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kanpakyin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月9日 at 20:52:17

Artist: fripSide
Title: closest love
Source: Areas Koisuru Otome no 3H
Tags: Sora ni utsusu kimi tono sekai kanarin Nanjou Yoshino Hinacle Lapis Lazuli
BPM: 136
Filesize: 15041kb
Play Time: 01:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.51 stars, 84 notes)
  2. Hinacle (4.87 stars, 326 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 357 notes)
  4. Kana's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 642 notes)
  5. Normal (3.97 stars, 164 notes)
Download: fripSide - closest love
Download: fripSide - closest love (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hey guys >w<
I think you should play this before play this. :>
Anyway,enjoy it.
Special thanks to KayeSara for little SB

Mapset:
Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard(By Hinacle) - Done
Insane - Done
Taiko(by KanaRin) - Done
CuNha
:oops:
namazun_old
>w</====★
aabc271
Star~ :)
Sekai
:D
swish
ヽ(・∀・ )ノ
Mercurius
8-)
Grassvalley
Fight~(*ㅇ ㅅㅇ)
S o r d a
owo
Suzully
wow
SiU_LeAf
加油><
Star~!!

話說小葉之前也map過這首歌的說,
在很久很久以前。
kodomonoyume
:) nice song & nice map~
R a i n
nice map :)
KanaRin
jojobored
baka
Norn_NNN
._.
Hinacle
gdeath
[General:
  1. 把Hinacle加入tags,起初感觉他既然已经用自己的名字命名了,再加进去好像有点多余,其实如果不加的话只能搜到他自己的难度,如果加进去的话就能搜到整张图所有的难度。(所以感觉还是有点必要的?)
  2. 顺便也把Lapis Lazuli加进tags.
[Hinacle]:
  1. OD+1?
  2. Add KanaRin into tags.
As for the other diffs, I have no problem.
很不错的一首曲子,没什么好挑剔的。no kds.
/me shoots a star~
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
Tag fixed!

Edit:
Tag fixed again
thanks ykcrrort 8-)
Sure
I'm just passing by.
Put tags 'Nanjou Yoshino' instead of 'nao'.

No kds.
PeaChick
wow >O<
HeatKai
Got request from TBRT's Queue.
thanks because supporting us :D


[taiko]
Hp drain rate --> 5
OD ---> 5

The volume too high @_@
reduce by 40%


Just saying " hi "

==''

pekos
[Insane]
00:56:718 The slider is a little oblique

[Normal]
01:09:733 The slider is a little oblique

There are other, do not care if the fixed

and, good map!
KanaRin

HeatKai wrote:

[taiko]
Hp drain rate --> 5 NO><
OD ---> 5 NO><

The volume too high @_@
reduce by 40% NO><
Thanks~
DeadAlready
star~ >w</

太鼓有note沒snap...D:
Clare
[General]:
1.我感覺把lead in改長一點?1秒有點短
2.總感覺音量小了一點點

[Easy]:
fine

[Normal]:
00:27:600 (8) - ...這個finish?我覺得很不自然,改成clap?

[Hinacle]:
00:28:042 (1,2,3) - 要跳不跳的間距,建議改大一點
00:43:483 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^ 可以改大或是跟前面一樣用1.0 看起來彆扭
01:56:718 (5) - slider尾巴的clap去掉或改成whistle
01:57:600 (6) - ^
01:58:483 (7) - clap

[Insane]:
這個是你自己做的?怎麼跟easy還有normal差這麼多,除了slider像以外 排版挺亂的
00:13:924 (7) - 這跳的...
01:20:542 (1,2,3,4) - 這跳的也太沒規則了

Top diff:Normal

總體沒什麼問題.3.
star!
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Clare wrote:

[General]:
1.我感覺把lead in改長一點?1秒有點短 Fixed
2.總感覺音量小了一點點 Fixed

[Normal]:
00:27:600 (8) - ...這個finish?我覺得很不自然,改成clap?Fixed in other way.

