1. Hard (4,81 stars, 413 notes)
2. i_k's Insane (4,98 stars, 558 notes)
3. Normal (2,89 stars, 248 notes)

Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 110.000
Offset: 34

gina91189 wrote:

Hello, from my queue ;D
Btw, I love Gero too <3 *u*

My Mod

[General]
Source: Vocaloid
Tags: Remove “vocaloid”, added “ikari_kyon” when you got his GD.Removed~
Remember to put all diffs for the same thing; you forgot to put them in [Normal] right now. oops I forgot that. Added tags
-BG should be 1024x768, which is 4:3 ratio.
Take a look of this one (I fixed it for you), if you did change BG, remember to do a full submission. http://puu.sh/3g8n Yay! Thanks
-You might need a Easy Yeah u-u but I suck at mapping easy

[Normal]
-CS-1 ? Since you don’t have Easy. changed
-I think there are too many finish hitsounds in kiai time, sounds a little annoying to me. But I like them! ;A;
00:46:397 – add a note? Uhm.. no .u. sry
01:52:124 (2) – move to 01:51:852, and add whistle Moved
01:52:670 (3) – move to 01:52:397, and add whistle ^
01:53:215 (4) – move to 01:52:943, and add whistle ^
^ These 3 are suggestions only; they sound better in this way imo.
01:56:215 – add a note with whistle Added
02:18:852 (4) – move to 02:18:579 Moved
03:06:034 (2) – add whistle ? Oops .u. Added
03:30:579 (1) – make this spinner end at 03:33:852, also end kiai at 03:33:852 Changed

[Hard]
-CS-1, OD+1 ? Changed
00:18:306 (5) – spacing Oh :c fixed
00:45:852 (3) – asymmetry. Have you read this yet? If not, here: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194 oh ;u; my bad. Fixed
01:09:306 (1) – this didn’t really follow the vocal, map here? Mapped
01:55:670 (6) – look better like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/111691 uhm changed
02:06:579 (8) – NC ? Added
02:14:079 (4) – asymmetry Fixed
02:15:033 (6) – ^ ^
02:28:943 (1) – same as 01:09:306 (1) ah Mapped
02:34:124 (10) – spacing Fixed
02:46:534 (9) – asymmetry Fixed
03:07:670 (8) – NC ? Added
03:25:124 (9) - ^ ^
03:30:579 (1) – same as [Normal]’s 03:30:579 (1) Changed

Have a star from me ;3 Waah >u< Thanks a lot for your help c:

rEdo wrote:

[Normal]
0:15:306 (2) - rorate this slider by 15° clockwise, looks a lot better like this. select it, then press ctrl+shift+r to do that. also, select 'Selection centre' option, so your slider won't move. Rotated!
{0:41:215 (2,3) - distance snap between notes: 0.85x. aaand... oh fixed
{0:43:670 (5,6,7) - distance snap between notes: 0.75x. you should keep the same distance between notes, to make your map flawless. fixed
0:45:306 (1,2,3) - oh, this one especially. ^
0:51:033 (2,3,4,5) - and agaaain. i'm not gonna post stuff like that from now on, you should search for them on your own now. :) Fixed everything :D
1:12:579 (1) - delete that new combo, i suppose? Deleted
2:17:761 (3,4) - too long distance between those. oh fixed too
3:30:852 (1) - should start 1/2 earlier. ^

[Hard]
0:18:579 (1,2,3) - kinda huge jump you've got there, maybe swap (1) with (2)? ctrl+r to do that, after you select both notes Changed
1:20:215 (1,2,3) - i don't think those huge jumps are really necessary, you can go with something like that (click!). don't add jumps like that just to increase the map's difficulty at one moment a bit. :) Understood! c:
1:54:988 (1) - delete that note, i guess. deleted
2:07:533 (4) - you totally should move this slider a bit closer to the previous one's end. moved
2:56:215 (1,2,3) - once again, you can come up with something better and easier. edited
3:13:670 (1,2,3) - yeah. ^
3:22:397 (1,2,3) - ^ ^


kinda nice map, i liked it. pretty nice rhythm, hitsounds are so-so, and the way you place notes pretty much fit the song. This brightened my day ;U;
besides, i'd like to ask you one thing: please read people's rules while you're posting in a modding queue. you're pretty lucky that i'm in a good mood today and actually decided to map your song, because you broke one rule - you shouldn't give people WIP maps. believe me, modders totally prefer modding completed mapsets than just single difficulties. please, remember that in the future. for now, good luck!

ikari_kyon wrote:

waaay :)
starred because of I love you~

Keilara wrote:

Selee wrote:

Timing:
BPM: 110.000
Offset: 34

Wow! That was fast! Thanks a lot >u<

MercurialSpectre wrote:

Hola Kate :3

Mi mod generoso (Pese a que no me gusta Vocaloid) está aquí. ;____; Lo siento.

En fín...

General: Puede ser que estés usando Custom Songs en las notas? Si es así, estan muy bien hechas... y si no es así, deberías pensar en colocar varios Claps y Whistles en todo el map. Si tiene customs! c: fijate el folder. Hay un custom que suplanta el default soft Whistle hitsound.


Ustedes sí que saben mapear... No como quienleshabla... En fín. No te menosprecies asi Dante ;u; Yo todavia estoy aprendiendo .-. Kyon si es pro c:

Revisé Normal y Hard, y no encuentro puntos en los que obligatoriamente tengas que modificar...

Después reviso la de Kyon bien bien, ahora tengo que trabajar (Ya sabés a qué me refiero) Gracias por revisar mi map aun siendo algo de lo que no te guste ;-; asdf .u.



