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Please send a vote on my queue so I can see how does my modding helps you. =w=)y
DISCLAIMER:
  1. The following things might be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.
General
  1. Please use some custom combo colors. Even though the default colors suites in the BG, it would be better if you'll just make it lighter or sth according to your preference
  2. I think Hyori in the tags is unnecessary
Easy
  1. Please recheck all your objects and turn on distance snap while mapping lower diffs, it's important to have constant spacing in lower diffs and seems like you manually placed the objects. Distance Snap will help you a lot on this matter because your object spacing varies from 1.10x to 1.20x (.8s and .15s are rounded off to that) which is inconsistent
  2. 00:00:306 (1,2) - Improve blanket
  3. 00:14:306 (2,3,4) - Don't make 00:14:706 - under emphasized because downbeats are kinda important to low diffs and this is pretty strong so suggesting this rhythm http://puu.sh/uHEBf/b88b5fce8a.jpg then adjust the other things accordingly, same thing happens on 00:15:906 (5) - and 00:19:106 (4) - which is downbeat is also ignored.
  4. 00:25:906 (5,1) - Switch the NCs here, be consistent on NCing on the downbeats
  5. 00:29:906 (2,3,4) - I would like to suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/uHF0U/f6a7f2966d.jpg to emphasize the strong vocals here.
  6. 00:43:506 (3,1) - Do a blanket sth like this http://puu.sh/uHF8F/46999de003.jpg
  7. 01:04:831 (2,3) - This kind of flow is too edgy for beginners, how about putting 01:04:831 (2) - at 266|129
  8. 01:05:206 (3,1) - Maybe avoid the overlap?
  9. You should watch out for your rhythm choices, as for now there's no consistency and strong beats are being ignored nor under emphasized. I get that you're emphasizing the vocals but there are ways not to ignore those downbeats while mapping the vocals.
Normal
  1. Please use AR 5 on this diff
  2. 00:07:706 (2,3) - These objects are nearly offscreen
  3. 00:09:306 (2,1) - the overlap doesn't look nice here, you could place 00:09:906 (1) - at 363|298
  4. 00:10:906 (2,3) - Seems 00:10:906 (2) - is kinda unnecessary here because there's no such dominant beat here so you could delete this and 00:11:106 (3) - downbeat is at the tail again makes me sad, how about this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/uHFZY/0a335d0623.jpg
  5. From 00:13:106 (1) - up to 00:38:306 (6) - Why did the rhythm density became light here? I'm expecting this to be more dense than the intro but seems that the intro is more dense than the verse, you could do some buffing up of the rhythms.
Saco's Hard
  1. 00:00:306 (1,2) - There's a dominant guitar at 00:00:906 - so why did you ignore that made it played in a reverse while you emphasize those other piano sounds (to be specific; 00:01:306 (3,4,5) - which really have not much difference with the piano) so I think this rhythm would work better http://puu.sh/uHGEo/d71f5bc8b0.jpg
  2. 00:03:906 (2) - Same thing here, a 1/1 slider and a circle would be better
  3. 00:25:506 (6,7) - A bit harsh for hard players I think, you could try having 1/4 slider repeated 3 times http://puu.sh/uHGYi/7d7d10be84.jpg
  4. 00:54:692 (2,1) - Could you make this pattern more clean?
Wolf's Insane
  1. 00:01:706 (4,1) - Woah, this spacing is too much for a calm instrumentals, same thing goes for 00:03:306 (4,1) -
  2. 00:25:706 (5) - Ctrl+< this for 00:25:906 (1) - to have more emphasis or impact on gameplay
  3. 01:29:206 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why the spacings are so wide? The outro is not that strong imo, you could make sth like a build-up spacing instead of all objects are spaced visually equal
I won't mod the last diff since the problem is like a general thing here. Imo, the map lacks of structure and inconsistent. It may play nice on the gameplay but somehow I can't see a dominant reasoning for the object placements. You could work more on emphasis than the aesthetics of your map. As for the lower diffs, make sure you map with DS turned on and choose your rhythms wisely. It's just my personal opinion so no need to take it as a serious matter.
Goodluck!
posted

Janpai wrote:


