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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 28 de diciembre de 2017 at 17:13:51

Artist: YUZU
Title: Hyouri Ittai
Source: HUNTER×HUNTER
Tags: wolf3211 ハンター×ハンター HxH HUNTERxHUNTER 2011 Chimera Ant Ending 5 TV Size Two Sides of the Same Coin Madhouse
BPM: 150
Filesize: 17430kb
Play Time: 01:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,43 stars, 90 notes)
  2. Gungi (4,4 stars, 308 notes)
  3. Hard (3 stars, 236 notes)
  4. Normal (1,95 stars, 151 notes)
  5. Wolf's Insane (3,91 stars, 289 notes)


Download: YUZU - Hyouri Ittai
Download: YUZU - Hyouri Ittai (no video)
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YUZU - Hyouri Ittai
Please ReDL if you had the mapset before December/24/2017 cause video changed!

Easy: Me
Normal: Me
Hard: Me
Insane: wolf3211
Gungi: Me
Background Source

Hitsounds by wolf3211, thank you!
mp3 taken from ArcherLove's mapset

Metadata Check by IamKwaN

IamKwaN wrote:

i have checked their map before and i checked again this song, seems you can follow what they have there, i.e.

Unicode Title: 表裏一体
Romanised Title: Hyouri Ittai
Unicode Artist: ゆず
Romanised Artist: YUZU
Source: HUNTER×HUNTER

References:
http://www.ntv.co.jp/hunterhunter/music/index.html
http://yuzu-official.com/

good luck!
posted
Hellooooo o/ from my queue

General:
All difficulties should be mapped the same, meaning not the only 2 hardest should have the first 15 seconds mapped.

Easy
00:15:090 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:176 (3) - Make this slider end on the red tick 01:05:738 - it's allowed in this case, you might have to distance the next object though.
01:14:176 (1) - Remove NC

That's it for this diff, rest is well done :V
Normal
00:15:090 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:290 (5) - Don't make short repeating sliders on Normal, it's best to leave it for a hard
00:22:490 (5) - Same^
00:27:490 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:890 (1) - Remove NC
00:35:490 (6) - Add NC
00:37:090 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:176 (1,2) - Replace the timing of the slider with the circle, and place the circle 2 on top of the start of the slider, so it looks like this:
Saco's Hard
00:54:090 (1,2) - Increase volume on this, even if its 20% i think it should be a bit higher than that
00:58:988 (6,1) - Replace the NC's between these 2 objects
01:00:676 (6,1) - Same as above
01:01:988 (4) - Add NC
01:08:363 (5) - Add Nc
01:17:926 (4,5) - Replace it with a repeating short slider like the next one for consistency
Wolf's Insane
00:16:890 (2,3,4) - Give circle 3 a bit of distance to slider 4 just like you did to circle 2, or stack both circles on top of start of the slider
00:34:890 (3,4,5) - Give these 3 circles a more consistent spacing, and make circle 5 not overlap the slider as you did
00:40:890 (6) - Move this slider to 00:41:090 - and add a circle on 00:40:890 -
00:41:890 (1) - Make this slider end on 00:42:290 - and move the next slider 00:42:490 - while finally adding a circle to 00:43:090 -
00:43:490 (4,1) - Switch these combos with each other
00:54:090 (1,2,3) - Add more volume to this section as the very slow slider made it hard to read the pattern, and volume being so low gave no feedback when playing. Increasing it more fixes it.
01:00:488 (5) - Place it somewhere else where it doesn't overlap like that.
01:12:301 - Missing an object here, just add a circle to fit the music
01:18:676 - You could add a circle here to fit the music as well, placing it on top of start of slider 01:19:051 (1) - is nice
01:19:051 (1) - Make this slider alot longer and slower and so it ends on 01:20:176 -
01:20:551 (2) - Replace with a slider which ends on 01:21:488 -
01:22:051 (2) - Make this short slider have the same size as 01:21:676 (1) - so its less confusing, and either add more circles to the short stream of 01:22:613 (3,4,5) - or replace the circles with another short repeating slider like before and then replacing slider 01:22:801 (4) - with 5 circles stream, which is also good.
01:28:707 (4,5) - This is a really bad jump stream, its not good to go from 1/4 circle to slider like this, make the slider follow same spacing as the stream.
01:30:113 (3,4) - Make the slider become the last object instead, red tick slider is bad here.
Gungi
Doesn't really matter but you could increase the OD on this one to 8, since there's already an insane with 7 and this being the hardest difficulty.
01:05:738 (4,5,6,1) - If you hear the song correctly, this area could be a stream to fit best with the music instead of that slider.
01:18:301 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing here, make the last object have the same as the rest
Also you could add an object here 01:18:676 - to fit more to the song, making the last object into a slider that ends here fits very well too
01:27:769 (2) - There's actually no sound for this to be a triple, remove this circle
01:29:082 - It's missing a circle here to complete the stream, but i guess that's optional but it would be very recommended to follow the song.
01:29:926 (5) - NC


