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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on April 16, 2017 at 11:08:59 PM

Artist: ClariS
Title: Hitorigoto -TV MIX-
Source: エロマンガ先生
Tags: xxdeathx Little CloudSplash16 StarrStyx Kencho eromanga sensei ero manga eromanga-sensei eromangasensei opening tv size
BPM: 165
Filesize: 14641kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.69 stars, 132 notes)
  2. Hard (3.4 stars, 281 notes)
  3. Insane (4.37 stars, 298 notes)
  4. Kencho's Insane (4.8 stars, 314 notes)
  5. Little's Easy (1.52 stars, 106 notes)
  6. Little's Hard (3.3 stars, 258 notes)
  7. Little's Insane (4.62 stars, 303 notes)
  8. Little's Normal (2.12 stars, 193 notes)
  9. Normal (2.12 stars, 199 notes)
  10. Soliloquy (5.12 stars, 340 notes)
  11. StarR-sensei's Insane (4.79 stars, 307 notes)
  12. Xxdeathx's Insane (4.94 stars, 321 notes)


Download: ClariS - Hitorigoto -TV MIX-
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Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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please redownload if you had the mapset before April 15, 2017!

Easy - Doormat & Little
Normal - Doormat & Little
Hard - Doormat & Little
Insane - Kencho, StarrStyx, xxdeathx, Doormat, & Little
Soliloquy - Doormat


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http://www.clarismusic.jp/disco/archive/?VVCL-1013http://eromanga-sensei.com/music/opening/
waaaa 46k plays and 110 favourites while in qualified /w\ thanks so much for playing!!


waaaaaaaaaa top played in only 9 hours >///////////<
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ok yeah
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:thinking:
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Chino 13years old
Sagiri 12years old
...
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loli
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00:06:192 (5,1) - Move a tiny bit further apart to avoid touching for a e s t h e t i c s
00:12:011 (5,1) - Move a tiny bit further apart to avoid touching for a e s t h e t i c s
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Kisses wrote:

00:06:192 (5,1) - Move a tiny bit further apart to avoid touching for a e s t h e t i c s
00:12:011 (5,1) - Move a tiny bit further apart to avoid touching for a e s t h e t i c s


he's referring to the normal, and yeah, done. also changed offset by -10, i think it's better than before.
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Narcissu wrote:

Chino 13years old
Sagiri 12years old
...

¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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using my subpar editing skills i managed to edit out that bit of the episode that the opening bleeds in from. redownload for new files zzzz