Please send a vote on my queue so I can see how does my modding helps you. =w=)y
DISCLAIMER:
  1. The following things might be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.
General
  1. Please use some custom combo colors. Even though the default colors suites in the BG, it would be better if you'll just make it lighter or sth according to your preference
  2. I think Hyori in the tags is unnecessary
Easy
  1. Please recheck all your objects and turn on distance snap while mapping lower diffs, it's important to have constant spacing in lower diffs and seems like you manually placed the objects. Distance Snap will help you a lot on this matter because your object spacing varies from 1.10x to 1.20x (.8s and .15s are rounded off to that) which is inconsistent
  2. 00:00:306 (1,2) - Improve blanket
  3. 00:14:306 (2,3,4) - Don't make 00:14:706 - under emphasized because downbeats are kinda important to low diffs and this is pretty strong so suggesting this rhythm http://puu.sh/uHEBf/b88b5fce8a.jpg then adjust the other things accordingly, same thing happens on 00:15:906 (5) - and 00:19:106 (4) - which is downbeat is also ignored.
  4. 00:25:906 (5,1) - Switch the NCs here, be consistent on NCing on the downbeats
  5. 00:29:906 (2,3,4) - I would like to suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/uHF0U/f6a7f2966d.jpg to emphasize the strong vocals here.
  6. 00:43:506 (3,1) - Do a blanket sth like this http://puu.sh/uHF8F/46999de003.jpg
  7. 01:04:831 (2,3) - This kind of flow is too edgy for beginners, how about putting 01:04:831 (2) - at 266|129
  8. 01:05:206 (3,1) - Maybe avoid the overlap?
  9. You should watch out for your rhythm choices, as for now there's no consistency and strong beats are being ignored nor under emphasized. I get that you're emphasizing the vocals but there are ways not to ignore those downbeats while mapping the vocals.
Normal
  1. Please use AR 5 on this diff
  2. 00:07:706 (2,3) - These objects are nearly offscreen
  3. 00:09:306 (2,1) - the overlap doesn't look nice here, you could place 00:09:906 (1) - at 363|298
  4. 00:10:906 (2,3) - Seems 00:10:906 (2) - is kinda unnecessary here because there's no such dominant beat here so you could delete this and 00:11:106 (3) - downbeat is at the tail again makes me sad, how about this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/uHFZY/0a335d0623.jpg
  5. From 00:13:106 (1) - up to 00:38:306 (6) - Why did the rhythm density became light here? I'm expecting this to be more dense than the intro but seems that the intro is more dense than the verse, you could do some buffing up of the rhythms.
Saco's Hard
  1. 00:00:306 (1,2) - There's a dominant guitar at 00:00:906 - so why did you ignore that made it played in a reverse while you emphasize those other piano sounds (to be specific; 00:01:306 (3,4,5) - which really have not much difference with the piano) so I think this rhythm would work better http://puu.sh/uHGEo/d71f5bc8b0.jpg
  2. 00:03:906 (2) - Same thing here, a 1/1 slider and a circle would be better
  3. 00:25:506 (6,7) - A bit harsh for hard players I think, you could try having 1/4 slider repeated 3 times http://puu.sh/uHGYi/7d7d10be84.jpg
  4. 00:54:692 (2,1) - Could you make this pattern more clean?
Wolf's Insane
  1. 00:01:706 (4,1) - Woah, this spacing is too much for a calm instrumentals, same thing goes for 00:03:306 (4,1) -
  2. 00:25:706 (5) - Ctrl+< this for 00:25:906 (1) - to have more emphasis or impact on gameplay
  3. 01:29:206 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why the spacings are so wide? The outro is not that strong imo, you could make sth like a build-up spacing instead of all objects are spaced visually equal
I won't mod the last diff since the problem is like a general thing here. Imo, the map lacks of structure and inconsistent. It may play nice on the gameplay but somehow I can't see a dominant reasoning for the object placements. You could work more on emphasis than the aesthetics of your map. As for the lower diffs, make sure you map with DS turned on and choose your rhythms wisely. It's just my personal opinion so no need to take it as a serious matter.
Goodluck!
Thank you so much for the mod!

