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Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi - Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakar

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Magical Pokie
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年8月4日 at 16:28:28

Artist: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi
Title: Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakare
Source: CLANNAD
Tags: OST Furukawa Okazaki
BPM: 100
Filesize: 3699kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. DANGO (3.39 stars, 147 notes)
  2. Small Dream (0.78 stars, 80 notes)
  3. Wmf's Taiko (4.56 stars, 283 notes)
Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi - Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakare
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yeah.......

Thanks!!!???.S_h_i_a.nymph.Mystica.LKs and a lot of people for star and advice lol and mat
Mat Bat
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Thanks LKs for the music cut 8:)

now i'm add wmf's diff>< thanks!!!
offest change lol

and new timing by LKs
Last edited by Magical Pokie , edited 10 times in total.
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加油
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謝謝~
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:P 围观602和前辈
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[General]:
  • ～tags: CLANNAD
  • ～如果所有难度都做这么长的话，把MP3未做部分切掉，并在合适的位置淡出 然后full submit一下
[Small Dream]
  • ～建议Distance Spacing+0.4 :P
[Normal Dream]
  • ～00:41:824 (2,3) - 建议重新考虑排列，不被Slider挡住
  • ～01:04:024 (1) - 这里不太合 可以尝试一下这样:
  • ～01:15:424 (5) - ^
  • ～01:33:424 (5) - 加slider拉到01:33:724
  • ～01:47:224 (5) - New combo
[DANGO]
  • ～Beat snap Divisor 改为 1/2 or 1/4 试试，尝试打一些自己自己的节奏

先暂时看这么多 :P 加油
Nymph
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General:
Grid level 用3比较好吧
后面用不到的MP3要剪掉
没有SB文件的话 OSB要删除

Small Dream:
个人建议:参数太低了吧 建议AR+2 OD+1 HP+1 circle size+1 （圈好大..)
KIAI音量+10 前面音量-10 FINISH有点吵 似乎可以单独下绿线把FINISH变小点声

Normal Dream:
00:28:924 (1,1,1) - 这3个太丑了 想想用别的节奏吧
00:38:524 (1) - 开头用这个HITSOUND也许是个好主意 但是相比别的HITSOUND还是声音有点大 降低点音量 结尾的FINISH也是一样 而且这几个HITSOUND都没有CLAP 后面再用CLAP感觉有点突兀
00:45:724 (1) - 这个尾FINISH没什么必要
01:04:024 (1) - SLIDER回复这么多次和摆满CLAP都不是什么好主意
01:36:124 (1) - 在中间节奏用这个转盘感觉好应付
01:48:724 (1) - 01:52:924 (1) - 1星半用这样长度的转盘感觉有点短
这个DIFF总体感觉就是不知道到底是EASY还是NORMAL 因为有的地方节奏很空 建议重新排一下部分节奏

Dango:
00:36:724 (1) - 转盘结尾声音太大了 降低10试试 这里用FINISH感觉还不赖
00:55:624 (5) - 这里没必要静音吧
KIAI提高音量吧 听不见HITSOUND了 CLAP的排放有点乱 试着自己仔细听一下

先这么多建议吧
Magical Pokie
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好吧，MAt們快來啊
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
看到是渚童鞋的主题曲 于是爬进来了

