Shiro-neechan wrote:

Mod for Mod Request

[General]

1. BPM: OK
2. Offset: OK
3. AiMod: 00:53:297 - just click the note in column 3 to fix the AiMod in Expert Diff.
4. Audio: OK
5. Background: OK
6. Preview Point: OK

4k P A T T E R N - | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[EZ]

1. 00:00:713 (713|2,881|3) - Ctrl + G for consistency | keep
2. 00:39:308 (39308|3) - move to column 3 | keep
3. 00:56:668 (56668|0,56836|1,57342|2,57510|3,58016|1,58185|0,58690|3,58859|2) - i think much better if you changeese notes into jacks | ok
4. 01:17:567 (77567|1,77735|1) - in this part you using jack but 01:20:600 (80600|1,80769|2) - 01:23:297 (83297|2,83465|3) - these one is not a jack note (well it's these notes have similar sound and i think you need to reconsider this in that part) | ok

[HD]

1. 00:13:690 (13690|2,13774|1,13859|0) - try this parttern (well you using many stairs in all parts and i think you need to add some new pattern for fun to play) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7078924 | ok
2. 00:24:055 (24055|2,24140|3) - Ctrl + G (as i said about new pattern) | keep
3. 00:29:814 (29814|2,29926|1) - Ctrl + G (^^) | ok
4. 00:43:269 (43269|2,43353|3) - Ctrl + G (^^) | keep
5. 00:48:999 (48999|1,49083|2) - Ctrl + G (^^) | keep
6. 00:55:235 (55235|1) - move to column 4 | keep

[MX]

1. 00:16:218 - i think you need to add one note here. Similar sound like these one 00:16:724 - 00:17:061 - 00:17:398 - | it's same with before
2. 00:18:915 - this one too | ^
3. 00:31:218 - try to add LN in column 2 for the "uwaah" sound. | ok
4. 01:18:072 (78072|2) - move this to column 3. Well 01:17:904 (77904|2,78072|2) - this one is not similar sound to use jack. 01:18:241 (78241|2,78409|2) - this one is acceptable but not this one 01:17:904 (77904|2,78072|2) - | cuz music tone here is down
5. 01:40:656 (100656|0,100699|1,100741|3,100783|2,100825|1,100867|0,100909|2,100951|3,100994|1,101036|0,101078|3,101120|2) - i think much better to use stair than this pattern. | ok

Thanks again for mod my map..I will apply your mod if the net is back in my house because the net has been disconnected since last Sunday and I was modding your map in the internet shop. (Well uploading is restricted in the internet shop). Good luck to your map

DustMoon wrote:

Nightmare - Dream to Nightmare [OsuMania]
1|2|3|4

MX

00:23:465 (23465|3,23465|0) - 添加一个note在2号键位 参照00:23:803 (23803|1,23803|2,23803|3) - | ok
00:28:353 - 建议:osu.ppy.sh/ss/7197217 | keep
00:47:061 (47061|0,47145|3,47230|0,47230|1) - 你仔细听会发现这三个鼓点是一样的。 | ok
00:52:791 (52791|2,52791|3,52791|1,52876|0) - 这两个鼓点是一样的。 | 这里是考虑难度和打击手感
01:03:788 (63788|0) - 这个键出现得太突兀了。 | drum确实在这个位置
01:27:510 (87510|0) - 这个长键应该开始于01:27:595 - 这个时间点 | 跟的drum

DustMoon wrote:

Nightmare - Dream to Nightmare [OsuMania]
1|2|3|4
General
BPM: OK
Offset: OK
Audio: OK
Background: OK
Preview Point: OK

HXJ's NM

00:35:263 (35263|1) - 应该结束于00:35:937 - 并在此处再添加一个LN
00:36:612 (36612|2) - 应该结束于00:37:286 - 并在此处再添加一个LN
00:40:488 (40488|0) - 移动到3
01:03:409 (63409|0) - ^

1. 00:05:685 - 这重音呀，这里是3/2的鼓，蓝线双键白线单键好一些
2. 00:25:741 - 。这个为什么要双键，鼓的话是1/2，那个whistle好像每个1/4都有，只抓蓝线打起来有点奇怪
3. 01:16:892 - 00:17:398 - 其实这两个地方音差不多，前面那个时间轴完全可以扔三键上去强调音的

1. 00:12:089 - 我觉得到mx了你扔个LN也没什么问题。。。这里音是长音的 后面有类似地方不提了 都建议LN搞个LN然后0.7-0.2x的渐减速绿线，会很有感觉
2. 00:23:465 - 音不是太重，建议双键就够
3. 00:33:072 - personal suggestion:每个1/2加渐加速绿线，虽然没什么用但线在加速，挺适合这里的音乐
4. 01:24:898 - 感觉可以继续变速，类似于00:20:937 - 你加过SV那么后面又不加就有点奇怪
5. 01:40:656 (100656|0,100699|1,100741|3,100783|2,100825|1,100867|0,100909|2,100951|3,100994|1,101036|0,101078|3,101120|2,101162|0,101162|1) - MX我建议你全往一边偏向，不管是硬打还是馅密都舒服，类似于 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7221350 现在有些不好打(对于低pp玩家

