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00:00:664 롱노트 2개 를 단노트로 - 수정 완료! [Fix!]
00:00:859 부터 00:01:151 까지의 롱노트 2개 추가 - 수정 완료! [Fix!]

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[Ping]

499 posts

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[Ping] 2017-07-21T01:37:16+00:00

Hi, from my mod queue
1|2|3|4

Sorry for the short mod

btw, you should beware that vocal based maps are nearly impossible to rank, so try use less vocal next time

00:09:040 add a note

00:12:157 - 00:13:326 extend the LNs like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8643077

00:14:105 replace the note on 4 with LN and end the LN on 00:14:495
00:17:222 replace the note on 1 with LN and end the LN on 00:17:612

Carol

444 posts

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Topic Starter

Carol 2017-07-21T08:38:26+00:00

TheNewBungping wrote:
Hi, from my mod queue
1|2|3|4

Sorry for the short mod

Hard
btw, you should beware that vocal based maps are nearly impossible to rank, so try use less vocal next time

00:09:040 add a note

00:12:157 - 00:13:326 extend the LNs like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8643077

00:14:105 replace the note on 4 with LN and end the LN on 00:14:495
00:17:222 replace the note on 1 with LN and end the LN on 00:17:612

■ 00:09:040 add a note - - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:12:157 - 00:13:326 extend the LNs like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8643077 - - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:14:105 replace the note on 4 with LN and end the LN on 00:14:495 - - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:17:222 replace the note on 1 with LN and end the LN on 00:17:612 - - 수정완료! [Fix!]

Thank you for your feedback!

Last edited by Carol 2017-07-25T23:03:58+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Envory

Envory 2017-07-23T06:08:04+00:00

Marked! Sorry for delay

error_exe777

720 posts

Joined February 2016

error_exe777 2017-07-23T15:52:50+00:00

Hello! From my Mod queue

note: these are all suggestions. if i made a mistake or you disagree, do not apply it.

Easy

00:01:248 to 00:10:599 - you literally mapped the softer sounds as doubles, and the harder drums as singles. change them. if you can't understand my shitty descriptions lol then do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8664453 with the whole section.

00:13:716 - never put triples in an easy. make this a double

00:21:508 - ^^

00:22:287 - ^^

00:26:183 - ^^

00:13:716 to 00:26:183 - again with the doubles. please change this. it's kinda vital

00:10:599 this is the same sound as 00:10:891 . so why are they so drastically different? i recommend making them all doubles

no problems i could see

overall, note arrangement is great. just that problem in easy let you down. best of luck

Carol

444 posts

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Topic Starter

Carol 2017-07-24T01:01:31+00:00

OwenF04 wrote:
Hello! From my Mod queue

note: these are all suggestions. if i made a mistake or you disagree, do not apply it.

Easy
00:01:248 to 00:10:599 - you literally mapped the softer sounds as doubles, and the harder drums as singles. change them. if you can't understand my shitty descriptions lol then do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8664453 with the whole section.

00:13:716 - never put triples in an easy. make this a double

00:21:508 - ^^

00:22:287 - ^^

00:26:183 - ^^

00:13:716 to 00:26:183 - again with the doubles. please change this. it's kinda vital

Normal
00:10:599 this is the same sound as 00:10:891 . so why are they so drastically different? i recommend making them all doubles

Hard
no problems i could see

overall, note arrangement is great. just that problem in easy let you down. best of luck

Easy
□ 00:01:248 to 00:10:599 - you literally mapped the softer sounds as doubles, and the harder drums as singles. change them. if you can't understand my shitty descriptions lol then do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8664453 with the whole section. - 수정중.. [Editing..]
■ 00:13:716 - never put triples in an easy. make this a double - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:21:508 - ^^, 00:22:287 - ^^, 00:26:183 - ^^ - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:13:716 to 00:26:183 - again with the doubles. please change this. it's kinda vita - 수정완료! [Fix!]

Normal
■ 00:10:599 this is the same sound as 00:10:891 . so why are they so drastically different? i recommend making them all doubles - 수정완료! [Fix!]

thanks for mods!

Last edited by Carol 2017-07-26T06:20:14+00:00, edited 4 times in total.