on another note, my diffs are done now, so just waiting for gds :3
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14:22 Doormat: how am i doing with my insane so far
14:23 Gaia: sec im in middle of sif game
14:23 Gaia: 3 mins
14:23 Doormat: o
14:23 Doormat: ok
14:28 Gaia: ok
14:29 Doormat: wait lemme update
14:29 Doormat: ok yeah
14:30 Gaia: http://puu.sh/veUBO/42b937fc4b.jpg
14:30 Gaia: i feel like a mouse god
14:30 Gaia: LOL
14:30 Doormat: lol nice
14:31 Gaia: lmao
14:31 Doormat: anything that was shit?
14:32 Gaia: there ws one part that was wrid
14:32 Gaia: weird
14:32 Doormat: k weird
14:32 Doormat: where*
14:33 Gaia: 00:34:546 (1) - dis
14:33 Gaia: was hard to hit
14:33 Doormat: yeah
14:33 Gaia: well from my playing perspective anyways lol
14:33 Doormat: idk what it is about it
14:33 Doormat: :thinking:
14:33 Gaia: the angle
14:33 Gaia: i guess
14:33 Doormat: i have trouble with it sometimes too
14:33 Doormat: which is weird
14:33 Doormat: yeah
14:33 Gaia: wasnt expecting it to be so low
14:34 Doormat: so wider angle?
14:34 Doormat: or narrower
14:34 Gaia: more acute is usually easier to play
14:34 Gaia: http://puu.sh/veUVn/bf95c5d2c7.jpg
14:35 Gaia: also this part
14:35 Gaia: 00:04:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
14:35 Doormat: k updated, any better?
14:35 Gaia: i hate how u mapped the vocals and drums the same intensity
14:35 Gaia: :thonkang:
14:36 Doormat: yeah i was going to nerf the vocals slightly but just left it because want to finish first
14:36 Gaia: wew
14:37 Gaia: hm lemme grab my tablet
14:38 Gaia: 6.57 stars :thinking:
14:38 Doormat: holy
14:38 Gaia: fuk
14:38 Gaia: can u like
14:38 Gaia: not stream
14:38 Gaia: for maximal pp
14:39 Doormat: LOL
14:42 Gaia: gg
14:44 Doormat: k nerfed beginning jumps so vocals are less emphasized than drums
14:44 Doormat: updated
14:45 Gaia: omg im so close
14:45 Gaia: i need hvick with me for this one
14:45 Gaia: wooping out the hvick skin forthis one boys
14:45 Doormat: LOL
14:46 Gaia: fuk i cant read with hvick skin lol
14:47 Gaia: im so close dude
14:47 Gaia: geecry
14:47 Doormat: geecry
14:48 Gaia: WORTH
14:48 Gaia: LOL
14:48 Doormat: nice
14:48 Gaia: streams make me geecry
14:49 Doormat: sory
14:49 Gaia: xd
14:49 Gaia: its ok i put some in mine too i thinlk
14:49 Doormat: lo
14:50 Doormat: so how shit was it
14:50 Gaia: pre gud
14:50 Gaia: minus the streams
14:50 Doormat: xd
14:50 Gaia: are $$$$
14:50 Gaia: its only cuz i cant stream 250 bpm
14:50 Gaia: as my first play in the morning
14:50 Doormat: g
14:50 Gaia: xd
14:51 Doormat: guess i'll finish in a sec
14:51 Doormat: washroom
14:51 Gaia: ayy
14:53 Doormat: can you mod my diffs
14:53 Doormat: after i finish the insane
14:53 Gaia: sure
14:53 Gaia: i gtg for a bit tho
14:53 Doormat: np
14:53 Gaia: friend picking me up soon
14:53 Doormat: ahh
17:41 Doormat: 01:05:092 (1) - to 01:11:273 (3) - is all circles
17:42 Doormat: :joy::gun:
17:42 Gaia: :joy: :gun:
17:42 Doormat: gl with dt
17:42 Doormat: LO
17:42 Gaia: alright
17:42 Gaia: watch me
17:42 Gaia: turn on hvick moe
17:42 Gaia: mode
17:42 Gaia: moe
17:44 Gaia: LOL
17:44 Gaia: FUCK
17:44 Doormat: FUCK
17:44 Gaia: rip
17:45 Gaia: wait brb frosty just gave me his serment diff
17:45 Doormat: rip the dt dream
17:45 Doormat: SHIET
17:45 Doormat: https://puu.sh/vf53k/de109c76b4.png
17:45 Gaia: wait wtf
17:45 Gaia: no pp
17:45 Doormat: lmao
17:53 Gaia: http://puu.sh/vf5r8/88faa406aa.jpg
17:53 Gaia: with relax
17:53 Gaia: LOL
17:53 Gaia: i cant play this
17:53 Gaia: 01:15:819 (2,3) - this really cucks me btw
17:53 Gaia: way to close
17:53 Doormat: SHIET
17:53 Doormat: hmm ok
17:54 Doormat: can you mod
17:54 Doormat: or would you rather wait for all diffs
17:54 Gaia: nah
17:54 Gaia: i can
17:54 Gaia: u want irc?
17:54 Doormat: uhh i gotta go get dinner
17:54 Doormat: won't be back for ~30 minutes
17:54 Gaia: okok
17:54 Gaia: eating dinner same time as me nice
17:54 Gaia: xd
17:55 Doormat: nice