That's about it i could find, hope it helps!
posted

Rad- wrote:

Hellooooo o/ from my queue

General:
All difficulties should be mapped the same, meaning not the only 2 hardest should have the first 15 seconds mapped.

Easy
00:15:090 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:176 (3) - Make this slider end on the red tick 01:05:738 - it's allowed in this case, you might have to distance the next object though.
01:14:176 (1) - Remove NC

That's it for this diff, rest is well done :V
Normal
00:15:090 (1) - Remove NC
00:19:290 (5) - Don't make short repeating sliders on Normal, it's best to leave it for a hard
00:22:490 (5) - Same^
00:27:490 (1) - Remove NC
00:33:890 (1) - Remove NC
00:35:490 (6) - Add NC
00:37:090 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:176 (1,2) - Replace the timing of the slider with the circle, and place the circle 2 on top of the start of the slider, so it looks like this:
Saco's Hard
00:54:090 (1,2) - Increase volume on this, even if its 20% i think it should be a bit higher than that
00:58:988 (6,1) - Replace the NC's between these 2 objects
01:00:676 (6,1) - Same as above
01:01:988 (4) - Add NC
01:08:363 (5) - Add Nc
01:17:926 (4,5) - Replace it with a repeating short slider like the next one for consistency
Wolf's Insane
00:16:890 (2,3,4) - Give circle 3 a bit of distance to slider 4 just like you did to circle 2, or stack both circles on top of start of the slider
00:34:890 (3,4,5) - Give these 3 circles a more consistent spacing, and make circle 5 not overlap the slider as you did
00:40:890 (6) - Move this slider to 00:41:090 - and add a circle on 00:40:890 -
00:41:890 (1) - Make this slider end on 00:42:290 - and move the next slider 00:42:490 - while finally adding a circle to 00:43:090 -
00:43:490 (4,1) - Switch these combos with each other
00:54:090 (1,2,3) - Add more volume to this section as the very slow slider made it hard to read the pattern, and volume being so low gave no feedback when playing. Increasing it more fixes it.
01:00:488 (5) - Place it somewhere else where it doesn't overlap like that.
01:12:301 - Missing an object here, just add a circle to fit the music
01:18:676 - You could add a circle here to fit the music as well, placing it on top of start of slider 01:19:051 (1) - is nice
01:19:051 (1) - Make this slider alot longer and slower and so it ends on 01:20:176 -
01:20:551 (2) - Replace with a slider which ends on 01:21:488 -
01:22:051 (2) - Make this short slider have the same size as 01:21:676 (1) - so its less confusing, and either add more circles to the short stream of 01:22:613 (3,4,5) - or replace the circles with another short repeating slider like before and then replacing slider 01:22:801 (4) - with 5 circles stream, which is also good.
01:28:707 (4,5) - This is a really bad jump stream, its not good to go from 1/4 circle to slider like this, make the slider follow same spacing as the stream.
01:30:113 (3,4) - Make the slider become the last object instead, red tick slider is bad here.
Gungi
Doesn't really matter but you could increase the OD on this one to 8, since there's already an insane with 7 and this being the hardest difficulty.
01:05:738 (4,5,6,1) - If you hear the song correctly, this area could be a stream to fit best with the music instead of that slider.
01:18:301 (4,5,6) - Inconsistent spacing here, make the last object have the same as the rest
Also you could add an object here 01:18:676 - to fit more to the song, making the last object into a slider that ends here fits very well too
01:27:769 (2) - There's actually no sound for this to be a triple, remove this circle
01:29:082 - It's missing a circle here to complete the stream, but i guess that's optional but it would be very recommended to follow the song.
01:29:926 (5) - NC