Envory

Envory 2017-07-24T13:52:11+00:00

Hi Carol!
Here ur req

|1|2|3|4|

00:11:476 (11476|3,11476|1) - You have 3 stack notes like > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8671200 so move 1 note at col at col 2 to col 3 (recomended for NM diff)
00:11:963 - Add 1 note at col 2 for vocal like Hard diff as reference .. so make it match like other diff
00:12:937 (12937|1,12937|0,12937|3) - Delete 1 note at col 4 .. there just a vocal with low hit

00:11:963 (11963|0,11963|2,11963|1) - Aww i think if it place with 3 notes are too excessive if you pick her vocal .. so delete 2 notes at col 1 and 2
00:25:664 (25664|0) - until I have better pattern for that > 00:25:794 (25794|3,25794|1) - > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8671262

Ok Done!
GL~

Carol

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Topic Starter

Carol 2017-07-24T23:12:33+00:00

Envory wrote:
Hi Carol!
Here ur req

|1|2|3|4|

Normal
00:11:476 (11476|3,11476|1) - You have 3 stack notes like > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8671200 so move 1 note at col at col 2 to col 3 (recomended for NM diff)
00:11:963 - Add 1 note at col 2 for vocal like Hard diff as reference .. so make it match like other diff
00:12:937 (12937|1,12937|0,12937|3) - Delete 1 note at col 4 .. there just a vocal with low hit

Hard
00:11:963 (11963|0,11963|2,11963|1) - Aww i think if it place with 3 notes are too excessive if you pick her vocal .. so delete 2 notes at col 1 and 2
00:25:664 (25664|0) - until I have better pattern for that > 00:25:794 (25794|3,25794|1) - > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8671262

Ok Done!
GL~

Normal
■ 00:11:476 (11476|3,11476|1) - You have 3 stack notes like > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8671200 so move 1 note at col at col 2 to col 3 (recomended for NM diff) - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:11:963 - Add 1 note at col 2 for vocal like Hard diff as reference .. so make it match like other diff - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ (12937|1,12937|0,12937|3) - Delete 1 note at col 4 .. there just a vocal with low hit - 수정완료! [Fix!]

Hard
■ 00:11:963 (11963|0,11963|2,11963|1) - Aww i think if it place with 3 notes are too excessive if you pick her vocal .. so delete 2 notes at col 1 - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:25:664 (25664|0) - until I have better pattern for that > 00:25:794 (25794|3,25794|1) - > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8671262 - 수정완료! [Fix!]

Thanks for your mods !

Last edited by Carol 2017-07-25T23:01:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

tatatat

923 posts

Joined March 2015

tatatat 2017-07-25T04:31:56+00:00

soft-hitnormal.wav isn't audible. consider finding a better hitsound, or if you manually made it quieter your self, use the original. Just increasing the volume here isn't going to help much, since the hitsound is so quiet and there seems to be background noise at around the same volume as the actual hitsound. Not part of the ranking criteria, but its audio tracks are uneven, its louder in the right ear, and lasts longer in the right ear.
Easy:
00:00:664 (664|0,664|1,859|2,859|3,1248|0,1248|1) - remove one note from each of the groups of notes here, its too hard for an easy. Consider something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8676466
00:30:079 - the LN here should probably end at 00:30:372 -
Normal:
Consider mapping more of the percussion instead of adding extra notes to chords to increase the difficulty.
00:00:664 (664|2,664|1,859|1,859|2,1248|3,1248|0) - Change the pattern here to what the Easy was. See

I think it should be what the easy was because of the two chords one after another is awkward for the hands and the pattern in the easy difficulty alternated between hands for each group of objects, and the two whistles just don't have the same pitch so they should be in the same columns. The first whistle has a noticeably lower pitch than the second.
00:20:339 - there should probably be an extra note here
00:03:781 - The two key chord here seems unnecessary, otherwise the note at 00:06:898 - should also be a two key chord
00:04:170 - same as above
00:16:248 - same as above
00:16:638 - same as above
00:10:599 - The three key chord here seems unnecessary. There doesn't seem to be any noticeable increase in volume or the addition of an extra instrument.
00:11:183 - same as above
00:11:768 - same as above
00:21:508 - same as above
00:21:800 - same as above

For the three comments below see the screenshot
00:29:495 - Consider mapping the trumpet here as a LN instead of having a 3 key chord. the trumpet lasts until 00:29:690 -
00:29:787 - same as above. the trumpet lasts until 00:29:982 -
00:30:079 - if you map the trumpets talked about above as LNs, you'll probably want to remove a note from this chord and leave a gap in the same column as the LN at 00:29:787 - so there isn't only a 1/4th beat gap between two LNs in a normal difficulty

00:30:079 - end the LNs here at 00:30:372 -
Hard:
00:00:664 - move these two notes left one, the second whistle seems to have a higher pitch.
00:08:943 - place a note here?
00:10:794 - same as above.
00:11:086 - same as above
00:11:378 - same as above.
00:11:670 - same as above.
00:11:865 - same as above.

