Gekidan Hitotose - a e i u e o ao!! [Osu|Taiko]

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MisakiAN
some NC mod

[Hard]
00:05:603 (5) - new combo
00:07:258 (6) - ^
00:08:913 (2) - ^
00:09:948 (1) - ^
00:14:706 (7) - ^
00:18:535 (6) - ^
00:23:603 (2) - ^
00:27:120 (2) - ^
00:28:775 (8) - ^
00:30:844 (6) - ^
00:32:500 (1) - ^
00:33:741 (4) - ^
00:44:086 (3) - ^
00:49:051 (8) - mungkin New combo :\
00:52:362 (8) - ^
00:55:672 (6) - ^
00:56:086 (1) - ^
00:57:327 (5) - ^
00:58:982 (8) - ^
01:00:638 (4) - ^
01:07:258 (5) - ^
01:10:155 (2) - ^
01:10:982 (1) - ^
01:11:810 (4) - ^
01:13:879 (7) - ^
01:17:189 (5) - ^
01:19:258 (6) - ^
01:22:569 (6) - ^

00:06:017 (1) - delete New Combo
00:08:706 (1) - ^
00:14:913 (1) - ^
00:22:982 (1) - ^
00:26:913 (1) - ^
00:29:189 (1) - ^
00:32:086 (4) - ^
01:00:224 (1) - ^
00:57:741 (1) - ^
01:11:396 (3) - ^
01:10:569 (1) - ^

banyak yg harus di fix sih :'u
tapi ini khusus mod NC :'u
sorry,modnya saya singkat2 :'u

Good Luck~
Agent_James
Hard
00:13:879 (4) - Sv changes is not advised in hard diff

00:10:982 (1,2) - Blanket a bit off

00:17:603 (3) - This 3 overlaps with part of the slider's body, looks bad imo

00:22:982 (8) - I don't know why this is a 1/1 slider, you ignored a strong sound (Lyrics: Demo nande) lol. You should keep the 1/2 slider followed with a circle on the white tick, then 1 circle on the blue tick. https://puu.sh/vWUy4/a83d2f7bf8.jpg

00:30:431 (5,6) - Spacing a bit too far for hard

00:31:465 (2) - overlap with 00:32:086 (4) - 's tail?

00:34:982 (7) - It's better if this is a slider.

00:35:603 (2) - There should be a slider starting here since its a strong sound on white tick. Bcause strong sound=slider head, weaker sound=slider end

00:42:017 (2,4) - I don't like the fact that these repeat twice. Repeat once and add circle in white tick

00:43:258 (4) - same

00:47:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Diff spike for hard.

00:54:017 (1) - looks bad, normal curved works better imo

01:02:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - uncomfortable movement, if you ctrl-g 01:02:293 (1) - you would get a circular flow, tho maybe move 01:01:879 (10) - closer

01:05:603 (1) - why not copy paste sliders from 01:04:569 (2) - ?

01:05:603 (1,2) - Really weird movement doing something like this would be better https://puu.sh/vWU2c/be9ed34734.jpg (rotate anti clockwise, placing on top of 01:07:258 (5) - 's head)

01:07:258 (5) - NC?

01:07:258 (5,6,7,8) - Blanketing is off, this extended slider thing i'm not really a fan of, especially the shape. How bout this? https://puu.sh/vWUdl/ac71f297f0.jpg

01:12:534 (2,3,4,5,6) - Time distance equality broo, 01:12:534 (2,3,4) - has the same spacing with 01:13:465 (5,6) - even tho 2,3,4 has 1/2 gap and 5,6 have 1/4.

01:15:534 (1) - Blanket with 01:14:603 (2) - sabi kali

01:17:603 (2) - This overlaps with the previous combo, try to move out your combos a bit.

01:17:189 (1,2) - angle can be done more neatly

01:20:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why isn't this the same with 00:18:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - they're the same composition


Light Insane
00:03:327 (8) - Make this a perfect monstrata triangle by copying the previous 2 circles, rotating them 120 degrees, placing it on top of the previous circles, and deleting the unneeded circle.

