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Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size)

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Shourinkai
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Shourinkai
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 12, 2011 at 1:22:14 AM

Artist: Kuroki Meisa
Title: Wired Life (TV Size)
Source: Ao No Exorcist
Tags: blue exorcist backfire
BPM: 128
Filesize: 15630kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Backfire's Taiko Oni (4.94 stars, 388 notes)
  2. Connect (0.29 stars, 52 notes)
  3. Entwined (4.22 stars, 147 notes)
  4. Light (3.22 stars, 123 notes)
  5. Struggle (4.77 stars, 224 notes)
  6. Wired (5 stars, 299 notes)
Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size)
Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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*These are my very first submitted beatmaps.

I suppose I should say that IF YOU DOWNLOADED BEFORE AUGUST 25TH THEN PLEASE REDOWNLOAD! or something.

Mods:
KGFA
X3r0
EvianBubble
Backfire
BlazzyArrow
Genkishi
Breeze
Kytoxid (I hate you man <3) x2
Weiren
kanpakyin
MoodyRPG
UnderminE
OzzyOzrock
Nakagawa-Kanon

I look forward to constructive criticism and/or stars. So without further ado. Enjoy! ^^

Changelog:
SPOILER
July 18th:
1st edit ~ Made change to Hard life drain and overall difficulty.
2nd edit ~ Did a little bit of overhauling, added [Insane], & modified hitsound for clap.
3rd edit ~ Did a lot of overhauling on [Insane] following the helpful advice of KGFA, some minor changes to [Hard] courtesy of player KGFA, and lost hitsound for clap... 4th edit to come.
4th edit ~ "Fixed" hitsound problem, reduce audio kbps, minor changes on [Easy] and [Normal] following the advice of X3r0, probably did something to [Hard], fixed critical error in [Insane] and probably some other stuff.
5th edit ~ This is the last foreseeable edit. It includes a very, very minor edit to [Easy] and the video.

July 19th:
6th edit ~ With a new day comes new perspectives and so changes all around! Adjustments to all four difficulties.
7th edit ~ Some more minor changes to [Easy] (courtesy of X3r0 again), [Insane], and I think [Normal]... Added begininng of [Insane] to end.

July 20th:
8th edit ~ Changed offset for all four diffs and fixed resulting errors in [Hard]. Added preview point to [Easy].

July 25th:
9th edit ~ Finally got off my lazy a- ... ahem. Anyways, new background vid implemented. Vid size is now 6.06Mb down from 23.2Mb.
PS: There was absolutely no need for the quality of vid that was previously used. I apologize for any inconvience I may have caused due to the past absurd file size or recent change.

July 28th:
10th edit ~ Added new difficulty [~Connect~]!
Renamed diffs (in order from easiest to hardest):
{New} Easy -> [~Connect~]
{Old} Easy -> [~Beautiful~]
Normal -> [~Entwined~]
Hard ->[~Struggle~]
Insane ->[~Wired~]
Readjusted offset on all diffs, hopefully beats will be a little more precise now.
Modified [~Wired~] a little bit. Added notes and moved some around for better flow.

July 29th:
Minor Edit - Moved the video -75ms... it was off by 75ms and that urked me. Call me "CDO" if you will.

August 4th:
Jeez, made tons of changes and still making them, just didn't want to forget stuff to put in here. So:
General:
(This will be my general changelog layout until further notice...) Notice has been furthened... No that made no sense.
  1. Changed title, tags, diff names (removed ~, they were kinda unnescessary), and source.. to... crap I'll get the done after this.
  2. Removed lettbox during breaks (as if there are any), didn't know about the whole video+letterbox thing.
  3. Shifted (actually got rid of) timing sections at beginning of most maps since the same effect can be done by changing the "master" timing point.
Connect:
  1. Incorporated EvianBubble's hitsound map and made minor (oh so minor) adjustments.
  2. Replaced spinner at 01:13:316 with a slider.
Beautiful:
EIP (Edit in progress)
  1. Renamed to [Light]
  2. Changed tick rate to 1. Added custom hitfinish to account for this.
Update:
General:

Added [Backfire's Taiko Oni] Courtesy of Backfire!