[General]:
  1. source: CLANNAD
  2. OST移到tags里去
  3. 320Kbps... 换个128Kbps~192Kbps的过来 foobar/千千都能转 转完可能需要微调offset Audition另存的话好像就没这个问题(?
  4. tags里的anime和dango都去掉... Furukawa可以加进去 不过鉴于后面改姓了所以可以把Okazaki也加进去(死
  5. hitsounds暂时不吐槽 建议在每个小节的开始和最中间用 这曲子暴简单的 弄那么花搞的得不偿失
[DANGO]:
  1. 00:46:024 (2,3,4) - 这个spacing很丑啊... 关掉grid snap调一下 后面的大概也需要动 老实说这里的1/2音感觉完全没有存在的必要
  2. 00:52:924 (1) - 压1/4音是为什么呢?
  3. 00:56:224 (1) - 完全out了
  4. 01:02:224 (3) - 这个删了吧
  5. 01:11:824 (T) - 加note
  6. 01:14:524 (2,3,4) - 这里可以试试01:14:524 01:15:124作为slider起点 01:15:724~01:16:624全部用1/2note 01:16:024 (5) - 这个slider简直out的不像话啊 不能忍了
  7. 01:21:724 (3) - 这样使用slider是不错的 一个重音作为起点
  8. 这不到一半就没了啊 这耐心让人内牛
[Small Dream]:
  1. 00:25:324 (3,4,5) - spacing
  2. 01:37:924 (3,1) - 挨太近了吧
  3. 01:39:724 (1) - 为什么是一个半小节的长度 o.o? 一个小节或者半个小节都成啊
  4. 整体看叠得太多 不适合当最低难 而且spacing上看 忽大忽小 x_x
  5. 以及 没做完
老实说现在找MAT为时尚早 先重新构思一下 多想想除了横平竖直以外的花样 然后做完了 再在hitsounds上研究一下 找modder多看看再说吧.
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie

Colin Hou wrote:

看到是渚童鞋的主题曲 于是爬进来了

[General]:
  1. source: CLANNAD
  2. OST移到tags里去
  3. 320Kbps... 换个128Kbps~192Kbps的过来 foobar/千千都能转 转完可能需要微调offset Audition另存的话好像就没这个问题(?
  4. tags里的anime和dango都去掉... Furukawa可以加进去 不过鉴于后面改姓了所以可以把Okazaki也加进去(死
  5. hitsounds暂时不吐槽 建议在每个小节的开始和最中间用 这曲子暴简单的 弄那么花搞的得不偿失
[DANGO]:
  1. 00:46:024 (2,3,4) - 这个spacing很丑啊... 关掉grid snap调一下 后面的大概也需要动 老实说这里的1/2音感觉完全没有存在的必要
  2. 00:52:924 (1) - 压1/4音是为什么呢?
  3. 00:56:224 (1) - 完全out了
  4. 01:02:224 (3) - 这个删了吧
  5. 01:11:824 (T) - 加note
  6. 01:14:524 (2,3,4) - 这里可以试试01:14:524 01:15:124作为slider起点 01:15:724~01:16:624全部用1/2note 01:16:024 (5) - 这个slider简直out的不像话啊 不能忍了
  7. 01:21:724 (3) - 这样使用slider是不错的 一个重音作为起点
  8. 这不到一半就没了啊 这耐心让人内牛
[Small Dream]:
  1. 00:25:324 (3,4,5) - spacing
  2. 01:37:924 (3,1) - 挨太近了吧
  3. 01:39:724 (1) - 为什么是一个半小节的长度 o.o? 一个小节或者半个小节都成啊
  4. 整体看叠得太多 不适合当最低难 而且spacing上看 忽大忽小 x_x
  5. 以及 没做完
老实说现在找MAT为时尚早 先重新构思一下 多想想除了横平竖直以外的花样 然后做完了 再在hitsounds上研究一下 找modder多看看再说吧.


壓力絕大
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie
以及 没做完


做完了，不會剪啊
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie
那Moder們快來啊
Colin Hou
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这曲子为什么要剪 o.o
Magical Pokie
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o.o後面都空了
Colin Hou
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Colin Hou
所以说为什么要空掉 =。=

因为太长了么? 不太可能
因为不想做下去了? 这个倒是有可能

如果做事只有这几分热度的话 做一张能rank的图可能对你来说很难了 +w+
Tenshi-nyan
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クラナド
★★★
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie
.——.繼續
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie

Colin Hou wrote:

所以说为什么要空掉 =。=

因为太长了么? 不太可能
因为不想做下去了? 这个倒是有可能

如果做事只有这几分热度的话 做一张能rank的图可能对你来说很难了 +w+



日 ^
LKs
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你的潜力越发的大了
可惜不能射三颗 8-)
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie

LKs wrote:

你的潜力越发的大了
可惜不能射三颗 8-)

