1. Doom (4.96 stars, 160 notes)
2. Gerblun's Light Insane (3.39 stars, 157 notes)
3. Gero's Insane (4.02 stars, 201 notes)
4. Irre's Hard (2.73 stars, 97 notes)
5. Normal (1.58 stars, 51 notes)

• 00:05:375 (5) - You can put new combo on this one and put it little bit further than it is now because its a intense note great example is this part 00:12:869 (2,3,4,5,1)
  00:08:123 (3) - Maybe remove the slider and put it like this http://prntscr.com/d3zy0v
  00:19:113 (1,2,3,4) - Lower the distance spacing between those because its not that intense like ones before
  00:22:985 (8,1) - Maybe a little jump between those?
  00:32:477 (3,4) - I think you should put more space between those two like a little jump because even the music is jumpy on that part (Kappa what am i talking about)
  00:34:600 (4) - New combo make a little jump between 00:34:476 (3,4)
  00:35:600 (4) - New combo
  
  
  Irre's Hard
  
  [list:1337]Its perfect dunno what to say

• 00:02:128 (1,1,1,3) - This 4 sliders should end on white tick http://prntscr.com/d403ah
  That is it nothing much to say its a 1* map

• 00:12:119 (2,3) - Not a perfect blanket
  00:33:102 (1) - This slider would be much better http://prntscr.com/d404x8 because it will change the direction on white tick when the music change

Invertable wrote:

Hi!
I saw your post on #modreqs

Invader Diff

• 00:05:375 (5) - You can put new combo on this one and put it little bit further than it is now because its a intense note great example is this part 00:12:869 (2,3,4,5,1)
  00:08:123 (3) - Maybe remove the slider and put it like this http://prntscr.com/d3zy0v
  00:19:113 (1,2,3,4) - Lower the distance spacing between those because its not that intense like ones before
  00:22:985 (8,1) - Maybe a little jump between those?
  00:32:477 (3,4) - I think you should put more space between those two like a little jump because even the music is jumpy on that part (Kappa what am i talking about)
  00:34:600 (4) - New combo make a little jump between 00:34:476 (3,4)
  00:35:600 (4) - New combo
  
  
  Irre's Hard
  
  [list:1337]Its perfect dunno what to say

Normal Diff

• 00:02:128 (1,1,1,3) - This 4 sliders should end on white tick http://prntscr.com/d403ah
  That is it nothing much to say its a 1* map

Easy Diff

• 00:12:119 (2,3) - Not a perfect blanket
  00:33:102 (1) - This slider would be much better http://prntscr.com/d404x8 because it will change the direction on white tick when the music change

Good luck with your map !
P.S. M4M would be nice .
This is the map!

SPOILER

https://osu.ppy.sh/s/480481

SPOILER

-Invader-
I didn't apply an NC because I already applied it to the next slider which is even stronger. But I spaced out the circle.

I don't understand what you're trying to show me here.

Fixed.

I could change the shape the 4 notes make though.

Yea a buddy of mine actually got on my case about that. Will do!

If I added a new NC it wouldn't be consistent with the other streams, but I spaced them out.

It would be inconsistent if I added one here.


-Normal-
Sliders are most commonly used to start on a big tick, and end on a weak one. My choice here still works.


-Easy-
Fixed.

Done.

610Momo wrote:

idk what im doing ill try to format this normally

Invader

00:28:106 (5,6,7,8) - the spacing on this is kinda weird since it's hard to tell whether its a singletap then a triple, try making the spacing more even or just stacking all 4 notes Fixed.

00:26:482 (5,6) - these notes have irregular spacing compared to the rest of the notes, fix this Fixed.

00:27:606 (1,2,3,4) - this is just me but i suggest putting these notes closer together since the area you can cover both sliders is pretty small The sliders are short enough to the point where just simply going down the middle is enough to hit them, I don't think they need to be any closer.


