1. Memories (3.93 stars, 934 notes)

UnLock- wrote:

Congratulations on your osu graduation LOL

Enon wrote:

the song

MaridiuS wrote:

I have the privelege to be the first modder, nice.

Also yey weeb songs maps, time to turn japanese and embrace the song.
Okay so generally when I look at 5min maps going for rank, and have only one difficulty, I automatically assume that the difficulty should show everything that the song has to offer. I've felt like some parts were not as exciting as the song is on certain parts, so I'll point out some examples other than regular mod.
00:17:476 (1,2) - hm it should be a good idea to add some fancy curves on these two sliders, even though they're not as long, they follow similar sounds.it's a different idea from previous sliders, it's something like holding for 00:20:634 (1) - so yeah, i'll keep it simple
00:37:805 (1) - let's say that a blue tick is an offbeat. And up to now, you didn't give any important notice to vocals, so i suggest making the slider on a white tick that you're ignoring 00:38:002 - , also here's 00:50:436 (1) - one more thing to change if you adjust this one. uhm strings also lands here, how it became offbeat?
00:41:950 (2,3) - any chance of you doing something fancy here? Those string sounds break my ears, and they are nothing more intense than random filler 00:43:331 (2,3) - notes like these. the purpose is to something "warning" for upcoming those related spacings. it's not an intense song so i dont need to jump around here and there
Also while going through the map, the song gets more intensive on a regular note. And I think other than adding denser rhythm, some jumps would be nice. Actually, now that i think about it 01:08:594 (2,3) - this jump felt really well but i didn't see more of it, therefore i think you did something wrong, and should adjust this one, if you don't want jumps in your map structure matter... and it's on new bookmark man
01:34:647 (1,2,3) - placin it here should look better http://i.imgur.com/IWE4K1J.jpg , kinda too close for my taste. ye
01:35:634 (4,5,6) - make a perfect triangle using the slider end? not a perfect but equalized the 01:35:634 (4,6,1) -
01:57:739 (4,5,6,7) - something inside of my dies when i see intense vocals getting less spacing than random filler : 01:59:121 (3,4) - nerfed the 01:59:318 (4) - then
02:10:371 (4,5,6,7) - ^ I personally think that the vocals on the 2 stuffs I linked are really special in the song, as they are rather slow and less intense, when this hits I also think the map should give this the most notice imo. 4 circles aren't noticeable? :thinking:
02:24:779 (4) - accidental clap? nop
03:01:292 (4,5) - just another random thing i think should need emphasis. In fact, when I think about it, I haven't really noticed something standing out in the map. So having at least these short bursts of vocals would be enough to make the map have something different in it imo. applied
03:33:660 (2) - don't think that short wave sliders fit this map. ...do u hate old meta maps?
03:37:213 (3) - http://i.imgur.com/GhNj2Mm.jpg can you place it here? Love it when a circle is placed right between two objects. ok
04:57:739 (1,3,1) - They all have in common is this sound on their slider end which sounds like exactly on ther slider head. So I think they should have 2 circles and have the rest as they are. it's all about slider emphasis.
But i see some spikes at the end so idk making harder on late part is a thing my friend, also the instruments are getting even more intense than previous choruses tbh so why nottttt
good luck.

Ioneth-chan wrote:

I can't mod you properly when you're my role model ;A; gonna just nitpick aesthetics

02:12:147 (4,2,4) - stack for the aesthetics? i tried but they became really lack of emphasis so i rather not
02:19:055 (1,2,3) - and 02:20:634 (1,2,3) - could you scooch 2 and 3 over a bit for consistent spacing? (it plays just fine tbh) clap emphasis des
03:39:581 (1,5) - i kinda want you to stack these but... i get why you wouldn't.. yeah perfect stack here is kinda hard to read w
03:44:121 (6,7,1) - move it to the right to complete the square agree
03:51:423 (4,5,6,7) - this shape could be a bit tastier, could u maybe make it a bit more square-like so that 7 and 1 arent so far away? it stuck out to me while playing tried
03:56:160 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - omg i see the stacking but this shape is just not aesthetic x.x.. is there a way to move it around so it still stacks but... heegh maybe fixed in sacrifice of stacking
04:48:265 (1,2,3) - same as 2nd thingy^ same reasoning ye
04:56:950 (4,5,6,1) - could you move 1 up to where the slider's end is (and the other 3 after that accordingly) to make this a tasty shape they dont notice it on play itself anyway but moved a bit
05:34:055 (1,1) - you could get away with making both of these 1/8 stacks like 05:37:015 (1,2,3) - and it goes with the music, so yolo, why not? did 1/16 reverse on 2nd one

That's kind of all i can come up with. I love the combo colors. thx for the song m8 i hope this song gives u feel

wut

1. 01:53:200 (3,1) - isnt it too close? That finish sound is very powerful so i think this gap should be larger than 01:53:397 (1,2) - this gap. like 02:06:029 (1) - here
2. 03:34:252 (3,1) - ^
3. 05:02:476 (1) - Drumfinish?
4. 05:02:476 (1) - ^

