soft-hitnormal.wav isn't audible. consider finding a better hitsound, or if you manually made it quieter your self, use the original. Just increasing the volume here isn't going to help much, since the hitsound is so quiet and there seems to be background noise at around the same volume as the actual hitsound. Not part of the ranking criteria, but its audio tracks are uneven, its louder in the right ear, and lasts longer in the right ear.
Easy:00:00:664 (664|0,664|1,859|2,859|3,1248|0,1248|1) - remove one note from each of the groups of notes here, its too hard for an easy. Consider something like
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/867646600:30:079 - the LN here should probably end at 00:30:372 -
Normal:Consider mapping more of the percussion instead of adding extra notes to chords to increase the difficulty.
00:00:664 (664|2,664|1,859|1,859|2,1248|3,1248|0) - Change the pattern here to what the Easy was. See
I think it should be what the easy was because of the two chords one after another is awkward for the hands and the pattern in the easy difficulty alternated between hands for each group of objects, and the two whistles just don't have the same pitch so they should be in the same columns. The first whistle has a noticeably lower pitch than the second.
00:20:339 - there should probably be an extra note here
00:03:781 - The two key chord here seems unnecessary, otherwise the note at 00:06:898 - should also be a two key chord
00:04:170 - same as above
00:16:248 - same as above
00:16:638 - same as above
00:10:599 - The three key chord here seems unnecessary. There doesn't seem to be any noticeable increase in volume or the addition of an extra instrument.
00:11:183 - same as above
00:11:768 - same as above
00:21:508 - same as above
00:21:800 - same as above
For the three comments below see the
screenshot00:29:495 - Consider mapping the trumpet here as a LN instead of having a 3 key chord. the trumpet lasts until 00:29:690 -
00:29:787 - same as above. the trumpet lasts until 00:29:982 -
00:30:079 - if you map the trumpets talked about above as LNs, you'll probably want to remove a note from this chord and leave a gap in the same column as the LN at 00:29:787 - so there isn't only a 1/4th beat gap between two LNs in a normal difficulty
00:30:079 - end the LNs here at 00:30:372 -
Hard:00:00:664 - move these two notes left one, the second whistle seems to have a higher pitch.
00:08:943 - place a note here?
00:10:794 - same as above.
00:11:086 - same as above
00:11:378 - same as above.
00:11:670 - same as above.
00:11:865 - same as above.
For the comments below see the screenshot at
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8676536 for a possible solution.
00:13:326 - the 4 key chord here seems to be very overboard/unnecessary.
00:13:424 - place a note here
00:13:521 - place a note here
00:13:618 - place a note here
00:18:196 - the two key chord here seems unnecessary
00:18:294 - place a note here
00:18:976 - this should probably only be one note leading up to the next percussion beat.
00:19:073 - same as above.
00:19:170 - there should definitely be a two key chord here, its the main percussion you've been mapping as a two key chord the entire map :p
00:19:365 - Consider removing a note here.
00:19:463 - place a note here
00:20:144 - Consider removing a note here.
00:20:534 - same as above
00:20:924 - same as above
00:21:313 - same as above
00:21:508 - same as above
00:21:800 - same as above
00:22:092 - same as above
00:21:703 - place a note here
00:21:898 - same as above
00:22:872 - place a two key chord here.
00:30:079 - end the LNs here at 00:30:372 -
