aesopl19193 wrote:

arien666 wrote:

Everything seems fine but I'm not sure about bubbling...
Since

00:56:718 ~ 00:58:483 - This part's video scene... [I know it's little safe for 18- people but not sure]

I don't know how should I deal with this ;_;
Needs more confirming orz

Sorry atm orz

I think it is ok

[General]
01:28:483 - I just feel empty for this break time X,a short break time for newbie is fair enough.

[Normal]
01:05:100 (3) - this look better Fixed

[Hinacle]
01:09:071 (1) - too close to (6)? or it can be a jump like (4,5,6)? X

Leorda wrote:

Easy
* Since this is an easy diff, make sure that some slider body has clearly visible to make beginner player easy to read while gameplay. Hidden slider body (e.g. 00:02:453 (1)) is sometimes hard to read for noobs (I am pretty not sure, though. Since you are good mapper D:) Will change some if somebody mention this again.

00:01:350 (2) - Move to 00:01:130, and extend it as you wish. To make sound feel better while gameplay X,I'm avoiding a 1/2 click in this diff so no!
01:09:071 (3) - Finish and clap at head slider is kinda weird for me, change something better Fixed

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Normal
01:12:600 (5) - When I see this slider at gameplay, the tail slider is almost off-screen x,NOT REALLY

Something

01:40:836 (7,1) - How about you make the slider between this object? X.
01:43:262 (4) - Add 1 repeating slider? To make better flow? (I am not sure, lol) X,I'm making a pattern here.
01:44:586 (4) - ^ X,^
01:48:225 (2,3,4) - I'm not sure if this triplet are hard to read for beginner/average player since this is normal diff. But, it's up to you O.O I can't see any triplet..
01:52:306 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I think 10 combos are too long for normal diff Fixed!
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Insane
These jumps is for player who always see the hentai visual novel D: But they're fair enough

00:13:262 (5,6,7,8) - This jumps is kinda rough for me.... Why?I like this pattern.
00:44:365 (3) - New combo? Fixed!
01:14:365 (4) - ^ Fixed!
01:14:586 (1) - Remove new combo? Fixed!

JauiPlaY wrote:

[General]

arien666 wrote:

I know it's little safe for 18- people but not sure

The video is fine for me. However, maybe add a caution in the creator's words? That would be more reasonable for bubble/ranked. I think caution is unnecessary.

[Easy]
00:42:600(1) - starts at 00:42:270.X,no.
01:09:733(T) - useless timepoint. Really?
01:10:064(T) - ^ ^

[Normal]
01:00:358(T) - useless timepoint. Fixed!
01:40:836(7) - move to x321y54? Sorry I never use grip snap when I was mapping.

[Insane]
00:58:372(T) - useless timepoint. Fixed!

SapphireGhost wrote:

This looks good overall, but in [Easy] keep in mind that these notes:
00:16:571 (1)
00:30:247 (1)
00:44:806 (1)
Come fairly soon after a spinner for the easiest difficulty, so it might be good to change that a bit. Oh well!

James2250 wrote:

-Yeah that video scene that arken/shiirn mentioned is really pushing it....I would either find a way to censor that out or remove the video. At 01:13:042 mehhhhh.....I guess that can pass I may find some bat/mat/player to comfirm it.
-You shouldn't need a background that is almost 2MB, convert it to JPEG to save filespace (or you can find a smaller, better quality one as Shiirn suggested) Fixed!
-Most things I check have the source listed as "Areas Koisuru Otome no 3H" are you sure the current one is current? Change it to Areas Koisuru Otome no 3H

Normal:
01:05:983 (5,6,1) - move this around so the repeat isn't hidden by the previous hitbursts Fixed!

Some jumps I don't like in Insane but the mapset looks good overall, just need that video issue looked into
I can prob rank after fixes

Shiirn wrote:

Alternatively, you could have just added some lens flare during that one bit, as the rest of the video is very nice and entirely fine.

Shiirn wrote:

Rin, that just means that they'd need to be censored anyway.

Yes, they're from 18+ games, but the song obviously isn't 18+ 8D

If you really need help, PM me in-game, I know some people that can censor this easily. I really like the song and video and want to see it ranked with vid.

Shiirn wrote:

alternatively, storyboard in a censor

/me runs

Sakura Hana wrote:

Rechecking this just in case so James has a 2nd opinion on this.

[Easy]
00:08:409 (6) - Dont use kick sliders on the easiest difficulty i suggest removing a repeat or something from it.
01:06:424 (1) - Once again dont use kick sldiers on the easiest difficulty
01:27:600 (2) - Same as above

That will be all, love fripside songs <3

James2250 wrote:

I guess the SB fits in well enough (even when the video is disabled)

Although the "SAKURA BIG" and "Mini Light" shouldn't need to break the 800x600 SB limit (or 1200x480 if you want them to be tall scrolling images) Is there any wrong with it ? In my mind, not the video but the BG are suitable

Sakura Hana wrote:

Now now, it isnt that hard to resize, and my bad for missing that, but James is right, it needs to be resized

CDFA wrote:

Insane:
00:13:262 (5,6,7,8) - Well this is an odd jump. There's a few more odd jumps in this map too o-o. X,this jump is not that weird,I guess.

Normal:
00:40:836 (6) - Touches accuracy bar. It's not unrankable, but it looks kinda silly. Fixed

Easy:
01:11:277 (1) - Add clap
01:12:159 (3) - Add clap on beginning of slider
X,These are made iti on purpose!

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Easy:
00:49:659 (1,2) - Remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to follow the lyrics (not exactly sure what the combo is following right bnow, but you seem to be following the lyrics in the rest of the song) Fixed!
01:02:012 (3) and 01:16:130 (1) - It annoys me that these combos are inconsistent for no reason (at least none that I can think of)
Fixed something here :/

Normal:
00:20:542 (2) - The overlap with 00:18:777 (4) made this pattern feel messy, and since this diff has notes in a slower fashion in comparison to higher diffs, it doesn't feel like this pattern was helpful to the map Fixed!

Joshua Lost wrote:

Joshua Lost wrote:

噗噗~Congraz~