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Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu

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Kei
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on lunes, 13 de febrero de 2012 at 03:20:35 a.m.

Artist: Kamui Gakupo
Title: Choufuugetsu
Source: No.D
Tags: vocaloid gackpoid ikari_kyon
BPM: 110
Filesize: 8799kb
Play Time: 03:30
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,81 stars, 413 notes)
  2. i_k's Insane (4,98 stars, 558 notes)
  3. Normal (2,89 stars, 248 notes)
Download: Kamui Gakupo - Choufuugetsu
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st beatmap.

Vocaloid song for osu! sung by Gackpoid.
This is a quite old map that includes a simple purple skin :3

[Normal] by me

[Hard] by me

[i_k's Insane] by ikari_kyon

Thanks a lot to everyone who helped me with this beatmap.
Pokiehl
:twisted:
Selee
Timing:
BPM: 110.000
Offset: 34
Topic Starter
Kei

Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 110.000
Offset: 34
Wow! That was fast! Thanks a lot >u<
GiNa
Hello, from my queue ;D
Btw, I love Gero too <3

My Mod
[General]
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: Remove “vocaloid”, added “ikari_kyon” when you got his GD.

Remember to put all diffs for the same thing; you forgot to put them in [Normal] right now.
-BG should be 1024x768, which is 4:3 ratio.
Take a look of this one (I fixed it for you), if you did change BG, remember to do a full submission. http://puu.sh/3g8n
-You might need a Easy

[Normal]
-CS-1 ? Since you don’t have Easy.
-I think there are too many finish hitsounds in kiai time, sounds a little annoying to me.
00:46:397 – add a note?
01:52:124 (2) – move to 01:51:852, and add whistle
01:52:670 (3) – move to 01:52:397, and add whistle
01:53:215 (4) – move to 01:52:943, and add whistle
^ These 3 are suggestions only; they sound better in this way imo.
01:56:215 – add a note with whistle
02:18:852 (4) – move to 02:18:579
03:06:034 (2) – add whistle ?
03:30:579 (1) – make this spinner end at 03:33:852, also end kiai at 03:33:852

[Hard]
-CS-1, OD+1 ?
00:18:306 (5) – spacing
00:45:852 (3) – asymmetry. Have you read this yet? If not, here: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
01:09:306 (1) – this didn’t really follow the vocal, map here?
01:55:670 (6) – look better like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111691
02:06:579 (8) – NC ?
02:14:079 (4) – asymmetry
02:15:033 (6) – ^
02:28:943 (1) – same as 01:09:306 (1)
02:34:124 (10) – spacing
02:46:534 (9) – asymmetry
03:07:670 (8) – NC ?
03:25:124 (9) - ^
03:30:579 (1) – same as [Normal]’s 03:30:579 (1)

Have a star from me ;3
Topic Starter
Kei

gina91189 wrote:

Hello, from my queue ;D
Btw, I love Gero too <3 *u*

My Mod
[General]
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: Remove “vocaloid”, added “ikari_kyon” when you got his GD.Removed~
Remember to put all diffs for the same thing; you forgot to put them in [Normal] right now. oops I forgot that. Added tags
-BG should be 1024x768, which is 4:3 ratio.
Take a look of this one (I fixed it for you), if you did change BG, remember to do a full submission. http://puu.sh/3g8n Yay! Thanks :D
-You might need a Easy Yeah u-u but I suck at mapping easy

[Normal]
-CS-1 ? Since you don’t have Easy. changed
-I think there are too many finish hitsounds in kiai time, sounds a little annoying to me. But I like them! ;A;
00:46:397 – add a note? Uhm.. no .u. sry
01:52:124 (2) – move to 01:51:852, and add whistle Moved
01:52:670 (3) – move to 01:52:397, and add whistle ^
01:53:215 (4) – move to 01:52:943, and add whistle ^
^ These 3 are suggestions only; they sound better in this way imo.
01:56:215 – add a note with whistle Added
02:18:852 (4) – move to 02:18:579 Moved
03:06:034 (2) – add whistle ? Oops .u. Added
03:30:579 (1) – make this spinner end at 03:33:852, also end kiai at 03:33:852 Changed