Changed all the Sources, removed the "2nd ED".
Added Kiai time from 00:37:457/00:37:691(On [Light]) -> 00:52:691 (in correspondence to what EvianBubble did on [Connect])

[Light]
  1. Messed around with timing sections: added S:C2 @ 00:49:879, S:C1 @ 01:05:582, S @ 01:13:551, S:C1 @ 01:14:957 ; changed 01:12:192 to S:C1 (Was S:C2)
  2. Added hitsounds where I found suitable. Most notable from 00:52:223 - 01:18:004. Added claps and moved whistles.
  3. 00:20:817 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Modified pattern and added 3 beats.
  4. 00:26:442 (4, 5) - Added 2 beats to fill gap.
  5. 00:44:488 (6) - Added reverse slider to fill gap.
  6. 00:45:426 (1,2) - Made changes according to EvianBubble's suggestion.
  7. 00:48:473 (1,2,3) - Made changes according to EvianBubble's suggestion.
  8. 00:50:582 (5,6) - Moved (5) and (6) up and changed their directions from upward to downward.
  9. 00:58:795 (2,3) - Reduced (2) from reverse slider to normal, added (3).

    [Struggle]
  10. 00:37:457 (1) - Begun combo start and modified combo before it to line up with kiai time start.
August 06:
[Connect]&[Entwined]
Did everything Genkishi caught/suggested.
[Backfire's Taiko Oni]
Applied.

August 10:
New bg image (resized), new offset, new lots o' things.

August 11:
Applied Breeze's mod. See http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=975973#p975973.
Applied Kytoxid's mod. See http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=977131#p977131.

August 12:
Applied Weiren's mod. See http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=977486#p977486.

August 14:
Just fixed a couple of sound issues in [Light], [Entwined], and [Struggle] but kept one sound problem in [Struggle] because I personally kinda like it. Added a beat to [Struggle] to help maintain flow.
[Wired] Just got a whole lot harder. Major facelift for it so get ready to take a brusin'.

August 15:
Applied kanpakyin's mod. See http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=983480#p983480.
Applied MoodyRPG's mod. See http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=983498#p983498.
Applied UnderminE's mod. See http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=983571#p983571.

August 25:
Applied Kytoxid's re-mod. See http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=999189#p999189.

Added new video (dl'd a better version of the first one I used).
Added 7 combo bursts.
Added star image.

August 28:
Applied Nakagawa-Kanon's mod. See http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=1003373#p1003373.

September 1:
I think I made [Struggle] and [Wired] suck less...

Storyboard in progress.
Last edited by Shourinkai , edited 100 times in total.
Cloudy
49 posts
Joined December 2009
Cloudy
[General]

You thinking of adding a video?
Set a preview point.
Your .mp3 is 320kbps, reduce it to 192 or less. There usually isn't a need for excessively high quality audio.

[Easy]

00:45:380; This repeat slider is a bit long, you can either shorten it or leave it as it is. It seems fine to me either way.
Overall, I don't see any ground breaking errors in this difficulty and I'm not experienced enough to know the smaller flaws so as far as I know this difficulty appears to be OK.

[Normal]

00:11:396; As before with your easy difficulty, this repeat slider ought to be cut earlier. For example, the slider stops @ 00:12:333 and every half beat from then on is replaced by a hit circle, creating a stream. So 2,3,4,5,6 I've added in between that gap after your shortened slider and 7,8. To be honest though, its actually pretty much acceptable as it is now and I just personally think that is a better way to do it.