From 30-36 seconds, you shouldn't repeat the kiai mode because IIRC that's unrankable You might be right about it, but I'll see what other says before I change it.

bye gl with map and modding https://osu.ppy.sh/s/530148 would be niceu if u wanna m4m

1. Set custom combo colors.
2. Add CanadianBaka to the tags.
3. Add Jhonen Vasquez GIR Dib Irk cartoon to the tags.

1. AR3 is more fitting for this difficulty.
2. I would recommend CS 2.5 because it makes your circles less packed together.
3. 00:02:128 (1,2) - / 00:06:124 (1) - already your rhythm are inconsistent. Since both of these sections are the same in the music, rhythmically structure them so that they play that same way. I would recommend extending 00:06:124 (1) - this to a 2/1 slider, so it matches up with 00:02:128 (1) - this one.
4. 00:11:620 - for the same reason as above, I would consider adding a circle 00:11:620 - here
5. 00:14:118 - Since the rhythm is changing here, it can be mapped differently, but I recommend you at least place an object on the downbeat 00:14:118 - here because Easy players especially need to fell the downbeats when playing.
6. 00:20:113 (1,1,1,1) - I strongly advice against using this many spinners. This section is more than possible to map without using spinners. Simple use two 1/1 sliders followed by a circle. Here's a visual:
   
   ~

   
7. 00:30:104 - / 00:37:598 - fuse your kiais together. It is intense, but not intense enough for a kiai every note.
8. 00:37:598 - Since the emphasis ends 00:37:598 - here, this would be the ideal place to end your kiai after fusing them.
9. 00:35:100 (2,1,2) - The straight left/right and up/down sliders clash with the style you have been using for this map. I recommend you rotate 15 degrees or so in order to fix it. Here's a visual:
   
   ~

   

1. 00:02:128 (1) - I am against the extended slider here. Since the slider ends 00:02:877 - here, extending into 00:03:127 - this slider, you miss a crucial beat
2. 00:02:627 - here. I would strongly recommend making this pattern into 2 1/1 sliders.
3. 00:06:124 (1,2) - Same as above.
4. 00:10:121 (1,2) - ^^^
5. 00:12:119 (3,4) - just be consistent with 00:04:126 (1,2,3) - this lol.
6. 00:04:126 (1,2,3) - Same suggestion as in Easy.
7. The same suggestions that I mentioned in Easy about your spinners should be fixed in every difficulty.
8. The same suggestions that I mentioned in Easy about your kiai should be fixed in every difficulty.
9. 00:18:114 (1) - NC, every difficulty.
10. 00:31:103 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Use half as many NCs.
11. Your kiai section is overmapped for Normal. Remap it using less 1/2 rhythms, include more 1/1 gaps between notes. kds plz

1. 00:06:999 (4) - Because you have only used 1/4 patterns for the strings until this point, I recommend you remove this drum 1/4 pattern and consistently use 1/4 patterns only for the strings. Also, doing this would help to differentiate the rhythm from 00:05:874 (4,5,1) - here.
2. 00:14:992 (4) - ^
3. I recommend ending your kiai 00:14:992 (4) - there and fusing your kiais together.

1. I know the map is short, but this is supercentered:
   
   ~

   
2. 00:02:128 (1,4) - improve the blanket
3. 00:19:613 (2,3,4,5) - Why is the spacing so strange here? owo
4. 00:20:237 (1) - Refer to my suggestion on easy about spinners. Remove it and map it normally.
5. 00:23:610 (2,3,4,5) - same as 2 above
6. 00:27:606 (1,2,3,4) - ^ etc.

Jonawaga wrote:

M4M let's go

[General]

1. Set custom combo colors.
2. Add CanadianBaka to the tags.
3. Add Jhonen Vasquez GIR Dib Irk cartoon to the tags.

[Easy]

1. AR3 is more fitting for this difficulty.
2. I would recommend CS 2.5 because it makes your circles less packed together.
3. 00:02:128 (1,2) - / 00:06:124 (1) - already your rhythm are inconsistent. Since both of these sections are the same in the music, rhythmically structure them so that they play that same way. I would recommend extending 00:06:124 (1) - this to a 2/1 slider, so it matches up with 00:02:128 (1) - this one.
4. 00:11:620 - for the same reason as above, I would consider adding a circle 00:11:620 - here
5. 00:14:118 - Since the rhythm is changing here, it can be mapped differently, but I recommend you at least place an object on the downbeat 00:14:118 - here because Easy players especially need to fell the downbeats when playing.
6. 00:20:113 (1,1,1,1) - I strongly advice against using this many spinners. This section is more than possible to map without using spinners. Simple use two 1/1 sliders followed by a circle. Here's a visual:
   