17:55 Gaia: buce
19:05 Doormat: k
19:11 Gaia: k
19:15 Gaia: http://puu.sh/vf9xi/6e5fb2334b.jpg
19:15 Gaia: another one
19:15 Doormat: ya i saw
19:15 Gaia: whos set is that
19:16 Doormat: idk
19:16 Gaia: gg
19:26 Gaia: so do i start modderino now
19:27 Doormat: sure
19:27 Doormat: just my diffs are fine
19:29 Gaia: okie
19:31 Gaia: easy
19:31 Gaia: 00:14:728 (5) -
19:31 Gaia: http://puu.sh/vfarY/21bc0f6366.jpg
19:31 Doormat: k
19:31 Gaia: same with other part
19:31 Doormat: i agree
19:32 Gaia: wuts with the bell sound in the kiai lol
19:33 Gaia: wew
19:33 Gaia: cant really find the pattern to them
19:33 Doormat: it's literally where the bell sound is at
19:33 Doormat: ??????
19:33 Gaia: :thinking:
19:34 Gaia: 01:13:819 (3) - 01:02:182 (3,4) - rhythms shud b consistent
19:35 Gaia: normal
19:35 Gaia: 00:22:728 (5) - finish?
19:35 Gaia: 00:26:546 (5,6) - hitsoundzz
19:37 Gaia: 00:43:637 (6,7,8,1,2,3) - To follow vocals? http://puu.sh/vfaJg/0100299dc6.jpg
19:37 Doormat: hang on
19:38 Gaia: 01:11:637 (6) - whistle
19:39 Gaia: 01:13:092 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/vfaPO/c5dcb7a69a.jpg
19:39 Gaia: 01:25:092 (4,5,6,7,8) - hitsounds
19:40 Gaia: ok ill wait for u to catch up
19:41 Doormat: wait which are we still looking at for 00:43:637 (6,7,8,1,2,3) -
19:41 Gaia: ?
19:41 Doormat: oh
19:41 Doormat: wait
19:41 Doormat: i'm retarded
19:42 Doormat: i didn't see the normal LOL
19:42 Gaia: lol
19:42 Gaia: zzz
19:43 Doormat: i have 00:43:637 (6,7,8) - set up the way they are because then the next combo would be too long slider train
19:43 Doormat: which i want to try and avoid
19:43 Gaia: tru
19:44 Gaia: u can try this then http://puu.sh/vfb3N/9274156058.jpg
19:46 Doormat: hmm
19:46 Doormat: idk
19:46 Gaia: up 2 u
19:46 Gaia: no ned to do it
19:47 Doormat: i kind of like the current rhythm set up though :x
19:47 Gaia: im that guy who always try to cater to my modders by applying stuff i dont wanna change
19:47 Gaia: and i hate it
19:47 Gaia: xD
19:47 Doormat: LOL
19:47 Doormat: i mean i could follow vocals
19:48 Doormat: but i'm just worried about slider training it
19:48 Gaia: its the same amount of objects lol
19:48 Gaia: the 2nd one i gave
19:48 Gaia: xd
19:48 Gaia: i just rearranged it
19:48 Gaia: wew
19:49 Doormat: oh is it
19:49 Doormat: oh it is lol
19:50 Doormat: fuck
19:50 Doormat: my hitsound copier bor
19:50 Gaia: bor
19:50 Doormat: k
19:51 Doormat: k it worked after restarting
19:51 Gaia: k
19:51 Doormat: k
19:51 Doormat: that could work actually
19:51 Gaia: k
19:52 Gaia: tel me when ur done
19:55 Doormat: k
19:56 Gaia: hard
19:56 Gaia: 00:22:728 (1) - finish on end?
19:56 Doormat: 01:13:092 (2,3) - for this what if i do this instead https://puu.sh/vfbCS/413a1c0d9d.png instead
19:58 Gaia: thats fine but u wouldnt be following vocals
19:58 Gaia: its following instruentals
19:58 Gaia: uve been following vocals all this time so i thought the other one ya
19:59 Doormat: mmm i'll try it for now
19:59 Gaia: kk back to hard
19:59 Gaia: 00:33:819 (5,6) - no copy pasta -1 point
19:59 Gaia: 00:42:546 (3) - same spacing as 00:43:273 (1) - ?
19:59 Gaia: 00:45:455 (3) - ^
20:00 Gaia: et
20:00 Gaia: c
20:00 Doormat: 00:33:819 (5,6) - was me being edgy lol i'll fix
20:00 Gaia: xd
20:02 Gaia: u could prolly use more 1/1s in the chorus lol
20:02 Doormat: and yeah i could space it out the (3)s
20:02 Gaia: esp since the 1st part is so much denser than the 2nd half for no reason
20:02 Doormat: that's why Little's Hard
20:02 Doormat: :joy:
20:02 Gaia: 01:11:455 (3) -
20:02 Gaia: :gun:
20:03 Doormat: also i can't determine good places to place 1/1s in the first half
20:03 Doormat: due to the map style
20:03 Gaia: 01:14:364 (2) - i would replace with circle + 1/2
20:03 Gaia: uhh
20:03 Doormat: help onegaishiplease
20:03 Gaia: like 00:56:910 (3,4) -
20:03 Gaia: can be 1/1
20:03 Gaia: 00:59:819 (3,4) -
20:04 Gaia: 01:11:455 (3) - like i said this is gud
