Hi from my mod q ~
I couldn't find lot's of issues, though I still have some things to point out.
00:33:465 (1,2,3,4) - It would be more appropriate to replace this 4 notes with 1 reverse slider. It's not really important but, since vocal stops I think it's a good idea to represent a new section of the map this way.
00:40:624 (4) - this slider represents vocal right ? You should do the same here 00:46:249 (4).
00:45:226 (4) - mb replace this note with a slider ?
00:49:147 (1,2,3) - notes placed like this aren't really comfortable while playing.
00:56:306 (2,3,4) - ^
01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - it would be more appropriate to replece this moment with 1/2 sliders because piano here is quiet.
01:26:647 (1,2) - I also have a bit concerns about this moment, but I can't think of anything better right now, sry.
01:34:147 (5,6) - I think it'll be a bit better to place this 2 sliders like this, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677315 . I just feel like this section 01:33:124 - 01:34:828 - should have a circular flow. Btw you don't need to place them exactly like I did. Just make circular flow in this part, that's all
01:40:113 (4,5,6) - This also should have circular flow ( example > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677347 )
01:49:488 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern rotates to the left and making a good circular flow. However this part breaks this 01:50:851 (1,2,3). It's easily fixed by placeng objects like this > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677360.
01:51:874 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part looks messy.
Also 01:53:238 (3) - you probably should turn this 1/4 slider into 1/2 slider.
02:11:647 - 02:33:465 - This whole section looks messy. + It's also have a bad flow. And by bad I mean it constantly keeps changing making an unpleasent feeling while playing. Patterns aren't the best either. So far the most unpolished section of the map.
02:41:476 (1) - this slider is 70% random, When I played this map I didn't even unterstand why is it here. Though now I know what sound it represents. However, it's better to focus on vocal, this little bg sound will only distarct you, making player feel uneasy with all this 1/8 sliders.
02:43:522 (1) - ^ you could simply replace this with a circle.
Btw 02:43:522 (1,2,3) - messy pattern
02:55:283 (1) - remove NC
02:55:965 (2) - start NC
02:55:965 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - replace this moment with 1/2 sliders. ( same as here 01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) )
02:59:374 (1) - Lmao is this Monstrata easter egg ? > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677420. Messy pattern tbh, just make some jumps.
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03:00:738 - 03:33:465 - Amazing circular and linear flow, feels insanly comfortable while playing. still looks a bit unpolished , but you've made a really gj on this one ~ !
04:30:056 - 05:54:601 - ^ same, this last 2 sections of them map were my greatest pleasure.
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Overall really good map, though I'm not sure if it's ready for rank yet. There're still things to be fixed.
I couldn't find lot's of issues, though I still have some things to point out.
00:33:465 (1,2,3,4) - It would be more appropriate to replace this 4 notes with 1 reverse slider. It's not really important but, since vocal stops I think it's a good idea to represent a new section of the map this way.
00:40:624 (4) - this slider represents vocal right ? You should do the same here 00:46:249 (4).
00:45:226 (4) - mb replace this note with a slider ?
00:49:147 (1,2,3) - notes placed like this aren't really comfortable while playing.
00:56:306 (2,3,4) - ^
01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - it would be more appropriate to replece this moment with 1/2 sliders because piano here is quiet.
01:26:647 (1,2) - I also have a bit concerns about this moment, but I can't think of anything better right now, sry.
01:34:147 (5,6) - I think it'll be a bit better to place this 2 sliders like this, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677315 . I just feel like this section 01:33:124 - 01:34:828 - should have a circular flow. Btw you don't need to place them exactly like I did. Just make circular flow in this part, that's all
01:40:113 (4,5,6) - This also should have circular flow ( example > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677347 )
01:49:488 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern rotates to the left and making a good circular flow. However this part breaks this 01:50:851 (1,2,3). It's easily fixed by placeng objects like this > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677360.
01:51:874 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part looks messy.
Also 01:53:238 (3) - you probably should turn this 1/4 slider into 1/2 slider.
02:11:647 - 02:33:465 - This whole section looks messy. + It's also have a bad flow. And by bad I mean it constantly keeps changing making an unpleasent feeling while playing. Patterns aren't the best either. So far the most unpolished section of the map.
02:41:476 (1) - this slider is 70% random, When I played this map I didn't even unterstand why is it here. Though now I know what sound it represents. However, it's better to focus on vocal, this little bg sound will only distarct you, making player feel uneasy with all this 1/8 sliders.
02:43:522 (1) - ^ you could simply replace this with a circle.
Btw 02:43:522 (1,2,3) - messy pattern
02:55:283 (1) - remove NC
02:55:965 (2) - start NC
02:55:965 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - replace this moment with 1/2 sliders. ( same as here 01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) )
02:59:374 (1) - Lmao is this Monstrata easter egg ? > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8677420. Messy pattern tbh, just make some jumps.
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03:00:738 - 03:33:465 - Amazing circular and linear flow, feels insanly comfortable while playing. still looks a bit unpolished , but you've made a really gj on this one ~ !
04:30:056 - 05:54:601 - ^ same, this last 2 sections of them map were my greatest pleasure.
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Overall really good map, though I'm not sure if it's ready for rank yet. There're still things to be fixed.