[Hard]
-CS-1, OD+1 ? Changed
00:18:306 (5) – spacing Oh :c fixed
00:45:852 (3) – asymmetry. Have you read this yet? If not, here: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194 oh ;u; my bad. Fixed
01:09:306 (1) – this didn’t really follow the vocal, map here? Mapped
01:55:670 (6) – look better like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111691 uhm changed
02:06:579 (8) – NC ? Added
02:14:079 (4) – asymmetry Fixed
02:15:033 (6) – ^ ^
02:28:943 (1) – same as 01:09:306 (1) ah Mapped
02:34:124 (10) – spacing Fixed
02:46:534 (9) – asymmetry Fixed
03:07:670 (8) – NC ? Added
03:25:124 (9) - ^ ^
03:30:579 (1) – same as [Normal]’s 03:30:579 (1) Changed

Have a star from me ;3 Waah >u< Thanks a lot for your help c:
rEdo
[Normal]
0:15:306 (2) - rorate this slider by 15° clockwise, looks a lot better like this. select it, then press ctrl+shift+r to do that. also, select 'Selection centre' option, so your slider won't move.
{0:41:215 (2,3) - distance snap between notes: 0.85x. aaand...
{0:43:670 (5,6,7) - distance snap between notes: 0.75x. you should keep the same distance between notes, to make your map flawless.
0:45:306 (1,2,3) - oh, this one especially.
0:51:033 (2,3,4,5) - and agaaain. i'm not gonna post stuff like that from now on, you should search for them on your own now. :)
1:12:579 (1) - delete that new combo, i suppose?
2:17:761 (3,4) - too long distance between those.
3:30:852 (1) - should start 1/2 earlier.

[Hard]
0:18:579 (1,2,3) - kinda huge jump you've got there, maybe swap (1) with (2)? ctrl+r to do that, after you select both notes
1:20:215 (1,2,3) - i don't think those huge jumps are really necessary, you can go with something like that (click!). don't add jumps like that just to increase the map's difficulty at one moment a bit. :)
1:54:988 (1) - delete that note, i guess.
2:07:533 (4) - you totally should move this slider a bit closer to the previous one's end.
2:56:215 (1,2,3) - once again, you can come up with something better and easier.
3:13:670 (1,2,3) - yeah.
3:22:397 (1,2,3) - ^


kinda nice map, i liked it. pretty nice rhythm, hitsounds are so-so, and the way you place notes pretty much fit the song.
besides, i'd like to ask you one thing: please read people's rules while you're posting in a modding queue. you're pretty lucky that i'm in a good mood today and actually decided to map your song, because you broke one rule - you shouldn't give people WIP maps. believe me, modders totally prefer modding completed mapsets than just single difficulties. please, remember that in the future. for now, good luck!
jossieP
waaay :)
starred because of I love you~
Topic Starter
Kei

rEdo wrote:

[Normal]
0:15:306 (2) - rorate this slider by 15° clockwise, looks a lot better like this. select it, then press ctrl+shift+r to do that. also, select 'Selection centre' option, so your slider won't move. Rotated!
{0:41:215 (2,3) - distance snap between notes: 0.85x. aaand... oh fixed
{0:43:670 (5,6,7) - distance snap between notes: 0.75x. you should keep the same distance between notes, to make your map flawless. fixed
0:45:306 (1,2,3) - oh, this one especially. ^
0:51:033 (2,3,4,5) - and agaaain. i'm not gonna post stuff like that from now on, you should search for them on your own now. :) Fixed everything :D
1:12:579 (1) - delete that new combo, i suppose? Deleted
2:17:761 (3,4) - too long distance between those. oh fixed too
3:30:852 (1) - should start 1/2 earlier. ^