   ~

   
7. 00:30:104 - / 00:37:598 - fuse your kiais together. It is intense, but not intense enough for a kiai every note.
8. 00:37:598 - Since the emphasis ends 00:37:598 - here, this would be the ideal place to end your kiai after fusing them.
9. 00:35:100 (2,1,2) - The straight left/right and up/down sliders clash with the style you have been using for this map. I recommend you rotate 15 degrees or so in order to fix it. Here's a visual:
   
   ~

   

[Normal]

1. 00:02:128 (1) - I am against the extended slider here. Since the slider ends 00:02:877 - here, extending into 00:03:127 - this slider, you miss a crucial beat
2. 00:02:627 - here. I would strongly recommend making this pattern into 2 1/1 sliders.
3. 00:06:124 (1,2) - Same as above.
4. 00:10:121 (1,2) - ^^^
5. 00:12:119 (3,4) - just be consistent with 00:04:126 (1,2,3) - this lol.
6. 00:04:126 (1,2,3) - Same suggestion as in Easy.
7. The same suggestions that I mentioned in Easy about your spinners should be fixed in every difficulty.
8. The same suggestions that I mentioned in Easy about your kiai should be fixed in every difficulty.
9. 00:18:114 (1) - NC, every difficulty.
10. 00:31:103 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - Use half as many NCs.
11. Your kiai section is overmapped for Normal. Remap it using less 1/2 rhythms, include more 1/1 gaps between notes. kds plz

Working on Invader now.

Juiceys wrote:

Easy:
00:17:369 - Add a 1/2 beat slider to fill this awkward delay
00:21:112 (1) - Delete NC because none of the others have one here
00:30:635 - There should be an object here
00:33:102 (1) - Try a Circle and then a full beat slider

Normal:
00:02:128 (1) - I feel all of the sliders like these play awkwardly and should be shortened to just a full beat
00:17:372 - Like in the easy diff there really should be something here, only more so in this diff

Thanks for the mod. Response:

SPOILER

Easy

Done.
That was a goof. Fixed.
Fixed. There originally was a spinner here which was why I had a delay.
The reason I didn't do what you suggested was because this slider compliments the change in the music. If you listen you'll hear a slight dip, which is building up for the next verse.


Normal
I don't know. It's very subjective so I'll think about it.
Agreed.

Also a a lesson for the future, note why you're modding at the very top.
Ex. 'From #modreqs doing m4m'

1. I know the map is short, but this is supercentered:
   
   ~

   
   who the hell cares if a map is "super centered" or not? Shouldn't you care MORE about what the map actually is? Kind of judging-a-book-by-the-cover sort of thing
2. 00:02:128 (1,4) - improve the blanket Fixed~
3. 00:19:613 (2,3,4,5) - Why is the spacing so strange here? owo Fixed~
4. 00:20:237 (1) - Refer to my suggestion on easy about spinners. Remove it and map it normally. The way I made 00:20:113 (1,1,1,1) - these are supposed to emphasize the spinners. So no, i'm not going to change it.
5. 00:23:610 (2,3,4,5) - same as 2 above Fixed~
6. 00:27:606 (1,2,3,4) - ^ etc. Fixed~

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DavidEd wrote:

Invader

- 00:06:998 (3,1) - Looks like you wanted to blanket these. So do fix that.
- 00:09:871 (1,2,3) - Any reason why these aren't spread out like you did at 00:01:878 (1,2,3) - since they're the same sound.
- 00:29:979 (8,1) - You can increase the spacing slightly just like you've done for previous parts like 00:05:250 (4,5) -
- Disable widescreen support and letterbox since you're not using a storyboard nor breaks.

CanadianB's Light Insane

- 00:02:128 (1,2) - Looks like you wanted to blanket these. So do fix that.
- 00:08:123 (1,1) - You're missing the beats on the red ticks. What do you say about replacing them with 1/2 sliders?
- 00:18:114 (1) - Move to x:296 y:260
- 00:23:610 (2,3,4,5,1) - Ctrl+H?
- 00:35:600 (1,3) - Convert these sliders into streams. This part is pretty ipassive for being the climax.
- Disable widescreen support and letterbox since you're not using a storyboard nor breaks.