[Hinacle]: Translation:
00:28:042 (1,2,3) - Maybe increase spacing?
00:43:483 (2,3,4,5,1) - ^
01:56:718 (5) - Remove clap at the end of the slider or use a whistle instead of.
01:57:600 (6) - ^
01:58:483 (7) - clap

[Insane]:
這個是你自己做的?怎麼跟easy還有normal差這麼多,除了slider像以外 排版挺亂的 不會啊...找了幾個人試也覺得不錯...品味問題...
00:13:924 (7) - 這跳的... 沒啥阿..其實這樣的pattern在出現(5.6)-的時候,就料到(7.8)-是一個更大跳..
01:20:542 (1,2,3,4) - 這跳的也太沒規則了 為甚麼沒規則?(1.2,1.2)-逆向跳, (2.3.4)-三角跳..而且這部分也適合跳啊..
Dotsu
都是建议啊:

[General]


  • 这BG …算了不吐槽了
    只有Normal和太鼓难度去掉了Countdown其他的难度还留着(虽然没有出现吧
    Combo Colour里那个浅蓝确实有点浅 Insane里有时候会看不清Approachcircle
    另外印象中好像有approachcircle的话也要有hitcircle和hitcircleoverlay
[Easy]
感觉有些地方的音效有点乱

  • 00:02:012 (2): 建议用默认Finish代替这个Clap音效
    00:09:071 (6): 总感觉这里缺点音效 加个Finish或者Whistle什么的
    00:14:696 (1): 转盘从这开始感觉有点怪
    00:32:453 : 加个Circle
    01:09:071 (3): 这里用Normal Finish还不如前面的①最后改用Normal Finish
    01:13:042 (1): 这个Slider有点别扭 建议改成这里一个Circle 下一拍加个两拍的Slider 后面一拍再加个Circle
    01:21:424 (1): 这里不如换成Finish
    01:53:189 (4): New Combo
[Normal]


  • 01:00:247 (1): 这里感觉还是用Normal或者Soft的默认Finish音效比较好
    01:14:365 (4): ^
    01:18:336 (3): 有点怪 建议把这个Slider改成一拍返回 然后后面再加点Circle什么的补充一下空间
    01:26:828 (1): 加个Finish
    01:41:718 : 加个Circle 还有⑦离后面的①太近了
[Hinacle]
Different preview time
And I suggest increasing the volume in Kiai Time

  • 00:49:659 (1): Use Finish here instead of Whistle
Perfect diff! Perfect mapset and hitsound! :D

[Insane]


  • 00:02:012 (8): 这里加Finish
    00:35:100 (5,6): 相对于前面那么大的间距来说有点近了
    01:13:483 : 个人感觉这里没必要提高Slider速度
    01:54:733 (4,5): 换成一个Slider
    01:57:270 (6): 这个Slider的开始位置有点奇怪
OzzyOzrock
am I the only one that reads this as 'closet love' every time?
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

impossiblexu wrote:

[General]

  • 这BG …算了不吐槽了 ?,有問題?我自己到baidu搜的..
    只有Normal和太鼓难度去掉了Countdown其他的难度还留着(虽然没有出现吧 Fixed
    Combo Colour里那个浅蓝确实有点浅 Insane里有时候会看不清Approachcircle X,其實還好..
    另外印象中好像有approachcircle的话也要有hitcircle和hitcircleoverlay 刪掉了..
[Easy]

  • 00:02:012 (2): 建议用默认Finish代替这个Clap音效 Fixed
    00:09:071 (6): 总感觉这里缺点音效 加个Finish或者Whistle什么的 Fixed
    00:14:696 (1): 转盘从这开始感觉有点怪 Fixed
    00:32:453 : 加个Circle X,詭異感滿遍...這裏明顯是3/4,加一個1/1的note會很怪.
    01:09:071 (3): 这里用Normal Finish还不如前面的①最后改用Normal Finish X,還不錯啊..
    01:13:042 (1): 这个Slider有点别扭 建议改成这里一个Circle 下一拍加个两拍的Slider 后面一拍再加个Circle 這裏我跟鼓點.
    01:21:424 (1): 这里不如换成Finish 本來就是finish了...
    01:53:189 (4): New Combo Fixed
[Normal]


