Hard
Light Insane
Frey's Insane
Tadinya sih lu minta NM gw tapi kalo gw jadiin m4m mau gk? map gw yg ini lho https://osu.ppy.sh/s/609269 2 diff aja bebas sama kaya gw thanks.
SPOILER
00:13:879 (4) - Sv changes is not advised in hard diff
00:10:982 (1,2) - Blanket a bit off
00:17:603 (3) - This 3 overlaps with part of the slider's body, looks bad imo
00:22:982 (8) - I don't know why this is a 1/1 slider, you ignored a strong sound (Lyrics: Demo nande) lol. You should keep the 1/2 slider followed with a circle on the white tick, then 1 circle on the blue tick. https://puu.sh/vWUy4/a83d2f7bf8.jpg
00:30:431 (5,6) - Spacing a bit too far for hard
00:31:465 (2) - overlap with 00:32:086 (4) - 's tail?
00:34:982 (7) - It's better if this is a slider.
00:35:603 (2) - There should be a slider starting here since its a strong sound on white tick. Bcause strong sound=slider head, weaker sound=slider end
00:42:017 (2,4) - I don't like the fact that these repeat twice. Repeat once and add circle in white tick
00:43:258 (4) - same
00:47:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Diff spike for hard.
00:54:017 (1) - looks bad, normal curved works better imo
01:02:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - uncomfortable movement, if you ctrl-g 01:02:293 (1) - you would get a circular flow, tho maybe move 01:01:879 (10) - closer
01:05:603 (1) - why not copy paste sliders from 01:04:569 (2) - ?
01:05:603 (1,2) - Really weird movement doing something like this would be better https://puu.sh/vWU2c/be9ed34734.jpg (rotate anti clockwise, placing on top of 01:07:258 (5) - 's head)
01:07:258 (5) - NC?
01:07:258 (5,6,7,8) - Blanketing is off, this extended slider thing i'm not really a fan of, especially the shape. How bout this? https://puu.sh/vWUdl/ac71f297f0.jpg
01:12:534 (2,3,4,5,6) - Time distance equality broo, 01:12:534 (2,3,4) - has the same spacing with 01:13:465 (5,6) - even tho 2,3,4 has 1/2 gap and 5,6 have 1/4.
01:15:534 (1) - Blanket with 01:14:603 (2) - sabi kali
01:17:603 (2) - This overlaps with the previous combo, try to move out your combos a bit.
01:17:189 (1,2) - angle can be done more neatly
01:20:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why isn't this the same with 00:18:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - they're the same composition
00:10:982 (1,2) - Blanket a bit off
00:17:603 (3) - This 3 overlaps with part of the slider's body, looks bad imo
00:22:982 (8) - I don't know why this is a 1/1 slider, you ignored a strong sound (Lyrics: Demo nande) lol. You should keep the 1/2 slider followed with a circle on the white tick, then 1 circle on the blue tick. https://puu.sh/vWUy4/a83d2f7bf8.jpg
00:30:431 (5,6) - Spacing a bit too far for hard
00:31:465 (2) - overlap with 00:32:086 (4) - 's tail?
00:34:982 (7) - It's better if this is a slider.
00:35:603 (2) - There should be a slider starting here since its a strong sound on white tick. Bcause strong sound=slider head, weaker sound=slider end
00:42:017 (2,4) - I don't like the fact that these repeat twice. Repeat once and add circle in white tick
00:43:258 (4) - same
00:47:810 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2) - Diff spike for hard.
00:54:017 (1) - looks bad, normal curved works better imo
01:02:293 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - uncomfortable movement, if you ctrl-g 01:02:293 (1) - you would get a circular flow, tho maybe move 01:01:879 (10) - closer
01:05:603 (1) - why not copy paste sliders from 01:04:569 (2) - ?
01:05:603 (1,2) - Really weird movement doing something like this would be better https://puu.sh/vWU2c/be9ed34734.jpg (rotate anti clockwise, placing on top of 01:07:258 (5) - 's head)
01:07:258 (5) - NC?
01:07:258 (5,6,7,8) - Blanketing is off, this extended slider thing i'm not really a fan of, especially the shape. How bout this? https://puu.sh/vWUdl/ac71f297f0.jpg
01:12:534 (2,3,4,5,6) - Time distance equality broo, 01:12:534 (2,3,4) - has the same spacing with 01:13:465 (5,6) - even tho 2,3,4 has 1/2 gap and 5,6 have 1/4.
01:15:534 (1) - Blanket with 01:14:603 (2) - sabi kali
01:17:603 (2) - This overlaps with the previous combo, try to move out your combos a bit.
