1. Fatal Oni (8.3 stars, 1106 notes)
2. Futsuu (2.87 stars, 336 notes)
3. Kantan (1.69 stars, 191 notes)
4. Muzukashii (3.4 stars, 568 notes)
5. Oni (4.74 stars, 823 notes)

Fantazy wrote:

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Oni

00:11:691 - 這每5個note一組 至少每兩組變化一下?
01:29:660 - 這陀也是 排法也換一下?_?
^ will consider about it, but not until I have time.
02:03:163 (315,316,317,318,319) - d開頭 建議dkddk?
^ lost consistency because it start with d which are different with those 5plets beforehand.

你的Muzu futsuu kantan也放的太死板?w?
跟鼓音歸跟鼓音 至少也換一下顏色?A?
不然別都排一樣 這樣太反Fan星人了?_?

嘛 good luck~~~

1. 00:01:945 (1) - You should use variety for here.
2. 00:21:741 - Same patterns are boring..
3. 00:48:543 (174,175,176,177) - I gave same suggestion for Fatal Oni
4. 01:04:229 (258) - Move to 01:04:305 - for emphasize vocal
5. 01:08:340 - Vocal emphasis would be better here.Try it something like that:
   
6. 01:18:087 (339,340,341,342) - ^
7. 01:49:761 (141,142,143,144,145) - ^

1. 00:07:427 (11,12,13,14,15) - I don't think this part is same as previous part.
2. 00:09:406 - to 00:09:711 - There is 1/4 drum sound.
3. 00:14:051 - Add a note for variety.
4. 00:16:488 - Same above
5. 00:31:183 - I couldn't understand what did you follow here.That section seems weird
6. 00:48:543 (334,335,336,337) - These notes is not as strong as others.
7. 01:00:269 (464,465) - These are unnecessary imo,delete and 01:00:422 (466) - add finisher.
8. 01:29:660 - Same suggestion as 00:31:183 -

zigizigiefe wrote:

yo from my queue o/

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:01:945 (1) - You should use variety for here. >??????????
2. 00:21:741 - Same patterns are boring.. >Made it harder
3. 00:48:543 (174,175,176,177) - I gave same suggestion for Fatal Oni >What are you talking about?
4. 01:04:229 (258) - Move to 01:04:305 - for emphasize vocal >I don't map to vocal at this part.
5. 01:08:340 - Vocal emphasis would be better here.Try it something like that:
   Did until 287, others seems pointless and the guitar fxs need not anymore emphasis.
6. 01:18:087 (339,340,341,342) - ^ patterns not capable to fit xx_xx part
7. 01:49:761 (141,142,143,144,145) - ^

same ^^

[Fatal Oni]

1. 00:07:427 (11,12,13,14,15) - I don't think this part is same as previous part. >Building consistency here
2. 00:09:406 - to 00:09:711 - There is 1/4 drum sound. Density flow here
3. 00:14:051 - Add a note for variety. I did variation at further parts
4. 00:16:488 - Same above ^
5. 00:31:183 - I couldn't understand what did you follow here.That section seems weird Guitar but with some oversimplification
6. 00:48:543 (334,335,336,337) - These notes is not as strong as others. >so what you want me to do here?
7. 01:00:269 (464,465) - These are unnecessary imo,delete and 01:00:422 (466) - add finisher. >Done
8. 01:29:660 - Same suggestion as 00:31:183 -

good luck

Chocola_2287 wrote:

zigizigiefe wrote:

yo from my queue o/

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:01:945 (1) - You should use variety for here. >?????????? >I accidentally pasted wrong part.I gave that suggestion for 00:01:945 (1) - Sorry.
2. 00:48:543 (174,175,176,177) - I gave same suggestion for Fatal Oni >What are you talking about? > I meant "These notes aren't as strong as others.So remove finisher." But I just realized that suggestion was bad.
   
   [Fatal Oni]
   
   1. 00:48:543 (334,335,336,337) - These notes are not as strong as others. >so what you want me to do here? >As I said,I just realized that suggestion was bad.

good luck

Thanks for mod.