  • 01:00:247 (1): 这里感觉还是用Normal或者Soft的默认Finish音效比较好 Fixed
    01:14:365 (4): ^ X
    01:18:336 (3): 有点怪 建议把这个Slider改成一拍返回 然后后面再加点Circle什么的补充一下空间 X
    01:26:828 (1): 加个Finish Fixed
    01:41:718 : 加个Circle 还有⑦离后面的①太近了 這裏能辨認就好了..
[Hinacle]
Different preview time Fixed
And I suggest increasing the volume in Kiai Time

  • 00:49:659 (1): Use Finish here instead of Whistle
Perfect diff! Perfect mapset and hitsound! :D

[Insane]


  • 00:02:012 (8): 这里加Finish Fixed
    00:35:100 (5,6): 相对于前面那么大的间距来说有点近了 Fixed
    01:13:483 : 个人感觉这里没必要提高Slider速度 這裏音樂更加激烈,有必要提高速度..
    01:54:733 (4,5): 换成一个Slider X,個人喜好..
    01:57:270 (6): 这个Slider的开始位置有点奇怪 X
Thanks for modding.
Kotone
Hinacle
fine><

Insane
Clare+1 這次排版有點亂
00:03:556 (4) - 那啥 跟(5)有點太近 3&4點拉出點
00:35:873 (6,7) - ugly...(6)放(7)左上?
00:37:306 (6) - finish
00:50:983 (1,2,3) - 用normal比soft加clap會更好 因為softhitnormal好吵(normal diff同
00:52:747 (1,2,3) - ^
01:00:027 (6,7) - 這2連好怪,(7)從紅線開始唄
01:02:012 (3) - 用whistle代替clap效果更好
01:08:078 (9) - 突然又不跟vocal 好怪
01:13:483 (1) - 這條slider繼續x1.00 ,從(3)才開始加速效果更好lol
01:16:130 (1) - remove clap,怪
01:18:556 (2) - ^
01:20:542 (1,2,3,4) - 這clap不適合用在這,建議用normal hitsound,(4)用default soft finish
01:28:483 (1) - finish
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>karenying
rEMAP SOME PART.
Hinacle
Lilac
Almost forgot about this.

Rules state that you CAN NOT silence both the sliderslide and the slidertick together which already makes this map unrankable. Also not sure about the BG and part of the video. D:

[Easy]
Kinda disappointed, even though it's around 1 star, it doesn't feel like an Easy to me. Regardless, the slidertick claps also worry me, preferably try to map without them but...

There are certain notes that appear too quickly after spinners. Examples are 00:16:571 (1) -, 00:30:247 (1) - and 00:44:806 (1) - are the ones in this difficulty.

[Normal]
00:23:630 (3,4) - I don't get the slider returns for these sliders. D:

[Hinacle]
I loved this difficulty.

[Insane]
AR of 9 isn't very good... Other than that, I'm not sure. I don't like the amount of jumps. It's probably because I can't play it.

Sorry if my mod isn't great. I still haven't recovered from how bad my mods were previously and also the fact that there are new rules doesn't help me. Really sorry. D:
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

Lilac wrote:

Almost forgot about this.

Rules state that you CAN NOT silence both the sliderslide and the slidertick together which already makes this map unrankable. Also not sure about the BG and part of the video. D: No,just no.I never slience slidertick.I never use slidertick.wav

[Easy]
Kinda disappointed, even though it's around 1 star, it doesn't feel like an Easy to me. Regardless, the slidertick claps also worry me, preferably try to map without them but... X,I'm sure this easy is easy enough.Also the slidertick is use for balance the hitsound

There are certain notes that appear too quickly after spinners. Examples are 00:16:571 (1) -, 00:30:247 (1) - and 00:44:806 (1) - are the ones in this difficulty. Move the slider to the central.

[Normal]
00:23:630 (3,4) - I don't get the slider returns for these sliders. D: ok,rearrange some of the rhythm.