00:03:948 (1) - Unnecessary custom slider, just use the normal one unless you want to blanket.

00:07:258 (12) - dont forget to nc bro

00:08:396 (6) - don't think this needs a triple.

00:10:569 (4,5,6,7) - This doesnt quite follow rhythm. also nc here 00:11:396 (8) -

00:15:534 (9) - why not make this normal curved reverse? looks out of place, at least copy paste from your previous sliders

00:20:086 (1) - Dont extend this.

00:22:569 (8) - Again, unnecessary custom slider.

00:23:396 (3) - ewww bagusan dikit napa wkwk.

00:25:051 (9,10) - Spacing emphasis? Maybe place 00:25:051 (9) - at x=308 y=268

00:27:120 (6) - nccc

00:30:431 (6) - again spacing emphasis?

00:40:362 (2,3,4) - Fix placement, looks messy currently

00:42:431 (1) - Why not make this a curved slider like the next one?

00:42:844 (2,3) - Moves bad, looks bad, why not something like this? https://puu.sh/vWV7j/85f7fe4919.jpg

00:44:706 (5,6) - No need for triple

00:44:913 (7) - Unnecessary custom slider again.

00:45:534 (1,2,3,4) - Try to not make your sliders cross path with the precious combo/sliders. Go in a different direction or change the previous slider.

00:52:362 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make this a 1/2 jump to follow the vocal (a i u e o) because you clearly did it in 00:02:293 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -

01:04:569 (7,8,9,10) - This doesnt follow rhythm

01:05:603 (1,2,3) - This sounds similar like the previous one but you mapped it differently. Previous combo was 1/4 sliders but this one is 1/2 sliders, even tho the composition is the same. I suggest making the previous 1/2 as well

01:08:086 (7) - Part of it overlap with the previous slider's body, start at the end of the slider is better.

That's it. Oh yeah, add kiai time and credit frey in your bm post and add his name to the tags.


Frey's Insane
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Absolutely perfect i cant find anything.




Tadinya sih lu minta NM gw tapi kalo gw jadiin m4m mau gk? map gw yg ini lho https://osu.ppy.sh/s/609269 2 diff aja bebas sama kaya gw thanks.
Surono
bezok gedhe mau jadhi apa hayo??!??!
kalau gak.. pake sarung, peci, jangan lupa ngopi dan smuk wit.

tu tagsnya error, bukan unicode jepang lagi. es deh~ https://puu.sh/vYqo6/c836f62aef.png
umur submitnya blom tuwek dah nyari bi en kekekekee, Ganba Tea ya buat ujiannya juag~
Topic Starter
Uta

Surono wrote:

bezok gedhe mau jadhi apa hayo??!??!
kalau gak.. pake sarung, peci, jangan lupa ngopi dan smuk wit.

tu tagsnya error, bukan unicode jepang lagi. es deh~ https://puu.sh/vYqo6/c836f62aef.png
umur submitnya blom tuwek dah nyari bi en kekekekee, Ganba Tea ya buat ujiannya juag~
Thank u bapak kost
Neutral
00:18:534 Make this a stream the way it is currently is kind of awkward to play especially with the random pause in between the notes
00:24:224 Not sure why you increased the distance from the slider here, it seems kind of random the song didnt really change and there wasnt a new combo.
00:55:672 Move this slider more to the right to be more in between the previous slider and the slider after it, because the jump to the slider after seems unreasonably big
00:56:086 I wouldn't start a new combo here, keep it the same combo as the previous slider
00:58:362 (6,7,8) - These circles seem like they should have been an equal distance apart since nothing in the song really warrants them to be different distances
01:02:706 Maybe move this circle away from under the slider, just seems like awkward placement

hope this goes for ranked i like the map :D
Surono
nih signature timingnya
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atau gak copaste dari diff taiko ku

http://puu.sh/wa81A/36b194a175.zip Muzukashii & Oni
-[Hotaru]-
whoaa moe songs owo
good luck with this >w<)b
Topic Starter
Uta

