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oh 这我怎能不星
加油
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602到处中枪
Clannad~
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謝謝~
围观602和前辈hi 
[General]:
先暂时看这么多 加油
[General]:
- ～tags: CLANNAD
- ～如果所有难度都做这么长的话，把MP3未做部分切掉，并在合适的位置淡出 然后full submit一下
- ～建议Distance Spacing+0.4
- ～00:41:824 (2,3) - 建议重新考虑排列，不被Slider挡住
- ～01:04:024 (1) - 这里不太合 可以尝试一下这样:
- ～01:15:424 (5) - ^
- ～01:33:424 (5) - 加slider拉到01:33:724
- ～01:47:224 (5) - New combo
- ～Beat snap Divisor 改为 1/2 or 1/4 试试，尝试打一些自己自己的节奏
先暂时看这么多
加油General:
Grid level 用3比较好吧
后面用不到的MP3要剪掉
没有SB文件的话 OSB要删除
Small Dream:
个人建议:参数太低了吧 建议AR+2 OD+1 HP+1 circle size+1 （圈好大..)
KIAI音量+10 前面音量-10 FINISH有点吵 似乎可以单独下绿线把FINISH变小点声
Normal Dream:
00:28:924 (1,1,1) - 这3个太丑了 想想用别的节奏吧
00:38:524 (1) - 开头用这个HITSOUND也许是个好主意 但是相比别的HITSOUND还是声音有点大 降低点音量 结尾的FINISH也是一样 而且这几个HITSOUND都没有CLAP 后面再用CLAP感觉有点突兀
00:45:724 (1) - 这个尾FINISH没什么必要
01:04:024 (1) - SLIDER回复这么多次和摆满CLAP都不是什么好主意
01:36:124 (1) - 在中间节奏用这个转盘感觉好应付
01:48:724 (1) - 01:52:924 (1) - 1星半用这样长度的转盘感觉有点短
这个DIFF总体感觉就是不知道到底是EASY还是NORMAL 因为有的地方节奏很空 建议重新排一下部分节奏
Dango:
00:36:724 (1) - 转盘结尾声音太大了 降低10试试 这里用FINISH感觉还不赖
00:55:624 (5) - 这里没必要静音吧
KIAI提高音量吧 听不见HITSOUND了 CLAP的排放有点乱 试着自己仔细听一下
先这么多建议吧
Grid level 用3比较好吧
后面用不到的MP3要剪掉
没有SB文件的话 OSB要删除
Small Dream:
个人建议:参数太低了吧 建议AR+2 OD+1 HP+1 circle size+1 （圈好大..)
KIAI音量+10 前面音量-10 FINISH有点吵 似乎可以单独下绿线把FINISH变小点声
Normal Dream:
00:28:924 (1,1,1) - 这3个太丑了 想想用别的节奏吧
00:38:524 (1) - 开头用这个HITSOUND也许是个好主意 但是相比别的HITSOUND还是声音有点大 降低点音量 结尾的FINISH也是一样 而且这几个HITSOUND都没有CLAP 后面再用CLAP感觉有点突兀
00:45:724 (1) - 这个尾FINISH没什么必要
01:04:024 (1) - SLIDER回复这么多次和摆满CLAP都不是什么好主意
01:36:124 (1) - 在中间节奏用这个转盘感觉好应付
01:48:724 (1) - 01:52:924 (1) - 1星半用这样长度的转盘感觉有点短
这个DIFF总体感觉就是不知道到底是EASY还是NORMAL 因为有的地方节奏很空 建议重新排一下部分节奏
Dango:
00:36:724 (1) - 转盘结尾声音太大了 降低10试试 这里用FINISH感觉还不赖
00:55:624 (5) - 这里没必要静音吧
KIAI提高音量吧 听不见HITSOUND了 CLAP的排放有点乱 试着自己仔细听一下
先这么多建议吧
Topic Starter
好吧，MAt們快來啊
看到是渚童鞋的主题曲 于是爬进来了
[General]:
[General]:
- source: CLANNAD
- OST移到tags里去
- 320Kbps... 换个128Kbps~192Kbps的过来 foobar/千千都能转 转完可能需要微调offset Audition另存的话好像就没这个问题(?