[Insane]
AR of 9 isn't very good... Other than that, I'm not sure. I don't like the amount of jumps. It's probably because I can't play it.
Change to AR8. However the jumps are probably okey!Most of the expert can play it.If some player can't play this diff,they will choose Hinacle diff to play it.
Thanks for mod,though.
JoJo
Star.

by continuous request...
IceBeam
Hello.

First of all:

kanpakyin wrote:

Lilac wrote:

Rules state that you CAN NOT silence both the sliderslide and the slidertick together which already makes this map unrankable. Also not sure about the BG and part of the video. D: No,just no.I never slience slidertick.I never use slidertick.wav
I've checked the beatmap's folder and soft-slidertick.wav isn't silenced,so yeah,it's allowed,but..kanpakyin using slidetick hitsounds in some other way,not as we usually expect to see.Aside of making extra timing sections for S:C1 slidertick hitsounds,he's using empty S:C2 blanks,where slidertick2 isn't actually exist at all.

I can't see anything wrong about it,though.

Everything else seems fine to me.

[Easy]
I'm not a big fan of slidertick hitsounds,just because it makes no sense to me,cause if you have some rhytm to follow,then each beat should have some object to click at.
And as for beginner players,it confuses them a lot.

00:01:350 (2) - It's off rhytm..the best solution I see here is to make a reverse slider using these notes:(00:01:350 - 00:01:571 - 00:02:012)
00:27:159 (4) - I'd flip it vertically.
00:41:277 (4) - Distance looks wrong here,it should be at least 1 grid up.
01:19:659 (4) - Rotate it clockwise by 90,cause you're not sure if there will be another repeat compared to spacing.
01:55:395 (4) - Don't really like how it looks..I'd make it curvier,and 01:53:630 (2) too.

[Normal]
00:20:762 - I think there's a note missing here :|
00:35:542 (3) - It plays sooo wrong,shorten by 00:35:983 and add another note to 00:36:203 then.
00:47:012 (6) - ^ Same,even with using slidertick hitsound it feels way too late.You just must have something to click here,so shorten to 00:47:453.
01:05:100 (3) - This one is totally off,it should start at 01:05:321 first of all.And you should have a note at 01:05:542,seriously,it's downbeat.
01:18:336 (3) - Feels wrong to me,too.
01:22:306 (5) - Again,shorten to previous white tick.
01:46:130 (5) - ^

[Hinacle]
moe Hinacle >w<

00:06:203 (3) - I'd flip it vertically.
00:07:968 (3) - Clap sounds rough on red tick.
01:02:674 (2) - ^
01:04:880 (6) - Vertically flip?
01:20:542 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagon shape could look better,move 01:20:542 (1) down by 1 grid and 01:21:424 (5) right by 1 grid,too.
01:25:836 (6) - New combo?
01:49:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - Work better on this pentagon? ;) 01:50:100 (3) - 1 grid up and 01:50:542 (5) - 1 grid right would be better?

Awesome!

[Insane]
00:13:262 (5) - New combo due to slightly increased spacing?
00:55:836 (3,4,5) - God,these jumps are just insane,they're so sudden and completely out of flow :|
01:29:806 (4) - It's odd,but new combo could solve this out I think.

I liked it,nice style and jumps,but still some patterns look odd and spacing changed in so sudden ways sometimes.

Anyway,great mapset.
Good luck and have my star.
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

IceBeam wrote:

[Easy]
00:01:350 (2) - It's off rhytm..the best solution I see here is to make a reverse slider using these notes:(00:01:350 - 00:01:571 - 00:02:012) X,However it seems find for me,keep it for now until next modder mention it again.
00:27:159 (4) - I'd flip it vertically. Sure,fixed
00:41:277 (4) - Distance looks wrong here,it should be at least 1 grid up. lol,I didn't open the grid snap when I was mapping.Well,up a bit.It may better now.
01:19:659 (4) - Rotate it clockwise by 90,cause you're not sure if there will be another repeat compared to spacing. Sure,fixed
01:55:395 (4) - Don't really like how it looks..I'd make it curvier,and 01:53:630 (2) too. X,soory for diffenert taste.

