OwenF04 wrote:

Hello! From my queue

Nightmare

00:53:381 - i think you should make this a jack with the one below | ok

00:53:550 - ^^ like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8542194 | ok

01:17:230 (77230|3,77272|2,77314|1,77356|0) - i don't think the sound is clear enough for these, and should all be a LN. Up to you | change LN to 4 notes stairs

01:26:499 (86499|0,86583|2,86668|2) - as they are the same sound and pitch i think these 3 should jack | ok

01:27:005 (87005|0,87089|2,87173|2) - ^^ | ok

01:30:038 (90038|0) - i think the sound behind this note isn't loud enough. even at full speed. i recommend deleting it and rearranging the remaining 3 notes for a better layout | keep

01:30:881 (90881|2,90923|3,90965|1,91008|0) - can barely hear these 4 notes | ok

01:32:735 (92735|3) - i can imagine this note being painful to play, with a 1/8 gap from the slider. but ya know i'm not a top player. If you were to change it, probably just delete it and stick with a double no

MX

why is 00:53:634 (53634|0,53676|1,53718|2,53760|3) different to 00:54:982 (54982|0,54982|2,55067|3,55067|1) ? they should be the same | keep, same part is here 00:56:331 -

01:01:499 (61499|2,61499|3,61612|2,61612|3,61724|1,61724|0,61836|1,61836|0) - why the sudden change to jacks? either make the whole section jacks, or make them all alternate. | music change and it's ok to play

01:12:173 (72173|1,72173|0,72286|1,72286|0,72398|2,72398|3,72510|0,72510|1,72623|0,72623|1,72735|3,72735|2) - it works, but maybe an arrangement like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8542342 works better..? it just fits evenly, that's all | ok

01:17:230 (77230|3,77272|2,77314|1,77356|0) - like in "nightmare", i don't think the sound it clear enough | but it exist really

HD

00:08:213 (8213|3,8297|2,8381|1,8465|0) - what are these representing? i can hear a faint sound, but it's not hear-able at full speed and the second note is't there. | have sound here, it's drum

00:28:606 (28606|1,28606|0,28774|2,28774|3,28943|0,28943|1,29027|2,29112|0,29112|3,29196|1,29280|3,29280|2,29364|0,29364|1) - control+h these? because the space between the doubles at the start is weird | ok

Not many problems that i could see.
Good luck!

Incendent wrote:

EZ

00:16:387 Why didn't you put a note here? To avoid repetition? Or no drum? Tone changes here. | ok
00:19:589 I'm sure that this note placement was intentional, but I feel that it would be better served at 00:19:758 because not only is it a drum sound, but it changes tone there as well. | it's on the white line so I think it's ok
00:28:353 Why not something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545333
I feel that the doubles are awkward, so I changed it. Doesn't change star rating as well. | keep
00:59:364 I like what you did here, but are you sure that the lower ranking will feel the same? (Talking about the stack) I suggest something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545840 | I think it's ok
01:12:847 are you sure that this stack is good? it's small. (Honestly with the stacks, I'm just swinging at air right now. I don't mind them, but I'm trying to think that it would be a lower ranking 100K~ player playing this. Although it's hard to do that when you aren't one, you know?) | It's not a big deal
01:22:454 I'm just pointing out that you didn't do these with the others before it. Changed up your style? or? | This LN means 2 fast-beats

HD

00:33:072 why is this less dense then the NM? | I do not want add anything here, so..
Don't have much else to say about this difficulty. (Nothing I could see anyways)

Mx

00:11:668 are you sure you want this LN to be a Shield LN? | yeah~
00:11:836 I don't think this should be a hand. | nope
00:12:005 I think this should be a hand. | ^
00:12:089 Ghost note? (I went back over it and played the song without notes. I can barely hear that tone, you sure you want a note there? It's not a ghost note, but it might as well be.) | actually it has sound but so soft. so I'm considering...
00:13:582 Should also be a hand I think.
A little self modding could go for the rest of that section (Similar parts as 00:11:668)
00:20:937 These Hand hammers are something else. | nope
01:17:904 Whats with the stack bruh? (Column |2|) | it's beat
(The rest of the part had "Some" stacking, but not as long as that one, so I figured I'd point it out)

Nightmare is it's own monster. I don't really have any experience modding anything greater than 4.8*'s So I think I'll pass on that one.
It's a good map in general, honestly, most of the things I pointed out are just small minor inconsistancies or something along those lines. Good luck on getting ranked!