20:04 Gaia: and if it were me i'd make 01:03:637 (1) - reverse
20:04 Gaia: but this also works so ya lol
20:04 Gaia: as long as they r consistent its gucci
20:04 Doormat: there's a bell sound on 00:57:092 (4) -
20:05 Doormat: 00:59:819 (3,4) - i can change though
20:05 Gaia: oki
20:05 Gaia: 01:09:455 (1,2) - -1 point kappa
20:06 Gaia: 01:17:455 (3,4,5) - this triple came outta nowhere actually
20:06 Doormat: make them symmetrical then?
20:06 Doormat: parallel*
20:06 Gaia: try ctrl+h
20:06 Gaia: j*
20:06 Gaia: j**
20:07 Gaia: ye ok
20:07 Doormat: yeah ok
20:08 Doormat: what am i gonna do with that triple tho
20:08 Gaia: err
20:08 Gaia: u could make it 1/4 reverse
20:08 Gaia: up to u
20:08 Doormat: 1/4 reverse it is
20:09 Doormat: k
20:09 Gaia: k i wonder how much pp this gives
20:09 Gaia: http://puu.sh/vfcei/7ace5778f4.png
20:09 Gaia: :thinkingL
20:10 Doormat: lol
20:10 Gaia: without hr is 440
20:10 Gaia: zzzzzz
20:10 Gaia: 00:08:546 (2) - is this not stack on purpose
20:11 Gaia: 00:17:637 (3,4,5) -
20:11 Doormat: i didn't even notice tbh lo
20:11 Gaia: lo
20:11 Gaia: 00:19:455 (4) -
20:11 Gaia: im tr i ggr er r ed
20:11 Doormat: care to explain
20:11 Doormat: :x
20:12 Gaia: stacks
20:12 Gaia: lol
20:12 Gaia: 2 nazi 4 me
20:12 Doormat: lol
20:12 Doormat: ok fixed
20:12 Gaia: if u look at my maps
20:12 Gaia: they are literally
20:12 Gaia: all stacked on something
20:12 Gaia: sometimes i stack something from 10 seconds ago
20:12 Doormat: fixed the stacks
20:12 Gaia: idk why
20:14 Doormat: but yeah i fixed the stacks
20:14 Gaia: 00:44:001 (3,4) - from a dt perspective these r rip
20:14 Doormat: but vocals
20:14 Doormat: makes sense from a "every other mode" perspective
20:15 Gaia: yea
20:15 Gaia: i know
20:15 Gaia: 00:47:637 (1,2,3) - hm this flows weird to me
20:16 Gaia: idk how 2 fix that tho lol
20:17 Doormat: what if i do this https://puu.sh/vfcBn/053bf0cb95.png
20:17 Gaia: 00:56:546 (2,3,4) - 00:59:455 (2,3) - shud be consistent
20:17 Gaia: thats better
20:17 Doormat: the slider angle?
20:18 Gaia: rhythm
20:18 Doormat: 00:57:092 (4) - bell here
20:18 Doormat: so i want it clickable
20:18 Gaia: xd
20:18 Gaia: 01:11:455 (4) - y this flow
20:19 Gaia: also missing hitsounds
20:20 Doormat: oh ur write
20:20 Doormat: and because idk how to make it flow here :x
20:20 Doormat: any suggestions?
20:20 Gaia: lol
20:20 Gaia: dude these are literally circle spams
20:20 Gaia: ctrl+g and ur done
20:21 Gaia: kappa
20:21 Doormat: ctrl + g the slider shape?
20:21 Gaia: probably ctrl+g the slider and move (5) to the right more
20:21 Gaia: 01:11:819 (5,6,7) - these are strong vocals so big jumps on the make sense too
20:22 Gaia: 01:14:364 (3) - missing whistle on end
20:23 Doormat: fuck it i can't get it a way i like i'll probably just redo that pattern
20:23 Gaia: ok lul
20:23 Gaia: circles r the easiest to manipulate anyways
20:23 Gaia: and since u dont care about stacks a lot
20:23 Gaia: i literally wana kms whenever i change patterns
20:24 Gaia: cuz stuffs always stacked and stuff -.
20:24 Gaia: o yeah i still dun like how 01:15:819 (2,3) - is super close
20:24 Gaia: Xd
20:24 Gaia: idk if u rejected me earlier
20:24 Gaia: but anyways im done
20:35 Doormat: k updating
20:35 Doormat: updated
20:35 Doormat: any better?
20:36 Gaia: the insane?
20:38 Doormat: ya
20:39 Gaia: holy u cahnged a lot
20:39 Gaia: lol
20:39 Gaia: 00:41:092 (1,2,1,2) - lol this just got harder for no reason
20:39 Gaia: xd
20:40 Doormat: ya
20:40 Doormat: should i change it back
20:41 Gaia: imo since i hate doubles
20:41 Gaia: esp since dt
20:41 Gaia: yea
20:41 Gaia: lol
20:42 Gaia: imo anyways
20:42 Doormat: lol k
20:42 Gaia: zurachamp
20:43 Doormat: everything else okay?
20:44 Gaia: looks good
20:44 Gaia: hmmm
20:44 Doormat: kk
20:44 Doormat: can post for kds
20:44 Doormat: LO
20:45 Gaia: tjanks for getting me back into bn
20:45 Doormat: same
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mod for ticket? hopefully mod is ok.