- tags里的anime和dango都去掉... Furukawa可以加进去 不过鉴于后面改姓了所以可以把Okazaki也加进去(死
- hitsounds暂时不吐槽 建议在每个小节的开始和最中间用 这曲子暴简单的 弄那么花搞的得不偿失
- 00:46:024 (2,3,4) - 这个spacing很丑啊... 关掉grid snap调一下 后面的大概也需要动 老实说这里的1/2音感觉完全没有存在的必要
- 00:52:924 (1) - 压1/4音是为什么呢?
- 00:56:224 (1) - 完全out了
- 01:02:224 (3) - 这个删了吧
- 01:11:824 (T) - 加note
- 01:14:524 (2,3,4) - 这里可以试试01:14:524 01:15:124作为slider起点 01:15:724~01:16:624全部用1/2note 01:16:024 (5) - 这个slider简直out的不像话啊 不能忍了
- 01:21:724 (3) - 这样使用slider是不错的 一个重音作为起点
- 这不到一半就没了啊 这耐心让人内牛
- 00:25:324 (3,4,5) - spacing
- 01:37:924 (3,1) - 挨太近了吧
- 01:39:724 (1) - 为什么是一个半小节的长度 o.o? 一个小节或者半个小节都成啊
- 整体看叠得太多 不适合当最低难 而且spacing上看 忽大忽小 x_x
- 以及 没做完
Topic Starter
Colin Hou wrote:
看到是渚童鞋的主题曲 于是爬进来了
[General]:[DANGO]:
- source: CLANNAD
- OST移到tags里去
- 320Kbps... 换个128Kbps~192Kbps的过来 foobar/千千都能转 转完可能需要微调offset Audition另存的话好像就没这个问题(?
- tags里的anime和dango都去掉... Furukawa可以加进去 不过鉴于后面改姓了所以可以把Okazaki也加进去(死
- hitsounds暂时不吐槽 建议在每个小节的开始和最中间用 这曲子暴简单的 弄那么花搞的得不偿失
[Small Dream]:
- 00:46:024 (2,3,4) - 这个spacing很丑啊... 关掉grid snap调一下 后面的大概也需要动 老实说这里的1/2音感觉完全没有存在的必要
- 00:52:924 (1) - 压1/4音是为什么呢?
- 00:56:224 (1) - 完全out了
- 01:02:224 (3) - 这个删了吧
- 01:11:824 (T) - 加note
- 01:14:524 (2,3,4) - 这里可以试试01:14:524 01:15:124作为slider起点 01:15:724~01:16:624全部用1/2note 01:16:024 (5) - 这个slider简直out的不像话啊 不能忍了
- 01:21:724 (3) - 这样使用slider是不错的 一个重音作为起点
- 这不到一半就没了啊 这耐心让人内牛
老实说现在找MAT为时尚早 先重新构思一下 多想想除了横平竖直以外的花样 然后做完了 再在hitsounds上研究一下 找modder多看看再说吧.
- 00:25:324 (3,4,5) - spacing
- 01:37:924 (3,1) - 挨太近了吧
- 01:39:724 (1) - 为什么是一个半小节的长度 o.o? 一个小节或者半个小节都成啊
- 整体看叠得太多 不适合当最低难 而且spacing上看 忽大忽小 x_x
- 以及 没做完
壓力絕大
Topic Starter
以及 没做完
做完了，不會剪啊
做完了，不會剪啊
Topic Starter
那Moder們快來啊
这曲子为什么要剪 o.o
Topic Starter
o.o後面都空了
所以说为什么要空掉 =。=
因为太长了么? 不太可能
因为不想做下去了? 这个倒是有可能
如果做事只有这几分热度的话 做一张能rank的图可能对你来说很难了 +w+
因为太长了么? 不太可能
因为不想做下去了? 这个倒是有可能
如果做事只有这几分热度的话 做一张能rank的图可能对你来说很难了 +w+
クラナド
★★★
★★★
Topic Starter
.——.繼續
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Colin Hou wrote:
所以说为什么要空掉 =。=
因为太长了么? 不太可能
因为不想做下去了? 这个倒是有可能
如果做事只有这几分热度的话 做一张能rank的图可能对你来说很难了 +w+
日 ^
你的潜力越发的大了
可惜不能射三颗
可惜不能射三颗
Topic Starter
LKs wrote:
你的潜力越发的大了
可惜不能射三颗
LKs你從昨天晚上就說我有潛力，求解釋
Topic Starter
好吧真相弄清了继续找MAT- -
[easy]
00:34:924 跟右边对齐吧lol
01:06:124 敢拉好看点么
[Normal]
00:45:724 敢排的好看点么
01:01:024 有种方法叫做复制-粘贴
敢把不需要的部分剪切掉么 超过20%没map就要切歌这都50%了D:
顺便可以去老师的神薙下面偷几个比如风铃的声音会增效更多
大概就是这样以上D:
00:34:924 跟右边对齐吧lol
01:06:124 敢拉好看点么
[Normal]
00:45:724 敢排的好看点么
01:01:024 有种方法叫做复制-粘贴
敢把不需要的部分剪切掉么 超过20%没map就要切歌这都50%了D:
顺便可以去老师的神薙下面偷几个比如风铃的声音会增效更多
大概就是这样以上D:
Topic Starter
Mystica wrote:
[easy]
00:34:924 跟右边对齐吧lol
01:06:124 敢拉好看点么
[Normal]
00:45:724 敢排的好看点么
01:01:024 有种方法叫做复制-粘贴
敢把不需要的部分剪切掉么 超过20%没map就要切歌这都50%了D:
顺便可以去老师的神薙下面偷几个比如风铃的声音会增效更多