Irre's Hard

- 00:15:866 (3,1) - Slight spacing issue (2 to 3 is 2.0 and 3 to 1 is 1.95)
- 00:19:613 (2,3,4,5) - Streams in a hard? I suppose it's ok because of the bpm. But it's just because it's a hard difficulty that made me wonder xD
- Disable widescreen support and letterbox since you're not using a storyboard nor breaks.

Normal

- 00:06:124 (4) - NC to keep consistency
- 00:12:119 (3) - ^
- 00:15:616 (3) - ^
- 00:17:115 (1) - ^
- 00:20:113 (1) - NC because new section
- 00:24:109 (3) - ^
- 00:28:106 (3) - ^
- 00:31:103 - The NC is inconsistent in this part. Either do NC on after each 1/2 or 1/4.
- 00:37:598 (1) - Move down to x:256 y:36
- Disable widescreen support and letterbox since you're not using a storyboard nor breaks.

Easy

- 00:02:128 (1,1) - Distance snap has to be consistent throughout the difficulty. Especually in easy difficulties.
- Dont have anything else to say about this diff. But I think all notes are way too close. I'd suggest using 1.1 ds.
- NC is also inconsistent, so either do NC after each 1/2 or 1/4
- Disable widescreen support and letterbox since you're not using a storyboard nor breaks.

-------------

Neat set.

Thanks for the mod. Response:

SPOILER

Invader

Fixed.
I don't know what I was thinking here, but you're right it should be spread out. Fixed.
Fixed.


Normal

Fixed all NC issues.
I moved this note down lower.


Easy

We already went over the snapping thing.

Good luck!

1. 00:02:128 (1) - LAZY, its same as in easy xDDD
2. 00:14:118 - 00:16:116 - Consider add a note. Because feels very empty (its a normal, not a easy xD)
3. 00:23:610 (2) - 00:27:606 (2) - Those notes feels weird for me because its not possible to follow all drums here, imo, just delete and kee the most string rhythm (as in 00:20:113 (1,2,3,4,1) - )
4. 00:30:604 - missing note!, its the kiai man xD
5. For kiai, I suggest to change DS to 1.35x (I know it is not recommended in Guidelines, but imo, many overlaps in normal diffs will be difficult to read). This will help with spread balance (Normal - Hard feels a bit away for me).
6. Same about hitsound at end.

1. 00:31:603 (4) - this overlap look a bit ugly, imo.
2. 00:38:098 - {suggestion in easy}

1. REPLAY: https://puu.sh/sgksl/fe2935ff72.osr
2. 00:09:621 (4,5) - 00:13:618 (6,7) - imo, keep DS in 2.2x is better. For me, it looks a bit as bad spaced.
3. 00:16:116 (1) - remove one repeat please. This feels following the violins melody.
   
4. 00:19:988 (5) - 00:23:984 (5) - 00:27:981 (4,1) - this diff could be perfect except for those, imo.
   
   ( )

   I know its not exactly the saaaame case, but I remembered this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yRW8EGbdfLA xD
5. 00:37:598 (1) - please, consider a slider from here to 00:38:098 -

1. REPLAY (after like 10 tries): https://puu.sh/sgkGn/fa488e28d7.osr
2. idk, I am bad with streams, so, the way you used to map this is not "natural?" for me.
3. 00:29:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here you increase spacing, but then, back to old spacing in 00:30:354 (2,3) - ... Its really confusing. Most of my deaths was in 00:32:103 - , cuz confusion with weird spacing xD
4. remap kudo plz (? memes

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

[General]
30% volume at start feels very low for me. Consider up to 45%.

[Easy]
00:37:098 (2) - end feel strange for me... I wanna suggest:


[Normal]

1. 00:02:128 (1) - LAZY, its same as in easy xDDD
2. 00:14:118 - 00:16:116 - Consider add a note. Because feels very empty (its a normal, not a easy xD)
3. 00:23:610 (2) - 00:27:606 (2) - Those notes feels weird for me because its not possible to follow all drums here, imo, just delete and kee the most string rhythm (as in 00:20:113 (1,2,3,4,1) - )
4. 00:30:604 - missing note!, its the kiai man xD
5. For kiai, I suggest to change DS to 1.35x (I know it is not recommended in Guidelines, but imo, many overlaps in normal diffs will be difficult to read). This will help with spread balance (Normal - Hard feels a bit away for me).
6. Same about hitsound at end.