[Crz]Sword wrote:

m4m
column: 1|2|3|4
[HD]

1. 00:05:685 - 这重音呀，这里是3/2的鼓，蓝线双键白线单键好一些 | 我MX也没抓
2. 00:25:741 - 。这个为什么要双键，鼓的话是1/2，那个whistle好像每个1/4都有，只抓蓝线打起来有点奇怪 | FX音
3. 01:16:892 - 00:17:398 - 其实这两个地方音差不多，前面那个时间轴完全可以扔三键上去强调音的 | 好

[MX]

1. 00:12:089 - 我觉得到mx了你扔个LN也没什么问题。。。这里音是长音的 后面有类似地方不提了 都建议LN搞个LN然后0.7-0.2x的渐减速绿线，会很有感觉 | 我先保留
2. 00:23:465 - 音不是太重，建议双键就够 | 好
3. 00:33:072 - personal suggestion:每个1/2加渐加速绿线，虽然没什么用但线在加速，挺适合这里的音乐 | 好
4. 01:24:898 - 感觉可以继续变速，类似于00:20:937 - 你加过SV那么后面又不加就有点奇怪 | 好
5. 01:40:656 (100656|0,100699|1,100741|3,100783|2,100825|1,100867|0,100909|2,100951|3,100994|1,101036|0,101078|3,101120|2,101162|0,101162|1) - MX我建议你全往一边偏向，不管是硬打还是馅密都舒服，类似于 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7221350 现在有些不好打(对于低pp玩家 | 好

没什么硬伤，都是建议。。。GL 早飞呀

pocket-Gao wrote:

Hi

NM

01:30:376 - LN并不是抓鼓点 建议加个note

加油 good luck

Litharrale wrote:

Uncheck widescreen support
Your BG is a weird ass resolution, try and find a higher res one in a 16:9 or 16:10 ratio | ok

Since this is from In The Groove, you need to change your difficulty names according to this page t/178700 | to be honest, its weird so I wanna keep

EZ

I don't know how I feel about SV changes in a sub 1.5 star. It'll trip beginners up a tonne, especially since you have no idea it happens because it happens in the middle of a LN
01:18:578 (78578|0,79083|0,79336|0,79505|0) - Too hard for an EZ | ok

SC

imo there's nothing actually wrong with the map. Anything would just be nitpicking. But I had a couple of high level players play it and they all said the SV was too much so consider at least toning it down a bit. | considering

All I could find! Starred

Evening wrote:

MX

00:37:791 (37791|1,37791|2) - Feels more climatic if you did 3 notes here | it's reasonable, fixed

01:34:421 (94421|0) - Thinking of something like this for a change as the intensity of the instrumentals increase, the denser the section: | right

Image

01:41:162 (101162|1) - Kinda was expecting some sort of minijack at the end here since it was the hardest part in SC, seemingly quite an easy part for MX though | I'm thinking how to change

not much here i guess lol

01:03:788 (63788|0) - pretty sure this is 1/1 though | ok


SC

00:32:735 (32735|1,32819|1,32904|2,32988|2) - didn't really like how this pattern was played w.r.t. to the music itself, the track explicitly emphasized on the 1/2s (on 00:32:735 (32735|1,32904|2) - ) and the minijacks +the awkward trills on each hand (on 00:32:735 (32735|1,32798|0,32819|1,32946|0,32967|1) - ) doesn't really add up to.
Suggesting to do the following instead, the minijacks are still there but feel that it's more comfortable and emphasizes the 1/2s better: | yes

Image

00:43:016 (43016|1,43058|0) - Don't really dig the 12 21 rolling here, feels kinda awkward on slowjam, 12 12 would feel more comfy but it's really up to you lol, it'll look more plain. Side Note: I'm fine with 00:46:640 (46640|2,46682|3,46808|3,46850|2,46977|2) - though | ok

00:53:297 (53297|0,53381|0,53465|1,53550|1,53634|0,53676|1) - Don't really like the transition from minijacks to roll here, suggesting to move 00:53:550 (53550|1) - to the right by 1. The LN + minijack might look kinda nasty but since the LN is short, it shouldn't really matter (?) idk. Played fine for me | delete the LN and make them left right hand

01:00:291 (60291|0) - feel that it'd be more comfy if you moved this to the right by 1 or added another note on column 2. The whole section here revolves around jumptrills, the sudden change in pattern like 12 34 12 34 12 34 1 34 12 34 12 34 can trip players up. I suggested moving to column 2 maybe because I feel that it's more comfortable to transition 12 -> 2 instead of 12 -> 1 | okii, fixed

01:00:825 (60825|1) - Feel that it's more comfy if you didn't anchor on column 3, like so: | sure