-[Hotaru]- wrote:

whoaa moe songs owo
good luck with this >w<)b
Thank you :D
-Keitaro
eN eM boi

[Hard]

An ideal setup for a Hard difficulty would be:
HP Drain: 5+
Circle Size: 4 or 5
Approach rate: 5+
Overall Difficulty: 5+
00:04:775 (3,4,1) - probaly doesnt flow good imo, something liek dis
00:07:672 (5,6,7) - not really good at aesthetic imo, also the flow, example
00:08:913 (1,2) - this looks like a 1/2 couse of 00:08:706 (8,1) - or maybe 00:08:706 (8,1) - this looks like a 1/4 cos other jump
00:09:741 (3) - kebawah dikit untuk circular flow
00:09:741 (3,1,2) - same spacing plz
00:13:879 (4,5) - same, this looks like your 1/4, plz give more space
00:15:534 (5) - a high chance of missread, lagian pitchnya sama, volnya sama, kenapa harus naekin SV?
00:18:535 (1,2,3) - beri sedikit space biar keliatan bagus.
00:20:086 (1,2) - dibuat mirip aja.
00:26:913 (4,1) - same like above and possible blanket of 00:27:120 (1) - with 00:26:293 (3) - xd
00:29:810 (3) - ke kiri dan sedikit kebawah untuk blanket
00:32:086 (4,1) - blanket ea
00:39:120 (1,2) - do something like 00:39:948 (1,2) - 00:40:775 (1,2) - for pattern consistency
00:42:844 (4) - ini 1/3 kayaknya mas
00:46:879 (4,5) - fix circular flow
00:54:638 (2,3,4) - fix triangle xd
00:56:913 (3,4,1) - same spacing, coz same pitch.
00:58:362 (6,7,8) - ini pitch making tinggi, tapi spacing makin rendah, seengaknya buat spacingnya sama, ataupun buat spacing makin lama makin tinggi.
01:00:638 (7,10) - similliar probaly better xd
01:02:706 (2) - well overlap + same as above
01:18:017 (1) - too curvy imo
01:19:672 (2,4) - possible blanket

satu diff aja ya xd
nayarii
Frey's Insane

00:01:879 (2) - useless to curve here since its barely noticable (note that all the useless curves mentioned are all my opinion)
00:03:948 (1) - this circle has the same spacing as 00:07:672 (2) its just imo not obligated to change
00:41:603 (1,2,3) - i feel like these should be clickable
00:42:844 (1,2,3) - ^
00:33:741 (1) - useless curve
00:34:569 (3) - same here
00:35:810 (3) - ^
00:36:224 (1) - ^
00:37:465 (1,2,3) - this should be attached to the slider since every other triple was attached to the sliders even though its not a triple maybe make it a stream idk
00:39:948 (1) - useless curve
00:40:775 (4) - ^
00:41:603 (1,2,3) - should be clickable and the other 2 following too
00:47:706 - ignoring a sound here you should map it since u mapped it here 00:46:879 (7) -
01:09:741 (3,4,5,6) - bad flow this should start the other way
01:22:569 (1,2,3) - clickableee maybe?

In general good map, just make sure to check the useless curves because theres a lot i got lazy to repeat you can judge by yourself

ill mod only one since i only have one difficulty for M4M thanks !
Frey

Agent_James wrote:

Frey's Insane
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Absolutely perfect i cant find anything.

thx

GabyPichu wrote:

Frey's Insane

00:01:879 (2) - useless to curve here since its barely noticable (note that all the useless curves mentioned are all my opinion) I don't want to change it But I am curious that, what is useful in return?
00:03:948 (1) - this circle has the same spacing as 00:07:672 (2) its just imo not obligated to change actually I guess ppl will be easy to react cuz of the approaching circle.
00:41:603 (1,2,3) - i feel like these should be clickable too hard to click those 1/3 circles...
00:42:844 (1,2,3) - ^
00:33:741 (1) - useless curve
00:34:569 (3) - same here
00:35:810 (3) - ^
00:36:224 (1) - ^ ...sorry but still I don't want to change them, cuz I don't know how it could be more useful
00:37:465 (1,2,3) - this should be attached to the slider since every other triple was attached to the sliders even though its not a triple maybe make it a stream idkI feel it hard for every time I played a triple attached a slider.. cuz they look like 4 circles. That's why I made them apart.
00:39:948 (1) - useless curve
00:40:775 (4) - ^ same as above.
00:41:603 (1,2,3) - should be clickable and the other 2 following too the same
00:47:706 - ignoring a sound here you should map it since u mapped it here 00:46:879 (7) - seems nice but where I should put it...ummm.
01:09:741 (3,4,5,6) - bad flow this should start the other way ok
01:22:569 (1,2,3) - clickableee maybe? the same as above

In general good map, just make sure to check the useless curves because theres a lot i got lazy to repeat you can judge by yourself . _. ok...

ill mod only one since i only have one difficulty for M4M thanks !
Thanks for your modding! :)
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Title:A E I U E O AO!!
TitleUnicode:あ・え・い・う・え・お・あお!!
Artist:Gekidan Hitotose
ArtistUnicode:劇団ひととせ
Creator:Uta
Version:Frey's Insane
Source:ひなこのーと
Tags:Opening Hinako Note 桜木ひな子 Sakuragi M・A・O 市道真央 Ichimichi Mao 夏川くいな Natsukawa Kuina 富田美憂 Tomita Miyu 柊 真雪 Hiiragi Mayuki 小倉唯 Ogura Yui 萩野千秋 Hagino Chiaki 東城日沙子 Hisako Tojo 中島ゆあ Nakajima Yua 高野麻里佳 Kouno Marika
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Topic Starter
Uta
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Frey wrote:

Agent_James wrote:

Frey's Insane
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Absolutely perfect i cant find anything.

thx

GabyPichu wrote:

Frey's Insane

00:01:879 (2) - useless to curve here since its barely noticable (note that all the useless curves mentioned are all my opinion) I don't want to change it But I am curious that, what is useful in return?
00:03:948 (1) - this circle has the same spacing as 00:07:672 (2) its just imo not obligated to change actually I guess ppl will be easy to react cuz of the approaching circle.
00:41:603 (1,2,3) - i feel like these should be clickable too hard to click those 1/3 circles...
00:42:844 (1,2,3) - ^
00:33:741 (1) - useless curve
00:34:569 (3) - same here
00:35:810 (3) - ^
00:36:224 (1) - ^ ...sorry but still I don't want to change them, cuz I don't know how it could be more useful
00:37:465 (1,2,3) - this should be attached to the slider since every other triple was attached to the sliders even though its not a triple maybe make it a stream idkI feel it hard for every time I played a triple attached a slider.. cuz they look like 4 circles. That's why I made them apart.
00:39:948 (1) - useless curve
00:40:775 (4) - ^ same as above.
00:41:603 (1,2,3) - should be clickable and the other 2 following too the same
00:47:706 - ignoring a sound here you should map it since u mapped it here 00:46:879 (7) - seems nice but where I should put it...ummm.
01:09:741 (3,4,5,6) - bad flow this should start the other way ok
01:22:569 (1,2,3) - clickableee maybe? the same as above

In general good map, just make sure to check the useless curves because theres a lot i got lazy to repeat you can judge by yourself . _. ok...

ill mod only one since i only have one difficulty for M4M thanks !
Thanks for your modding! :)
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TitleUnicode:あ・え・い・う・え・お・あお!!
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Tags:Opening Hinako Note 桜木ひな子 Sakuragi M・A・O 市道真央 Ichimichi Mao 夏川くいな Natsukawa Kuina 富田美憂 Tomita Miyu 柊 真雪 Hiiragi Mayuki 小倉唯 Ogura Yui 萩野千秋 Hagino Chiaki 東城日沙子 Hisako Tojo 中島ゆあ Nakajima Yua 高野麻里佳 Kouno Marika
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Updated
Agent_James
Hard