[Normal]
00:20:762 - I think there's a note missing here :| X,I won't add a note here due to I want to prominence the accent point (3.4.5)-
00:35:542 (3) - It plays sooo wrong,shorten by 00:35:983 and add another note to 00:36:203 then. X,I can't see any wrong here.
00:47:012 (6) - ^ Same,even with using slidertick hitsound it feels way too late.You just must have something to click here,so shorten to 00:47:453. ^
01:05:100 (3) - This one is totally off,it should start at 01:05:321 first of all.And you should have a note at 01:05:542,seriously,it's downbeat. Fixed in other way~
01:18:336 (3) - Feels wrong to me,too. X,not totally.The reverse on "do" sound.
01:22:306 (5) - Again,shorten to previous white tick. X
01:46:130 (5) - ^ X.

[Insane]
00:13:262 (5) - New combo due to slightly increased spacing? X,If I always add a new combo in some slightly spacing change.Then the new combo will being chaos.Also this jump is on a accent point so it should be fine for playing.
00:55:836 (3,4,5) - God,these jumps are just insane,they're so sudden and completely out of flow :| Sure,fixed
01:29:806 (4) - It's odd,but new combo could solve this out I think. Sure,fixed
Thanks for modding.
Hinacle
[quote="IceBeam"]
[Hinacle]
moe Hinacle >w<

00:06:203 (3) - I'd flip it vertically.
00:07:968 (3) - Clap sounds rough on red tick.
01:02:674 (2) - ^
01:04:880 (6) - Vertically flip?
01:20:542 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pentagon shape could look better,move 01:20:542 (1) down by 1 grid and 01:21:424 (5) right by 1 grid,too.
01:25:836 (6) - New combo?
01:49:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - Work better on this pentagon? ;) 01:50:100 (3) - 1 grid up and 01:50:542 (5) - 1 grid right would be better?

Awesome![quote]

Thank you mod~!!
神IceBeam mod :)

Done!!

Download: fripSide - closest love (kanpakyin) [Hinacle].osu
arien666
Everything seems fine but I'm not sure about bubbling...
Since

00:56:718 ~ 00:58:483 - This part's video scene... [I know it's little safe for 18- people but not sure]

I don't know how should I deal with this ;_;
Needs more confirming orz

Sorry atm orz
Topic Starter
kanpakyin
>arken
About the video,I find some player and modder,they all think that's fine,Lilac also checked it and think that's fine.However I will accept more mod before call you back!
Nymph
这个真好听..
loveFantasy
早起沒事所以還是來看看了

[General]
  1. 你的tags長到不像話, 尤其是Insane整個..
  2. lead-in太少..加到2500? (first note offset+lead-in=3000)
[Easy]
  1. 00:14:806 (1) - 起點15:027 (Auto get 5000, 應該不構成難度問題)
  2. 00:28:042 (1) - 下SC1 clap? 段落轉換..
[Normal]
  1. 01:14:365 (4) - 在這難度, 這裡值一個new combo
[Hinacle]
  • ii diff, zenbu 提案:
  1. 00:39:071 (1,2) - blue tick clap instead?
  2. 00:42:600 (1) - ^
[Insane]
  • 也是style mod:
  1. 01:00:358 (7) - 稍微有點怪, 感覺這裡沒節奏而01:00:578有節奏好些
Topic Starter
kanpakyin

loveFantasy wrote:

早起沒事所以還是來看看了

[General]
  1. 你的tags長到不像話, 尤其是Insane整個.. = =沒啥問題啊..
  2. lead-in太少..加到2500? (first note offset+lead-in=3000)
Fixed

[Easy]
  1. 00:14:806 (1) - 起點15:027 (Auto get 5000, 應該不構成難度問題) X,加大了Lead in 應該好一點..
  2. 00:28:042 (1) - 下SC1 clap? 段落轉換.. Fixed
[Normal]
  1. 01:14:365 (4) - 在這難度, 這裡值一個new combo Fixed
[Insane]
  • 也是style mod:
  1. 01:00:358 (7) - 稍微有點怪, 感覺這裡沒節奏而01:00:578有節奏好些 Fixed
Thanks for modding.