For the comments below see the screenshot at https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8676536 for a possible solution.
00:13:326 - the 4 key chord here seems to be very overboard/unnecessary.
00:13:424 - place a note here
00:13:521 - place a note here
00:13:618 - place a note here

00:18:196 - the two key chord here seems unnecessary
00:18:294 - place a note here
00:18:976 - this should probably only be one note leading up to the next percussion beat.
00:19:073 - same as above.
00:19:170 - there should definitely be a two key chord here, its the main percussion you've been mapping as a two key chord the entire map :p
00:19:365 - Consider removing a note here.
00:19:463 - place a note here
00:20:144 - Consider removing a note here.
00:20:534 - same as above
00:20:924 - same as above
00:21:313 - same as above
00:21:508 - same as above
00:21:800 - same as above
00:22:092 - same as above
00:21:703 - place a note here
00:21:898 - same as above
00:22:872 - place a two key chord here.
00:30:079 - end the LNs here at 00:30:372 -

Envory

Envory 2017-07-25T18:17:13+00:00

Please use Green color while accepting a modder suggestions
At many case red color are used to reject a modder suggestions
Thx.

-No Kudos-

Carol

444 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Carol 2017-07-25T23:05:23+00:00

Envory wrote:
Please use Green color while accepting a modder suggestions
At many case red color are used to reject a modder suggestions
Thx.

-No Kudos-

Ok, change !
thanks~!

Salty Mermaid

531 posts

Joined September 2016

Salty Mermaid 2017-07-26T02:19:07+00:00

Hi NM from my queue!

Using 0|1|2|3 for the columns

Easy diff looks completely fine to me.

00:22:287 (22287|0) - Is that Ln for the vocal? Because if yes, shouldn't it end at 00:22:677? You could do that and add a note in col 2 or
3 00:22:677. Or you could add another Ln instead of the note for that other sound (idk how to call it).
I really don't know what else to say on this diff.

00:05:242 (5242|0) - I can swear I hear a sound hear. You could add a note. Something like this could be great.
00:10:794 Why not adding a note here? It There's definitly a sound there. It would be more fun to play and would make a difference with the Normal diff at this part.
00:11:086 ^
00:11:378 ^
00:11:670 ^
00:25:794 to 00:26:183 There are sounds in 1/6 here. You could add them. Unless you intentionally didn't add them.

Honestly, your difficulties are great, so there's not much to say! Gl for the rank!

Carol

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Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Carol 2017-07-26T06:18:32+00:00

_Stronger_ wrote:
Hi NM from my queue!

Using 0|1|2|3 for the columns

Easy diff looks completely fine to me.

Normal
00:22:287 (22287|0) - Is that Ln for the vocal? Because if yes, shouldn't it end at 00:22:677? You could do that and add a note in col 2 or
3 00:22:677. Or you could add another Ln instead of the note for that other sound (idk how to call it).
I really don't know what else to say on this diff.

Hard
00:05:242 (5242|0) - I can swear I hear a sound hear. You could add a note. Something like this could be great.
00:10:794 Why not adding a note here? It There's definitly a sound there. It would be more fun to play and would make a difference with the Normal diff at this part.
00:11:086 ^
00:11:378 ^
00:11:670 ^
00:25:794 to 00:26:183 There are sounds in 1/6 here. You could add them. Unless you intentionally didn't add them.

Honestly, your difficulties are great, so there's not much to say! Gl for the rank!

Normal
■ 00:22:287 (22287|0) - Is that Ln for the vocal? Because if yes, shouldn't it end at 00:22:677? You could do that and add a note in col 2 or
3 00:22:677. Or you could add another Ln instead of the note for that other sound (idk how to call it). - 수정완료! [Fix!]

Hard
■ 00:05:242 (5242|0) - I can swear I hear a sound hear. You could add a note. Something like this could be great. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:10:794 Why not adding a note here? It There's definitly a sound there. It would be more fun to play and would make a difference with the Normal diff at this part. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:11:086 ^, 00:11:378 ^, 00:11:670 ^ - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:25:794 to 00:26:183 There are sounds in 1/6 here. You could add them. Unless you intentionally didn't add them. - 수정완료! [Fix!]

Thank you!

