1. 00:30:789 - you don't need the kiai burst here, in my opinion. The song here is no special (yeah, vocals rise here, but according to your logic you should also add kiai on 00:34:635 etc, which is not a good idea). You can check and see the worst appearance of this on Normal, where it pops up in the middle of a repeating slider (not even on the repeat itself!)
2. 01:01:558 - this offset is way too loud for the music, comparing to previous volume level. Decrease it to 35%, please, and do the same for all the offsets with Normal sampleset that do not turn kiai time on.
3. On a side note: the custom skin and the colour scheme you used is a pure eyerape for me, especially when playing with my default white cursor. Anyway, I guess it won't be changed :<

1. 00:26:943 (1) - I don't find it good enough, how about changing it to something like http://puu.sh/1TRvu
2. 01:00:356 (1) - please, no. Why? Because you put a note on the red tick after the spinner, and previous notes were placed on the white ones, so it's hard to catch, especially for the beginners (mostly because it's located on the upbeat)
3. 01:16:702 (1,2) - may be a bit problematic to read due to stack
4. 01:20:789 (1) - why do you have to waste sliders in this way? I would use a simple ring shape here
5. 01:22:712 (2) - I see no point in bending it this hard, better restore its normal curve: http://puu.sh/1TRF6
6. 01:40:741 (2,5) - may be problematic to hit due to upbeat (i.e. red ticks coming suddently)
7. 01:43:385 (6) - better not to force symmetry here. If you move it somewhere else, you will a) restore the distance between this circle and next slider and b) prevent overlapping
8. 01:54:202 (1) - may be hard to catch (see 01:00:356 (1) for reference)
9. 01:54:683 (2,3) - I would put a note on 01:55:404 instead of forcing symmetry and skipping the big white tick
10. 02:03:337 (1,2) and 02:05:741 (4,5) - how about making a better beat blanket: http://puu.sh/1TRKc

1. 00:11:558 (1,2) - I would make them curvy so they fit other sliders around
2. 00:19:250 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:34:635 (1) - not sure if I missed such things before or it's the first I meet, but clap doesn't sound well together with normal finish. Better remove the clap
4. 00:47:375 (4,1) - better reduce the spacing here
5. 01:50:596 (4) - I'd replace it with two short sliders to map the beat on 01:51:318
6. 02:03:337 (1,2,3,4) - too many finish hitsounds in a row (they are also too loud for the music)
7. 02:44:923 (2) - remove finish?

1. 00:16:366 (2,3) - is it really that necessary to stack them? You just kill the flow
2. 00:29:587 (6,7) - I don't feel like jumping here at all, mind at least decreasing it?
3. 00:47:135 (3,4) - how about unstacking them? The reason is the same as for 00:16:366 (2,3)
4. 01:16:943 (5) - looks ugly for me, mostly because the curvy part in the very middle has got the angle. Mind repairing?
5. 01:22:712 (7) - I'd rotate it about 15-20 degrees right
6. 02:03:337 (1,2,3,4) - too many finish hitsounds in a row (they are also too loud for the music)
7. 02:05:260 (1) - place the clap on the end, not beginning? Sounds a bit awkward together with vocals)
8. 02:56:943 (4) - I would mark it with a new combo for better readability

RikiH_ wrote:

I spent half an hour, you could at least give me a kudosu, I let you decide anyways...

BounceBabe wrote:

RikiH_ wrote:

I spent half an hour, you could at least give me a kudosu, I let you decide anyways...

It wasn't a big help you know? And begging for a kudosu is not welcome. My mods also get rejects and no changes like you did, you don't need to kudosu for a NC change. And i don't need a kudosu if it wasn't helpful for the mapper. Modding is for helping to improve the map, it means that when the mapper gives you one that it was helpful, its not a challenge of collecting kudosu.

Andrea wrote:

~General~

Kiai Times are inconsistent through the difficulties. Where?

Too many Kiai Fountains through the difficulties. No they fit the song

This map still needs a lot of work. Hahahaha, no

BounceBabe wrote:

Hahahaha, no

merchat7 wrote:

Hitsound error is too major for my taste

BounceBabe wrote:

Made quiet a lot changes except from some which i find dont suit my hitsound rythm. Thanks!

merchat7 wrote:

Hitsound error is too major for my taste

What do you mean by that anyway?