That's about it i could find, hope it helps!
Thank you so much for the mod! :D
posted
Hello there! I supposed to do a mod here (from my queue) but I can't mod your map because it have some timing conflicts in the kiai.
I tried figure out but I failed. It's better to ask someone to check your timing then you can call me back for a proper mod.
posted
omg I love this song, maybe I can help with the timing :3

For the 150 BPM part, try offset 306. It's more fitting the current one.
For 160 BPM part, or the kiai. Try offset 54706.
Also, remember to resnap those green points.
Maybe you can add a video too?

Edit: Hmm okay, I talked with Sergio about this. And you should add some more timings in this map. For the right downbeat and else.
00:54:152 - You should add one timing here, with 146 BPM. (Yes, for the vocals :3 GD-ers map those vocals here.)
00:54:563 - Here, with 116 BPM. Also for the vocals.
00:55:081 - Then, one here. with 160 BPM in it.
00:56:206 - Here, for the right downbeat. Also with 160 BPM.

Don't forget to delete the timing at 00:54:706 - , since it'll just conflict with the 116 BPM.
posted

William K wrote:

omg I love this song, maybe I can help with the timing :3

For the 150 BPM part, try offset 306. It's more fitting the current one.
For 160 BPM part, or the kiai. Try offset 54706.
Also, remember to resnap those green points.
Maybe you can add a video too?
Thank you so much!! :D




Janpai wrote:

Hello there! I supposed to do a mod here (from my queue) but I can't mod your map because it have some timing conflicts in the kiai.
I tried figure out but I failed. It's better to ask someone to check your timing then you can call me back for a proper mod.
Fixed :)
posted

William K wrote:

Edit: Hmm okay, I talked with Sergio about this. And you should add some more timings in this map. For the right downbeat and else.
00:54:152 - You should add one timing here, with 146 BPM. (Yes, for the vocals :3 GD-ers map those vocals here.)
00:54:563 - Here, with 116 BPM. Also for the vocals.
00:55:081 - Then, one here. with 160 BPM in it.
00:56:206 - Here, for the right downbeat. Also with 160 BPM.

