NM from my queue
Red: unrankable issuesPurple: highly recommend to fixGeneralyour drum-hitclap4.wav is a little too short which is unrankable, please make the wav file last just a bit longer, over 100ms, and it shall be fineyour bg is with too big resolution, plz use at most 1920*1080[Our deviant love story]
oh you changed diff name o.o
00:33:976 (4,5) - why aren't they stacked while 00:35:340 (4,5) - and 00:36:703 (4,1) - being stacked?
01:08:578 - add a circle here to also catch the vocal? as you already followed vocal at most point in this part, such as 01:12:669 (3,4) - 01:14:374 (1,2,3) -
01:22:215 (4,1) - the overlap looks a bit messy, maybe move 01:23:238 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - down together to avoid the overlap?
01:28:010 (1) - should have a finish on head instead for the cymbal sound
02:10:897 - as you changed AR after finishing the map, the breaktime became weird at their ends, plz drag it back to natural, same for the breaks around 03:52:556 -
02:22:215 (3,4) - CTRL+G flows better to 02:22:556 (1) - imo, similar to this feeling 02:32:783 (3,4,5,6) -
03:07:556 (5) - this pattern is kinda weird as this slider should actually be grouped with 03:07:897 (1,2,3) - instead of with 03:06:533 (1,2,3,4) - no matter referring to vocal or to the instruments. so it would be better to make a curve slider here like 03:07:897 (1,2,3) - and make a patter with these 4 sliders instead of having it parallel with 03:07:215 (4) -
03:09:942 (4) - missing hitsounds, drum clap (maybe with drum whistle)
03:20:851 (7) - hitsound
04:35:169 (1) - ^ you need quite some more drum hitsounds in the kiai parts I suppose, sucha as on 04:37:897 (6) - 04:43:351 (3) - and more, you'd better recheck the whole kiai part once more by yourself
04:49:828 (1) - remove NC for consistency with 04:38:919 (3) -
04:54:431 (1,1) - maybe avoid this overlap, doesn't look so nice imo
05:00:738 (1) - better remove NC for consistency
05:06:192 (1) - ^
05:32:783 (1) - maybe remove the kiai from here on, I think it's not the chorus anymore
05:54:601 (1,1) - sadly, these two sliders are out of screen with 4:3 resolution so you need to make them smaller to be rankabledecent map, call me back after you fixed the issues