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Akitoshi
Thanks for the timing and I fixed color3 (we talked on in-game yh)

the only thing i want to keep is whistle on 00:54:779 - since its for guitar's string
Lasse


@next bn: check timing of the ending again, thanks
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

thank you lasse!
Nao Tomori
[memories]
u could silence these intro slow slider ends

00:30:108 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this entire section seems way too high density for what the section is doing. while each individual note is on a sound, overall the part feels kinda overmapped. i suggest lowering the density by only mapping the guitar in the background, like at 00:33:265 (1,2,1) -

00:37:213 (3,4,1,2,3) - same here

01:51:818 (2) - wouldnt 2 circles be nicer? cuz 2 vocals

02:25:371 (1) - you could hear an extended chord in the bg i think. maybe a slider? till 02:25:765 -

03:47:081 (1,2,3) - u could make it equal visual spacing

04:07:608 (2) - hmm cant you follow the string entrance at 04:07:410 - instead? this http://puu.sh/xvXlk/5312117d63.jpg seems like a more fitting rhythm

04:38:101 (2) - sounds kinda overmapped cuz of your hitsounding lol

04:57:739 (1,2,3,4) - dont really like these patterns cuz they kinda put equal spacing on the 1st and 2nd things even tho the 1st thing is always stronger. u could try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9055740 if you think this is an issue

sad that all the random 1/3 stuff is not clickable =(

also wtf is this banner lmao
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Akitoshi

Naotoshi wrote:

[memories]
u could silence these intro slow slider ends oka

00:30:108 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - this entire section seems way too high density for what the section is doing. while each individual note is on a sound, overall the part feels kinda overmapped. i suggest lowering the density by only mapping the guitar in the background, like at 00:33:265 (1,2,1) - oh yea, nerfed

00:37:213 (3,4,1,2,3) - same here yh

01:51:818 (2) - wouldnt 2 circles be nicer? cuz 2 vocals i get your concern but it's really hard to hit a circle from 1/16 long reverse on 01:51:029 (1) - :(

02:25:371 (1) - you could hear an extended chord in the bg i think. maybe a slider? till 02:25:765 - nice idea

03:47:081 (1,2,3) - u could make it equal visual spacing i tried

04:07:608 (2) - hmm cant you follow the string entrance at 04:07:410 - instead? this http://puu.sh/xvXlk/5312117d63.jpg seems like a more fitting rhythm fixed the rhythm but used my own idea on placement, i did some anti-flow to make emphasis on 04:08:002 (1) - so ye myb u can look again if its ok5u

04:38:101 (2) - sounds kinda overmapped cuz of your hitsounding lol mADMADMADMADMAD fixed w

04:57:739 (1,2,3,4) - dont really like these patterns cuz they kinda put equal spacing on the 1st and 2nd things even tho the 1st thing is always stronger. u could try something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9055740 if you think this is an issue i want my current structure, but i moved 04:58:924 (4) - to right side instead to making cymbals better emphasized

sad that all the random 1/3 stuff is not clickable =( 1/3 rhythm appears at near-ending, i don't want to confuse the player after over 4min as it's under 4* :(

also wtf is this banner lmao hell ye
thank you nao!
Nao Tomori
intro is mistimed randomly lo, popped

one other thing

00:37:015 (2,3,1,2) - would be nicer to follow guitar still, cuz right before it is also following guitar and switching over to vocals is kinda ?_?

lmk when u fixed timing
Ongaku
http://puu.sh/xw2Sf/d74f0acff9.txt

timing violin is a pain in the ass tbh

@lasse if anything sounds off, see if someone else can mess with it. I got as close as i could.
Topic Starter
Akitoshi
T i m i n g i s s u e

thank you guys for helping with timings :cry:
updatd
Lasse
00:10:027 - tail here seems late
=> 00:09:622 - should be ~82bpm I think to snap it better
00:10:382 - 68bpm sounds better here for similar reason

00:11:205 - should be later,
=> delete the timing point on it, add 72 at 00:10:823 - // add 65,5bpm on 00:11:239 -


others sound fine to me

also make sure red/green lines have consistent volume and sample settings
Topic Starter
Akitoshi
applied and checked the volume on reds and greens, gonna poke nao if he satisfied with the current timing
Lasse
Nao Tomori
i love lolis too
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Thank you Nao!
Kawashiro
Congratz (≥∀≤)/
_kotachi_
卒業おめでとう
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

Kawashiro wrote:

Congratz (≥∀≤)/
thanks :3c

_kotachi_ wrote:

卒業おめでとう
すんすん( ´•̥̥̥ω•̥̥̥`)
-Nanaka-
おでめとう:3
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

-Nanaka- wrote:

おでめとう:3
ありがとー :3
nazzinoz
why doesn't it have the tag "absorbs vocaloid utaite hatsune miku"
Topic Starter
Akitoshi

im sorry
Enon

Enon wrote:

the song

wtf my memory was suck
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