[Invader]

1. REPLAY (after like 10 tries): https://puu.sh/sgkGn/fa488e28d7.osr
2. idk, I am bad with streams, so, the way you used to map this is not "natural?" for me.
3. 00:29:105 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here you increase spacing, but then, back to old spacing in 00:30:354 (2,3) - ... Its really confusing. Most of my deaths was in 00:32:103 - , cuz confusion with weird spacing xD
4. remap kudo plz (? memes

Good luck!

SPOILER

General
I don't know, seems a little too loud. I'll try 40%


Easy
Fixed.


Normal
?
Fixed.
Fixed.
I think 1.35x might be too big of a change, so I'll try 1.2x
*Note to the modder who suggested the clockwise flow change* There isn't enough room for me with this new sv to change the direction of the flow, so I'll have to change it back.


Invader

The increase in spacing was to rise with the song as it built up for the Kiai. Whether this drop in spacing makes sense or should be just as long is opinionated, so we'll see after a while.
While the spacing is hard to play, it does make sense, and it is justified. Plus it's low-BPM too so that doesn't help.
Memes.

1. 00:33:102 (1) - just a nitpick thingy for the slidershape, consider to move the red anchor to center for symmetrical matter with 00:31:103 (1) -
2. 00:38:098 - silence? that hitnormal was noisy even it's soft sample imo

1. 00:02:128 (1) - 00:10:121 (1) - yeah i think you did this as variation but consider to trim this with 1/1 slider since the strong intruments are on white ticks, in change of that maybe 00:03:127 (2) - 00:11:120 (2) - can be 2 circles to keep the objective of variation
2. 00:13:618 (1,2) - swap NC regardless of the patterns you doing, or idk, maybe those NC patterning works
   or
3. 00:38:098 - same as easy

1. 00:30:104 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - consider to add some 2 cirlces anywhere from here or even some 1/4 on 00:31:603 - and 00:33:601 - imo, plays a bit meh for sliderfest on starting of the kiai
2. 00:38:098 - reduce volume?

1. 00:03:876 (6,7,1) - so for the whole beginning section 00:01:878 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is the only one you didn't stacked anything with 1/4, consider to stack this triples for consistency i guess
2. 00:08:123 (1,1) - why 3/4? The strong instruments are on red ticks. Even your 00:15:616 (3) - is following the red tick. Plus I think NC on 00:08:622 (1) - is unnecessary.
3. 00:16:615 (2,3,1,2,3) - you can improve this somewhat related to squares thingy to make emphasis on 00:17:365 (2,3) - better (I mean, 00:17:365 (2,3) - should have more spacing than 00:17:115 (1,2) - as my opinion)
4. 00:19:613 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:23:610 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:27:606 (1,2,3,4,1) - can you use the same disntance settings here z
5. 00:30:604 (1) - 00:32:602 (1) - 00:34:600 (1) - 00:35:600 (1) - idk maybe you dont even need to spam NC here, if you want to spam then do it on 00:36:599 (2,3) - instead orz

1. 00:08:622 (1,2) - this jump is too sudden imo, consider to nerf the spacing
2. 00:10:620 (1,2) - vs. 00:11:620 (1,2) - can cause inconsistency since they have somewhat same music strength
3. 00:29:355 - idk maybe 1/8 thingy works here than 00:27:606 (1,2,3,4) - imo, current one feels overmapped since the audio is too weak or idk even they had 1/8 beats on first place (well im on pretty noisy environment so I apologize if there's actual 1/8 lo)
4. 00:38:098 - silence the sliderend pls

Akitoshi wrote:

hey

Easy

1. 00:33:102 (1) - just a nitpick thingy for the slidershape, consider to move the red anchor to center for symmetrical matter with 00:31:103 (1) -
2. 00:38:098 - silence? that hitnormal was noisy even it's soft sample imo

Normal

1. 00:02:128 (1) - 00:10:121 (1) - yeah i think you did this as variation but consider to trim this with 1/1 slider since the strong intruments are on white ticks, in change of that maybe 00:03:127 (2) - 00:11:120 (2) - can be 2 circles to keep the objective of variation
2. 00:13:618 (1,2) - swap NC regardless of the patterns you doing, or idk, maybe those NC patterning works
   or
3. 00:38:098 - same as easy

Irre's Hard

1. 00:30:104 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - consider to add some 2 cirlces anywhere from here or even some 1/4 on 00:31:603 - and 00:33:601 - imo, plays a bit meh for sliderfest on starting of the kiai
2. 00:38:098 - reduce volume?