Don't forget to delete the timing at 00:54:706 - , since it'll just conflict with the 116 BPM.
Updated, thank you! :)
posted
Please send a vote on my queue so I can see how does my modding helps you. =w=)y
DISCLAIMER:
  1. The following things might be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.
General
  1. Please use some custom combo colors. Even though the default colors suites in the BG, it would be better if you'll just make it lighter or sth according to your preference
  2. I think Hyori in the tags is unnecessary
Easy
  1. Please recheck all your objects and turn on distance snap while mapping lower diffs, it's important to have constant spacing in lower diffs and seems like you manually placed the objects. Distance Snap will help you a lot on this matter because your object spacing varies from 1.10x to 1.20x (.8s and .15s are rounded off to that) which is inconsistent
  2. 00:00:306 (1,2) - Improve blanket
  3. 00:14:306 (2,3,4) - Don't make 00:14:706 - under emphasized because downbeats are kinda important to low diffs and this is pretty strong so suggesting this rhythm http://puu.sh/uHEBf/b88b5fce8a.jpg then adjust the other things accordingly, same thing happens on 00:15:906 (5) - and 00:19:106 (4) - which is downbeat is also ignored.
  4. 00:25:906 (5,1) - Switch the NCs here, be consistent on NCing on the downbeats
  5. 00:29:906 (2,3,4) - I would like to suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/uHF0U/f6a7f2966d.jpg to emphasize the strong vocals here.
  6. 00:43:506 (3,1) - Do a blanket sth like this http://puu.sh/uHF8F/46999de003.jpg
  7. 01:04:831 (2,3) - This kind of flow is too edgy for beginners, how about putting 01:04:831 (2) - at 266|129
  8. 01:05:206 (3,1) - Maybe avoid the overlap?
  9. You should watch out for your rhythm choices, as for now there's no consistency and strong beats are being ignored nor under emphasized. I get that you're emphasizing the vocals but there are ways not to ignore those downbeats while mapping the vocals.
Normal
  1. Please use AR 5 on this diff
  2. 00:07:706 (2,3) - These objects are nearly offscreen
  3. 00:09:306 (2,1) - the overlap doesn't look nice here, you could place 00:09:906 (1) - at 363|298
  4. 00:10:906 (2,3) - Seems 00:10:906 (2) - is kinda unnecessary here because there's no such dominant beat here so you could delete this and 00:11:106 (3) - downbeat is at the tail again makes me sad, how about this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/uHFZY/0a335d0623.jpg
  5. From 00:13:106 (1) - up to 00:38:306 (6) - Why did the rhythm density became light here? I'm expecting this to be more dense than the intro but seems that the intro is more dense than the verse, you could do some buffing up of the rhythms.
Saco's Hard
  1. 00:00:306 (1,2) - There's a dominant guitar at 00:00:906 - so why did you ignore that made it played in a reverse while you emphasize those other piano sounds (to be specific; 00:01:306 (3,4,5) - which really have not much difference with the piano) so I think this rhythm would work better http://puu.sh/uHGEo/d71f5bc8b0.jpg
  2. 00:03:906 (2) - Same thing here, a 1/1 slider and a circle would be better
  3. 00:25:506 (6,7) - A bit harsh for hard players I think, you could try having 1/4 slider repeated 3 times http://puu.sh/uHGYi/7d7d10be84.jpg
  4. 00:54:692 (2,1) - Could you make this pattern more clean?
Wolf's Insane
  1. 00:01:706 (4,1) - Woah, this spacing is too much for a calm instrumentals, same thing goes for 00:03:306 (4,1) -
  2. 00:25:706 (5) - Ctrl+< this for 00:25:906 (1) - to have more emphasis or impact on gameplay
  3. 01:29:206 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why the spacings are so wide? The outro is not that strong imo, you could make sth like a build-up spacing instead of all objects are spaced visually equal
I won't mod the last diff since the problem is like a general thing here. Imo, the map lacks of structure and inconsistent. It may play nice on the gameplay but somehow I can't see a dominant reasoning for the object placements. You could work more on emphasis than the aesthetics of your map. As for the lower diffs, make sure you map with DS turned on and choose your rhythms wisely. It's just my personal opinion so no need to take it as a serious matter.
Goodluck!
posted

Janpai wrote:

Please send a vote on my queue so I can see how does my modding helps you. =w=)y
DISCLAIMER:
  1. The following things might be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.
General
  1. Please use some custom combo colors. Even though the default colors suites in the BG, it would be better if you'll just make it lighter or sth according to your preference
  2. I think Hyori in the tags is unnecessary
Easy
  1. Please recheck all your objects and turn on distance snap while mapping lower diffs, it's important to have constant spacing in lower diffs and seems like you manually placed the objects. Distance Snap will help you a lot on this matter because your object spacing varies from 1.10x to 1.20x (.8s and .15s are rounded off to that) which is inconsistent
  2. 00:00:306 (1,2) - Improve blanket
  3. 00:14:306 (2,3,4) - Don't make 00:14:706 - under emphasized because downbeats are kinda important to low diffs and this is pretty strong so suggesting this rhythm http://puu.sh/uHEBf/b88b5fce8a.jpg then adjust the other things accordingly, same thing happens on 00:15:906 (5) - and 00:19:106 (4) - which is downbeat is also ignored.
  4. 00:25:906 (5,1) - Switch the NCs here, be consistent on NCing on the downbeats
  5. 00:29:906 (2,3,4) - I would like to suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/uHF0U/f6a7f2966d.jpg to emphasize the strong vocals here.
  6. 00:43:506 (3,1) - Do a blanket sth like this http://puu.sh/uHF8F/46999de003.jpg
  7. 01:04:831 (2,3) - This kind of flow is too edgy for beginners, how about putting 01:04:831 (2) - at 266|129
  8. 01:05:206 (3,1) - Maybe avoid the overlap?
  9. You should watch out for your rhythm choices, as for now there's no consistency and strong beats are being ignored nor under emphasized. I get that you're emphasizing the vocals but there are ways not to ignore those downbeats while mapping the vocals.
Normal
  1. Please use AR 5 on this diff
  2. 00:07:706 (2,3) - These objects are nearly offscreen
  3. 00:09:306 (2,1) - the overlap doesn't look nice here, you could place 00:09:906 (1) - at 363|298
  4. 00:10:906 (2,3) - Seems 00:10:906 (2) - is kinda unnecessary here because there's no such dominant beat here so you could delete this and 00:11:106 (3) - downbeat is at the tail again makes me sad, how about this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/uHFZY/0a335d0623.jpg
  5. From 00:13:106 (1) - up to 00:38:306 (6) - Why did the rhythm density became light here? I'm expecting this to be more dense than the intro but seems that the intro is more dense than the verse, you could do some buffing up of the rhythms.
Saco's Hard
  1. 00:00:306 (1,2) - There's a dominant guitar at 00:00:906 - so why did you ignore that made it played in a reverse while you emphasize those other piano sounds (to be specific; 00:01:306 (3,4,5) - which really have not much difference with the piano) so I think this rhythm would work better http://puu.sh/uHGEo/d71f5bc8b0.jpg
  2. 00:03:906 (2) - Same thing here, a 1/1 slider and a circle would be better
  3. 00:25:506 (6,7) - A bit harsh for hard players I think, you could try having 1/4 slider repeated 3 times http://puu.sh/uHGYi/7d7d10be84.jpg
  4. 00:54:692 (2,1) - Could you make this pattern more clean?
Wolf's Insane
  1. 00:01:706 (4,1) - Woah, this spacing is too much for a calm instrumentals, same thing goes for 00:03:306 (4,1) -
  2. 00:25:706 (5) - Ctrl+< this for 00:25:906 (1) - to have more emphasis or impact on gameplay
  3. 01:29:206 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why the spacings are so wide? The outro is not that strong imo, you could make sth like a build-up spacing instead of all objects are spaced visually equal
I won't mod the last diff since the problem is like a general thing here. Imo, the map lacks of structure and inconsistent. It may play nice on the gameplay but somehow I can't see a dominant reasoning for the object placements. You could work more on emphasis than the aesthetics of your map. As for the lower diffs, make sure you map with DS turned on and choose your rhythms wisely. It's just my personal opinion so no need to take it as a serious matter.
Goodluck!
Thank you so much for the mod!

About "Gungi" diff, i try to make this more consistent, change notes and resnap some parts...
posted
Q

[gungi]
00:12:706 (3) - ctrl G for better flow
00:17:506 (5,1) - avoid stack, could be better for emphasize
00:29:706 (4,5) - weird overlap, avoid it.
00:37:106 (1) - weird flow, too
00:54:152 - 00:54:563 - add beats.
01:08:393 (1,2) - ctrl G for flow

GL
posted
hi! mod from my queue

Wolf's Insane

00:25:506 (3,4,5) - thhis goes off better with a 4 beats stream
01:22:831 (7) - turn this into stream, idk but its kinda weird from kicksliders-->shortstream-->kickslider

Gungi

00:13:006 - should start a triple here to emphasize 00:13:106 (1)
00:43:306 - put a circle ?
00:49:706 - ^

thats it, really. im really sorry for the extremely short mod but i didnt want to make you wait for too long.

i guess i will give this mapset a star since i made you wait almost for 2 weeks and for a short mod..
posted

Neoskylove wrote:

Q

[gungi]
00:12:706 (3) - ctrl G for better flow
00:17:506 (5,1) - avoid stack, could be better for emphasize
00:29:706 (4,5) - weird overlap, avoid it.
00:37:106 (1) - weird flow, too
00:54:152 - 00:54:563 - add beats.
01:08:393 (1,2) - ctrl G for flow