Bueno, ya les dejé la Star. Suerte ^^ Gracias denuevo~!

Keilara wrote:

MercurialSpectre wrote:

Hola Kate :3

Mi mod generoso (Pese a que no me gusta Vocaloid) está aquí. ;____; Lo siento.

En fín...

General: Puede ser que estés usando Custom Songs en las notas? Si es así, estan muy bien hechas... y si no es así, deberías pensar en colocar varios Claps y Whistles en todo el map. Si tiene customs! c: fijate el folder. Hay un custom que suplanta el default soft Whistle hitsound.


Ustedes sí que saben mapear... No como quienleshabla... En fín. No te menosprecies asi Dante ;u; Yo todavia estoy aprendiendo .-. Kyon si es pro c:

Revisé Normal y Hard, y no encuentro puntos en los que obligatoriamente tengas que modificar...

Después reviso la de Kyon bien bien, ahora tengo que trabajar (Ya sabés a qué me refiero) Gracias por revisar mi map aun siendo algo de lo que no te guste ;-; asdf .u.



Bueno, ya les dejé la Star. Suerte ^^ Gracias denuevo~!

MercurialSpectre wrote:

De nada, pero no era para un Kodosu...

Ya fué *yaoming*

Keilara wrote:

MercurialSpectre wrote:

Hola Kate :3

Ustedes sí que saben mapear... No como quienleshabla... En fín. No te menosprecies asi Dante ;u; Yo todavia estoy aprendiendo .-. Kyon si es pro c: yo?? pro?? xD~

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ :3 Let's go!

[Normal]
The volume from the beginning to the first break time should be lower. Try 70%? Ok!
00:46:670 (4) - Whistle at the beginning? Added
01:56:488 (4) - Shorten by 1/2 beat? edited
01:59:488 (1,2) - Missing whistles? Oops! :c Added whistles
03:25:124 (3) - Finish? added

[Hard]
I think you can add more hitsounds. Such as default soft-whistle :c
00:04:670 (7,8) - Don't overlap them, please. fixed
00:08:488 (5,6) - ^ ^
01:01:806 (10,11) - Spacing D: fixed too
02:16:943 (1) - Spacing ;_; And don't overlap it on 02:16:261 (8). ^
02:51:852 (10,1) - An unexpected jump? Deleted jump

Star (: Thanks for the mod&star c:!

GLF09 wrote:

lo olvide xD
Star¬

Z e o n wrote:

:)

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

General:
If you're gonna use custom hitsound (the drum sound), use it on the 2nd and 4th white tick. It usually works well.
Keep kiai consistent. Normal and hard Kiai is little different (the last one) Changed. Now all the diffs have the same kiai time points
Keep tick rate consistent. Change hard to tick rate 2. Changed
Set preview point for all diff. Maybe at 01:11:488. Go to timinig > Set current position as preview point. Done~ º0º
Normal:
01:20:215 (1) - I suggest you remove slider and add triple there instead. So players can "click" the note and kiai time happens. :3 Removed slider and added notes instead
02:34:397 (1) - I have no idea why you used normal hitsound all of a sudden. Just change it back to soft? Ok
03:08:215 (5) - ^ ^
03:15:852 (7) - NC Added

Hard:
00:16:806 (6,1) - Jump might be too hard. Reduce the distance.Reduced
00:46:670 (4,5) - I'm not a fan of this overlap. Maybe switch their positions around? hmm no D: I like it as it is
02:07:533 (4,1) - Reduce the distance between jump Ok
02:34:397 (1) - Remove normal hitsound and use soft? Removed

Thanks For the mod&star

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ :3 Let's go!

[Insane]
OD-1 ?? There are many low bpm streams. +1
00:11:621 (2) - It is too close to (1) >.<
00:35:757 (7) - It is too close to (6) T^T
00:38:485 (1) - Remove new combo :o
00:41:212 (1) - ^ :o
01:09:576 (1) - Remove new combo :o
01:09:848 (2) - New combo here. Maybe you can try to make another shape, this one's ugly. ;w;
01:55:394 (3) - Finish? :x
01:58:667 (1) - Remove new combo :o
I found many sliders look bad ;_; please make their shapes better. I will

Star (: Thanks >w<

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.
Insane:
00:19:394 (3) - Move this to the center? center
00:22:394 (5) - Just straighten this slider? The reverse arrow looks weird thats why. >.<
03:06:306 (2,3) - Don't like the overlap. Move 2 or 3. moved
03:14:215 (1) - I prefer kiai to start here instead. kiaied? x3
03:14:215 (1,3) - And don't do this thing. First slider completely blocks 3's slider path. I suggest you move 3 somewhere else so it doesn't get blocked. ºAº
I think you should work on some sliders more. Not a big deal though. thanks for modd >w<

l1106188 wrote:

Hi
I'm sorry
Did not see the fifth rule Oh no problem n.n
and..
I did not experience.So,this is just a view you can skip

Hard:
02:15:579 (7) - Add a whistle at the end only?! Added! Thank you

and..
Good Song

Thanks for checking my map!~

winber1 wrote:

General

--the kiai time is a little different at 03:14:215 (1) - there might be other discrepencies but i didn't really pay much attention to the others lol ooh :c you're right. fixed now

Hard

01:50:760 (10) - move this note 1/4 tick forward and add new combo added
01:51:033 (1) - remove combo ok!
01:59:624 (1) - this note doesn't really make much sense to me and it looks like it's on a red tick when it's not. I would rather you start this slider at 01:59:488 and end in the same place, and then rearrange notes. done :3
03:26:624 (5) - delete note. it doesn't follow anything. deleted