CanadianB's Light Insane

1. 00:03:876 (6,7,1) - so for the whole beginning section 00:01:878 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is the only one you didn't stacked anything with 1/4, consider to stack this triples for consistency i guess
2. 00:08:123 (1,1) - why 3/4? The strong instruments are on red ticks. Even your 00:15:616 (3) - is following the red tick. Plus I think NC on 00:08:622 (1) - is unnecessary.
3. 00:16:615 (2,3,1,2,3) - you can improve this somewhat related to squares thingy to make emphasis on 00:17:365 (2,3) - better (I mean, 00:17:365 (2,3) - should have more spacing than 00:17:115 (1,2) - as my opinion)
4. 00:19:613 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:23:610 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:27:606 (1,2,3,4,1) - can you use the same disntance settings here z
5. 00:30:604 (1) - 00:32:602 (1) - 00:34:600 (1) - 00:35:600 (1) - idk maybe you dont even need to spam NC here, if you want to spam then do it on 00:36:599 (2,3) - instead orz

Invader

1. 00:08:622 (1,2) - this jump is too sudden imo, consider to nerf the spacing
2. 00:10:620 (1,2) - vs. 00:11:620 (1,2) - can cause inconsistency since they have somewhat same music strength
3. 00:29:355 - idk maybe 1/8 thingy works here than 00:27:606 (1,2,3,4) - imo, current one feels overmapped since the audio is too weak or idk even they had 1/8 beats on first place (well im on pretty noisy environment so I apologize if there's actual 1/8 lo)
4. 00:38:098 - silence the sliderend pls

goodluck

1. 00:03:876 (6,7,1) - so for the whole beginning section 00:01:878 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is the only one you didn't stacked anything with 1/4, consider to stack this triples for consistency i guess Fixed~
2. 00:08:123 (1,1) - why 3/4? The strong instruments are on red ticks. Even your 00:15:616 (3) - is following the red tick. Plus I think NC on 00:08:622 (1) - is unnecessary. Fixed~
3. 00:16:615 (2,3,1,2,3) - you can improve this somewhat related to squares thingy to make emphasis on 00:17:365 (2,3) - better (I mean, 00:17:365 (2,3) - should have more spacing than 00:17:115 (1,2) - as my opinion) I'm not sure, but I think I fixed a little bit~
4. 00:19:613 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:23:610 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:27:606 (1,2,3,4,1) - can you use the same disntance settings here z Fixed~
5. 00:30:604 (1) - 00:32:602 (1) - 00:34:600 (1) - 00:35:600 (1) - idk maybe you dont even need to spam NC here, if you want to spam then do it on 00:36:599 (2,3) - instead orz Fixed~

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sorry for late reply, so addicted with wizard101

CanadianBaka wrote:

CanadianB's Light Insane

1. 00:03:876 (6,7,1) - so for the whole beginning section 00:01:878 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this is the only one you didn't stacked anything with 1/4, consider to stack this triples for consistency i guess Fixed~
2. 00:08:123 (1,1) - why 3/4? The strong instruments are on red ticks. Even your 00:15:616 (3) - is following the red tick. Plus I think NC on 00:08:622 (1) - is unnecessary. Fixed~
3. 00:16:615 (2,3,1,2,3) - you can improve this somewhat related to squares thingy to make emphasis on 00:17:365 (2,3) - better (I mean, 00:17:365 (2,3) - should have more spacing than 00:17:115 (1,2) - as my opinion) I'm not sure, but I think I fixed a little bit~
4. 00:19:613 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:23:610 (2,3,4,5,1) - 00:27:606 (1,2,3,4,1) - can you use the same disntance settings here z Fixed~
5. 00:30:604 (1) - 00:32:602 (1) - 00:34:600 (1) - 00:35:600 (1) - idk maybe you dont even need to spam NC here, if you want to spam then do it on 00:36:599 (2,3) - instead orz Fixed~