About "Gungi" diff, i try to make this more consistent, change notes and resnap some parts...
posted
Q

[gungi]
00:12:706 (3) - ctrl G for better flow
00:17:506 (5,1) - avoid stack, could be better for emphasize
00:29:706 (4,5) - weird overlap, avoid it.
00:37:106 (1) - weird flow, too
00:54:152 - 00:54:563 - add beats.
01:08:393 (1,2) - ctrl G for flow

GL
posted
hi! mod from my queue

Wolf's Insane

00:25:506 (3,4,5) - thhis goes off better with a 4 beats stream
01:22:831 (7) - turn this into stream, idk but its kinda weird from kicksliders-->shortstream-->kickslider

Gungi

00:13:006 - should start a triple here to emphasize 00:13:106 (1)
00:43:306 - put a circle ?
00:49:706 - ^

thats it, really. im really sorry for the extremely short mod but i didnt want to make you wait for too long.

i guess i will give this mapset a star since i made you wait almost for 2 weeks and for a short mod..
posted

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[gungi]
00:12:706 (3) - ctrl G for better flow
00:17:506 (5,1) - avoid stack, could be better for emphasize
00:29:706 (4,5) - weird overlap, avoid it.
00:37:106 (1) - weird flow, too
00:54:152 - 00:54:563 - add beats.
01:08:393 (1,2) - ctrl G for flow

GL

Saika0k1 wrote:

hi! mod from my queue

Wolf's Insane

00:25:506 (3,4,5) - thhis goes off better with a 4 beats stream
01:22:831 (7) - turn this into stream, idk but its kinda weird from kicksliders-->shortstream-->kickslider

Gungi

00:13:006 - should start a triple here to emphasize 00:13:106 (1)
00:43:306 - put a circle ?
00:49:706 - ^

thats it, really. im really sorry for the extremely short mod but i didnt want to make you wait for too long.

i guess i will give this mapset a star since i made you wait almost for 2 weeks and for a short mod..
Thanks :D
posted
Reply the mods. Just saying "Thank you" is not helpful.
Check what you fixed and why you didn't fixed.
posted

Neoskylove wrote:

Reply the mods. Just saying "Thank you" is not helpful.
Check what you fixed and why you didn't fixed.
I do not put that because i fix all you say lmao
posted
NM from my queue

00:01:306 (3) - place it more to the right beacaus thats where the slider is pointing to

00:16:706 (3,1) - I wouldn't make these cross

01:05:393 (2,3,4) - This doesn't look nice in a hard diff

01:06:331 (6,1) - Overlap

Pretty good diff overall
00:14:706 (1) - make the sliderend point to 00:15:306 (2) maybe (this is very minor)

00:16:906 (2,3,4) - Just make a straight triple

00:22:506 (3,4,1) - ^

00:25:906 (1) - I would place 1 immediately after the stream and not force a jump

00:32:306 (1) - I would make this part more like http://i.imgur.com/jGIrtuc.png, so the red tick is clickable

00:34:506 (2,3,4,5,1) - I don't like the spacing between these

00:36:706 (4,1) - Fully stack to signify 1/1 gap

00:43:506 (1,2) - I would make this part like this http://i.imgur.com/uMtX1hK.png

01:28:268 (6,1) - This jump is pretty difficult, not only in spacing but also in angle switch
00:03:306 (4,2) - Overlap

00:14:106 (4,5,6,1) - I would make sure the spacing between 61 is atleast as big as 45

00:17:106 (3,4,5) - I don't like this stack, space them out/pattern them somehow

00:29:506 (3,4) - I would only stack notes like this for a 1/1 gap, not a 1/2

00:35:106 (5,1) - Overlap

00:43:506 (3) - If you are following the vocals here, I would suggest stopping the slider on the red tick and placing a circle on the white after that

00:56:581 (2,4) - Overlap


Gl with the map (chose this from my queue first beacause the song is just too good)
posted

gottagof4ast wrote:

[Wolf's Insane] 00:14:706 (1) - make the sliderend point to 00:15:306 (2) maybe (this is very minor)
wolf's ignore this because sounds weird...


gottagof4ast wrote:

Gl with the map (chose this from my queue first beacause the song is just too good)
Thank you so much for this mod :3!
Yeah, this song is really cool~
posted
Hello, from queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:49:906 (1) - Spinner came in too fast?
  2. 01:02:956 (4,2) - Stack properly.
  3. 01:04:831 (2,4) - ^
  4. 01:17:956 (4,1) - Blanket?
  5. 01:27:706 (1) - Spinner came too fast again.