Time Capsule wrote:

why dont you map more song like this from nowdays? i mapped similar songs since before tho, they r just graveddd
where laura tho? mod prolly later she's on summer vacation

Akitoshi wrote:

she's on summer vacation

Kawashiro wrote:

simple random

wut

1. 01:53:200 (3,1) - isnt it too close? That finish sound is very powerful so i think this gap should be larger than 01:53:397 (1,2) - this gap. like 02:06:029 (1) - here
2. 03:34:252 (3,1) - ^
3. 05:02:476 (1) - Drumfinish?
4. 05:02:476 (1) - ^

gl

Toyosaki Aki wrote:

from とぃってｒ

Memories

1. 01:02:279 (2) - 後ろのギターに合わせて00:49:647 (2,3) - みたいな音取りのほうが合うかも fixed
2. 02:13:529 (4) - 右にもう9°くらいrotateした方が好み 02:13:923 (5,6,1) - の流れが危なくなるので今はkeepさせていただきまふ
3. 1番(01:33:265 (1) - )ではfollowしてる03:14:713 - をskipしてるのちょっと気になったかも 音取り揃えてはいかがでしょ ﾌｧｯ!?
4. 04:44:713 (2,3,4,5,1) - (どうでもいいことだけど)右に18°くらいrotateしたほうが見た目的にすき細かい男はモテないぞ、直したけど

めっちゃ良い譜面&曲で鳥肌たった... 短いけどこれ以上見つかんないです
GL~!

WORSTPOLACKEU wrote:

Memorise!

02:03:463 (2,3) - I would CTRl-G those, the way you have to click it then fits better with the rhythm going into next part!
ACtualkly I saw you did this on many places and I would do it this way so I think you don't have to change this.. or do this sometimes for diversity?
It is a really nice clicking alternative for those spots! yup there's no instrument on blue ticks so i had to do this ewe

01:35:042 (2) - Place it under the slider so it gets that up and down motion before going downwards, better than going left imo. fixd

03:00:897 (2,3,4,5,1) - Ascending spacing please, attention to detail, this would be so good like this https://puu.sh/x81Mq/29b203e257.png yes

03:11:950 (2) - deserves more spacing with this sound! yes

03:19:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This rhythm would be nice imo https://puu.sh/x81Rm/bf32916e18.png
Feels off the way it is now, like clicking just ignoring the important parts somehow without clear direction or thought. made something from ur idea w

04:02:673 (4) - Why reverse here? I don't see any point for this actually! to pick the instrument on reverse while holding the vocalsss

04:13:134 (3,4,5) - Ascending spacing would be nice --> https://puu.sh/x81Wa/4f6dcda99e.png
Also -> this deserves change of flow imo https://puu.sh/x81Xe/70321e3eea.png i think i can keep this as its visually far enuf and for trangl aes w

04:19:450 (3,4,5) - Ascending spacing too? yup


Rest I saw was the same as here so I think you can find it yourself if you want to change it.
Those are the only things I would change because it would add a kind of dimension to the song instead of having those parts bland, with those small changes they turn into more detailed parts when you play them even though the song is so slow and relatively easy!

Very very good map !!

GL AKI ~~

Splash ~

KorwiN wrote:

00:32:476 (3,4) - No curvy will be better this is to unify with 00:33:265 (1) - also making straight isn't makes it better anyways
00:45:108 (3,4) - Slightly curved no thanks
00:55:963 (2,3,4,1) - Looks strange... Better change it how it becomes strange tho, raising spacing on 00:56:555 (4,1) - is for raising vocals + pattern.
01:08:792 (3,2,3) - , 01:13:529 (2,3,3,2,1,4,3) - Sound accents... You have to emphasize the sound aren't they emphasized already
01:32:673 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Do not make a straight streams... why? It's 100% rankable
01:40:371 (3,4) - Too much straights slider... what do u expecting on slow sliders aside from slight curved and straights
01:41:555 (3,4) - A little more curve not my fetish
01:50:239 (4,5,6,7,8) - It does not fit here Straight stream nah it fits. It's personal preference
01:51:029 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8840013 hmmm? Sounds better? 1/16 gap is way too extreme even the bpm is low so no thanks.
02:10:371 (4,5,6,7) - please do not... it's not hard
02:36:423 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - SV Lower, slower..... nah it's consistent with melody A
03:19:844 (4,5,6,7) - Never make any triangles Jump ... Too much of them already it's zigzag, not triangle.
03:32:081 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8840013 hmmm? Sounds better? same explanation
03:35:634 (3,4,5,6) - please do not... squares its light insane ... but it's still count as "Insane". Squares aren't hurt if they dont repeat several times in a row.
03:51:423 (4,5,6,7) - Not even here does not fit vocals worth enough to make square here.
04:06:029 (5,6,7,8,1) - straights stream .... make curved stream04:41:160 nah, as i said it's personal preference. Curved or not it's same, still rankable.
04:41:160 (4,5,6,7) - you know .... i know, you know?
04:57:739 (1,2,3,4) - Never do so on the low Diff it's not low diff in first place, also the overlap is readable by many testplayers i had before.
05:35:535 (1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8840049 i listened it to 25% loop rate and i still dont know, might consider it if anyone else pointed out too.