General

  1. You should have an insane diff because your top difficulty has primarly large jumps for a lot of the time and the hard difficulty is pretty DS'd (with small ds), you should find a diff that can have a balance between these so there is a better transition to the top diff, also wow you have so many low difficulties, it would make sense a lot of sense if you added at least another diff.

Soliloquy

  1. check ai mod on this :^)
  2. 00:04:364 (3) - 00:10:182 (3) - you should consider NCing these notes to isolate 00:09:819 (1,2) - kind of like you do with the circle to slider patterns 00:06:910 (1,2) - here.
  3. 00:26:546 (3,4) - 00:32:001 (2,3) - its just changing rhythm for the sake of changing something up. unless you can mention some reason this follows the music more clearly. plus these are on different beats of similar phrases. most people won't really have a problem with this.
  4. 00:56:910 (3,4) - this should be a 1/2 slider to be the same as 00:59:819 (3) -
  5. 01:07:273 (5,6) - 01:08:546 (4,5) - because of 01:11:455 (4) - and 01:12:546 (2) - comparison is they are both held out vocals and you normally represent those as sliders.
  6. 01:12:182 (7,1) - similarly this has roughly the same support for a triple that 01:09:273 (8,9,1) - does.
  7. 01:22:182 (4) - for these more jumpy sections you don't really have vocals on slider ends like this, (unless I'm still retarded about this language)

Hard

  1. 00:37:637 - you skipped a beat here, it would make most sense to use 2 1/2 sliders here instead of the current 1/2 circle to 1/1 slider esp with the more drum focused rhythms.