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:306 (2,3) - Align these with sliderend of 00:00:306 (1) -
  2. 00:49:906 (1) - Spinner came too fast?
  3. 01:27:706 (1) - ^
  4. 01:25:456 (3,1) - Improve blanket.


[Saco's Hard]
  1. 00:04:706 (5,1) - Improve blanket.
  2. 00:07:906 (5,1) - ^
  3. 00:15:906 (5,6,1,2) - Can flow more better.
  4. 00:49:906 (1) - Still too fast spinner (It came in too fast)
  5. 01:27:518 (1) - ^
  6. 00:58:831 (5,1) - Can flow more better.
  7. 01:02:393 (2,3) - Blanket.
  8. 01:03:893 (2,3) - Can flow more better.


[Wolf's Insane]
  1. 00:16:906 (2,3,4) - Why not stack them like 00:13:706 (2,3,4) - To form a pattern?
  2. 00:25:806 (6,1) - Spacing inconsistency
  3. 00:27:306 (4) - Stack properly on 00:28:306 (4) -
  4. 00:29:106 (1,2,3) - Can flow more better.
  5. 00:30:306 (1,1) - Stack properly
  6. 00:46:906 (4,5,6,7) - Can flow more better.
  7. 00:57:518 (3,4,1) - ^
  8. 01:00:143 (4) - You can move this to the right because the angle from 00:59:956 (3) - is too sharp
  9. 01:18:706 (8) - Mind increasing the volume? Can't hear this circle.


[Gungi]
  1. 00:06:706 (1,2) - Blanket.
  2. 00:32:106 (8,9,1) - Stack or make it flow better.
  3. 00:45:706 - Why did you ignore this beat, Unlike here 00:41:906 (1) - you made it a reverse slider. Why not make it also a reverse slider?
  4. 00:51:506 (1) - Slider can be more beautiful.
  5. 01:07:831 (3,2) - Stack?


Goodluck!
posted
At 01:29:206, the bpm actually increases to 162 here, because listening to it, your notes are a bit slow, so go ahead and fix that easy miss

Easy
00:19:106 (4) - replace with a circle and a slider on the finish
00:22:306 (5,1) - Overlap
01:10:831 (2,3) - Make these the same shape, just flipped for neatening purposes.
01:12:331 (4) - make this round off the slider end
01:17:206 (3,4) - overlap

Normal
Big issue here is flow. A normal is supposed to have even flow and stuff, but this diff doesnt have that nice of a flow to it.
00:33:906 (4,5) - Make this flow nicer
00:37:906 (5,6) - switch these two around
00:38:706 - Probably would be better to slow this part down, since its softer and doesnt need the same SV
01:00:706 (1,2) - Nicen these sliders up, make them look better
01:08:206 (1) - NC not needed here

Saco's HardBig issue in this diff. Spacing. You have some jumps larger than others and even in the beginning.
Its okay to have different spacings, but only at parts that need it. The song stays the same here so it should be similar spacings.
00:17:506 (5,1) - Dont have such a curved slider as it ruines the flow a little
00:25:506 (6,1) - In a hard diff its kinda hard to read this, so it may be better to either replace the 1 with the slider, or something else.
00:32:106 (5) - Instead of a slider here how about a triple, cuz while looking at it, it just felt weird to hear the finish on the tail
00:37:506 (1,2,3) - try to make these in more of a line, not a straight line, just not as big of angles.
00:45:106 (1,2) - Overlap
01:13:456 (4,5) - Dont have the extended slider here as it doesnt fit the song.
01:19:081 (1,1) - In all honesty remove the spinners here and replace them with notes, they arent needed, especially in a hard

Wolf's Insane
00:25:506 (3,4,5,6,1) - My opinion is to put the stream closer to the slider, since it has a large spacing in between 6 and 1
00:59:393 (1,2,3,4) - Make this entire section here flow better, the downward sliders with upward jumps is just weird
01:01:456 (3,4) - You may have a reason to stack this, but to me you shouldnt. idk

