- The following things might be only opinions and suggestions so feel free to ignore them.
- Please use some custom combo colors. Even though the default colors suites in the BG, it would be better if you'll just make it lighter or sth according to your preference
- I think Hyori in the tags is unnecessary
- Please recheck all your objects and turn on distance snap while mapping lower diffs, it's important to have constant spacing in lower diffs and seems like you manually placed the objects. Distance Snap will help you a lot on this matter because your object spacing varies from 1.10x to 1.20x (.8s and .15s are rounded off to that) which is inconsistent
- 00:00:306 (1,2) - Improve blanket
- 00:14:306 (2,3,4) - Don't make 00:14:706 - under emphasized because downbeats are kinda important to low diffs and this is pretty strong so suggesting this rhythm http://puu.sh/uHEBf/b88b5fce8a.jpg then adjust the other things accordingly, same thing happens on 00:15:906 (5) - and 00:19:106 (4) - which is downbeat is also ignored.
- 00:25:906 (5,1) - Switch the NCs here, be consistent on NCing on the downbeats
- 00:29:906 (2,3,4) - I would like to suggest this rhythm http://puu.sh/uHF0U/f6a7f2966d.jpg to emphasize the strong vocals here.
- 00:43:506 (3,1) - Do a blanket sth like this http://puu.sh/uHF8F/46999de003.jpg
- 01:04:831 (2,3) - This kind of flow is too edgy for beginners, how about putting 01:04:831 (2) - at 266|129
- 01:05:206 (3,1) - Maybe avoid the overlap?
- You should watch out for your rhythm choices, as for now there's no consistency and strong beats are being ignored nor under emphasized. I get that you're emphasizing the vocals but there are ways not to ignore those downbeats while mapping the vocals.
- Please use AR 5 on this diff
- 00:07:706 (2,3) - These objects are nearly offscreen
- 00:09:306 (2,1) - the overlap doesn't look nice here, you could place 00:09:906 (1) - at 363|298
- 00:10:906 (2,3) - Seems 00:10:906 (2) - is kinda unnecessary here because there's no such dominant beat here so you could delete this and 00:11:106 (3) - downbeat is at the tail again makes me sad, how about this rhythm instead http://puu.sh/uHFZY/0a335d0623.jpg
- From 00:13:106 (1) - up to 00:38:306 (6) - Why did the rhythm density became light here? I'm expecting this to be more dense than the intro but seems that the intro is more dense than the verse, you could do some buffing up of the rhythms.
- 00:00:306 (1,2) - There's a dominant guitar at 00:00:906 - so why did you ignore that made it played in a reverse while you emphasize those other piano sounds (to be specific; 00:01:306 (3,4,5) - which really have not much difference with the piano) so I think this rhythm would work better http://puu.sh/uHGEo/d71f5bc8b0.jpg
- 00:03:906 (2) - Same thing here, a 1/1 slider and a circle would be better
- 00:25:506 (6,7) - A bit harsh for hard players I think, you could try having 1/4 slider repeated 3 times http://puu.sh/uHGYi/7d7d10be84.jpg
- 00:54:692 (2,1) - Could you make this pattern more clean?
- 00:01:706 (4,1) - Woah, this spacing is too much for a calm instrumentals, same thing goes for 00:03:306 (4,1) -
- 00:25:706 (5) - Ctrl+< this for 00:25:906 (1) - to have more emphasis or impact on gameplay
- 01:29:206 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Why the spacings are so wide? The outro is not that strong imo, you could make sth like a build-up spacing instead of all objects are spaced visually equal
Goodluck!