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07th Expansion - The Great Detective Knows

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UnderminE
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 25 Eylül 2011 Pazar at 12:54:19

Artist: 07th Expansion
Title: The Great Detective Knows
Source: Umineko No Naku Koro Ni Chiru
Tags: erika furudo dai Backfire T12 Saten-san TTTTTTTTTTTT H-Boy
BPM: 120
Filesize: 4693kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:
  1. Backfire's Taiko Riddle (4,83 stars, 488 notes)
  2. Beginner Riddle (1,92 stars, 95 notes)
  3. Possible Riddle (4,07 stars, 152 notes)
  4. Saten's Eternal Riddle (4,97 stars, 242 notes)
  5. T12's Puzzling Riddle (4,84 stars, 236 notes)
Download: 07th Expansion - The Great Detective Knows
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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"This level of reasoning is possible for Furudo Erika. What do you think everyone?"

1st map.

Updates:
SPOILER
July 20, 2011:Elly-chan's mod. Thanks for the mod Elle~
July 29, 2011:Added a hard diff. Thanks for the hard diff TTTTTTTTTTTT (T12) ._./
Aug 01, 2011:Tenshi-nyan's mod.
Aug 02, 2011:Added a taiko diff. Thankies for the great taiko diff, Backfire~ ^.^
Aug 04, 2011:Deleted all hit-sounds in Possible Riddle and re-mapped half of it. Gonna try something different for other half too. Also changed the bit-rate of mp3 to 192 kbps.
Aug 05, 2011:Re-mapped Possible Riddle. Added a new hit-sound. Deleted all hit songs and re-mapped half of Beginner Riddle. I guess it's more playable and easier now.
Aug 06, 2011:Re-mapped Beginner Riddle. gina91189's mod. Thanks for the great mod gina~
Aug 08, 2011:Sander-don's mod. Tony's mod. Teta's mod -Sekai-'s mod.
Aug 09, 2011:L_P's mod. Broetchen8441's mod. JauiPlaY's mod. Added hit-sound to Begginner Riddle.
Aug 10, 2011:Added an insane diff. Thanks for the amazing insane diff, Saten-san! O/ Saten-san's mini-mod.
Aug 12, 2011:HellDawn's mod. EEeee's mod.
Aug 14, 2011:Weiren's mod.
Aug 15, 2011:pieguy1372's mod. The 08 team_Bourdon's offset help. Elly-ch- my waifu's second mod.
Aug 16, 2011:Raging Bull's mod. Breeze's mod. Sandpig's custom hitsound check.
Aug 17, 2011:Corin's offset help. It should be 259 nao. Changed the offsets of beginner and possible riddles. changed T12's diff too. changed Saten-san's offset. Cirno's mod.
Aug 19, 2011:Esupanitix's mod.
Aug 20, 2011:NoHItter's mod. HellDawn's preview time suggestion.
Aug 21, 2011:tutuhaha's mod.
Aug 22, 2011:Leorda's mod. Index-San's mod. and Shiirn's mod.
Aug 23, 2011:Mok's mod.
Aug 24, 2011:Chewin's mod.
Aug 25, 2011:tsuka's mod. LunaticMara's lovely mod.
Aug 26, 2011:Vortex's mod.
Sep 6, 2011:Fixed Possible Riddle's hitsounds. All of diffs are %100 finished now.
Sep 25, 2011:HellDawn's hitsound mod.
Here is an erika-like vocal version of this song:
Elly-chan
IRC Modded, also got you a Background that is 1024 x 768, told you to delete .osb and shown you to use distance snap >o<

http://puu.sh/3vjH

Now. there's your download ma'am. Don't forget to kudos.
Topic Starter
UnderminE

Elly-chan wrote:

http://puu.sh/3vjH

There's your download ma'am. Don't forget to kudos.

Thankies Elly~ Yeah I exactly looked like her lol
Swiftcut
hoshi!
ademania
I hope this map will be ranked as soon as possible, gambare UnderminE :D
Natteke
WaterLiLy_old
:)
yuineee
simply by the existence of this map blabla...what do i think?

<good> :)
dNextGen
TTTTTTTTTTTT
here is my hard diff...

how can i post a message?

oh!!why not?!