Little's Hard

  1. has no hitsounds :^)
  2. 00:23:819 (4) - why you skip drum sounds ;w;
  3. 00:27:637 (2) - 00:27:637 (2) - you seem pretty focused on more melodic sounds? this skips a vocal on the red tick that you should consider including
  4. I know you have a lot of 1/2 rhythm and you try and create some kind of variety, but it would make more sense if you did that when it wouldn't skip the vocals(especially since that seems to be more of the focus of your rhythm. For example 00:24:728 (2,3) - you could have a 1/1 slider here kind of like how you do 00:31:637 (1) - .
  5. 00:37:273 (3,4,5) - 00:40:364 (4,5) - you skip a red tick in between 4 and 5 that is a bass kick.

Normal

  1. for the most part I didn't really notice anything, but there are somethings on AI mod that might help ya out :^)

Little's Normal

  1. 00:36:001 (1,2,3,4) - the beats you map with the ends of these sliders exist here 00:39:273 - also.
  2. no hitsounds again. :eyes:
doormat easy is ok but kiai is just 1/1 the whole time which is boring.

Little ur easy
00:36:001 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 1/1 slider spam is boring and there is more going on in this part than just 1/1 that you can show with longer sliders.
get hitsounds.

gl cutie doormat :^)
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bor wrote:



mod for ticket? hopefully mod is ok.

General

  1. You should have an insane diff because your top difficulty has primarly large jumps for a lot of the time and the hard difficulty is pretty DS'd (with small ds), you should find a diff that can have a balance between these so there is a better transition to the top diff, also wow you have so many low difficulties, it would make sense a lot of sense if you added at least another diff. thanks for the concern, but i'm still waiting on gds so it'll fill itself out soon ;)

Soliloquy

  1. check ai mod on this :^) ok
  2. 00:04:364 (3) - 00:10:182 (3) - you should consider NCing these notes to isolate 00:09:819 (1,2) - kind of like you do with the circle to slider patterns 00:06:910 (1,2) - here. mm, maybe. since each syllable of the word here lands on every 1/2 note i thought a single nc would do. will need to think on this
  3. 00:26:546 (3,4) - 00:32:001 (2,3) - its just changing rhythm for the sake of changing something up. unless you can mention some reason this follows the music more clearly. plus these are on different beats of similar phrases. most people won't really have a problem with this. changed the first one, but the second one here actually has a slight pitch shift in the vocals (singer goes "ee-ee") so i wanted to reflect that by making them both clickable
  4. 00:56:910 (3,4) - this should be a 1/2 slider to be the same as 00:59:819 (3) - there's a very distinct bell sound on 00:57:092 (4) - that i want to be clickable
  5. 01:07:273 (5,6) - 01:08:546 (4,5) - because of 01:11:455 (4) - and 01:12:546 (2) - comparison is they are both held out vocals and you normally represent those as sliders. i think the pitch shift at 01:07:273 (5,6) - is substantial enough to allow for two clickable circles instead, and 01:08:728 (5) - has another bell sound. they become more apparent if you take off hitsounds
  6. 01:12:182 (7,1) - similarly this has roughly the same support for a triple that 01:09:273 (8,9,1) - does. good point
  7. 01:22:182 (4) - for these more jumpy sections you don't really have vocals on slider ends like this, (unless I'm still retarded about this language) little confused by what you mean here, so will leave this alone for now

Hard

  1. 00:37:637 - you skipped a beat here, it would make most sense to use 2 1/2 sliders here instead of the current 1/2 circle to 1/1 slider esp with the more drum focused rhythms. i'm focusing more on the vocals for the hard, actually.