Edit:It should be fixed now.
loveFantasy
SPOILER
奇怪 我都更新到最新了啊o.o 不是有東西出現兩次嗎..
wmfchris
taiko mod request from bakarin

I prefer OD +1 ._.

00:17:674 - k dd dd(dk?) k d
00:35:542 - kk dd d k?
00:38:189 - kd?
01:13:483 - kkddkkkkd
01:15:027 - ddk
01:20:542 - try sth like ddkdkdddk?
01:31:571 - dd dk d ddk
02:07:306 - [Nazi] well the melody ends 1/8 later?

Nice trial using triplets on 1/2 vocal, but I still want to see the diff with less 2-plets orz

7.5/10
KanaRin

wmfchris wrote:

taiko mod request from bakarin

I prefer OD +1 ._.

00:17:674 - k dd dd(dk?) k d
00:35:542 - kk dd d k?
00:38:189 - kd?
01:13:483 - kkddkkkkd
01:15:027 - ddk
01:20:542 - try sth like ddkdkdddk?
01:31:571 - dd dk d ddk
02:07:306 - [Nazi] well the melody ends 1/8 later?

Nice trial using triplets on 1/2 vocal, but I still want to see the diff with less 2-plets orz

7.5/10
fixed most of them , thx

Download: fripSide - closest love (kanpakyin) [Kana's Taiko Oni].osu
aesopl19193

arien666 wrote:

Everything seems fine but I'm not sure about bubbling...
Since

00:56:718 ~ 00:58:483 - This part's video scene... [I know it's little safe for 18- people but not sure]

I don't know how should I deal with this ;_;
Needs more confirming orz

Sorry atm orz
I think it is ok :roll:

Here my mod

[General]
01:28:483 - I just feel empty for this break time

[Normal]
01:05:100 (3) - this look better


[Hinacle]
01:09:071 (1) - too close to (6)? or it can be a jump like (4,5,6)?

I think it is ready for bubble
Nice map. :)
Leorda
NI HAOOOOOO, sorry for taking song long orz

Easy
* Since this is an easy diff, make sure that some slider body has clearly visible to make beginner player easy to read while gameplay. Hidden slider body (e.g. 00:02:453 (1)) is sometimes hard to read for noobs (I am pretty not sure, though. Since you are good mapper D:)

00:01:350 (2) - Move to 00:01:130, and extend it as you wish. To make sound feel better while gameplay
01:09:071 (3) - Finish and clap at head slider is kinda weird for me, change something better

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Normal
01:12:600 (5) - When I see this slider at gameplay, the tail slider is almost off-screen
01:40:836 (7,1) - How about you make the slider between this object?
01:43:262 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider? To make better flow? (I am not sure, lol)
01:44:586 (4) - ^
01:48:225 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure if this triplet are hard to read for beginner/average player since this is normal diff. But, it's up to you
01:52:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think 10 combos are too long for normal diff

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Insane
These jumps is for player who always see the hentai visual novel D:

00:13:262 (5,6,7,8) - This jumps is kinda rough for me....
00:44:365 (3) - New combo?
01:14:365 (4) - ^
01:14:586 (1) - Remove new combo?

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This song is reminds me of LEVEL5 -judgelight-
JauiPlaY
hihi~ :)
some suggestions:

[General]

arien666 wrote:

I know it's little safe for 18- people but not sure
The video is fine for me. However, maybe add a caution in the creator's words? That would be more reasonable for bubble/ranked.

[Easy]
00:42:600(1) - starts at 00:42:270.
01:09:733(T) - useless timepoint.
01:10:064(T) - ^

[Normal]
01:00:358(T) - useless timepoint.
01:40:836(7) - move to x321y54?

[Kana's Taiko Oni]
I'm sorry but I could not mod any taiko diffs @_@

[Hinacle]
Awesome diff.

[Insane]
00:58:372(T) - useless timepoint.

Good.
so
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