Starfy wrote:

nice sci-fi

iloveyou4ever wrote:

nice map wow
it's so good,especially those 1/6
it's fucking good and extraordinary
why BNs still haven't ranked this jesus dude

zigizigiefe wrote:

wtf was that,my hands hurt

_yu68 wrote:

Hi~
If there is something you can't understand because of my not good English, please chat or PM.

mod

[Kantan]

1. 00:06:208 - add kat? because I felt it is similar to 00:03:163 (2) - ok
2. 00:19:305 - or 00:19:914 - add any circle? since there is 1/4 drum Hm I think thats not compulsory to fit 1/4 drum
3. from 00:21:437 - to 00:26:005 - invert don and kat? to represent the difference vocal (and make diversity) I don't put the focus mainly on vocal. I focus heavily on instruments only.
4. from 00:31:183 - to 00:35:752 - ^ ^
5. 01:38:340 (19) - move to 01:38:188 - ? to fit to drum Applied, but idk if this 1/2 is accepted or not

[Futsuu]

1. 00:19:305 - 00:19:914 - add any circle? same reason as Kantan >For this I added, but is to improve the spread.
2. 00:23:112 (7) - move to 00:22:503 - ? for diversity of rhythm
3. 00:27:985 (23) - move to 00:27:376 - ? ^
4. 00:31:945 (36) - move to 00:32:249 - ? ^
5. 00:36:818 (56) - move to 00:37:122 - ? ^
6. 00:39:254 (66) - move to 00:39:102 - ? (and change to kat?) to fit to vocal (and make diversity)
   ^ Fixed in my own way, suddenly pop-up an idea to map here.
7. 01:01:640 - or 01:01:792 - add don? to make it easier to read I added a d on 01:01:792
8. 01:04:229 (123) - move to 01:04:381 - ? to fit to vocal
9. 01:08:493 (138) - move to 01:08:569 - and 01:08:645 (139) - move to 01:08:797 - ? to fit to vocal and drum ^Applied all 2
10. 01:11:386 - or 01:11:538 - add don? same pattern
11. 01:13:975 (156) - move to 01:14:127 - ? same pattern
12. 01:18:239 (171) - move to 01:18:315 - and 01:18:391 (172) - move to 01:18:543 - ? same pattern
    ^same as previous stuff
13. from 01:19:914 - to 01:41:234 - I think that this part should be made more difficult. At present the difference with Muzukashii is too big. Nerfed both diff.
14. 01:38:340 (19) - move to 01:38:188 - ? to fit to drum
15. 01:43:061 - or 01:43:214 - add don? same pattern
16. 01:45:650 (35) - move to 01:45:802 - ? same pattern
17. 01:49:914 (50) - move to 01:49:990 - and 01:50:066 (51) - move to 01:50:219 - ? same pattern

^same as previous
[Muzukashii]

1. 00:13:214 - add don? for diversity of rhythm
2. 00:15:650 - ^
3. 00:19:229 - 00:19:305 - add kat? since there is 1/4 drum
4. 00:19:686 - 00:19:914 - add don and 00:19:762 (66) - change to don? ^
5. 01:01:945 - add don? to fit to vocal and make diversity of rhythm
   ^All accepted
6. 01:03:163 - add kat? I added on 01:04:381 instead
7. 01:07:274 (285) - move to 01:07:579 - ? ^
8. 01:08:493 (292) - move to 01:08:569 - and 01:08:645 (293) - delete? to fit to drum and vocal
9. 01:11:691 - add don? same pattern
10. 01:12:909 - add kat? ^
11. 01:16:945 (340,341) - delete and 01:17:325 - add kat? same pattern
12. 01:18:239 (348) - move to 01:18:315 - and 01:18:391 (349) - delete? same pattern
    ^Fixed in my own way.
13. 01:38:340 (87) - move to 01:38:188 - ? to fit to drum >Done
14. 01:43:366 - add don? same pattern
15. 01:44:584 - add kat? ^
16. 01:48:620 (134,135) - delete and 01:49:000 - add kat? same pattern
17. 01:49:914 (142) - move to 01:49:990 - and 01:50:066 (143) - delete? same pattern
18. from 01:51:589 - to 02:00:117 - I think that you should follow 1/1 drum in this part.
    This rhythm is often used in other parts. So if you use same rhythm in this part, I think that diversity will become poor
    
    1. 01:51:741 (152) - change to don and move to 01:51:894 -
    2. 01:52:503 - add don
    3. 01:52:960 (158) - change to don and move to 01:53:112 -
    4. 01:53:721 - add don
    5. 01:54:178 (164) - change to don and move to 01:54:330 -
    6. 01:55:320 - add don, 01:55:396 (170) - change to don, and 01:55:549 - add kat? for diversity of rhythm
    7. 01:56:615 (177) - change to don and move to 01:56:767 -
    8. 01:57:985 - add don
    9. 01:59:203 - add don
       
       ^All fixed

[Oni]

1. 00:16:335 (80) - move to 00:16:183 - ?(and 00:16:259 (79) - change to kat? ) to represent difference of flow
2. 00:51:208 (44) - move to 00:51:285 - ? for diversity of rhythm
3. 00:53:645 (65) - move to 00:53:721 - ? ^
4. 00:54:863 (75,76) - delete and 00:55:396 - add kat? to fit to vocal while securing 1/1
5. 00:56:082 (84) - move to 00:56:158 - ? for diversity of rhythm
   ^Creative mapping here. I do think that current pattern fits the song well.
6. 01:38:340 (128) - move to 01:38:188 - ? to fit to drum >OK

