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M2U - Marigold (feat. Guriri) [CatchTheBeat]

posted 2017-04-07T22:36:18+00:00

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Hareimu

Joined March 2014

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Hareimu 2017-04-07T22:36:18+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 23 de julio de 2018 at 18:06:36

Artist: M2U
Title: Marigold (feat. Guriri)
Source: Deemo
Tags: nicode グリリ rayark inc magnolia myosotis squar square musiq square-musiq narae hans alice alternate story symphonic boss piano violin dnb drum'n'bass drum and bass diversity deif
BPM: 160
Filesize: 4176kb
Play Time: 02:26
Difficulties Available:

Cup (1,38 stars, 207 notes)
Deif's Overdose (5,33 stars, 586 notes)
Platter (3 stars, 404 notes)
Rain (4,11 stars, 541 notes)
Salad (2,02 stars, 281 notes)

Download: M2U - Marigold (feat. Guriri)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranked #8

Guest diff mapped by Deif.

Last edited by Hareimu 2020-06-08T02:01:37+00:00, edited 115 times in total.

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-04-17T19:14:52+00:00

Please add my name into tags. I made a few tweaks to the timing in my difficulty since some of the piano notes sounded a bit off, so you might copy it to the rest of the mapset:

Overdose

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Marigold.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 77634
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 16
TimelineZoom: 0.8999989

[Metadata]
Title:Marigold
TitleUnicode:Marigold
Artist:M2U
ArtistUnicode:M2U
Creator:Hareimu
Version:Deif's Overdose
Source:Deemo
Tags:nicode guriri rayark inc magnolia myosotis square musiq square-musiq narae hans alice alternate story symphonic boss piano violin dnb drum'n'bass drum and bass
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:596327

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4.8
OverallDifficulty:8.6
ApproachRate:8.6
SliderMultiplier:2.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG3.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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I'll also probably remake the hitsounding on my difficulty on the future.

To any modder: Yes, the CS is lower than usual. And yes, the AR/OD are lower than usual. No, I'd like to keep those difficulty stats if possible but if I get enough complaints the AR could be increased to 9,1 max.

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-04-18T00:44:53+00:00

Deif wrote:
To any modder: Yes, the CS is lower than usual. And yes, the AR/OD are lower than usual. No, I'd like to keep those difficulty stats if possible but if I get enough complaints the AR could be increased to 9,1 max.

Actually I think it'd be a p good idea to raise it to 9,1 to be consistent with AR increase here, since rain is AR/OD 9.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-04-18T00:55:14+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
Deif wrote:
To any modder: Yes, the CS is lower than usual. And yes, the AR/OD are lower than usual. No, I'd like to keep those difficulty stats if possible but if I get enough complaints the AR could be increased to 9,1 max.
Actually I think it'd be a p good idea to raise it to 9,1 to be consistent with AR increase here, since rain is AR/OD 9.

it's top diff so it's fine =w=b see: seal.mp4 ar/cs

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-04-18T03:03:16+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
it's top diff so it's fine =w=b see: seal.mp4 ar/cs

valid point, but nevertheless I think raising it to at least 8,8/8,9 would be nice, note density is somewhat high and I couldn't help but overshoot/misread some patterns due to it being as low as it is rn (say, 01:26:259 (7,8,9,10) - for example)

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-04-28T07:06:52+00:00

If I map highest diff deif should change it
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Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-04-28T17:34:08+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
Ascendance wrote:
it's top diff so it's fine =w=b see: seal.mp4 ar/cs
valid point, but nevertheless I think raising it to at least 8,8/8,9 would be nice, note density is somewhat high and I couldn't help but overshoot/misread some patterns due to it being as low as it is rn (say, 01:26:259 (7,8,9,10) - for example)

Increased the AR slightly, so patterns like the mentioned one don't have such clustered notes and they're easier to read. Also fixed some patterns on my own, which should make ~~the diff less cancerous~~ softer transitions at some points.

Update

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Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-04-29T03:29:54+00:00

updated deif's overdose along with finished platter

Bunnrei

1,044 posts

Joined May 2011

Bunnrei 2017-06-08T00:33:55+00:00

wait why is nobody modding this

[clsw]
i LOVE this diff but some stuff throws me off (ill get to those later after some minor stuff)
00:32:259 (1,2) - make these point outwards instead? cause 00:31:509 (1,2,3,4) - in inwards so it'd be balanced (aesthetic wise) if 00:32:259 (1,2,3,4) - pointed outwards (even with 2,3 being an antiflow)
00:44:071 (2) - this would flow better from previous pattern and to next pattern if ctrl+g'd and moved to the left of 00:44:259 (3) - (and it also complements 00:43:321 (5,1) - 's movement)
01:16:696 (2,3,4) - move this farther from 01:16:509 (1) - cause previous pattern is a hyper, there's the chance that a player might overshoot

kiai is pretty cool

but now for that thing that throws me off
01:31:134 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this seems like a huge difficulty spike not in terms of strain but in terms of precision (i miss a lot here mainly from overshooting)

a suggestion (though not the only solution) would be to make the two last sets of 1/6 triples like this:

image

basically nerf the 1/6 antiflows (but dont get rid of them) cause a lot of players might get thrown off by those

[deif]
oh boy non-meta overdose

00:17:014 (1,2,3,4) - these seem too spaced out considering both the calmness of the part and the spacing of the previous parts, reduce spacing
00:24:759 (4,5) - maybe use different slider shapes for these to emphasize the increase of pitch in the instrument
01:26:259 (7,8,9,10) - try reducing spacing cause this is quite intense considering the other kiai parts lol
01:48:759 (1) - this spinner seems out of place since it doesnt start at the beginning of a new measure and the rhythm is still present, maybe just map this with notes

[rain]
00:10:509 (1) - try using smoother slider shapes here to complement the calmness of the part (sharp angles imply sudden changes in song)
01:02:259 (3) - maybe just use a 1/1 slider? the first time i saw this i thought it was just an error in slider length recalc (and it doesnt really follow anything in the song as far as i can hear)
01:26:071 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - i wouldnt really recommend this intense of a part in a rain, maybe try nerfing
02:06:759 (3) - same as 01:02:259 (3) -

im not really good at modding platter below so here ya go!

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-06-08T03:03:11+00:00

Chara wrote:
wait why is nobody modding this dunno

[rain]
00:10:509 (1) - try using smoother slider shapes here to complement the calmness of the part (sharp angles imply sudden changes in song) tried using a curve
01:02:259 (3) - maybe just use a 1/1 slider? the first time i saw this i thought it was just an error in slider length recalc (and it doesnt really follow anything in the song as far as i can hear) the sliderend is placed over an acute jingle placed at a 1/6 tick (01:02:571 - ), so yeah.
01:26:071 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - i wouldnt really recommend this intense of a part in a rain, maybe try nerfing ctrl+g'd the slider so that they go inwards and not outwards as they did before, flows better for me
02:06:759 (3) - same as 01:02:259 (3) - same as b4

im not really good at modding platter below so here ya go! thank you!

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-06-14T00:45:39+00:00

00:32:259 (1,2) - It was an opposite balance compared with 00:30:759 (1,2) - which is on similar measure bar to avoid repetitive

Others were fixed, thank you!

http://puu.sh/wjlnY/7ac6fe71af.zip

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-06-16T14:29:44+00:00

Chara

[deif]
oh boy non-meta overdose

00:17:014 (1,2,3,4) - these seem too spaced out considering both the calmness of the part and the spacing of the previous parts, reduce spacing (Done)
00:24:759 (4,5) - maybe use different slider shapes for these to emphasize the increase of pitch in the instrument (That was done with the included hyper)
01:26:259 (7,8,9,10) - try reducing spacing cause this is quite intense considering the other kiai parts lol (._.)
01:48:759 (1) - this spinner seems out of place since it doesnt start at the beginning of a new measure and the rhythm is still present, maybe just map this with notes (I'm a lazy mapper. Done)

\:D/

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96,192,102009,6,0,L|96:304,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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416,192,103509,5,8,3:2:0:0:
176,192,103884,2,0,P|112:208|32:320,2,210,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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368,48,113259,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,116071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,116821,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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288,192,117571,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,192,117759,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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368,192,118509,6,0,P|368:256|336:288,1,105,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,118884,2,0,L|112:96,2,105,2|0|2,0:3|0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
304,144,119446,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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336,224,119821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,96,121977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,96,122071,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,122165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,192,123009,5,4,0:3:0:0:
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224,192,134071,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,843 posts

Joined February 2011

Spectator 2017-07-17T11:02:13+00:00

Cup

Seems fine to me

Salad

00:10:509 (1,2,3) - Jumps feel a bit far for salad diff
00:23:259 (3) - The jump here coming right after the 1/4 pattern can be harsh for beginner playes, consider reducing the distance for a bit
00:26:071 (5,6) - Reduce the jump here
01:00:759 (2) - The rhythm here is strange imo. Consider extending the slider-tail to 01:01:134 -
01:01:509 (1) - Remove the reverse (https://puu.sh/wLKVu/b53514ea4c.jpg)
01:03:009 (1) - The slider-end should be on 01:03:571 - and (2) should be moved to 01:03:759 - imo
01:07:040 - Remove the reverse
01:44:071 (2) - Remove the note for the sake of better rhythm, also consider moving it to the left, around x:190 would be good
02:06:009 (3) - Please remove the reverse
02:19:321 (5,1,2) - The distance here can be surprising because the part is really calm and it's almost the end of the map. Please reduce the distance

Platter

00:09:009 (3,4) - How about adding a bit of distance between them.
00:12:009 (3,4) - ^
00:47:727 (5) - Remove the note here
01:08:259 (5) - There should be a Normal-clap on the slider-head instead of Drum-clap
01:49:227 (2,3,4) - Remove them? I felt they're unnecessary in such relaxing part
01:50:634 (1,2,3,4) - Also please replace these notes with a single 1/2 slider

Rain

Overall many of 1/4s can easily be replaced by 1/2s. Please take a look at the parts and consider adjusting them.
00:07:884 (3) - Would be good If there's a little jump for 1~3 following the piano sound
00:34:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped? 1/2 sounds better to me
01:02:259 (3) - Slider-tail should be on 01:02:634 - , it's currently unsnapped
02:06:759 (3) - The same issue as above

Deif's Overdose

00:42:759 (3,4,5,6) - Jumps are a bit far considering it's in relaxing part
01:33:759 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Personally this feels pretty harsh. I know the intensity but please consider the other way emphasizing it

Crystal's Extra

00:15:759 (1) - 씨앗이 바깥쪽으로 휘는게 더 괜찮을 거 같네요
00:57:477 - 비트가 빠진 것 같네요
00:59:259 (1,2,3) - 이 부분은 리매핑이 좋아보이네요. 앞 슬라이더를 1/6로 대체하는 건 어떨까요
01:08:259 (3) - 힛사운드 띠용
01:18:196 (2,3) - 하이라이트 고려해도 이건 너무 어렵네요
01:31:134 - 1/6 연타가 저도 치기 힘들 정도네요 정방향으로 전환하는게 좋아보입니다
01:34:509 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - 1/2로 현악기 사운드를 강조하는 게 더 좋아보입니다.
01:37:696 (2,3) - 절정에서 내려오는 파트인 만큼 디스턴스를 조금 줄이는게 좋아보입니다.
01:36:009 (1,2,3) - ^

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-07-17T23:04:02+00:00

Spectator wrote:
Cup

Seems fine to me wheee
Salad
00:10:509 (1,2,3) - Jumps feel a bit far for salad diff reduced
00:23:259 (3) - The jump here coming right after the 1/4 pattern can be harsh for beginner playes, consider reducing the distance for a bit done
00:26:071 (5,6) - Reduce the jump here done
01:00:759 (2) - The rhythm here is strange imo. Consider extending the slider-tail to 01:01:134 - done
01:01:509 (1) - Remove the reverse (https://puu.sh/wLKVu/b53514ea4c.jpg) done
01:03:009 (1) - The slider-end should be on 01:03:571 - and (2) should be moved to 01:03:759 - imo done
01:07:040 - Remove the reverse done
01:44:071 (2) - Remove the note for the sake of better rhythm, also consider moving it to the left, around x:190 would be good done
02:06:009 (3) - Please remove the reverse done
02:19:321 (5,1,2) - The distance here can be surprising because the part is really calm and it's almost the end of the map. Please reduce the distance done

Platter
00:09:009 (3,4) - How about adding a bit of distance between them. done
00:12:009 (3,4) - ^ nope, keeping the curve
00:47:727 (5) - Remove the note here done
01:08:259 (5) - There should be a Normal-clap on the slider-head instead of Drum-clap the sound here doesn't sound the same as all others, it sounds more like it should have a drum-clap to me instead.
01:49:227 (2,3,4) - Remove them? I felt they're unnecessary in such relaxing part done
01:50:634 (1,2,3,4) - Also please replace these notes with a single 1/2 slider done

Rain
Overall many of 1/4s can easily be replaced by 1/2s. Please take a look at the parts and consider adjusting them. Removed some of them and replaced with 1/2 sliders wherever possible
00:07:884 (3) - Would be good If there's a little jump for 1~3 following the piano sound kinda done
00:34:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - Overmapped? 1/2 sounds better to me changed
01:02:259 (3) - Slider-tail should be on 01:02:634 - , it's currently unsnapped resnapped
02:06:759 (3) - The same issue as above also resnapped
revamped rain diff and redid hitsounding on some sections.

Thanks for the mod! <3

CLSW

osu! Alumni

2,182 posts

Joined October 2010

CLSW 2017-07-21T03:58:04+00:00

00:15:759 (1) - 망할 에디터... 온갖 방법으로 슬라이더를 바꿔봤는데도 씨앗 형태가 바로 뒤에거처럼 안바뀌네요 ㅠ 그래서 슬라속도 1.5배로
01:18:196 (2,3) - 하이퍼대시 거리가 다소 길긴 하나 체감상 플레이에 큰 지장은 없는거같고 패턴적으로 보면 역계단이 이 맵 컨셉이기에..
01:34:509 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Deif의 난이도에서 이미 1/2컨셉을 썼기 때문에 여기서 저는 1/6의 피아노 선율을 따라가는 식으로 가보고 싶네요

01:36:009 (1,2,3) - 하이퍼대시가 되는 최소거리로 균형 맞춰봤어요

나머지도 다 수정
감사합니다!

http://puu.sh/wP3Yw/c5c1975221.zip

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-08-16T13:50:07+00:00

marigold 4 marigold
Waiting for ascendance to mod this and deif to mod spec’s c:

I really don’t know what the drum samples are doing

Extra
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00:07:696 (2) - Ignoring main melody here would make me think you're following piano 100% only. But 00:10:509 (1) - ignores piano on slider tick
00:47:634 (2) - Wouldn't suggest to increase sv here, bit too much after having sv which is low even if it was a rain diff
01:16:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why not make all of these hypers. The contrast for amount of movement for each section is so large it's almost an issue. Adding hypers would ease in the start of kiai a little better + is supported by music
01:21:759 (1,2,3) - Feels too easy for how high this is, eg. 01:24:196 (2,3,4) - is way harder but imo less intense
01:23:446 (2) - 1/4 drum worth mapping
01:25:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Using the exact same pattern to map two completely different instruments really doesn't sit with me. I'd suggest you use different patterns at 01:27:196 (2) - so that there's differentiation between violin and trumpet
01:31:134 (1) - The sounds you are mapping with 1/8 hypers + strong anti flow are really low intensity ticking noises, which aren't really what comes to mind when it's a crescendo. Removing the hypers would significantly decrease the emphasis on these ticks, and still keep high movement speed used. Yes, it drops the SR by 0.2 but why so much of the difficulty coming from sounds that can't be heard unless the song is slowed down
01:43:415 (1,2,3,1) - can you reduce spacing, anyone expecting a break is going to drop combo
02:09:009 (1,2) - underspaced a bit
02:23:259 (3,4,5,6) - Increase distances between these a little, difficult to read sudden drop in spacing.