Civilization wrote:

Hiya Here is your mod

Nightmare

00:12:089 (12089|3) - Remove this, cuz theres no sound | nope
00:14:786 (14786|2) - ^ | nope
00:17:482 (17482|2) - ^ | nope
00:53:803 (53803|0) - This should be a second roll, maybe a bit faster than the last one. | nope
00:55:151 (55151|0) - ^ | nope
01:00:376 (60376|2) - wew too fast | ok

MX

00:07:033 (7033|1) - remove this | nope
00:07:117 (7117|0) - Place a note on second column | nope
00:12:089 (12089|1) - eee no sound here | nope
00:14:786 (14786|3) - ^ | nope

Also here is a different BG if you wanna use it | thank you~ but the resolution of it is low,
GL

AJIekceu wrote:

How about adding in tags "Pump It Up 2013 Fiesta 2" ?
Since this track appeared there

Tofu1222 wrote:

Let's go.

4K: 1|2|3|4

[EZ]

1. 00:28:353 - 00:29:027 - I don't see any need to double here. Single notes fit better. | Totally right

[HD]

1. 00:25:656 - to 00:26:162 - I think that using doubles for the drums is easier for players to both notice and to play since they are regularly placed on each 1/2 line. | That's nice
2. 00:28:943 - to 00:29:364 - Well, I do see your point in this pattern but I feel a bit weird when you are using different double notes for HD and MX. I think making both into the same type of doubles is better, and patterns are your own choice. | yes, should be same
3. 00:50:937 (50937|0) - How about making this into a LN till 00:51:106 - ? | nice advice but I wanna keep it now
4. 00:53:634 - to 00:53:971 - and 00:56:331 - to 00:56:668 - , I think you can use similar LNs like 00:57:005 (57005|3,57173|0) - , which will give emphasis on the whole drum rolls. | I know it's cool, but 00:53:634 - I wanna make here a interval before 00:53:803 - this LN so do not wanna continuous hit 2 LNs one-after-one
5. 01:04:758 - From here, I think using doubles only for places of drumhit should be better because 01:05:432 - ,01:06:780 - and etc. are definitely weaker than other doubles. By deleting them you can also make a more reasonable gap with NM. | got it, really ghost here
6. 01:38:128 - Maybe it is better to add a note here for the crash sound.| done

[MX]

1. 00:16:640 (16640|3) - I think deleting this mini-jack should be better for MX, and you already did it at 00:20:010 - .| done
2. 00:17:482 - You are supposed to have a note here just as what you did before. | done

[Nightmare]

1. 00:20:769 (20769|1,20853|1) - These two sounds are heavy enough for doubles. | cool but, It will make 2 mini-jack, I dont wanna be like that
2. 00:32:567 - I hear this sound actually the same type of drum as 00:32:735 - , so why not make a double here? | fixed
3. 00:50:347 - You do need a double here for the drum. Even MX has a double here.
4. 00:53:044 - Same as above. | ^
5. 01:02:398 - 01:02:735 - 01:03:072 - 01:03:746 - How about double notes on these timelines for the heavy snares? | feel exciting
6. 01:31:724 (91724|3,92735|3) - I think 1/16 interval between these two objects are kinda too strict for players to hit accurately. How about ending the LN earlier at 01:32:651 - ? Or you can simply make the same pattern as MX, and it actually fits too. | ok

么么哒(づ￣ 3￣)づ

Tofu1222 wrote:

Let's go.

[notice]4K: 1|2|3|4
[HXJ's NM]