GL

Saika0k1 wrote:

hi! mod from my queue

Wolf's Insane

00:25:506 (3,4,5) - thhis goes off better with a 4 beats stream
01:22:831 (7) - turn this into stream, idk but its kinda weird from kicksliders-->shortstream-->kickslider

Gungi

00:13:006 - should start a triple here to emphasize 00:13:106 (1)
00:43:306 - put a circle ?
00:49:706 - ^

thats it, really. im really sorry for the extremely short mod but i didnt want to make you wait for too long.

i guess i will give this mapset a star since i made you wait almost for 2 weeks and for a short mod..
Thanks :D
posted
Reply the mods. Just saying "Thank you" is not helpful.
Check what you fixed and why you didn't fixed.
posted

Neoskylove wrote:

Reply the mods. Just saying "Thank you" is not helpful.
Check what you fixed and why you didn't fixed.
I do not put that because i fix all you say lmao
posted
NM from my queue

Saco's Hard
00:01:306 (3) - place it more to the right beacaus thats where the slider is pointing to

00:16:706 (3,1) - I wouldn't make these cross

01:05:393 (2,3,4) - This doesn't look nice in a hard diff

01:06:331 (6,1) - Overlap

Pretty good diff overall
Wolf's Insane
00:14:706 (1) - make the sliderend point to 00:15:306 (2) maybe (this is very minor)

00:16:906 (2,3,4) - Just make a straight triple

00:22:506 (3,4,1) - ^

00:25:906 (1) - I would place 1 immediately after the stream and not force a jump

00:32:306 (1) - I would make this part more like http://i.imgur.com/jGIrtuc.png, so the red tick is clickable

00:34:506 (2,3,4,5,1) - I don't like the spacing between these

00:36:706 (4,1) - Fully stack to signify 1/1 gap

00:43:506 (1,2) - I would make this part like this http://i.imgur.com/uMtX1hK.png

01:28:268 (6,1) - This jump is pretty difficult, not only in spacing but also in angle switch
Gungi
00:03:306 (4,2) - Overlap

00:14:106 (4,5,6,1) - I would make sure the spacing between 61 is atleast as big as 45

00:17:106 (3,4,5) - I don't like this stack, space them out/pattern them somehow

00:29:506 (3,4) - I would only stack notes like this for a 1/1 gap, not a 1/2

00:35:106 (5,1) - Overlap

00:43:506 (3) - If you are following the vocals here, I would suggest stopping the slider on the red tick and placing a circle on the white after that

00:56:581 (2,4) - Overlap


Gl with the map (chose this from my queue first beacause the song is just too good)
posted

gottagof4ast wrote:

[Wolf's Insane] 00:14:706 (1) - make the sliderend point to 00:15:306 (2) maybe (this is very minor)
wolf's ignore this because sounds weird...


gottagof4ast wrote:

Gl with the map (chose this from my queue first beacause the song is just too good)
Thank you so much for this mod :3!
Yeah, this song is really cool~
posted
Hello, from queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:49:906 (1) - Spinner came in too fast?
  2. 01:02:956 (4,2) - Stack properly.
  3. 01:04:831 (2,4) - ^
  4. 01:17:956 (4,1) - Blanket?
  5. 01:27:706 (1) - Spinner came too fast again.


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:306 (2,3) - Align these with sliderend of 00:00:306 (1) -
  2. 00:49:906 (1) - Spinner came too fast?
  3. 01:27:706 (1) - ^
  4. 01:25:456 (3,1) - Improve blanket.


[Saco's Hard]
  1. 00:04:706 (5,1) - Improve blanket.
  2. 00:07:906 (5,1) - ^
  3. 00:15:906 (5,6,1,2) - Can flow more better.
  4. 00:49:906 (1) - Still too fast spinner (It came in too fast)
  5. 01:27:518 (1) - ^
  6. 00:58:831 (5,1) - Can flow more better.
  7. 01:02:393 (2,3) - Blanket.
  8. 01:03:893 (2,3) - Can flow more better.