Last edited by Carol 2017-08-28T09:40:00+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Carol

444 posts

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Topic Starter

Carol 2017-07-26T06:56:43+00:00

tatatat wrote:
soft-hitnormal.wav isn't audible. consider finding a better hitsound, or if you manually made it quieter your self, use the original. Just increasing the volume here isn't going to help much, since the hitsound is so quiet and there seems to be background noise at around the same volume as the actual hitsound. Not part of the ranking criteria, but its audio tracks are uneven, its louder in the right ear, and lasts longer in the right ear.
Easy:
00:00:664 (664|0,664|1,859|2,859|3,1248|0,1248|1) - remove one note from each of the groups of notes here, its too hard for an easy. Consider something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8676466
00:30:079 - the LN here should probably end at 00:30:372 -
Normal:
Consider mapping more of the percussion instead of adding extra notes to chords to increase the difficulty.
00:00:664 (664|2,664|1,859|1,859|2,1248|3,1248|0) - Change the pattern here to what the Easy was. See I think it should be what the easy was because of the two chords one after another is awkward for the hands and the pattern in the easy difficulty alternated between hands for each group of objects, and the two whistles just don't have the same pitch so they should be in the same columns. The first whistle has a noticeably lower pitch than the second.
00:20:339 - there should probably be an extra note here
00:03:781 - The two key chord here seems unnecessary, otherwise the note at 00:06:898 - should also be a two key chord
00:04:170 - same as above
00:16:248 - same as above
00:16:638 - same as above
00:10:599 - The three key chord here seems unnecessary. There doesn't seem to be any noticeable increase in volume or the addition of an extra instrument.
00:11:183 - same as above
00:11:768 - same as above
00:21:508 - same as above
00:21:800 - same as above

For the three comments below see the screenshot
00:29:495 - Consider mapping the trumpet here as a LN instead of having a 3 key chord. the trumpet lasts until 00:29:690 -
00:29:787 - same as above. the trumpet lasts until 00:29:982 -
00:30:079 - if you map the trumpets talked about above as LNs, you'll probably want to remove a note from this chord and leave a gap in the same column as the LN at 00:29:787 - so there isn't only a 1/4th beat gap between two LNs in a normal difficulty

00:30:079 - end the LNs here at 00:30:372 -
Hard:
00:00:664 - move these two notes left one, the second whistle seems to have a higher pitch.
00:08:943 - place a note here?
00:10:794 - same as above.
00:11:086 - same as above
00:11:378 - same as above.
00:11:670 - same as above.
00:11:865 - same as above.

For the comments below see the screenshot at https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8676536 for a possible solution.
00:13:326 - the 4 key chord here seems to be very overboard/unnecessary.
00:13:424 - place a note here
00:13:521 - place a note here
00:13:618 - place a note here

00:18:196 - the two key chord here seems unnecessary
00:18:294 - place a note here
00:18:976 - this should probably only be one note leading up to the next percussion beat.
00:19:073 - same as above.
00:19:170 - there should definitely be a two key chord here, its the main percussion you've been mapping as a two key chord the entire map :p
00:19:365 - Consider removing a note here.
00:19:463 - place a note here
00:20:144 - Consider removing a note here.
00:20:534 - same as above
00:20:924 - same as above
00:21:313 - same as above
00:21:508 - same as above
00:21:800 - same as above
00:22:092 - same as above
00:21:703 - place a note here
00:21:898 - same as above
00:22:872 - place a two key chord here.
00:30:079 - end the LNs here at 00:30:372 -

General
■ soft-hitnormal.wav isn't audible. consider finding a better hitsound, or if you manually made it quieter your self, use the original. Just increasing the volume here isn't going to help much, since the hitsound is so quiet and there seems to be background noise at around the same volume as the actual hitsound. Not part of the ranking criteria, but its audio tracks are uneven, its louder in the right ear, and lasts longer in the right ear. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
(delete sofr-normal hitsound)

Easy
■ 00:00:664 (664|0,664|1,859|2,859|3,1248|0,1248|1) - remove one note from each of the groups of notes here, its too hard for an easy. Consider something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8676466 - 수정완료! [Fix!] (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8684516)
□ 00:30:079 - the LN here should probably end at 00:30:372 - 수정불가 [Non fix] (Length : 30.000 -> 29.805)