Image

01:02:061 (62061|3) - Not sure about leaving this heavy kick with 1 note, might be a bit underwhelming | added

01:03:788 (63788|0) - I think this should be 1/1

01:17:904 (77904|1,78241|1,78409|1) - Kinda conflicted on what's the idea behind the LN here, feels a bit inconsistent once you start shifting it to the 3rd column on 01:21:527 (81527|2) - and 01:23:128 (83128|2) - . Otherwise I think this is a pretty nice emphasis on the bass when coupled with the SVs | thank~ I did it to col [3] to emphasis the feeling of rhythm, I think it's fine, friend and I play it

01:35:516 (95516|3) - Feels more comfy on the 3rd column, the 4th column there is already quite packed | ok

01:41:246 (101246|2) - kinda annoyed by the 2 2 12 12 mainly but i'm suggesting a whole new pattern if you're stuck on removing that 2 2 12 12 (I really don't like that 2->12 transition | ok

Image

01:43:437 - Might want to do a 0.9 or 0.8 instead of a plain 1.0 to signify the ending of the map | ok

SVs for MX and SC seems a o k for me | thx a lot

LordTimeWaste wrote:

Just to clarify this, if i say something about 0/1/2/3, i mean the 4 keys you are using for playing (1 = most left key, 4 = most right key).
Anyways, let's go!!!

SC

00:06:274 Note missing | consider deadlock and feeling of hit, so keep
00:07:960 I'd add a 3-note stream here | nope
00:09:814 (9814|3,9814|2,9982|1,9982|0,10151|1,10151|2,10319|2,10319|3) I'd move this part since 00:09:814 (9814|3,9814|2) is the beginning sound of 00:10:488 (10488|1,10488|0) | ok
00:11:668 Insert tripple here | idk
00:12:089 (12089|3) There is no sound for a jack | yes, it's have
00:14:786 (14786|2) No sound for a tripple | ^
00:21:106 (21106|1,21106|0,21106|2,21274|2,21274|1,21274|3,21443|2,21443|0,21443|1,21612|3,21612|2,21612|1,21780|0,21780|2,21780|1) I'd suggest switching between 0/2/3 and 0/1/3 tripples here because of the first one | done
00:23:044 (23044|1,23128|0,23213|2,23297|1,23381|0) These sound like 1/3th notes for me | it's 1/4
00:24:603 (24603|1) Ghostnote | it's penta-drums
00:32:398 Would suggest something like 0/2, 1, 0/2 here (because the sound changes) | considering
00:40:319 let it jack, my friend (same sound) | yeah
01:03:746 Double | nope
01:17:230 1/16th stream i think | no

MX

00:16:303 Would add a note | consider deadlock and feeling of hit, so keep
00:18:999 ^^ | consider deadlock and feeling of hit, so keep
00:24:814 Double | if I do, I'll make 00:24:982 - to 3 notes to emphasize, keep for now
00:24:898 ^^ | ^
00:55:656 Would add 2 more doubles for consistancy | ok
01:03:746 Double | not necessary

HD

01:03:746 I don't know, i get the point of emphazicing the down-sound, but i'd still would add a double | nope

EZ

00:23:971 (23971|0) I don't get this LN | it's continuous drums
00:30:376 (30376|3) Would split this LN into another one at 00:30:881 | ok
01:42:847 (102847|0) Starts at 01:42:932 | no, cuz here have mini jack sounds, I make this at 01:42:87 cuz it's 1/4 and easy to hit, then, through this LN to make a transition for 1/4

Wow, hardest mod i ever done so far... This map is pretty damn good, hope i could help you out a bit.

frolica wrote:

Hi~ From Cottony Cloud Modding Queue!

Here is modding!

SC

00:08:128 - Placing a note there seems good. | have no sounds here

00:12:089 (12089|3,14786|2,17482|2) - There certainly are sounds for notes, but removing them feels better for me (since they are not strong as others.) | it's fine

00:32:735 (32735|1,32735|0,32904|2,32904|3) - Are you sure that 2 notes fit there? Then 00:32:398 (32398|0,32567|0) - should apply the same rule. These are not different. | It's a little heavy really and this can make hit-feeling stronger

00:50:095 (50095|3,50095|1,50095|0,50179|2,50263|0,50263|3,50347|1,50432|2,50432|3) - Well, I think here these could be more better, such as http://puu.sh/uWwBU/4ecf8219e8.png Same opinion on the following one. | nope

01:00:291 (60291|1,60628|1) - Line 2 is too dense. How about moving one of them to Line 1. | nope

01:10:067 (70067|1,70067|0,70151|1,70151|3,70151|2) - I prefer this one : http://puu.sh/uWvPO/e1ee404b78.png | ok

01:13:522 (73522|3) - As you already used 32nd(1/8 snap) on MX, it could be changed to a 32nd one. | ok

01:41:162 - Well, though this is playable, it was not fun to play. There must be a better placement. | considering

SVs were fine for me.