Normal

02:26:215 (1,2) - these two notes really don't make any sense to me replaced with circles that follow the vocals
02:30:306 (2,3,4,5) - you can definitely follow the vocals better than what you are doing now lol. replaced too c:
03:08:215 (5,6,7) - you never used whistles in this song, so this is kinda random and abrupt deleted hitsound change
03:16:397 (3) - 1 grid left fixed c:

cool map :3

star~~ Thanks for your mod&star \:D/

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
The offset is seriously wrong, i think about +18 (52) is much more accurated. Ok. Changed offset to 52
You probably need 1s lead-in time. ok changed to 1s
The countdown is still enabled in [Normal], disable it plz. Also the preview time in [Normal] is different from the other 2 diffs. disabled countdown and fixed Normal preview time
The use of hitsounds is nice but... When you want to add whistle hitsounds on slider's beats, don't want to save time, just choose the slider and press W... this will change the sound of sliderslider, choose the beats and then add whistle plz. It's really noisy now... a easy solution to it is add a mute soft-sliderwhistle.wav file in your folder and full submit again. i'll add it later
Seems you're a fan of sliderarts, that's not a bad thing but make sure you could do your best with them, otherwise it will ends up with ugly effects.

[Normal]
00:18:579 (6) - change this to a 3/4 repeated slider? this could fit the beat on 00:18:988 & 00:19:397. ok
01:09:852 (6) - ^same thing, also you can add a beat at 01:10:943 ok
02:07:684 (6,7,1) - the flow is really strange here... maybe sth like this?
[attachment=1:4ccc5]97.png[/attachment:4ccc5] Nice~

[Hard]
00:06:034 (1,2) - ...well if you want to do sliderart, try to do the best.
[attachment=0:4ccc5]98.png[/attachment:4ccc5] edited >:0
01:04:261 (6,1) - i don't know the reason why you suddenly increase the spacing here, though you have a new combo. deleted the increase of spacing
01:09:715 (1) - how about add a note then start the spinner? ok
02:00:033 (2,3) - move 3 farther, it's ugly now... ok
02:56:761 (3) - the finish pace sounds really boring start from here. D:!!!
Thanks for your mod&star c:

winber1 wrote:

General
i_k's insane

00:04:943 (5) - try this rhythm?: what rhythm ?
00:09:443 (2) - unstack? nope >w<
00:34:398 (2) - move note 1/4 tick forward and rearrange spacing souns better, thanks
01:24:034 (5) - i wuold rather play five notes than have 1 repeat slider, but that's just me o.o
01:46:534 (x) - add note
01:46:806 (x) - ^
if you add those notes. then i would rearrange 01:46:397 (3,4,5,6) - so that it makes more sense rather than have a weird jump at 01:46:806 (6,1) - ok I didnt get you x3
01:53:488 (9) - new combo new :3
02:22:124 (2,3) - i would space this a little further apart. spaced =o

--nothing is really wrong with the diff, but you could follow vocals a little more. many times you just follow something else or just make up some sort of drum beat (that, although makes sense, i think could be made more interesting and fun to play) thanks x3

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[i_k's Insane]
00:35:779 (7,1) - do you think it's too hard..? I dont know
02:19:688 (7) - should end 1/4 earlier. ok

Don't want to focus on certain places to fix (because it's really...there are many of them), you may pay more attention to the flow, and also the structure (i mean try to put notes in a more good-looking way) thanks .w.

ikari_kyon wrote:

winber1 wrote:

General
i_k's insane

00:04:943 (5) - try this rhythm?: what rhythm ?
00:09:443 (2) - unstack? nope >w<
00:34:398 (2) - move note 1/4 tick forward and rearrange spacing souns better, thanks
01:24:034 (5) - i wuold rather play five notes than have 1 repeat slider, but that's just me o.o
01:46:534 (x) - add note
01:46:806 (x) - ^
if you add those notes. then i would rearrange 01:46:397 (3,4,5,6) - so that it makes more sense rather than have a weird jump at 01:46:806 (6,1) - ok I didnt get you x3
01:53:488 (9) - new combo new :3
02:22:124 (2,3) - i would space this a little further apart. spaced =o

--nothing is really wrong with the diff, but you could follow vocals a little more. many times you just follow something else or just make up some sort of drum beat (that, although makes sense, i think could be made more interesting and fun to play) thanks x3

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
[i_k's Insane]
00:35:779 (7,1) - do you think it's too hard..? I dont know
02:19:688 (7) - should end 1/4 earlier. ok

Don't want to focus on certain places to fix (because it's really...there are many of them), you may pay more attention to the flow, and also the structure (i mean try to put notes in a more good-looking way) thanks .w.

ikari_kyon wrote:

winber1 wrote:

General
i_k's insane
00:04:943 (5) - try this rhythm?: what rhythm ?

hitmefast wrote:

normal

clean the sliders omg :O ;_____;
tags:gackpoid ikari_kyon?? add name of song and artist maybe? check tags pls :X No. El nombre de la canción y Artista ya cuentan como Tags, no es necesario ponerlos denuevo como Tag. Esto también pasa con Source.
offset in: 00:02:230 Ok.

00:01:684 delete No D:
01:00:320^ ^
01:04:684 delete or add hitsound ^ (No delete, y hitsound ya tiene.)
01:58:139 move this slider here 01:58:411 Ok.
02:02:502 add hitsound ? ;__;

hard

offset + tags also Ok offset. No tags.