[Fatal Oni]

1. 00:07:884 - 00:08:188 - add kat? since there is drum
2. 00:09:406 - 00:09:483 - 00:09:635 - ^
   ^there is a density flow here.
3. from 00:15:346 - to 00:16:564 - change d_k_ddk_d_kd_kk_ -> d_k_ddd_dkkddkkkk? to represent difference of flow
4. 00:19:229 - add kat? to represent difference of flow and make diversity of rhythm Lost consistency with previous patterns
5. 00:31:640 (199,200,201,202,203) - change to kdddk or kkddk? to fit to drum and make diversity of color scheme
6. 00:32:858 (213,214,215,216,217) - ^
7. 00:34:076 (227,228,229,230,231) - ^
8. 00:35:295 (241,242,243,244,245) - ^
9. 00:36:513 (255,256,257,258,259) - ^
10. 00:37:731 (269,270,271,272,273) - ^
11. 00:38:950 (283,284,285,286,287) - ^
    ^ ddkkd instead
12. 00:39:787 (293) - delete, 00:39:939 (295,296) - change to kat, and 00:40:092 - add kat? to fit to drum
    ^It lost consistency to previous pattern in terms of how I place the patterns.
13. 01:08:493 (537) - 01:08:721 (540) - delete and 01:08:417 (536) - 01:08:645 (539) - change to don? to emphasize 3/4 sounds >OK
14. 01:09:711 (553,554) - ctrl+g? to make it easier to read not a valid reason to change this tho.
15. 01:18:239 (630) - 01:18:467 (633) - delete? same pattern
16. 01:19:457 (646,647) - ctrl+g? same pattern
    ^same as previous 2.
17. 01:27:934 (744) - 01:28:239 (749) - 01:28:594 (755) - 01:28:899 (760) - change to don? to make it easier to read and make natural flow to 01:29:051 (762,763,764,765,766,767,768,769,770,771) - >Actually no, the number of k in 1/6 pattern indicates the pitch of the guitar, so I cant change anything here.
18. 01:30:117 (778,779,780,781,782) - change to kdddk or kkddk? to fit to drum and make diversity of color scheme
19. 01:31:335 (792,793,794,795,796) - ^
20. 01:32:554 (806,807,808,809,810) - ^
21. 01:33:772 (820,821,822,823,824) - ^
22. 01:34:990 (834,835,836,837,838) - ^
23. 01:36:208 (848,849,850,851,852) - ^
24. 01:38:340 (859) - move to 01:38:188 - ? to fit to drum
    ^same as before
25. 01:49:914 (960) - 01:50:142 (963) - delete and 01:49:838 (959) - 01:50:066 (962) - change to don? same pattern >OK
26. 01:52:503 - add any circle? same reason as Muzukashii
27. 01:53:721 - ^
28. 01:54:939 - ^
29. 01:56:158 - ^
    ^ I want to keep the d k ddk d kd _k pattern here tho, it has a better cohesion to the song.

good luck!

Smallwu wrote:

安安
[General]
Offset出了一些問題 所有難度都得一樣
所以選擇吧! 1945 (guest diff) or 1940 (yours) 因為我聽不出來:3
[Kantan]
00:11:691 (10) - D 因為聽起來很讚?_? 前面那部分幾乎沒音效了 到這裡突然爆開來 所以我認為能用Finisher

00:20:219 (1) - 結束在 00:21:132 感覺比較合適. 只打4下也太少了=w= >Blame the OD

00:31:183 - 00:40:929 - 修飾一下唄 全部都是xox xox xox

00:31:183 (21) - D? 因鼓聲激昂(?)了起來

00:50:675 (56) - D 理由近似第一條, 且這裡放D剛好可以形成一個八拍長的Finisher段落 [00:48:239 - 00:50:675] >I did not use D for other diffs.

00:56:158 (67,70) - k k? 當作與前面d d ddd k k kkk的區別 Identical parts should use same patterns tbh.

