1. Easy (2,21 stars, 86 notes)
2. Hard (4,77 stars, 219 notes)
3. Normal (4,13 stars, 124 notes)

NotShinta wrote:

General:
Please use more hitsounds: they make the map a lot more interesting and less monotonous. This is vital.

Hard:
00:19:460 (1,2,3,4) (and copypasta) - This spacing is a bit high in comparison to the rest of the map, in my opinion. Funny and AIMod says theyre too close lol also it would be too boring to play without some jumps
01:05:480 (5) - Move this down a bit.Jump
01:12:470 (6) - Space this away from (5) so it doesn't look as clustered and bad.hm not sure here
01:12:761 (7) - Remove this, it doesn't really fit.changed
01:20:043 (7) - Be sure to add a finish here, specifically. And hitsounds on the rest of the map, as I said in General.

Normal:
I'd say this is a bit too close to Hard in terms of difficulty.
00:07:227 (6,7) - Please do not variable stack on the end of sliders in a Normal, space this away.Fixed

Easy:
01:16:548 (3) - Make the start and end points symmetrical Ctrl+H will help.Fixed

Once you fix up your hitsounds, I'll mod this properly.

kevin840310 wrote:

GREAT!
I thought it hard to double click in 0.146s for normal.
Example:
0:06:062--0:06:208
0:07:227--0:07:373 etc.Fixed some of them

Maybe you can use slider to replace it.

Lightgazer wrote:

Still needs hitsounds
especially a Custom Pitched Bell hitsound D, A, Bb (B Flat) would be awesome
also still working on Designs
but the maps general are done

KuraiPettan wrote:

I've made my best to mod it the quickier as I could, here is the mod ~

General
- As your background is mazarine, The combo colour 1 is too dark, having such a dark combo color with this kind of background will make it unreadable while playing the map.Made it Brighter
- Offset +10msum ok Fixed

Easy
- Increase the Approach rate by 1 tick, it will make the map more readable, with AR2, the notes appear too slowly and even if it's an easy difficulty, it's kinda unreadableFixed
01:10:722 (1,2,3) - Move them 1 grid up, there are a bit close from the previous slider and so it looks crowded and the player (as it's an easy difficulty, the player is a newbie) will be disturbed. (Moving the slider 1 grid down can fix the problem too)Fixed by moving the slider
01:11:887 (4,5,6) - Look at this pattern, the distance between (4) and (5) and the distance between (5) and (6) is not the same, it's kinda confusing (and ugly by the same way). So move (6) 1 grid down to fix the problem.Fixed
01:11:887 (4) - Add a new combo mark ? It will look nicer in my opinionok
01:20:188 - Add a muted spinner who ends at 01:22:373 ? So that the map will have a nice end :3Okay Fixed

Normal
- Increase the approach rate by 1 tick, Like the easy difficulty, it will make the map more readableFixed
00:32:567 (1) - This slider is just 1/2 later from the end of the previous spinner, it's not enough for this kind of difficulties, so remove the reverse and move it 1/2 later ?Fixed
00:42:179 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you wanted to make symmetry here, but the pattern is not symmetrical, if you want symmetry, move (4) and (5) on grid right and one grid up.Fixed
01:20:188 - Add a muted spinner who ends at 01:22:373 ? So that the map will have a nice end :3Fixed

Hard
00:19:460 (1,2,3,4) - This jump is a bit random, but that's just my opinion
00:21:790 (1,2,3,4) - You should avoid this kind of jumps after a spinner ! hm if someone else dislike them i will remove them
00:27:033 (3,4,5) - The distance between (3) and (4) and the distance between (4) and (5) is not the same, it's kinda confusing (and ugly by the same way). So move (5) 2 grid up to fix the problem. (don't forget to fix the spacing problem it will cause between (5) and (6) by moving (6) 2 grid upFixed i guess xD
00:28:198 (7,8,9) - Same here, move (7) and (8) 2 grid up.Fixed
00:49:752 (1,2,3,4) - You should avoid this kind of jumps after a spinner ! hm if someone else dislike them i will remove them
01:20:188 - Add a muted spinner who ends at 01:22:373 ? So that the map will have a nice end :3Fixed

Overall, it's a nice map, you've made a great job
Star~
(Can I have your feedbacks about this mod, I want to improve my modding skill )

1. 00:38:402 (1) - Add a whistle on this repetition, it's consistent with what you do on the previos triplet of objects, and on the next triplet of objects.
2. 01:16:558 (3) - Ok I am a symmety lover, and I can still mod unsymmetrical maps. But this slider looks like it could look a little better.

• 
  Seems fine.
  However I feel some incongruity with hitsound...
  I attached my hitsound suggestion.
  I hope it help you. :3

• 
  hmm...I can't find any issue...

• 
  Diff spread is narrow imo.
  How about making this diff harder?

1. 00:15:975 (3) - Remove whistle?
2. 00:21:800 (1,2,3,4) - How about flipping vertically them?(Ctrl + J)
3. 00:25:296 (4) - Remove whistle?

384,76,76558,2,0,B|328:4|256:72|256:72|184:4|128:76,1,300

1. 00:17:723 (2,3) - Maybe replace this with a slider that ends where is the note 3?
2. 00:27:043 (2,3) - ^
3. I suggest you to make this diff simplier,since there are lots of 1/2 notes,but if you want,you can leave this as this is now

1. 00:17:140 (1) - Is this anti-spacing made on purpose?I think it's better to fix this to make the map flower
2. 00:32:868 (1) - 2 grids left to fix the spacing with the slider 2

1. 00:20:198 (4) - Remove this note?
2. 00:22:529 (4) - ^
3. 00:27:334 (5) - One grid up to fix the spacing
4. 00:28:499 (9) - One grid down to fix the spacing
5. 00:48:160 (2) - Remove this niote?
6. 00:50:490 (4) - ^

1. Sliders with 3 and 4 repeat are hard to read for new players, but there is nothing to do here, I think.

1. 00:11:897 (4) Whistle
2. 00:18:888 (4) ^
3. 00:28:208 (4) ^
4. 00:42:189 (3) ^
5. 00:46:849 (3) ^
6. 00:56:169 (2) ^
7. 01:13:063 (1,2) Spacing, use grid level 4 for fix it.
8. 01:19:470 (3) Whistle.

1. HP Drain Rate -1
2. Approach Rate -1
3. Overall Difficulty -1
4. It's a normal diff, you don't need high difficulty.

1. 00:36:946 (4,5) Spacing.
2. 00:38:985 (2,3) ^

1. Approach Rate 6 ? As in Normal diff? I say 7.

1. 00:21:800 (1,2,3,4) Creativity ~ or Ctrl+J
2. 00:24:713 (3,4) Spacing
3. 00:26:169 (6,1) ^
4. 00:27:626 (6) This slider looks bad
5. 00:52:674 (2,3) Spacing

150,287,52674,1,4
87,184,53257,2,0,B|117:145|178:145|220:187|220:187|261:147|323:147|355:192,1,300,2|0

385,75,76558,2,0,B|355:33|293:33|252:73|252:73|210:31|149:31|119:70,1,300,2|0
83,117,78014,6,0,B|51:141|35:181|51:221|83:245,1,150,0|0
132,278,78888,1,0