Download: 07th Expansion - The Great Detective Knows (UnderminE) [Puzzle Riddle (Hard)].osu
Topic Starter
UnderminE

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

here is my hard diff...

how can i post a message?

oh!!why not?!
Okay, finally added. Thankies~
Nishiji
Bissmmm... olum ben bu map'e bi kaç edit vericektim kudosu kapacaktım alçak köfte :( şöyle yap böle yap dicektim sen bana kudosu verecektin. Hüzünlerin olmadığı, sevgilerin ölmedi... falan :D

Okay okay.. I'm giving star now :3
Topic Starter
UnderminE

Nishiji wrote:

Bissmmm... olum ben bu map'e bi kaç edit vericektim kudosu kapacaktım alçak köfte :( şöyle yap böle yap dicektim sen bana kudosu verecektin. Hüzünlerin olmadığı, sevgilerin ölmedi... falan :D

Okay okay.. I'm giving star now :3
Bi mesaj yazmak zorunda değilsin ki kızım, bi dahaki mesajında da modlarsın olur biter v_v Şimdi hatırladım dersin sdfsdf

Thankies~ Maybe you can mod my map later xD
Flamesniper
star~

hope your map will be ranked undermine :)

mesaj göndermek için illa bi sürü şey yazmak gerekiyor sdkfsf bakalım şimdi olcak mı
Tenshi-nyan
wheee....

Modding cus Imma bored. Random order.

General
You don't have a BG pic. Add one.
The MP3 bitrate is 112. This is too low to think that I had to say that..... It needs to be at least 128 kbit/s and must not be higher than 192.
You have 2 .osb files in your folder. Delete one of them.
Add + 10 to the offset, it's a bit too early right now.

T12
00:39:961 (6) - reduce the spacing so it's constant with the earlier notes?
00:46:961 (2) - since you the repeat silenced, this slider doesn't fit. make it a simple slider without repeat.
01:12:086 - the hitsounds are WAY too quiet here. I can't hear them at all. Increase the volume a bit.

Possible Riddle
How about using smaller circles? The huge circles make everything look ugly.
00:43:948 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - got some serious spacing issues here.
00:51:948 (2,3) - spacing

phew... this map needs a lot of work. Especially in the spacing, some jumps don't make sense at all and some objects are too close to each other. Please make sure that your spacing makes sense throughout the map.

Beginner
Spacing issues everywhere. It is very import that the easiest diff at least uses consistent spacing throughout the map if possible. Settle down on a base spacing and use that then.
Topic Starter
UnderminE

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

wheee....

Modding cus Imma bored. Random order.

General
You don't have a BG pic. Add one. Actually it has a bg but?
The MP3 bitrate is 112. This is too low to think that I had to say that..... It needs to be at least 128 kbit/s and must not be higher than 192. Okay
You have 2 .osb files in your folder. Delete one of them. sure
Add + 10 to the offset, it's a bit too early right now. done

T12
00:39:961 (6) - reduce the spacing so it's constant with the earlier notes?
00:46:961 (2) - since you the repeat silenced, this slider doesn't fit. make it a simple slider without repeat.
01:12:086 - the hitsounds are WAY too quiet here. I can't hear them at all. Increase the volume a bit. done

Possible Riddle
How about using smaller circles? The huge circles make everything look ugly. done
00:43:948 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - got some serious spacing issues here. gonna try something
00:51:948 (2,3) - spacing gonna try something there too

phew... this map needs a lot of work. Especially in the spacing, some jumps don't make sense at all and some objects are too close to each other. Please make sure that your spacing makes sense throughout the map.

Beginner
Spacing issues everywhere. It is very import that the easiest diff at least uses consistent spacing throughout the map if possible. Settle down on a base spacing and use that then. hmm thanks
thank you so much~
Backfire
Taiko Diff. :D:D:D:D ;)
Its preety easy, mind, but its fitting for such a calm song =w=

Download: 07th Expansion - The Great Detective Knows (UnderminE) [Backfire's Taiko Riddle].osu
Topic Starter
UnderminE

Backfire wrote:

Taiko Diff. :D:D:D:D ;)
Its preety easy, mind, but its fitting for such a calm song =w=
T-t-thank you masterr! *q* Added~
Wisakedjak
Use less clap in Possible Riddle please, it is not good u.u

Good luck 8-)
Topic Starter
UnderminE

XavierJones wrote:

Use less clap in Possible Riddle please, it is not good u.u

Good luck 8-)
Yeah I know that too but there is no time to fix that in these days :D thanks~
-Rain-
Finally you did :D I wish you could map mezdeke but.. star

It's too short. hmm, so:

star
star
star
Topic Starter
UnderminE

_Reiko_ wrote:

Finally you did :D I wish you could map mezdeke but.. star

It's too short. hmm, so:

star
star
star
lol you know what happened to Mezdeke :D I wish I could but I don't wanna map that anymoar.
GiNa
[General]
-Add “T12”, “TTTTTTTTTTTT”, and “Backfire” in the Tags for diffs.

