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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, July 08, 2017 at 9:00:35 AM

Artist: Maaya Sakamoto
Title: Million Clouds
Source: あまんちゅ!
Tags: opening op amanchu! depzdai LMT Kocari
BPM: 143
Filesize: 16445kb
Play Time: 01:37
Difficulties Available:
  1. Advanced (2.51 stars, 172 notes)
  2. depzdai's Normal (1.79 stars, 124 notes)
  3. Easy (1.29 stars, 73 notes)
  4. Kocari's Journey (3.53 stars, 262 notes)
  5. LMT's Hard (3.04 stars, 187 notes)


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#7

Ah, the smell of summer grass... the humid air... accompany the sound of waves conversing.
Ah, I can't help but think about where this sea is connected to.

Hitsounded by [[Pika]]. Thanks a lot ^^

Metadata:
• Artist: http://www.jvcmusic.co.jp/maaya/
• Title: http://amanchu-anime.com/staff.html
http://www.jvcmusic.co.jp/flyingdog/-/D ... 35235.html
http://amanchu-anime.com/?p=33
posted
I'm here.

Low quality background. Eew!. Here is a better one, if you want.
Add common tags: anime op
Weird timing thou. MP3 or the song itself?
depzai mai boi
  1. 00:18:876 (3,4,1) - Cho 2 nốt này xa nhau 1 tí. Stack nhìn nó overlap thấy xấu.
  2. 00:22:653 (1) - Maybe we should avoid "slider đè lên chính nó như vầy". Hard to follow for Normal
  3. 00:28:317 (2) - Same
  4. 00:29:995 (3,1,2) - Spacing and overlap error due to stack. (Như trên)
  5. 00:44:244 (3,1,2) - Same
  6. 00:46:132 (1) - ^^^
  7. 00:58:509 (3,4,5) - Blanket
  8. 01:04:174 (3) - Blanket
  9. 01:08:579 (2,3,4,1) - Moar blanket
  10. 01:16:342 (1) - Moar weird slider
  11. 01:29:768 (1) - Why multiple repeat? (Có thể anh điếc cmnr)
Advance
  1. 01:01:027 (4,1) - Tiny overlap suk.
The rest are all great.
Yami suk
posted

LeKhanhHoa wrote:

I'm here.

Low quality background. Eew!. Here is a better one, if you want. k
Add common tags: anime op k
Weird timing thou. MP3 or the song itself? idk zdai mai boi gave it to me.
Advance
  1. 01:01:027 (4,1) - Tiny overlap suk.
The rest are all great.
Yami suk


thanks for the suk mod boi
posted
From #modreqs

General

During the kiai I suggest using more intense hitsounds. Also in general every diff is quiet during the kiai so at least bump up the volume.

You need custom colors.

You can remove anime from the tags as that'll be the genre once this is ranked.

For Advanced bump up the HP slightly to fit the spread.

LMT's Hard needs higher OD as Advanced is at 5.2 and to fill the gap between Kocari's diff and LMT's.


Kocari's Journey

00:02:093 (1,2,3) - These aren't perfectly perpendicular. You'll notice 1 is off-center.

00:05:450 (2,3,4) - The jump isn't intuitive here because of the linear flow. The angle needs to be sharper so the player has a slight break before the jump.

00:12:163 (2,3,1) - This pattern isn't perfect. I suggest forming a triangle with 3 and the head and tail of 1.

00:15:939 (3,4) - You should copy 3 and replace 4 with the copy so it's aesthetically better.

00:40:258 (3,4,5) - This change in the flow is unexpected. https://puu.sh/wln8N/11b46773c1.jpg Arranging it like this has the same idea but is more intuitive. You'll have to adjust the note I highlighted in the picture so it's blanketed though.

00:42:775 (1,2,3) - I noticed the emphasis on 3, so this pattern makes sense. However, the execution didn't work. Move 3 closer to 1 so both it and 2 have the same visual distance from 1.