So far I don't see much wrong with these two difficulties; good luck with your map.
Shourinkai
30 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shourinkai
Thank you for the advice, I'll definitely makes use of it.
KGFA
7 posts
Joined June 2010
KGFA
I like it, it's a good song, keep going
Elfen_Lied
26 posts
Joined July 2010
Elfen_Lied
good map~ :)
Cloudy
49 posts
Joined December 2009
Cloudy
[Easy]

00:46:552; Avoid stacking more than three consecutive notes together on this difficulty, especially since this is right after a repeat slider. You should either space this stream out in an arc like fashion (01:16:552; you have done this with 4,5,6) or what I have done is, extend the repeat slider by 1/2 a beat, remove note 2, then stack the other three beats on top of each other like before. If this method is employed I suggest moving either the notes or the slider so that when the slider ends, the end is facing the stream. @ 01:09:052 and other places such as 01:10:927 stacking 3 consecutive notes have also been used, so this will be consistent with the whole difficulty.

[Normal]

00:35:536; The 6 should be spaced in the same way the other notes in the stream are spaced. So the distance from 5 & 6 should be equivalent to let's say 2 & 3 or 4 & 5 in that combo.
Shourinkai
30 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shourinkai

X3r0 wrote:

[Easy]

00:46:552; Avoid stacking more than three consecutive notes together on this difficulty, especially since this is right after a repeat slider. You should either space this stream out in an arc like fashion (01:16:552; you have done this with 4,5,6) or what I have done is, extend the repeat slider by 1/2 a beat, remove note 2, then stack the other three beats on top of each other like before. If this method is employed I suggest moving either the notes or the slider so that when the slider ends, the end is facing the stream. @ 01:09:052 and other places such as 01:10:927 stacking 3 consecutive notes have also been used, so this will be consistent with the whole difficulty.

[Normal]

00:35:536; The 6 should be spaced in the same way the other notes in the stream are spaced. So the distance from 5 & 6 should be equivalent to let's say 2 & 3 or 4 & 5 in that combo.
Done and done. If you see anything else that could use improving (even if it's just your opinion) then go ahead and tell me. Thank you for your help X3r0.
meredithzhao
2 posts
Joined June 2010
meredithzhao
nice map~
Cloudy
49 posts
Joined December 2009
Cloudy
[Easy]

00:54:989; New combo here?

Like above as opposed to the original below.


01:02:489; Same thing as above, new combo @ 6. Though this is really only for consistency to what I've done above.
r-Beatz
88 posts
Joined August 2010
r-Beatz
love it! ♥
249232373
20 posts
Joined March 2010
249232373
a nice map
-BaKa_old
-BaKa_old

r-Beatz wrote:

love it! ♥
nice map ....love it too..
CMP
155 posts
Joined April 2011
CMP
wow~! good


throw star~!

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my pending map->http://osu.ppy.sh/31388
phonic
1,068 posts
Joined October 2010
phonic
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Star :) :) :) :) :) :)
EvianBubble
339 posts
Joined October 2009
EvianBubble
General
Title should be Wired Life (TV size)
Why do your diff names have ~s in them? O_O
Source should be Ao no Exorcist
Tags: Remove all your current tags (they are either in the title, artist, or source fields, so aren't needed - anime will be the category it's placed in after ranking), you should add "blue" since the English title is "Blue Exorcist"
Move your first timing section to 00:02:067 (no timing changes, just it's the downbeat of the bar so it makes more sense :3)
You should use hitsounds :3
I personally recommend using grid level 3 for mapping, it makes things look neater and such (at the top click view, then "grid level" and choose 3)
Uncheck "letterbox during breaks" since you have video
00:37:691 - Start kiai time here?
00:52:691 - End kiai here?

Connect
00:05:113 (1) - I suggest making this 60% volume and adding whistle
00:07:691 (1,2,3) - Add whistle to the middle and end of (1), (2), and the end of (3)
00:15:192 (1,2,3) - These are too close together. I read them fine but might be confusing for a new player. Move like this?
SPOILER

00:21:285 (1) - I think the next beat after this comes too soon after a spinner at this diff, so I suggest ending at 00:22:691 and adding a finish
00:23:629 (1) - Add whistle to beginning. Move two grids up (lv 3)
00:26:442 (2) - Add finish at 50% volume
00:27:379 (3) - Move two grids down and one right, whistle on beginning and end
00:30:191 (1,2,3,4) - Finish on beginning of (1), clap on (2, 4), whistle on beginning of (3)
00:33:941 (1) - Add whistle to the body, finish on end
01:13:316 (1) - I don't really like this spinner. Map through it?
01:23:160 (1) - Move this to the right, 'cus now it just looks ugly :(