Gungi
00:25:306 (5) - All honesty, no need to have this 1/4th slider here, since no sound on the blue tick

Not much to say about this one honestly.
Just work in the easier diffs.
Also im not a pro mapper so i may not see as much as someone more experienced would.
posted

-Aqua wrote:

Hello, from queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:49:906 (1) - Spinner came in too fast?
  2. 01:02:956 (4,2) - Stack properly.
  3. 01:04:831 (2,4) - ^
  4. 01:17:956 (4,1) - Blanket?
  5. 01:27:706 (1) - Spinner came too fast again.


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:306 (2,3) - Align these with sliderend of 00:00:306 (1) -
  2. 00:49:906 (1) - Spinner came too fast?
  3. 01:27:706 (1) - ^
  4. 01:25:456 (3,1) - Improve blanket.


[Saco's Hard]
  1. 00:04:706 (5,1) - Improve blanket.
  2. 00:07:906 (5,1) - ^
  3. 00:15:906 (5,6,1,2) - Can flow more better.
  4. 00:49:906 (1) - Still too fast spinner (It came in too fast)
  5. 01:27:518 (1) - ^
  6. 00:58:831 (5,1) - Can flow more better.
  7. 01:02:393 (2,3) - Blanket.
  8. 01:03:893 (2,3) - Can flow more better.


[Wolf's Insane]
  1. 00:16:906 (2,3,4) - Why not stack them like 00:13:706 (2,3,4) - To form a pattern?
  2. 00:25:806 (6,1) - Spacing inconsistency
  3. 00:27:306 (4) - Stack properly on 00:28:306 (4) -
  4. 00:29:106 (1,2,3) - Can flow more better.
  5. 00:30:306 (1,1) - Stack properly
  6. 00:46:906 (4,5,6,7) - Can flow more better.
  7. 00:57:518 (3,4,1) - ^
  8. 01:00:143 (4) - You can move this to the right because the angle from 00:59:956 (3) - is too sharp
  9. 01:18:706 (8) - Mind increasing the volume? Can't hear this circle.


[Gungi]
  1. 00:06:706 (1,2) - Blanket.
  2. 00:32:106 (8,9,1) - Stack or make it flow better.
  3. 00:45:706 - Why did you ignore this beat, Unlike here 00:41:906 (1) - you made it a reverse slider. Why not make it also a reverse slider?
  4. 00:51:506 (1) - Slider can be more beautiful.
  5. 01:07:831 (3,2) - Stack?


Goodluck!
I ignore all "spinner fast" because when i move them sounds weird... i think move spinners after is not really necessary.

Thank you so much for the mod :3
posted

Bacwux wrote:

At 01:29:206, the bpm actually increases to 162 here, because listening to it, your notes are a bit slow, so go ahead and fix that easy miss

Easy
00:19:106 (4) - replace with a circle and a slider on the finish
00:22:306 (5,1) - Overlap
01:10:831 (2,3) - Make these the same shape, just flipped for neatening purposes.
01:12:331 (4) - make this round off the slider end
01:17:206 (3,4) - overlap

Normal
Big issue here is flow. A normal is supposed to have even flow and stuff, but this diff doesnt have that nice of a flow to it.
00:33:906 (4,5) - Make this flow nicer
00:37:906 (5,6) - switch these two around
00:38:706 - Probably would be better to slow this part down, since its softer and doesnt need the same SV
01:00:706 (1,2) - Nicen these sliders up, make them look better
01:08:206 (1) - NC not needed here

Saco's HardBig issue in this diff. Spacing. You have some jumps larger than others and even in the beginning.
Its okay to have different spacings, but only at parts that need it. The song stays the same here so it should be similar spacings.
00:17:506 (5,1) - Dont have such a curved slider as it ruines the flow a little
00:25:506 (6,1) - In a hard diff its kinda hard to read this, so it may be better to either replace the 1 with the slider, or something else.
00:32:106 (5) - Instead of a slider here how about a triple, cuz while looking at it, it just felt weird to hear the finish on the tail
00:37:506 (1,2,3) - try to make these in more of a line, not a straight line, just not as big of angles.
00:45:106 (1,2) - Overlap
01:13:456 (4,5) - Dont have the extended slider here as it doesnt fit the song.
01:19:081 (1,1) - In all honesty remove the spinners here and replace them with notes, they arent needed, especially in a hard