大概就是这样以上D:
十分感谢
Topic Starter
o.o 感谢LKs切歌
Shohei Ohtani
Do I smell a mod?!
Overall:
Cut the mp3. You're not even using half of it, so make it fade out >w<~.
The diff that isn't easy:
00:36:724 (1) - Maybe make this either louder, or make it soft, so there isn't a pop.
000:56:224 (1) - Touching HP bar.
01:45:724 (1) - Kinda random spinner you got there. Seems almost. . . lazy!
Easy:
01:39:724 (1) - I don't like this slider for a number of reasons. You could possibly add more points to it so it looks better and more fine-tuned, and its touching the score.
Cool stuff.
Overall:
Cut the mp3. You're not even using half of it, so make it fade out >w<~.
The diff that isn't easy:
00:36:724 (1) - Maybe make this either louder, or make it soft, so there isn't a pop.
000:56:224 (1) - Touching HP bar.
01:45:724 (1) - Kinda random spinner you got there. Seems almost. . . lazy!
Easy:
01:39:724 (1) - I don't like this slider for a number of reasons. You could possibly add more points to it so it looks better and more fine-tuned, and its touching the score.
Cool stuff.
Topic Starter
CDFA wrote:
Do I smell a mod?!
Overall:
Cut the mp3. You're not even using half of it, so make it fade out >w<~. I'm cut lol
The diff that isn't easy:
00:36:724 (1) - Maybe make this either louder, or make it soft, so there isn't a pop.
000:56:224 (1) - Touching HP bar.
01:45:724 (1) - Kinda random spinner you got there. Seems almost. . . lazy!
Easy:
01:39:724 (1) - I don't like this slider for a number of reasons. You could possibly add more points to it so it looks better and more fine-tuned, and its touching the score.
Cool stuff.
thanks
[Dango]
about hitsound i think use whistle better than clap
00:19:924 : remove fin add whistle
00:20:524 : remove clap
00:21:124 : whistle
00:22:324 : remove newcombo add whistle
00:23:524 : whistle
00:24:424 : remove clap
00:24:724 : whistle
00:25:324 : remove newcombo
00:27:124 : remove clap add whistle
00:29:224 : remove clap
00:29:524 : add whistle
00:30:124 : remove newcombo
00:38:524 : use soft hitsound better
00:40:924 : remove clap
00:43:624 : ^
about hitsound i think use whistle better than clap
00:19:924 : remove fin add whistle
00:20:524 : remove clap
00:21:124 : whistle
00:22:324 : remove newcombo add whistle
00:23:524 : whistle
00:24:424 : remove clap
00:24:724 : whistle
00:25:324 : remove newcombo
00:27:124 : remove clap add whistle
00:29:224 : remove clap
00:29:524 : add whistle
00:30:124 : remove newcombo
00:38:524 : use soft hitsound better
00:40:924 : remove clap
00:43:624 : ^
[General]
- The hitcircle is different for the sliders and circles, this is a problem?
- The mp3 is too long, you must cut it.