[Beginner Riddle]
-Why does this diff has different red lines compare to the other diffs ? Delete the other two.
Note: I deleted those 2 red lines and mod.
-So many snapping problems, so please resnap all your notes and recalculate your slider’s length.
-Spacings are pretty inconsistency, use Distance Snap please~
00:28:948 (2) – fits better like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125822
00:43:948 (1,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125824 , remove New Combo on 00:45:198 (1)
01:33:281 (3) – move this to 01:33:198, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125825
01:49:281 (2) – move this to 01:49:198, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125827

[Possible Riddle]
-Spacings
01:36:708 (2) – stack this perfectly, 0.06x is weird
01:38:458 (2) – ^, 0.11x
Check all the notes that you’ve stacked.
This diff’s rhyme is pretty good.

[T12’s Puzzle Riddle]
-Did you use Distance Snap > <? Most of them are inconsistency. (Well ... I know you are pro with ranked map)
No major problem found.

07th Expansion <3
Star ~
Topic Starter
UnderminE

gina91189 wrote:

[General]
-Add “T12”, “TTTTTTTTTTTT”, and “Backfire” in the Tags for diffs. Actually I added but... <_< I'll ask someone about this.

[Beginner Riddle]
-Why does this diff has different red lines compare to the other diffs ? Delete the other two. done
Note: I deleted those 2 red lines and mod.
-So many snapping problems, so please resnap all your notes and recalculate your slider’s length. resnapped
-Spacings are pretty inconsistency, use Distance Snap please~ I used it, I guess it looks fine now.
00:28:948 (2) – fits better like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125822 Yeah, really. fixed.
00:43:948 (1,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125824 , remove New Combo on 00:45:198 (1) I was hating this part. Thank you~
01:33:281 (3) – move this to 01:33:198, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125825 Fixed
01:49:281 (2) – move this to 01:49:198, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/125827 Fixed

[Possible Riddle]
-Spacings Distance snap, hai.
01:36:708 (2) – stack this perfectly, 0.06x is weird Yeah I had so much problems right there.
01:38:458 (2) – ^, 0.11x and there too.
Check all the notes that you’ve stacked. sure.
This diff’s rhyme is pretty good. Thank you~

[T12’s Puzzle Riddle]
-Did you use Distance Snap > <? Most of them are inconsistency. (Well ... I know you are pro with ranked map)
No major problem found.

07th Expansion <3 yeah~
Star ~ Thankies~
well, thanks for the mod~
Sander-Don
Mod for Backfire's Taiko Riddle requested by UnderminE

0:26:708 (73) - change to D
00:27:291 (75,76,77) - remove these notes
00:27:208 (74) - add finish
00:39:333 (122) - remove this note (goes better with the song)
00:39:458 (123) - change to k ^
00:39:958 (124) - change to k ^
00:56:708 (208) - remove finish (unnecessary)
00:57:958 (215) - change to d
00:58:208 (216) - change to k
00:58:333 (217) - change to k
00:58:458 (218) - change to d
00:58:708 (219) - change to k
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ all better patterns in my opinion.
01:01:708 (235) - change to k
01:01:833 (236) - change to d
01:01:958 (237) - change to d
01:03:958 (246) - change to d (sounds better in my opinion.)
01:19:708 (327,328,329,330) - change these to k
01:20:041 (331,332) - remove these
01:36:208 (42) - how about a finish note here? :3
01:54:041 (68,69) - remove these
01:54:208 (68) - change to k (<-- ^ this pattern sounds a bit better!)