Normal

  1. for the most part I didn't really notice anything, but there are somethings on AI mod that might help ya out :^) k
doormat easy is ok but kiai is just 1/1 the whole time which is boring. there's nothing wrong with that, and i think the variety of circles and sliders makes it interesting for beginners

gl cutie doormat :^)


thanks~
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[Easy]
  1. 00:14:001 - 00:14:364 (4,5) - 00:15:092 - , 00:16:910 - 00:17:273 (3,4) - 00:18:001 - Red line rhythm like these... Adding some hitsound (I prefer default soft-whistle) will make player more comfortable. Normal diff as well.
  2. 00:41:092 - 00:41:455 - these hitsound is a bit weird. Maybe you can use lower volume or do sth. Other diffs as well.
  3. 00:44:001 (5,1,2) - https://puu.sh/vfG6O/83793d8ca3.png
  4. 00:46:910 (5,1,2) - ^
  5. 00:54:364 (2) - this sound do not snap so precisely, I suggest to ignore it. Normal diff as well.
  6. 01:03:273 (4,1,2,3,4) - 5 notes with stack, too hard
  7. 01:05:092 (5,6) - https://puu.sh/vfGjq/0122fa08b6.png
  8. 01:21:092 (1,2) - 1/1 slider fit the vocal better


[Normal]
  1. 00:06:182 (5) - 1/3 in normal diff is a bit too hard. just follow vocal is better
  2. 01:03:637 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too many notes
  3. 01:14:546 - In the whole kiai time, you only ignore this white line sound


[Hard]
  1. 00:41:092 (1,2,1) - use lower ds than player will know it's not 1/4 slider


[Soliloquy]
  1. 00:29:637 (4,5) - Ctrl+G? Than flow will change at 00:30:182 - instead of 00:29:637 - , change flow → emphasize
  2. 01:19:273 (4,5) - similar^ but only ctrl+G seems not good enough, maybe you need to change something other if you want to fix it


GL
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Little's Easy
  1. 00:37:455 (3,4) - maybe 2/1 slider + circle works better here as for consistency with 00:40:364 (3,4) - and to avoid 1/1 spam


Easy
  1. 00:34:546 (3) - maaaybe can place this something lower, try dragging 00:33:819 (2,3) - and adjust the later part
  2. 01:09:455 (1,2) - uhm conver to 1/1 slider would be great for consistency with 00:57:819 (1,2,3) -
  3. idk maybe try put some 2/1 rhythm on kiai? I aware that u want to make more intense on that chorus but ye it plays/looks bit repetitive. u can put them when u follow held sound vocals like 01:15:273 (1,2) - 01:22:546 (4,5) -


Little's Normal
  1. 00:05:455 (1) - idk what reverse following at tbh, the strong cymbals is on 00:06:182 - try 2/1 slider + circle instead? or just copy the rhythm on 00:11:273 (1,2) -
  2. 00:41:819 (1,2) - i suggest to use the same rhythm with 00:45:092 (1,2) - 00:48:001 (1,2) - as the vocals were same rhythm too


Normal
  1. 00:23:819 (7,1) - flow looks somewhat forced with the angle of ur curved slider with 00:23:819 (7) - so ye maybe try like this
  2. 01:14:364 (4,5) - maybe u can try this rhythm as u already using a lot of 1/2

    this can help following the vocals on 01:14:364 - and instruments on 01:14:546 - at the same time


Little's Hard
  1. 00:17:637 (3) - visually near with 00:17:273 (2) - maybe u can move this a bit
  2. 00:57:092 (3) - this is the only one that seems weird with 1/1 reverse, it can be done like 01:00:001 (3,4,5) - regardless of vocals pitch


Hard
  1. 01:14:364 (2) - circle + 1/2 slider works better for both vocals and drums tbh. Also can be consider as making somewhat consistent density with previous patterns as well
  2. 00:59:819 (3) - 01:11:455 (3) - that two slider has some bell(?) sound on their sliderbody but ye it's not even a problem so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯


Soliloquy
  1. 00:04:364 (3) - 00:10:182 (3) - maybe NC regardless of circle spams for drums. And to signal the smaller spacing as well i guess
  2. 01:05:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - deym son those circles are scary lol, consider to add some 1/2 sliders that how u did on previous parts. Maybe somewhere like 01:07:273 - 01:10:182 - 01:10:546 -


idk cant find anything cuz the set is already good qq
goodluck and feel free to no kds if no change
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quick mod :3