Overdose
>ar 8.8
>let's move on to rain then

Rain
Main issue is that there’s just a lot of overmapping without much reason to do so. Mapping more sounds in the music will decrease.
I’d really suggest you review this video, even if you’ve watched it before.
00:04:415 (4) - There isn’t really a note here
00:04:884 (2,3,4,5) - ua same thing i can’t hear what you’re trying to follow at all
00:52:509 (4) - nc
00:57:759 (3,4) - simplify to ½ the hyper here is kinda over the top with antiflow
01:16:696 (2,3,4,5) - Refer to the rhythm I used on my diff, it’s the most prominent drum
01:21:196 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same thing, the stronger piano is kinda overshadowed by the ¼ sounds
01:27:196 (2,3,4) - There are two very prominent sounds on ½ here, but again are mapped as streams. Yes it uses two separate sliders to make those different, but 01:26:446 (2,3) - does the same and has strong sounds on ¼. (It’s also mapping two instruments in almost identical ways, which also isn’t ideal
01:30:290 (2,3,4,5) - both overdoses don’t map this o.o just follow the violin 1/1
There’s just way too much going on for a Rain’s rhythm. Choose which instruments you consider to be most important, and prioritise their most prominent sounds that they make.
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/399151 - Try having a look at Handsome’s kiai sections in the editor. The only instrument he follows is the main wub while ignoring almost all background sound, and it works so well. Reducing rhythm used on background sounds helps make the main melody stand out

Actual Overdose mod
jk ar is fine
00:11:821 (4,1) - Can you make the change in spacing more apparent by decreasing distance? Didn’t really notice any change
01:13:321 (4,1,2) - ^ basically the same
01:19:977 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is too inaudible, use 50 and 65%
01:24:196 (2,3) - ua unmapped ¼
01:33:009 (1,2) - edge dashy
01:37:134 (7,8,1) - spacing weird here, 1 should have more emphasis but is smaller distance
01:37:509 (1,2) - edge dash
02:21:759 (4) - ending here imo shouldn’t have hyper since really low intensity

Platter
00:01:509 (1,2) - is same as 00:03:009 (1,2) - ? Why not have same rhythm density
00:05:446 (2,3) - Make more walkable
00:06:946 (5,6,1,2) - aaaa all of these are tap dashes, make non-emphasised sounds walkable and emphasised sounds a larger dash
00:13:884 (2) - move left to reduce tap dashing
00:24:946 (5,6) - ^
00:26:634 (5,1,2) - 3 objects with identical spacing but 1 has a downbeat/finish on it D:
00:29:259 (4,5) - this could be a dash
2.0x distance snap is too small for emphasis dash but too large for walk :/
00:35:259 (3,4,5) - 3 objects with identical spacing again but 5 needs emphasis more than 4.
00:46:509 (1,2) - increase spacing?
00:56:071 (2,3) - hyper into antiflowzzzzzzzz just make a curvy slider to fix
Wait that was the first hyperdash, there none in 00:19:509 (1) - which is way more intense section
00:57:759 (3) - wait how does the hyper to antiflow rule work for platter bc these are everywhere
01:20:259 (3,4) - ok this one is antiflow
Same kinda overmap things are in kiai so i won’t mention

Salad
00:01:509 (1) - hey look it’s the opening of my rain but with 10x more spacing
00:10:509 (1,2,3,4) - do not have four dashes is a row, salads introduce dashing not dash like sonic the hedgehog
00:24:759 (3) - there’s a tonne of sounds going on, i think this one is slightly weaker so no need for dash.
00:27:009 (1,2) - ^
00:29:634 (5,1) - increase spacing kinda anti-jump
00:30:759 (2,3) - ok why is this dash 10x bigger than ^
00:33:009 (1,2) - make more walkable for low intensity
00:40:509 (3,4) - make no dash? This section tbh shouldn’t really have any dashes at all bc other parts are more intense
00:44:821 (6,1,2,3,1) - ok i said that but all of these objects are dashes twfazxfasdjnfccxpls nerf those and only keep dash for 00:46:509 (1) -
00:54:009 (1,2) - just make stuff like this easy to walk.
like
Everything needs to be 100% easy to walk aside from the important thingies to emphasise
00:59:259 (3) - all of the dashes in this section are walkable, half the time i just walk them and half the time i miss bc it was too far to walk
01:09:759 (2) - no 1.5/1 slider?
01:12:571 (2,3,4,5) - ok but why are these dashes
01:57:759 (5) - split to two circles to map the stop better bc there’s no slider droplets that way
02:00:009 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - is it a good idea 9 consecutive dashes in a row
02:19:321 (5,1,2) - weird flow catchy diff spike, just make walkable to avoid weird drops here
02:25:509 (9) - delete?

Cup
01:43:884 (1) - would suggest to have break here bc cup
i see cup i sleep

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-08-17T03:38:17+00:00

Sinnoh wrote:
marigold 4 marigold
Waiting for ascendance to mod this wh was he gonna? and deif to mod spec’s c:

I really don’t know what the drum samples are doing They're used on parts like 00:48:759 (1) - a couple times in my own diffs but dunno if they really fit

Extra
Check tags Fixed all those myself, clsw's diff had minato yukina on it's tags and others didn't.

Rain
Main issue is that there’s just a lot of overmapping without much reason to do so. Mapping more sounds in the music will decrease. Will try to map main melody mostly, let's see here.
I’d really suggest you review this video, even if you’ve watched it before. yea ik what you mean
00:04:415 (4) - There isn’t really a note here removed
00:04:884 (2,3,4,5) - ua same thing i can’t hear what you’re trying to follow at all I'm trying to follow a quite audible 1/4 piano quadruplet here.
00:52:509 (4) - nc done
00:57:759 (3,4) - simplify to ½ the hyper here is kinda over the top with antiflow done
01:16:696 (2,3,4,5) - Refer to the rhythm I used on my diff, it’s the most prominent drum done
01:21:196 (2,3,4,5,6) - Same thing, the stronger piano is kinda overshadowed by the ¼ sounds removed 1/4 notes and kept it as 1/2 instead
01:27:196 (2,3,4) - There are two very prominent sounds on ½ here, but again are mapped as streams. Yes it uses two separate sliders to make those different, but 01:26:446 (2,3) - does the same and has strong sounds on ¼. (It’s also mapping two instruments in almost identical ways, which also isn’t ideal Made into two 1/2 sliders instead.
01:30:290 (2,3,4,5) - both overdoses don’t map this o.o just follow the violin 1/1 Did the same as in clsw's diff (using 2 1/2 sliders)
There’s just way too much going on for a Rain’s rhythm. Choose which instruments you consider to be most important, and prioritise their most prominent sounds that they make. followed too many instruments at the same time, decided to follow the most prominent violin/piano sounds instead.

Platter
00:01:509 (1,2) - is same as 00:03:009 (1,2) - ? Why not have same rhythm density fixed
00:05:446 (2,3) - Make more walkable walkabilified
00:06:946 (5,6,1,2) - aaaa all of these are tap dashes, make non-emphasised sounds walkable and emphasised sounds a larger dash done
00:13:884 (2) - move left to reduce tap dashing done
00:24:946 (5,6) - ^ done
00:26:634 (5,1,2) - 3 objects with identical spacing but 1 has a downbeat/finish on it D: fixed
00:29:259 (4,5) - this could be a dash it is now
2.0x distance snap is too small for emphasis dash but too large for walk :/ using 2,3x instead
00:35:259 (3,4,5) - 3 objects with identical spacing again but 5 needs emphasis more than 4. fixed
00:46:509 (1,2) - increase spacing? sure
00:56:071 (2,3) - hyper into antiflowzzzzzzzz just make a curvy slider to fix done
Wait that was the first hyperdash, there none in 00:19:509 (1) - which is way more intense section
00:57:759 (3) - wait how does the hyper to antiflow rule work for platter bc these are everywhere
01:20:259 (3,4) - ok this one is antiflow
Same kinda overmap things are in kiai so i won’t mention will fix those along with antiflows

Salad
00:01:509 (1) - hey look it’s the opening of my rain but with 10x more spacing
00:10:509 (1,2,3,4) - do not have four dashes is a row, salads introduce dashing not dash like sonic the hedgehog I laughed way harder than I should have to this, fixed
00:24:759 (3) - there’s a tonne of sounds going on, i think this one is slightly weaker so no need for dash. removed dash
00:27:009 (1,2) - ^ it didn't really have one to begin with o.O
00:29:634 (5,1) - increase spacing kinda anti-jump done
00:30:759 (2,3) - ok why is this dash 10x bigger than ^ dunno, fixed
00:33:009 (1,2) - make more walkable for low intensity done
00:40:509 (3,4) - make no dash? This section tbh shouldn’t really have any dashes at all bc other parts are more intense done
00:44:821 (6,1,2,3,1) - ok i said that but all of these objects are dashes twfazxfasdjnfccxpls nerf those and only keep dash for 00:46:509 (1) - done
00:54:009 (1,2) - just make stuff like this easy to walk. done
like
Everything needs to be 100% easy to walk aside from the important thingies to emphasise will search for hard walkable stuff and fix it correctly I guess
00:59:259 (3) - all of the dashes in this section are walkable, half the time i just walk them and half the time i miss bc it was too far to walk using 2,7x distancing fixes this probably
01:09:759 (2) - no 1.5/1 slider? oops
01:12:571 (2,3,4,5) - ok but why are these dashes made walkable instead
01:57:759 (5) - split to two circles to map the stop better bc there’s no slider droplets that way k
02:00:009 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - is it a good idea 9 consecutive dashes in a row nope, fixed
02:19:321 (5,1,2) - weird flow catchy diff spike, just make walkable to avoid weird drops here
02:25:509 (9) - delete? y tho? all other diffs have the same note there (except deif's since he didn't really map the last 2 piano measures)

Cup
01:43:884 (1) - would suggest to have break here bc cup would break consistency with other diffs that have it mapped and it doesn't really affect the spread all that much anyway.
i see cup i sleep sleep tight pupper

updated with consistent tags on all diffs (if either clsw or deif reads this, that's probably the cause of your diffs having a possible "update to latest version" message)

thanks for modding!

Xinnoh

Elite Mapper

1,962 posts

Joined April 2014

Xinnoh 2017-08-18T06:42:48+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
Sinnoh wrote:
marigold 4 marigold
Waiting for ascendance to mod this wh was he gonna? and deif to mod spec’s c:

nope

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-08-19T07:47:56+00:00

Spectator

Deif's Overdose

00:42:759 (3,4,5,6) - Jumps are a bit far considering it's in relaxing part (Reduced)
01:33:759 (4,5,6,7,8,1,2) - Personally this feels pretty harsh. I know the intensity but please consider the other way emphasizing it (Tried to change the orientation of some of the sliders to make it flow better)

Sinnoh

Actual Overdose mod
jk ar is fine
00:11:821 (4,1) - Can you make the change in spacing more apparent by decreasing distance? Didn’t really notice any change (The distance is already decreasing every second slider. Reducing it more would cause a rather uncomfortable semistack)
01:13:321 (4,1,2) - ^ basically the same (It can be applied in this section though. Done)
01:19:977 (2,3,4,5,6) - This is too inaudible, use 50 and 65% (Done)
01:24:196 (2,3) - ua unmapped ¼ (I prefer to leave that 1/4 unmapped as the predominant instrument of that pattern is the piano, which is almost inaudible in that beat)
01:33:009 (1,2) - edge dashy (Reduced)
01:37:134 (7,8,1) - spacing weird here, 1 should have more emphasis but is smaller distance (Done)
01:37:509 (1,2) - edge dash (Fixed with the previous suggestion)
02:21:759 (4) - ending here imo shouldn’t have hyper since really low intensity (Nuked)

Thanks for the mods!

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Sorceress

332 posts

Joined September 2012

Sorceress 2017-08-25T18:58:55+00:00

Moddo 4 moddo

[

Cup]

01:46:884 (1,2,3) - I think it would be cool to add some emphasis to these to contrast with 01:43:884 (1,2,3) - Try moving 01:46:884 (1) - to x:100 and 01:48:759 (3) - to x:224 Though make sure to curve 01:48:759 (3) - in some more and the distance to 01:50:259 (1) - gets pretty big
I really like this cup however I'm a little worried about tickrate 2. There's some lengthy slider chains that require "precise" movements at a cup level. I think lowering it to tickrate 1 would help to make the slider chains easier. As the ranking criteria says...
Use the same slider tick rate on every difficulty as it is a property of the music rather than the mapping. However, lower difficulties may use lower tick rates to reduce accuracy requirements for newer players
I think that's certainly applicable here

[

Salad]

00:02:259 (2) - I'd tilt the tail on this a bit so it doesn't stick out quite as much, just a slight nerf to bring it in line with 00:03:759 (4) -
00:13:509 (1,2,3) - Distance feels a bit ambiguous here and I'm not sure if these are meant to be dashes or walkable. Personally I think this works great as a walk as the song winds down and I'd suggest moving 00:14:259 (2) - to x:268
01:14:071 (4,5) - I think a weak walk to this would suit it well, as it is now it's just abouts walkable so I'd suggest nerfing the distance either way but try moving 01:14:071 (4) - to x:304 and then Ctrl+H on 01:14:259 (5) - and move it to x:356
01:18:009 (1,2,3) - I think a pattern like this might be too tricky for a Salad. You have to do stuttering movements left to catch 01:18:009 (1,2) - and then do a well timed dash in the same direction to avoid overshooting on 01:18:759 (3) - I'd really reccomend simplifying this pattern and maybe consider reducing the timeline to 1/1 sliders
01:29:259 (3,4,1) - This is another tricky pattern. The movement to 01:29:634 (4) - after dashing to 01:29:259 (3) - is really awkward and requires a great deal of catcher control. I'd reccomend making the distance to 01:29:634 (4) - easily walkable
01:30:009 (1,2,3) - Same thing as with 01:18:009 (1,2,3) -
01:58:134 (6) - I'd lower the distance here a bit so it's a bit more comfortable after the dash to 01:57:759 (5) -
02:19:321 (5,1) - Think this would play better with just a walk to 02:19:321 (5) - and a clear dash to 02:19:509 (1) - as the distance is a little ambiguous right now
Like in the cup could be worth considering tickrate 1 here, I know it ruins the aesthetics a bit but it helps to make a lot of sliders easier

[

Platter]

00:10:509 (1,2,3) - Dashes to these feel just a little weak. Try moving 00:10:509 (1) - to x:116 and 00:12:009 (3) - to x:400
00:55:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is all playing pretty much the same and I feel that takes away from the emphasis on 00:57:759 (3) - Try moving 00:56:259 (3,4) - to x:124 Using strong dashes in place of the hypers and building up to the hyper to 00:57:759 (3) -
01:12:571 (2,3,4) - Some ambiguous spacing here. Considering it's a pretty calm part of the song I'd suggest moving 01:12:759 (3) - to x:336 and making it clearly walkable
01:45:852 (2) - With the spacing between 01:45:946 (3,4) - I'd suggest moving 01:45:852 (2) - a couple of grid spots right to x:128 to make it a more comfortable movement

[

Rain]

01:00:759 (2,3) - Woah this antiflow dash right after a hyper feels very uncalled for, spacing seems tight here but I really reccomend finding a way to get rid of this antiflow entirely
01:09:009 (1,2) - Antiflow isn't too bad here but still feels a little harsh coming off a strong hyper, same for 01:09:759 (1,2) -

[

Deif's Overdose]

00:17:164 (4) - Looks pretty in the editor but it isn't very pleasant to play. It requires some precise stop start movements where it loops back on itself a bit on those inside corners but there's virtually no sound here in the song. I really think a simpler slider shape would be more appropriate
01:18:759 (5,6,7,8) - Holy moly these are hard, the precise movements needed here at this speed after a beefy hyper all feels pretty damn overkill. Possible to atleast nerf these half a grid space to about 1.58x ds
01:26:259 (7,8,9,10) - I could play this all day and I would still never catch the tail on 01:26:634 (9) - The spacing here is pretty brutal and I feel it's much nicer with 1.36x ds between all the notes rather than 1.48x ds
01:35:634 (5) - Bit of tilt on this to the right would make transitioning into this part 01:35:634 (5,6,1) - a bit easier. It comes in quite fast and unexpected as it is now

[

Crystal's Extra]

00:35:821 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Wow really nice wiggle, I love it
00:53:259 (3,4) - Hyper to 00:53:259 (3) - seems out of place to me, try moving 00:53:259 (3,4) - to x:144
Hard to say anything specific about the Kiai here, it's insanely intense and requires holding dash for pretty much all of the first half. I think it would help to tone down the strength on some of the hypers on some of the weaker sounds such as 01:21:196 (2) - As it is now it's very hard to chain all this together and I think giving the player just a brief moment to regain some control with a movement that isn't a huge hyper or some strong antiflow dash would help a lot
02:13:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - The stuttery movements on this stream feel overly difficult for what isn't a very intense section of the song, I'd really reccomend toning this stream down, make the flow a bit smoother.

Nice set, those are a couple of scary overdoses!