And that's all! that map was very good, Backfire! :D

Patterns 2/5
Creativity 3/5
Overall 3/5

Star! good luck on getting it ranked! :D
Backfire
Here's my updated taiko. Thank you sander. There were a couple problems I had meant to fix :c

Download: 07th Expansion - The Great Detective Knows (UnderminE) [Backfire's Taiko Riddle].osu
Topic Starter
UnderminE

Sander-Don wrote:

Mod for Backfire's Taiko Riddle requested by UnderminE

0:26:708 (73) - change to D
00:27:291 (75,76,77) - remove these notes
00:27:208 (74) - add finish
00:39:333 (122) - remove this note (goes better with the song)
00:39:458 (123) - change to k ^
00:39:958 (124) - change to k ^
00:56:708 (208) - remove finish (unnecessary)
00:57:958 (215) - change to d
00:58:208 (216) - change to k
00:58:333 (217) - change to k
00:58:458 (218) - change to d
00:58:708 (219) - change to k
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ all better patterns in my opinion.
01:01:708 (235) - change to k
01:01:833 (236) - change to d
01:01:958 (237) - change to d
01:03:958 (246) - change to d (sounds better in my opinion.)
01:19:708 (327,328,329,330) - change these to k
01:20:041 (331,332) - remove these
01:36:208 (42) - how about a finish note here? :3
01:54:041 (68,69) - remove these
01:54:208 (68) - change to k (<-- ^ this pattern sounds a bit better!)

And that's all! that map was very good, Backfire! :D

Patterns 2/5
Creativity 3/5
Overall 3/5

Star! good luck on getting it ranked! :D
Thankies for mod and star Sander~


And thank you again my master >.<
Tony
Hey There. I really wanted to check your mapset :)
Here's mah mod :D

[General]

good song choice. I say this because beginner mappers should map short songs.
Offset is so early. You can't even SS [Possible Riddle]. I suggest to put Offset 254. To be more sure about your timing you should ask a Pro Timer.
I skipped the Taiko Difficulty

[Beginner Riddle]

In Easy difficulty the more important thing is Slider design and spacing afterwards. You can take a look on other Easy difficulties from other maps. And I see random sliders and distances in many parts..

00:18:198 (3) - the end of the slider is offscreen...Better do something like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127067. And of course you need to move your next notes too...
00:26:698 (5) - make it symetrically. I think this would look better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127069
00:28:948 (2) - start on red tick, end on blue tick? That's fucking illegal LOL move it to next white tick (1/2 later) and short it at bit to end on white tick like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127071
00:34:198 (8) - offscreen again...
00:37:698 (2) - WHAT'S THAT? :O
00:43:948 (1) - I Don't Think you should use sliders on red ticks... move it 1/2 later (on white tick) and remove the repeat.
You could use your soft hitclap here...It really fits

[Possible Riddle]

Distance spacing is too low. Don't use 0.8x default in every situation . You can change the spacing by pressing alt (and letting it pressed you will see distance spacing instead of beat snap divisor). I say this because in some parts you can't read it (like here 00:59:958 (1,2,3,4,5) )
01:29:958 (6) - weird overlapping. move that

[T12's Puzzle Riddle]

You have random jumps, but they play nice :D
00:45:245 (3) - remove clap
00:57:245 (1,2,3,4) - this is unreadable because earlier you compressed your triplets...
01:45:245 (1,2,3,4,1) - same ^
01:48:995 - add a note there


Good job UnderminE :)
//Starred
L_P
HAI~

[beginners]
28,698 add note?
43,948 slider doesnt fit the rhythm el~
120,198 121,698 122,198 grid 2 left grid 3 down
142,198 third point grid 1 down

[hard]
29,583 grid 4 right?
35,208 notes 2,3 change to slider ?
39,083 add note at slider position?
41,958 add note and make slider starts at 42,208?
44,958 change position to slider's? cause the spacing is ..... um.....
54,708 make player hard to spin.
127,458 127,708 127,938 add note?
133,583 note grid up 4


[insane]
29198 slider: return at 29,573 , delete the last note
37,573 addnote?
39,948 spacing: grid 4 left
57,573 is the spacing intentional? sudden changed same as 58,073 139,198.....
137,198 also spacing grid 4 right
148,948 add note?
STAR~!
Topic Starter
UnderminE

Tony wrote:

Hey There. I really wanted to check your mapset :)
Here's mah mod :D

[General]

good song choice. I say this because beginner mappers should map short songs. Yeah, that's what I tought.
Offset is so early. You can't even SS [Possible Riddle]. I suggest to put Offset 254. To be more sure about your timing you should ask a Pro Timer. I changed the offset 2 or 3 times. And all of them were suggested by modders. I guess I should ask to a Pro Timer yeah.
I skipped the Taiko Difficulty

[Beginner Riddle]

In Easy difficulty the more important thing is Slider design and spacing afterwards. You can take a look on other Easy difficulties from other maps. And I see random sliders and distances in many parts..