01:03:335 (2) - This doesn't line up perfectly with 3.

01:21:377 (1,3) - You'll see 1 is off-center.

I highly suggest bumping the stack leniency up to 7. Some patterns (Ex. 00:09:855 (2,3,1) - 00:26:009 (1,2,3) - 00:28:317 (2,3,4) - ) are messed up by it. They wouldn't look any different with it on and it'd be more intuitive to play.


LMT's Hard

00:02:093 (1,1) - The first slider isn't aiming perfectly at the other one. Copy the first slider and use that as a guide to place the other one.

00:02:513 (1,2,3) - This could aesthetically be improved. It would look better if 3 shared an equal distance from 1 and 2 visually.

00:14:261 (1,2) - The nc here makes no sense, as it's not the end of the verse. It's better you play an NC on 2 as it's a new section.

00:34:401 (1,2,3,4) - These are spaced much closer together compared to the rest of the map.

00:42:565 (6,7) - The emphasis is on that white tick. You should replace s6 with a circle and move the reverse slider to the white tick. Extend it so it compliments that 4th sound.


Advanced

00:15:939 (1) - This slider shape makes no sense as the feel of the song doesn't suggest this sharp shape. Something more like what you did at 00:12:583 (1) - is more fitting.

01:23:055 (1) - This ends on the white tick lol

01:29:558 (3) - I suggest using 2 hit circles here as both sounds have emphasis.


depzdai's Normal

00:29:995 (3,1,2) - That partial overlap is unfortunate. You can break ds and space these out slightly so it doesn't look like that.

01:07:950 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern really doesn't look good for multiple reasons. I suggest completely redoing it.

Props for incorporating uncommon slider shapes.


Easy

00:15:939 (1,2) - These are slightly off. You could form a triangle with 1 and the tail of 2.


gl~
posted

Bubblun wrote:

From #modreqs

General

During the kiai I suggest using more intense hitsounds. Also in general every diff is quiet during the kiai so at least bump up the volume. the volume is already higher, about the hitsound I'm not sure how to, I'm getting help for it tho

You need custom colors.

You can remove anime from the tags as that'll be the genre once this is ranked.

For Advanced bump up the HP slightly to fit the spread.

LMT's Hard needs higher OD as Advanced is at 5.2 and to fill the gap between Kocari's diff and LMT's. made my diff OD5 and I think it's fine now

Advanced

00:15:939 (1) - This slider shape makes no sense as the feel of the song doesn't suggest this sharp shape. Something more like what you did at 00:12:583 (1) - is more fitting. true, fixed

01:23:055 (1) - This ends on the white tick lol there's a small guitar on the red tick, I believe I should at least express it using a sliderend tho,
it doesn't sound that bad ending on red tick


01:29:558 (3) - I suggest using 2 hit circles here as both sounds have emphasis. yes they both are but I'm mainly following the vocal.

Easy

00:15:939 (1,2) - These are slightly off. You could form a triangle with 1 and the tail of 2.wow lol I didn't even notice the triangle. That's a good idea but I'm just using the blankets and the correct spacing, didn't mean to make a good triangle at all tho


gl~


Wow modreqs finally worked. Thanks a bunch :3
posted

Bubblun wrote:

From #modreqs

General

LMT's Hard

00:02:093 (1,1) - The first slider isn't aiming perfectly at the other one. Copy the first slider and use that as a guide to place the other one. it's like 1 pixel man xd fixed

00:02:513 (1,2,3) - This could aesthetically be improved. It would look better if 3 shared an equal distance from 1 and 2 visually. sure

00:14:261 (1,2) - The nc here makes no sense, as it's not the end of the verse. It's better you play an NC on 2 as it's a new section. yea

00:34:401 (1,2,3,4) - These are spaced much closer together compared to the rest of the map. yea

00:42:565 (6,7) - The emphasis is on that white tick. You should replace s6 with a circle and move the reverse slider to the white tick. Extend it so it compliments that 4th sound. nah the vocal definitely stresses here. Also downbeat on sliderend is well introduced so I don't think it's an issue.