02:41:233 solve this slider pls Ok.
02:46:552 ^ ^
02:51:052 ^ ^
02:54:597 ^ ^
02:55:006 ^ ^

insane

offset + tags too... Yo le cambié el offset, pero no tags.

also nice strange sliders for normal and hard xd Me gusta hacer diseños con los sliders c:

star~ :3 Gracias por la star y por moddear :D/ Hubieses moddeado en español. Hablamos español Kyon y yo :3

hitmefast wrote:

insane

offset + tags too... tags?¿?¿?

03:12:052 (opinion)change finish sound to wistle/normal? normal sound set??? I dont like it
03:17:506 make it clean where is the garbage?
please clean the 'inherited points'

nice insane ^^ thanks? =o

no modifications, no new file...

Keilara wrote:

hitmefast wrote:

normal

clean the sliders omg :O ;_____;
tags:gackpoid ikari_kyon?? add name of song and artist maybe? check tags pls :X No. El nombre de la canción y Artista ya cuentan como Tags, no es necesario ponerlos denuevo como Tag. Esto también pasa con Source.
offset in: 00:02:230 Ok.

00:01:684 delete No D:
01:00:320^ ^
01:04:684 delete or add hitsound ^ (No delete, y hitsound ya tiene.)
01:58:139 move this slider here 01:58:411 Ok.
02:02:502 add hitsound ? ;__;

hard

offset + tags also Ok offset. No tags.

02:41:233 solve this slider pls Ok.
02:46:552 ^ ^
02:51:052 ^ ^
02:54:597 ^ ^
02:55:006 ^ ^

insane

offset + tags too... Yo le cambié el offset, pero no tags.

also nice strange sliders for normal and hard xd Me gusta hacer diseños con los sliders c:

star~ :3 Gracias por la star y por moddear / Hubieses moddeado en español. Hablamos español Kyon y yo :3

hitmefast wrote:

hehe es la mania XD
te agrego ;3 os agrego ;3

haver si algun dia hacemos una collab o una guest ^^

[Shalon] wrote:

Normal
fine :0!!

Hard
00:51:597 (4,5) - why don't you use the same slider with00:51:051 (3) ? Ok.
01:09:733 (8) - how about delete it? No D:
02:18:461 (4) - delete and replace it with 02:18:597 (5). (If you'll follow it, make the slider more longer) Ok!

03:15:052 (4) - stack it with 03:13:688 (1) Done

use more new combo. Ok. I added more new combos in this update. Thanks for your mod and star c:

hitmefast wrote:

haver si algun dia hacemos una collab o una guest ^^ collabs no x.x

[Shalon] wrote:

Insane
00:09:596 - add a note? feels weird x3 srry
fine. thanks

Roddie wrote:

i_k's Insane

1. 00:36:869 (1)-Add a finish on the end. nope
2. 00:48:323 (2, 3, 4, 5)-Fix the spacing on these by using the distance snap. It is spaced to x1,2 but I had rearranged it
3. 01:10:688 (1)-Add a finish? nope
4. 01:16:415 (1)-^ yeah
5. 01:17:324 (1)^? There is non object here
6. 01:28:415 (9)-Add a finish on the beginning? yeah
7. 01:42:597 (3)-^ yes
8. 01:44:777 (1)-Add a finish. hmm yeah
9. 01:46:959 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. nope
10. 01:55:687 (1)-^? ok
11. 02:04:414 (1)-^? nope
12. 02:21:869 (1)-Add a finish? nope
13. 02:36:596 (5)-Add a finish on the end. yup
14. 02:48:051 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning? ya
15. 02:52:414 (9)-^? aya
16. 02:54:596 (1)-^ ya
17. 02:55:414 (4)-Add a finish on the end? ok
18. 03:00:596 (8)-^ www
19. 03:05:505 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning? there is no object here
20. 03:07:687 (1)-Put a new combo here. why
21. 03:14:233 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning. nope
22. 03:18:596 (7)-Put a new combo here? yeah
23. 03:19:960 (4)-Remove new combo? w erqrwq
24. 03:20:778 (6)-Put a new combo here? better on 03:21:324

Here's a star. thanks ><

Roddie wrote:

General

1. i_k's Insane has a different preview point than Normal and Hard. Oh D: Now it has the same preview point as in Normal and Hard.
2. I don't think the lead-in time is necessary for Normal and Hard. :c
3. i_k's Insane has a different Offset than Hard and Normal. I recommend using Hard's and Normal's Offset. Don't forget to resnap all the notes and the timing points (Green Lines). Fixed

Normal

1. 01:58:415 (8)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Fixed
2. 02:04:415 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning? Added
3. 02:21:324 (1)-^ Added
4. 02:26:233 (1)-Add a finish. Added
5. 03:13:688- I think it's better to start off the kiai time on 03:14:233. This applies to the other difficulties? :?
6. 03:27:051 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. Fixed

Hard

1. 01:03:324 (2)-Add a finish.Added
2. 02:04:415 (1)-Add a finish on the beginning?^
3. 02:13:142 (2)-^? ^
4. 02:26:233 (2)-^ ^
5. 02:30:597 (2)-Add a finish. ^
6. 02:34:961 (2)-Add a finish on the beginning? ^
7. 02:39:324 (3)-^? ^
8. 02:4&:506 (1)-Add a finish on the end. Ok! >:0

And that's it. Good luck, Keilara~ :D

Here's a star. Thanks for everything Roddie \:D/

justnobody wrote:

first time to hear gackpoid's voice. Yeah :c There's no Gackpoid ranked map.
----------------------
i don't like the hitsounds in kiai. D:!!
the finish doesn't match the custom whistle good imo...