00:07:672 (5,2) - Better to stack these to for aesthetic

00:12:638 (1) - Ni slider harusnya stop di blue tick, lanjut sama slider di white tick soalnya vocal nya mulai di white tick

00:14:293 (7,1) - Ini juga harusnya di white tick slider mulai bukan sldier end, berarti ini2 juga 00:14:913 (1,2) -

00:15:948 (5,6,7) - ^

00:30:844 (4) - Ini mending 1/2 slider trus ini jadiin circle 00:31:465 (5) -

00:33:120 - Di red tick jadiin circle trus slider 00:33:327 - trus triple ini ilangin 00:33:534 (1,2) -

00:39:017 (1,2,4,5,1,2) - Jadiin triple aja ini semua, kalo gitu nanggung banget

00:45:741 (1,2,3,4) - White tick slider mulai sama kyk yang tadi, karena strong sound = slider head, weak sound = slider end

00:46:879 - Trus di blue tick sama white tick ini lu bisa kasih circle, jadi triple di slider end gitu ngerti gk

00:56:500 (2,1,2,1) - Placementnya kurang rapih :/

01:02:293 (7) - ctlr - g? trus penempatannya bisa di geser dikit biar simetris

01:05:603 (1,2) - samain aja slidernya

01:07:258 (1,2) - Stackingnya slider end nya ga rapih tu

01:12:534 (2,3,4) - Spacingnya bedain antara 1/2 sama 1/4

01:19:672 (2,3) - Jangan overlap sama slider lain, saran gw 01:20:086 (3) - jadiin slider curve trus blanket 01:19:672 (2) -

01:20:706 - Jadiin clockable? ada strong sound lho

01:21:327 (8) - ini jadiin gini aja https://puu.sh/wy045/387388369b.png jadi slider 1/4 repeat sampe blue tick trus di white tick ada circle
Topic Starter
Uta

Agent_James wrote:

Hard

00:07:672 (5,2) - Better to stack these to for aesthetic well I don't know. I'll think about it

00:12:638 (1) - Ni slider harusnya stop di blue tick, lanjut sama slider di white tick soalnya vocal nya mulai di white tick YES

00:14:293 (7,1) - Ini juga harusnya di white tick slider mulai bukan sldier end, berarti ini2 juga 00:14:913 (1,2) -

00:15:948 (5,6,7) - ^ ga, soalnya suara yg saya ikut sudah bukan vokal lagi melainkan drum terutama drum yg saya ikuti di slider end

00:30:844 (4) - Ini mending 1/2 slider trus ini jadiin circle 00:31:465 (5) - Well, probably I'll do it

00:33:120 - Di red tick jadiin circle trus slider 00:33:327 - trus triple ini ilangin 00:33:534 (1,2) -

00:39:017 (1,2,4,5,1,2) - Jadiin triple aja ini semua, kalo gitu nanggung banget Ga denger suara drumnya disitu. lul I'm a retard

00:45:741 (1,2,3,4) - White tick slider mulai sama kyk yang tadi, karena strong sound = slider head, weak sound = slider end Lagi ikutin drum

00:46:879 - Trus di blue tick sama white tick ini lu bisa kasih circle, jadi triple di slider end gitu ngerti gk ga :D

00:56:500 (2,1,2,1) - Placementnya kurang rapih :/ okay

01:02:293 (7) - ctlr - g? trus penempatannya bisa di geser dikit biar simetris done

01:05:603 (1,2) - samain aja slidernya

01:07:258 (1,2) - Stackingnya slider end nya ga rapih tu My bad

01:12:534 (2,3,4) - Spacingnya bedain antara 1/2 sama 1/4 hmm, aight

01:19:672 (2,3) - Jangan overlap sama slider lain, saran gw 01:20:086 (3) - jadiin slider curve trus blanket 01:19:672 (2) - I kinda not agree. but I'll do it anyway

01:20:706 - Jadiin clockable? ada strong sound lho wut?