00:18:198 (3) - the end of the slider is offscreen...Better do something like this : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127067. And of course you need to move your next notes too... fixed
00:26:698 (5) - make it symetrically. I think this would look better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127069 I couldn't do exactly same as yours but I think it is good now. Tell me what do you think about it later?
00:28:948 (2) - start on red tick, end on blue tick? That's fucking illegal LOL move it to next white tick (1/2 later) and short it at bit to end on white tick like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/127071 That was a suggestion too. fixed
00:34:198 (8) - offscreen again... yeah I know, fixed
00:37:698 (2) - WHAT'S THAT? :O WHAT xD I think it looks funny xD
00:43:948 (1) - I Don't Think you should use sliders on red ticks... move it 1/2 later (on white tick) and remove the repeat.
You could use your soft hitclap here...It really fits Eh, it's exactly like your said now actually? I fixed that yesterday or 2 days ago. I mean: http://i.imgur.com/w3a0P.jpg Do you think I should remove the repeats?

[Possible Riddle]

Distance spacing is too low. Don't use 0.8x default in every situation . You can change the spacing by pressing alt (and letting it pressed you will see distance spacing instead of beat snap divisor). I say this because in some parts you can't read it (like here 00:59:958 (1,2,3,4,5) )
01:29:958 (6) - weird overlapping. move that

[T12's Puzzle Riddle]

You have random jumps, but they play nice :D
00:45:245 (3) - remove clap
00:57:245 (1,2,3,4) - this is unreadable because earlier you compressed your triplets...
01:45:245 (1,2,3,4,1) - same ^
01:48:995 - add a note there


Good job UnderminE :) thank you~
//Starred also thanks for star
I've fixed Beginner Riddle but I'm gonna fix the other ones later because I have to go now lol Thanks for mod.
Topic Starter
UnderminE
Okay let's continue:

Tony wrote:

Hey There. I really wanted to check your mapset :)
Here's mah mod :D

[Possible Riddle]

Distance spacing is too low. Don't use 0.8x default in every situation . You can change the spacing by pressing alt (and letting it pressed you will see distance spacing instead of beat snap divisor). I say this because in some parts you can't read it (like here 00:59:958 (1,2,3,4,5) ) I didn't know that :D It's really useful.
01:29:958 (6) - weird overlapping. move that fixed

[T12's Puzzle Riddle]
I guess I can fix something in his map.
You have random jumps, but they play nice :D
00:45:245 (3) - remove clap Makes sense, fixed.
00:57:245 (1,2,3,4) - this is unreadable because earlier you compressed your triplets... I tried something but.. xD
01:45:245 (1,2,3,4,1) - same ^ I guess I fixed that too xD
01:48:995 - add a note there Yeah I tought about that too, fixed.
Hamuko
Me being random and modding after a long time without doing it.
Everything I'm pointing (aside General stuff about timing and tags) are just suggestions.

[General]

[Beginner Riddle] and [T12's Puzzle Riddle] have 198 offset, while the other two diffs have 208.
Change the offset in all diffs to 220, it feels better.
Make all diffs start at the same point, have the break at the same point and also end in the same point, for consistency.
Add Backfire and T12 to the tags of all diffs.

[Begginer Riddle]

Entirely 1/1 diffs are not fun to play or even mod.
As suggested on IRC, change some of those 1/1 sliders to 1/4 sliders with repeat or 1/2 sliders. And add some 1/2 beats. The map is too plain imo.

[Possible Riddle]

Same slider Velocity and Distance Spacing as previous diff (Not a bad thing), I suggest you to change either Slider Velocity to 1,5 or Distance Spacing to 1,0x. This will lead to a remap though.

[T12's Puzzle Riddle]

01:49:220 (1,2) - Move these 1/2 earlier? (To 01:48:970)
If you do that, add a beat here 01:49:595 - And also start the spinner 1/2 earlier.
Imo if the sliders like this 00:25:220 (3) - were 1/4 with repeat they would follow the song better.
Topic Starter
UnderminE

Teta wrote:

Me being random and modding after a long time without doing it. thank you~
Everything I'm pointing (aside General stuff about timing and tags) are just suggestions.