[normal]
01:57:870 (7,8) - spacing? ? D: Roddie told me the same, and I already fixed it.
good diff. *O* Thanks!

[hard]
02:15:051 (9) - whistle at start? ok
02:21:870 (2) - i thought there should a kiai here... but anyway. .-. if someone mentions that again I'll add kiai.

star for gackpoid. Thanks for your mod&star! c:
make it the first ranked gackpoid map! I'm aiming for that! I support Gackpoid :3

bipolarmen98 wrote:

buuen mapa ^^

:3

espero que lo aprueben pronto ^^

Snepif wrote:

nice~

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

star

• Hard: 71233
  i_k's Insane: 71370
  Normal: 71233

• Combo1 : 222,114,182
  Combo2 : 172,40,187
  Combo3 : 189,132,175
  Combo4 : 255,255,255

poisonchan wrote:

Heeya Modding your map as your request.
Hope it helps Yay \c:/

[!] = Need to be changed.
[?] = Suggestion.
[.] = If possible, change.

[General]
- Preview point must be the same in all diffs, you should fix it:

• Hard: 71233
  i_k's Insane: 71370 Fixed
  Normal: 71233

- You have the sliderfollowcircle.png add in your mapset, since it is a custom skin, I suggest you making the whole 'pack' (The other elements) or removing it. Otherwise it can look odd/weird. [Yes, having such element - alone - in the mapset is allowed, but is preferable if you complete the mapset with a few other elements at least.] Uhm.. I'm not sure. I think I'll make the other skin elements.

- What about these as the combo colours: (Don't forget: If you decide to change it, you must change in all the difficulties)

• Combo1 : 222,114,182
  Combo2 : 172,40,187
  Combo3 : 189,132,175
  Combo4 : 255,255,255

ºoº Nice. Changed. It's better now.

[Normal]
00:09:324 (4) - I saw that you tried to make it symmetrical, to be 'perfectly' done, should be like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122197 ? :c You're right. Fixed.
00:16:961 (3) - This overlap can be improved if you move the beat to the left, don't forget to modify (4)'s position aswell. *nazi* ?] Ok!
00:19:688 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:34:961 - Drag the end of the Break here.
00:46:688 (4) - New combo ? ^
01:10:961 (5) - ^ ^
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here. ^
01:44:779 - Drag the end of the Break here. ^
01:47:779 (2) - New combo. Added.
02:07:142 (4) - ^ Added.
02:24:597 (1) - This slider is too short, making it too harder for a normal. Oh :c Deleted and added a note insted.
03:28:961 (6) - Uh, don't add the red point in the slider, it is making an odd look. What about http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122204 instead? Ok.

[Hard]
00:02:233 (2) - I can't understand why there is 2 points in the slider: http://puu.sh/3PrL. Remove the one who is in the middle of the line. Removed.
00:03:870 (5) - New Combo ? Added.
00:04:415 (6) - Follow the distance spacing, it is looking like a force jump. Maybe something like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122207 [Don't forget to add the new combo on (5) ] Fixed.
00:08:506 (5) - New Combo ? Added
00:12:597 (6) - ^ ^
00:19:688 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
00:35:506 - Drag the end of the Break here.
00:37:688 (6) - New Combo. Added.
00:37:961 (1) - Move it closer to the previous note. Ok.
00:50:233 (2) - Move this beat a bit down and right, so it wont overlap the 00:49:688 (1), don't forget to apply the changes on (3) and (4) [In (4), move the low point in the slider 1 tick to the right, same with (5) but in this case, change the high point.), and move 6-7 to the side aswell. Done.
00:55:142 (2) - Same thing about the overlap on (1). [Don't forget to fix the rest of the combo] Fixed.
01:13:415 (7) - Move this beat a little to the right, so won't overlap the previous note. ^
01:14:915 (3) - Stack this note. Don't forget to fix the spacing of the next note. Stacked.
01:17:233 (3) - Same thing about overlap. Don't forget to change the following notes. Fixed too.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:45:324 - Drag the end of the Break here.
01:58:551 (5) - I suggest flipping it vertically. Ok!
02:05:779 (5) - New combo. Added.
02:06:597 (1) - Remove new combo. Removed.
02:37:142 (7) - New combo, also, try a different spacing like: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122234 ? Ok. Now is much better
02:49:415 (3) - New Combo Added.
02:51:870 (10) - Remove this beat. Removed.
02:52:142 (1) - Fix the Spacing Fixed.
02:52:415 (2) - New Combo Added
02:53:506 (7) - ^ ^
03:07:142 (6) - New Combo ^
03:07:688 (1) - Remove new combo Removed
03:16:142 (6) - New combo Added.
03:24:597 (7) - New combo ^
03:25:142 (1) - Remove new combo Removed.