[Small Dream]
I don't like that use claps in songs like this, sounds bad for me, maybe if you change these claps for whistles?
00:31:924 (6) Remove finish in the middle.
00:33:724 (6,1,2,3) Don't stack notes under the slider in the easier difficulty, this is hard to read for beginners.
00:48:124 (7,1) This note is too close to the previous.
01:01:924 (5,1) Remove the finish and add in (1)
01:06:124 (1) Remove new combo
01:09:724 (5) Fix this slider using grid level 3. Something like this: http://puu.sh/3OGT
01:15:724 (1,2,3,1) Please unstack these notes, and in (3) use a soft finish, sounds better.
01:24:124 (5) Finish at the end.
01:30:124 (1) Finish
01:49:924 (1) Remove new combo and add finish at the end.
01:51:724 (1) Add a note here and move the spin pleaseee.
[DANGO]
Approach Rate 6
Same whistles suggestions :3
For hard and insane difficulties you must use grid level 3 or 4.
00:19:924 (3) Remove finish
00:35:524 (1) Remove new combo
00:56:224 (1) With this slider you don't following nothing in the music, the sounds is in the white tick. Remove new combo too.
00:57:724 (2) Add here.
01:01:024 (5) You don't follow the rhythm with this note, move to the next white tick.
01:11:824 (1,2) Stack this perfectly under the slider.
01:19:624 (1) Remove new combo.
01:20:524 (1,1) Inconsistent spacing.
01:32:524 (2,1,2,3,1) ^ Same
01:39:124 (1,1) Remove new combo here or in the next slider.
01:41:524 (1) Remove new combo
01:42:424 (1,2,3) Spacing
01:45:724 (x) Add a note and move the spin?
01:54:124 (1) Make this just a note and add a soft finish.
I love this song ~
Star.
- The hitcircle is different for the sliders and circles, this is a problem?
- The mp3 is too long, you must cut it.
[Small Dream]
I don't like that use claps in songs like this, sounds bad for me, maybe if you change these claps for whistles?
00:31:924 (6) Remove finish in the middle.
00:33:724 (6,1,2,3) Don't stack notes under the slider in the easier difficulty, this is hard to read for beginners.
00:48:124 (7,1) This note is too close to the previous.
01:01:924 (5,1) Remove the finish and add in (1)
01:06:124 (1) Remove new combo
01:09:724 (5) Fix this slider using grid level 3. Something like this: http://puu.sh/3OGT
01:15:724 (1,2,3,1) Please unstack these notes, and in (3) use a soft finish, sounds better.
01:24:124 (5) Finish at the end.
01:30:124 (1) Finish
01:49:924 (1) Remove new combo and add finish at the end.
01:51:724 (1) Add a note here and move the spin pleaseee.
[DANGO]
Approach Rate 6
Same whistles suggestions :3
For hard and insane difficulties you must use grid level 3 or 4.
00:19:924 (3) Remove finish
00:35:524 (1) Remove new combo
00:56:224 (1) With this slider you don't following nothing in the music, the sounds is in the white tick. Remove new combo too.
00:57:724 (2) Add here.
01:01:024 (5) You don't follow the rhythm with this note, move to the next white tick.
01:11:824 (1,2) Stack this perfectly under the slider.
01:19:624 (1) Remove new combo.
01:20:524 (1,1) Inconsistent spacing.
01:32:524 (2,1,2,3,1) ^ Same
01:39:124 (1,1) Remove new combo here or in the next slider.
01:41:524 (1) Remove new combo
01:42:424 (1,2,3) Spacing
01:45:724 (x) Add a note and move the spin?
01:54:124 (1) Make this just a note and add a soft finish.
I love this song ~
Star.
神曲啊神图啊~~~~~~~
加油~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+++++++++++星~~~
加油~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+++++++++++星~~~
Hi.
I'm not going to star this until I see some improvements.
General
- Wow... There so you've ended on 01:54:724, huh? You know, if could save a lot of space if you just cut the mp3. :p
If you can't cut it, ask me in-game and I'll do it for you. - The bitrate is 320kbps. that's unrankable ): You got to have the bitrate at least 192, man. If you can't change the bitrate, again ask me in-game and I'll do it for you.
- The "hitcirclesb" png file. I don't see it in the playing field and it's not being used. Delete it.
- Add "Dango Daikazoku" in the tags.