(BTW, I stopped saying hitsound stuff halfway through 'cus I got annoyed lol XD I've attatched the osu file with all the hitsound changes I'd've made and everything else I said, so just CHANGE ANYTHING YOU DON'T AGREE WITH :D)

Beautiful
I do not like tick rate 2 at all for this song >_< Consider changing
00:18:004 (2) - Consider moving to the right side of (1) - fixes spacing without looking odd
00:20:817 (1,2,3) - Don't you want more of a build up here? Consider adding notes at 00:21:285, 00:22:223, and 00:22:457
00:23:629 - Those hitsounds sound kind of ... funny X_X
00:26:442 - Definitely suggest adding a note here
00:33:941 (1,2) - Sounds kind of odd but I can't think of a better way to map this :S
00:35:582 (1,1,1,2) - I quite like this. Although I don't think you need a new combo for all those notes
00:44:723 - Add note here and 00:44:957 here
00:45:426 (1) - Consider changing this combo like so. I think it flows a lot better (look at timeline)
SPOILER
00:48:473 (1,2,3) - Make (2) one half beat longer, shorten (3) by one and move it forward (look at timeline)
SPOILER
00:50:582 (4,5,6) - Spacing, these need to be moved closer together
00:57:848 (1,2) - Maybe change to this? (Timeline)
SPOILER

I didn't make any hitsound suggestions, but I would suggest doing something to what I did in my hitsounds one :O

Sorry I didn't get to finish. Please tell me when you've changed stuff so I can recheck :) (So no star yet :P)

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life ~TV Version~ (Shourinkai) [Hitsounds].osu
Shourinkai
30 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shourinkai
SPOILER

EvianBubble wrote:

General
Title should be Wired Life (TV size)
Why do your diff names have ~s in them? O_O
Source should be Ao no Exorcist
Tags: Remove all your current tags (they are either in the title, artist, or source fields, so aren't needed - anime will be the category it's placed in after ranking), you should add "blue" since the English title is "Blue Exorcist"
Move your first timing section to 00:02:067 (no timing changes, just it's the downbeat of the bar so it makes more sense :3)
You should use hitsounds :3
I personally recommend using grid level 3 for mapping, it makes things look neater and such (at the top click view, then "grid level" and choose 3)
Uncheck "letterbox during breaks" since you have video
00:37:691 - Start kiai time here?
00:52:691 - End kiai here?

Connect
00:05:113 (1) - I suggest making this 60% volume and adding whistle
00:07:691 (1,2,3) - Add whistle to the middle and end of (1), (2), and the end of (3)
00:15:192 (1,2,3) - These are too close together. I read them fine but might be confusing for a new player. Move like this?


00:21:285 (1) - I think the next beat after this comes too soon after a spinner at this diff, so I suggest ending at 00:22:691 and adding a finish
00:23:629 (1) - Add whistle to beginning. Move two grids up (lv 3)
00:26:442 (2) - Add finish at 50% volume
00:27:379 (3) - Move two grids down and one right, whistle on beginning and end
00:30:191 (1,2,3,4) - Finish on beginning of (1), clap on (2, 4), whistle on beginning of (3)
00:33:941 (1) - Add whistle to the body, finish on end
01:13:316 (1) - I don't really like this spinner. Map through it?
01:23:160 (1) - Move this to the right, 'cus now it just looks ugly :(

(BTW, I stopped saying hitsound stuff halfway through 'cus I got annoyed lol XD I've attatched the osu file with all the hitsound changes I'd've made and everything else I said, so just CHANGE ANYTHING YOU DON'T AGREE WITH :D)

