1. Dis (5 stars, 319 notes)
2. Hard (4.71 stars, 194 notes)
3. impossiblexu (1.77 stars, 85 notes)
4. JauiPlaY (2.98 stars, 94 notes)
5. Kana's Taiko Oni (4.89 stars, 459 notes)
6. KPY (4.87 stars, 253 notes)

net45291 wrote:

SPOILER

Can I guest ? O w O

<3 star ~!

vivicat wrote:

找了张也许好点的图 QQ给你
加油/

Combo5 : 168,255,81

JauiPlaY wrote:

HI~
感覺缺少一個紅色的對比色combo,現在這樣看上去很奇怪
試試看添加這個顏色吧:

Combo5 : 168,255,81

名字改成JauiPlaY's Normal就好
go~

kanpakyin wrote:

ok.

impossiblexu wrote:

嘿嘿XD


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[attachment=0:c4d5c]nano.RIPE - Hana no Iro (TV Size) (Disoy) [impossiblexu].osu[/attachment:c4d5c]

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1. Remove sherrie__fay from tags as the skinners usually don't deserve it. But if you still insist upon keeping him in, it's okay for me.(Just point it out)
2. There are 2 different PreviewTime in the difficulties. I listed them as below, pls pick the correct one up and unite them.
3. impossiblexu - 52978
4. JauiPlaY - 52978
5. Hard - 53003
6. KPY - 52978
7. Dis - 53003
8. Kana's Taiko Oni - 52978

1. Nothing could be picked out.

1. 00:01:004 ---> 00:10:312 No volume 85% pls, sound loud. You could set it as volume 45% which is a good choice.
2. 00:09:003 (3) - Add finish(C2) on the end of the slider with volume 75%.
3. Map itslef has no main problem, but as for the hitsound, I dont wanna talk about it. If you wanna improve it, catch me in-game.

1. 01:15:645 (5) - Switch combo? otherwise the one at 01:16:311 looks like alone since both of them are a symmetrical pair.
2. 01:25:645 (2) - Switch combo?(If let me map this pattern, I'll perfer marking new combo)

1. 00:22:811 (7) - What about changing to a slider of 1/4 beat and reverse once?
2. 00:30:311 (6) - Switch combo?
3. 01:00:811 (3) - Stack it completely on the start of the previous slider? Would look better.
4. 01:04:811 (1) - Suggest removing finish (sound not good)
5. 01:08:978 (2) - ^
6. 01:15:811 (3) - Suggest removing whistle(sound not good)

1. HP Drain +1? (It's a bit low with HP 5, even increasing it as 6 is not high enough imo)
2. 00:41:145 (2) - Switch combo?(Coz both spacing and rhythm are changed)
3. 00:48:812 (1) - Remove new combo and switch combo at 00:49:312?
4. 00:50:312 (8) - Switch combo and remove new combo at 00:50:478 (For the consistency with the pattern at 00:50:812 (1,2,3))
5. 01:12:978 (3) - Switch combo?(Coz of another new pattern)
6. Your maps always give me a deep impression especially those hitsound stuff. Good job.

gdeath wrote:

[KPY]:

1. 00:22:811 (7) - What about changing to a slider of 1/4 beat and reverse once? X.I think it's fine now.
2. 00:30:311 (6) - Switch combo? k
3. 01:00:811 (3) - Stack it completely on the start of the previous slider? Would look better. X.Stack here looks bad :<
4. 01:04:811 (1) - Suggest removing finish (sound not good)
5. 01:08:978 (2) - ^
6. 01:15:811 (3) - Suggest removing whistle(sound not good)Hitfinish all fixed!

1. You have a silent .wav file in your map that you use as a hitsound for notes (like 00:50:311 (1,2) - in Hard...), which is unrankable.I understand why you have this though, but you can't use it alone, you need to add other hitsounds on top of it.

1. Lower the AR by 1 ? Such high AR is rather mean for an Easy.

1. 00:13:645 (3,4) - Very confusing and unexpected jump. Why would you place this note so far from the previous one ? If you don't want to change the spacing, at least add a new combo on (4) to make the jump readable.

1. Remove countdown since the other diffs don't have it.
2. Huh. Why the streams ?...

Odaril wrote:

Please reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why. Remember these are all suggestions.
Also, if you have any question, feel free to ask me in-game

General

1. You have a silent .wav file in your map that you use as a hitsound for notes (like 00:50:311 (1,2) - in Hard...), which is unrankable.I understand why you have this though, but you can't use it alone, you need to add other hitsounds on top of it.

impossiblexu

1. Lower the AR by 1 ? Such high AR is rather mean for an Easy.

JauiPlaY
Seems fine too.

Hard

1. 00:13:645 (3,4) - Very confusing and unexpected jump. Why would you place this note so far from the previous one ? If you don't want to change the spacing, at least add a new combo on (4) to make the jump readable.

KPY

1. Remove countdown since the other diffs don't have it.
2. Huh. Why the streams ?...

Dis
This feels so... artificial. The difficulty feels forecefully added to the map. I mean, these jumps and 1/4 seem so unintuitive to me. I have the feeling this Insane was made only for the sake of adding an Insane to the mapset. When I play it, I have to sightread all the patterns, because I can't trust what I feel of the song, and this results in me having little fun when playing.

Kana's Taiko Oni
Plays fine, although it's rather uneven.

happy30 wrote:

[b][KPY]

00:03:670 (1,2,3,4) - try to keep the rhythm simple in the intro Fixed
00:51:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Maybe remove the repeat sliders as they make the stream a bit confusing for me >< Well..Remove the beginning one..
01:25:645 (1,2,1,2) - I personally find this spacing a bit unfitting for the end, the jump between 2 and 1 just seems weird for me >< O_OReally? anyway..I just use a square jump to instead of..