[General]

[Beginner Riddle] and [T12's Puzzle Riddle] have 198 offset, while the other two diffs have 208.
Change the offset in all diffs to 220, it feels better. I changed it to 264, it's Saten-san's suggestion.
Make all diffs start at the same point, have the break at the same point and also end in the same point, for consistency. All difs except backfire's taiko start at the same point yeah.
Add Backfire and T12 to the tags of all diffs. added

[Begginer Riddle]

Entirely 1/1 diffs are not fun to play or even mod.
As suggested on IRC, change some of those 1/1 sliders to 1/4 sliders with repeat or 1/2 sliders. And add some 1/2 beats. The map is too plain imo. Thank you so much about this, I'll try something immediately.

[Possible Riddle]

Same slider Velocity and Distance Spacing as previous diff (Not a bad thing), I suggest you to change either Slider Velocity to 1,5 or Distance Spacing to 1,0x. This will lead to a remap though. No problem, I'll try. Also I changed the Distance Spacing and it's not same everywhere.

[T12's Puzzle Riddle]

01:49:220 (1,2) - Move these 1/2 earlier? (To 01:48:970)
If you do that, add a beat here 01:49:595 - And also start the spinner 1/2 earlier.
Imo if the sliders like this 00:25:220 (3) - were 1/4 with repeat they would follow the song better.
Thanks for mod Teta~
SteamHive
07th Expansion~ Star star


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TTTTTTTTTTTT
SPOILER

Teta wrote:

[T12's Puzzle Riddle]

01:49:220 (1,2) - Move these 1/2 earlier? (To 01:48:970)
If you do that, add a beat here 01:49:595 - And also start the spinner 1/2 earlier.
Imo if the sliders like this 00:25:220 (3) - were 1/4 with repeat they would follow the song better.

no,thank you
Jenny
Possible:
Looks good so far, no major things.
01:00:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe try to re-arrange this combo

Beginner:
Some minor points.
00:37:764 (2) - i guess that slider would be confusing for beginners, since it's kind of weird in the middle part, try to change that in kind of... a visible loop or something... well, something that is easyier to read
01:02:264 (6) - that one looks better, but you could think of an alternative version for it though, well, you better wait for another guy speaking of this before you change it^^
01:53:764 (3) - well, kind of (nearly) same thing

Guess that kind of sliders is a little hard to read, but it's up to you to either change it or not, so I'll leave you with that.

Kind of like T12's diff, good job overall, stared~
NoTime2Cry
starrrrrrr

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phonic
Nice Song


Rnked GoGo!!!!


Star
Topic Starter
UnderminE

Elize wrote:

Nice Song


Rnked GoGo!!!!


Star
It's not done yet but thank you!
Topic Starter
UnderminE

Broetchen8441 wrote:

Possible:
Looks good so far, no major things.
01:00:014 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe try to re-arrange this combo Oh you're right. Fixed.

Beginner:
Some minor points.
00:37:764 (2) - i guess that slider would be confusing for beginners, since it's kind of weird in the middle part, try to change that in kind of... a visible loop or something... well, something that is easyier to read I guess it is okay now?
01:02:264 (6) - that one looks better, but you could think of an alternative version for it though, well, you better wait for another guy speaking of this before you change it^^ I should wait
01:53:764 (3) - well, kind of (nearly) same thing

Guess that kind of sliders is a little hard to read, but it's up to you to either change it or not, so I'll leave you with that. thank you

Kind of like T12's diff, good job overall, stared~ and thank you again
Thanks for mod~
Topic Starter
UnderminE

L_P wrote:

HAI~

[beginners]
28,698 add note? no thanks
43,948 slider doesnt fit the rhythm el~ fixed
120,198 121,698 122,198 grid 2 left grid 3 down fixed
142,198 third point grid 1 down fixed

[hard]
29,583 grid 4 right? done
35,208 notes 2,3 change to slider ? done
39,083 add note at slider position? no thanks
41,958 add note and make slider starts at 42,208? done
44,958 change position to slider's? cause the spacing is ..... um..... tried something thanks
54,708 make player hard to spin. fixed
127,458 127,708 127,938 add note? surely done
133,583 note grid up 4 fixed


[insane]
29198 slider: return at 29,573 , delete the last note
37,573 addnote?
39,948 spacing: grid 4 left
57,573 is the spacing intentional? sudden changed same as 58,073 139,198.....
137,198 also spacing grid 4 right
148,948 add note?
STAR~! thanks~
Thanks for mod~
JauiPlaY
hello~
some suggestions:

[General]
delete the .osb file if you want.