Normal
■ 00:00:664 (664|2,664|1,859|1,859|2,1248|3,1248|0) - Change the pattern here to what the Easy was. See Image I think it should be what the easy was because of the two chords one after another is awkward for the hands and the pattern in the easy difficulty alternated between hands for each group of objects, and the two whistles just don't have the same pitch so they should be in the same columns. The first whistle has a noticeably lower pitch than the second. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:20:339 - there should probably be an extra note here - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:03:781 - The two key chord here seems unnecessary, otherwise the note at 00:06:898 - should also be a two key chord - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:04:170, 00:16:248, 00:16:638 - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:10:599 - The three key chord here seems unnecessary. There doesn't seem to be any noticeable increase in volume or the addition of an extra instrument. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:11:183, 00:11:768, 00:21:508, 00:21:800 - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:29:495 - Consider mapping the trumpet here as a LN instead of having a 3 key chord. the trumpet lasts until 00:29:690 - ,00:29:787 - same as above. the trumpet lasts until 00:29:982 - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:30:079 - if you map the trumpets talked about above as LNs, you'll probably want to remove a note from this chord and leave a gap in the sam e column as the LN at 00:29:787 - so there isn't only a 1/4th beat gap between two LNs in a normal difficulty - 수정완료! [Fix!]
□ 00:30:079 - end the LNs here at 00:30:372 - 수정불가 [Non fix] (Length : 30.000 -> 29.805)

Hard
■ 00:00:664 - move these two notes left one, the second whistle seems to have a higher pitch. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
□ 00:08:943 - place a note here? - 수정불가 [Non fix]
■ 00:10:794 - same as above, 00:11:086 - same as above, 00:11:378 - same as above, 00:11:670 - same as above. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
□ 00:11:865 - same as above. - 수정불가 [Non fix]
■ 00:13:326 - the 4 key chord here seems to be very overboard/unnecessary. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:13:424 - place a note here, 00:13:521 - place a note here, 00:13:618 - place a note here - 수정완료! [Fix!]
□ 00:18:196 - the two key chord here seems unnecessary - 수정불가 [Non fix]
□ 00:18:294 - place a note here - 수정불가 [Non fix]
■ 00:18:976 - this should probably only be one note leading up to the next percussion beat. - 수정완료! [Fix!](https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8685010)
■ 00:19:073 - same as above. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:19:170 - there should definitely be a two key chord here, its the main percussion you've been mapping as a two key chord the entire map :p - 수정완료! [Fix!]
□ 00:19:365 - Consider removing a note here, 00:19:463 - place a note here, 00:20:144 - Consider removing a note here, 00:20:534 - same as above
, 00:20:924 - same as above, 00:21:313 - same as above, 00:21:508 - same as above, 00:21:800 - same as above, 00:22:092 - same as above, 00:21:703 - place a note here, 00:21:898 - same as above - 수정불가 [Non fix]
■ 00:21:898 - same as above - 수정완료! [Fix!] (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8685032)
□ 00:30:079 - end the LNs here at 00:30:372 - 수정불가 [Non fix] (Length : 30.000 -> 29.805)

Oh, thanks for your mod!!

thank you~!

KcHecKa

280 posts

Joined June 2014

KcHecKa 2017-07-26T18:22:51+00:00

nice background
such a short song too haha

Hard:
00:11:768 (11768|2,11768|3,11963|1,11963|0) - Im hearing a sound between these two notes, maybe you could add one ..?

also 00:11:768 (11768|3,11768|2,11963|0,11963|1,12157|3,12450|2,12742|1,12937|0) -
not sure how i feel about mapping a sound to the end of LNs, i mean, i guess it could be allowed,? but this is really something only found in convert maps -.-

Normal:
00:25:404 (25404|0,25404|2,25599|3,25794|2,25794|1,25989|0,26183|2,26183|3) - i dont think this is acceptable. hahaha no way in not ever.
please fix

Easy:
looks easy B)

nice mapset

Carol

444 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Carol 2017-07-27T01:38:32+00:00

KcHecKa wrote:
nice background
such a short song too haha

Hard:
00:11:768 (11768|2,11768|3,11963|1,11963|0) - Im hearing a sound between these two notes, maybe you could add one ..?

also 00:11:768 (11768|3,11768|2,11963|0,11963|1,12157|3,12450|2,12742|1,12937|0) -
not sure how i feel about mapping a sound to the end of LNs, i mean, i guess it could be allowed,? but this is really something only found in convert maps -.-

Normal:
00:25:404 (25404|0,25404|2,25599|3,25794|2,25794|1,25989|0,26183|2,26183|3) - i dont think this is acceptable. hahaha no way in not ever.
please fix

Easy:
looks easy B)

nice mapset

Hard
■ 00:11:768 (11768|2,11768|3,11963|1,11963|0) - Im hearing a sound between these two notes, maybe you could add one ..? - 수정완료! [Fix!] (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8691039)
■ also 00:11:768 (11768|3,11768|2,11963|0,11963|1,12157|3,12450|2,12742|1,12937|0) -
not sure how i feel about mapping a sound to the end of LNs, i mean, i guess it could be allowed,? but this is really something only found in convert maps -.- - 수정완료! [Fix!]