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Hope it helps :3
If you need any help or a recheck, poke me in game, or send me a Forum PM. Thank You! c:! Your mod was very helpful to me. I'll ask you for re-check later, when Kyon finish to make changes to his difficulty.

poisonchan wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
00:23:097 (6) - New combo, and if possible, make it less 'overlapped' by the previous stream. [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122218 ?]
00:27:461 (6) - New combo.
00:31:824 (6) - New combo.
00:41:233 (5) - ^
00:45:461 (4) - ^
01:08:779 (1,2,3) - Blind pattern. If possible, unstack the notes from the previous pattern, and try following a 'free' spacing pattern? [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122220]
01:09:870 (5) - New combo. Try a spacing like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122223 maybe?
01:13:824 (6) - New combo.
01:17:642 (6) - ^
01:20:915 (6) - ^ + Make it less overlapped with the previous note.
01:24:052 (5) - New combo.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:37:142 - Drag the end of the Break here.
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Ok, I'm not going to complete the mod till the end of the diff, cause I guess you should check it yourself and try improving your map according to the tips I gave you. ^-^ If you need any help with that, poke me in game, and I will be happy to help. ^-^
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kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

ikari_kyon wrote:

poisonchan wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
00:23:097 (6) - New combo, and if possible, make it less 'overlapped' by the previous stream. [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122218 ?]
00:27:461 (6) - New combo.
00:31:824 (6) - New combo.
00:41:233 (5) - ^
00:45:461 (4) - ^
01:08:779 (1,2,3) - Blind pattern. If possible, unstack the notes from the previous pattern, and try following a 'free' spacing pattern? [ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122220]
01:09:870 (5) - New combo. Try a spacing like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/122223 maybe?
01:13:824 (6) - New combo.
01:17:642 (6) - ^
01:20:915 (6) - ^ + Make it less overlapped with the previous note.
01:24:052 (5) - New combo.
01:30:052 - Drag the beginning of the Break here.
01:37:142 - Drag the end of the Break here.
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Ok, I'm not going to complete the mod till the end of the diff, cause I guess you should check it yourself and try improving your map according to the tips I gave you. ^-^ If you need any help with that, poke me in game, and I will be happy to help. ^-^
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kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod Time.

[General]
I don't like the fin sound Yeah, it doesn't really fit to the song. I'll search for other later.
And also some sliders look very strange when you add these red dots

[Normal]
00:18:587 (4) - fin ok
01:18:052 (5,6,7) -

try this

Ok
01:26:779 (6) - this slider doesn't look so nice ;___;
01:54:597 (6) - add fin ok
01:55:415 (2) - del fin Ok?
02:07:415 (2,3) -

try this

Ok
02:11:506 (4,5) -

try this

ok
02:21:324 (1) - del fin No :c
02:40:415 (3) - spacing. SV change will affect spacing. it is difficult for new players to identify the spacing change ah fixed
02:59:506 (6) - add whistle added
03:07:688 (4) - ^ added
03:16:142 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
03:20:779 (4) - ^ ^
03:27:051 (1,2) - ^ ^

[Hard]
00:36:597 (1,2,3,4,5) - makes it smoother, I mean the note 2 Oh ok c:
00:37:961 (1) -

try this

^
00:51:597 (4) - 1 gird up moved
00:52:142 (5) - 2 grid up ^
00:55:142 (2) -

try this

^
The hit sound in 1st kiai time is very good. But problem is still the fin sound. That really destroy the hearing Yeah :c Like I said before, i'll search for another fin sound later.
01:55:142 (1,2,3,4,5) - smoother Ok
02:01:415 (4,5) - 2 grid down moved
02:22:415 (3) -

try this

Ok
02:44:779 (4) -

this way

Ok
02:58:142 (5) - one grid up, this slider is diff from 4&6 Replaced this slider with 4/6 slider
03:19:688 (4) - looks weird D:!! I'll keep this one :c

Star. Still have a lot to work on I'll do my best to improve more my map c:
Good Luck Thank you ^o^/!!

Megurine Luka wrote:

[i_k's insane]
It's best for you to share the same start point with the other 2 diff really? =O
00:13:688 (3) -

this way

that way
00:36:052 (1) - spacing respaced
00:07:006 (2) - put it in the same line with the slider why =o
00:40:142 (3) - put it at the end of last slider ah? it is at the end, I think
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - sudden noise.. don't use that sound effect. or you can control the volume from lower to higher, so does 01:54:870 (1,2,3) :(
01:27:052 (11) - 2 grid left lefty
02:09:324 - change into a short slider and a circle reversible

02:12:051 (2) - make the slider prettier Im ugly x3
02:13:688 (1) -

try this

oh no
02:26:779 (3) - change into a shorter reversible slider reversible and weird xD
02:30:870 - add note oh no
02:39:324~02:46:961 - try 0.75x x.x
02:41:506 (2) -

try this

cant see xD


Try to have more changes in mapping type. Some parts look similar It calls patterns :3

Star. Still have a lot to work on tired~ =w=
Good Luck yup thanks

ikari_kyon wrote:

Megurine Luka wrote:

[i_k's insane]
It's best for you to share the same start point with the other 2 diff really? =O
00:13:688 (3) -

this way

that way
00:36:052 (1) - spacing respaced
00:07:006 (2) - put it in the same line with the slider why =o
00:40:142 (3) - put it at the end of last slider ah? it is at the end, I think
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - sudden noise.. don't use that sound effect. or you can control the volume from lower to higher, so does 01:54:870 (1,2,3) :(
01:27:052 (11) - 2 grid left lefty
02:09:324 - change into a short slider and a circle reversible

02:12:051 (2) - make the slider prettier Im ugly x3
02:13:688 (1) -

try this

oh no
02:26:779 (3) - change into a shorter reversible slider reversible and weird xD
02:30:870 - add note oh no
02:39:324~02:46:961 - try 0.75x x.x
02:41:506 (2) -

try this

cant see xD


Try to have more changes in mapping type. Some parts look similar It calls patterns :3

Star. Still have a lot to work on tired~ =w=
Good Luck yup thanks

Megurine Luka wrote:

Come back to shoot a pink star to support Gakupo.



Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

Esupanitix wrote:

Oh hi.