Wolf's Insane
00:25:506 (3,4,5,6,1) - My opinion is to put the stream closer to the slider, since it has a large spacing in between 6 and 1
00:59:393 (1,2,3,4) - Make this entire section here flow better, the downward sliders with upward jumps is just weird
01:01:456 (3,4) - You may have a reason to stack this, but to me you shouldnt. idk

Gungi
00:25:306 (5) - All honesty, no need to have this 1/4th slider here, since no sound on the blue tick

Not much to say about this one honestly.
Just work in the easier diffs.
Also im not a pro mapper so i may not see as much as someone more experienced would.
I ignore overlaps in Easy diff because not looks good.
I'll try to fix what u say about Normal and Hard. By the moment i change this part 00:38:706 from x0.8 vel slid to x1.0 for avoid spacing problems with DS.

Thank so much for the mod and the correct BPM in the final part! :D
Now sounds better :)
posted
From my NM queue, hard felt kinda weird, or I just suck at modding hards

so this diff is the one that had the most problems, it's mostly just being indecisive with what rhythm you're prioritizing, there were a lot more cases that I didn't mention and I just mentioned some of the important things

00:00:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole section kinda inconsistently blends the guitar sounds and the chime(?) sounds use your full beat sliders on something like every chord change
00:22:506 (1) - a triple + 1/2 slider would work well here
00:13:106 (1,2,3,4,5) - kinda ambiguous as to whether you're trying to prioritize the drums or the vocals here
00:16:706 (3) - make this 1/2 beat shorter and a note at the end
00:20:906 (1,2,3,4) - just replace this with 4 1/2 sliders
00:43:506 (1,2,3) - you jump from mapping the vocals to the guitar even though the vocals get stronger, map the vocals instead
00:46:706 (1,2,3,4) - move the slider 1/2 beat forward and add another note because right now the slider tail lands on the strongest sound
00:55:643 (2,3,4) - again, the mapping to the guitar sound kinda throws the player off
01:12:518 (5,1) - feels kinda weird to play, maybe just replace with a longer slider
01:19:081 (1,1) - IMO these should be sliders because there are some sounds you should emphasize more. spinners don't really emphasize any sounds, while slider heads do
00:09:906 (1) - previously every time the guitar changed chords you had a different slider shape, like here 00:08:306 (1) and here 00:06:706 (1) anyways, you should do that for here
  1. 00:11:506 (1) - ^

00:24:306 (1) - this should be a 1/2 slider with a circle on the following white tick just to prioritize the vocals better
00:44:106 (2) - make this a full beat slider
01:29:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the guitar sounds continually get louder, I think it would work well to smoothly increase the distance between objects
00:20:306 (4) - honestly, what's even the point of the middle white anchor anymore?
  1. 00:21:106 (1,2,3) - ^
  2. 00:18:506 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:23:706 (4) - ^
  4. 00:26:306 (2) - ^
  5. 00:32:706 (3) - ^
  6. 00:33:906 (1) - ^
  7. I'm going to just stop listing them at this point, you get my idea

01:26:206 (1) - you should use a smooth slider here IMO, the red anchors don't really match that sound
01:29:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same thing as the insane diff, smoothly increase the spacing
posted

cooldude4232 wrote:

From my NM queue, hard felt kinda weird, or I just suck at modding hards

so this diff is the one that had the most problems, it's mostly just being indecisive with what rhythm you're prioritizing, there were a lot more cases that I didn't mention and I just mentioned some of the important things

