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Greenshell wrote:

Hello, before this gets pushed forward I'd like to mention that the source should be changed to 東方萃夢想 ~ Immaterial and Missing Power. as the RC prefers the actual game over the series itself, and even the official website (at least the most official thing I found) has it listed as the source.

http://radiata.redalice.net
http://www16.big.or.jp/~zun/html/th075.html

Additional tags: TH7.5 ZUN AECD-029

Just saw this on my phone, so I couldn't take a look at the map itself yet, sorry :o

Anyway, good luck!
Had a look at qualified section. Seems the more exact name is the norm
Will change the source and tags once confirmed by Nardo. Thanks for now :)
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hi mom!

Please, never check the qualified section for metadata sources. The only map I've found is this one which is from 2014. Let's say the standard of metadata stepped up a little more since then :3

As stated by Greenshell, the source should be changed to "東方萃夢想 ~ Immaterial and Missing Power." which the source can be found in this link.



Also, following the official website of ALiCE'S EMOTiON, we have a confirmation that the song comes from this serie.




Fix this and I will rebubble!
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Gabe wrote:

hi mom!

Please, never check the qualified section for metadata sources. The only map I've found is this one which is from 2014. Let's say the standard of metadata stepped up a little more since then :3 Yes, that's how I had my current metadata setup, but it seems 2017 has taken other standards I might not fully understood :3

As stated by Greenshell, the source should be changed to "東方萃夢想 ~ Immaterial and Missing Power." which the source can be found in this link.



Also, following the official website of ALiCE'S EMOTiON, we have a confirmation that the song comes from this serie.



Source changed, and added tags suggested by Greenshell

Fix this and I will rebubble!
Thanks for metadata check :)
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Hi~
No excuse for the late. Sorry ;;w;;

[ Overall]
  1. A finisher color on 00:44:913 aren't related. Kantan and Futsuu used K meanwhile Muzukashii and Oni used D. I think that the dominate point like this should make it same on all difficulty. To not make the player confused.


[Kantan]
00:33:271 - Why not d? , it's not match to the other difficulty in this point.

[Futsuu]
01:42:674 - How about change this one to k to emphasize the vocal here , just like the thing you've done at this point in Muzukashii I guess.

[Muzukashii]
02:15:584 - The vocal here is powerful. Shouldn't miss a note here imo.

Here is only my opinion so you might rejected it all, your map is really flawless right now! :D
Good luck! :3
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Hi, here comes the mod as requested.

  • [Kantan]

  1. 00:58:122 (1,2) - consider removing these notes for a 4/1 break before the kiai ? Currently the pattern chain is too long from 00:39:539 to 01:27:898 - , which is rather tiring and demanding for beginners.
  2. 01:55:435 (1,2) - similar to ^ , I would strongly recommend you to remove these as well for a rest.
  • [Futsuu]

  1. 00:57:786 (2) - you may want to delete this note to make a better spread with Muzukashii at this spot. Then 00:58:122 (2) - could be changed to k as 1/2 variation.
  2. 01:55:099 (2) and 01:55:435 - same as ^
  • [Muzukashii]

  1. 01:22:077 - maybe add k here to form a longer chain ? I think this would enhance contrast with the intensity 01:06:405 (1,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,1,2) - possesses.
  2. 02:19:390 - same as ^
  • [Oni]

  1. 01:31:816 - consider adding d here to accompany the vocal ? This could also differentiate a bit from Muzukashii.
  2. 01:38:980 - same as ^


You may call me back after that~ :D
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Tyistiana wrote:

Hi~
No excuse for the late. Sorry ;;w;; At least you're in time before rank =w=

[ Overall]
  1. A finisher color on 00:44:913 aren't related. Kantan and Futsuu used K meanwhile Muzukashii and Oni used D. I think that the dominate point like this should make it same on all difficulty. To not make the player confused. It's because note at 00:45:137 is absent in kantan and futsuu, where K alone serves as a better approximation to the vocal. While in muzu and oni, I want to show the rise of pitch when that note is present, hence D k 00:44:913 (1,1) - are used.


[Kantan]
00:33:271 - Why not d? , it's not match to the other difficulty in this point. Seems nice

[Futsuu]
01:42:674 - How about change this one to k to emphasize the vocal here , just like the thing you've done at this point in Muzukashii I guess. Seems good to me

[Muzukashii]
02:15:584 - The vocal here is powerful. Shouldn't miss a note here imo. Powerful, but it's better to keep the pattern consistency with 02:01:256.

Here is only my opinion so you might rejected it all, your map is really flawless right now! :DThx :3
Good luck! :3

Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Hi, here comes the mod as requested.

  • [Kantan]

  1. 00:58:122 (1,2) - consider removing these notes for a 4/1 break before the kiai ? Currently the pattern chain is too long from 00:39:539 to 01:27:898 - , which is rather tiring and demanding for beginners. Is it fine to make 00:57:450 (1,1,2) - a slider instead? Other sliders like 01:09:987 (3,4)
    - should be a reasonable rest of notes for beginners as well, and hence I don't think rests are completely absent.
  2. 01:55:435 (1,2) - similar to ^ , I would strongly recommend you to remove these as well for a rest. ^
  • [Futsuu]

  1. 00:57:786 (2) - you may want to delete this note to make a better spread with Muzukashii at this spot. Then 00:58:122 (2) - could be changed to k as 1/2 variation. Compared with muzu futsuu already has shorter 1/1.5 section since 00:56:554 (2,3,1) - has 1/1 used. Also given the frequent use of multi-colored 1/2 at kiai, I think current setup can be kept for better representation of vocal? After all these 4 notes 00:57:450 (1,2,3,1) - are quite important
  2. 01:55:099 (2) and 01:55:435 - same as ^ ^
  • [Muzukashii]

  1. 01:22:077 - maybe add k here to form a longer chain ? I think this would enhance contrast with the intensity 01:06:405 (1,1,1,2,1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,1,2) - possesses. Did the other way instead by adding d at 01:22:301, which fits closest to the vocal while adding reasonable difficulty
  2. 02:19:390 - same as ^ ^
  • [Oni]

  1. 01:31:816 - consider adding d here to accompany the vocal ? This could also differentiate a bit from Muzukashii. Valid point, but I think keeping this empty is better. This is to keep 01:30:584 (1,2,1) - not to have sudden density change because (2) is still part of stance 49 and should remain a more constant rhythm. In current case, (2,1) still keeps a rather big spacing which I think fits the density transition better
  2. 01:38:980 - same as ^ ^, the difference between oni and muzu can be seen at 01:40:435


You may call me back after that~ :D:3


Thx both for mod :)
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Alright, upon rechecking the map looks fine now. Lower difficulties are more viable, spread is appropriate and pattern choices are nice.

Qualified~
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Nardoxyribonucleic wrote:

Alright, upon rechecking the map looks fine now. Lower difficulties are more viable, spread is appropriate and pattern choices are nice.

Qualified~
Thx for qualify :)
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congratz!!!!!!
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