1. 00:04:505 (4505|0,4842|1,5179|2) - These three notes are wrongly snapped. They should be on 1/3 snaps: 00:04:533 - 00:04:870 - 00:05:207 - .
2. 00:05:432 - to 00:09:477 - You may add some notes for the disks like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10013260
3. 00:14:617 (14617|2) - Better delete this since you don't catch this at 00:11:921 - .
4. 00:20:095 (20095|2,20347|1) - Since these two have the same volume as 00:20:600 - , you may make both into double notes.
5. 00:26:162 - Better do a double of one normal note and one LN just like 00:26:583 - .
6. 00:28:353 - to 00:29:701 - I think it is a bit too easier and too similar with EZ. How about this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10013276
7. 00:30:376 - Here is also a cymbal so maybe a double (on col4)?
8. 00:31:724 - May add a note here to represent the drum roll.
9. 00:33:746 (33746|2,34589|0,35263|1,36612|2) - I do suggest you don't have them because they are quite unclear actually. Players won't react to each with full attention.
10. 00:54:477 (54477|1) - I think you can have it splited into two normal notes here. Why not give some variability to your patterns?
11. 00:56:499 (56499|3) - The drum roll represented by this LN is actually the same as 00:57:005 (57005|2) - this kind, so I think you should extend 00:56:499 (56499|3) - to double length.
12. 01:09:814 (69814|1,70151|2) - I feel you can delete them to focus more on the drums.
13. 01:19:252 - 01:19:589 - As it is already in kiai, I think you can add notes here for melodies to complete your patterns.
14. 01:20:432 - 01:20:937 - Why skip them? There are still drums.
15. 01:20:600 - You miss a melody sound here so add here a double.
16. 01:26:836 - 01:27:342 - May add single notes here for heavier drums, which also make a good spread with HD.
17. 01:28:016 - Add a note here for the snare.
18. 01:29:870 (89870|0,89870|1) - You don't need a double here as no heavy drums present. A solution here is rather than having LNs for 01:29:196 (89196|0,89364|1) - , using short LNs for 01:29:533 - and 01:29:870 - . Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10013326

16:04 Tofu1222: EZ
16:05 Tofu1222: 01:21:949 (81949|3) - Delete because 1/4 snaps are a bit too hard for EZ
16:06 _Stan: haol
16:07 _Stan: done
16:08 Tofu1222: HXJ的怎么搞 你fix吗？
16:08 Tofu1222: 还是我post
16:09 _Stan: post
16:19 Tofu1222: HD没问题
16:20 Tofu1222: 顺带问一句 hitsound是复制的吧 应该没问题？
16:20 _Stan: MX尾杀有问题
16:20 _Stan: 昨天self-mod已经改了update了
16:21 _Stan: hs
16:21 Tofu1222: MX这里00:32:398 - to 00:33:072 - 
16:22 Tofu1222: 和Nightmare snap不一样
16:22 Tofu1222: 我知道是简化 不过感觉会被说成unsnap
16:22 _Stan: 那怎么该
16:22 Tofu1222: 哪一个snap是正确的
16:23 _Stan: 这四段的beat数 分别是3 4 5 6
16:23 Tofu1222: emm
16:23 _Stan: Nightmare后面的 5 6 也简化了 不然要用到1/12 1/16
16:24 Tofu1222: 对 所以问题就是你现在要用哪个 
16:24 Tofu1222: 我是认为做难MX不如简化一下Nightmare
16:24 _Stan: 你是说把 Ni的也做成3 3 3 3
16:24 _Stan: ？
16:25 Tofu1222: 对
16:25 _Stan: 行
16:25 Tofu1222: 你觉得呢
16:25 _Stan: 好
16:25 Tofu1222: ok
16:25 _Stan: mx 3 3 3 3 night 3 3 3 3
16:25 _Stan: 但是night里我每一个part第一note都做成double
16:26 _Stan: 稍微加一点点难度
16:26 Tofu1222: 没问题
16:26 Tofu1222: 只要snap没问题就行
16:26 Tofu1222: 00:48:241 - 然后MX这里我觉得应该double 和00:47:735 - 一样
16:27 _Stan: ok add a LN at col [3]
16:27 Tofu1222: 00:56:499 (56499|2,56499|3,56583|0,56583|1) - MX和Nightmare一样 我觉得这里应该用roll
16:28 Tofu1222: MX 1/4 Nightmare 1/8
16:28 _Stan: hao
16:28 Tofu1222: 因此你这里的hitsound也要改一下
16:29 Tofu1222: 和后面你的drum
16:29 Tofu1222: subbass*
16:29 _Stan: 我会统一成hat1、8
16:29 _Stan: 1/8 hat
16:29 Tofu1222: ah 可以
16:29 _Stan: 嗯 我知道subbassb
16:29 _Stan: 不过这是两个part
16:29 Tofu1222: 对 我刚看出来hh
16:31 _Stan: 00:56:499 - 我改回去了
16:31 _Stan: 不roll, still LN
16:31 Tofu1222: 也可以
16:31 _Stan: 前面也是这么设置的，关于Ni里的问题 我 double-hit 是因为这里确实有连击
16:32 _Stan: 而Ni里之前相同的roll部分 没有， 所以我为了增加难度没用2LNs 用了double-hit
16:32 Tofu1222: 嗯
16:32 Tofu1222: 我能听出来 只是感觉相比比较弱
16:32 _Stan: 那行，这样吧
16:33 Tofu1222: 但是hitsound要统一呀
16:33 Tofu1222: owo
16:33 _Stan: 我把nightmare连击改成双LNs
16:33 _Stan: 对
16:33 _Stan: 所以就这样改
16:33 Tofu1222: 可以
16:34 Tofu1222: 01:14:870 - 01:15:038 - 我觉得这里可以和HD做点变化 放triple
16:34 Tofu1222: 也符合这个音乐
16:36 Tofu1222: 在看Nightmare之前 想到个事
16:36 _Stan: 好 add 2 note at col [1]01:14:870 -  and 01:15:038 -
16:36 Tofu1222: EZ NM HD的变速绿线都删了吧
16:36 Tofu1222: 平常是不给低难度加变速的
16:36 _Stan: haode
16:40 Tofu1222: OK了吗
16:40 _Stan: 你说删除绿线吗
16:41 Tofu1222: 嗯
16:41 _Stan: 最后删
16:41 Tofu1222: ok
16:41 Tofu1222: MX没问题了 看Ni吧
16:41 Tofu1222: 00:17:314 - 这里你double但你前面这个位置都没用诶 你用还是不用呢
16:43 Tofu1222: 00:20:769 (20769|1,20853|1) - 感觉和前面00:19:758 (19758|3,19758|2,19842|1,19842|0,19926|3,19926|2,20010|1,20010|0) - 这些是一样的 用双键？
16:44 _Stan: 用
16:44 Tofu1222: 00:25:488 - 双键感觉就ok了 这里没有旋律音
16:44 _Stan: 双键可以，但是triple-hit 真的好嘛
16:45 _Stan: 改了
16:45 Tofu1222: triple hit?
16:45 _Stan: 00:20:769 - to 00:20:937 -
16:46 _Stan: col [1]
16:46 Tofu1222: 你可以不把这俩叠起来呀
16:46 _Stan: ok 改好了
16:48 Tofu1222: 01:33:831 - 这里有鼓 可以double
16:49 _Stan: fixed
16:49 Tofu1222: OK
16:49 Tofu1222: 没问题了
16:49 Tofu1222: 你删绿线 我给你去post
16:50 _Stan: hao
16:51 _Stan: 你说的E N H绿线 其实就是
16:51 _Stan: 0.8x -0.9x
16:51 Tofu1222: 对
16:51 _Stan: 那段慢速的地方是吧
16:51 _Stan: 两条 好 都删了
16:51 _Stan: 3难度
16:51 Tofu1222: OK