00:00:306 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole section kinda inconsistently blends the guitar sounds and the chime(?) sounds use your full beat sliders on something like every chord change
00:22:506 (1) - a triple + 1/2 slider would work well here
00:13:106 (1,2,3,4,5) - kinda ambiguous as to whether you're trying to prioritize the drums or the vocals here
00:16:706 (3) - make this 1/2 beat shorter and a note at the end
00:20:906 (1,2,3,4) - just replace this with 4 1/2 sliders
00:43:506 (1,2,3) - you jump from mapping the vocals to the guitar even though the vocals get stronger, map the vocals instead
00:46:706 (1,2,3,4) - move the slider 1/2 beat forward and add another note because right now the slider tail lands on the strongest sound
00:55:643 (2,3,4) - again, the mapping to the guitar sound kinda throws the player off
01:12:518 (5,1) - feels kinda weird to play, maybe just replace with a longer slider
01:19:081 (1,1) - IMO these should be sliders because there are some sounds you should emphasize more. spinners don't really emphasize any sounds, while slider heads do
00:09:906 (1) - previously every time the guitar changed chords you had a different slider shape, like here 00:08:306 (1) and here 00:06:706 (1) anyways, you should do that for here
  1. 00:11:506 (1) - ^

00:24:306 (1) - this should be a 1/2 slider with a circle on the following white tick just to prioritize the vocals better
00:44:106 (2) - make this a full beat slider
01:29:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - the guitar sounds continually get louder, I think it would work well to smoothly increase the distance between objects
00:20:306 (4) - honestly, what's even the point of the middle white anchor anymore?
  1. 00:21:106 (1,2,3) - ^
  2. 00:18:506 (3,4) - ^
  3. 00:23:706 (4) - ^
  4. 00:26:306 (2) - ^
  5. 00:32:706 (3) - ^
  6. 00:33:906 (1) - ^
  7. I'm going to just stop listing them at this point, you get my idea

01:26:206 (1) - you should use a smooth slider here IMO, the red anchors don't really match that sound
01:29:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same thing as the insane diff, smoothly increase the spacing
Thank you so much for the mod~


cooldude4232 wrote:

00:44:106 (2) - make this a full beat slider
Wolf's ignore this in his diff because sounds bad. All in the Hard & Gungi are fixed :D


PD: Nice Satania's profile pic.
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Hello! From queue. Most of my words are just suggestions, feel free for denying them.

Gungi:
  1. 00:34:506 (3) - ctrl+j on the same place maybe?
  2. 00:40:306 (1,2) - are you sure?
  3. 00:48:306 (1,1,1) - overlaps striking to the eye
  4. 00:51:506 (1) - make the end of this not that close to its body
  5. 01:15:331 (4) - mirror vertically
  6. 01:29:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - do these strums deserve that much space? 01:30:131 (2,3,4) - increasing space here and making it less before would be better (because intensity rises)

    Pay attension to the blankets

    I would map those hi-hat sounds like 00:15:306 but I think it's your decision


Wolf's Insane
  1. 00:03:306 (4,1) - too close
  2. 00:28:706 (5) - mirror vertically
  3. 00:33:506 (7) - maybe make it curved?
  4. 01:00:518 (5,1) - this kind of flow is shown nowhere else in the map, is this place somewhat special?
  5. 01:30:317 (3) - 2 circles instead please because sound is strong here and it should be shown

    All sliders should be perfect (00:11:506 (1) - red dot exactly in the middle, 00:22:706 (1) - absolutely symmetrical, etc)

    Blankets.

    Consider using distance snap to make map more polished


I hope that some of my words would be useful for you. Good luck with your mapset!
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h4d0uk3n1 wrote:

Hello! From queue. Most of my words are just suggestions, feel free for denying them.

Gungi:
  1. 00:34:506 (3) - ctrl+j on the same place maybe?
  2. 00:40:306 (1,2) - are you sure?
  3. 00:48:306 (1,1,1) - overlaps striking to the eye
  4. 00:51:506 (1) - make the end of this not that close to its body
  5. 01:15:331 (4) - mirror vertically
  6. 01:29:206 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - do these strums deserve that much space? 01:30:131 (2,3,4) - increasing space here and making it less before would be better (because intensity rises)

    Pay attension to the blankets

    I would map those hi-hat sounds like 00:15:306 but I think it's your decision


Wolf's Insane
  1. 00:03:306 (4,1) - too close
  2. 00:28:706 (5) - mirror vertically
  3. 00:33:506 (7) - maybe make it curved?
  4. 01:00:518 (5,1) - this kind of flow is shown nowhere else in the map, is this place somewhat special?
  5. 01:30:317 (3) - 2 circles instead please because sound is strong here and it should be shown

    All sliders should be perfect (00:11:506 (1) - red dot exactly in the middle, 00:22:706 (1) - absolutely symmetrical, etc)

    Blankets.