LKs你從昨天晚上就說我有潛力，求解釋
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie
好吧真相弄清了继续找MAT- -
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Star~★
Mystica
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[easy]
00:34:924 跟右边对齐吧lol
01:06:124 敢拉好看点么

[Normal]
00:45:724 敢排的好看点么
01:01:024 有种方法叫做复制-粘贴

敢把不需要的部分剪切掉么 超过20%没map就要切歌这都50%了D:
顺便可以去老师的神薙下面偷几个比如风铃的声音会增效更多
大概就是这样以上D:
Magical Pokie
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Mystica wrote:

[easy]
00:34:924 跟右边对齐吧lol
01:06:124 敢拉好看点么

[Normal]
00:45:724 敢排的好看点么
01:01:024 有种方法叫做复制-粘贴

敢把不需要的部分剪切掉么 超过20%没map就要切歌这都50%了D:
顺便可以去老师的神薙下面偷几个比如风铃的声音会增效更多
大概就是这样以上D:


十分感谢
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie
o.o 感谢LKs切歌
Shohei Ohtani
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Do I smell a mod?!

Overall:
Cut the mp3. You're not even using half of it, so make it fade out >w<~.

The diff that isn't easy:
00:36:724 (1) - Maybe make this either louder, or make it soft, so there isn't a pop.
000:56:224 (1) - Touching HP bar.
01:45:724 (1) - Kinda random spinner you got there. Seems almost. . . lazy!

Easy:
01:39:724 (1) - I don't like this slider for a number of reasons. You could possibly add more points to it so it looks better and more fine-tuned, and its touching the score.

Cool stuff.
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie

CDFA wrote:

Do I smell a mod?!

Overall:
Cut the mp3. You're not even using half of it, so make it fade out >w<~. I'm cut lol

The diff that isn't easy:
00:36:724 (1) - Maybe make this either louder, or make it soft, so there isn't a pop.
000:56:224 (1) - Touching HP bar.
01:45:724 (1) - Kinda random spinner you got there. Seems almost. . . lazy!

Easy:
01:39:724 (1) - I don't like this slider for a number of reasons. You could possibly add more points to it so it looks better and more fine-tuned, and its touching the score.

Cool stuff.


thanks
indyinyou
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indyinyou
[Dango]

about hitsound i think use whistle better than clap

00:19:924 : remove fin add whistle
00:20:524 : remove clap
00:21:124 : whistle
00:22:324 : remove newcombo add whistle
00:23:524 : whistle
00:24:424 : remove clap
00:24:724 : whistle
00:25:324 : remove newcombo
00:27:124 : remove clap add whistle
00:29:224 : remove clap
00:29:524 : add whistle
00:30:124 : remove newcombo
00:38:524 : use soft hitsound better
00:40:924 : remove clap
00:43:624 : ^
eldnl
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eldnl
[General]

- The hitcircle is different for the sliders and circles, this is a problem?
- The mp3 is too long, you must cut it.

[Small Dream]

I don't like that use claps in songs like this, sounds bad for me, maybe if you change these claps for whistles?
00:31:924 (6) Remove finish in the middle.
00:33:724 (6,1,2,3) Don't stack notes under the slider in the easier difficulty, this is hard to read for beginners.
00:48:124 (7,1) This note is too close to the previous.
01:01:924 (5,1) Remove the finish and add in (1)
01:06:124 (1) Remove new combo
01:09:724 (5) Fix this slider using grid level 3. Something like this: http://puu.sh/3OGT
01:15:724 (1,2,3,1) Please unstack these notes, and in (3) use a soft finish, sounds better.
01:24:124 (5) Finish at the end.
01:30:124 (1) Finish
01:49:924 (1) Remove new combo and add finish at the end.
01:51:724 (1) Add a note here and move the spin pleaseee.

