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We Were Here:gl
- 00:23:992 (1) - since you have progression style for this song, consider to start increasing ds from here on downbeats since this is where new drum stanza begins, from 2x to ~2.7x I think will be enough
- 00:25:744 (1) - ^ as being said, this will improve overall perception and will follow music intense increasing with chosen style better imo // 00:27:496 (1) and so on until 00:34:503 (1) - where you have SV speed up fixed
- 00:37:569 (2,1) - this transfer to 00:38:007 (1) - according to the music should be stronger then 00:37:131 (1,2) consider to swap 00:38:007 (1) and maybe also 00:38:664 (2) - for keeping reasonable transfers fixed
- 00:53:335 (4,1,2) - ^ this is kind of also but minor comparing to thing above because of overall phase, still consider to increase 00:53:335 (4,1) - ds here fixed but i think this ds is enough
- 01:20:093 (2,3) - could benefit from uneven spacing to stress strong lyrics 01:20:307 (3) - here, something like http://puu.sh/zSIGi/e92dbe88dc.jpg maybe
- 01:21:807 (2,3) - ^ same here i followed bass in these circles, the bass sounds no wave at 01:19:879 (1,2) - 01:21:593 (1,2) - so i think use the same spacing is nice and looks beautiful
- 01:49:450 (2,3) - this is out of consistency for spacing nor correspond anything in the background music, consider to lower spacing here. Similar spot for the reference 02:03:165 (2) - fixed, 2.6->2.4...i think i'm correct at first...
- 02:56:388 (9) - i don't see a reason to make this jump bigger then for example 02:53:306 (1,2,3,4) - this ones, there is nothing noticeable happens in the music here just a normal jump i think...it's common in a 4.9* mapset, and 02:53:306 (1,2) - is 3.15*1.2=3.78>02:56:388 (9) - 3.4*1.0=3.4 so it's not jump biggerlol
- 03:55:417 (4) - aesthetics, seems like this one is a bit off from overall style and build up randomly (no changes in the music) consider to use something that correspond chosen style more hmm... i think just appeared once is no influence in the whole mapset, if i get a nice advise i will fix this
- 03:59:674 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - shouldn't this pattern be in opposite - expand to the climax of this part? with transfer to less intense on 04:03:526 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - i followed drum in these square jumps, this part's drum 24 clap very strong, sounds excited, and it's a before chorus part, so i think use jump in this part is very siutable, and 04:03:728 (1,2,3,4) - drum 24 clap disappeared, only normal hit continued, and bass sounds lower and lower, so i decided 04:03:728 (1,2,3,4) - not use square jumps and ds is decreasing
- 05:53:000 (4,1) - why you decided to use extended spacing for similar transfer on the start 05:49:757 (5,1) - and switch to the plain DS later, seems unreasonable to me, especially when you use extended for this 05:54:013 (2,3) - which is much weaker
- 05:56:243 (5,1) - ^ // 05:59:485 (6,1) -
- 06:05:973 (5,1) - compare with 06:05:365 (3,4,5) - lol my bad, fixed
- overall i don't understand chosen structure for this song, it seems quite random in terms of spacing\contrast of what you trying to emphasize, tho rhytm and patterns is pmuch fine. Maybe i'll do another glance to this if you explain that because atm its hard to understand -> make proper suggestions for the map improving this song is spent me much time, from 2017.1 to 2017.11 because of graduating and finding job, so i think the reason is i forget many patterns when i did at first, i can't remember my 4 months ago thought lol
- 07:41:135 (4,5,1) - why not to stress transfer to 07:41:527 (1) - more? it will correspond music better http://puu.sh/zSJBw/fcf0c28569.jpg and similar parts fixed