01:21:327 (8) - ini jadiin gini aja https://puu.sh/wy045/387388369b.png jadi slider 1/4 repeat sampe blue tick trus di white tick ada circle
okay

Thank you for modding >W<
-Keitaro
Check easy and normal,as requested.

[Spread]
1.51* > 2.14* > 3.32* > 4.02*

[Easy]
00:02:293 (3,1) - this can be done better, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8506345
00:04:775 (2) - Doesn't works well with 00:03:948 (1) - in aesthetic, so, move it, dont forget to move things, becouse DS.
if you're confused, see this gif (Warning! 9.5MB)
As a main beat or 00:07:258 - , it should be clickable, so 00:06:844 (1) - change this to a circle and a slider, or 2 circles.
00:10:051 (1) - this ends 00:10:362 -, also it feels really offbeat
00:10:982 (2,3) - posibble blanket
00:16:362 (6,3) - overlap
Try to avoid overlap in Easy diffs, it may couse readable issue for newbs
00:18:431 (3,4) - Fix circular flow

Some slider can be changed with a parallel, check it out around the diff.
Circular flow does matter in some case, for easy and normal, bad circular flow will result readable issue, aesthetic issue, etc
Also, in Easy, try to keep it 1/1 or 2/1, as its a 145BPM diff. using 1/2 may result to diff spike.
And, try to avoid anti-flow on Easy diff.
since most problem may reoccuring, please recheck again


red: bad flow
green: good flow
As i said no kds and GL.
lit120
quick look (not requested) here

[general]
  1. for both diffs, the volume is a problem + hitsounds are really empty (just to make Frey understand this)
  2. tolong tambahkan GDers ke tags


[frey]
  1. not bad LOL wwww


[h]
  1. sejak lu masih baru dalam mapping, ku sarankan mulai dari basic aja, sperti menggunakan 1x slider speed + DS saja
  2. 00:02:293 (1,2,3) - overlap dari 00:02:293 (1,3) - tu sih agak jelek di view. coba buat segitiga aja (klik (1) dan (2), copas, ctrl + shift + r, 120 drajat
  3. 00:05:603 (1,2) - perlu agak jauhkan dikit karena emphasize downbeat ny
  4. 00:11:396 (6) - ni sih ga gitu Hard diff kliatan ny. coba kasih 1 1/4 reverse lagi jadi gini http://puu.sh/wHPsa/093eabe313.jpg
  5. 00:13:051 (2) - coba NC biar lebih enak liatnya dan lebih masuk akal sesuai dgn mulainy vokal + downbeat emphasize. 00:32:500 (2) - bisa juga tbh
  6. 00:50:706 (4) - ane sih ngerti napa lu NC di 00:48:844 (1) - , tapi yg ini lebih cocok kali. ada lagi yg sperti ini juga beberapa
  7. 00:51:120 (7,8) - flow lebih aneh sesuai dgn direksi ny. coba kek http://puu.sh/wHPzb/3a9c1c4fa0.jpg . overlap kek gitu dan arahan ke 00:52:362 (1) - masih aman kok utk view dan flow
  8. 01:07:258 (1,2,3) - mendingan mau tambahkan note ny di titik merah tu sesuai dgn adany suara synth gitu
  9. 01:12:224 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ini sih tbh agak sulit bagi mereka untuk mainkan ini, karena ritme ny berbeda, dan timing ny beda juga. apa lagi ini sudden kali juga bagi 01:13:155 (5,6) - . coba sperti http://puu.sh/wHPLd/f482eb41a7.jpg (mungkin agak aneh lagi sesuai dgn main ny, tapi ini lebih pas dan gampang sesuai dgn ritme ny. kan masih Hard diff juga