[Soliloquy]
the diffname is probably something that most people will have to research in order to know what it's supposed to mean...
you're basically translating the japanese title, but i'd suggest something easier to understand such as "Monologue" or another synonym that is more commonly known

00:23:819 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - hm, i see you're using the stacked triplet in the stream to emphasize the drum at 00:24:001 - but i feel like it could be done better if you have high her spacing going towards this hit and then lower the spacing for the rest of the stream instead of having no spacing until the hit, since it would convey more emphasis toward the strong hit itsself and also flow more naturally into the slider imo... you could also emphasize it by using a kickslider for 00:23:819 (6,7) - and having a slight jump into 00:24:001 - ... either way i feel like the lack of movement toward this hit compared to the weaker notes later in the stream isn't emphasizing the hit to its full potential (i also feel like a slightly more curved stream would look better here)

00:41:092 (1,2,1) - i don't really think this pattern looks too good (briefly explained in pm lol), maybe try rotating 00:41:819 (1) - a bit to the left or just having the slider curve from left to right or something.... it's a pretty personal thing anyway tbh

00:50:001 - since you seem to be following the vocals for this combo (based off the slider at 00:49:092 (1) - ) i think there should be a slider at this timestamp instead of 00:50:182 - if you wanna emphasize the trumpets that kick in here a bit more you could shorten the slider at 00:49:092 (1) - to the blue tick and add a note at 00:49:455 - to emphasize the first of the trumpets that kick in here more

00:54:001 (3) - i feel like this slider could be extended to the blue tick for better emphasis on the lower pitch it has, which also works well with the sudden nature of 00:54:364 - that being said i think 00:54:364 (1) - should also be shortened to the red tick since the onset of the kiai isn't that sudden and it would add a little bit of clearer emphasis imo

01:06:546 - you have quite a lot of single notes in a row in this part so i'd suggest maybe making this one into a 1/2 slider like you did at 00:54:910 -

[Hard]
00:04:364 (3,4) - these notes look identical to 00:04:001 (1,2) - 00:02:546 (1,2) - 00:02:546 (1,2) - which all had the 2 very strong sounds on them as opposed to these ones which don't... stacking them in the same way kinda puts them on the same level as the other ones i just mentioned, whereas they should be somewhat less emphasized so i would suggest either making this one a 1/2 slider or finding a way to differentiate them
00:10:182 (3,4) - same

00:56:910 (3,4) - i feel like these would work better as a 1/1 slider or a 1/2 repeat slider for better emphasis on the vocals, i feel like you're emphasizing that tiny "ting" sound in the background a little too much here

01:13:637 - there should be a 1/1 slider starting here to emphasize the vocal imo since the one at 01:13:819 (1) - isn't really mapped to any strong held sound



that should conclude things for now since i'm not too knowledgable about lower diffs :3
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:thinking:

L Easy

- 00:33:455 (2,3) - u could make this a blanket, would looks really cute w
- 00:41:819 (1,2) - maybe not a big deal but spacings are little inconsistent ;w;

Easy

- 00:38:910 (1,2) - 00:44:728 (1,2,3) - 01:19:637 (3,4,1) - kinda inconsistent spacings w im nazi lo

L Normal

- ahh.. why not following nc every second downbeat? like u did here 00:36:001 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - now 00:31:637 (1,2) - looks really weird d
- 01:26:910 (5) - nc?

Normal

- 00:53:455 (1,2) - rip stack

L Hard

- 00:04:364 (3,4) - holy shiet that spacing : o toomuchforhardww
- 00:41:092 (6) - add nc cuz snapping changes? and maybe for aesthetic too
- 01:26:910 (5) - nc?

Hard

- 00:18:364 (5) - for hitsounds u can add here also clap, as you can clearly hear it lol
- 00:32:182 (2,3) - spacing ???
- 00:34:182 (6) - nice whistle instead clap, well remove whistle and add clap actually xd
- 00:36:001 (1) - stack !!!

last diff is cool

that's all gl! what a shitmod lol
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