spammed by NCs. ok
2. 00:04:161 (1) - 00:15:323 (1) - I think it would be nicer if you keep them in rhythm consistency because they are following the same sound, I feel using one with repeat would be better for rhythm because it emphasizes vocal in a nice way. k
3. 00:20:905 (1) - Add finish on the head. again missed hitsounds, fixed now lol

Hard

1. 00:02:067 (3,4) - 00:04:858 (3,4) - I feel you should replace them with 1/1 sliders to follow vocal lines like on the rest of the map, it would work nicely for consistency. wanna keep my slider+circle cuz following with circle vocal is better for me
2. 00:03:811 (4,1) - I think this note should be spaced like other ones on big white ticks. // Same applies 00:28:404 (2,1) - here. fixed but 00:28:404 (2,1) - here is not big sound for me
3. 00:12:445 (2) - This note is missing a clap. idk but its okay i think
4. 00:15:323 (1) - This one is missing a finish. lol fixed
5. 00:20:207 (3,4) - Seems like you accidentally messed up the stack. k
6. 00:29:975 (1) - I feel like this NC should be deleted and you should also add one on 00:30:672 (3) - this downbeat.ok

Light Insane

1. 00:11:486 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I feel those two should be using 3 groups of 2 instead of using 2 groups of 3 because current one makes 00:11:835 (3,3) - those objects underemphasized according to their strong undertone. hmm make a jump with not the same distance isn't it okay? or i don't know what u mean
2. 00:12:532 (1,2) - 00:15:323 (1,2) - They should be emphasized by the same way I think. It would play nicer if you stack 00:15:323 (1,2) - those two like 00:12:532 (1,2) - those two. good idea
3. 00:12:881 (3,4) - I feel using 3/4s here doesn't make a lot of sense according to other patterns where you followed red ticks by slider ends, would work nicer if you do the same thing here too. why not to use 3/4 slider on 30 sec map with a lot of patterns, 1/2 sliders on this diff would be weirdly
4. 00:20:556 (4) - Ctrl+G would work nicer 00:20:207 (3,4) - here according to flow structure during the map. better mine

good luck~