Normal
■ 00:25:404 (25404|0,25404|2,25599|3,25794|2,25794|1,25989|0,26183|2,26183|3) - i dont think this is acceptable. hahaha no way in not ever.
please fix - 수정완료! [Fix!] (Normal: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8691030 / Hard: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8691039)

Thanks you!

Last edited by Carol 2017-08-18T08:37:22+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

dkingo

553 posts

Joined June 2016

dkingo 2017-07-28T12:58:51+00:00

Hi, NM from my queue

>.<

Easy

Well it's very very solid pattern... But there are problems with sound following
00:10:891 - 00:11:476 - 00:12:547 - 00:13:326 - 00:27:352 - 00:28:131 - 00:28:911 - Add a note for the drum
00:20:339 - I can't get why you start using double for this sound, cuz in the previous part it is single note only
00:21:898 (21898|2) - Move to the blue line below, the drum sound is there
00:30:079 (30079|3) - The sound ends at 00:30:274 -

Normal

00:03:586 (3586|2,3586|1,3976|2,3976|1,4365|1,4365|2) - I think you should rearrange the pattern a bit, nominators don't like that kind of repetitive chords
00:08:651 (8651|2,8651|0,9040|0,9040|2,9430|2,9430|0) - Same as above
00:16:053 (16053|0,16053|3,16443|3,16443|0,16833|0,16833|3) - ^^
00:30:079 (30079|0,30079|1) - Same as diff, the song ends earlier than what you've mapped

Hard

This diff is well done I think, just some suggestions here
00:14:105 - Add a note for the drum
00:21:118 (21118|3) - Move to col 3 and 00:21:313 (21313|0) - move to col 2, you will see there isn't jack hammer anymore
00:25:015 (25015|3) - Move to col 2 and 00:25:209 (25209|1) - to col 3
00:30:079 (30079|2,30079|3) - Same as the other diffs

Good luck with rank!

Carol

444 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Carol 2017-07-30T04:00:30+00:00

dkingo wrote:
Hi, NM from my queue
>.<
Easy
Well it's very very solid pattern... But there are problems with sound following
00:10:891 - 00:11:476 - 00:12:547 - 00:13:326 - 00:27:352 - 00:28:131 - 00:28:911 - Add a note for the drum
00:20:339 - I can't get why you start using double for this sound, cuz in the previous part it is single note only
00:21:898 (21898|2) - Move to the blue line below, the drum sound is there
00:30:079 (30079|3) - The sound ends at 00:30:274 -
Normal
00:03:586 (3586|2,3586|1,3976|2,3976|1,4365|1,4365|2) - I think you should rearrange the pattern a bit, nominators don't like that kind of repetitive chords
00:08:651 (8651|2,8651|0,9040|0,9040|2,9430|2,9430|0) - Same as above
00:16:053 (16053|0,16053|3,16443|3,16443|0,16833|0,16833|3) - ^^
00:30:079 (30079|0,30079|1) - Same as diff, the song ends earlier than what you've mapped
Hard
This diff is well done I think, just some suggestions here
00:14:105 - Add a note for the drum
00:21:118 (21118|3) - Move to col 3 and 00:21:313 (21313|0) - move to col 2, you will see there isn't jack hammer anymore
00:25:015 (25015|3) - Move to col 2 and 00:25:209 (25209|1) - to col 3

00:30:079 (30079|2,30079|3) - Same as the other diffs
Good luck with rank!