Beautiful
I do not like tick rate 2 at all for this song >_< Consider changing
00:18:004 (2) - Consider moving to the right side of (1) - fixes spacing without looking odd
00:20:817 (1,2,3) - Don't you want more of a build up here? Consider adding notes at 00:21:285, 00:22:223, and 00:22:457
00:23:629 - Those hitsounds sound kind of ... funny X_X
00:26:442 - Definitely suggest adding a note here
00:33:941 (1,2) - Sounds kind of odd but I can't think of a better way to map this :S
00:35:582 (1,1,1,2) - I quite like this. Although I don't think you need a new combo for all those notes
00:44:723 - Add note here and 00:44:957 here
00:45:426 (1) - Consider changing this combo like so. I think it flows a lot better (look at timeline)

00:48:473 (1,2,3) - Make (2) one half beat longer, shorten (3) by one and move it forward (look at timeline)

00:50:582 (4,5,6) - Spacing, these need to be moved closer together
00:57:848 (1,2) - Maybe change to this? (Timeline)


I didn't make any hitsound suggestions, but I would suggest doing something to what I did in my hitsounds one :O

Sorry I didn't get to finish. Please tell me when you've changed stuff so I can recheck :) (So no star yet :P)

Made all changes unless I didn't want to. :D
Check the changelog under August 4th to see what I did (I MAY have missed a few things).
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Backfire
3,204 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
Yumyumyumyumyumyum boobies yum here's my taiko, I hope you like it.

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (Shourinkai) [Backfire's Taiko Oni].osu
BrokenArrow
2,236 posts
Joined June 2010
BrokenArrow
Mod by request

Backfire's Taiko Oni

Set the difficulty of Circle Size, Approach Rate, HP Drain and Overall Difficulty to 5.

00:37:457 - 00:51:988 - Add kia-time like it's in the other diffs
00:11:207 (20) - kat?

Found nothing else :D
Great work, here is your star~
Backfire
3,204 posts
Joined February 2010
Backfire
Right then, since he was lazy and didnt put kiai, I went ahead and put it in, and added that kat. That stream was always awkward :x

Download: Kuroki Meisa - Wired Life (TV Size) (Shourinkai) [Backfire's Taiko Oni].osu
UnderminE
osu! Alumni
4,011 posts
Joined August 2010
UnderminE
I love this song. And it has such a beautiful video. yay Ao no Exorcist~
Shourinkai
30 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shourinkai

Backfire wrote:

Right then, since he was lazy and didnt put kiai, I went ahead and put it in, and added that kat. That stream was always awkward :x
Hey, being lazy and forgetting are two different things. xD
Added.
Genkishi
566 posts
Joined September 2010
Genkishi
[General]

-Why it has 2 OSB files? Delete the other one then full submit

[Connect]

1:11:441 (4)- make the slider up to 1:12:379

@_@ i am very lazy at modding easy

[Light]

00:08:629 (3)-clap
00:10:504 (6)-^
00:11:442 (1)-add clap in the reverse arrow but do not add clap in this reverse arrow 00:12:379 and add clap into the end of the slider
00:14:254 (3)-clap
00:16:129 (2)-^
00:18:004 (2)-^
00:22:692 (5)-finish
00:23:160 (6)-whistle
00:54:566 (5)-clap
00:56:441 (4)-^
01:16:598 (4)-new combo
01:17:535 (7)-^

[Entwigned]

00:10:973 (8)-1 grid up

Start a new kiai here at 01:00:191 up to 01:20:348


I'm Gonna Pass on the other diff.!..I am tired xD

Take a Star
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
This is now stuck in my head :O
I blame you!!!!!

General
- Offset is 192! change and make sure to resnap all notes.
- Add Backfire to the tags for ALL the diffs!
- In the folder, open all the .osu files in notepad and change the audio lead-in to 1000
- The .osu files of Connect and Light, change the preview time to 37411
- The bg image should be a image that is 4:3 (1024*768, or 800*600)
- Kiai time isn't really working well for most of the diffs. All of them should be done just like in hte Entwined diff.