    Consider using distance snap to make map more polished


I hope that some of my words would be useful for you. Good luck with your mapset!
I take some suggestions to make Gungi diff better and others for the future, same for wolf.

Thank so much for the mod and good luck with your new queue! ;)
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  • From Queue~
  • 00:00:306 (1,2) - I think these would look better if they were blanketed
    00:13:906 (3,4,5,6,1) - These jumps should maybe better represent the song, stronger on white tick and quieter on red. It's definitely not the the same noise at least
    00:07:306 (2) - Fix blanket
    00:08:906 (2) - Same, both are slightly off
    00:12:106 (2) - Same^
    00:12:706 (3,4) - I think this is way too high a change in spacing for such a soft sound
    00:29:706 (4,5,2,3,4) - I think maybe something like this:

    It would improve aesthetics
    00:43:506 (3) - Decrease the bump in this slider, it's kinda ugly
    00:49:906 (1,1) - These sliders are really cool!
    01:14:206 (1) - Ctrl+G this slider? The last jumps were all up and down so this would fit.
    01:29:391 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These jumps seem far too bit when the noise is quite small. Maybe have them increasing more?

  • 00:00:906 (2,3,4,1) - Make the tail of 2 and 3 symmetrical to 4 and the head of 1.
    00:02:506 (2,3) - Fix blanket
    00:08:906 (2,3) - Blanket to improve aesthetics
    00:19:306 (6,1) - A bit big for the first, if only, 1/4 jump
    00:24:906 (3) - Make this slider less bumped, it looks odd as is.
    00:41:906 (1) - Make symmetrical
    00:49:906 (1) - Maybe make the curve more circular to make it pretty?
    01:24:518 (4,1) - Move the circle back and blanket it with the slider
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HM02CauseImFly wrote:

  • From Queue~
  • 00:00:306 (1,2) - I think these would look better if they were blanketed
    00:13:906 (3,4,5,6,1) - These jumps should maybe better represent the song, stronger on white tick and quieter on red. It's definitely not the the same noise at least
    00:07:306 (2) - Fix blanket
    00:08:906 (2) - Same, both are slightly off
    00:12:106 (2) - Same^
    00:12:706 (3,4) - I think this is way too high a change in spacing for such a soft sound
    00:29:706 (4,5,2,3,4) - I think maybe something like this:

    It would improve aesthetics
    00:43:506 (3) - Decrease the bump in this slider, it's kinda ugly
    00:49:906 (1,1) - These sliders are really cool!
    01:14:206 (1) - Ctrl+G this slider? The last jumps were all up and down so this would fit.
    01:29:391 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - These jumps seem far too bit when the noise is quite small. Maybe have them increasing more?

  • 00:00:906 (2,3,4,1) - Make the tail of 2 and 3 symmetrical to 4 and the head of 1.
    00:02:506 (2,3) - Fix blanket
    00:08:906 (2,3) - Blanket to improve aesthetics
    00:19:306 (6,1) - A bit big for the first, if only, 1/4 jump
    00:24:906 (3) - Make this slider less bumped, it looks odd as is.
    00:41:906 (1) - Make symmetrical
    00:49:906 (1) - Maybe make the curve more circular to make it pretty?
    01:24:518 (4,1) - Move the circle back and blanket it with the slider
All fixed, thank you so much!~

"00:49:906 (1,1) - These sliders are really cool!" Many thanks ;3
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Hi.
Normal:
00:17:706 - lost note;
00:18:506 - ^
00:19:706 - move slider [00:19:906 (1)] here.
00:21:706 - ^
00:26:106 - ^
00:34:506 - ^
00:35:306 - ^
00:39:306 - ^
00:42:506 - lost note.
00:45:706 - move slider
01:00:706 - note here, start slider 01:01:081

In this map voice is more louder than drums, so on low diff better to map around it.
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