Sorry for slight delay. A bit difficult to use the editor due to sample insert always appearing when I press alt. Still waiting for the new build. Because of this, I may be a bit lazier.
[
General]
- I prefer 2000 audio lead-in
[
Easy]
00:01:221 (2,2) - Prefer if you could follow the piano with whistle, e.g. whistle at begin and end of these two sliders.
00:24:539 (2,4) - Not too fond of these two claps since there is no sound like the clap in music. This is not the main reason. Since there is no sound like this in music, it cause the hitsound to be "accented". I feel this ruin the emphasis of the music on the stanza e.g. sound on 00:25:020 and 00:26:943. I recommend removing or lowering the volume of these two claps.
00:29:587 (2) - The note isn't following a strong sound in music (piano is pretty quiet there), I think it's better to follow the vocal 1/2 later with a 1/2 repeating slider. This make it nicer to catch 00:30:789 (1) - as well due to the simple 1/1 rhythm rather then x/2 rhythm.
http://puu.sh/20Izp00:31:510 (2) - No piano at end, so I don't think you should have whistle there.
00:32:712 (3,4) - Very similar to 00:29:587. If you want to follow the piano, then I recommend slider starting on (3) and ending on (4) instead. It's pretty hard to catch this 3/2 hit circle rhythm here.
00:34:635 (1) - Whistle at end for piano
00:36:077 (2) - There is piano here, but since you don't have anything on 00:35:837 and 00:36:318, I think it's best to remove it. Or consider this alternate rhythm, hit circle is on 00:35:837
http://puu.sh/20IHF. Whistle at end of (1), on (2) and begin of (3). Sound pretty nice I think.
00:39:443 (1,2) - I think you'll feel the song more if you choose to focus on the piano here, e.g. a rhythm like this
http://puu.sh/20IOj. For hitsounding, whistle on all place you can put it except slider body.
00:42:327 (3,4,5) - ^
http://puu.sh/20IQy two 3/2 sliders seem best here. Whistle end of (3), begin and end of (4).
00:51:943 (3) - Same as 00:31:510.
01:16:702 (1) - Stack on (2)?
01:31:366 (4,5) -
01:31:366 (4) - I prefer if you move this to 01:30:885 as current spot doesn't have any real sound from music while 01:30:885 has vocal.
01:43:866 (1) - Edit in notepad the B of this slider to P and adjust in editor (Use the new slider algorithm), it'll look better.
01:39:058 (1) - I feel this note are lead-up, so I don't think you should start your whistle pattern yet. Consider removing whistle here.
02:03:337 (1) - Whistle sound nice to me here.
02:08:866 (1,2) - You have claps on the stanza so don't see why no clap at begin of slider and on hit circle?
02:53:577 (2) - Sure about finish? Don't think it fit here and I can't hear any cymbal sounds here.Just whistle seem nicer. If you want finish, then put it here 02:53:096 (1) - to be consistent with your other finish placement.
I feel rhythm at beginning would be better if you focus more on piano. The rhythm you did there feel like you're following drum, but no drum plays there.
[
Normal]
- 00:46:173 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This part is really difficult to read with this ar. +1 ar or rearrange these pattern.
00:01:221 (2,4) - Same as Easy, add whistle
00:13:241 (3) - Lead better to pause to me if you do whistle instead of clap. Clap suggest to me that the rhythm is going to continue.
00:15:645 (2) - Whistle at begin for piano
00:17:327 (1) - ^ at end
00:19:971 (2) - Consider whistle at end
00:20:933 (3) - Same as 00:13:241. Incase i forget to mention, this apply to all similar rhythm.
00:24:058 (2,2) - Piano is at end not begin, so I think it's best for whistle to be at end
00:30:548 (1) - Whistle on 2nd repeat
00:32:952 (4) - Whistle on begin
00:36:798 (4) - Consider new combo for readability, I know most Normal player would try to click (4) first and get confused here.
00:37:039 (5) - Whistle at begin perhaps.
00:56:750 (2) - Whistle at repeat is better to me then clap
01:05:164 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think whistle should be on the red tick with piano instead so end of (1), (3), (5) and remove from (2,4).
01:08:529 (1) - Fix the spacing, even through it's minor, I hit this too early at first due to the closer spacing.
01:09:971 (5) - Whistle at begin
01:54:202 (1) - I prefer much more if this is place on the white tick like 01:49:635 (1) -
02:03:818 (2,3,4) - While, I like how how you did the finish, it doesn't fit well with how you do whistle (it feel like one part, no whistle, then the part, lot of whistles). So I recommend changing the hitsound of these three notes to whistle instead of finish.
02:14:635 (1) - Place a little closer to center? I feel a little far to the corner after playing spinner
http://puu.sh/20JGY02:15:356 (3) - This blanket can definitely be better
02:18:000 (1) - No piano, so no whistle
02:19:202 (3) - Whistle at end for piano.
02:24:731 (2) - Just making sure, no new combo on this is intentional?
02:45:404 (1) - 0.6x spacing feel really weird here.
02:45:404 (1,2,1,2) - Consider whistle on the repeat for the piano.
02:53:096 (1,2) - Read Easy, same as Easy.
I didn't mention everything for hitsounding, please keep this in mind. I notice that I like your hitsounding much more when you follow the piano properly with hitsound, that's the only advice I can give you.
[
Hard]
00:36:318 (1) - Would be better with new slider algorithm (B > P) and remove all slider point, but one.
Ignore hitsound, since it should be oblivious now what I want you to do. Pattern seem good in general, I don't have anything really to mention.
Main reason why I always mod hitsound first is that if I don't, it's very difficult for me to find anything else. Like I think some rhythm is weird, but in reality, it's just the hitsounding that need changing, etc. In general, hitsounding can be improve quite a lot. Rhythms in Easy & Normal can definitely be improve. Hard just need whistle with the piano and then it'll be close to perfect.
Hitsound error is too major for my taste, so cannot star.
Hope this mod help ,good luck