Good Luck!

Protastic101 wrote:

*late boop*

[EZ]
00:00:376 (376|0,544|1,713|2,881|3) - I'd probably trill these so that it represents the repetition of the sound, kind of like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7732610 | ok
00:01:387 (1387|0) - Assuming the above is followed, I would consider moving this to 4 to be a complementary chord type to the [1][3] notes | ok
00:20:347 (20347|2,20600|1) - I would suggest flipping the notes here with control H to avoid making the 3/4 rhythm work in the same direction as that hinders readability at this level imo. Instead, it'd look like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7732641 | ok
00:29:701 (29701|1) - Consider extending this to 00:30:376 - so that it lasts for the entirety of the 1/3 burst | keep
00:33:072 - Since this is an easy, I would really recommend you set this to 0.9x instead so that the player is better able to get accustomed to the small slowjam here. I feel that at the moment, 0.8x is too slow and hinders readability too much for a target audience that is literally just getting into the game. | right
00:37:791 (37791|2,38128|1) - 00:40:488 (40488|2,40825|1) - I would consider stacking these notes in the same column to represent the 1/1 kick at the beginning of each measure. | ok
00:56:162 (56162|0) - Consider moving this to 3 for hand balance since column 3 isn't used from 00:53:971 - to 00:58:690 - | reasonable
00:56:668 - Here, I would highly recommend against using 1/2 mini stacks in an easy difficulty. Rather, I'd suggest you just give it a very similar hand movement, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7732744 | changed in another way
01:04:589 - I'd recommend adding a note here in 2 to cap the LN off and give the player a physical cue for when to release the LN | no change
01:03:409 (63409|3) - I'd also suggest that you start this LN at 01:03:746 - where the last kick from the music is, so it'd look something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7732760 | I remove the LN and a drum note, change in another way
01:17:567 (77567|1,77735|1) - Similar to what I mentioned above, I don't recommend using 1/2 stacks at this BPM for an easy diff, so consider moving the second highlighted note to 3? | ok
01:33:746 (93746|3,93831|2) - Fam no, you are not using 1/4 in an Easy at 178 bpm. At this level, players just aren't used to using any higher snaps, and 1/4 tend to be introduced in the normal diff where the player is more accustomed to slightly faster snaps. At this point, they're only grasping basic rhythms and mostly 1/1 snaps with some 1/2. Anyways, I'd just recommend removing 01:33:831 (93831|2) - | done

[HD]
00:29:701 - Would be nice to try a trill here imo since the sound kind of goes back and forth a bit https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7733075 | yes, and I Ctrl+H the last 3 notes to change hit of hand I'll think will better
00:56:331 (56331|1,56331|0,56499|3) - I'm pretty sure you could make this similar to the LNs like at 00:57:005 (57005|3,57173|0) - for consistency https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7733082 | keep, it's similar with before
01:03:746 (63746|0) - Might be nice to turn this into an LN and extend it to 01:04:589 - to represent the decay of the sound | not necessary
01:12:005 (72005|1,72089|2,72173|3,72286|2,72398|1) - this is a bit difficult to read since you switch the snap in between these bursts but it could easily be mistaken for a uniform 1/4 snap. Instead, I'd try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7733097 | yes
01:35:769 - This whole thing is kind of difficult to execute properly due to the 4 note long stacks at 01:35:937 (95937|2,96106|2,96274|2,96443|2) - or | 01:37:454 (97454|1,97623|1,97791|1,97960|1) - for example, plus the single note on the same hand in 1 or 4 which makes coordinating hands even more difficult. I would try something like this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7733112 | ok
01:42:426 (102426|0,102510|1,102595|0) - kind of a nasty and random turn to try and hit midway through the burst. I would suggest this instead https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7733100 | right

Nice map, best of luck =w=)b

Column :
|1|2|3|4|

Sarahkuai wrote:

FROM THIS THREAD

Column :
|1|2|3|4|

MX

01:02:567 (62567|1) - move to 3 | nope, it's accordingto the tone
01:02:567 (62567|1) - add 1 note | ???
01:42:089 (102089|1) - move to 1 | fixed
01:42:173 (102173|0) - move to 2 | fixed
01:42:258 (102258|2) - move to 4 | fixed