Thanks for mod! Bumped OD to 6 as well

:)
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54104
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Million Clouds (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Million Clouds (TV Size)
Artist:Sakamoto Maaya
ArtistUnicode:坂本真綾
Creator:Yamicchi
Version:LMT's Hard
Source:あまんちゅ!
Tags:opening amanchu! depzdai LMT Kocari
BeatmapID:1321439
BeatmapSetID:627050

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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7.5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

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posted
NM boi
Kocari's Journey
* I don't know , I'm probably retarded. 00:02:093 (1,2,3) - those angle can be fix. probably like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8358148
LMT's Hard
* Just add circle here bruh 00:44:873 -
* ^00:48:230 -
well it is just sounded really bad for me
depzdai's Normal
* Umm you are going to ignore the sound here 00:32:303 -
* Can you consider to fix this buddy? 01:07:950 (1,2) -
Good Luck >w<
posted
A general mod request here.
The following is for Kocari's Journey
00:02:093 (1,2) - I moved these out of the way of the slider body since it's sorta visually unappealing/why not. Like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8357995
00:10:695 (4) - I made this into a long slider to try and portray the voice. Sort of like the slider at 00:14:261 (1) -. Your call if you want to change it, it looks pretty bad :Phttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8358025
00:47:181 (4) - I'd move this to the right more for equal spacing. There's not much at this part that would indicate a larger jump, you know? The beat is consistent, and there's no voice at that part to add that chance variety in spacing.

01:05:432 (3,4,5,6,7) - For these, the triple is placed incorrectly. If you slow down the song 25%, you should notice the triple beat is on 1:05.432. So I changed the triple to this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8358136
01:13:405 (2,3,4) - Again with this, I think it's placed incorrectly. The triple beat starts on 1:13.405. Although having a triple immediately after a slider isn't very conventional, this is the truth. So I'd recommend either skipping over it as the voice is becoming less "All over the place", or you could go for the triple after the slider (Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8358205)
01:19:698 (1,2,3,4,5) - Again for these, I think the triple beat starts at 1:19.908. So I moved the triple accordingly. Moved it here: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8358254
01:29:558 (4) - I would extend this slider, a lot like you did at the beginning, since the voice is still going. referencing 00:20:765 (4) -
Welp, that's just about it for me.
Good luck, I like this song!
posted

Uta wrote:

LMT's Hard
* Just add circle here bruh 00:44:873 - lol no that just dilute the emphasis on vocals
* ^00:48:230 - ^
well it is just sounded really bad for me
Good Luck >w<
posted
Update the tags in the Hard diff to be the same as the other diffs. The video's resolution is too large. Its resolution is 1280x738, while the maximum allowed is 1280x720. Consider cropping it or finding it in a different resolution. I recommend increasing the CS in the Easy and Hard diffs. The AR and OD in the Kocari's Journey may be a little too high.
Easy:
00:53:684 - there isn't enough spinner recovery time here, the recommended amount of time to recover is 4 beats while there is only 2 beats to recover here.
01:24:314 - you may want to consider moving this circle away from the same spot the slider before it ended, since they aren't very close together on the timeline they probably shouldn't be very close together on the screen.(time distance equality)
01:31:446 (1) - having the slider end on the body of another slider may confuse newer players.
01:33:125 - The shape of this slider may be too complex for an easy difficulty, but thats up too you.
Normal:
00:22:653 - You may want to make this slider's shape more simple and not overlap itself. It might be too confusing for a normal difficulty.
00:32:723 - Consider moving this slider away from the end of the last slider since they aren't very close on the timeline.
00:36:079 - Consider moving the end of this slider somewhere else, it overlaps the slider before it at 00:35:030 - . This one isn't really all that big of a deal though.
Consider changing the color of combo 2 because it blends in with the background video, especially at 01:31:237 (2) - or just use a different combo color for that particular combo.
posted

tatatat wrote:

Update the tags in the Hard diff to be the same as the other diffs. The video's resolution is too large. Its resolution is 1280x738, while the maximum allowed is 1280x720. Consider cropping it or finding it in a different resolution. I recommend increasing the CS in the Easy and Hard diffs. The AR and OD in the Kocari's Journey may be a little too high. tag done, video I'll try to find some help, CS is fine imo Kocari's up to him
Easy:
00:53:684 - there isn't enough spinner recovery time here, the recommended amount of time to recover is 4 beats while there is only 2 beats to recover here. it is 839ms to the next object, so basically it's 39ms odd from being unrankable tho
01:24:314 - you may want to consider moving this circle away from the same spot the slider before it ended, since they aren't very close together on the timeline they probably shouldn't be very close together on the screen.(time distance equality) ya because they aren't close together on the timeline, that's why I have to stack them for easier read
01:31:446 (1) - having the slider end on the body of another slider may confuse newer players. I believe it's just a sliderend, plus it's stacked perfectly, and when the next slider comes, the sliderend had already faded out so...
01:33:125 - The shape of this slider may be too complex for an easy difficulty, but thats up too you. trust me I've seen even more complicated thing xd


Thanks for the mod :3 the GDer will reply to you later
posted
Fixed most things
osu file format v14

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posted

LeKhanhHoa wrote:

depzai mai boi
  1. 00:18:876 (3,4,1) - Cho 2 nốt này xa nhau 1 tí. Stack nhìn nó overlap thấy xấu. Fixed, since I forgot to turn on stacking view at that moment. Thanks for pointing this out.
  2. 00:22:653 (1) - Maybe we should avoid "slider đè lên chính nó như vầy". Hard to follow for Normal kay
  3. 00:28:317 (2) - Same It's not that hard to follow. There is also a 1/2-beat slider after it so that you can't lose the tempo so easily.
  4. 00:29:995 (3,1,2) - Spacing and overlap error due to stack. (Như trên) Fixed.
  5. 00:44:244 (3,1,2) - Same Fixed.
  6. 00:46:132 (1) - ^^^ Fixed.
  7. 00:58:509 (3,4,5) - Blanket 00:58:509 (3,5) - was the blanket and 00:59:139 (4) - got stacked on 00:59:349 (5) - . I think just leaving it as it is should be fine.
  8. 01:04:174 (3) - Blanket Fixed.
  9. 01:08:579 (2,3,4,1) - Moar blanket Fixed all the stuffs as many ones complainted about it.
  10. 01:16:342 (1) - Moar weird slider Not that weird. :/
  11. 01:29:768 (1) - Why multiple repeat? (Có thể anh điếc cmnr) At the post-Kiai part I also mapped the guitar to make the difference with the leading part from 00:02:513 (1) - . Multiple repeat is for reducing the tempo the player gets through the Kiai part, or basically 'calming the players down'.
The rest are all great. I'm so bad, sorry.

Bubblun wrote:

depzdai's Normal

00:29:995 (3,1,2) - That partial overlap is unfortunate. You can break ds and space these out slightly so it doesn't look like that. I've moved it to slightly farther places. Thanks for your advice.

01:07:950 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern really doesn't look good for multiple reasons. I suggest completely redoing it. I'll do.

Props for incorporating uncommon slider shapes. Eee, I don't even know if it's a compliment or not Xd. If it really is, thank you. : D

Uta wrote:

depzdai's Normal
* Umm you are going to ignore the sound here 00:32:303 - At that part I mapped the guitar, not the vocal so no fix there.
* Can you consider to fix this buddy? 01:07:950 (1,2) -Yeah.

tatatat wrote:

Normal:
00:22:653 - You may want to make this slider's shape more simple and not overlap itself. It might be too confusing for a normal difficulty. Fixed.
00:32:723 - Consider moving this slider away from the end of the last slider since they aren't very close on the timeline. Fixed.
00:36:079 - Consider moving the end of this slider somewhere else, it overlaps the slider before it at 00:35:030 - . This one isn't really all that big of a deal though. That's my intention. It's not a reading challenge for novice players either imo.