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-08-26T03:29:27+00:00

Sorcerer wrote:
Moddo 4 moddo

[ Cup]
01:46:884 (1,2,3) - I think it would be cool to add some emphasis to these to contrast with 01:43:884 (1,2,3) - Try moving 01:46:884 (1) - to x:100 and 01:48:759 (3) - to x:224 Though make sure to curve 01:48:759 (3) - in some more and the distance to 01:50:259 (1) - gets pretty big done
I really like this cup however I'm a little worried about tickrate 2. There's some lengthy slider chains that require "precise" movements at a cup level. I think lowering it to tickrate 1 would help to make the slider chains easier. As the ranking criteria says...
Use the same slider tick rate on every difficulty as it is a property of the music rather than the mapping. However, lower difficulties may use lower tick rates to reduce accuracy requirements for newer players
I think that's certainly applicable here k then, will use str1 for this diff.
[ Salad]
00:02:259 (2) - I'd tilt the tail on this a bit so it doesn't stick out quite as much, just a slight nerf to bring it in line with 00:03:759 (4) - done
00:13:509 (1,2,3) - Distance feels a bit ambiguous here and I'm not sure if these are meant to be dashes or walkable. Personally I think this works great as a walk as the song winds down and I'd suggest moving 00:14:259 (2) - to x:268 reduced distancing to 1,5x
01:14:071 (4,5) - I think a weak walk to this would suit it well, as it is now it's just abouts walkable so I'd suggest nerfing the distance either way but try moving 01:14:071 (4) - to x:304 and then Ctrl+H on 01:14:259 (5) - and move it to x:356 Sorta did this but kept 1x distancing between slider and note
01:18:009 (1,2,3) - I think a pattern like this might be too tricky for a Salad. You have to do stuttering movements left to catch 01:18:009 (1,2) - and then do a well timed dash in the same direction to avoid overshooting on 01:18:759 (3) - I'd really reccomend simplifying this pattern and maybe consider reducing the timeline to 1/1 sliders It's actually really easy to play IMO, it's just pressing left once and then left+dash to catch (3), nothing too hard or platter-like.
01:29:259 (3,4,1) - This is another tricky pattern. The movement to 01:29:634 (4) - after dashing to 01:29:259 (3) - is really awkward and requires a great deal of catcher control. I'd reccomend making the distance to 01:29:634 (4) - easily walkable Doing so would stop having consistency with how I'm managing strong snares (2,7x distancing) compared to the bassline's distancing (1,5x) so I'd actually keep this one as well. Changed the layout of the pattern a bit so that it's easier to catch anyway
01:30:009 (1,2,3) - Same thing as with 01:18:009 (1,2,3) - Same as before.
01:58:134 (6) - I'd lower the distance here a bit so it's a bit more comfortable after the dash to 01:57:759 (5) - done
02:19:321 (5,1) - Think this would play better with just a walk to 02:19:321 (5) - and a clear dash to 02:19:509 (1) - as the distance is a little ambiguous right now done
Like in the cup could be worth considering tickrate 1 here, I know it ruins the aesthetics a bit but it helps to make a lot of sliders easier done
[ Platter]
00:10:509 (1,2,3) - Dashes to these feel just a little weak. Try moving 00:10:509 (1) - to x:116 and 00:12:009 (3) - to x:400 done
00:55:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - This is all playing pretty much the same and I feel that takes away from the emphasis on 00:57:759 (3) - Try moving 00:56:259 (3,4) - to x:124 Using strong dashes in place of the hypers and building up to the hyper to 00:57:759 (3) - done
01:12:571 (2,3,4) - Some ambiguous spacing here. Considering it's a pretty calm part of the song I'd suggest moving 01:12:759 (3) - to x:336 and making it clearly walkable done
01:45:852 (2) - With the spacing between 01:45:946 (3,4) - I'd suggest moving 01:45:852 (2) - a couple of grid spots right to x:128 to make it a more comfortable movement Moved it to x:118 instead.
[ Rain]
01:00:759 (2,3) - Woah this antiflow dash right after a hyper feels very uncalled for, spacing seems tight here but I really reccomend finding a way to get rid of this antiflow entirely Got rid of it :>
01:09:009 (1,2) - Antiflow isn't too bad here but still feels a little harsh coming off a strong hyper, same for 01:09:759 (1,2) - It's not really that bad, actually. Gonna keep it (still modified it a bit so that it's more flowy)
Nice set, those are a couple of scary overdoses! Thanks, gotta agree upon that observation though, they're surely not your average overdose :^)

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-09-12T06:41:43+00:00

Sorcerer

Deif's Overdose

00:17:164 (4) - Looks pretty in the editor but it isn't very pleasant to play. It requires some precise stop start movements where it loops back on itself a bit on those inside corners but there's virtually no sound here in the song. I really think a simpler slider shape would be more appropriate (Damn... you know how to kill a bit of slider-art ): Took a bit to adjust the new slider velocity, but it should be done)
01:18:759 (5,6,7,8) - Holy moly these are hard, the precise movements needed here at this speed after a beefy hyper all feels pretty damn overkill. Possible to atleast nerf these half a grid space to about 1.58x ds (Done)
01:26:259 (7,8,9,10) - I could play this all day and I would still never catch the tail on 01:26:634 (9) - The spacing here is pretty brutal and I feel it's much nicer with 1.36x ds between all the notes rather than 1.48x ds (Done)
01:35:634 (5) - Bit of tilt on this to the right would make transitioning into this part 01:35:634 (5,6,1) - a bit easier. It comes in quite fast and unexpected as it is now (Hope it plays better)

Thanks for your mod!

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F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-10-15T02:37:35+00:00

Placeholder
(now I'm already holding 4 mapsets lol)

rew0825

1,290 posts

Joined March 2013

rew0825 2017-11-11T12:11:08+00:00

Secret Santa :3 Merry christmas!

Cup

00:06:946 (4) - How about move to 00:07:321 and move the note to between 00:07:134 (5,1) - ? I think it follow the melody better.
00:11:259 (2) - The movement of this slider is look strong. I suggest to change this to other slider pattern.
01:07:509 (3,4) - I think it would be better if change the pattern of slider to similar like 01:06:009 (1,2) -

Salad

00:24:384 (2,3) - The distance is look a little confused whether dash or not dash. Please make it sure.
00:27:009 (1,2) - Same as top ^.
00:53:821 (5) - Remove this note? I think it unnecessary.
00:57:759 (4,1) - Add dash between it?
01:18:009 (1) - How about change this slider move right?
01:27:759 (3,1) - The distance is look a little confused whether dash or not dash. Please make it sure.

Rain

00:10:134 (6,1) - It's so far. I suggest move 00:10:134 (6) - to x:154 and 00:09:759 (5) - change slider to vertical?
01:19:509 (1) - I suggest change slider to vertical? For easier play.

Deif's Overdose

01:17:259 (3) - How about change slider to vertical? Make differrent with before this note.
01:37:696 (2) - Change slider move to right?

That's all from me. Good luck

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-11-11T16:00:36+00:00

rew0825

Deif's Overdose

01:17:259 (3) - How about change slider to vertical? Make differrent with before this note. (It doesn't look necessary. I'd like to keep it consistent with the previous slider and not have a much stronger hyperdash to the following stream)
01:37:696 (2) - Change slider move to right? (Sure, done)

Thank you for giving a check!

Update

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Marigold ft. グリリ
Artist:M2U
ArtistUnicode:M2U
Creator:Hareimu
Version:Deif's Overdose
Source:Deemo
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Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-11-11T18:50:40+00:00

rew0825 wrote:
Secret Santa :3 Merry christmas! what a nice surprise! <3

Cup
00:06:946 (4) - How about move to 00:07:321 and move the note to between 00:07:134 (5,1) - ? I think it follow the melody better. It'd be ignoring the higher pitched sound at 00:06:946 - just to follow a lower pitched piano note instead if I did that, so no.
00:11:259 (2) - The movement of this slider is look strong. I suggest to change this to other slider pattern. Tilted it a bit more vertically instead, don't see how that movement was strong but eh.
01:07:509 (3,4) - I think it would be better if change the pattern of slider to similar like 01:06:009 (1,2) - done

Salad
00:24:384 (2,3) - The distance is look a little confused whether dash or not dash. Please make it sure. done
00:27:009 (1,2) - Same as top ^. done
00:53:821 (5) - Remove this note? I think it unnecessary. done
00:57:759 (4,1) - Add dash between it? kk
01:18:009 (1) - How about change this slider move right? sure
01:27:759 (3,1) - The distance is look a little confused whether dash or not dash. Please make it sure. done

Rain
00:10:134 (6,1) - It's so far. I suggest move 00:10:134 (6) - to x:154 and 00:09:759 (5) - change slider to vertical? done
01:19:509 (1) - I suggest change slider to vertical? For easier play. There's a lot of other antiflowing sliders on this kiai as well, and I want to make it as intense as possible while still adapting to rain rules, so keeping it.

That's all from me. Good luck thanks!

mank rarigold

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,052 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2017-11-26T20:01:11+00:00

[General]

The yellow color feels a bit too bright. I suggest you go for a orange color instead, which matches the flowers better. The light gray could also be a little bit darker so it stands out on the white half of the BG a bit more.
Your drum-hitclap sounds like recorded at a ping pong match. Seriously though, it doesn't really fit the song, so I suggest searching for another hitsounds.

[Cup]

00:03:009 (3,4) - This distance is suddenly large compared to the rest of the section. An option is to slant (4) a bit more by moving its head to the right; another would be to move 00:03:759 (4,1,2,3) - as a whole to the right.
00:30:009 - Since the song calms down a bit starting here, I'd lower the SV multiplier until 01:00:009 - . Some of the horizontal sliders in this section have a little bit too much movement for this calm section.
01:02:259 (4,1,2) - Having consecutive direction changes like this feels a bit too much for a Cup in non-Kiai sections. One option would be to make (1) flow right, like this:
SPOILER
^Similar stuff applies for 01:10:509 (3) - , 01:16:509 (3) - and 01:57:009 (3) - .
01:19:509 (3,4,5) - These have a slightly larger distance than the rest of your patterns, coupled with antiflow movements. I think you could move (4) to the left a bit to reduce the distances.
01:43:509 - I'd also reduce the SV multiplier for this calm section.
02:22:509 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The piano sound are really weak compared to the vocal, so it feels a bit too much having them mapped in a Cup. I would have gone for a long slider following the vocal.

[Salad]

00:01:509 (1,2,3) - Since the song is just starting, these feel a bit large for walkable distances. I'd move (2) closer to the other objects.
00:03:009 (3,4,1) - For a diff that it's meant to introduce players to dashes, having 2 dashes between 3 consecutive objects not even 5 secs into the song feels a bit too much. In this case, the first one is less important than the second one, so I'd remove that one.
00:04:509 (1,2,3) - Considering the two antiflow movements, the second one including a dash, I'd make it a little bit easier by making the walkable pattern shorter, so I'd move 00:05:634 (2) - to the right a bit.
00:07:884 (3,4) - Kinda ambiguous distance, can be easily done by walking but it seems like you intended it to be a dash. If it's that way, consider making the dash clearer by increasing the distance.
00:09:009 (4,5) - The distance feels a bit tight to walk, so I'd reduce it a bit.
00:10:509 (1,2,3) - Having three 1/2 dashes in a row like this for the intro also feels a bit overdone. Maybe you can make 00:10:509 (1,2) - walkable.
00:12:009 (3,4) - Looks tight to walk, and I don't think the dash fits here. Make it more easily walkable instead.
00:19:509 (1,2) - I'd take the dash out of here, otherwise this part feels too dashy with a dash nearly every 2/1. Same thing for 00:22:884 (2,3) -.
00:26:821 (9) - I'd take this note out. This 1/2 stream feels a bit dense in comparison with the rest, although I get there is a sound that justifies the stream.
00:27:009 (1) - Having this as a 1/2 repeat instead of a 1/1 slider is not only inconsistent with the rest of the section, but it also creates a rather harsh movement having to do 3 direction changes between 00:27:009 (1,2) -. Also, the same previous thing of removing the dash applies here.
00:43:509 (1,2,3,4) - I would have preferred a slider like you did on 00:37:509 (1) - for consistency.
00:47:259 (2,3) - Kinda ambiguos distance because they are apart in the timeline. Try to make it clearer.
00:52:509 (3,4) - Inconsistent dash with just a second ago; I'd remove it. 00:54:384 (2,3) - is also inconsistent, so I'd take it out.
00:56:259 (2,3) - If you intend this to be clearly walkable, you need to reduce the distance a bit.
01:05:071 (4) - Sound here is really weak, and it would have been better to keep the dash to 01:05:259 (5) - for consistency instead.
01:18:759 (3) - I don't think the drum sound is that strong to require a dash; I'd remove it.
01:21:759 (5,1) - This could have a dash between them, the sound on (1) is quite strong.
01:24:009 (3,4,5) - The sounds here are not that strong, so I'd reduce the distance of this triplet to the previous object in order to make it more walkable.
01:25:509 (1,2) - I'd reduce a distance between these, because the dash is preceeded by a direction change.
01:26:259 (2,1) - Kinda ambiguous distance, I'd reduce it a bit because the sound on (1) doesn't seem that strong to me.
01:27:759 (3,1) - I'd increase this distance so the dash is clearer.
01:29:071 (4,5,6,1) - 1/2 dashes combined with antiflow like these are quite harsh, I'd try something different here like making the normal flow instead or idk.
01:30:384 (2,3) - Same comment as for the previous Kiai.
01:35:259 (3,4,1) - If this wasn't a Salad, having a dash between these three would have been fine. In this case, I'd prefer if you removed the dash between (3,4) and added one between (4,1) instead, in order to emphasize the downbeat.
01:41:634 (5,1) - At this BPM you need a 1/1 distance between objects and spinner. The spinner should start on 01:42:009 - instead.
01:51:009 (3,4,1) - I don't think these two distances should have the same emphasis, when (4,1) is clearly stronger. Try to make (3,4) a walkable distance instead.
01:55:509 (1,2) - On the previous pattern you placed a lot of emphasis in the vocals, and in this one you shifted to something else I can't identify. I suggest you replace 01:55:509 (1,2,3) - with two 3/2 sliders in order to follow the vocals as you did previously.
01:58:509 (1,2) - Similar stuff here, I suggest you follow the vocals instead.
02:07:509 (1,2) - This sounds really inconsistent. I suggest you keep the trend of using 3/2 sliders.
02:15:009 (1,2) - A 3/2 slider would sound better and also be more consistent with the rest instead of two 1/2 sliders.
02:19:321 (5,1) - 02:19:884 (2,3) - I'd reduce these dashes a bit, while keeping them clear dashes, as the section is quite calm.
02:23:071 (2,3) - I think the sounds here are really weak and the section feels a bit overdone with them. Taking them out clearly places the emphasis on the piano.

[Platter]

00:06:946 (2,3) - I don't think the sounds here are strong enough to require a dash, and the distance itself is a bit ambiguous, so I'd reduce it.
00:13:509 (1,2,3) - Weird spacing between these; (2,3) should be larger than (1,2) due to the stronger sound (and for consistency with the previous patterns)
00:24:759 (3,4,5) - I'd move this a bit to the left, in order to reduce the dash a bit. With the direction changes, it can be a bit awkward to play.
00:25:884 (2,3,1) - The larger distance feels really odd here, and creates ambiguity (by comparison with the rest of the pattern) as to whether it should be played as a walk or as a dash. I'd move (3) closer to the other objects.
00:29:165 (3,4) - This is such a wasted chance to add a nice, fitting dash. But you couldn't make something large because you added a 1/4 note, which wasn't really strong at all. So I suggest you remove (3) and create a stronger dash to (4).
00:29:259 (4,5,1) - The (4,5) distance is quite ambiguous and somewhat hard to walk. It doesn't deserve a dash IMO, so I'd reduce the dsitance. Additionally, the same issue of not being able to add a stronger dash because you added an unnecessary beat happens between (5,1).
00:32:821 (8,1) - Same issue of not being able to add a stronger dash because of a beat that could be removed.
00:45:759 (3,4,1) - Distance between (4,1) should be larger than (3,4) because (1) is the strongest sound here.
00:46:509 (1,2,3,4) - If anything, the dash here should be between (3,4) rather than (1,2), because (4) is the strongest sound.
00:59:071 (3,4,5) - Another part that could have a HDash if you removed the 1/4 note.
01:03:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - The piano sounds are relatively weak here, so I wouldn't map them. I would just use a long slider. Also applies for 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4,5) -.
01:16:790 (2) - I can't hear anything supporting this note here. Remove it.
01:21:196 (2,3,4) - I'd move (3) a bit to the left to make it more easily walkable. The current movement can feel quite tight which is a bit uncomfortable considering the HDash triggered on (4).
01:23:540 (2) - This note isn't needed at all, and you could make a stronger dash between (1,3) if you removed it.
01:27:009 (1,2,3,4) - 01:27:759 (5,6,7,8) - Put these notes closer, by moving (2,4) and (6,8) closer to their previous objects. Currently it can be hard to walk depending on how well players time the HDash.
01:29:259 (4,5) - I'd reduce this dash a bit, as it feels a bit tight.
01:45:571 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I'd put these groups a bit closer, as the current distance feels a bit large for the calm section.
02:03:571 (4,5,6) - Same comment as mentioned previously.
02:07:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing, I think the vocal is more important than the piano in this part so I'd map it as a single slider.
02:22:884 (2) - As in the Salad, I think that replacing this with a circle will follow the piano better.