Nightmare

00:00:376 - add 1 LN at 2 | no need to emphasize
00:00:544 - add 1 LN at 3 | ^
00:00:713 - add 1 LN at 2 | ^
00:00:881 - add 1 LN at 3 | ^
01:01:724 - consider to changes it into a stairs/roll like 3-2-1 column until 01:02:005 - like this for example http://prntscr.com/fcm8gb | wanna keep same
00:21:949 (21949|2) - this LN should stop here 00:22:033 - then.. add LN here 00:22:117 - to 00:22:286 - | no, it's right at here
01:00:825 (60825|1,60825|0,60937|2,60937|3,61050|1,61050|3,61162|2,61162|1,61274|2,61274|3,61387|3,61387|1,61499|2,61499|1,61612|2,61612|3) - why you don't put all these to column 3&4? the sound are same here http://prntscr.com/fcmbah
01:04:252 (64252|0) - add 1 at 3 column | it's just a sound, not nessary make 3
01:04:252 (64252|0) - add 1 at 2 column | it's just a sound, not nessary make 3
01:04:252 - add 1 LN at column 1 to 1 01:04:589 - | ok
01:05:600 (65600|2) - move to 4 | ok
01:08:297 (68297|1) - move to 1 | ok
01:10:488 (70488|2) - move to 4 | ok
01:11:836 (71836|1) - move to 1 | ok
01:14:196 - add 2 note at column 3&4 | with the tone
01:20:263 (80263|2) - move to 4 | ok
01:26:668 (86668|0) - move to 3 | ok
01:27:173 (87173|0) - ^

GL

OwenF04 wrote:

Hello! From my queue

Nightmare

00:53:381 - i think you should make this a jack with the one below | ok

00:53:550 - ^^ like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8542194 | ok

01:17:230 (77230|3,77272|2,77314|1,77356|0) - i don't think the sound is clear enough for these, and should all be a LN. Up to you | change LN to 4 notes stairs

01:26:499 (86499|0,86583|2,86668|2) - as they are the same sound and pitch i think these 3 should jack | ok

01:27:005 (87005|0,87089|2,87173|2) - ^^ | ok

01:30:038 (90038|0) - i think the sound behind this note isn't loud enough. even at full speed. i recommend deleting it and rearranging the remaining 3 notes for a better layout | keep

01:30:881 (90881|2,90923|3,90965|1,91008|0) - can barely hear these 4 notes | ok

01:32:735 (92735|3) - i can imagine this note being painful to play, with a 1/8 gap from the slider. but ya know i'm not a top player. If you were to change it, probably just delete it and stick with a double no

MX

why is 00:53:634 (53634|0,53676|1,53718|2,53760|3) different to 00:54:982 (54982|0,54982|2,55067|3,55067|1) ? they should be the same | keep, same part is here 00:56:331 -

01:01:499 (61499|2,61499|3,61612|2,61612|3,61724|1,61724|0,61836|1,61836|0) - why the sudden change to jacks? either make the whole section jacks, or make them all alternate. | music change and it's ok to play

01:12:173 (72173|1,72173|0,72286|1,72286|0,72398|2,72398|3,72510|0,72510|1,72623|0,72623|1,72735|3,72735|2) - it works, but maybe an arrangement like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8542342 works better..? it just fits evenly, that's all | ok

01:17:230 (77230|3,77272|2,77314|1,77356|0) - like in "nightmare", i don't think the sound it clear enough | but it exist really

HD

00:08:213 (8213|3,8297|2,8381|1,8465|0) - what are these representing? i can hear a faint sound, but it's not hear-able at full speed and the second note is't there. | have sound here, it's drum

00:28:606 (28606|1,28606|0,28774|2,28774|3,28943|0,28943|1,29027|2,29112|0,29112|3,29196|1,29280|3,29280|2,29364|0,29364|1) - control+h these? because the space between the doubles at the start is weird | ok

Not many problems that i could see.
Good luck!

Incendent wrote:

EZ

00:16:387 Why didn't you put a note here? To avoid repetition? Or no drum? Tone changes here. | ok
00:19:589 I'm sure that this note placement was intentional, but I feel that it would be better served at 00:19:758 because not only is it a drum sound, but it changes tone there as well. | it's on the white line so I think it's ok
00:28:353 Why not something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545333
I feel that the doubles are awkward, so I changed it. Doesn't change star rating as well. | keep
00:59:364 I like what you did here, but are you sure that the lower ranking will feel the same? (Talking about the stack) I suggest something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8545840 | I think it's ok
01:12:847 are you sure that this stack is good? it's small. (Honestly with the stacks, I'm just swinging at air right now. I don't mind them, but I'm trying to think that it would be a lower ranking 100K~ player playing this. Although it's hard to do that when you aren't one, you know?) | It's not a big deal
01:22:454 I'm just pointing out that you didn't do these with the others before it. Changed up your style? or? | This LN means 2 fast-beats

HD

00:33:072 why is this less dense then the NM? | I do not want add anything here, so..
Don't have much else to say about this difficulty. (Nothing I could see anyways)

Mx

00:11:668 are you sure you want this LN to be a Shield LN? | yeah~
00:11:836 I don't think this should be a hand. | nope
00:12:005 I think this should be a hand. | ^
00:12:089 Ghost note? (I went back over it and played the song without notes. I can barely hear that tone, you sure you want a note there? It's not a ghost note, but it might as well be.) | actually it has sound but so soft. so I'm considering...
00:13:582 Should also be a hand I think.
A little self modding could go for the rest of that section (Similar parts as 00:11:668)
00:20:937 These Hand hammers are something else. | nope
01:17:904 Whats with the stack bruh? (Column |2|) | it's beat
(The rest of the part had "Some" stacking, but not as long as that one, so I figured I'd point it out)

Nightmare is it's own monster. I don't really have any experience modding anything greater than 4.8*'s So I think I'll pass on that one.
It's a good map in general, honestly, most of the things I pointed out are just small minor inconsistancies or something along those lines. Good luck on getting ranked!