Thanks LKH, Bubblun, Uta and tatatat for all of your useful mods! <3

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posted
Helloo, heres the mod from #modreq :3


General
00:39:419 - Before this timing-change the timing seems really off. It seems to get wrong already at about 00:22:653 - So you might want to have a look at your timing because at 00:37:758 - for example the piano sounds sound REALLY off already.

Look at aimod, apparently tags arent correct for the hard diff.
Also it tells you that kiai time on insane is not on a beat, prob because you changed timing once.
Easy
Hmm, it might get really confusing for beginners because the rhythm choices are sometimes really questionable...
00:09:226 (1) - Here this might be a slider to the next white tick
00:19:296 (1) - ^
Otherwise imo it gets really weird if you just skip a singing on white tick and start a slider on a red tick... (wont even get up your * so ..)
00:51:167 (1,1) - Recovery time seems a bit too little for beginners. Maybe end the spinner 1 white tick earlier, then the slider wont be on screen for 1 second already during spinner, which might irritate beginners anyways...
depzdai's Normal
00:26:639 (3) - This could look better by making the sliderpoint exactly in the middle (where your red point is), making it symmetrical just like the next long slider
00:32:303 - I feel like theres a note missing here after you mapped the singing previously, theres even a piano sound here so idk i really think there should be a note here. maybe stack it under the slider. this will also fix the spacing ^^
01:06:272 (1) - Dont think this many repeats fit here at all. Might want to make a circle instead of the last repeat.
01:21:377 (1) - What exactly does this represent? o.o
01:33:230 (1) - The spinnerend seems really weird for me. you could make it end on the last singing thing or just later in general but right there the end seems kinda misplaced because theres singing right before it and at the end theres really nothing.
Advanced
00:33:352 (2) - Blanket could be better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8474213 (end and beginning of the slider are abit too far from previous one)
Kocari's Journey
00:02:093 (1) - Higher spacing here makes not much sense imo. id stack it over the end of 3
00:10:485 (3,1) - Why such low spacing here? o: i think it deserves more spacing but up to you really. (00:17:408 (6,1) - here you put higher spacing too for example but music wise its less emphasized imo)
00:20:555 (3,1) - This stack doesnt make much sense here. you never did it and its literally the same music here as above so id space em
00:34:401 (1,2,3,4) - I think spacing them out would be better here, but oh well. I can kinda get why you did it here.
00:40:258 (3,4) - Dont like this stack either :/ makes no sense and ruins flow for no reason imo.
00:46:132 (1,3) - Quote from ranking criteria: "When perfectly overlapping two slider bodies, the first slider must be fully faded out before the second slider is fully faded in." (https://osu.ppy.sh/help/wiki/Ranking_Criteria/osu!). I dont think this rule is applied for these 2 sliders since when you play your map the second slider is already there when you finish the first one. Just rotate the second slider so you see its a slider.
01:29:349 (3,4) - Dont think this stack fits much

00:10:695 (1) - This nc seems random for me ^^
00:20:765 (1) - ^


Thats all (: pretty solid map already, gl! :3
posted
and im here again

[General]
- 01:33:230 (1) - ending this at 01:36:202 - for difficulties with a spinner could be cool since it ends on something audible
- tags on LMT's diff are screwed up

[Easy]
Only concern is the stacks under slider tails, those can be confusing for new players since they'll probably click too early and end up losing rhythm and stuff, maybe try to avoid these. Otherwise diff is good

[depzdai's Normal]
Concern here is slider shapes in the beginning are a bit exotic where the song is quite calm. I'd recommend changing ones like 00:12:583 (1) - 00:28:317 (2) - 00:46:132 (1) -

There are also some reading hazards like 00:19:296 (1,2,3) - 00:29:786 (2,3) - (players can mistakenly go for the reverse tick and not the slider head, it's a common misplay by noobs) 00:52:006 (2,3) - (same idea) 00:56:202 (1,2) - very elaborate overlaps (a good portion of the slider is hidden) 01:02:915 (1,2,3,1) - cluttered and could be hard to read 01:16:342 (1,2,1,2) - just too complicated for new players

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Use straightforward and easily understandable slider shapes. New players may not understand how to follow more complex shapes.