- You got to have a "approachcircle" png file in the map's folder.
Small Dream
- 00:48:124 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
- 01:16:124-Remove new combo.
- 01:21:124-^?
- 01:21:724-Put a new combo here?
- 01:45:724 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap. :p
DANGO
- 00:35:524-Remove new combo?
- 00:46:524-^
- 00:56:224-^
- 00:57:724-Put a new combo here.
- 01:01:024 (5)-Remove this note here. I don't think this sounds right here. :/
- 01:01:324 (x)-Add a note here.
- 01:11:824 (1, 2)-Stack these properly on the end of the previous slider.
- 01:17:224 (1)-I strongly suggested you move this slider somewhere else. It's not a bold move by putting a note/slider under a slider track. :/
- 01:32:524 (1, 2, 3)I'm not a big fan of anti-jumps. :p if you want to leave it there, that's fine but I think it would be a great if you use the distance snap.
- 01:39:124-Remove new combo.
I'm not going to star this until I see some improvements.
Topic Starter
thanks
把mp3剪一下吧
01:53 283 notes我覺得自己放多了w
Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi - Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakare (Magical Pokie) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
01:53 283 notes我覺得自己放多了w
Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi - Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakare (Magical Pokie) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
wmfchris wrote:
把mp3剪一下吧
01:53 283 notes我覺得自己放多了w
thanks thanks 凑字数
爱你哦Meh. I was expecting a whole lot of improvement but it's close enough. Here's star for you~
Hi ~
Here is my Taiko mod ~
Mod request by Wmfchris
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[General]
The music is suddenly cut at the end. Using fade-out for the music is much better imo ~
[Wmf's Taiko]
01:53:597 - ( 1 ) The spinner is too short imo as it has only 5 hits. End it at 01:55:397 instead ?
The map is nice ~
I like relaxing music :3 ~
Rating : 8.5/10
Star and good luck ~
Here is my Taiko mod ~
Mod request by Wmfchris
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[General]
The music is suddenly cut at the end. Using fade-out for the music is much better imo ~
[Wmf's Taiko]
01:53:597 - ( 1 ) The spinner is too short imo as it has only 5 hits. End it at 01:55:397 instead ?
Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~
00:50:297 - ( 74 ) Red note ?
00:53:297 - ( 83 ~ 84 ) o o ?
00:57:797 - ( 93 ) Blue note ?
01:28:997 - ( 202 ) ^
01:42:797 - ( 251 ) Red note ?
00:50:297 - ( 74 ) Red note ?
00:53:297 - ( 83 ~ 84 ) o o ?
00:57:797 - ( 93 ) Blue note ?
01:28:997 - ( 202 ) ^
01:42:797 - ( 251 ) Red note ?
The map is nice ~
I like relaxing music :3 ~
Rating : 8.5/10
Star and good luck ~
fixed >w<
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Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi - Nagisa~Saka no Shita no Wakare (Magical Pokie) [Wmf's Taiko].osu
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Topic Starter
wmfchris wrote:
fixed >w<
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yeah up!
lol
你不觉得这张BG很唯美吗？
wtf lol got 2 kudos?
mod request from sun rainbow
general, i think default soft whistle makes a good sound.
and if you downloaded senbonzakura by natsumerin, you will find a soft-finish bell suits this map
hard
00:27:797 (5) - make a slow slider
00:45:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - um....pattern expired. now, the most popular one is a star shape
00:55:397 (4) - a slider till current note 6's position, after that 1 note at 56,297 , then one slider till 57,197
01:17:897 (2) - tail need a whistle
01:27:497 (4) - same
01:29:297 (3) - same, if not whistle, add a clap
01:52:697 (2,3) - make slider?
wow nice song...later give star, im short of it
general, i think default soft whistle makes a good sound.
and if you downloaded senbonzakura by natsumerin, you will find a soft-finish bell suits this map
hard
00:27:797 (5) - make a slow slider
00:45:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - um....pattern expired. now, the most popular one is a star shape
00:55:397 (4) - a slider till current note 6's position, after that 1 note at 56,297 , then one slider till 57,197
01:17:897 (2) - tail need a whistle
01:27:497 (4) - same
01:29:297 (3) - same, if not whistle, add a clap
01:52:697 (2,3) - make slider?
wow nice song...later give star, im short of it
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