Thanks~

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188,192,29854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,192,29979,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,192,30104,6,0,L|124:200,3,37.5
296,180,30604,2,0,L|354:170,3,37.5
208,265,31103,2,0,L|163:274,3,37.5
332,272,31603,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,276,31728,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,280,31853,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,288,31978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
492,320,32103,6,0,L|498:356,3,37.5
420,280,32602,2,0,L|416:228,3,37.5
336,320,33102,2,0,L|336:360,3,37.5
256,264,33601,5,0,0:0:0:0:
224,236,33726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,204,33851,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,172,33976,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,156,34101,6,0,L|80:184,3,37.5
192,204,34600,2,0,L|236:172,3,37.5
172,296,35100,2,0,L|128:324,3,37.5
289,271,35600,2,0,L|325:243,3,37.5
140,316,36099,6,0,L|98:300,3,37.5
289,271,36599,6,0,L|319:317,3,37.5
188,198,37098,6,0,L|221:151,3,37.5
289,271,37598,5,0,0:0:0:0:

sorry for late reply, so addicted with wizard101





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I also decided to mod the diffs

[Easy]

00:05:125 (2) - remove the slider, and just make this a circle to emphasize the beat 00:05:375 - here
00:31:103 (1,1) - these should both be a similar shape, for structure and aesthetically reasons.
00:33:102 (1,2,3) - inconsistant spacing
00:37:098 (2) - curve slider for better blanket?

Actually really well-made diff

[Normal]

00:07:123 (5) - move this higher up so it lines up with 00:06:124 (4) - this
00:13:618 (1,2,3,4) - why is there an all of a sudden note density loss? I mean yes I know the song is quite repetetive and you want to change the rhythm up more, but there really is no need to undermap, but more of just a different change of rhythm.

would suggest you go through the kiai time in normal diff and polish the triangle sliders and such

here's the mod you forgot to respond to, give me kudosu for this post please

HydroCannon13 wrote:

Hey, here is the mod from #modreqs

[ Easy]

1. 00:13:618 (4) - unsure why this is the only 1/1 slider in the section that ends on a downbeat. imo what you should do is change 00:12:119 (3,4) to the "double slider" pattern that you did at 00:04:126 (1,2), because they are the same in the music (and also, add an nc to whatever you end up having at 00:12:119 for consistency in ncs)
2. for the whole kiai, im pretty sure the ncs are on the wrong 2/1 beats. for example, at 00:31:103 (1,2), I believe (2) should be nc and not (1) (and same for every other pair of 1/1 sliders in the kiai, up until 00:35:100 (3) (00:33:102 (1,2) is the last pair i think should be changed.)) This is because they are the start of each measure in the kiai
3. 00:37:098 (2) - lower the volume on the end? its really awkwardly loud atm since its a different sound than ive been used to for the duration of the map

[ Normal]

1. 00:07:123 (1) - take off the nc here? its very out of place in terms of the regularity of ncs
2. 00:17:365 (1) - ^
3. 00:22:111 (1) - better not to nc this imo, first of all you didnt in the easy diff and secondly, since tag coop alternates on ncs, one player is going to get only 1 circle to click while the other one gets a much harder pattern.
4. 00:26:107 (1) - ^
5. same kiai thing i said in easy, and also same volume thing

[ Irre's Hard]

1. 00:02:877 (5,6) - why have a slider end on strong beats as you do? its the only time you dont put clicking emphasis on similar sounds throughout the first section (not including the second half which is a copy)
2. 00:10:870 (5,6) - ^
3. 00:09:122 (1) - imo a better spacing idea is to have it the same number of pixels away from (2) as (2) is from (1), to increase readability (no overlap), since the decrease in pitch is already shown with the slider velocity.
4. 00:34:601 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - does each stack need its own nc? better to go with nc consistency here (or maybe i just dont understand why you did it :/)
5. 00:12:619 (5) - aimod telling me the slider end isnt snapped

[ CanadianB's Light Insane]

• 
  ayy =P

1. 00:08:123 (1,2) - cant tell what you are going for with (2), since (1) is clearly following the main melody i expected you to do the same with (2)
2. 00:16:116 (1) - 1/2 slider is better i think, for the same reason as the previous point
3. 00:31:603 (1) - no need to nc?
4. 00:33:601 (1) - ^
5. 00:36:599 (1,1,1) - ^

[ Invader]

1. 00:35:600 (4,5) - should this be a 1/4 slider to be consistent with 00:36:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6)?

overall really solid map, sorry my mod was mostly ncs...

anyway, good luck

spooky fish wrote:

M4M from modreqs

easy

00:15:117 -
00:16:116 - i think these sounds are important and should be mapped even in an easy difficulty.

invader

general:
i think this plays better with ar9
this difficulty fits the rhythm of the song but the spacing\flow are uncomfortable.