1. 00:22:960 (22960|1,23465|0) - Shorten these two LNs to 00:23:128 - and 00:23:634 - because these are where the bass sounds end.
2. Throughout the whole diff I found that 1/4 LNs are used widely and actually I don't recommend that because 1/4 LNs are way too hard for beginners for NM to hold and release such accurately. I hope you can change all to 1/2 LNs and actually they fit too and play better.

Tofu1222 wrote:

IRC Mod for my boyfriend Stan and fixed patterns, green lines in other diffs except NM.

[HXJ's NM]

1. 00:22:960 (22960|1,23465|0) - Shorten these two LNs to 00:23:128 - and 00:23:634 - because these are where the bass sounds end.
2. Throughout the whole diff I found that 1/4 LNs are used widely and actually I don't recommend that because 1/4 LNs are way too hard for beginners for NM to hold and release such accurately. I hope you can change all to 1/2 LNs and actually they fit too and play better.

chouyaa wrote:

hi there!
M4M on ur queue~
1|2|3|4

Hard

00:01:050 (1050|2) - move to col 2? the sounds between 00:00:881 - and 00:01:050 - are pretty different.
give it a column space will give a separation and makes ur layering neater. | I understand, but I wanna keep with MX and Nightamre

00:01:977 (1977|0,2019|1,2482|1,2567|0,2904|0,2988|1) - the notes on the left hand are too heavy and it makes the map imbalance.
also check > 00:02:061 (2061|2,2398|2,2735|2,3072|2) - for the part that need to be rearranged.
try 00:02:061 (2061|2,2398|2,2735|2,3072|2) - instead. | nope, for 3-notes stair it's easiest way to hit in this pattern

