I have the privelege to be the first modder, nice.
Also yey weeb songs maps, time to turn japanese and embrace the song.
Okay so generally when I look at 5min maps going for rank, and have only one difficulty, I automatically assume that the difficulty should show everything that the song has to offer. I've felt like some parts were not as exciting as the song is on certain parts, so I'll point out some examples other than regular mod.
00:17:476 (1,2) - hm it should be a good idea to add some fancy curves on these two sliders, even though they're not as long, they follow similar sounds.
00:37:805 (1) - let's say that a blue tick is an offbeat. And up to now, you didn't give any important notice to vocals, so i suggest making the slider on a white tick that you're ignoring 00:38:002 - , also here's 00:50:436 (1) - one more thing to change if you adjust this one.
00:41:950 (2,3) - any chance of you doing something fancy here? Those string sounds break my ears, and they are nothing more intense than random filler 00:43:331 (2,3) - notes like these.
Also while going through the map, the song gets more intensive on a regular note. And I think other than adding denser rhythm, some jumps would be nice. Actually, now that i think about it 01:08:594 (2,3) - this jump felt really well but i didn't see more of it, therefore i think you did something wrong, and should adjust this one, if you don't want jumps in your map
01:34:647 (1,2,3) - placin it here should look better
http://i.imgur.com/IWE4K1J.jpg , kinda too close for my taste.
01:35:634 (4,5,6) - make a perfect triangle using the slider end?
01:57:739 (4,5,6,7) - something inside of my dies when i see intense vocals getting less spacing than random filler : 01:59:121 (3,4) -
02:10:371 (4,5,6,7) - ^ I personally think that the vocals on the 2 stuffs I linked are really special in the song, as they are rather slow and less intense, when this hits I also think the map should give this the most notice imo.
02:24:779 (4) - accidental clap?
03:01:292 (4,5) - just another random thing i think should need emphasis. In fact, when I think about it, I haven't really noticed something standing out in the map. So having at least these short bursts of vocals would be enough to make the map have something different in it imo.
03:33:660 (2) - don't think that short wave sliders fit this map.
03:37:213 (3) -
http://i.imgur.com/GhNj2Mm.jpg can you place it here? Love it when a circle is placed right between two objects.
04:57:739 (1,3,1) - They all have in common is this sound on their slider end which sounds like exactly on ther slider head. So I think they should have 2 circles and have the rest as they are.
But i see some spikes at the end so idk
good luck.