- 00:59:139 (4,5) - cool blanket xd
- 01:06:272 (1) - double reverses are discouraged in normal diffs since players will be unlikely to react to them in time, as usually they expect only one reverse

[Advanced]
- 01:05:432 (4,5,1) - visual spacing :(
- 01:16:761 (3) - hmm don't you think the snare on the end of this should be clickable instead?
- 01:20:957 (5) - I'd remove one reverse because 01:20:537 (4) - makes the player expect only one reverse, so they may release too early and mess up

[LMT's Hard]
- 00:31:674 (2,3) - ctrl+g'ing this rhythm fits vocals better imo
- 00:40:677 (3,4) - seems to be the only big jump for this calm section, consider nerfing?

[Kocari's Journey]
- 00:46:132 (1,3) - eyes emoji, again not really getting this being obviously copy-pasted, it actually is kinda hard to read lol
- 00:47:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmmmmmmm what about http://i.imgur.com/dRAkpVQ.png to get all the juicy beats clickable
- 01:07:111 (5,6,7) - flows a bit weird, ctrl+g 6?
- 01:09:523 - wouldn't this normally be a triple?
- 01:20:223 - 01:20:642 - 01:21:272 - ow rip 1/4 :(

My biggest concern is the readability of the Normal diff, it was mapped with advanced patterns so it's not exactly noob-friendly. the rest of the set is actually pretty good, so do some work with the Normal diff and you can call me to check it again
posted

Parachute wrote:

Helloo, heres the mod from #modreq :3


General
00:39:419 - Before this timing-change the timing seems really off. It seems to get wrong already at about 00:22:653 - So you might want to have a look at your timing because at 00:37:758 - for example the piano sounds sound REALLY off already. Getting LMT to check it, since LMT did it for me.

Look at aimod, apparently tags arent correct for the hard diff.
Also it tells you that kiai time on insane is not on a beat, prob because you changed timing once. updated.
Easy
Hmm, it might get really confusing for beginners because the rhythm choices are sometimes really questionable...
00:09:226 (1) - Here this might be a slider to the next white tick not really tho cause if I make it a slider, it might end up on red tick, which is not recommended for Easy diff tho.
00:19:296 (1) - ^
Otherwise imo it gets really weird if you just skip a singing on white tick and start a slider on a red tick... (wont even get up your * so ..)
00:51:167 (1,1) - Recovery time seems a bit too little for beginners. Maybe end the spinner 1 white tick earlier, then the slider wont be on screen for 1 second already during spinner, which might irritate beginners anyways... the lowest drain time that is rankable is 800ms, which in this case is enough tho, and I don't think it's too short, because the next object is pretty near to the center, which can be easy to read tho
Advanced
00:33:352 (2) - Blanket could be better. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8474213 (end and beginning of the slider are abit too far from previous one) true, fixed



Thats all (: pretty solid map already, gl! :3


thanks for the mod :3~

Mir wrote:

and im here again

[General]
- 01:33:230 (1) - ending this at 01:36:202 - for difficulties with a spinner could be cool since it ends on something audible uhh did you write down the wrong timeline? :d
- tags on LMT's diff are screwed up fixed right after Parachute's mod