[Wolf's Insane]
  1. 00:16:906 (2,3,4) - Why not stack them like 00:13:706 (2,3,4) - To form a pattern?
  2. 00:25:806 (6,1) - Spacing inconsistency
  3. 00:27:306 (4) - Stack properly on 00:28:306 (4) -
  4. 00:29:106 (1,2,3) - Can flow more better.
  5. 00:30:306 (1,1) - Stack properly
  6. 00:46:906 (4,5,6,7) - Can flow more better.
  7. 00:57:518 (3,4,1) - ^
  8. 01:00:143 (4) - You can move this to the right because the angle from 00:59:956 (3) - is too sharp
  9. 01:18:706 (8) - Mind increasing the volume? Can't hear this circle.


[Gungi]
  1. 00:06:706 (1,2) - Blanket.
  2. 00:32:106 (8,9,1) - Stack or make it flow better.
  3. 00:45:706 - Why did you ignore this beat, Unlike here 00:41:906 (1) - you made it a reverse slider. Why not make it also a reverse slider?
  4. 00:51:506 (1) - Slider can be more beautiful.
  5. 01:07:831 (3,2) - Stack?


Goodluck!
posted
At 01:29:206, the bpm actually increases to 162 here, because listening to it, your notes are a bit slow, so go ahead and fix that easy miss

Easy
00:19:106 (4) - replace with a circle and a slider on the finish
00:22:306 (5,1) - Overlap
01:10:831 (2,3) - Make these the same shape, just flipped for neatening purposes.
01:12:331 (4) - make this round off the slider end
01:17:206 (3,4) - overlap

Normal
Big issue here is flow. A normal is supposed to have even flow and stuff, but this diff doesnt have that nice of a flow to it.
00:33:906 (4,5) - Make this flow nicer
00:37:906 (5,6) - switch these two around
00:38:706 - Probably would be better to slow this part down, since its softer and doesnt need the same SV
01:00:706 (1,2) - Nicen these sliders up, make them look better
01:08:206 (1) - NC not needed here

Saco's HardBig issue in this diff. Spacing. You have some jumps larger than others and even in the beginning.
Its okay to have different spacings, but only at parts that need it. The song stays the same here so it should be similar spacings.
00:17:506 (5,1) - Dont have such a curved slider as it ruines the flow a little
00:25:506 (6,1) - In a hard diff its kinda hard to read this, so it may be better to either replace the 1 with the slider, or something else.
00:32:106 (5) - Instead of a slider here how about a triple, cuz while looking at it, it just felt weird to hear the finish on the tail
00:37:506 (1,2,3) - try to make these in more of a line, not a straight line, just not as big of angles.
00:45:106 (1,2) - Overlap
01:13:456 (4,5) - Dont have the extended slider here as it doesnt fit the song.
01:19:081 (1,1) - In all honesty remove the spinners here and replace them with notes, they arent needed, especially in a hard

Wolf's Insane
00:25:506 (3,4,5,6,1) - My opinion is to put the stream closer to the slider, since it has a large spacing in between 6 and 1
00:59:393 (1,2,3,4) - Make this entire section here flow better, the downward sliders with upward jumps is just weird
01:01:456 (3,4) - You may have a reason to stack this, but to me you shouldnt. idk

Gungi
00:25:306 (5) - All honesty, no need to have this 1/4th slider here, since no sound on the blue tick

Not much to say about this one honestly.
Just work in the easier diffs.
Also im not a pro mapper so i may not see as much as someone more experienced would.
posted

-Aqua wrote:

Hello, from queue

[Easy]
  1. 00:49:906 (1) - Spinner came in too fast?
  2. 01:02:956 (4,2) - Stack properly.
  3. 01:04:831 (2,4) - ^
  4. 01:17:956 (4,1) - Blanket?
  5. 01:27:706 (1) - Spinner came too fast again.


[Normal]
  1. 00:01:306 (2,3) - Align these with sliderend of 00:00:306 (1) -
  2. 00:49:906 (1) - Spinner came too fast?
  3. 01:27:706 (1) - ^
  4. 01:25:456 (3,1) - Improve blanket.


[Saco's Hard]
  1. 00:04:706 (5,1) - Improve blanket.
  2. 00:07:906 (5,1) - ^
  3. 00:15:906 (5,6,1,2) - Can flow more better.
  4. 00:49:906 (1) - Still too fast spinner (It came in too fast)
  5. 01:27:518 (1) - ^
  6. 00:58:831 (5,1) - Can flow more better.
  7. 01:02:393 (2,3) - Blanket.
  8. 01:03:893 (2,3) - Can flow more better.