[Rain]

00:04:977 (2,4) - I can't hear anything on these notes.
00:20:696 (8,9,10,11) - I think these should be 3 notes snapped to the 1/4 beats, since the flute (which was the sound in 1/6) stops on 00:20:634 (7) - .
00:25:509 (1,2) - This distance is a bit tight after the previous patterns, I'd move 00:25:884 (2,3,4,5) - a bit to the right.
00:26:446 (7) - I'd move this closer to the surrounding objects, it's currently a sharp movement on sounds that aren't that strong.
00:32:727 (8) - This note is overmapped.
01:12:571 (4,5,6) - (4,5) should have a larger distance than (5,6) because (5) is stronger.
01:22:509 (1,2) - I think this dash can be a bit tricky after the previous HDash. I'd either reduce it or increase it to trigger the HDash in order to make the movement back easier.
01:25:696 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:26:446 (8,9) - Reduce the distance between these doublets. They can catch players off guard quite easily.
01:28:696 (2,3,4) - Having this combination between 1/4 HDashes and antiflow feels a bit too much. You can make this easier by making the sliders slightly point outside.
01:33:759 (1,2) - It doesn't make sense for this to have antiflow with 1/4 jumps, while the previous 4 notes, which are really similar sounds, were just a simple stream. For simplicity's sake, I'd go with both of them being simple streams.
01:41:634 (1,2,3) - These three notes still have strong sounds, so the current movement between them is underwhelming. Try to increase the distances.
01:56:071 (4,5) - There should be a dash between these, for consistency and because the vocal is strong enough.
01:59:821 (6,1) - The distance between these two is also underwhelming. Try to increase it somehow.
02:06:759 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It doesn't make sense that the (4,1) HDash is followed by antiflow when, on a stronger sounding part (01:02:259 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) you mapped this without antiflow. So it's time to change the direction of 02:07:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - .
02:17:821 (6,1,2) - Again, it's rather weird that the larger distance is between (2,1) when (1) is stronger than (2). (6,1) should have the dash instead. Similar stuff on 02:20:821 (6,1,2) - .
02:18:384 (2,3,4) - Somewhat similar, it's weird that both distances here are equal when (3) is stronger than (4).

[Overdose]

00:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think it emphasizes notes better if you don't make the distances symmetric. For example, if you move 00:11:071 (2) - to x:304, much more emphasis is placed on (3), which is a slightly stronger sound.
00:13:321 (4) - Similarly, I think you should move this to x:224 to make the distances unequal and place more emphasis on (1).
00:25:790 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'm not sure having this much 1/4 HDashes in a row is truly fitting. Maybe you can remove the HDashes between 00:26:446 (6,7,8) - because (7) and (8) are on slightly weaker sounds.
00:47:727 (6,8) - I think you could move this (2) to x:112 in order to make the wiggle a little bit easier considering it's a calm part.
00:54:384 (2) - I think it'd be better if you split this into a 1/2 slider and a circle, since 00:54:759 - is a rather important beat (as emphasized by the clap), so it deserves its own object IMO.
00:58:884 (2,4) - I'd move these to x:320 to add more leniency to the pattern overall: it will be a bit easier to get here from the previous pattern, which is a rather strong HDash, and also will make the wiggle a bit easier. Also applies for 02:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - .
01:03:759 (2,3,1) - Making these distances slightly unequal will emphasize the slightly stronger sound at (1) better. Also applies for 01:04:509 (1,2,3) -, 01:12:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -, 01:55:509 (1,2,3) -, 02:00:384 (2,3,4) -, 02:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -, 02:13:884 (2,3,4) -, 02:19:884 (2,3,4) -, 02:20:634 (5,6,1) -, and 02:21:384 (2,3,4) - .
I'm not sure whether the patterns in the Kiai are overdone or not. To me, they are creating a huge gap with the Rain due to their strong gimmicky and troll-y nature, but I'll let other modders voice their opinion.
01:45:571 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I'd make this pattern slightly easier by reducing the distances, in order to better represent the calmer section

Last edited by ZiRoX 2017-11-27T00:56:58+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-11-26T23:34:31+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
[General]
The yellow color feels a bit too bright. I suggest you go for a orange color instead, which matches the flowers better. The light gray could also be a little bit darker so it stands out on the white half of the BG a bit more. done
Your drum-hitclap sounds like recorded at a ping pong match. Seriously though, it doesn't really fit the song, so I suggest searching for another hitsounds. replaced with a new snare one
[Cup]
00:03:009 (3,4) - This distance is suddenly large compared to the rest of the section. An option is to slant (4) a bit more by moving its head to the right; another would be to move 00:03:759 (4,1,2,3) - as a whole to the right. slanted (3) (which is now (1 because of the new combos) to the left, since the distance between 3 and 4 was the one that was bigger compared to the rest.
00:30:009 - Since the song calms down a bit starting here, I'd lower the SV multiplier until 01:00:009 - . Some of the horizontal sliders in this section have a little bit too much movement for this calm section. done
01:02:259 (4,1,2) - Having consecutive direction changes like this feels a bit too much for a Cup in non-Kiai sections. One option would be to make (1) flow right, like this: done
SPOILER
^Similar stuff applies for 01:10:509 (3) - , 01:16:509 (3) - and 01:57:009 (3) - . done for the first one, left the other ones as they were because the intensity behind them supports them.
01:19:509 (3,4,5) - These have a slightly larger distance than the rest of your patterns, coupled with antiflow movements. I think you could move (4) to the left a bit to reduce the distances. done.
01:43:509 - I'd also reduce the SV multiplier for this calm section. done
02:22:509 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The piano sound are really weak compared to the vocal, so it feels a bit too much having them mapped in a Cup. I would have gone for a long slider following the vocal. done the latter.
[Salad]
00:01:509 (1,2,3) - Since the song is just starting, these feel a bit large for walkable distances. I'd move (2) closer to the other objects. done
00:03:009 (3,4,1) - For a diff that it's meant to introduce players to dashes, having 2 dashes between 3 consecutive objects not even 5 secs into the song feels a bit too much. In this case, the first one is less important than the second one, so I'd remove that one. removed
00:04:509 (1,2,3) - Considering the two antiflow movements, the second one including a dash, I'd make it a little bit easier by making the walkable pattern shorter, so I'd move 00:05:634 (2) - to the right a bit. done
00:07:884 (3,4) - Kinda ambiguous distance, can be easily done by walking but it seems like you intended it to be a dash. If it's that way, consider making the dash clearer by increasing the distance. made it into a walk instead.
00:09:009 (4,5) - The distance feels a bit tight to walk, so I'd reduce it a bit. done
00:10:509 (1,2,3) - Having three 1/2 dashes in a row like this for the intro also feels a bit overdone. Maybe you can make 00:10:509 (1,2) - walkable. Made 00:11:259 (2,3) - walkable instead.
00:12:009 (3,4) - Looks tight to walk, and I don't think the dash fits here. Make it more easily walkable instead. as above.
00:19:509 (1,2) - I'd take the dash out of here, otherwise this part feels too dashy with a dash nearly every 2/1. Same thing for 00:22:884 (2,3) -. done
00:26:821 (9) - I'd take this note out. This 1/2 stream feels a bit dense in comparison with the rest, although I get there is a sound that justifies the stream. done
00:27:009 (1) - Having this as a 1/2 repeat instead of a 1/1 slider is not only inconsistent with the rest of the section, but it also creates a rather harsh movement having to do 3 direction changes between 00:27:009 (1,2) -. Also, the same previous thing of removing the dash applies here. Turned into a 1/1 slider, and removed the dash.
00:43:509 (1,2,3,4) - I would have preferred a slider like you did on 00:37:509 (1) - for consistency. done
00:47:259 (2,3) - Kinda ambiguos distance because they are apart in the timeline. Try to make it clearer. done
00:52:509 (3,4) - Inconsistent dash with just a second ago; I'd remove it. 00:54:384 (2,3) - is also inconsistent, so I'd take it out. For the former, I've tried to emphasize Guriri's voice with those two dashes those sliders have in between. As for the latter, turned both 1 and 2 into a single 1/1 slider that removes the "dash" (2x distance isn't a dash lmao)
00:56:259 (2,3) - If you intend this to be clearly walkable, you need to reduce the distance a bit. done
01:05:071 (4) - Sound here is really weak, and it would have been better to keep the dash to 01:05:259 (5) - for consistency instead. Removed notes at 01:05:071 - and 01:05:446 - to just follow vocals with individual notes.
01:18:759 (3) - I don't think the drum sound is that strong to require a dash; I'd remove it. done
01:21:759 (5,1) - This could have a dash between them, the sound on (1) is quite strong. added
01:24:009 (3,4,5) - The sounds here are not that strong, so I'd reduce the distance of this triplet to the previous object in order to make it more walkable. done
01:25:509 (1,2) - I'd reduce a distance between these, because the dash is preceeded by a direction change. done
01:26:259 (2,1) - Kinda ambiguous distance, I'd reduce it a bit because the sound on (1) doesn't seem that strong to me. done
01:27:759 (3,1) - I'd increase this distance so the dash is clearer. done
01:29:071 (4,5,6,1) - 1/2 dashes combined with antiflow like these are quite harsh, I'd try something different here like making the normal flow instead or idk. fixed
01:30:384 (2,3) - Same comment as for the previous Kiai. same answer
01:35:259 (3,4,1) - If this wasn't a Salad, having a dash between these three would have been fine. In this case, I'd prefer if you removed the dash between (3,4) and added one between (4,1) instead, in order to emphasize the downbeat. done
01:41:634 (5,1) - At this BPM you need a 1/1 distance between objects and spinner. The spinner should start on 01:42:009 - instead. done
01:51:009 (3,4,1) - I don't think these two distances should have the same emphasis, when (4,1) is clearly stronger. Try to make (3,4) a walkable distance instead. done
01:55:509 (1,2) - On the previous pattern you placed a lot of emphasis in the vocals, and in this one you shifted to something else I can't identify. I suggest you replace 01:55:509 (1,2,3) - with two 3/2 sliders in order to follow the vocals as you did previously. done
01:58:509 (1,2) - Similar stuff here, I suggest you follow the vocals instead. done
02:07:509 (1,2) - This sounds really inconsistent. I suggest you keep the trend of using 3/2 sliders. done
02:15:009 (1,2) - A 3/2 slider would sound better and also be more consistent with the rest instead of two 1/2 sliders. done
02:19:321 (5,1) - 02:19:884 (2,3) - I'd reduce these dashes a bit, while keeping them clear dashes, as the section is quite calm. done
02:23:071 (2,3) - I think the sounds here are really weak and the section feels a bit overdone with them. Taking them out clearly places the emphasis on the piano. took them out
[Platter]
00:06:946 (2,3) - I don't think the sounds here are strong enough to require a dash, and the distance itself is a bit ambiguous, so I'd reduce it. done
00:13:509 (1,2,3) - Weird spacing between these; (2,3) should be larger than (1,2) due to the stronger sound (and for consistency with the previous patterns) fixed
00:24:759 (3,4,5) - I'd move this a bit to the left, in order to reduce the dash a bit. With the direction changes, it can be a bit awkward to play. uh... moving them to the left makes the dash stronger, I think. Moved them to another place instead.
00:25:884 (2,3,1) - The larger distance feels really odd here, and creates ambiguity (by comparison with the rest of the pattern) as to whether it should be played as a walk or as a dash. I'd move (3) closer to the other objects. Arranged the whole thing differently so that the only sound emphasized with 2x distance is (1)
00:29:165 (3,4) - This is such a wasted chance to add a nice, fitting dash. But you couldn't make something large because you added a 1/4 note, which wasn't really strong at all. So I suggest you remove (3) and create a stronger dash to (4). done
00:29:259 (4,5,1) - The (4,5) distance is quite ambiguous and somewhat hard to walk. It doesn't deserve a dash IMO, so I'd reduce the dsitance. Additionally, the same issue of not being able to add a stronger dash because you added an unnecessary beat happens between (5,1). done all
00:32:821 (8,1) - Same issue of not being able to add a stronger dash because of a beat that could be removed. removed
00:45:759 (3,4,1) - Distance between (4,1) should be larger than (3,4) because (1) is the strongest sound here. fixed
00:46:509 (1,2,3,4) - If anything, the dash here should be between (3,4) rather than (1,2), because (4) is the strongest sound. fixed
00:59:071 (3,4,5) - Another part that could have a HDash if you removed the 1/4 note. removed note and added hdash
01:03:009 (1,2,3,4,5) - The piano sounds are relatively weak here, so I wouldn't map them. I would just use a long slider. Also applies for 01:04:509 (1,2,3,4,5) -. changed
01:16:790 (2) - I can't hear anything supporting this note here. Remove it. removed
01:21:196 (2,3,4) - I'd move (3) a bit to the left to make it more easily walkable. The current movement can feel quite tight which is a bit uncomfortable considering the HDash triggered on (4). moved
01:23:540 (2) - This note isn't needed at all, and you could make a stronger dash between (1,3) if you removed it. removed
01:27:009 (1,2,3,4) - 01:27:759 (5,6,7,8) - Put these notes closer, by moving (2,4) and (6,8) closer to their previous objects. Currently it can be hard to walk depending on how well players time the HDash. done
01:29:259 (4,5) - I'd reduce this dash a bit, as it feels a bit tight. dunno why it was that big, but fixed
01:45:571 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - I'd put these groups a bit closer, as the current distance feels a bit large for the calm section. done
02:03:571 (4,5,6) - Same comment as mentioned previously. removed note and added hdash
02:07:509 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same thing, I think the vocal is more important than the piano in this part so I'd map it as a single slider. done
02:22:884 (2) - As in the Salad, I think that replacing this with a circle will follow the piano better. done
[Rain]
00:04:977 (2,4) - I can't hear anything on these notes. Either my headphones don't work properly or I can hear piano notes on those two ticks then. Either way, deleted them.
00:20:696 (8,9,10,11) - I think these should be 3 notes snapped to the 1/4 beats, since the flute (which was the sound in 1/6) stops on 00:20:634 (7) - . ok
00:25:509 (1,2) - This distance is a bit tight after the previous patterns, I'd move 00:25:884 (2,3,4,5) - a bit to the right. done
00:26:446 (7) - I'd move this closer to the surrounding objects, it's currently a sharp movement on sounds that aren't that strong. done
00:32:727 (8) - This note is overmapped. removed
01:12:571 (4,5,6) - (4,5) should have a larger distance than (5,6) because (5) is stronger. fixed
01:22:509 (1,2) - I think this dash can be a bit tricky after the previous HDash. I'd either reduce it or increase it to trigger the HDash in order to make the movement back easier. increased
01:25:696 (2,3,4,5) - and 01:26:446 (8,9) - Reduce the distance between these doublets. They can catch players off guard quite easily.
01:28:696 (2,3,4) - Having this combination between 1/4 HDashes and antiflow feels a bit too much. You can make this easier by making the sliders slightly point outside. done
01:33:759 (1,2) - It doesn't make sense for this to have antiflow with 1/4 jumps, while the previous 4 notes, which are really similar sounds, were just a simple stream. For simplicity's sake, I'd go with both of them being simple streams. You can hear a glitch-ish effect ala sdvx on 01:33:759 (1,2) - these two in the background, while in the previous 01:33:384 (3,4,5,6) - they're not there.
01:41:634 (1,2,3) - These three notes still have strong sounds, so the current movement between them is underwhelming. Try to increase the distances. Added a dash
01:56:071 (4,5) - There should be a dash between these, for consistency and because the vocal is strong enough. added
01:59:821 (6,1) - The distance between these two is also underwhelming. Try to increase it somehow. done
02:06:759 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It doesn't make sense that the (4,1) HDash is followed by antiflow when, on a stronger sounding part (01:02:259 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) you mapped this without antiflow. So it's time to change the direction of 02:07:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - . done
02:17:821 (6,1,2) - Again, it's rather weird that the larger distance is between (2,1) when (1) is stronger than (2). (6,1) should have the dash instead. Similar stuff on 02:20:821 (6,1,2) - . fixed
02:18:384 (2,3,4) - Somewhat similar, it's weird that both distances here are equal when (3) is stronger than (4). as above

Deif

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Deif 2017-12-09T17:04:56+00:00

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[Overdose]

00:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I think it emphasizes notes better if you don't make the distances symmetric. For example, if you move 00:11:071 (2) - to x:304, much more emphasis is placed on (3), which is a slightly stronger sound. (Done)
00:13:321 (4) - Similarly, I think you should move this to x:224 to make the distances unequal and place more emphasis on (1). (Done)
00:25:790 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'm not sure having this much 1/4 HDashes in a row is truly fitting. Maybe you can remove the HDashes between 00:26:446 (6,7,8) - because (7) and (8) are on slightly weaker sounds. (Done)
00:47:727 (6,8) - I think you could move this (2) to x:112 in order to make the wiggle a little bit easier considering it's a calm part. (The wiggle isn't that prominent and could still work in this calm section as an introduction to the next one)
00:54:384 (2) - I think it'd be better if you split this into a 1/2 slider and a circle, since 00:54:759 - is a rather important beat (as emphasized by the clap), so it deserves its own object IMO. (Done)
00:58:884 (2,4) - I'd move these to x:320 to add more leniency to the pattern overall: it will be a bit easier to get here from the previous pattern, which is a rather strong HDash, and also will make the wiggle a bit easier. Also applies for 02:03:384 (2,3,4,5) - . (Those wiggles will stay to remark... is that a flute? It's a rather characteristic sound that only appears 3 times, so I wanted to make something special for it)
01:03:759 (2,3,1) - Making these distances slightly unequal will emphasize the slightly stronger sound at (1) better. Also applies for 01:04:509 (1,2,3) -, 01:12:009 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -, 01:55:509 (1,2,3) -, 02:00:384 (2,3,4) -, 02:10:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -, 02:13:884 (2,3,4) -, 02:19:884 (2,3,4) -, 02:20:634 (5,6,1) -, and 02:21:384 (2,3,4) - . (The original distances were, although equidistant, already spreaded enough. Just reduced a bit the distance on the middle note to make a difference as you suggested, so hopefully it's enough to represent the song better)
I'm not sure whether the patterns in the Kiai are overdone or not. To me, they are creating a huge gap with the Rain due to their strong gimmicky and troll-y nature, but I'll let other modders voice their opinion. (It's something similar as the original Deemo map, where the kiai is the only real challenging section of the map. It's kinda hard to balance it with the rest of the song, but it should be doable with not so many tries imo)
01:45:571 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I'd make this pattern slightly easier by reducing the distances, in order to better represent the calmer section (Also changed the shape of the pattern to make it fit better)

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F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2017-12-18T12:25:09+00:00

late late late

[General]

should be fine if there's nothing wrong with metadata

[Cup]

It doesn't feel right when every violin sound is labeled with hitwhistle at the beginning, as well as vocals on the latter half part. These whistles feel sharp while violin sounds are quite smooth. You can use several whistles to enhance the track but I don't think it's a good idea to give every long violin sound a whistle. On the contrary, piano sounds fit to whistle much better, as 00:14:259 (2,1,1,2,3,4,5) - . Highly recommend you to reconsider the usage of whistles before the break, especially for places like 00:06:946 (2,3) - that I have no idea what's going on with the whistle
00:13:134 (3,1) - 1.4x distance is large when music intensity is going down. need to be nerfed
00:14:259 (2,1) - it doesn't look smooth in gameplay tbh. (but shouldn't matter too much)
00:31:509 (2,1) - slope change is sharp on the transition from 2 to 1. Distance could be nerfed to reduce such feeling (with music intensity's going down).
00:40:509 (1) - slidertail whistle is unneeded. if you try to whistle every vocal sound and piano sound, there's no actual emphasis for the whistle sound then.
00:53:634 (3,1) - 1.75x distance is better not used with direction change, which is harsher too much than patterns on similar sounds (e.g 00:50:634 (3,1) - . Nerf distance or change direction of slider 1
00:56:259 (2) - ^ similar. don't think it needs stronger emphasis
01:16:509 (1) - prefer more movement on this intro to the burst part instead of copying 01:09:759 (2,1,2) - , a pattern in calm part
02:05:259 (2) - sliderhead should have addition of normal instead of sampleset of normal?

[Salad]

same hitsound problem
00:26:634 (5,1) - not sure why no jump here
00:39:759 (2,1) - 00:41:259 (2,1) - jumps here are ignoring the music imo. It keeps this part running in an intense atmosphere, where jumps occur often. But in fact instrument here isn't that strong. So jumps can be fewer. For example, 4 sections a jump, which means you should remove these 2 I quoted.
01:25:509 (1,2) - Not sure if this is a jump or a walk. Now it's small for a jump
01:48:009 (1) - tilt a bit more to the right or now it's much walkable
02:05:259 (2) - sliderhead hitsound, same as Cup
01:56:259 (2,1) - doesn't need a jump imo, because the music difference is actually small (with soft piano sound added, tho).

[Platter]

hitsound here is not that bad because rhythm is more filled, and we can get softer 1/2 sounds from that. So we get difference among sounds, which is significant. But you can still consider to remove some whistles. For example, remove whistle at 00:30:946 (4) - 'cause constant whistles are too sharp, while this sound, being the start of a triplet in the music, is fine to give less enhancement.
00:19:509 - to 00:30:009 - this part has completely no HDash, which seems unbalanced to me.
00:37:509 (1,2) - don't need a jump here. It's hard to map a real jump here anyway
00:50:259 (3,4) - yeah this part is a bit lack of actual sound. So I'd prefer smaller distance to walk. Now it's hard
01:11:634 (6,1) - remove HDash?
02:03:009 (1,2) - reduce this jump. Now the jump here occur back and forth frequently, which shouldn't happen imo.

[Rain]

00:20:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's interesting that only 00:20:509 (5) - lands on an actual 1/6 sound. 00:20:321 (2,3) - should be changed to 1/4 snap instead
00:41:071 (2,3) - under such flow, distance should be buffed by 0.1x (or a bit more) otherwise it's pretty easy to walk thru.
01:47:259 (2) - a little bit easy to overshoot. need it be more horizontal
02:13:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nerf distance between 02:13:509 (1,2) - or change the entire flow. Now 02:13:509 (1,2) - is walkable but hard due to previous HDash. Same as 02:14:259 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) -
00:28:509 (1,2) - distance can be smaller? reference at 00:21:759 (2,3) - 00:22:509 (1,2) -
00:30:009 (1,2) - not sure about this HDash. Now it's an option to move 00:30:571 (2) - to make 00:30:009 (1,2) - walkable, then 00:30:759 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl+H then move them left together.
01:19:509 (1,2) - don't like this jump. 01:19:884 (2) - and 01:20:071 (3) - are not equally emphasized. You should walk to 2 then jump to 3.

@ZiRoX
Imo, Deif's diff isn't significantly harder than a general Overdose, but some patterns break the flow and cause insta-fail easily. So this diff can bring up the impression of having Deluge patterns. Let's see how Deif's gonna reply on those patterns first.

[Deif]

01:28:509 (1,2) - need to give it a flow or insta fail will happen frequently
01:33:384 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - tap dashes and strong reversing HDashes can happen seperately in a general Overdose. But when they are gathered together, they buff the difficulty more than a simple plus. Players need to switch from accurate dashing to cross-screen HDashing, and get insta-fail once any single red fruit is missed. Recommend change the tap dashing pattern into small walking combined with normal jumping patterns. In this case, players don't have to take care of every single fruit, so that red fruits catch more attention.
01:27:384 (3,4,5) - strong antiflow that is quite hard to catch
01:21:009 (1,2) - need nerf distance by 4~8 px as there's a sharp 1/4 HDash right before here. Quite easy to miss
01:21:571 (4,5) - HDash need to be added. Players need to keep pressing at 01:21:009 (1,2,3,4) - then do 1/4 hyper tap dashing at 01:21:759 (5,6,7) - . Both jump timing and strength are different. A HDash can help to seperate parts. Then you can make 01:21:759 (5) - the same angle as 01:21:946 (6) - to help the flow: https://puu.sh/yJwP7/ab2ca7c370.jpg
01:39:571 (3,4) - jump is edgy. Should nerf it
skip nazi things

For me the spread isn't much confusing but the hitsound...
Good luck~

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-12-27T18:57:14+00:00

accidental doublepost

Last edited by Hareimu 2018-01-25T19:25:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2017-12-27T18:57:33+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
late late late

[General]
should be fine if there's nothing wrong with metadata
[Cup]
It doesn't feel right when every violin sound is labeled with hitwhistle at the beginning, as well as vocals on the latter half part. These whistles feel sharp while violin sounds are quite smooth. You can use several whistles to enhance the track but I don't think it's a good idea to give every long violin sound a whistle. On the contrary, piano sounds fit to whistle much better, as 00:14:259 (2,1,1,2,3,4,5) - . Highly recommend you to reconsider the usage of whistles before the break, especially for places like 00:06:946 (2,3) - that I have no idea what's going on with the whistle
00:13:134 (3,1) - 1.4x distance is large when music intensity is going down. need to be nerfed done
00:14:259 (2,1) - it doesn't look smooth in gameplay tbh. (but shouldn't matter too much) should be fixed with previous change
00:31:509 (2,1) - slope change is sharp on the transition from 2 to 1. Distance could be nerfed to reduce such feeling (with music intensity's going down). done
00:40:509 (1) - slidertail whistle is unneeded. if you try to whistle every vocal sound and piano sound, there's no actual emphasis for the whistle sound then.
00:53:634 (3,1) - 1.75x distance is better not used with direction change, which is harsher too much than patterns on similar sounds (e.g 00:50:634 (3,1) - . Nerf distance or change direction of slider 1 done the former
00:56:259 (2) - ^ similar. don't think it needs stronger emphasis as above
01:16:509 (1) - prefer more movement on this intro to the burst part instead of copying 01:09:759 (2,1,2) - , a pattern in calm part done
02:05:259 (2) - sliderhead should have addition of normal instead of sampleset of normal?
[Salad]
same hitsound problem
00:26:634 (5,1) - not sure why no jump here added
00:39:759 (2,1) - 00:41:259 (2,1) - jumps here are ignoring the music imo. It keeps this part running in an intense atmosphere, where jumps occur often. But in fact instrument here isn't that strong. So jumps can be fewer. For example, 4 sections a jump, which means you should remove these 2 I quoted. done
01:25:509 (1,2) - Not sure if this is a jump or a walk. Now it's small for a jump increased distancing
01:48:009 (1) - tilt a bit more to the right or now it's much walkable done
02:05:259 (2) - sliderhead hitsound, same as Cup
01:56:259 (2,1) - doesn't need a jump imo, because the music difference is actually small (with soft piano sound added, tho) following the strong vocal line here, not instruments.
[Platter]
hitsound here is not that bad because rhythm is more filled, and we can get softer 1/2 sounds from that. So we get difference among sounds, which is significant. But you can still consider to remove some whistles. For example, remove whistle at 00:30:946 (4) - 'cause constant whistles are too sharp, while this sound, being the start of a triplet in the music, is fine to give less enhancement.
00:19:509 - to 00:30:009 - this part has completely no HDash, which seems unbalanced to me. added some at the ending of the section
00:37:509 (1,2) - don't need a jump here. It's hard to map a real jump here anyway removed
00:50:259 (3,4) - yeah this part is a bit lack of actual sound. So I'd prefer smaller distance to walk. Now it's hard reduced
01:11:634 (6,1) - remove HDash? done
02:03:009 (1,2) - reduce this jump. Now the jump here occur back and forth frequently, which shouldn't happen imo. done
[Rain]
00:20:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - It's interesting that only 00:20:509 (5) - lands on an actual 1/6 sound. 00:20:321 (2,3) - should be changed to 1/4 snap instead done
00:41:071 (2,3) - under such flow, distance should be buffed by 0.1x (or a bit more) otherwise it's pretty easy to walk thru. done
01:47:259 (2) - a little bit easy to overshoot. need it be more horizontal done
02:13:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nerf distance between 02:13:509 (1,2) - or change the entire flow. Now 02:13:509 (1,2) - is walkable but hard due to previous HDash. Same as 02:14:259 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 01:09:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - done
00:28:509 (1,2) - distance can be smaller? reference at 00:21:759 (2,3) - 00:22:509 (1,2) -
00:30:009 (1,2) - not sure about this HDash. Now it's an option to move 00:30:571 (2) - to make 00:30:009 (1,2) - walkable, then 00:30:759 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl+H then move them left together. done
01:19:509 (1,2) - don't like this jump. 01:19:884 (2) - and 01:20:071 (3) - are not equally emphasized. You should walk to 2 then jump to 3. changed
@ZiRoX
Imo, Deif's diff isn't significantly harder than a general Overdose, but some patterns break the flow and cause insta-fail easily. So this diff can bring up the impression of having Deluge patterns. Let's see how Deif's gonna reply on those patterns first.

For me the spread isn't much confusing but the hitsound... Don't worry, I'm redoing the whole hitsounding for my diffs. Until now I just hitsounded the rain diff and copied its hitsounds to all other diffs, that's why the whistles were so dense. It shouldn't be that grating now.
Good luck~

thanks!

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2017-12-30T22:23:14+00:00

F D Flourite

[Deif]

01:28:509 (1,2) - need to give it a flow or insta fail will happen frequently (Tilted the slider to the right so the jump isn't that static)
01:33:384 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - tap dashes and strong reversing HDashes can happen seperately in a general Overdose. But when they are gathered together, they buff the difficulty more than a simple plus. Players need to switch from accurate dashing to cross-screen HDashing, and get insta-fail once any single red fruit is missed. Recommend change the tap dashing pattern into small walking combined with normal jumping patterns. In this case, players don't have to take care of every single fruit, so that red fruits catch more attention. (I'll have nightmares with this pattern... Tried to make it somehow softer, but I'm not sure if the final result is what you were expecting. I'll ask Hareimu about it too)
01:27:384 (3,4,5) - strong antiflow that is quite hard to catch (Inverted it)
01:21:009 (1,2) - need nerf distance by 4~8 px as there's a sharp 1/4 HDash right before here. Quite easy to miss (Done)
01:21:571 (4,5) - HDash need to be added. Players need to keep pressing at 01:21:009 (1,2,3,4) - then do 1/4 hyper tap dashing at 01:21:759 (5,6,7) - . Both jump timing and strength are different. A HDash can help to seperate parts. Then you can make 01:21:759 (5) - the same angle as 01:21:946 (6) - to help the flow: https://puu.sh/yJwP7/ab2ca7c370.jpg (I started changing this pattern without checking your suggestion, but seems like we ended up with the same idea LOL)
01:39:571 (3,4) - jump is edgy. Should nerf it (Alright)
skip nazi things

For me the spread isn't much confusing but the hitsound...
Good luck~

Additionally, reduced the HP to 6 to fit better with the spread and avoid possible instafails that could happen in the kiai. Thanks for your help!

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Kyuare

252 posts

Joined May 2013

Kyuare 2018-01-02T20:24:53+00:00

just some suggestions about the overdose

Deif's Overdose

00:15:759 (1,2,3,4) - I would like to see way more spacing here because of the bpm change (160 -> 120). I find that it is not enough satisfying.
00:26:446 (6,7,8) - I would use HDash (or at least more spacing) here, because the music is much more intense.
00:24:759 (4,5) - same thing
00:29:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I advise you to Ctrl+G it: the part from 00:29:634 - is stronger yet you made the stream more vertical and easier to catch.
01:18:759 (5,6,7,8) - can you nerf the spacing scaling to 1.50x for HD players please ?
01:19:509 (1,2) - pretty huge gap in my opinion, it makes the reading difficult. I would move 01:19:977 (2,3,4,5,6) - a bit to the right to make it more intuitive.
01:21:571 (4,5) - This jump definitly deserve a HDash, here is my suggestion to fix it easily:
01:31:134 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would personally prefer a curve because it's easier to read, and I don't think this part deserve a sharp design since it's not that intense.
01:31:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This one deserves more movement at the beginning, here is my suggestion:
01:50:259 (2,1) - I advise you to put more spacing because of the strong beat, at least as strong as the next one.
02:19:321 (4,1) - Same thing, i would put more spacing to emphasize more the voice.

i like it

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Deif 2018-01-03T12:47:00+00:00

Kyuare wrote:
just some suggestions about the overdose
Deif's Overdose
00:15:759 (1,2,3,4) - I would like to see way more spacing here because of the bpm change (160 -> 120). I find that it is not enough satisfying. (Added)
00:26:446 (6,7,8) - I would use HDash (or at least more spacing) here, because the music is much more intense. (It got reduced by a previous mod, as it'd just be a spam of slider jumps. Clustered ones will stay, since the music isn't that intense imo)
00:24:759 (4,5) - same thing (The important beat is at (3,4) instead, where I already added a hyper)
00:29:259 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - I advise you to Ctrl+G it: the part from 00:29:634 - is stronger yet you made the stream more vertical and easier to catch. (Just added a bit more of scale on the second part)
01:18:759 (5,6,7,8) - can you nerf the spacing scaling to 1.50x for HD players please ? (Not a big difference you asked, plus those got already nerfed twice)
01:19:509 (1,2) - pretty huge gap in my opinion, it makes the reading difficult. I would move 01:19:977 (2,3,4,5,6) - a bit to the right to make it more intuitive. (Moved the ending of (1) closer to those notes, which would cause the same effect)
01:21:571 (4,5) - This jump definitly deserve a HDash, here is my suggestion to fix it easily: (It got fixed with the previous mod. There's a hyper now)
01:31:134 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would personally prefer a curve because it's easier to read, and I don't think this part deserve a sharp design since it's not that intense. (Alright)
01:31:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - This one deserves more movement at the beginning, here is my suggestion: (Scaled + rotated to achieve it)
01:50:259 (2,1) - I advise you to put more spacing because of the strong beat, at least as strong as the next one. (Done)
02:19:321 (4,1) - Same thing, i would put more spacing to emphasize more the voice. (It was reduced on a previous mod due to the music not being so intense)
i like it

/o/

Update

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Sanyi

236 posts

Joined November 2015

Sanyi 2018-02-24T13:30:27+00:00

Hareimu asked me to mod the top diff so here I am!