[Easy]
Only concern is the stacks under slider tails, those can be confusing for new players since they'll probably click too early and end up losing rhythm and stuff, maybe try to avoid these. Otherwise diff is good Got some opinion about this
Opinion
20:13 Yamicchi: hey I wanna ask you something
20:13 Yamicchi: in Easy diff if the time gap is too big, is stacking 2 objects a good option?
20:14 Garden: o
20:14 Garden: sure
20:15 Garden: I think if time gap is big enough it doesn't matter where you decide to place the next object.
20:15 Garden: stacking is intuitive and easy i personally prefer it lol
20:15 Yamicchi: well because someone said to me that "those can be confusing for new players since they'll probably click too early and end up losing rhythm and stuff"
20:16 Garden: it depends on when the approaching circle appears i guess
20:16 Yamicchi: oo
20:16 Yamicchi: ok thanks for the opinion


[Advanced]
- 01:05:432 (4,5,1) - visual spacing :(aaa fixed a bit
- 01:16:761 (3) - hmm don't you think the snare on the end of this should be clickable instead? there are a few more afterward, the music doesn't actually have a snare, it's Pika who hitsounded it, and I think advanced diff should not be forced to be clickable all the time tho, it might become a hard diff eventually hehe
- 01:20:957 (5) - I'd remove one reverse because 01:20:537 (4) - makes the player expect only one reverse, so they may release too early and mess up done

My biggest concern is the readability of the Normal diff, it was mapped with advanced patterns so it's not exactly noob-friendly. the rest of the set is actually pretty good, so do some work with the Normal diff and you can call me to check it again


Thanks for the mod <3 <3
posted

Parachute wrote:




00:39:419 - Before this timing-change the timing seems really off. It seems to get wrong already at about 00:22:653 - So you might want to have a look at your timing because at 00:37:758 - for example the piano sounds sound REALLY off already.


yo I was in charge of the timing.

The piano in the intro is kinda inconsistent but it averages out with this offset. There are other instruments that are also present like bells and vocals, so it makes the accuracy of the piano less important. Also timing accurately to each note kills playability quite a bit, especially in a calm section.

Hope that clears things up a little.

@Mir: fixed both!!

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osu file format v14

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posted

Parachute wrote:

Helloo, heres the mod from #modreq :3

depzdai's Normal
00:26:639 (3) - This could look better by making the sliderpoint exactly in the middle (where your red point is), making it symmetrical just like the next long slider I had tested it before you said so. I think keeping it as it is is finer.
00:32:303 - I feel like theres a note missing here after you mapped the singing previously, theres even a piano sound here so idk i really think there should be a note here. maybe stack it under the slider. this will also fix the spacing ^^ I followed instrument sounds but vocal at that time.
01:06:272 (1) - Dont think this many repeats fit here at all. Might want to make a circle instead of the last repeat. Fixed.
01:21:377 (1) - What exactly does this represent? o.o The replica of the chill of the song beginning. Also the flow and the blanket are all good so yea.
01:33:230 (1) - The spinnerend seems really weird for me. you could make it end on the last singing thing or just later in general but right there the end seems kinda misplaced because theres singing right before it and at the end theres really nothing.Made it like the other diffs.

Thanks for the mod. :3

Mir wrote:

and im here again

[depzdai's Normal]
Concern here is slider shapes in the beginning are a bit exotic where the song is quite calm. I'd recommend changing ones like 00:12:583 (1) - 00:28:317 (2) - 00:46:132 (1) - Yeah. I've changed all of them.

There are also some reading hazards like 00:19:296 (1,2,3) - 00:29:786 (2,3) - (players can mistakenly go for the reverse tick and not the slider head, it's a common misplay by noobs) Yeah. I've moved these tails far away. 00:52:006 (2,3) - (same idea) Fixed. 00:56:202 (1,2) - very elaborate overlaps (a good portion of the slider is hidden) Fixed. 01:02:915 (1,2,3,1) - cluttered and could be hard to read I've changed all the patterns now. 01:16:342 (1,2,1,2) - just too complicated for new players Made these 1 beat instead of 3/2 beat.