[Hard]
0:18:579 (1,2,3) - kinda huge jump you've got there, maybe swap (1) with (2)? ctrl+r to do that, after you select both notes Changed
1:20:215 (1,2,3) - i don't think those huge jumps are really necessary, you can go with something like that (click!). don't add jumps like that just to increase the map's difficulty at one moment a bit. :) Understood! c:
1:54:988 (1) - delete that note, i guess. deleted
2:07:533 (4) - you totally should move this slider a bit closer to the previous one's end. moved
2:56:215 (1,2,3) - once again, you can come up with something better and easier. edited
3:13:670 (1,2,3) - yeah. ^
3:22:397 (1,2,3) - ^ ^


kinda nice map, i liked it. pretty nice rhythm, hitsounds are so-so, and the way you place notes pretty much fit the song. This brightened my day ;U;
besides, i'd like to ask you one thing: please read people's rules while you're posting in a modding queue. you're pretty lucky that i'm in a good mood today and actually decided to map your song, because you broke one rule - you shouldn't give people WIP maps. believe me, modders totally prefer modding completed mapsets than just single difficulties. please, remember that in the future. for now, good luck!
Sorry about breaking one of your mod queue rules ;u; my bad. Thanks for your help and for being kind enough to accept my mod request even when I breaked one of your mod queue rules ;u;

ikari_kyon wrote:

waaay :)
starred because of I love you~
You're the best! c: yay~
Mercurial

Keilara wrote:

Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 110.000
Offset: 34
Wow! That was fast! Thanks a lot >u<

Qué te dije, es un capo.
Mercurial
Hola Kate :3

Mi mod generoso (Pese a que no me gusta Vocaloid) está aquí.

En fín...

General: Puede ser que estés usando Custom Songs en las notas? Si es así, estan muy bien hechas... y si no es así, deberías pensar en colocar varios Claps y Whistles en todo el map.


Ustedes sí que saben mapear... No como quienleshabla... En fín.

Revisé Normal y Hard, y no encuentro puntos en los que obligatoriamente tengas que modificar...

Después reviso la de Kyon bien bien, ahora tengo que trabajar (Ya sabés a qué me refiero)



Bueno, ya les dejé la Star. Suerte ^^
Topic Starter
Kei

MercurialSpectre wrote:

Hola Kate :3

Mi mod generoso (Pese a que no me gusta Vocaloid) está aquí. ;____; Lo siento.

En fín...

General: Puede ser que estés usando Custom Songs en las notas? Si es así, estan muy bien hechas... y si no es así, deberías pensar en colocar varios Claps y Whistles en todo el map. Si tiene customs! c: fijate el folder. Hay un custom que suplanta el default soft Whistle hitsound.


Ustedes sí que saben mapear... No como quienleshabla... En fín. No te menosprecies asi Dante ;u; Yo todavia estoy aprendiendo .-. Kyon si es pro c:

Revisé Normal y Hard, y no encuentro puntos en los que obligatoriamente tengas que modificar...

Después reviso la de Kyon bien bien, ahora tengo que trabajar (Ya sabés a qué me refiero) Gracias por revisar mi map aun siendo algo de lo que no te guste ;-; asdf .u.



Bueno, ya les dejé la Star. Suerte ^^ Gracias denuevo~!
Mercurial

Keilara wrote:

MercurialSpectre wrote:

Hola Kate :3

Mi mod generoso (Pese a que no me gusta Vocaloid) está aquí. ;____; Lo siento.

En fín...

General: Puede ser que estés usando Custom Songs en las notas? Si es así, estan muy bien hechas... y si no es así, deberías pensar en colocar varios Claps y Whistles en todo el map. Si tiene customs! c: fijate el folder. Hay un custom que suplanta el default soft Whistle hitsound.


Ustedes sí que saben mapear... No como quienleshabla... En fín. No te menosprecies asi Dante ;u; Yo todavia estoy aprendiendo .-. Kyon si es pro c:

Revisé Normal y Hard, y no encuentro puntos en los que obligatoriamente tengas que modificar...

Después reviso la de Kyon bien bien, ahora tengo que trabajar (Ya sabés a qué me refiero) Gracias por revisar mi map aun siendo algo de lo que no te guste ;-; asdf .u.



Bueno, ya les dejé la Star. Suerte ^^ Gracias denuevo~!
De nada, pero no era para un Kodosu...

Ya fué *yaoming*
Topic Starter
Kei

MercurialSpectre wrote:

De nada, pero no era para un Kodosu...