[n]
  1. um, lu tau ga, bahwa peraturan di Normal sama Easy itu harus DS constant semua? misalnya kamu mulainya dari 1x DS, brarti semuanya harus 1x DS ada pula sperti 00:00:638 (1,2) - yg butuh 2 1/1 slider aja dah cukup mulainya, dan 00:11:810 (2,1,2) - ini juga. ada beberapa yg sperti ini juga
  2. ini sperti Advanced diff gitu loh imo, karena kebanyakan 1/2 sliders gitu
  3. 00:06:431 (1) - NC sperti ini sih ga gitu perlu kali tbh. remove NC biar para newbie bisa baca bagian tu sebelum ke emphasize note slanjutnya lebih enak
  4. 00:18:431 (6,1,2) - ini emphasize ny dari garis putih tu seharusnya clickable loh, sesuai dgn emphasize ny. 00:18:431 (6) - note sperti ini lebih cocok sebagai contoh


[e]
  1. alasannya masih sama tentang DS
  2. NC ny perlu lebih teliti lagi deh
  3. 00:03:948 - kosong kali bagian ini. tbh lebih baik tambahkan beberapa slider disini deh
  4. 00:49:051 (2,3) - how about this? lebih cocok lagi http://puu.sh/wHQab/3da923753c.jpg
  5. 01:05:603 (6,1,2) - kliatannya flow ini lebih aneh lagi dari arahan slider dari (1) ke (2). dan juga, rhythm choice ini sih aneh juga kalau mau ikuti vokal. coba ritme sperti ini http://puu.sh/wHQf5/c3f7938c31.jpg


GL
Topic Starter
Uta

Error- wrote:

Check easy and normal,as requested.

[Spread]
1.51* > 2.14* > 3.32* > 4.02*

[Easy]
00:02:293 (3,1) - this can be done better, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8506345
00:04:775 (2) - Doesn't works well with 00:03:948 (1) - in aesthetic, so, move it, dont forget to move things, becouse DS.
if you're confused, see this gif (Warning! 9.5MB)
As a main beat or 00:07:258 - , it should be clickable, so 00:06:844 (1) - change this to a circle and a slider, or 2 circles.
00:10:051 (1) - this ends 00:10:362 -, also it feels really offbeat
00:10:982 (2,3) - posibble blanket
00:16:362 (6,3) - overlap
Try to avoid overlap in Easy diffs, it may couse readable issue for newbs
00:18:431 (3,4) - Fix circular flow

Some slider can be changed with a parallel, check it out around the diff.
Circular flow does matter in some case, for easy and normal, bad circular flow will result readable issue, aesthetic issue, etc
Also, in Easy, try to keep it 1/1 or 2/1, as its a 145BPM diff. using 1/2 may result to diff spike.
And, try to avoid anti-flow on Easy diff.
since most problem may reoccuring, please recheck again


red: bad flow
green: good flow
As i said no kds and GL.
Everything has changed. thanks for mod... and ofc no kds :D
Topic Starter
Uta

lit120 wrote:

quick look (not requested) here

[general]
  1. for both diffs, the volume is a problem + hitsounds are really empty (just to make Frey understand this) Hitsounds Incoming
  2. tolong tambahkan GDers ke tags