1. Isn't 396 KB for a BG file pretty large? I think it can still be reduced to ~200 KB, but it's up to you.

1. 00:00:741 - Clap really doesn't fit here; replace with whistle.
2. 00:02:664 - ^
3. 00:04:587 - ^
4. 00:06:510 - ^
5. 00:12:520 (2) - Add whistle to emphasize the sound at 00:12:279?
6. 00:33:433 (4) - Add whistle?
7. 00:56:750 (1,2) - Is it okay if these two notes are stacked? I think the new players (those that are supposed to play this diff) is going to be confused.
8. 01:31:366 (4) - Whistle to emphasize the vocal?
9. 01:45:789 (2) - Whistle? This place feels really empty without one.
10. 01:50:596 (1,2) - Same as 00:56:750 (1,2).
11. 02:15:116 (2,3,4) - Add whistle and remove the clap on (3)?
12. 02:18:962 (2,3,4) - ^
13. 02:30:741 - Whistle?
14. 02:34:587 - ^
15. 02:40:596 (1,2) - Same as 00:56:750 (1,2).
16. 02:45:404 (1,2,3,4) - Add a Soft whistle on the repeats?
17. 02:57:423 (3) - Whistle? (Apply my hitsound suggestions on other diffs if you did them.)
18. 02:58:866 (5) - Move one grid up (on small grid size, so y:224) so 02:57:423 (3,4,5) will look better.

1. 00:08:433 - Replace clap with whistle? Clap seriously doesn't fit here.
2. 00:10:356 - ^
3. 00:12:279 - ^
4. 00:16:125 - ^
5. 00:18:048 - ^
6. 00:19:971 - ^
7. 00:31:510 - Whistle?
8. 00:32:712 (3) - Replace with whistle?
9. 00:34:635 - Remove clap?
10. 00:35:116 - Whistle?
11. 00:36:077 (2) - ^
12. 00:36:558 (3) - Remove clap?
13. 00:37:520 (3) - Make this a 1/1 slider please. Making this 3/4 is just wrong. If you did this, you can start 00:38:481 (1) 1/4 beats later.
14. 00:38:481 (1) - Replace clap with whistle?
15. 00:42:688 (1) - Remove clap?
16. 00:48:096 (2) - ^
17. 00:50:741 - Whistle?
18. 00:51:702 - Remove clap?
19. 00:52:904 (3) - Same as 00:37:520 (3).
20. 00:56:270 - Replace clap with whistle?
21. 00:56:750 (2) - Remove all claps here?
22. 01:06:846 (4,5) - Swap whistle?
23. 01:07:327 (6) - Remove all whistles on the head?
24. 01:08:769 (2,3) - Umm, 1.26x? I think it goes a bit over the spacing limit, IMO.
25. 01:11:414 (3) - Whistle on the slider's body?
26. 01:15:019 (4) - Remove all hitsounds on the head?
27. 01:20:789 - Finish?
28. 01:22:712 (7) - Remove all whistles on the head?
29. 01:54:803 - Add whistle on the tail?
30. 02:05:500 - Whistle?
31. 02:20:885 - ^
32. 02:41:318 - ^ (Yep, same as Easy, apply the suggestions to the other diff if you did them.)
33. 02:47:327 (2,3,1) - Umm, the blanketing looks weird, TBH... I think you can make it look better.

1. Won't mention much things regarding hitsound, but I think you should go with merchat's advice...02:09:827 (1) -
2. 02:09:827 (1,2) - Isn't this kind of jump a bit too big for a Hard diff? Oh well, NC (1) for the massive change of spacing, anyway.
3. 02:34:106 (5) - Remove the whistles from the head?
4. 02:44:202 (2) - Remove finish. There's no reason to add one since there's nothing for the finish to follow.

In general, hitsounding can be improve quite a lot. Rhythms in Easy & Normal can definitely be improve. Hard just need whistle with the piano and then it'll be close to perfect.

1. Missing elements : sliderb.png (whole set)
2. Wrong size elements : spinner-background.png - must be 1023*692
3. Invisible spinner-osu.png is not allowed
4. and tbh, i don't very agree with the hitbursts because players may be confused about the score when they play : nice = 100 or 300?

Static Noise Bird wrote:

Skysc_r


congrats

[Luanny] wrote:

ok