Ya fué *yaoming*
SI FUE! ademas sabés que te gustó. (?) Aunque sea te lo merecés por haberte tomado la molestia de revisar mi map de 3:30 minutos de duración con una canción que nisiquiera te gusta .u.
jossieP
off-topic :)

Keilara wrote:

MercurialSpectre wrote:

Hola Kate :3

Ustedes sí que saben mapear... No como quienleshabla... En fín. No te menosprecies asi Dante ;u; Yo todavia estoy aprendiendo .-. Kyon si es pro c: yo?? pro?? xD~
Shiki
Hi~ :3 Let's go!

[Normal]
The volume from the beginning to the first break time should be lower. Try 70%?
00:46:670 (4) - Whistle at the beginning?
01:56:488 (4) - Shorten by 1/2 beat?
01:59:488 (1,2) - Missing whistles?
03:25:124 (3) - Finish?

[Hard]
I think you can add more hitsounds. Such as default soft-whistle
00:04:670 (7,8) - Don't overlap them, please.
00:08:488 (5,6) - ^
01:01:806 (10,11) - Spacing D:
02:16:943 (1) - Spacing ;_; And don't overlap it on 02:16:261 (8).
02:51:852 (10,1) - An unexpected jump?

[Insane]
OD-1 ?? There are many low bpm streams.
00:11:621 (2) - It is too close to (1)
00:35:757 (7) - It is too close to (6)
00:38:485 (1) - Remove new combo
00:41:212 (1) - ^
01:09:576 (1) - Remove new combo
01:09:848 (2) - New combo here. Maybe you can try to make another shape, this one's ugly.
01:55:394 (3) - Finish?
01:58:667 (1) - Remove new combo
I found many sliders look bad ;_; please make their shapes better.

Star (:
- Z e o n -
:)
GLF09
lo olvide xD
Star¬
Topic Starter
Kei

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ :3 Let's go!

[Normal]
The volume from the beginning to the first break time should be lower. Try 70%? Ok!
00:46:670 (4) - Whistle at the beginning? Added
01:56:488 (4) - Shorten by 1/2 beat? edited
01:59:488 (1,2) - Missing whistles? Oops! :c Added whistles
03:25:124 (3) - Finish? added

[Hard]
I think you can add more hitsounds. Such as default soft-whistle :c
00:04:670 (7,8) - Don't overlap them, please. fixed
00:08:488 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:01:806 (10,11) - Spacing D: fixed too
02:16:943 (1) - Spacing ;_; And don't overlap it on 02:16:261 (8). ^
02:51:852 (10,1) - An unexpected jump? Deleted jump

Star (: Thanks for the mod&star c:!

GLF09 wrote:

lo olvide xD
Star¬

Z e o n wrote:

:)
Gracias a los dos por las stars c:!
Raging Bull
Hi.

General:
If you're gonna use custom hitsound (the drum sound), use it on the 2nd and 4th white tick. It usually works well.
Keep kiai consistent. Normal and hard Kiai is little different (the last one)
Keep tick rate consistent. Change hard to tick rate 2.
Set preview point for all diff. Maybe at 01:11:488. Go to timinig > Set current position as preview point.
Normal:
01:20:215 (1) - I suggest you remove slider and add triple there instead. So players can "click" the note and kiai time happens. :3
02:34:397 (1) - I have no idea why you used normal hitsound all of a sudden. Just change it back to soft?
03:08:215 (5) - ^
03:15:852 (7) - NC

Hard:
00:16:806 (6,1) - Jump might be too hard. Reduce the distance.
00:46:670 (4,5) - I'm not a fan of this overlap. Maybe switch their positions around?
02:07:533 (4,1) - Reduce the distance between jump
02:34:397 (1) - Remove normal hitsound and use soft?


Insane:
00:19:394 (3) - Move this to the center?
00:22:394 (5) - Just straighten this slider? The reverse arrow looks weird thats why.
03:06:306 (2,3) - Don't like the overlap. Move 2 or 3.
03:14:215 (1) - I prefer kiai to start here instead.
03:14:215 (1,3) - And don't do this thing. First slider completely blocks 3's slider path. I suggest you move 3 somewhere else so it doesn't get blocked.
I think you should work on some sliders more. Not a big deal though.
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