[DANGO]

Approach Rate 6
Same whistles suggestions :3
For hard and insane difficulties you must use grid level 3 or 4.
00:19:924 (3) Remove finish
00:35:524 (1) Remove new combo
00:56:224 (1) With this slider you don't following nothing in the music, the sounds is in the white tick. Remove new combo too.
00:57:724 (2) Add here.
01:01:024 (5) You don't follow the rhythm with this note, move to the next white tick.
01:11:824 (1,2) Stack this perfectly under the slider.
01:19:624 (1) Remove new combo.
01:20:524 (1,1) Inconsistent spacing.
01:32:524 (2,1,2,3,1) ^ Same
01:39:124 (1,1) Remove new combo here or in the next slider.
01:41:524 (1) Remove new combo
01:42:424 (1,2,3) Spacing
01:45:724 (x) Add a note and move the spin?
01:54:124 (1) Make this just a note and add a soft finish.

I love this song ~
Star.
Kawayi Rika
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神曲啊神图啊~~~~~~~
加油~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+++++++++++星~~~
Roddie
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Hi.

General
  1. Wow... There so you've ended on 01:54:724, huh? You know, if could save a lot of space if you just cut the mp3. :p
    If you can't cut it, ask me in-game and I'll do it for you.
  2. The bitrate is 320kbps. that's unrankable ): You got to have the bitrate at least 192, man. If you can't change the bitrate, again ask me in-game and I'll do it for you.
  3. The "hitcirclesb" png file. I don't see it in the playing field and it's not being used. Delete it.
  4. Add "Dango Daikazoku" in the tags.
  5. You got to have a "approachcircle" png file in the map's folder.

Small Dream
  1. 00:48:124 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
  2. 01:16:124-Remove new combo.
  3. 01:21:124-^?
  4. 01:21:724-Put a new combo here?
  5. 01:45:724 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. :p

DANGO
  1. 00:35:524-Remove new combo?
  2. 00:46:524-^
  3. 00:56:224-^
  4. 00:57:724-Put a new combo here.
  5. 01:01:024 (5)-Remove this note here. I don't think this sounds right here. :/
  6. 01:01:324 (x)-Add a note here.
  7. 01:11:824 (1, 2)-Stack these properly on the end of the previous slider.
  8. 01:17:224 (1)-I strongly suggested you move this slider somewhere else. It's not a bold move by putting a note/slider under a slider track. :/
  9. 01:32:524 (1, 2, 3)I'm not a big fan of anti-jumps. :p if you want to leave it there, that's fine but I think it would be a great if you use the distance snap.
  10. 01:39:124-Remove new combo.

I'm not going to star this until I see some improvements.
Magical Pokie
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thanks 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-) 8-)
wmfchris
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wmfchris
把mp3剪一下吧

01:53 283 notes我覺得自己放多了w

Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi - Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakare (Magical Pokie) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie

wmfchris wrote:

把mp3剪一下吧

01:53 283 notes我覺得自己放多了w

thanks thanks 凑字数 ;) 爱你哦
Roddie
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Roddie
Meh. I was expecting a whole lot of improvement but it's close enough. Here's star for you~
aabc271
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aabc271
Hi ~
Here is my Taiko mod ~
Mod request by Wmfchris

Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only

[General]

The music is suddenly cut at the end. Using fade-out for the music is much better imo ~

[Wmf's Taiko]

01:53:597 - ( 1 ) The spinner is too short imo as it has only 5 hits. End it at 01:55:397 instead ?

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:50:297 - ( 74 ) Red note ?

00:53:297 - ( 83 ~ 84 ) o o ?

00:57:797 - ( 93 ) Blue note ?

01:28:997 - ( 202 ) ^

01:42:797 - ( 251 ) Red note ?

The map is nice ~

I like relaxing music :3 ~

Rating : 8.5/10

Star and good luck ~ ;)
wmfchris
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wmfchris
fixed >w<

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.

Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi - Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakare (Magical Pokie) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
Magical Pokie
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Magical Pokie

wmfchris wrote:

fixed >w<

Your message is too short. Please do not post messages like "star", and make sure you are constructively adding to the thread in question.


yeah up!
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so..............
SPOILER
relaxrelax送:D
;) ;) :D :D
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:) ;) >:( :( :o 8-) :x :P :evil: :?: :!: :roll: :twisted: :idea: :arrow: :|
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