00:04:645 (4645|0,4982|0,5319|0) - couldnt understand why are this LNs got onto the same column whereas each on them have significant sound differences
this are very opposite compared with 00:03:241 (3241|3,3578|2,3915|1,4252|0) - which u put each of them on different columns according to the sounds. | cuz it's really different density

00:14:617 - should be a note here, similar with 00:13:690 (13690|2,13774|3,13859|0) -
it would be inconsistent if u ignore it. | nope, HD should be easier that other diff in this section - end of a part

00:32:398 - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10059815
the sounds at 00:32:398 - and 00:32:567 - is pretty same, applies at 00:32:735 - and 00:32:904 - as well. also it gives more emphasize to the song itself. | actually it;s tone down

00:41:331 (41331|1,41331|0) - ctrl+H to fill the right column, so empty there. | ok

00:52:286 - 00:52:454 - shouldnt they be double? similar with 00:29:196 - 00:29:027 - | really should be but in HD I make it easier on purpose

01:18:746 (78746|0,78915|0) - move to col 3, col 3 is unused | on purpose

01:43:437 (103437|0) - i think it should extended to 01:45:544 - since the sound is getting lower right there, not at 01:45:207 - | nope

goodluck <3

Critical_Star wrote:

好棒棒, Q

Kamikaze wrote:

hitsound volume crusade

the mp3 quality is not too great, is there no official album from PIU to grab a better mp3 quality off? The other Dream to Nightmare chart I have on osu has a bit worse mp3 but you can still hear artifacts in this one so if possible try to get a better quality one

Kamikaze wrote:

the hitsounds, especially sub bass and hat blend in with the mp3 and hitnormals partially, although hitnormals are hearable on the default skin, all of those are barely over what I would consider straight up not okay so I recommend to up the volume by at least 10%

Kamikaze wrote:

I've heard really mixed opinions about the patterning and I myself don't really like ending most bursts with hands because that creates minijacks that don't have much meaning but that's minor, I told people to post if they have any suggestions

Lanturn wrote:

So um. Metadata team here. Correct me if I'm wrong since I'm not really knowledgeable about the Groove series.

In the Groove 3 isn't a real game. It's a modified theme that people were able to put on machines.

The actual In the Groove 3 game was canceled because of a lawsuit with Konami or something so it doesn't actually exist.

Because of this, Your current source is invalid and should be placed in the tags or removed.

Instead please use "PUMP IT UP - 2013 FIESTA 2 -" as the source since it appeared on this version of the game.


Unicode Title: Dream to Nightmare
Unicode Artist: Nightmare
Source: PUMP IT UP - 2013 FIESTA 2 -

- References:
+ http://www.piugame.com/piu.prime2/pumpitup/software.php
+ https://lanturn.s-ul.eu/2L0sAQyk
+ https://lanturn.s-ul.eu/96nc1hYh

Let me know and I can call a QAT to DQ this. Also consider checking the other posts by Kamikaze and Wadu for other fixes that may need to be applied.

_Stan wrote:

Some one like blend or some one like overshaowing, but I think the good way to make it is to balence them. If you think it's so unhearable I can add the volume. So I'll add at least 10%, too much I afaird that will sick them who don't like overshaowing

Wadu wrote:

MX
01:05:432 - col 3
01:06:780 - col 2
01:08:128 - col 3
01:09:477 - col 3 (should be col 2 for consistency)
01:10:825 - col 3
these all jack I make it in design. As for it is MX diff so short mini-jack here I think is ok for player that have MX level to play and jack with next jack interval is 1s is enough to give player to relax and prepare

Nightmare
01:00:713 to 01:02:061
I really don't know what to say, other than.. What the hell is this?
You gotta change this, it's way too dense for the map.
I think it's not to dense, it's just more than 01:12:173 - , for player that can play 5* it's not so super-hard to hit in 1/6

Fine chart anyway, gl!