[Wolf's Insane]
  1. 00:16:906 (2,3,4) - Why not stack them like 00:13:706 (2,3,4) - To form a pattern?
  2. 00:25:806 (6,1) - Spacing inconsistency
  3. 00:27:306 (4) - Stack properly on 00:28:306 (4) -
  4. 00:29:106 (1,2,3) - Can flow more better.
  5. 00:30:306 (1,1) - Stack properly
  6. 00:46:906 (4,5,6,7) - Can flow more better.
  7. 00:57:518 (3,4,1) - ^
  8. 01:00:143 (4) - You can move this to the right because the angle from 00:59:956 (3) - is too sharp
  9. 01:18:706 (8) - Mind increasing the volume? Can't hear this circle.


[Gungi]
  1. 00:06:706 (1,2) - Blanket.
  2. 00:32:106 (8,9,1) - Stack or make it flow better.
  3. 00:45:706 - Why did you ignore this beat, Unlike here 00:41:906 (1) - you made it a reverse slider. Why not make it also a reverse slider?
  4. 00:51:506 (1) - Slider can be more beautiful.
  5. 01:07:831 (3,2) - Stack?


Goodluck!
I ignore all "spinner fast" because when i move them sounds weird... i think move spinners after is not really necessary.

Thank you so much for the mod :3
posted

Bacwux wrote:

At 01:29:206, the bpm actually increases to 162 here, because listening to it, your notes are a bit slow, so go ahead and fix that easy miss

Easy
00:19:106 (4) - replace with a circle and a slider on the finish
00:22:306 (5,1) - Overlap
01:10:831 (2,3) - Make these the same shape, just flipped for neatening purposes.
01:12:331 (4) - make this round off the slider end
01:17:206 (3,4) - overlap

Normal
Big issue here is flow. A normal is supposed to have even flow and stuff, but this diff doesnt have that nice of a flow to it.
00:33:906 (4,5) - Make this flow nicer
00:37:906 (5,6) - switch these two around
00:38:706 - Probably would be better to slow this part down, since its softer and doesnt need the same SV
01:00:706 (1,2) - Nicen these sliders up, make them look better
01:08:206 (1) - NC not needed here

Saco's HardBig issue in this diff. Spacing. You have some jumps larger than others and even in the beginning.
Its okay to have different spacings, but only at parts that need it. The song stays the same here so it should be similar spacings.
00:17:506 (5,1) - Dont have such a curved slider as it ruines the flow a little
00:25:506 (6,1) - In a hard diff its kinda hard to read this, so it may be better to either replace the 1 with the slider, or something else.
00:32:106 (5) - Instead of a slider here how about a triple, cuz while looking at it, it just felt weird to hear the finish on the tail
00:37:506 (1,2,3) - try to make these in more of a line, not a straight line, just not as big of angles.
00:45:106 (1,2) - Overlap
01:13:456 (4,5) - Dont have the extended slider here as it doesnt fit the song.
01:19:081 (1,1) - In all honesty remove the spinners here and replace them with notes, they arent needed, especially in a hard

Wolf's Insane
00:25:506 (3,4,5,6,1) - My opinion is to put the stream closer to the slider, since it has a large spacing in between 6 and 1
00:59:393 (1,2,3,4) - Make this entire section here flow better, the downward sliders with upward jumps is just weird
01:01:456 (3,4) - You may have a reason to stack this, but to me you shouldnt. idk

Gungi
00:25:306 (5) - All honesty, no need to have this 1/4th slider here, since no sound on the blue tick

Not much to say about this one honestly.
Just work in the easier diffs.
Also im not a pro mapper so i may not see as much as someone more experienced would.
I ignore overlaps in Easy diff because not looks good.
I'll try to fix what u say about Normal and Hard. By the moment i change this part 00:38:706 from x0.8 vel slid to x1.0 for avoid spacing problems with DS.

Thank so much for the mod and the correct BPM in the final part! :D
Now sounds better :)
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