Easy
■ 00:10:891 - 00:11:476 - 00:12:547 - 00:13:326 - 00:27:352 - 00:28:131 - 00:28:911 - Add a note for the drum - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:20:339 - I can't get why you start using double for this sound, cuz in the previous part it is single note only - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:21:898 (21898|2) - Move to the blue line below, the drum sound is there - 수정완료! [Fix!]
□ 00:30:079 (30079|3) - The sound ends at 00:30:274 - 수정불가 [Non fix] (Drain : 30.000 -> 29.805)

Normal
■ 00:03:586 (3586|2,3586|1,3976|2,3976|1,4365|1,4365|2) - I think you should rearrange the pattern a bit, nominators don't like that kind of repetitive chords - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:08:651 (8651|2,8651|0,9040|0,9040|2,9430|2,9430|0) - Same as above - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:16:053 (16053|0,16053|3,16443|3,16443|0,16833|0,16833|3) - ^^ - 수정완료! [Fix!]
□ 00:30:079 (30079|0,30079|1) - Same as diff, the song ends earlier than what you've mapped - 수정불가 [Non fix] (Drain : 30.000 -> 29.805)

Hard
■ 00:14:105 - Add a note for the drum - 수정불가 [Non fix]
■ 00:21:118 (21118|3) - Move to col 3 and 00:21:313 (21313|0) - move to col 2, you will see there isn't jack hammer anymore - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ 00:25:015 (25015|3) - Move to col 2 and 00:25:209 (25209|1) - to col 3 - 수정완료! [Fix!]
□ 00:30:079 (30079|2,30079|3) - Same as the other diffs - 수정불가 [Non fix] (Drain : 30.000 -> 29.805)

Thanks!

Last edited by Carol 2017-08-17T09:37:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Unpredictable

Beatmap Nominator

383 posts

Joined December 2015

Unpredictable 2017-08-03T20:43:07+00:00

let's give this a go >:]

1|2|3|4

Easy

- 00:14:885 (14885|2,15664|2) - I would try to avoid something like this in an Easy diff. To fix this, I would move 00:15:664 (15664|2) - this to column 2 00:16:443 (16443|1) - , this to column 3, 00:17:222 (17222|2) - this to column 3, and 00:17:612 (17612|1) - this to column 3.
- 00:29:495 (29495|1) - what about moving this to column 4? I think it's better it'd be easier to avoid something like 00:29:105 (29105|1,29495|1) - this.

- 00:27:352 (27352|1,27352|3) - I think it would better if you put these on columns 1 and 3 and 00:27:547 (27547|2,27547|0) - this on columns 2 and 4. I think it would be better to avoid the 00:26:183 (26183|3) - LN going into 00:27:352 (27352|3) - this right away when you have three other columns open

- 00:02:222 (2222|3,2320|2,2417|0,2417|1,2515|2,2612|1,2709|0,2807|1,2807|2,3002|3) - instead of this, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8755167 ? imo this plays a lot better than what you have now
- 00:05:144 (5144|1,5144|2,5242|3,5339|2,5437|1,5534|0,5534|3,5631|1,5729|2,5826|1,5924|2,5924|0) - also this part, what about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8755228 ?
- 00:10:015 (10015|0,10015|1,10112|1,10112|0) - oooooh i heavily disagree with this. having notes before LNs that come in on a 1/4 is pretty hard for inexperienced players imo. definitely recommend moving this to columns 3 and 4.
- 00:13:716 (13716|1) - would move this to column 4 to avoid stack
- 00:14:690 (14690|3,14787|2,14885|1,14885|0,14982|2,15079|1,15177|0,15274|3,15274|1) - instead of this, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8755253 ?gets rid of the unnecessary stacks imo and weird patterning
- 00:23:261 (23261|1,23456|1,23651|1,23846|1) - this stack of 4 is super unnecessary. would move 00:23:651 (23651|1) - this to column 4 to not have this problem.

Alright, enjoy.

Carol

444 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Carol 2017-08-12T01:49:01+00:00

Unpredictable wrote:
let's give this a go >:]

1|2|3|4

Easy
- 00:14:885 (14885|2,15664|2) - I would try to avoid something like this in an Easy diff. To fix this, I would move 00:15:664 (15664|2) - this to column 2 00:16:443 (16443|1) - , this to column 3, 00:17:222 (17222|2) - this to column 3, and 00:17:612 (17612|1) - this to column 3.
- 00:29:495 (29495|1) - what about moving this to column 4? I think it's better it'd be easier to avoid something like 00:29:105 (29105|1,29495|1) - this.