01:17:189 (1,2) - angle can be done more neatly
01:20:913 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why isn't this the same with 00:18:535 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - they're the same composition
Light Insane
SPOILER
00:03:327 (8) - Make this a perfect monstrata triangle by copying the previous 2 circles, rotating them 120 degrees, placing it on top of the previous circles, and deleting the unneeded circle.
00:03:948 (1) - Unnecessary custom slider, just use the normal one unless you want to blanket.
00:07:258 (12) - dont forget to nc bro
00:08:396 (6) - don't think this needs a triple.
00:10:569 (4,5,6,7) - This doesnt quite follow rhythm. also nc here 00:11:396 (8) -
00:15:534 (9) - why not make this normal curved reverse? looks out of place, at least copy paste from your previous sliders
00:20:086 (1) - Dont extend this.
00:22:569 (8) - Again, unnecessary custom slider.
00:23:396 (3) - ewww bagusan dikit napa wkwk.
00:25:051 (9,10) - Spacing emphasis? Maybe place 00:25:051 (9) - at x=308 y=268
00:27:120 (6) - nccc
00:30:431 (6) - again spacing emphasis?
00:40:362 (2,3,4) - Fix placement, looks messy currently
00:42:431 (1) - Why not make this a curved slider like the next one?
00:42:844 (2,3) - Moves bad, looks bad, why not something like this? https://puu.sh/vWV7j/85f7fe4919.jpg
00:44:706 (5,6) - No need for triple
00:44:913 (7) - Unnecessary custom slider again.
00:45:534 (1,2,3,4) - Try to not make your sliders cross path with the precious combo/sliders. Go in a different direction or change the previous slider.
00:52:362 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make this a 1/2 jump to follow the vocal (a i u e o) because you clearly did it in 00:02:293 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:04:569 (7,8,9,10) - This doesnt follow rhythm
01:05:603 (1,2,3) - This sounds similar like the previous one but you mapped it differently. Previous combo was 1/4 sliders but this one is 1/2 sliders, even tho the composition is the same. I suggest making the previous 1/2 as well
01:08:086 (7) - Part of it overlap with the previous slider's body, start at the end of the slider is better.
That's it. Oh yeah, add kiai time and credit frey in your bm post and add his name to the tags.
00:03:948 (1) - Unnecessary custom slider, just use the normal one unless you want to blanket.
00:07:258 (12) - dont forget to nc bro
00:08:396 (6) - don't think this needs a triple.
00:10:569 (4,5,6,7) - This doesnt quite follow rhythm. also nc here 00:11:396 (8) -
00:15:534 (9) - why not make this normal curved reverse? looks out of place, at least copy paste from your previous sliders
00:20:086 (1) - Dont extend this.
00:22:569 (8) - Again, unnecessary custom slider.
00:23:396 (3) - ewww bagusan dikit napa wkwk.
00:25:051 (9,10) - Spacing emphasis? Maybe place 00:25:051 (9) - at x=308 y=268
00:27:120 (6) - nccc
00:30:431 (6) - again spacing emphasis?
00:40:362 (2,3,4) - Fix placement, looks messy currently
00:42:431 (1) - Why not make this a curved slider like the next one?
00:42:844 (2,3) - Moves bad, looks bad, why not something like this? https://puu.sh/vWV7j/85f7fe4919.jpg
00:44:706 (5,6) - No need for triple
00:44:913 (7) - Unnecessary custom slider again.
00:45:534 (1,2,3,4) - Try to not make your sliders cross path with the precious combo/sliders. Go in a different direction or change the previous slider.
00:52:362 (1,2,3,4) - Why not make this a 1/2 jump to follow the vocal (a i u e o) because you clearly did it in 00:02:293 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:04:569 (7,8,9,10) - This doesnt follow rhythm
01:05:603 (1,2,3) - This sounds similar like the previous one but you mapped it differently. Previous combo was 1/4 sliders but this one is 1/2 sliders, even tho the composition is the same. I suggest making the previous 1/2 as well
01:08:086 (7) - Part of it overlap with the previous slider's body, start at the end of the slider is better.
That's it. Oh yeah, add kiai time and credit frey in your bm post and add his name to the tags.
Frey's Insane
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Absolutely perfect i cant find anything.
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Absolutely perfect i cant find anything.
Tadinya sih lu minta NM gw tapi kalo gw jadiin m4m mau gk? map gw yg ini lho https://osu.ppy.sh/s/609269 2 diff aja bebas sama kaya gw thanks.