Civilization wrote:

Hiya Here is your mod

Nightmare

00:12:089 (12089|3) - Remove this, cuz theres no sound | nope
00:14:786 (14786|2) - ^ | nope
00:17:482 (17482|2) - ^ | nope
00:53:803 (53803|0) - This should be a second roll, maybe a bit faster than the last one. | nope
00:55:151 (55151|0) - ^ | nope
01:00:376 (60376|2) - wew too fast | ok

MX

00:07:033 (7033|1) - remove this | nope
00:07:117 (7117|0) - Place a note on second column | nope
00:12:089 (12089|1) - eee no sound here | nope
00:14:786 (14786|3) - ^ | nope

Also here is a different BG if you wanna use it | thank you~ but the resolution of it is low,
GL

AJIekceu wrote:

How about adding in tags "Pump It Up 2013 Fiesta 2" ?
Since this track appeared there

Tofu1222 wrote:

Let's go.

4K: 1|2|3|4

[EZ]

1. 00:28:353 - 00:29:027 - I don't see any need to double here. Single notes fit better. | Totally right

[HD]

1. 00:25:656 - to 00:26:162 - I think that using doubles for the drums is easier for players to both notice and to play since they are regularly placed on each 1/2 line. | That's nice
2. 00:28:943 - to 00:29:364 - Well, I do see your point in this pattern but I feel a bit weird when you are using different double notes for HD and MX. I think making both into the same type of doubles is better, and patterns are your own choice. | yes, should be same
3. 00:50:937 (50937|0) - How about making this into a LN till 00:51:106 - ? | nice advice but I wanna keep it now
4. 00:53:634 - to 00:53:971 - and 00:56:331 - to 00:56:668 - , I think you can use similar LNs like 00:57:005 (57005|3,57173|0) - , which will give emphasis on the whole drum rolls. | I know it's cool, but 00:53:634 - I wanna make here a interval before 00:53:803 - this LN so do not wanna continuous hit 2 LNs one-after-one
5. 01:04:758 - From here, I think using doubles only for places of drumhit should be better because 01:05:432 - ,01:06:780 - and etc. are definitely weaker than other doubles. By deleting them you can also make a more reasonable gap with NM. | got it, really ghost here
6. 01:38:128 - Maybe it is better to add a note here for the crash sound.| done

[MX]

1. 00:16:640 (16640|3) - I think deleting this mini-jack should be better for MX, and you already did it at 00:20:010 - .| done
2. 00:17:482 - You are supposed to have a note here just as what you did before. | done

[Nightmare]

1. 00:20:769 (20769|1,20853|1) - These two sounds are heavy enough for doubles. | cool but, It will make 2 mini-jack, I dont wanna be like that
2. 00:32:567 - I hear this sound actually the same type of drum as 00:32:735 - , so why not make a double here? | fixed
3. 00:50:347 - You do need a double here for the drum. Even MX has a double here.
4. 00:53:044 - Same as above. | ^
5. 01:02:398 - 01:02:735 - 01:03:072 - 01:03:746 - How about double notes on these timelines for the heavy snares? | feel exciting
6. 01:31:724 (91724|3,92735|3) - I think 1/16 interval between these two objects are kinda too strict for players to hit accurately. How about ending the LN earlier at 01:32:651 - ? Or you can simply make the same pattern as MX, and it actually fits too. | ok

么么哒(づ￣ 3￣)づ

Tofu1222 wrote:

Let's go.

[notice]4K: 1|2|3|4
[HXJ's NM]