Normal
- 00:27:352 (27352|1,27352|3) - I think it would better if you put these on columns 1 and 3 and 00:27:547 (27547|2,27547|0) - this on columns 2 and 4. I think it would be better to avoid the 00:26:183 (26183|3) - LN going into 00:27:352 (27352|3) - this right away when you have three other columns open

Hard
- 00:02:222 (2222|3,2320|2,2417|0,2417|1,2515|2,2612|1,2709|0,2807|1,2807|2,3002|3) - instead of this, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8755167 ? imo this plays a lot better than what you have now
- 00:05:144 (5144|1,5144|2,5242|3,5339|2,5437|1,5534|0,5534|3,5631|1,5729|2,5826|1,5924|2,5924|0) - also this part, what about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8755228 ?
- 00:10:015 (10015|0,10015|1,10112|1,10112|0) - oooooh i heavily disagree with this. having notes before LNs that come in on a 1/4 is pretty hard for inexperienced players imo. definitely recommend moving this to columns 3 and 4.
- 00:13:716 (13716|1) - would move this to column 4 to avoid stack
- 00:14:690 (14690|3,14787|2,14885|1,14885|0,14982|2,15079|1,15177|0,15274|3,15274|1) - instead of this, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8755253 ?gets rid of the unnecessary stacks imo and weird patterning
- 00:23:261 (23261|1,23456|1,23651|1,23846|1) - this stack of 4 is super unnecessary. would move 00:23:651 (23651|1) - this to column 4 to not have this problem.

Alright, enjoy.

Easy
■ - 00:14:885 (14885|2,15664|2) - I would try to avoid something like this in an Easy diff. To fix this, I would move 00:15:664 (15664|2) - this to column 2 00:16:443 (16443|1) - , this to column 3, 00:17:222 (17222|2) - this to column 3, and 00:17:612 (17612|1) - this to column 3. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ - 00:29:495 (29495|1) - what about moving this to column 4? I think it's better it'd be easier to avoid something like 00:29:105 (29105|1,29495|1) - this. - 수정완료! [Fix!]

Normal
■ - 00:27:352 (27352|1,27352|3) - I think it would better if you put these on columns 1 and 3 and 00:27:547 (27547|2,27547|0) - this on columns 2 and 4. I think it would be better to avoid the 00:26:183 (26183|3) - LN going into 00:27:352 (27352|3) - this right away when you have three other columns open - 수정완료! [Fix!]

Hard
■ - 00:02:222 (2222|3,2320|2,2417|0,2417|1,2515|2,2612|1,2709|0,2807|1,2807|2,3002|3) - instead of this, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8755167 ? imo this plays a lot better than what you have now - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ - 00:05:144 (5144|1,5144|2,5242|3,5339|2,5437|1,5534|0,5534|3,5631|1,5729|2,5826|1,5924|2,5924|0) - also this part, what about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8755228 ? - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ - 00:10:015 (10015|0,10015|1,10112|1,10112|0) - oooooh i heavily disagree with this. having notes before LNs that come in on a 1/4 is pretty hard for inexperienced players imo. definitely recommend moving this to columns 3 and 4. - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ - 00:13:716 (13716|1) - would move this to column 4 to avoid stack - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ - 00:14:690 (14690|3,14787|2,14885|1,14885|0,14982|2,15079|1,15177|0,15274|3,15274|1) - instead of this, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8755253 ?gets rid of the unnecessary stacks imo and weird patterning - 수정완료! [Fix!]
■ - 00:23:261 (23261|1,23456|1,23651|1,23846|1) - this stack of 4 is super unnecessary. would move 00:23:651 (23651|1) - this to column 4 to not have this problem. - 수정완료! [Fix!]

All Fixed !
Thanks for mod!

FadillSan

775 posts

Joined August 2015

FadillSan 2017-08-15T12:02:47+00:00

Hello~ NM from my queue~

Free Reject

00:12:157 (12157|3,12157|2,12157|0) - should be a double
00:12:547 - I can't see note here~ this should be triple
00:13:131 (13131|2) - This LN shoud be star at 00:13:326 -
00:13:131 - and add note here
00:19:365 (19365|1) - move this to 00:19:463 -

00:19:365 (19365|3,19365|2) - change this to single, and
00:19:463 - add double here
00:12:547 - add note here~

Good Luck~ :3

Carol

444 posts

Joined November 2015

Topic Starter

Carol 2017-08-15T13:38:48+00:00

FadillSan wrote:
Hello~ NM from my queue~

Free Reject

Normal
00:12:157 (12157|3,12157|2,12157|0) - should be a double
00:12:547 - I can't see note here~ this should be triple
00:13:131 (13131|2) - This LN shoud be star at 00:13:326 -
00:13:131 - and add note here
00:19:365 (19365|1) - move this to 00:19:463 -
Hard
00:19:365 (19365|3,19365|2) - change this to single, and
00:19:463 - add double here
00:12:547 - add note here~
Good Luck~ :3