[Beginner Riddle]
control your combo between 3 to 5 please.
00:37:764 (2) - a note here and a slider starts at 00:38:264, ends on 00:39:264.
00:44:014 (1,2) - extremely weird rhythm imo.
01:03:698 (T) - useless timing point.
01:04:264 (x) - add a note.
01:29:764 (2) - x156y176 may be better.
01:53:764 (3) - what the...oh whatever. delete the timing point on 01:53:811, and the slider starts at 01:54:264, ends on 01:55:264.
few hitsounds may be unrankable.

[Possible Riddle]
control your combo between 4 to 7 please.
01:00:764 (2) - move to 01:00:639.
01:01:764 (4) - move to 01:01:639.
01:30:698 (T) - useless timing point.
01:04:264 (x) - add a note.

[T12's Puzzle Riddle]
00:21:264 (4,5) - make (4) repeat for 3 times is better imo.
01:04:264 (x) - imo break time should starts here.
01:25:639 (x) - add a note?
awesome.

that's all.
so
star~

EDIT: don't forget to move your map to pending if you thought it's finished!
Topic Starter
UnderminE

JauiPlaY wrote:

hello~
some suggestions:

[General]
delete the .osb file if you want. deleted.

[Beginner Riddle]
control your combo between 3 to 5 please. done
00:37:764 (2) - a note here and a slider starts at 00:38:264, ends on 00:39:264. done
00:44:014 (1,2) - extremely weird rhythm imo. I think sounds good?
01:03:698 (T) - useless timing point. fixed
01:04:264 (x) - add a note. no thank you
01:29:764 (2) - x156y176 may be better. looks good, done
01:53:764 (3) - what the...oh whatever. delete the timing point on 01:53:811, and the slider starts at 01:54:264, ends on 01:55:264.done
few hitsounds may be unrankable.

[Possible Riddle]
control your combo between 4 to 7 please. sure
01:00:764 (2) - move to 01:00:639. done
01:01:764 (4) - move to 01:01:639.done
01:30:698 (T) - useless timing point. done
01:04:264 (x) - add a note. no thank you

[T12's Puzzle Riddle]
00:21:264 (4,5) - make (4) repeat for 3 times is better imo.
01:04:264 (x) - imo break time should starts here.
01:25:639 (x) - add a note?
awesome.

that's all.
so
star~ thank you so much!

EDIT: don't forget to move your map to pending if you thought it's finished! I know thank you~
Thanks for mod~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
fix some

1233211234567+1233211234567+1233211234567+07th Expansion - The Great Detective Knows+OMG

Download: 07th Expansion - The Great Detective Knows (UnderminE) [T12's Puzzle Riddle].osu
Kotone
8-) all fine for me(I am lazy
maybe delete .osb file?

too short too short
Topic Starter
UnderminE

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

fix some

1233211234567+1233211234567+1233211234567+07th Expansion - The Great Detective Knows+OMG
Added.

karenying wrote:

8-) all fine for me(I am lazy
maybe delete .osb file? mhm

too short too short That's because it's my first map. But thank you anyway.
majin35
give a star give a star give a star give a star give a star give a star give a star give a star give a star give a star give a star
trsosbrigade
Pretty good for a first try, since i'm a Umineko maniac i greatly want more songs to be mapped!
Topic Starter
UnderminE

trsosbrigade wrote:

Pretty good for a first try, since i'm a Umineko maniac i greatly want more songs to be mapped!
Thank you so much, yeah I want too :D The next one will be probably Justice v_v
Hamuko

UnderminE wrote:

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

fix some

1233211234567+1233211234567+1233211234567+07th Expansion - The Great Detective Knows+OMG
Added.

karenying wrote:

8-) all fine for me(I am lazy
maybe delete .osb file? mhm

too short too short That's because it's my first map. But thank you anyway.
I think karen added the "too short" there because the message was too short. not the map.
lulz
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