00:19:613 (5,6,7,8) - the sliders here fit the music, but they feel super bad to play. maybe replace with one or two repeat sliders instead of the 4 kicksliders?
00:22:111 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this section could do with some breaking up with sliders.
00:23:485 (4,1) - i don't see the reason behind the jump in the middle of this stream
00:27:606 (1,2,3,4) - same as 00:19:613 (5,6,7,8)
00:32:602 (4,5,6,7) - the flow here is really uncomfortable
00:33:601 (3,4) - ^
00:35:849 (6,7) - stream jumping and turning at this angle feels really bad
00:37:098 (1,2,3,4) - same as the last two points
00:37:598 (1) - sv on this feels too high compared to general spacing of the map.

looked through the rest of the difficulties and didn't notice anything

Neoskylove wrote:

m4m

[Easy]
00:14:118 - add a beat
00:34:101 (1) - delete NC

[Normal]
00:31:103 (1,3) - swap NC
too many 1/2 terms, you can delete 00:32:852 (4) - ,00:35:849 (5) -

[Invader]
00:17:864 (3,1) - don't stack looks hard toread
00:19:613 (5,6,7,8) - ^ don't make this overlap.
00:23:485 (4,1) - why you made jump with circles?

Goodluck

CanadianBaka wrote:

I fixed one thing in my diff, you probably won't even see it


https://puu.sh/suj71/7254feae73.osu

Neoskylove wrote:

I saw too bad overlaps in your map.
For example, Invader diff 00:19:613 (5,6,7,8) -
And When you edit maps, Think about what beat you should emphasize.
Emphasizing is important for expressing the map.
So totally Invader diff, Delete bad looking overlaps, and wrong emphasize.
And your maps' quality could be better, absolutely.

CanadianBaka wrote:

I will give REAL osu!coins to the BN who bubbles this.

Bubblun wrote:

CanadianBaka wrote:

I will give REAL osu!coins to the BN who bubbles this.

I will give succ to the BN that bubbles this.

Finshie wrote:

m4m

[Invader]

00:19:613 (5,6,7,8) - sliderbreak heaven. cosider changing this. Why else should I change it besides it's easy to sliderbreak?
00:27:606 (1,2,3,4) - ^same ^
00:29:105 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - ??? What's wrong with it? lol-
00:29:105 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - descrease the spacing for these. It's a gradual rise to compliment the song better. might be fine if 00:33:601 (3,4) - is a slider I was thinking that too, but the variation made sense as well. It's flow isn't the best so in the end I might have to apply that.

CanadianBaka wrote:

I will not be returning to osu! for a while now due to IRL issues, if you can take the suggestions in for me, but remember my mapping style.


Good luck!

And when I return I hope this
is close to ranking

Finshie wrote:

m4m

[CanadianB's Light Insane]

Filling in for CanadianBaka until they get back.

00:04:126 (1) - change slider's direction to make it like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6761137 for better flow. It's not curved enough to influence the player's direction. Just because it's not directly aiming at the next note doesn't mean it's bad flow.
00:16:116 (1,2) - new players might sliderbreak/miss on this one. consider changing it. I agree, but I also don't agree. Since no motion is required to play the reverse slider, the player is given a chance to focus in on the upcoming note. At the same time, they can't tell when the slider's going to end, so they might miss-click. I'm gonna keep it this way for now, will change if this gets suggested anymore.
00:18:114 (1) - remove this and extend 00:17:864 (4) - to 00:18:114 (1) -
It's a strong enough note to have a hit circle.

CanadianBaka wrote:

can you change "canadinaB's light insane" to "CanadianBaka's light insane" ? Thanks!

CanadianBaka wrote:

Because I want all of my GD's to be called "CanadainBaka's [enter diff name here]" Thanks!!! Just an OCD thing

CanadianBaka wrote:

thanks, and from now on just take replies in for me as I wont be returning for 6 months XD


Thanks!