The mod will be structured a bit differently than usual since I think it works better this time. Please read the mod as a whole before answering!

Emiru's Aria

Inconsistent Intensity:
Even though the intensity of each individual section of the map is appropriate, the intensity of the map as a whole is inconsistent. There are calm parts where you used hypers on a regular basis or even used hypers with high snapping (1/8, 1/12) while you didn't use any hypers for more intense parts of the music. Let's take a look at some sections:

00:01:415 (1,2) - A 1/8 hyperdash right at the beginning may be a style choice but is still highly questionable since the beginning is a calm part of the music. It is also inconsistent with the upcoming downbeats (00:03:009 (1) - , 00:04:509 (1) - and so on), since these didn't got a hyper at all.
Comparing the sections starting from 00:37:509 - , 00:48:009 - respectively 01:00:009 - , the music is getting more intense with every section (mainly due to the drums but not only). There is not a real difference in the intensity of your map though, you decide to neglect hypers even for the last section and the flow doesn't really get harder either. The intensity raise should be at least somehow noticeable while playing.
In addition to the last point: Looking at the section starting at 01:12:009 - , you finally decide to use hypers - in a calm section. You did lower the density of your pattern for the calm section which is good, but starting to use hypers periodically here while neglecting them for so long feels pretty clumsy to me since that normally would be done for a stronger section instead of a calmer one.
01:15:009 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this the exact same pattern as the previous ones although the music is far more intense here?
Compare the sections starting at 01:52:509 - respectively 02:04:509 - : You used more hypers in the first section even though the second one is more intense (and the second section is only barely harder regarding its flow so that isn't enough build-up).
The build-up you mapped starting at 02:13:509 (1) - is nicely executed, but isn't demanded by the music and therefore kinda overdone.
The section starting at 02:19:509 - is calmer than the previous one starting at 02:16:509 - , but you didn't consider it in your pattern. You even used more direction changes than beforehand which is contraindicating.
02:26:821 (1,2) - Waiting for so long and using a 1/12 for a barely hearable sound is overdone.

The intensity management of this map is too much focusing on individual sounds and not paying much attention to the overall intensity of the different sections. Some adjustments to better that out would be appreciated.

Missing variety in spacing:
The spacing in some sections is missing variety. Some sections do only provide dashes, no walks or hypers, and even the dashes are not varying much in their spacing. That leads to poor emphasis at some points. Take a look at the following example:

Section from 00:01:509 - to 00:15:571 - : The section has pretty much only dashes. You don't use higher spacing for major sounds like downbeats or strong violin sounds. You also don't use lower spacing for rather unimportant sounds like 00:09:571 (2) - .

Pretty much all sections where you didn't use hypers need more noticeable spacing variation. I know that there are spacing variations but they are too minimal atm to be effective. Emphasizing the song just by the used flow just doesn't work out well enough.

Not noticeable transitions:
Some musical transitions are not really remarkable in your map. That is no major issue but I think it is worth mentioning it. Let's look at some spots that occur me:

01:17:634 (7,8,1,2) - The transition into the kiai is not that noticeable here because it is the second out of three jumps in a row which doesn't really put the spotlight on 01:18:009 (1) - , and the last jump is even bigger which makes 01:18:009 (1) - even less remarkable.
01:40:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Similar issue here: 01:41:634 (1) - Is nothing special after all these jumps. You put way more emphasis on 01:42:009 (3) - by making it the first slider after a lot single notes (which also ends the chain of jumps), emphasis on 01:41:634 (1) - is not really given sadly.
02:19:321 (4,1) - The transition here is also not really remarkable since you maintain the same intensity with your pattern.

Transitions should be more clear, I just pointed the most obvious cases out, some minor transitions that I haven't pointed out could be more remarkable too but they are not that urgent.

Other suggestions:

01:19:134 (1) - Why is the NC here instead of 01:19:509 (4) - ?
01:33:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Pretty harsh pattern here, gets way harder than ever before. I think 01:34:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Can be nerfed you are using 6 sliders to cover 4 violin sounds which isn't good imo, reducing it to 4 sliders for better emphasis and a bit easier pattern would be nice.

Please don't misjudge my mod Emiru! The diff isn't bad at all (flow and gameplay are nice to name some good things), it just felt clumsy in some aspects so I decided to structure my mod a bit differently than usual. I don't expect a rework of the diff (it is too good for that), more like some noticeable adjustments that take my suggestions into account. I hope I phrased my concerns in an understandable way, feel free to poke me when you have questions.

I might take a more detailed look at the diff and at the other diffs at a later point if needed, but that should be enough input for the top diff for now.

Good Luck!

Emiru

257 posts

Joined September 2013

Emiru 2018-02-26T17:22:58+00:00

Sanyi wrote:
Hareimu asked me to mod the top diff so here I am!

The mod will be structured a bit differently than usual since I think it works better this time. Please read the mod as a whole before answering!

Emiru's Aria

Inconsistent Intensity:
Even though the intensity of each individual section of the map is appropriate, the intensity of the map as a whole is inconsistent. There are calm parts where you used hypers on a regular basis or even used hypers with high snapping (1/8, 1/12) while you didn't use any hypers for more intense parts of the music. Let's take a look at some sections:
00:01:415 (1,2) - A 1/8 hyperdash right at the beginning may be a style choice but is still highly questionable since the beginning is a calm part of the music. It is also inconsistent with the upcoming downbeats (00:03:009 (1) - , 00:04:509 (1) - and so on), since these didn't got a hyper at all.
Comparing the sections starting from 00:37:509 - , 00:48:009 - respectively 01:00:009 - , the music is getting more intense with every section (mainly due to the drums but not only). There is not a real difference in the intensity of your map though, you decide to neglect hypers even for the last section and the flow doesn't really get harder either. The intensity raise should be at least somehow noticeable while playing.
In addition to the last point: Looking at the section starting at 01:12:009 - , you finally decide to use hypers - in a calm section. You did lower the density of your pattern for the calm section which is good, but starting to use hypers periodically here while neglecting them for so long feels pretty clumsy to me since that normally would be done for a stronger section instead of a calmer one.
01:15:009 (1,2,3,4) - Why is this the exact same pattern as the previous ones although the music is far more intense here?
Compare the sections starting at 01:52:509 - respectively 02:04:509 - : You used more hypers in the first section even though the second one is more intense (and the second section is only barely harder regarding its flow so that isn't enough build-up).
The build-up you mapped starting at 02:13:509 (1) - is nicely executed, but isn't demanded by the music and therefore kinda overdone.
The section starting at 02:19:509 - is calmer than the previous one starting at 02:16:509 - , but you didn't consider it in your pattern. You even used more direction changes than beforehand which is contraindicating.
02:26:821 (1,2) - Waiting for so long and using a 1/12 for a barely hearable sound is overdone.
The intensity management of this map is too much focusing on individual sounds and not paying much attention to the overall intensity of the different sections. Some adjustments to better that out would be appreciated.

Missing variety in spacing:
The spacing in some sections is missing variety. Some sections do only provide dashes, no walks or hypers, and even the dashes are not varying much in their spacing. That leads to poor emphasis at some points. Take a look at the following example:
Section from 00:01:509 - to 00:15:571 - : The section has pretty much only dashes. You don't use higher spacing for major sounds like downbeats or strong violin sounds. You also don't use lower spacing for rather unimportant sounds like 00:09:571 (2) - .
Pretty much all sections where you didn't use hypers need more noticeable spacing variation. I know that there are spacing variations but they are too minimal atm to be effective. Emphasizing the song just by the used flow just doesn't work out well enough.

Not noticeable transitions:
Some musical transitions are not really remarkable in your map. That is no major issue but I think it is worth mentioning it. Let's look at some spots that occur me:
01:17:634 (7,8,1,2) - The transition into the kiai is not that noticeable here because it is the second out of three jumps in a row which doesn't really put the spotlight on 01:18:009 (1) - , and the last jump is even bigger which makes 01:18:009 (1) - even less remarkable.
01:40:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - Similar issue here: 01:41:634 (1) - Is nothing special after all these jumps. You put way more emphasis on 01:42:009 (3) - by making it the first slider after a lot single notes (which also ends the chain of jumps), emphasis on 01:41:634 (1) - is not really given sadly.
02:19:321 (4,1) - The transition here is also not really remarkable since you maintain the same intensity with your pattern.
Transitions should be more clear, I just pointed the most obvious cases out, some minor transitions that I haven't pointed out could be more remarkable too but they are not that urgent.

Other suggestions:
01:19:134 (1) - Why is the NC here instead of 01:19:509 (4) - ?
01:33:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Pretty harsh pattern here, gets way harder than ever before. I think 01:34:509 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Can be nerfed you are using 6 sliders to cover 4 violin sounds which isn't good imo, reducing it to 4 sliders for better emphasis and a bit easier pattern would be nice.
Please don't misjudge my mod Emiru! The diff isn't bad at all (flow and gameplay are nice to name some good things), it just felt clumsy in some aspects so I decided to structure my mod a bit differently than usual. I don't expect a rework of the diff (it is too good for that), more like some noticeable adjustments that take my suggestions into account. I hope I phrased my concerns in an understandable way, feel free to poke me when you have questions.

I might take a more detailed look at the diff and at the other diffs at a later point if needed, but that should be enough input for the top diff for now.

Good Luck!

Strongly changed , nerfed 1/12 , make a new whole kick slider intensity ending , im keeping aesthetic stuff tho ( like the first kick slider ) of course it's overdone but it change nothing and look better

thanks 4 the mod

https://puu.sh/zwa5h/7e5b72396b.osu

Vincs

167 posts

Joined October 2012

Vincs 2018-02-27T13:23:17+00:00

Mod for Emriu o/

[Emiru's Aria]

00:31:696 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tu as deux sons bien différents mais le pattern est exactement le même, 00:32:259 (1,2) - peux surement être mapper avec un stream de quatre notes comme 00:33:384 (3,4,5,6) - , c'est pas un problème majeur.
02:26:821 (1,2) - Je sais pas si c'est vraiment nécessaire ça mdr, juste un slider fait l'affaire je pense.
02:15:759 (1,2,3,4) - La musique est douce et il y a pas de kick, je trouve que l'utilisation d'hyper ici est pas vraiment justifiée.
01:31:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - C'est franchement beau dans l'éditeur ça, j'aime beaucoup.

Emiru

257 posts

Joined September 2013

Emiru 2018-02-27T22:14:45+00:00

Vincs wrote:
Mod for Emriu o/
[Emiru's Aria]
00:31:696 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tu as deux sons bien différents mais le pattern est exactement le même, 00:32:259 (1,2) - peux surement être mapper avec un stream de quatre notes comme 00:33:384 (3,4,5,6) - , c'est pas un problème majeur.
02:26:821 (1,2) - Je sais pas si c'est vraiment nécessaire ça mdr, juste un slider fait l'affaire je pense.
02:15:759 (1,2,3,4) - La musique est douce et il y a pas de kick, je trouve que l'utilisation d'hyper ici est pas vraiment justifiée.
01:31:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - C'est franchement beau dans l'éditeur ça, j'aime beaucoup.

[*]00:31:696 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tu as deux sons bien différents mais le pattern est exactement le même, 00:32:259 (1,2) - peux surement être mapper avec un stream de quatre notes comme 00:33:384 (3,4,5,6) - , c'est pas un problème majeur. Ok !

[*]02:26:821 (1,2) - Je sais pas si c'est vraiment nécessaire ça mdr, juste un slider fait l'affaire je pense. Tu me connais

[list][*]00:31:696 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Tu as deux sons bien différents mais le pattern est exactement le même, 00:32:259 (1,2) - peux surement être mapper avec un stream de quatre notes comme 00:33:384 (3,4,5,6) - , c'est pas un problème majeur. J'ai fix

[*]02:15:759 (1,2,3,4) - La musique est douce et il y a pas de kick, je trouve que l'utilisation d'hyper ici est pas vraiment justifiée. Et pourtant y'a une montée d'intensité dans la musique deux petit coup de violon
Merci mec

http://puu.sh/zx4s3/57e3d07bed.osu

Secre

osu!catch Champion / Nomination Assessment Team

402 posts

Joined January 2013

Secre 2018-03-03T00:32:47+00:00

hey hey hey

Emiru's Aria

00:01:415 (1) - feels just slightly awkward to play at first, could maybe rotate up 45 degrees

00:47:259 This should be the start of the slider to emphasize the sound that comes after the loud instrumentals

01:32:446 (2) - Maybe this could be moved left slightly by to either x152/x160? Test this out, im not sure if it would flow better but I think it emphasizes the sound better w/ more spacing than the streams previously

01:43:508 (1,2) - the distance between these two notes feels very far and sudden, I would either reduce the spacing or ctrl-g the slider and make adjustments to the following sections

02:13:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this section feels way too hard and unexpected for the end of this song, considering the kiai in the midsection is much easier in terms of difficulty than this section. Change the patterns completely or make them friendlier to play

02:26:821 (1,2) - these notes dont need to be mapped, just end the map at the end of the previous spinner, the moaning sound at the end is insignificant, or just place a singular note to represent that sound similar to spectator's Alice diff

Emiru

257 posts

Joined September 2013

Emiru 2018-03-03T11:02:36+00:00

chickenbible wrote:
hey hey hey

Emiru's Aria

00:01:415 (1) - feels just slightly awkward to play at first, could maybe rotate up 45 degrees
Nah aesthetic
00:47:259 This should be the start of the slider to emphasize the sound that comes after the loud instrumentals
That's true fixed
01:32:446 (2) - Maybe this could be moved left slightly by to either x152/x160? Test this out, im not sure if it would flow better but I think it emphasizes the sound better w/ more spacing than the streams previously
sure why not
01:43:508 (1,2) - the distance between these two notes feels very far and sudden, I would either reduce the spacing or ctrl-g the slider and make adjustments to the following sections
i don't think so , it's completely fine for me
02:13:509 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this section feels way too hard and unexpected for the end of this song, considering the kiai in the midsection is much easier in terms of difficulty than this section. Change the patterns completely or make them friendlier to play
Yeah it was kinda hard , nerfed
02:26:821 (1,2) - these notes dont need to be mapped, just end the map at the end of the previous spinner, the moaning sound at the end is insignificant, or just place a singular note to represent that sound similar to spectator's Alice diff

Why everyone hate it

i find it so cool oh well removed with just a single note

http://puu.sh/zzBmY/b6f4c89062.osu

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2018-03-06T23:12:33+00:00

modding top diff myself since I think some of the issues I can point out from the top of my head were not addressed in any of the mods it received thus far

00:30:196 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole section was overmapped af in crystal's old extra diff and it's overmapped here as well, and for all the wrong reasons too. Not even spector-dg's mania topdiff's section is as overmapped as this one, and that's saying a lot. But enough comparisons, I'll get straight to the point: This section is also really, really overemphasized compared to more intense sections such as 00:19:509 - . When comparing the two together, the song says one thing but the map says the complete opposite, giving more emphasis to the second section than the more intense first section. So yeah, taking those two things into account, I'll give a few examples of where you went complete bonkers with the emphasis/overmapping so that you can either do a relatively big overhaul of this section's patterns or directly remap it as a whole.

Starting from 00:30:009 - here 00:31:134 - up until here the only 1/4 sound that can be heard with a bit of difficulty is 00:30:477 - , but that's it. All 00:30:196 (2,3,1,2) - these 1/4 sliders are clearly overmapped without a clear reason since, as stated earlier, the section is noticeably calmer than the previous one and does not fit at all.
The only clear 1/4 sounds from 00:31:134 - until 00:32:259 - are 00:31:227 - and 00:31:415 - so 00:31:696 (2,3,4) - these should be deleted and turned into 1/2 note formations instead.
00:33:009 - from here until 00:33:759 - here there are no clearly audible 1/4 sounds either, so 00:33:290 (2,4,6) - these should be deleted.
00:34:134 (3,4) - These should either be two circles or one 1/2 slider.
00:35:821 (4) - Ironically, this slider's distance from the previous note is really underemphasizing the high-pitched piano note it's covering. Perhaps it was something you forgot, since you can easily fix it by ctrl+h'ing both the slider and, if you don't wanna repattern the next 1/6 notes so that it connects properly, the rest of the map as well.