Normal
Okay, you don't need so many angles in your sliders. They're not fun to be seen overused like this. Try to balance how much you use Bevelled, Curved, and straight sliders so that one sight doesn't get bland. Try not to use it much so that we don't generally see the same thing over and over again. Just use the Angle-curve sliders every so often, not every ten seconds. I like how it looks D:

That's all.

Hard
01:20:233 Combo
7 - What the hell? This just looks bad. I'm sorry, but that slider looks like a broken croissant. Ok

01:24:870 Combo
2,3 - Replace these with two hitcircles each. A line of four sliders in a row just disappoints me. I mean honestly. Ok

01:52:142 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles.Ok
3 - Replace this with two hitcircles. This is just stupid. We don't need FIVE FREAKING SLIDERS in a row. This isn't Love-Coloured Master Spark. Fixed. Just don't kill me o.ò

01:56:506 Combo
1 - Replace this with two hitcircles. It's okay to have a three-circle stream. Just don't start every combo with a slider (besides the previous combo but still) Ok

02:38:779 Combo
6,7 - Start a new combo with one of these. Even in a hard map, a streak of ten circles in one combo just looks bad. Ok

02:43:142 Combo
4,5 - Same as above. Basically, if the hitcircle rate gets above 8 without there having been a stream, it just doesn't look good at all. Ok

02:52:415 Combo
2,3,4,5 - Please, don't make stacks of two hitcircles one after the other. It just doesn't look right. I like it in this way .-.

02:53:779 Combo
1,2,3,4 - See above.

(Basically, see above for every combo that does this.)

I'm sorry, but when there are almost as many sliders as there are circles, in a HARD map, that's just bad. Please, replace some of those with hitcircles. I really don't want to see a second incarnation of a certain Marisa Kirisame theme's map.

i_k
Nothing I can really identify, since I have absolutely no skill with modding Insane maps, but I will say that the distance snap needs to be lowered a bit.


The map is nice, just too many damn sliders. I hope it gets ranked after a bit of work. Fixed most of things. Thanks for your mod c:

Vortex wrote:

Hey there Hi /

Normal
03:15:870 (1) Remove new combo Uhmm.. I don't know :c If I remove that combo then the combo goes to 10 and I think that is a high combo number x.x I'll remove it if someone mentions it again.

I know, only to remove a new combo for one diff isn't very good but I think this diff had enough improvement. Don't worry. It's ok c:

Hard
...Nothing to say at all o.O I'm a bit confused that I didn't found out something... Really? ? Woohoo! That makes me happy c:

Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least Don't worry n.n we all have a start :3 Good luck with your modding and thanks for checking my map~ ^u^

Vortex

Cirno wrote:

Hi

[Normal]
00:46:415 - try adding a note here? Added.
00:50:779 - ^, omitting notes on white lines isn't too friendly to new players Added.

[Hard]
00:39:052 (3) - imo rotating 180 would be better Ok
others fine for me

Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~ Thanks!! *-*

Vortex wrote:

Guest Diff you mean me right? =o
00:15:324 (1) I don't like this slider^^ fffffffffff
00:16:142 (1) Remove this circle, because it doesn't sound good for me sound worst without it for me
00:30:597 (2) This hidden circles confuses fk yeah
00:43:415 (3) Put this circle 1 field above, it looks besser and more "symmetrical" to 4 and 5 hmmmm iòmg
00:54:324 (1) Same like above asdfasdfasdfasdf
02:34:688 (3) How about changing the colour of this circle? why??
02:45:597 (1) Put this circle above the end of slider (2) where?
02:56:233 (6) New combo nope >w<
02:57:052 (1) Remove new combo ^

Yes I know, it's not much or that good, but it's my 3rd map i am modding now :3
Hope it helps at least =OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Vortex

Cirno wrote:

Hi hi :3~

[i_k's Insane]
00:08:370 (3) - this slider is not that good-looking imo, maybe make it straight, or simply replace with 2 circles? ohmygodmyslidersareveryveryuglyx.x
00:08:779 (1) - end this 1/4 earlier and move 00:09:461 (2) to 00:09:324 - ? god no x3
00:15:324 (1) - end 1/4 earlier and move 00:16:142 (2,3) - to 00:16:006 - , fits the song better imo fffffffffffffffffffuuuuuuuuu
00:18:597 (1,2,3) - maybe make an equilateral triangle here? Im not symetrical but anyway
00:44:642 - add note? yeah
00:52:142 (2) - maybe make this by copy/paste/rotating 00:51:324 (1) - . Looks better imo almost the same :/
01:09:870 (1,2,3) - make a jump like you did before? ._. 1,0x spacing
01:17:642 (1) - this spacing was readable, but unreasonable. I'd suggest DS here. poison-chan :/
02:24:051 (1,3) - fix the shapes of those sliders please = = those really are ugly... ohmygodmyslidershapesareuglyasiam

Decent mapset overall, good luck getting it ranked~ ;w;

pieguy1372 wrote:

i_k's Insane: pieguy :3~

00:08:370 (3) - replace with 2 notes? ok
00:18:188 (6) - ^ ^
00:21:461 (3) - ^ ^
00:44:779 (3) - too close to (2) already fixed
00:49:415 (1) - remove NC wwwwwww
00:50:233 (3) - add NC uuuuuuu
00:56:506 (1) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider cant remember when I put this O_o
00:57:870 (6) - ^
00:58:688 (2) - (nazi) make this vertical? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137651 vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
01:01:688 (5) - remove the whistle from the body of this slider? Note: I'm going to stop pointing these out here, if you agree please go through the map and remove any whistles in the future Im sorry T^T
01:30:052 - reinsert this break somebody's fault
02:13:142 (6,1) - Switch NCs? nope =o
02:27:870 (1) - Remove NC yup
02:53:097 (1,3) - Switch NCs? wwerwer
03:04:142 (5) - too far from (4) =OOO
03:14:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - any particular reason this group is spaced closer? If not, space it normally please~ .,.,.,.
03:19:961 (4) - too far from (3) closer
03:20:779 (6,1) - Switch NCs? xvzvzxv
03:25:142 (5) - Add NC, remove NC from 03:25:961 (1), add NC on 03:27:324 (6), then remove NC from 03:28:415 (1)? hope maked it right T^T