[frey]
  1. not bad LOL wwww


[h]
  1. sejak lu masih baru dalam mapping, ku sarankan mulai dari basic aja, sperti menggunakan 1x slider speed + DS saja Noted
  2. 00:02:293 (1,2,3) - overlap dari 00:02:293 (1,3) - tu sih agak jelek di view. coba buat segitiga aja (klik (1) dan (2), copas, ctrl + shift + r, 120 drajatsudah saya ubah ke cara saya sendiri untuk memperbaiki view nya
  3. 00:05:603 (1,2) - perlu agak jauhkan dikit karena emphasize downbeat nydone
  4. 00:11:396 (6) - ni sih ga gitu Hard diff kliatan ny. coba kasih 1 1/4 reverse lagi jadi gini http://puu.sh/wHPsa/093eabe313.jpgokay
  5. 00:13:051 (2) - coba NC biar lebih enak liatnya dan lebih masuk akal sesuai dgn mulainy vokal + downbeat emphasize. 00:32:500 (2) - bisa juga tbh added NC
  6. 00:50:706 (4) - ane sih ngerti napa lu NC di 00:48:844 (1) - , tapi yg ini lebih cocok kali. ada lagi yg sperti ini juga beberapa ?
  7. 00:51:120 (7,8) - flow lebih aneh sesuai dgn direksi ny. coba kek http://puu.sh/wHPzb/3a9c1c4fa0.jpg . overlap kek gitu dan arahan ke 00:52:362 (1) - masih aman kok utk view dan flow Sudah saya fix
  8. 01:07:258 (1,2,3) - mendingan mau tambahkan note ny di titik merah tu sesuai dgn adany suara synth gitu Hmm, akan saya lihat lagi nanti
  9. 01:12:224 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ini sih tbh agak sulit bagi mereka untuk mainkan ini, karena ritme ny berbeda, dan timing ny beda juga. apa lagi ini sudden kali juga bagi 01:13:155 (5,6) - . coba sperti http://puu.sh/wHPLd/f482eb41a7.jpg (mungkin agak aneh lagi sesuai dgn main ny, tapi ini lebih pas dan gampang sesuai dgn ritme ny. kan masih Hard diff juga
Demn. right. thanks....

[n]
  1. um, lu tau ga, bahwa peraturan di Normal sama Easy itu harus DS constant semua? misalnya kamu mulainya dari 1x DS, brarti semuanya harus 1x DS ada pula sperti 00:00:638 (1,2) - yg butuh 2 1/1 slider aja dah cukup mulainya, dan 00:11:810 (2,1,2) - ini juga. ada beberapa yg sperti ini juga Noted
  2. ini sperti Advanced diff gitu loh imo, karena kebanyakan 1/2 sliders gitu Ini dari awal memang saya bikinnya advanced
  3. 00:06:431 (1) - NC sperti ini sih ga gitu perlu kali tbh. remove NC biar para newbie bisa baca bagian tu sebelum ke emphasize note slanjutnya lebih enak Add NC
  4. 00:18:431 (6,1,2) - ini emphasize ny dari garis putih tu seharusnya clickable loh, sesuai dgn emphasize ny. 00:18:431 (6) - note sperti ini lebih cocok sebagai contoh
Done

[e]
  1. alasannya masih sama tentang DS
  2. NC ny perlu lebih teliti lagi deh
  3. 00:03:948 - kosong kali bagian ini. tbh lebih baik tambahkan beberapa slider disini deh done
  4. 00:49:051 (2,3) - how about this? lebih cocok lagi http://puu.sh/wHQab/3da923753c.jpg Done
  5. 01:05:603 (6,1,2) - kliatannya flow ini lebih aneh lagi dari arahan slider dari (1) ke (2). dan juga, rhythm choice ini sih aneh juga kalau mau ikuti vokal. coba ritme sperti ini http://puu.sh/wHQf5/c3f7938c31.jpg
no... im trying to make this as easy as possible
Ez diff is fixed

GL
Thanks for you time kekkkzzz
lit120
kds pls

Uta wrote:

lit120 wrote:

quick look (not requested) here

[n]
  1. ini sperti Advanced diff gitu loh imo, karena kebanyakan 1/2 sliders gitu Ini dari awal memang saya bikinnya advanced jadi napa lu buat diff ini sbagai Normal kalau lu bikinnya Advanced?

    [e]
    1. 01:05:603 (6,1,2) - kliatannya flow ini lebih aneh lagi dari arahan slider dari (1) ke (2). dan juga, rhythm choice ini sih aneh juga kalau mau ikuti vokal. coba ritme sperti ini http://puu.sh/wHQf5/c3f7938c31.jpg
no... im trying to make this as easy as possible u know that it is easy to play for that small hard ish in kiai part for such easy diff, right?
Ez diff is fixed

GL
Thanks for you time kekkkzzz
lit120
wew ok weird post stuff here
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