00:37:509 - From this section until 00:47:071 - the slider velocity is a bit too low and it makes the player need to stutter with the keys to catch the sliders's bodies properly without overshooting them, which is pretty offputting and uncomfortable IMO (Remarkably so with hyperdashes such as 00:44:196 (4,5) - these). I think you're better off just using 1x slider velocity up until 00:48:009 - here, place in which you can use 1,05x SV to make a fluid transition for the next section of the song (01:00:009 - )00:53:071 (2,3) - The distance between these two is a bit too much? I know you're trying to emphasize the strong vocal but either go for a straight-out hyper or try to make it a more lenient dash.01:16:696 (2,3,4) - Really overshootable, I suggest to make these a completely straight horizontal line formation pointing to the left instead.01:40:509 (1,2,3) - These shouldn't have hyperdashes in between each other, while 01:41:071 (4,5,6) - these should, since when comparing both three object formations, the latter is stronger than the former regarding sound intensity and pitch (and noticeably so). Right now the emphasis is given to objects in a wrong way for the sake of a pattern that even though it plays normally it expresses the strength of the sounds in the background wrongly.01:48:571 (2) - no sound here, remove note.If you need help with any of the points I've made above, feel free to pm me via twitter so I can get ingame and help you out.

Emiru

257 posts

Joined September 2013

Emiru 2018-03-08T23:36:00+00:00

Hareimu wrote:
modding top diff myself since I think some of the issues I can point out from the top of my head were not addressed in any of the mods it received thus far

00:30:196 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This whole section was overmapped af in crystal's old extra diff and it's overmapped here as well, and for all the wrong reasons too. Not even spector-dg's mania topdiff's section is as overmapped as this one, and that's saying a lot. But enough comparisons, I'll get straight to the point: This section is also really, really overemphasized compared to more intense sections such as 00:19:509 - . When comparing the two together, the song says one thing but the map says the complete opposite, giving more emphasis to the second section than the more intense first section. So yeah, taking those two things into account, I'll give a few examples of where you went complete bonkers with the emphasis/overmapping so that you can either do a relatively big overhaul of this section's patterns or directly remap it as a whole.

Starting from 00:30:009 - here 00:31:134 - up until here the only 1/4 sound that can be heard with a bit of difficulty is 00:30:477 - , but that's it. All 00:30:196 (2,3,1,2) - these 1/4 sliders are clearly overmapped without a clear reason since, as stated earlier, the section is noticeably calmer than the previous one and does not fit at all.
The only clear 1/4 sounds from 00:31:134 - until 00:32:259 - are 00:31:227 - and 00:31:415 - so 00:31:696 (2,3,4) - these should be deleted and turned into 1/2 note formations instead.
00:33:009 - from here until 00:33:759 - here there are no clearly audible 1/4 sounds either, so 00:33:290 (2,4,6) - these should be deleted.
00:34:134 (3,4) - These should either be two circles or one 1/2 slider.
00:35:821 (4) - Ironically, this slider's distance from the previous note is really underemphasizing the high-pitched piano note it's covering. Perhaps it was something you forgot, since you can easily fix it by ctrl+h'ing both the slider and, if you don't wanna repattern the next 1/6 notes so that it connects properly, the rest of the map as well.
00:37:509 - From this section until 00:47:071 - the slider velocity is a bit too low and it makes the player need to stutter with the keys to catch the sliders's bodies properly without overshooting them, which is pretty offputting and uncomfortable IMO (Remarkably so with hyperdashes such as 00:44:196 (4,5) - these). I think you're better off just using 1x slider velocity up until 00:48:009 - here, place in which you can use 1,05x SV to make a fluid transition for the next section of the song (01:00:009 - )00:53:071 (2,3) - The distance between these two is a bit too much? I know you're trying to emphasize the strong vocal but either go for a straight-out hyper or try to make it a more lenient dash.01:16:696 (2,3,4) - Really overshootable, I suggest to make these a completely straight horizontal line formation pointing to the left instead.01:40:509 (1,2,3) - These shouldn't have hyperdashes in between each other, while 01:41:071 (4,5,6) - these should, since when comparing both three object formations, the latter is stronger than the former regarding sound intensity and pitch (and noticeably so). Right now the emphasis is given to objects in a wrong way for the sake of a pattern that even though it plays normally it expresses the strength of the sounds in the background wrongly.01:48:571 (2) - no sound here, remove note.If you need help with any of the points I've made above, feel free to pm me via twitter so I can get ingame and help you out.

Thanks 4 this mod applied 90% ish

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F D Flourite

811 posts

Joined March 2013

F D Flourite 2018-03-14T02:10:54+00:00

Almost forgot this

[Emiru's Aria]

00:36:196 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - actually rhythm from the note I quote are not 1/6 anymore. They could be wrongly snapped.
00:36:696 (6,1) - No need to be a cross-screen jump? I understand your intention but it seems to be too much for me
00:49:509 - to 00:57:009 - not only 1/4 jumps are worth being HDashes. Now you'd like to add HDash on such small emphasis (00:44:071 (2,3,4,5) - ) but refuse to do any emphasis on any of 1/2 jumps in the section I quote. It's unreasonable. You need to make sure that your distance arrangement corresponds to the music instead of only rhythm gaps.
01:00:009 - to 01:11:071 - , especially something like 01:05:634 (4,1) - , really need something other than general-distance jumps. You easily set HDashes on some overmapped 1/4 rhythms 01:11:259 (3,4,5,6) - after all.
02:13:134 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this antiflow is highly unexpected. I don't see the intention to make 02:13:509 (1,2,3,4) - a strong dash chain right after a strong HDash on 02:13:321 (5,1) - , which increases the operation difficulty here to a level that doesn't fit the music. Music here is clearly going outro. Just decrease the distance of the whole dash chain. Same as 02:15:009 (1,2,3,4) -
01:31:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - make HDash distance increasing to fit the music more properly. Ofc, you should 01:31:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - make HDash on these jumps a bit shorter to achieve it.
01:36:571 (4,5,6) - Drums here are obviously heavier than 01:36:009 (1,2,3) - . So you should use something else stronger to make a difference.

Still the whole diff's speaking too strongly on rhythm gaps no longer than 1/4 beats in intro/outro imo. Probably need review beforehand.

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2018-04-03T04:41:01+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
Almost forgot this to be clear, emiru told me to apply stuff for him since he just doesn't have time for it.

[Emiru's Aria]
00:36:196 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - actually rhythm from the note I quote are not 1/6 anymore. They could be wrongly snapped. just deleted the whole 1/6 thing since it's too questionable to snap it properly (already tried doing so)
00:36:696 (6,1) - No need to be a cross-screen jump? I understand your intention but it seems to be too much for me with the deletion of the previous, this has no effect anymore.
00:49:509 - to 00:57:009 - not only 1/4 jumps are worth being HDashes. Now you'd like to add HDash on such small emphasis (00:44:071 (2,3,4,5) - ) but refuse to do any emphasis on any of 1/2 jumps in the section I quote. It's unreasonable. You need to make sure that your distance arrangement corresponds to the music instead of only rhythm gaps. added hdashes to emphasize strong vocals on the section you pointed out, also removed one hyper from the 00:44:071 - section.
01:00:009 - to 01:11:071 - , especially something like 01:05:634 (4,1) - , really need something other than general-distance jumps. You easily set HDashes on some overmapped 1/4 rhythms 01:11:259 (3,4,5,6) - after all. added hypers where emphasis was needed, removed the hypers from those 1/4 rhythms.
02:13:134 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - this antiflow is highly unexpected. I don't see the intention to make 02:13:509 (1,2,3,4) - a strong dash chain right after a strong HDash on 02:13:321 (5,1) - , which increases the operation difficulty here to a level that doesn't fit the music. Music here is clearly going outro. Just decrease the distance of the whole dash chain. Same as 02:15:009 (1,2,3,4) - replaced with a different normal pattern usage instead.
01:31:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - make HDash distance increasing to fit the music more properly. Ofc, you should 01:31:134 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - make HDash on these jumps a bit shorter to achieve it. done
01:36:571 (4,5,6) - Drums here are obviously heavier than 01:36:009 (1,2,3) - . So you should use something else stronger to make a difference. done.

Still the whole diff's speaking too strongly on rhythm gaps no longer than 1/4 beats in intro/outro imo. Probably need review beforehand.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,252 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2018-04-05T01:24:38+00:00

Emiru:

00:07:696 (2) - missing a sound at 00:07:884 - that should really be emphasized
00:15:384 (2,1) - how about a small dash here
00:17:013 (1,2,3,4) - could be just a normal dash or at the very least a weaker hdash
00:19:884 (2,3,1,2) - should really differentiate between 00:20:259 (1,2) - and 00:19:884 (2,3) - they're very different sounds
00:30:852 (2,6,8) - overmapped imo
00:48:009 (1,2,3) - not a fan of these being hdashes, maybe just a normal 1/2 slider would be cool
01:05:259 (3,4) - could use a dash
01:11:259 (3,4,5) - technically not overmapped but they sound better without the 1/4s tbh
02:10:134 (4,1) - edge dash
02:15:759 (3,4,5) - same as the previous point of 1/4s
02:16:509 - volume in general around here could be decreased slowly
02:21:759 (3,1) - unrankable spinner distance

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2018-04-05T05:16:22+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
Emiru:

00:07:696 (2) - missing a sound at 00:07:884 - that should really be emphasized fixed
00:15:384 (2,1) - how about a small dash here sure
00:17:013 (1,2,3,4) - could be just a normal dash or at the very least a weaker hdash reduced
00:19:884 (2,3,1,2) - should really differentiate between 00:20:259 (1,2) - and 00:19:884 (2,3) - they're very different sounds ok
00:30:852 (2,6,8) - overmapped imo removed
00:48:009 (1,2,3) - not a fan of these being hdashes, maybe just a normal 1/2 slider would be cool nah just made them dashes.
01:05:259 (3,4) - could use a dash ok
01:11:259 (3,4,5) - technically not overmapped but they sound better without the 1/4s tbh removed the third 1/4 and replaced it with a 1/2 slider, I wanna follow the piano sounds nevertheless.
02:10:134 (4,1) - edge dash oops
02:15:759 (3,4,5) - same as the previous point of 1/4s as above
02:16:509 - volume in general around here could be decreased slowly done
02:21:759 (3,1) - unrankable spinner distance nope

ZiRoX

Elite Mapper

1,052 posts

Joined November 2009

ZiRoX 2018-04-09T01:03:20+00:00

Check.

[Cup]

00:05:634 (2) - I'd move this a couple gridpsaces to the right to reduce the distance to the surrounding objects, considering the pattern involves two direction changes. Similar stuff for 00:10:134 (2) -.
00:26:634 (3,1) - This distance felt a bit tight for me, considering the previous 1/2 stream takes you to the left and you're required to change direction. Maybe you can move 00:27:009 (1,2) - to x:308?
00:37:509 (1,2,3) - The two direction changes didn't quite fit IMO; I'd prefer you'd do something that flowed a bit more like 00:43:509 (1,2,1) - . One option would be to Ctrl+H 00:38:634 (2,3,4) - and move it a bit to the left.
00:46:509 (1) - I'd prefer if you slanted this a bit to reduce the horizontal movement it involves a bit.
00:56:259 (2) - I know you have the whistle because of the vocals, but it feels weird not keeping the the trend of using a drum clap.
01:00:009 (1) - I'd make this one a bit more vertical, in order to give the movement to this a bit more leniency.
01:03:009 (1,2) - This distance feels a bit large IMO. I think moving 01:04:321 (2,3,4) - to x:376 would make it slightly better.
01:12:571 (2,2) - I'd make these two more vertical, maybe like 01:13:321 (1) -. It feels weird that those two require a bit more movement when all the sounds are roughly the same.
01:20:259 (2,3,1) - I think this movement is a bit complicated. I would stack them more by making the slider more vertical and also moving (3) towards (1).
01:24:759 (3) - I'd move this note a bit to the right, around x:116 or 120, to make the 1/2 direction change a bit easier.
01:33:009 (1,2) - Somehow it feels a bit tight. Maybe you can move (2) to x:416 or so.
01:39:946 (2,3,4,1) - I'd reduce the distances a bit considering it's two direction changes at 1/2 snap that are really close.
02:18:009 (1) - I'd abstain from using a horizontal slider at this point, considering the song has calmed down, so I'd slant it a bit to give it less horizontal movement. Same for 02:19:509 (1) - .
02:21:759 (2) - This one also has parts that are nearly horizontal, which feels like too much movement. I'd make the slider rounder so it has a bit less horizontal movement.

[Salad]

00:07:509 (1,2,3) - I think you missed a good chance to add a bit of emphasis to (3). If you delete (2), you can make a larger 1/1 walk between (1,3) instead, which IMO gives it more emphasis. You Ctrl+G 00:07:884 (2) - and then Ctrl+H 00:09:009 (1,2,1) -, which will also help with the next issue.
00:10:509 (1,2) - Pretty much the only 1/2 dash you've used in the intro, it feels out of place. I'd just make it a walk. If you did what I suggested in the previous point, both notes should be really stacked, and it's just a matter of adjusting (2) a bit.
00:26:071 (2,3,4,5) - I'd reduce the distance between these a bit, just so the following dash is a bit easier to catch.
00:42:009 (1) - I'd slant this note a bit in order to reduce the distance to the next object. The pattern is a bit tricky for a Salad.
00:47:259 (2,3,1) - I'd reduce the distances a bit, while keeping the dashes, to add some leniency. x:416 for (3) felt nice.
00:51:759 (2,1,2) - I'd take both 1/2 dashes out by moving (1) to the left. Considering it's a diff to introduce dashes, I'd keep 1/2 dashes (which are, after 1/3, the highest snapped dashes allowed on the diff) to most intense parts, i.e. Kiai. Same comment for the section at 02:04:509 -.
01:00:009 - For the section starting here, I'm not so sure about the 1/2 dashes. The same reasoning as the previous point applies, and also you're basing them on a hitsound you added. I took the sliders out to hear the song and the sounds on those places you added dashes aren't stronger than those, for example, on the big white ticks. In any case, antiflow ones like 01:06:009 (1,2) - are not okay for a diff that's meant to introduce dashes, IMO, and neither is 01:16:321 (3,1) -
01:18:009 (1,2,3) - I'd put these slightly closer to add some leniency to the walk after the dash. Similar stuff on 01:30:009 (1,2,3) -.
01:20:259 (5,6) - You need to reduce this distance. The walk back to that is really tight, so if players overshoot the previous dash they will probably miss it. Similar stuff for 01:32:259 (5,6,1) -.
01:21:759 (5) - I'd move this slightly closer to the surrounding objects, let's say x:92, to add some leniency to the movement.
01:29:071 (4,5) - Antiflow after one of the highest dashes the diff allows is a bit questionable. I'd try to do something different.
01:56:259 (2,1,2) - I'd make these walkable instead to reserve 1/2 dashes to the most intense parts. In any case, 01:57:759 (2,3) - needs to get reduce to add leniency to the movement after the dash.

[Platter]

00:21:009 (3,4) - Why does this one have a dash while 00:19:509 (1,2) - doesn't? The sounds are the same, the hitsounding is the same. I'd make 00:21:009 (3,4) - a walk for consistency. Same stuff for 00:24:384 (2,3) -.
00:25:134 (6,1) - This one could have a larger distance for a more intense dash. You have a finish hitsound on (1) after all.
00:27:384 (2,3) - 00:28:884 (2,3) - Similar to something I mentioned in the Salad, you're adding HDashes to strong sounds that are there just because of your hitsounding and that in the song aren't actually that strong. Also, these two HDashes are inconsistent with 00:26:071 (3,1) - because those are the same sounds and that one doesn't have an HDash.
00:30:009 (1,2) - I wouldn't have this as a dash, tbh. It's inconsistent with 00:31:884 (2) -, and it's also another sound that's only strong because of your hitsounding.
00:30:759 (3,4,5) - I think it's worth considering adding a dash between (3,4) instead of (4,5) given the piano sounds.
00:31:884 (2,3) - I think a dash would be fitting here. It's a downbeat with strong sounds on it.
00:37:509 (1,2) - The sound at (2) is quite weak, so I'd move stuff so the distance is actually walkable.
00:50:071 (2,3) - This should have a dash for consistency. You've done it for 00:48:384 (5,6) -, 00:51:571 (2,3) - and others.
01:06:759 (2,1) - Okay, I think I can get Ascendance and MBomb to agree that this one is antiflow. This is currently unrankable, and so is 02:11:259 (2,1) -
01:19:509 (1,2) - I'm not so sure I'd keep a dash here. If you want to keep it as a dash, though, I suggest reducing it, as even stronger sounds (01:23:259 (1,2) - ) don't have a dash as strong as this one.
01:30:009 (1,2) - I don't get the dash between these. I'd just make it a walk because there isn't a strong sound at (2).
Dashes in the section starting at 01:43:884 - aren't that clear. For example, 01:44:634 (2,1) - and 01:46:509 (1,2) - are walkable. While they aren't terribly easily walkable, they don't yell "I'm a dash" at me. Another one is 01:58:134 (3,1) -, which will also benefit from more leniency after the previous HDash if you move 01:58:134 (3) - to the left.
01:53:446 (3) - I'd rather have the dash to the next object than a dash to this one, because the vocals are stronger on 01:54:009 (1) - and that one is also a downbeat. You can move (3) to x:208 for a nice walk/dash distances.
01:56:071 (4,5) - This one also deserves a dash for consistency.