Connect
00:43:316 (4) - This slider feels weird, try chaning it to something like this: http://puu.sh/4cDC
00:47:066 (5) - Same thing as above
00:56:441 (5) - ^

Light
00:35:582 (1,1,1,2) - This should be just one combo. Way it is now seems out of place.
00:39:566 (3) - Add a clap instead here. You do it for the next set of combos
00:49:645 (3) - This isn't a really pretty slider. Consider cahnging this.
(Suggestion) 01:19:410 (4) - Looks good now but try this out, looks even better! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/128420
01:22:691 - Snap the inherited timing point to here.

Entwined
I like htis diff!

Struggle

00:55:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern here, try copying the previous combo and pasting it and press crtl+H
01:10:973 (3,4,5) - Follow the same spacing pattern like in 01:09:098 (3,4,5)


Wired
- Should end like the other diffs.
There are way to much spacing errors here. Go through it and try to follow one spacing (except when you use jumps.)

~Call me back for a remod or if you need help, I'll star then~
Shourinkai
30 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
Shourinkai

Weezy wrote:

This is now stuck in my head :O
I blame you!!!!! :O Don't shoot the messenger.

General
- Offset is 192! change and make sure to resnap all notes.
- Add Backfire to the tags for ALL the diffs!
- In the folder, open all the .osu files in notepad and change the audio lead-in to 1000
- The .osu files of Connect and Light, change the preview time to 37411
- The bg image should be a image that is 4:3 (1024*768, or 800*600)
- Kiai time isn't really working well for most of the diffs. All of them should be done just like in hte Entwined diff.
Did all! ^^

Connect
00:43:316 (4) - This slider feels weird, try chaning it to something like this: http://puu.sh/4cDC
00:47:066 (5) - Same thing as above
00:56:441 (5) - ^
Did all! ^^

Light
00:35:582 (1,1,1,2) - This should be just one combo. Way it is now seems out of place.
00:39:566 (3) - Add a clap instead here. You do it for the next set of combos
00:49:645 (3) - This isn't a really pretty slider. Consider cahnging this.
(Suggestion) 01:19:410 (4) - Looks good now but try this out, looks even better! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/128420
01:22:691 - Snap the inherited timing point to here.
Did all! ^^

Entwined
I like htis diff!
Sweetness

Struggle

00:55:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern here, try copying the previous combo and pasting it and press crtl+H Didn't exactly do that but I definitely change the pattern. I may have to reduce space since pythag law and all.
01:10:973 (3,4,5) - Follow the same spacing pattern like in 01:09:098 (3,4,5) Done.


Wired
- Should end like the other diffs. Deleted last portion.
There are way to much spacing errors here. Go through it and try to follow one spacing (except when you use jumps.) Edit: Actually, if someone else suggests this then I will do it, however most if not everything I did here is intentonal.

~Call me back for a remod or if you need help, I'll star then~
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Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
Hi there

[General]
  1. Please delete osb file since it's not uesd
  2. Please use only one StackLeniency in all diff.s
[Conecet]
  1. 01:13:316 (5) - The shade of this slider looks bad, change it or not, all depends on you. You can try use 2 more spots to change shade, like this maybe
[Light]
  1. 01:13:785 (5) - I'm strongly recommond that note shouldn't be obstructed by other note, it's ugly and make it hard to read
[Entwined]
  1. 00:12:145 (1,2,3) - spacing wrong, it's eye visible the spacing of 1,2,3 is bigger than 4,5,6,7 etc.
  2. 00:14:254 (11) - spacing wrong
  3. 00:23:160 - add a note sounds better
  4. 01:14:723 (2) - spacing wrong
[Struggle]
  1. 00:09:332 (6,8) - Why here jump?
  2. 00:13:551 (3) - confusing jump IMO, even if you wanna use a jump, you should use new combo
  3. 00:17:301 (4) - Now I don't why this diff. so many jumps, and jump without any proper reson, I think it's unrankable
  4. 00:23:863 (1-11) - spacing confused
  5. 00:36:754 (6,7) - This jump is acceptable for me, you should new combo here, it's a big jump
  6. 00:48:941 (3) - this still confusing me
  7. 00:51:051 (3) - ^
  8. 01:20:816 (1-8) - spacing, spacing
    This diff. has many spacing issues, I think should fix these first
map itself not bad, star
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