Lanturn wrote:

Unicode Title: Dream to Nightmare
Unicode Artist: Nightmare
Source: PUMP IT UP - 2013 FIESTA 2 -

Kamikaze wrote:

The pattern looks better, I'm fine with that

however I still think that sub bass, bass and hat hitsounds are way too blending, especailly hat

I checked and hat absolutely has to be at 100% to be clearly hearable (even then it's not perfect) and both bass hitsounds should be at at least 90%

You can change that fast by doing the replace all command in notepad inside the .osu file like this:

Deif wrote:

It's true that the timing is off, but not that much as you stated. Offset should be 56 instead (+17 to the current one) if you hear other sections of the song. The first note is a delayed scratch anyway, so it's hard to base the whole song's offset on it.

Deif wrote:

Additionally, the song uses a 3/4 timing signature at the beginning (if you follow the drums) and then changes to 4/4 again. It's discussable to use additional metronome resets on the sections 00:22:976 - to 00:37:807 - and 01:16:908 - to 01:27:695 - since its chaos is in the nature of this song, though you probably won't need them.

Etsu wrote:

Hi, would like to point out the hs:


Diff EZ in 00:31:892 (31892|3) - should be hat like the diff HD and MX.

SPOILER

00:45:376 (45376|1) - is bass or sub bass?

00:50:937 (50937|3) - missing hat and 00:56:331 (56331|3) -

01:11:836 (71836|1) - inconsistency and 01:12:510 (72510|0) - ?

SPOILER

The length EZ is inconsistent, delete and add LN again 01:43:437 (103437|0) -

sebaex wrote:

Hello, a little mod here

Both MX & Nightmare

00:12:106 (12106) - 00:14:803 (14803) - 00:17:499 (17499) - Those notes aren't playing something, delete them

Yep it's little

Tofu1222 wrote:

Because the offset is changed, you need to snap all green lines to the new offset. Go to "Timing" and select all green timing points. Then you will see a input box telling you to change all the timing points by a certain time. Enter 17 into the box and Aimod warnings will disappear.
oki, done. Thanks

In MX and Nightmare, 00:45:393 - here should only be a sub bass hitsound so delete the bass.
fixed

In EZ, make 01:11:853 (71853|1,72190|3,72527|0) - them into drumhit as you put drumhit instead of sub bass for all in EZ. Be sure to add drumhit to other diffs in the same point as 01:11:853 - too.
ok

Besides, NM is based on entirely different hitsound base, since you only put sub bass instead of drumhit in NM when these two hitsounds have conflicts. I would prefer you to actually make all sub bass in NM that actually also have drumhit hitsounds into drumhit, which might be a pretty exhausting job. It's just a suggestion, since it will not harm if you just make all in NM in a different way, which keeps the consistency in itself. I am just with the purpose of keeping the consistency of the whole mapset so it depends on you.
yeah, it's right. I already changed it into Drumhit sound and keep same with EZ setting in HS

Maybe give it like 3 days to wait if there are other issues being brought up by other modders. If not, I will just rebubble it as soon as possible. Hopefully we can let it go and save osu!mania again.

Garalulu wrote:

sorry for late, but I have to check it

[EZ]

1. 00:16:404 (16404|1) - should be drumhit.wav as other diffs did.
2. 00:19:775 - for melody progress, you should add one note here, it also has melody line.
3. 00:32:247 (32247|2) - should be hat.wav.
4. 00:55:168 (55168|3) - should be sub bass.wav.
5. 01:29:213 - 01:29:550 - for drum, adding LN as 01:28:033 (88033|1) - is better for me. It's heavy enough, should be mapped.
6. 01:34:100 (94100|2) - just putting one note at 1/1 line is not good idea tho. That sound starts at 01:34:100 (94100|2) - , so pattern should be same with sound. Making LN from 01:34:016 - to 01:34:269 - or just put one note at 01:34:016 - instead of 01:34:100 - is better tho.

[HXJ's NM]

1. 00:50:786 (50786|1) - it has 2 quite different sound, 00:50:786 - 00:50:954 - sounds like scratch, 00:50:954 - 00:51:291 - drum roll. I don't think it can be placed with one LN.

[HD]

1. 00:55:168 - 00:55:336 - drum roll part, only this part is mapped with 1/4 stream, rather than LN. it doesn't have heavy 1/4 thing, just one LN is better tho.

[Nightmare]

1. 00:13:202 (13202|3) - punk.wav is missing.
2. 00:56:516 (56516|3) - you used bass.wav for this but why not for 00:53:820 (53820|0) - ? I can't find difference when I listen this without adding hitsound.
3. 01:05:617 - drumhit.wav is missing.

solid chart, nice work!