1. 00:04:505 (4505|0,4842|1,5179|2) - These three notes are wrongly snapped. They should be on 1/3 snaps: 00:04:533 - 00:04:870 - 00:05:207 - .
2. 00:05:432 - to 00:09:477 - You may add some notes for the disks like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10013260
3. 00:14:617 (14617|2) - Better delete this since you don't catch this at 00:11:921 - .
4. 00:20:095 (20095|2,20347|1) - Since these two have the same volume as 00:20:600 - , you may make both into double notes.
5. 00:26:162 - Better do a double of one normal note and one LN just like 00:26:583 - .
6. 00:28:353 - to 00:29:701 - I think it is a bit too easier and too similar with EZ. How about this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10013276
7. 00:30:376 - Here is also a cymbal so maybe a double (on col4)?
8. 00:31:724 - May add a note here to represent the drum roll.
9. 00:33:746 (33746|2,34589|0,35263|1,36612|2) - I do suggest you don't have them because they are quite unclear actually. Players won't react to each with full attention.
10. 00:54:477 (54477|1) - I think you can have it splited into two normal notes here. Why not give some variability to your patterns?
11. 00:56:499 (56499|3) - The drum roll represented by this LN is actually the same as 00:57:005 (57005|2) - this kind, so I think you should extend 00:56:499 (56499|3) - to double length.
12. 01:09:814 (69814|1,70151|2) - I feel you can delete them to focus more on the drums.
13. 01:19:252 - 01:19:589 - As it is already in kiai, I think you can add notes here for melodies to complete your patterns.
14. 01:20:432 - 01:20:937 - Why skip them? There are still drums.
15. 01:20:600 - You miss a melody sound here so add here a double.
16. 01:26:836 - 01:27:342 - May add single notes here for heavier drums, which also make a good spread with HD.
17. 01:28:016 - Add a note here for the snare.
18. 01:29:870 (89870|0,89870|1) - You don't need a double here as no heavy drums present. A solution here is rather than having LNs for 01:29:196 (89196|0,89364|1) - , using short LNs for 01:29:533 - and 01:29:870 - . Try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10013326

16:04 Tofu1222: EZ
16:05 Tofu1222: 01:21:949 (81949|3) - Delete because 1/4 snaps are a bit too hard for EZ
16:06 _Stan: haol
16:07 _Stan: done
16:08 Tofu1222: HXJ的怎么搞 你fix吗？
16:08 Tofu1222: 还是我post
16:09 _Stan: post
16:19 Tofu1222: HD没问题
16:20 Tofu1222: 顺带问一句 hitsound是复制的吧 应该没问题？
16:20 _Stan: MX尾杀有问题
16:20 _Stan: 昨天self-mod已经改了update了
16:21 _Stan: hs
16:21 Tofu1222: MX这里00:32:398 - to 00:33:072 - 
16:22 Tofu1222: 和Nightmare snap不一样
16:22 Tofu1222: 我知道是简化 不过感觉会被说成unsnap
16:22 _Stan: 那怎么该
16:22 Tofu1222: 哪一个snap是正确的
16:23 _Stan: 这四段的beat数 分别是3 4 5 6
16:23 Tofu1222: emm
16:23 _Stan: Nightmare后面的 5 6 也简化了 不然要用到1/12 1/16
16:24 Tofu1222: 对 所以问题就是你现在要用哪个 
16:24 Tofu1222: 我是认为做难MX不如简化一下Nightmare
16:24 _Stan: 你是说把 Ni的也做成3 3 3 3
16:24 _Stan: ？
16:25 Tofu1222: 对
16:25 _Stan: 行
16:25 Tofu1222: 你觉得呢
16:25 _Stan: 好
16:25 Tofu1222: ok
16:25 _Stan: mx 3 3 3 3 night 3 3 3 3
16:25 _Stan: 但是night里我每一个part第一note都做成double
16:26 _Stan: 稍微加一点点难度
16:26 Tofu1222: 没问题
16:26 Tofu1222: 只要snap没问题就行
16:26 Tofu1222: 00:48:241 - 然后MX这里我觉得应该double 和00:47:735 - 一样
16:27 _Stan: ok add a LN at col [3]
16:27 Tofu1222: 00:56:499 (56499|2,56499|3,56583|0,56583|1) - MX和Nightmare一样 我觉得这里应该用roll
16:28 Tofu1222: MX 1/4 Nightmare 1/8
16:28 _Stan: hao
16:28 Tofu1222: 因此你这里的hitsound也要改一下
16:29 Tofu1222: 和后面你的drum
16:29 Tofu1222: subbass*
16:29 _Stan: 我会统一成hat1、8
16:29 _Stan: 1/8 hat
16:29 Tofu1222: ah 可以
16:29 _Stan: 嗯 我知道subbassb
16:29 _Stan: 不过这是两个part
16:29 Tofu1222: 对 我刚看出来hh
16:31 _Stan: 00:56:499 - 我改回去了
16:31 _Stan: 不roll, still LN
16:31 Tofu1222: 也可以
16:31 _Stan: 前面也是这么设置的，关于Ni里的问题 我 double-hit 是因为这里确实有连击
16:32 _Stan: 而Ni里之前相同的roll部分 没有， 所以我为了增加难度没用2LNs 用了double-hit
16:32 Tofu1222: 嗯
16:32 Tofu1222: 我能听出来 只是感觉相比比较弱
16:32 _Stan: 那行，这样吧
16:33 Tofu1222: 但是hitsound要统一呀
16:33 Tofu1222: owo
16:33 _Stan: 我把nightmare连击改成双LNs
16:33 _Stan: 对
16:33 _Stan: 所以就这样改
16:33 Tofu1222: 可以
16:34 Tofu1222: 01:14:870 - 01:15:038 - 我觉得这里可以和HD做点变化 放triple
16:34 Tofu1222: 也符合这个音乐
16:36 Tofu1222: 在看Nightmare之前 想到个事
16:36 _Stan: 好 add 2 note at col [1]01:14:870 -  and 01:15:038 -
16:36 Tofu1222: EZ NM HD的变速绿线都删了吧
16:36 Tofu1222: 平常是不给低难度加变速的
16:36 _Stan: haode
16:40 Tofu1222: OK了吗
16:40 _Stan: 你说删除绿线吗
16:41 Tofu1222: 嗯
16:41 _Stan: 最后删
16:41 Tofu1222: ok
16:41 Tofu1222: MX没问题了 看Ni吧
16:41 Tofu1222: 00:17:314 - 这里你double但你前面这个位置都没用诶 你用还是不用呢
16:43 Tofu1222: 00:20:769 (20769|1,20853|1) - 感觉和前面00:19:758 (19758|3,19758|2,19842|1,19842|0,19926|3,19926|2,20010|1,20010|0) - 这些是一样的 用双键？
16:44 _Stan: 用
16:44 Tofu1222: 00:25:488 - 双键感觉就ok了 这里没有旋律音
16:44 _Stan: 双键可以，但是triple-hit 真的好嘛
16:45 _Stan: 改了
16:45 Tofu1222: triple hit?
16:45 _Stan: 00:20:769 - to 00:20:937 -
16:46 _Stan: col [1]
16:46 Tofu1222: 你可以不把这俩叠起来呀
16:46 _Stan: ok 改好了
16:48 Tofu1222: 01:33:831 - 这里有鼓 可以double
16:49 _Stan: fixed
16:49 Tofu1222: OK
16:49 Tofu1222: 没问题了
16:49 Tofu1222: 你删绿线 我给你去post
16:50 _Stan: hao
16:51 _Stan: 你说的E N H绿线 其实就是
16:51 _Stan: 0.8x -0.9x
16:51 Tofu1222: 对
16:51 _Stan: 那段慢速的地方是吧
16:51 _Stan: 两条 好 都删了
16:51 _Stan: 3难度
16:51 Tofu1222: OK