Not bad map ;D

1. 00:47:081 (2) - want this pointing to 00:47:476 (1) instead of being parallel?
2. 00:56:555 (4,1) - why is this spaced differently from other 1/4 gaps?
3. 01:08:594 (2,3) - ^ (maybe because a e s t h e t i c s ?)
4. 01:21:423 (3) - make the same shape as 01:20:634 (1) ?
5. 01:37:608 (4) - move down a bit maybe to x:133 y:350 for spicy triangle movement
6. 01:53:594 - idk i hear a stronger sound here
7. 03:03:265 (1,2,3,4) - increase teh spacing from each oder
8. 03:59:713 (4) - try align with 03:59:318 (3) ?
9. 04:47:476 - make small kiai flash for c00lness (lol idk)

Lasse wrote:

my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/660512

soft-hitwhistle6 is really one sided audio wise, use this fixed version: https://lasse.s-ul.eu/N1H1OAEl.wav thanks for this
would increase brightness on last two combo colors look a bit out of place since they are so much more vibrant tried to increase a bit

00:01:687 (1,2,3) - i think it would be nice if this whole pattern was "flipped" movement wise like https://i.imgur.com/gNMqX7q.jpg so you get a "softer" movement into/on 00:03:265 (4) - which fits way better sure
00:20:634 (1) - slider would feel more cohesive with its own shape if the first parts also were curved a bit, for example https://i.imgur.com/JMTJ493.jpg i tried
00:55:075 - snapping isn't perfect, but adding 1/8 here too would be cute. how about this rhythm https://i.imgur.com/Yid555t.jpg to trnsition into faster tapping? nice, let me do that
01:58:529 (1) - why suddenly such unintuitive sliderbody movement, try https://i.imgur.com/m6CZKSD.jpg fixd
01:52:608 (2) -01:53:397 (1) - 02:06:029 - etc kinda lol cause vocal on next blue tick fixed on 01:52:608 - and related parts, but i want to keep those 01:53:397 (1) - and other related sliders as i prioritized cymbals (i believe they can cover those vocals right on the next tick). Also splitting object there will cause more awkward play as 01:53:792 - 01:53:989 - has no heavy rhythm from vocals or instruments
02:34:844 (1,2,3,4) - seems quite overdone spacing wise here lol ok
03:33:660 (2) - yea same as last chorus for these things ya i explained above
05:37:114 - snapping should probably be something like this on 1/16 https://i.imgur.com/oCv12sA.jpg yeah fixed i was rly confused there z

yea

Naotoshi wrote:

[memories]
u could silence these intro slow slider ends oka

00:30:108 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this entire section seems way too high density for what the section is doing. while each individual note is on a sound, overall the part feels kinda overmapped. i suggest lowering the density by only mapping the guitar in the background, like at 00:33:265 (1,2,1) - oh yea, nerfed

00:37:213 (3,4,1,2,3) - same here yh

01:51:818 (2) - wouldnt 2 circles be nicer? cuz 2 vocals i get your concern but it's really hard to hit a circle from 1/16 long reverse on 01:51:029 (1) -

02:25:371 (1) - you could hear an extended chord in the bg i think. maybe a slider? till 02:25:765 - nice idea

03:47:081 (1,2,3) - u could make it equal visual spacing i tried

04:07:608 (2) - hmm cant you follow the string entrance at 04:07:410 - instead? this http://puu.sh/xvXlk/5312117d63.jpg seems like a more fitting rhythm fixed the rhythm but used my own idea on placement, i did some anti-flow to make emphasis on 04:08:002 (1) - so ye myb u can look again if its ok5u

04:38:101 (2) - sounds kinda overmapped cuz of your hitsounding lol mADMADMADMADMAD fixed w

04:57:739 (1,2,3,4) - dont really like these patterns cuz they kinda put equal spacing on the 1st and 2nd things even tho the 1st thing is always stronger. u could try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9055740 if you think this is an issue i want my current structure, but i moved 04:58:924 (4) - to right side instead to making cymbals better emphasized

sad that all the random 1/3 stuff is not clickable =( 1/3 rhythm appears at near-ending, i don't want to confuse the player after over 4min as it's under 4*

also wtf is this banner lmao hell ye

Kawashiro wrote:

Congratz (≥∀≤)/

_kotachi_ wrote:

卒業おめでとう

-Nanaka- wrote:

おでめとう:3