Ranking Criteria wrote:

Use straightforward and easily understandable slider shapes. New players may not understand how to follow more complex shapes.

- 00:59:139 (4,5) - cool blanket xd Thanks. XD
- 01:06:272 (1) - double reverses are discouraged in normal diffs since players will be unlikely to react to them in time, as usually they expect only one reverse Fixed.

My biggest concern is the readability of the Normal diff, it was mapped with advanced patterns so it's not exactly noob-friendly. the rest of the set is actually pretty good, so do some work with the Normal diff and you can call me to check it again Thank you very much for such useful advice. :D
Updated also with some more small tweaks
osu file format v14

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Title:Million Clouds (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Million Clouds (TV Size)
Artist:Sakamoto Maaya
ArtistUnicode:坂本真綾
Creator:Yamicchi
Version:depzdai's Normal
Source:あまんちゅ!
Tags:opening op amanchu! depzdai LMT Kocari
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93,129,84733,6,0,L|179:131,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
217,175,85153,2,0,L|303:173,1,60
321,109,85572,2,0,P|366:104|456:105,1,120
502,152,86202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
477,225,86412,5,2,0:0:0:0:
300,297,87251,2,0,L|214:299,1,60
176,343,87670,2,0,L|90:341,1,60
72,277,88090,6,0,P|61:220|74:135,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,92,88719,2,0,B|170:114|221:77|221:77|247:102|284:109,1,180
350,120,89558,1,0,0:0:0:0:
425,100,89768,6,0,P|431:57|423:21,3,60,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
413,260,91237,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,303,91446,6,0,B|261:343|261:248|154:308,1,180,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,342,92286,2,0,P|81:351|31:359,2,60
127,182,93125,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,93230,12,0,97321,0:0:0:0:
posted
oh yeah before i forget

firstly get a timing check, the beginning is off by a lot x.x

[depzdai's Normal]
- 00:08:387 (1) - would remove these types of ncs since density is really low :? // 00:14:261 (1) -
- 00:29:995 (3,4) - making these relate better would be cool, maybe straight sliders?
- 00:31:044 (1,2,3,4) - Too many clicks in succession for such a calm part if you ask me, maybe make 00:31:044 (1,2) - a slider cuz vocals are held here
- 00:35:660 (3) - could work as just a circle imo, since it might give you more room to play with 00:35:030 (2,1) - this slider-end overlap that's unadvisable in lower diffs. i did this http://i.imgur.com/7ueitZS.jpg but you can change it however you want
- 00:41:097 (1,2,3) - maybe try this http://i.imgur.com/rD16QTl.png might look nicer
- 00:42:775 (1) - mm i don't know about these circle sliders, they stand out a lot now since a lot of the sliders are fairly straightforward
- 00:52:845 (1) - i would actually keep this un-nc'd lol looks better that way :?
- 00:58:509 (3,4,5) - turn stacking on if you have it off and fix the blanket here? // 01:08:579 (2,3,4) -
- 00:59:558 (1,2) - these patterns don't really seem to fit much imo since a lot of the stuff so far in the map hasn't been symmetrical, i would try to make these more straightforward (i would also make these two the same slider or something) try: http://i.imgur.com/nFI1AvO.png maybe? or something along those lines
- 01:01:237 (1,2,3,4) - even more so, 120 degree patterns seem out of place for this difficulty considering what you've already mapped
- 01:04:174 (3,1) - avoidable overlap
- 01:06:901 (2,1) - centering this overlap would be cool like http://i.imgur.com/xLbSEAt.png
- 01:11:726 (2,3) - hmm particularly uncomfortable flow compared to the rest of the kiai..
- 01:23:055 (1,2) - maybe reverse slider here instead?
- 01:29:768 (1) - would remove one reverse and put a circle on 01:30:398 - instead since as i mentioned before, multi-reverses aren't really ideal

just some extra stuff for the normal (yes i used the update) don't kds this
also so i don't just have a post with a star that looks kinda bad
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