Nice map~ thanks for you :3

GLF09 wrote:

Tengo el presentimiento de que te diste muchas stars
xD Y en cuanto a tí... El nuevo sistema de stars requiere que moddees maps de otras personas para dar prioridad a tu map, con el propósito de aprender de los demás maps de la gente. Ya no se pueden dar stars porque sí como antes, ahora valen Kudosu.. y si querés que tu map no quede ignorado vas a tener que usar los Kudosus en tu propio map ya que ahora gran mayoría las usará para sus propios maps.. si te dan una star ahora, a esa persona si que le gusto el map, o le interesó la canción. Es obvio que iba a tener muchas estrellitas mias ._. What's the point?

Keilara wrote:

._. What's the point?

HellDawn wrote:

Normal
Beat Snap Divisor 1/2 Ok~
00:12:597- Spacing cuz far Fixed
01:30:052- why break drag here ? Good question xDU Fixed

Hard
00:12:597- Remove new combo Uh no :c sorry.
00:13:142- New combo ^

Thanks!

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja xDD

General:
Yo elgiria el mismo slider tick rate para todas las dificultades pero ustedes ven , mapean mejor que yo Haha al rato lo converso con Kyon aver si cambia su tick rate o no.

Normal:
00:43:688 (5): New Combo No.. pero en vez de ponerle New Combo a (5) se lo puse a (4).
03:27:870 (3):Creo que si eliminas esta nota suena mejor Uh.. no :c lo siento ;u;''

Hard:
00:19:688 (x): Agrega una nota aqui creo que suena bien Ok
02:04:415 (1): Saca el New Combo Hmm D: Lo dejaré como está y si alguien más lo menciona lo quito.
02:04:961 (2): New Combo ^

Solo estas recomendaciones tu ves si las tomas o las dejas jajaj suerte!!!!! Jaja~ Gracias por todo! ya que hasta me moddeaste sin que yo te haya pedido c:

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Bueno mi noob mod xD Te preguntaras que hago yo aca?? jajaja



unrequested mod \o/

i_k's Insane:
00:33:324 (6): Esta nota creo que no sigue el ritmo, yo la eliminaria pero tu eliges queda vacio x3
01:26:233 (7): New Combo el nuevo combo tendria solo 3 objects
01:57:597 (5): New Combo nope o/
02:04:412 (x): Agrega una nota con FINISH =o
02:20:506 (8): Quizas Finish?? suena bien sin el finish
02:53:501 (7): New Combo sadfasdfasdf
03:31:961 (spin): Finish?? creo que suena mejor que whistle asfdaerwer

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

i_K's Insane
Fine~

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

Easy
01:18:052 (5) - New combo ? Ok
01:22:415 (5) - ^ Ok!
02:09:870 (2) - Make this a mirror of (1) w/o reverse slider Yeah
02:52:142 (1) - Move it somewhere to prevent overlap with (3) ^
02:55:688 (6) - One grid down Done

Hard
00:40:145 (7) - Align this with (5 and 6) ? Done

i_K's Insane
Fine~ Yay!
_______________________________________________-
That's all~ Thanks!

qilliam wrote:

[i_k's Insane]
03:17:506 - useless timing section

[hard] : the circle/slider placement in this difficulty looks very beautiful Omg! Thanks a lot >//<
03:17:506 - useless timing section

poisonedblood wrote:

[Insane]

[00:01:688] - [00:01:961] Add a slider?
[00:03:733] Start the slider here? add a circle on [00:03:597]?
[00:11:506] Add a circle?
[00:42:461] Add something here. A circle, starting the slider here and adding a reverse arrow maybe? Maybe making 3 consecutive 1/4 note sliders?
[00:46:824] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:08:642] It would be better if the slider started here. Make it longer so it still ends where it is originally.
[01:12:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:13:688] ^
[01:15:870] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:46:552] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:46:824] ^
[01:48:597] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[01:55:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[01:55:552] ^
[01:58:552] Add a circle, or make it a 1/4 slider with [01:58:688] or move the circle at [01:58:688] here.
[02:09:733] Add something here. Maybe a circle, an extra reverse arrow, make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:14:097] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 slider?
[02:16:279] Add something here. Maybe add a circle?
[02:18:461] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:21:324] - [02:21:597] Maybe add a slider?
[02:22:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:27:188] Add something here. Maybe add a reverse arrow or add a circle?
[02:30:870] - [02:31:006] Add a slider or a circle on start and the end.
[02:31:279] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[02:31:552] ^
[02:35:370] Add something here. Maybe a circle?
[02:35:915] ^
[02:42:188] ^
[02:59:506] ^
[03:04:006] Add something here. A circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider?
[03:05:233] Add something here. A circle or add a reverse arrow on the last slider.
[03:13:961] Add either a circle or make a 1/2 note slider with [03:13:688].
[03:25:824] Add something here. Maybe a circle or make it part of a 1/4 note slider.