[Rain]

00:17:153 - This can be a bit tricky to catch considering the long dash and the spaced 1/12 notes with antiflow after it. I suggest you move 00:17:013 (9,10,11,12) - to x:400 for a little additional leniency.
00:24:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I think the snaps here should be 1/4s, not 1/6s. All other diffs that mapped the stream use that.
00:25:509 (1,2) - I'd reduce the distance between these a bit. It feels a bit uncomfortable to play right now in a way I can't explain lul.
00:35:259 (3,4) - I'd put these a bit closer, but still keeping the HDash to the following note, as the current spacing isn't consistent with the rest of the section.
00:37:509 (1,2) - I'd put these within walkable distance by moving (1) to x:152 or so. While the dash could fit because of the vocals, there's something that makes it feels weird.
00:54:571 (4,5) - Maybe you could add a dash here for consistency? Since 00:54:759 (5,6) - also fits, a double dash could play quite nicely, so maybe you could do something like the following:
SPOILER
01:03:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would replace this with a slider, for consistency's sake. There are other piano streams within those sliders that you ignored, but not this one. Similar stuff for 02:07:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -.
01:27:946 (5) - I'd move this one to x:328 for a slightly more comfortable dash after the side-to-side HDash.
01:53:259 (2,3,4) - I'd reduce this dash. Its current strength doesn't fit the calmness of the section. Same stuff with 01:54:009 (1,2,3) -.
01:56:259 (2,3,4) - Similar stuff here, I'd keep this as normal dashes instead to fit the mood of the section. I moved (3) to x:276 and it played 👌
02:17:634 (5,6,1) - I don't think these double dash is truly fitting considering we're at a calmer section. I suggest you move 02:17:821 (6,1) - to x:164. Note that this suggestion will also fix the same stuff for 02:18:009 (1,2) -. Other places where I suggest this are 02:19:509 (1,2,3) -, 02:20:634 (5,6,1) - and 02:21:009 (1,2,3) -

I will continue with the Overdoses tomorrow.

Hareimu

624 posts

Joined March 2014

Topic Starter

Hareimu 2018-04-11T05:04:52+00:00

ZiRoX wrote:
Check.

[Cup]
00:05:634 (2) - I'd move this a couple gridpsaces to the right to reduce the distance to the surrounding objects, considering the pattern involves two direction changes. Similar stuff for 00:10:134 (2) -. sure
00:26:634 (3,1) - This distance felt a bit tight for me, considering the previous 1/2 stream takes you to the left and you're required to change direction. Maybe you can move 00:27:009 (1,2) - to x:308? kk
00:37:509 (1,2,3) - The two direction changes didn't quite fit IMO; I'd prefer you'd do something that flowed a bit more like 00:43:509 (1,2,1) - . One option would be to Ctrl+H 00:38:634 (2,3,4) - and move it a bit to the left. done
00:46:509 (1) - I'd prefer if you slanted this a bit to reduce the horizontal movement it involves a bit. sure
00:56:259 (2) - I know you have the whistle because of the vocals, but it feels weird not keeping the the trend of using a drum clap. changed to a drumclappo
01:00:009 (1) - I'd make this one a bit more vertical, in order to give the movement to this a bit more leniency. okie
01:03:009 (1,2) - This distance feels a bit large IMO. I think moving 01:04:321 (2,3,4) - to x:376 would make it slightly better. done
01:12:571 (2,2) - I'd make these two more vertical, maybe like 01:13:321 (1) -. It feels weird that those two require a bit more movement when all the sounds are roughly the same. sure
01:20:259 (2,3,1) - I think this movement is a bit complicated. I would stack them more by making the slider more vertical and also moving (3) towards (1). I'm a happy human being, done
01:24:759 (3) - I'd move this note a bit to the right, around x:116 or 120, to make the 1/2 direction change a bit easier. sure whynot
01:33:009 (1,2) - Somehow it feels a bit tight. Maybe you can move (2) to x:416 or so. said and done
01:39:946 (2,3,4,1) - I'd reduce the distances a bit considering it's two direction changes at 1/2 snap that are really close. reduced distance between 2,3,4 but kept the one between 4,1
02:18:009 (1) - I'd abstain from using a horizontal slider at this point, considering the song has calmed down, so I'd slant it a bit to give it less horizontal movement. Same for 02:19:509 (1) - . keeping 02:19:509 (1) - since the voice is p high pitched and it deserves it. nerfed the other one to a more lenient curve.
02:21:759 (2) - This one also has parts that are nearly horizontal, which feels like too much movement. I'd make the slider rounder so it has a bit less horizontal movement. reduced sv to make it require less movement.
[Salad]
00:07:509 (1,2,3) - I think you missed a good chance to add a bit of emphasis to (3). If you delete (2), you can make a larger 1/1 walk between (1,3) instead, which IMO gives it more emphasis. You Ctrl+G 00:07:884 (2) - and then Ctrl+H 00:09:009 (1,2,1) -, which will also help with the next issue. done
00:10:509 (1,2) - Pretty much the only 1/2 dash you've used in the intro, it feels out of place. I'd just make it a walk. If you did what I suggested in the previous point, both notes should be really stacked, and it's just a matter of adjusting (2) a bit. done x2
00:26:071 (2,3,4,5) - I'd reduce the distance between these a bit, just so the following dash is a bit easier to catch. done
00:42:009 (1) - I'd slant this note a bit in order to reduce the distance to the next object. The pattern is a bit tricky for a Salad. sure
00:47:259 (2,3,1) - I'd reduce the distances a bit, while keeping the dashes, to add some leniency. x:416 for (3) felt nice. okorin
00:51:759 (2,1,2) - I'd take both 1/2 dashes out by moving (1) to the left. Considering it's a diff to introduce dashes, I'd keep 1/2 dashes (which are, after 1/3, the highest snapped dashes allowed on the diff) to most intense parts, i.e. Kiai. Same comment for the section at 02:04:509 -. ok
01:00:009 - For the section starting here, I'm not so sure about the 1/2 dashes. The same reasoning as the previous point applies, and also you're basing them on a hitsound you added. I took the sliders out to hear the song and the sounds on those places you added dashes aren't stronger than those, for example, on the big white ticks. In any case, antiflow ones like 01:06:009 (1,2) - are not okay for a diff that's meant to introduce dashes, IMO, and neither is 01:16:321 (3,1) - removed all 1/2 dashes.
01:18:009 (1,2,3) - I'd put these slightly closer to add some leniency to the walk after the dash. Similar stuff on 01:30:009 (1,2,3) -. done
01:20:259 (5,6) - You need to reduce this distance. The walk back to that is really tight, so if players overshoot the previous dash they will probably miss it. Similar stuff for 01:32:259 (5,6,1) -. okie
01:21:759 (5) - I'd move this slightly closer to the surrounding objects, let's say x:92, to add some leniency to the movement. kinda did that
01:29:071 (4,5) - Antiflow after one of the highest dashes the diff allows is a bit questionable. I'd try to do something different. did so
01:56:259 (2,1,2) - I'd make these walkable instead to reserve 1/2 dashes to the most intense parts. In any case, 01:57:759 (2,3) - needs to get reduce to add leniency to the movement after the dash. done.
[Platter]
00:21:009 (3,4) - Why does this one have a dash while 00:19:509 (1,2) - doesn't? The sounds are the same, the hitsounding is the same. I'd make 00:21:009 (3,4) - a walk for consistency. Same stuff for 00:24:384 (2,3) -. done
00:25:134 (6,1) - This one could have a larger distance for a more intense dash. You have a finish hitsound on (1) after all. ok
00:27:384 (2,3) - 00:28:884 (2,3) - Similar to something I mentioned in the Salad, you're adding HDashes to strong sounds that are there just because of your hitsounding and that in the song aren't actually that strong. Also, these two HDashes are inconsistent with 00:26:071 (3,1) - because those are the same sounds and that one doesn't have an HDash. removed all hdashes except for the one at the end of the section.
00:30:009 (1,2) - I wouldn't have this as a dash, tbh. It's inconsistent with 00:31:884 (2) -, and it's also another sound that's only strong because of your hitsounding. changed
00:30:759 (3,4,5) - I think it's worth considering adding a dash between (3,4) instead of (4,5) given the piano sounds. did w previous change
00:31:884 (2,3) - I think a dash would be fitting here. It's a downbeat with strong sounds on it. sure
00:37:509 (1,2) - The sound at (2) is quite weak, so I'd move stuff so the distance is actually walkable. done
00:50:071 (2,3) - This should have a dash for consistency. You've done it for 00:48:384 (5,6) -, 00:51:571 (2,3) - and others. yea u right
01:06:759 (2,1) - Okay, I think I can get Ascendance and MBomb to agree that this one is antiflow. This is currently unrankable, and so is 02:11:259 (2,1) - deleted all hdashes from this section.
01:19:509 (1,2) - I'm not so sure I'd keep a dash here. If you want to keep it as a dash, though, I suggest reducing it, as even stronger sounds (01:23:259 (1,2) - ) don't have a dash as strong as this one.
01:30:009 (1,2) - I don't get the dash between these. I'd just make it a walk because there isn't a strong sound at (2). done
Dashes in the section starting at 01:43:884 - aren't that clear. For example, 01:44:634 (2,1) - and 01:46:509 (1,2) - are walkable. While they aren't terribly easily walkable, they don't yell "I'm a dash" at me. Another one is 01:58:134 (3,1) -, which will also benefit from more leniency after the previous HDash if you move 01:58:134 (3) - to the left. fixed all
01:53:446 (3) - I'd rather have the dash to the next object than a dash to this one, because the vocals are stronger on 01:54:009 (1) - and that one is also a downbeat. You can move (3) to x:208 for a nice walk/dash distances. done
01:56:071 (4,5) - This one also deserves a dash for consistency. it would break the curve's aesthetic :c
[Rain]
00:17:153 - This can be a bit tricky to catch considering the long dash and the spaced 1/12 notes with antiflow after it. I suggest you move 00:17:013 (9,10,11,12) - to x:400 for a little additional leniency. ok
00:24:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I think the snaps here should be 1/4s, not 1/6s. All other diffs that mapped the stream use that. will use that then.
00:25:509 (1,2) - I'd reduce the distance between these a bit. It feels a bit uncomfortable to play right now in a way I can't explain lul. sure thing
00:35:259 (3,4) - I'd put these a bit closer, but still keeping the HDash to the following note, as the current spacing isn't consistent with the rest of the section. done
00:37:509 (1,2) - I'd put these within walkable distance by moving (1) to x:152 or so. While the dash could fit because of the vocals, there's something that makes it feels weird. ok
00:54:571 (4,5) - Maybe you could add a dash here for consistency? Since 00:54:759 (5,6) - also fits, a double dash could play quite nicely, so maybe you could do something like the following: nah, I wanna emphasize the vocals more instead of the instrumental. ik it's unconsistent, but it kinda works better for me at least.
SPOILER
01:03:009 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I would replace this with a slider, for consistency's sake. There are other piano streams within those sliders that you ignored, but not this one. Similar stuff for 02:07:509 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -. using those for variety's sake, using the same curve slider/straight slider patterns over and over again gets boring quickly so using a stream or two for sprucing it up looks nice.
01:27:946 (5) - I'd move this one to x:328 for a slightly more comfortable dash after the side-to-side HDash. ok
01:53:259 (2,3,4) - I'd reduce this dash. Its current strength doesn't fit the calmness of the section. Same stuff with 01:54:009 (1,2,3) -. done
01:56:259 (2,3,4) - Similar stuff here, I'd keep this as normal dashes instead to fit the mood of the section. I moved (3) to x:276 and it played 👌 done but kept the hdash between 3 and 4
02:17:634 (5,6,1) - I don't think these double dash is truly fitting considering we're at a calmer section. I suggest you move 02:17:821 (6,1) - to x:164. Note that this suggestion will also fix the same stuff for 02:18:009 (1,2) -. Other places where I suggest this are 02:19:509 (1,2,3) -, 02:20:634 (5,6,1) - and 02:21:009 (1,2,3) - did so on the first two you mentioned. As for the last three, guriri's voice is noticeably highly pitched there so the dashes fit nicely to reflect that.
I will continue with the Overdoses tomorrow.

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ZiRoX 2018-04-16T01:04:58+00:00

~~Tomorrow.~~

[Deif's Overdose]

While I already mentioned this and I think you've probably rejected it more than once, I think increasing the AR a bit can improve the readability of stuff. The diff is already gimmicky enough without considering the AR.
00:41:259 (3) - The dash to this feels a bit tight, so I'd move this to x:384 to make it a bit more comfortable.
I'd reduce the spacing on 00:46:977 (2,3,4) - and 00:47:727 (6,7,8) - a tiny bit, considering we're still in a calm section.
00:52:884 (2,3,4) - These dashes also feel a bit tight, so I recommend moving (3) to x:448.
01:18:759 (5,6,7,8) - I do not hear any in particular in the song that signals or supports dashes a pattern like this. Particularly, 01:18:946 (6) - can be removed completely, and the pattern becomes way more playable without it.
I'd move a few notes closer to their previous objects to add a bit leniency to the dashes, like 01:23:446 (6) -, 01:24:196 (2) -, 01:25:509 (1,2) - and 01:27:009 (1,2) - .
01:29:446 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Personally I find this quite trolling with the sharp antiflow. I'd make the stream go left instead, at least the first couple notes.
01:34:509 (1,2,3) - I think the hyperdashes are a bit overdone here. Maybe you can move (2) to the right a bit, while still keeping the HDash, to make it more adequate. Similar stuff on 01:40:509 (1,2,3,4) - , where I'd reduce the intensity of the HDashes by moving 01:41:071 (2,4) - to the right a bit (when I tested it, it took out the bober HDashes at 01:41:446 (4,5,6) -, which I recommend removing tbh)
02:02:634 (6) - Maybe you can move this one to the right (maybe x:192?) to reduce the HDash strength, which will also help with leniency on 02:03:009 (1,2) - .
I don't think the double HDashes on 02:04:884 (2,3,4) - and 02:06:384 (2,3,4) - truly fit. You didn't use them in a previous section with nearly the same (maybe a bit lower) intensity, so I wouldn't use it here, either.

[Emiru's Aria]
I think the Kiai in this diff might be a bit overdone, and it's not only my opinion as a noob. Here are a few points where you can reduce strength of stuff, along with other random stuff:

01:18:196 (2,3,4) - Maybe you can move this a bit to the left (I tested x:368 and it played nicely). Similar thing applies to 01:19:321 (2,3,4) - because it's symmetric to the previously mentioned pattern.
01:21:196 (2) - You could put this on x:336 (or stack it on (4)).
01:21:946 (6,7) - Put these closer, the current distance is a bit awkward to play.
01:22:884 (7) - Maybe you can move this a bit to the right.
01:23:446 (2,3,4,1) - The largest HDash here is to the weakest sound because you're trying to force symmetry. Maybe you can rearrange stuff in a stair-like pattern (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10726320), and maybe you will want to rearrange 01:24:009 (1,2) - a bit.
01:25:321 (4,1) - Put these closer by moving (1) to the right a bit, the current distance is a bit awkward to play. Similar stuff on 01:26:634 (3,4) -.
01:27:196 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - I find this particularly harsh to play, in particular the 01:27:384 (3,4,1) - part. Maybe you can take out one antiflow movement?
01:31:884 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe you can reduce the intensity a bit by making triplets shaped as triangles, like you've done before.
01:33:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - This whole pattern could also get a nerf on the distances.
01:35:071 (4,1) - HDash right into the border, I'd move (1) to the right a bit.
I'd reduce the distance a bit on 01:36:946 (6,7) -, 01:37:509 (1,2) - and 01:38:446 (6,7) - to add a bit of leniency after the HDashes.

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