01:24:787 (1) - D? ^^

01:33:620 (9,10) - Ctrl+G? 維持一致性(讓最後一顆皆為k) 且在(10)那裡剛好有個鈴鐺"咚"的音效 (8)實際上應低於他 既然(8)用kat 那(10)也跟著用kat感覺比較適合 I prefer using reversed patterns

01:38:340 (19) - Move to 01:38:188 to follow drums 另外建議換成k或許比較適合 (DDD KKK)

02:03:772 (1) - K 從 02:03:163 開始吉他聲便開始升高 到(1)那個位置是最高音 所以換成K較好 >I don't emphasis the pitch here. I emphasis the percussion here only so D.
[Futsuu]
你是不是以Kantan為基底下去做的awa

00:11:691 (18) - D 原因同Kantan

00:20:219 (1) - 結束在 00:21:132 原因同Kantan

00:21:437 - 00:31:183 - 弄些花樣? 因為全部都是k d kd 至少像後面那樣kd dk / kd kk也行
00:30:574 - Add k because drums Consistency fml ;w;

00:50:675 (92) - D 原因同Kantan

01:09:406 (142,143) - Ctrl+G 或直接換成KK to follow guitar pitch I am following vocal here.

01:19:153 (175,176) - ^ ^

01:18:239 (171,172) - Remove them and add k at 01:18:315 - 因為放note在紅線上真的很怪 那邊完全沒有任何音效

01:24:787 (1) - D?

01:33:620 (9,10) - Ctrl+G? 原因同Kantan

01:38:340 (19) - Move to 01:38:188 to follow drums 另外或許可以換成K

01:50:828 (54,55) - Ctrl+G 或直接換成KK to follow guitar pitch

01:49:914 (50,51) - Remove them and add k at 01:49:990 - 因為放note在紅線上很怪 那邊完全沒有音效

01:58:899 (82,86) - k k? 當作與d d ddd k k kkk的區別

02:03:772 (1) - K 原因同Kantan

=====
抱歉 這次的摸摸就這樣唄 過敏超煩躁=口=
GL with Rank!

1. 00:20:219 - I don't see what is the purpose of this spinner. Despite the melody background, I think you should remove this since this spinner looks very odd.
2. 00:36:056 - This Finisher note isn't a suitable place for this section. Remove it. Also, the intensity doesn't raise up.
3. 00:49:153 - Remove Finisher since it is too complicated to play for beginner players.
4. 00:50:066 - Same goes as above but this part doesn't have strong melody or anything.

1. 00:20:219 - Same what I told you in Kantan
2. 00:50:066 - Same as Kantan.
3. 01:08:340 - This part looks questionable. I don't think this 1/4 snapping note in 01:08:569 and 01:09:178 is easy to play for Futsuu players. Please, remove both of them and follow 2/2 rhythm I guess? Also, remove some of the Finisher, too complex for Futsuu players.
4. 01:18:087 and 01:49:762 - Same goes as here, remove notes on 1/4 snapping

1. 00:20:219 - Same as Kantan.
2. 01:08:340 - With the opposite mod from Futsuu, please follow the 1/4 snapping timeline like in Futsuu. Because it is acceptable and hard enough for intermediate players. Same goes as here 01:18:087 please do it.
3. 01:25:244 - Pattern looks a bit overmaped and quite long. Maybe cut off a note? For instance, remove this note in 01:26:158 to emphasize the guitar better Same goes as here 01:27:224 but need to remove a lot of notes.

davidminh0111 wrote:

Hello Kami, from my queue:

[Kantan]

1. 00:20:219 - I don't see what is the purpose of this spinner. Despite the melody background, I think you should remove this since this spinner looks very odd. >Spinner is emphasizing the 1/4 guitar. The end lands on where the heavy fx is.
2. 00:36:056 - This Finisher note isn't a suitable place for this section. Remove it. Also, the intensity doesn't raise up.
3. 00:49:153 - Remove Finisher since it is too complicated to play for beginner players.
4. 00:50:066 - Same goes as above but this part doesn't have strong melody or anything. >Did this but for 4/1 break

[Futsuu]

1. 00:20:219 - Same what I told you in Kantan
2. 00:50:066 - Same as Kantan. >This, however, I keep it as it is to maintain the spread.
3. 01:08:340 - This part looks questionable. I don't think this 1/4 snapping note in 01:08:569 and 01:09:178 is easy to play for Futsuu players. Please, remove both of them and follow 2/2 rhythm I guess? Also, remove some of the Finisher, too complex for Futsuu players.
4. 01:18:087 and 01:49:762 - Same goes as here, remove notes on 1/4 snapping >No change to accompany with vocal and instrument

[Muzukashii]

1. 00:20:219 - Same as Kantan.
2. 01:08:340 - With the opposite mod from Futsuu, please follow the 1/4 snapping timeline like in Futsuu. Because it is acceptable and hard enough for intermediate players. Same goes as here 01:18:087 please do it.
3. 01:25:244 - Pattern looks a bit overmaped and quite long. Maybe cut off a note? For instance, remove this note in 01:26:158 to emphasize the guitar better Same goes as here 01:27:224 but need to remove a lot of notes. >I am not willing to change this because this is the climax of the guitar instrument and hence should be slightly overmapped to emphasize this.

Upper diff seems fine to me.
Good luck.