1. 00:22:960 (22960|1,23465|0) - Shorten these two LNs to 00:23:128 - and 00:23:634 - because these are where the bass sounds end.
2. Throughout the whole diff I found that 1/4 LNs are used widely and actually I don't recommend that because 1/4 LNs are way too hard for beginners for NM to hold and release such accurately. I hope you can change all to 1/2 LNs and actually they fit too and play better.

Tofu1222 wrote:

IRC Mod for my boyfriend Stan and fixed patterns, green lines in other diffs except NM.

[HXJ's NM]

1. 00:22:960 (22960|1,23465|0) - Shorten these two LNs to 00:23:128 - and 00:23:634 - because these are where the bass sounds end.
2. Throughout the whole diff I found that 1/4 LNs are used widely and actually I don't recommend that because 1/4 LNs are way too hard for beginners for NM to hold and release such accurately. I hope you can change all to 1/2 LNs and actually they fit too and play better.

chouyaa wrote:

hi there!
M4M on ur queue~
1|2|3|4

Hard

00:01:050 (1050|2) - move to col 2? the sounds between 00:00:881 - and 00:01:050 - are pretty different.
give it a column space will give a separation and makes ur layering neater. | I understand, but I wanna keep with MX and Nightamre

00:01:977 (1977|0,2019|1,2482|1,2567|0,2904|0,2988|1) - the notes on the left hand are too heavy and it makes the map imbalance.
also check > 00:02:061 (2061|2,2398|2,2735|2,3072|2) - for the part that need to be rearranged.
try 00:02:061 (2061|2,2398|2,2735|2,3072|2) - instead. | nope, for 3-notes stair it's easiest way to hit in this pattern

00:04:645 (4645|0,4982|0,5319|0) - couldnt understand why are this LNs got onto the same column whereas each on them have significant sound differences
this are very opposite compared with 00:03:241 (3241|3,3578|2,3915|1,4252|0) - which u put each of them on different columns according to the sounds. | cuz it's really different density

00:14:617 - should be a note here, similar with 00:13:690 (13690|2,13774|3,13859|0) -
it would be inconsistent if u ignore it. | nope, HD should be easier that other diff in this section - end of a part

00:32:398 - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/10059815
the sounds at 00:32:398 - and 00:32:567 - is pretty same, applies at 00:32:735 - and 00:32:904 - as well. also it gives more emphasize to the song itself. | actually it;s tone down

00:41:331 (41331|1,41331|0) - ctrl+H to fill the right column, so empty there. | ok

00:52:286 - 00:52:454 - shouldnt they be double? similar with 00:29:196 - 00:29:027 - | really should be but in HD I make it easier on purpose

01:18:746 (78746|0,78915|0) - move to col 3, col 3 is unused | on purpose

01:43:437 (103437|0) - i think it should extended to 01:45:544 - since the sound is getting lower right there, not at 01:45:207 - | nope

goodluck <3

Critical_Star wrote:

好棒棒, Q